★☆★ XForum | Ultimate Story Contest - 2025 - Chit Chat & Discussion Thread ★☆★

[Lucifer]

After receiving multiple requests of date extension ,I've decided to increase the last date of Entry thread till 2nd May. Entry Thread will be closed at 11:59 Pm on 2nd of May. The last date to post reveiws for best reader award is also increased till 10th of May .Readers can post their review till date of results declaration but reviews posted after 10th May 2025 will not be considered for Best Reader Award.

 

[Shivani guptaa]

Tumhari dusri I'd bhi hai koi

 

[Bulbul_Rani]

Kabhi hua ye bhi khaali rahte bhi tu tha mere saath,
Kabhi tujhe milke lauta mera dil khaali khaali haath..

Bulbul_Rani ​

Muje Mobile se story post karne me problm ho rhi h, kyoki mobile hang jyda hota hai, kya tum meri story post kar doge???

 

[Aagasyta (Y. A.)]

Kam se kam 1 weak ka ban lgana

Nibbi.. paichaan liya h ab tumko apan..

 

[Shetan]

Koi baat nahi meri galti hai....

Wahi toh baat hai ki chandgi raam ki pakad hi samajh nahi aayi, janha tak mujhe pata hai,kusti me pahalwaan ek dusre ki ek hanth se gardan aur dusre hanth se panje pakadte hai,ya tangon ko pakadte hai,dono bajuon ki pakad samajh nahi aayi kyonki jis stage me chandgi raam ush time tha uska kissi pahalwaan ki moti bajuon ko pakadna possible nahi lagata..... Sorry to say mujhe jo laga main ne likha hai..

Aapne chandgi raam ke pahalwaan bolne ke piche ka ispast warnan nahi kiya jisse beena ka aise react karna sahi nahi lag. Ye aapko ispast karna chahiye tha.

Main maafi chahta hun review dene ke liye.
Aur sabhi ko story acchi lagi ye unka pov hai sabhi ka pov alag hota hai.

Aur aapne kaha ki ye real hai aur wahi likha hai aapne koi kalpana nahi hai.
Main manta hun unki pakad kitni majboot thi,
Par Apne ek kaalpanik story likhi hai ise apne khud accept kiya hai end me unke award dikha ke real nahi kiya ja sakta, toh aap aur details add kar sakti thi.
Real story kuch aur hi hai....
Agar aapko lagta hai mera review galat hai toh main edit kar sakta hun mere liye koi badi baat nahi hai aur nahi mujhe koi fark pade ga edit se.
Ek baar fir aapse maafi mangta hun review ke liye.....

मेने हकीकत कहानी को काल्पनिक नाटकीय अबदाज़ लिखा. आप इस स्टोरी के अब तक के बाकि सारे रिव्यू को देखो. आप को समझ आ जाएगा.

 

[Shivani guptaa]

Nibbi.. paichaan liya h ab tumko apan..

To apne man main rakhi chillana mat

 

[Shetan]

Kaha thi tum
Aur dusri kahani kaha hai ​

दूसरी इतनी खास नहीं है. थोड़ी लिखना बाकि है. अभी वही लिख रही थी.

 

[Aagasyta (Y. A.)]

To apne man main rakhi chillana mat

Mai chaah ke bhi nahi chilla sakta..
Baaki ju ke fan log to bhaari khush honge..

 

[Mrxr]

मेने हकीकत कहानी को काल्पनिक नाटकीय अबदाज़ लिखा. आप इस स्टोरी के अब तक के बाकि सारे रिव्यू को देखो. आप को समझ आ जाएगा.

Main aapse koi bahes nahi karna chahta hun is par....
Aur aise desperate kyon ho rahi hai mere points ko leke..... Mujhe jo sahi laga main ne likh diya aur mujhe review dene ke liye kisi ka review padhne ki koi jarurat nahi hai....

 

[Shivani guptaa]

Mai chaah ke bhi nahi chilla sakta..
Baaki ju ke fan log to bhaari khush honge..

Dost ho na tum to shant rho main us id ke bare main bat nhi krti hu change tha topic

 

[Akash333]

Kasam se band kr di maine