★☆★ XForum | Ultimate Story Contest - 2024 - Chit Chat & Discussion Thread ★☆★

[Shahenshah.]

Kaluwe Abhi story padhne mat chale jaana be..

Nahi jaata Bhai

 

[Riky007]

Ye bhi sahi hai.. Haan khaana wagaira to raat ko jabardast chalta hai..

वगैरा भी मान्य है

 

[Shahenshah.]

रात को छूट होती है थोड़ी बहुत

Nahi hoti bhai

 

[Shahenshah.]

Ye bhi sahi hai.. Haan khaana wagaira to raat ko jabardast chalta hai..

Raat 10 ke baad ghar aata hoon
Shaam waala nashta karta hoon
Phir 3 ya 4 baje khana khake 6 baje sota hoon

 

[Mak]

Raat 10 ke baad ghar aata hoon
Shaam waala nashta karta hoon
Phir 3 ya 4 baje khana khake 6 baje sota hoon

Hard working fella!

 

[Shahenshah.]

Hard working fella!

11baje uthke shop pe jaata hoon

 

[Mak]

Aagasyta (Y. A.)
After a long time, I am writing a review on a story, so please forgive me if I write something wrong. First of all, thank you for writing two stories and participating in the contest. As a moderator, your story has a different identity.

Now coming to the story, I keep all the negative points aside because you are a new writer and we do not see newness as mistakes. The dialogues and story have been written in such a brilliant way that does not feel even the slightest bit bored while reading. The author probably likes the rainy season very much. It has been mentioned in both the stories Baarish and Pyaar. Very good !!

I found it to be a mix of fantasy and real life, there are no words to praise it,

Tum Hue Meherbaan,
To Hai Yeh Dastan...
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Aagasyta (Y. A.)

These maads are like tum meri nunni khujaao... main tumhari khujaunga..

Normal writer logon ko to encourage karne kabhi nahi aaye!

 

[Shahenshah.]

Aagasyta (Y. A.)

These maads are like tum meri nunni khujaao... main tumhari khujaunga..

Normal writer logon ko to encourage karne kabhi nahi aaye!

Aggua ne sirf battle for the earth ka review kiya
Aagasyta (Y. A.) dhokha debe la

 

[Shahenshah.]

Aagasyta (Y. A.)
After a long time, I am writing a review on a story, so please forgive me if I write something wrong. First of all, thank you for writing two stories and participating in the contest. As a moderator, your story has a different identity.

Now coming to the story, I keep all the negative points aside because you are a new writer and we do not see newness as mistakes. The dialogues and story have been written in such a brilliant way that does not feel even the slightest bit bored while reading. The author probably likes the rainy season very much. It has been mentioned in both the stories Baarish and Pyaar. Very good !!

I found it to be a mix of fantasy and real life, there are no words to praise it,

Tum Hue Meherbaan,
To Hai Yeh Dastan...

Bhai wa ne 4 story likhi hai contest mein
Aagasyta (Y. A.)

 

[Aakash.]

Bhai wa ne 4 story likhi hai contest mein
Aagasyta (Y. A.)

2 hi to likha hai wo ​