★☆★ XForum | Ultimate Story Contest - 2024 - Chit Chat & Discussion Thread ★☆★

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

Ju ko joru ka Ghulam padhne ka time hai
Yahan aake ham sabse baat karne ka time nahi
Agar aap hamare brahta shree na hote
Toh ham aapko thikane
Sorry sorry samjhata

Joru ka gulam shayad Komal Rani ji ki story hai. Filhaal mai sirf unki ek story hi padh raha hu - फागुन के दिन चार ।
She is legendary erotica writer in all time XS n XF.
Fagun ke din char story maine XS me padha tha. Actually novel hai wah story. Approx 800 pages wali story. Agar time ho to jarur padhiyega. Thriller , Romance , Terrorism , Slippers cell , Emotions , Sex etc. ka anutha sangam kiya hai unhone.

 

[Black]

Joru ka gulam shayad Komal Rani ji ki story hai. Filhaal mai sirf unki ek story hi padh raha hu - फागुन के दिन चार ।
She is legendary erotica writer in all time XS n XF.
Fagun ke din char story maine XS me padha tha. Actually novel hai wah story. Approx 800 pages wali story. Agar time ho to jarur padhiyega. Thriller , Romance , Terrorism , Slippers cell , Emotions , Sex etc. ka anutha sangam kiya hai unhone.

Waa ki story mein sab mahila chhinri hoti hain
Hamare bas ka na hai
And yes she is the the best in erotica
Baaki Eid baad jarur koshish karunga padhne ki
Jab aap keh rahe hain toh

 

[Hell Strom]

Had naam ka ek writer hai. Nayi nayi story shuru kiya hai system based. Pehle likhta hai ki meri kahani werewolf bhai jaisi perfect toh nahi hai par mein Koshish karunga. Ye point note karna.

Fir iska ek big fan reader... Uski kahani ko abhi itne updates bhi nahi hue hai par reader aisa hai ki maano writer ne oscard award script likh di ho. Jo ki koi aur nahi... Yahi hai.

Iska reader yaani ki iski alias raatri me 2:30 baje mere thread me aata hai aur befizool ke points nikaalte hue kamiyaan nikaalta hai. Mere thread par revo abhi bhi pada hai. Aap chaahe toh read kar sakte ho. Uske badle me Death Kiñg ne bhi reply Kiya tha use. Fir kareeb 3 baje ke aas paas ye khud aata hai 'Had' Id se aur kehta ki ekdum sahi kaha. Kahani ki quality titanic ki tarah girti jaa rahi hai. Aur, sab kuch baseless hai with zero logic. Ab jo mein upar point note karne ka kaha tha... Use dobaara padhne ka.

Two faced things nazar aa gayi hongi aapko. Aur behtar dhang se samajhna hai toh threads visit kariye.

Nice update

 

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

Waa ki story mein sab mahila chhinri hoti hain
Hamare bas ka na hai
And yes she is the the best in erotica
Baaki Eid baad jarur koshish karunga padhne ki
Jab aap keh rahe hain toh

Mahila Chinnaar nahi honi chahiye lekin ladke jarur gigolo aur hawashi hone chahiye.

 

[RAJ_K_RAVI]

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[The Immortal]

पर वो बतायेंगे नही, बोलेंगे कि पगार ही नही मिलती

 

[The Immortal]

Nice update

Review

 

[Hell Strom]

Review

Everyone has a different way of telling a story - and has different stories to tell ....

 

[manu@84]

Werewolf देखो first reaction

 

[Hell Strom]

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