★☆★ Xforum | Ultimate Story Contest 2022 ~ Results ★☆★

[hawkzrulez]

Congratulations winners

 

[avsji]

अरे वाह! अंततः रिजल्ट आ ही गया!
सभी विजेताओं को बहुत बहुत बधाइयाँ!
harshit1890 Mahi Maurya Sasha! SANJU ( V. R. ) ऐसे ही लिखते रहें आगे भी!
And readers, please be like Jaguaar and Death Kiñg!

 

[Dungeon Master]

harshit1890 bhau
Mahi Maurya ji
Sasha!. USHAA
SANJU ( V. R. ) sir
Jaguaar Bhai
Siraj Patel sir
And Death Kiñg buddy



Congratulations Guy's

 

[aamirhydkhan]

CONGRATULATIONS TO WINNERS

 

[aamirhydkhan]

Points: 6.5/10.
Story : माचिस की तीली
Written by: Amirhydkhan

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Review:
Overview- A typical sex story jisme ek ladki hai jo ki model banna chahti hai aur ek aadmi jo ki kapdo ka safal vyapari hai aur jise apne brand ki advertisement ke liye model ki jarurat hai.. dono hi kirdaro ki mulakat delhi se lucknow ke daryaman train ke safar me hoti hai lekin yaha dono ekdusre ko nahi jaante the and then they met through work and got intimate.
Pros- the sex scene. aapne sex scene ko bahut ache se narrate kiya hai aur aapki language par pakad bhi kafi achi hai.. sath hi dono main characters ka train waala conversaton bahut ache tarike se likha gaya hai aur wo machis ki tili jo alia ne mangi thi usne is kahani ki neev rakhi ye kahani ke title ko justify karta hai.
Cons- kahani shuruwat se kafi sahi track par rahi lekin alia ka amir ke sath itni jaldi sex me involve hona jachta nahi hai, wo aisa laga mano usne modeling ka contract pane ke liye apne jism ka sauda kiya ho.. sath thi dusri baar jab wo dono mile hotel me tab unke reactions se aisa laga mano dono ko pata tha ke ye hoga, no shock eliment. overall the story was good and the narration and seduction was awesome

Thanks for your review.. and kind words.

 

[deeppreeti]

Without wasting any further time, lets move onto the results. The first position is a tie, harshit1890 with his suspense thriller masterpiece "Everything Is Binary" and Mahi Maurya with her wonderful story "कर्मों का फल"..
And now not too far behind first place, coming in at second place our very own Sasha! with her extraordinary story "This Shall Too Pass..." A wonderful wonderful story.
Now at 3rd place we have SANJU ( V. R. ) with his wonderful work "ये कैसी बिदाई ।"

Congratulations to winners

 

[deeppreeti]

Points: 6.5/10.
Story : वैलेंटाइन डे से पहले किस डे पर हसीना से मुलाक़ात
Written by: deeppreeti

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Review: Overview :- Ek or sensuously romantic story but abki baar ek different topic k uppar. Valentines day par akele hone se leke ek bahot he sundar ladki se sex karne takk kaa Deepak kaa safar bayaan kar rahi thi ye story. Suruwaat se kaafi pace par thi story jiss wajah se thoda awkward laga padhne mein.
Pros - Sabse pehle toh main aapki tareef karna caahunga story ko devnagri mein likhne k liye devnagri mein kahani padhne kaa apna ek alag he maja hai. Then story kaa background aapne bahot ache se describe kiya jisase story padhte time woh feel milla humein jaise sab humaare saamne ho raha tha.
Cons - Jaisa maine kaha sabse bada issue ye tha ki story bahot he jyaada pace par chali yaani aapne bhi kaafi jaldbaaji dikhaai story likhtey time jiss wajah se story mein bahot kuch missing tha and story adhuri si lagi. Baat karun sex scene ki toh woh thoda slow laga mujhe ussme bhi emotions missing they woh feel aap de nahi paaye readers ko jo ek sensuous scene se hum expect kar rahe they.

रिव्यु के लिए धन्यवाद .

 

[deeppreeti]

Points: 6/10
Story : रजनी और तनु की गुडलक अकादमी
Written by: deeppreeti

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Review:
Overview- kahani shuru hoti hai ek ladki shina se jo ki haal hi me 18 saal ki huyi hai aur is waqt apne exams dekar chhutiya bitana chahti hai lekin uski maa chahti hai ke shina apni chhutiya goodluck academy me bitaye jo ki garmiyo ki chhutiyo me ladkiyo ko groom karne ke liye famous hai, jabki shina waha jane ke bilkul virodh me hai fir bhi use apni maa ki baat manni hi padti hai jiske baad shina ka goodluck me jana aur fir ek sex scene and the end.
Pros- the narration.. kahani ki narration bilkul sahi hai khas kar sex scene kafi detail me likha gaya jisase pata chalta hai ke writer ki kalam par achi pakad hai sath hi unka hindi bhasha ka knowledge bhi kamal ka hai.
Cons- poor title selection, title ke anusar ye kahani gooduck academy k bare me honi chahiye thi par ultimately it ends with tanu and deepak’s sex scene, goodluck ke bare me jyada baat na karke tanu aur shina ke bare me jyada baat ki gayi hai, kahani shina ke goodluck me jane ke sath shuru hoti hai aur deepak aur tanu ke sex par khatam jisse shina ke character ka importance khatam ho jata hai. overall kahani achi hai umeed hai aap aage bhi aise hi kahaniyo se hamara manoranjan karte rahenge

रिव्यु के लिए धन्यवाद .

 

[Yug Purush]

Love for you what do you think about winners..??

 

[KEKIUS MAXIMUS]

Mahi Maurya harshit1890 SANJU ( V. R. ) Sasha!