★☆★ Xforum | Ultimate Story Contest - 2022 - Chit Chat & Discussion Thread ★☆★

[Sasha!]

My Beast is wise, my beast is powerful,

I agree

 

[The_Punisher]

Lekin india me public kuthne lag jati hai

Bc hug bhi karo to aise dekhte hai jaise inka koi kimti chiz chori ki ho

 

[Sasha!]

Story me itni jaldi me kyun thi

Usse jyada likhti revenge wala part to bore lagta short story me

 

[Dungeon Master]

Sab chhod, ye bata story me jo tere liye gift tha wo kaisa laga

Mast tha Gif daal deti to bus , scene wo bahut hot tha, kuch yaad aa gya tha mujhe usse

 

[Atharva]

Hi

 

[Dungeon Master]

I agree

 

[The_Punisher]

Usse jyada likhti revenge wala part to bore lagta short story me

Agree par sex scene ko thoda aur lamba khich sakti thi

 

[Dungeon Master]

Story me itni jaldi me kyun thi

sahi to speed thi, all scenes connected the, short story me itna kuch cover kiya. aasan thodi hota hai

 

[Sasha!]

Mast tha Gif daal deti to bus , scene wo bahut hot tha, kuch yaad aa gya tha mujhe usse

My first thought after writing it was about it and I started giggling out of the blue

 

[Dungeon Master]

Bc hug bhi karo to aise dekhte hai jaise inka koi kimti chiz chori ki ho

Delhi me popcorn nikaal ke dekhte hai