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Incest ★Jeevan Ek Sangharsh Or Rehsya★ (incest+ magical+ adventure)

Kahani ke kis character ke sath hero ka first sex scene hona chahiye?

  • Rohini

  • Kalpana

  • Shelja

  • Dono dadi

  • Mamiya

  • Bhene

  • Madam


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Nevil singh

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Shivangi or amisha ki chetna vapis
Aate hi dono mujhe apni najro ke
Samaksh dekhkar mujhe awak
Nazro se dekh rahi thi ye unke liye
Ek khusi ka pal tha, bhale hi vo
Apne bhai se doga ke vasikaran
Ke prabhav ke karan dur rhi ho
Kintu jab unke bhai ke pratirup ki
Hathya unki nazro ke samaksh
Hui to unke man me apne bhai ke
Prati jo bhi rosh or nafrat ki deewar
Thi vo usi pal gir gayi, unke man
Ki nafrat ki bjh unki ma dwara
Bnayi gayi unki bhai ki chavi thi
Or kuch uneh swapn me aate sapne
Jisme unih ka bhai unke jism ka
Upbhog krta tha, bas yahi do karan
The jo uneh unke bhai se dur rkhte
The or vo apne bhai se baat nhi
Karti thi or upar se doga ke dwara
Kiya gya vasikaran lekin jaise hi
Doga ki najro me raghav ki mrityu
Ho gayi to usne bhi raghav ke
Pariwar ko vasikrat krna band kar
Diya kyunki uski najro me uska
Karya sidh ho chuka raghav jo
Uske marg ka kanta tha usne use
Hta diya tha,
Shivangi ansru bhare netro se
Raghav ko dekh rhi thi uske netro
Me prem or paschyatap ki agni
Thi, vo apne bhai se kuch kehna
Chahti thi lekin keh nhi pa rhi
Thi, thik vaisa hi hal amisha ka
Bhi tha,
Raghav yani mene un dono ki
Mano dasha ko bhap liya vo mujhse
Kuch puchna cha rhi thi lekin
samarthya nhi juta pa rhi thi,
Raghav: kya tum dono kuch kehna
Chahti ho,
Dono: ne bolna prarambh kiya lekin
Vo vo kehte hi unki javan ldkhadane
Lagi,
Raghav: kya abhi bhi naraj ho mujhse
Agar mujhse kuch bhul ho gayi ho
To mujhe maf kar do meri bheno
Mere muh se in alfazo ka nikalna hua
Ki amisha mere kandho me apni bahe
Dalkar jhul gayi or fut fut kar rone lagi
Shivangi: bas karo bhai sharminda
To hum hai apni galti par, na jane
Humne kya kya nhi kiya apke sath
Keval apni ma or mamao ke behkave
Me aakar arey vo ma nhi dayan he
Humein pehle lgta tha sayad apki
Bjh se hi papa ma se dur hue hai
Isliye vo apse khfa rehti hai or ye
Sab karke vo apko sudharna chahti
Hai or phir humein vo sapne aane
Lage chiii, me bhi na kis bare me
Bol rhi hu, phir man me tha to vo
Sab nazayaz or ginhona hi bhla
Koi bhai kaise apni bheno ke sath
Hi saririk sambhand bna skta hai
Bhla kaise, par vo sab akhir sapna
Hi to tha kya mujhe bhai ko btana
Chahiye ki aj tak jis nafrat ka vo
Sikar hue hai uska karan humein
Swapn me aane bale vo sapne hai
Jisme vo hume or humare ghar ki
Sabhi orto ke sath sex karte hai,
Raghav: kya hua shivangi tum bolte
Bolte chup kaise ho gayi, tabhi
Shivangi ko vo sab yaad aane lga
Ki kaise vo jungle me fas gayi thi
Or vha ek khunkhar demon aa gya
Tha, or kaise us demon ke muh se
Nikal rhi bijli se unke bhai raghav
Ne uneh bchaya agar vakt rehte
ragahv vha nhi phochta to shivangi
Or amisha kab ki mar gyi hoti, or
Phir vo pichli baatein ki kaise uski
ma or mami ne milkar raghav ko
Mara tha,
Shivangi: bhai vo sab chodo or mujhe
Ye btao tumhara khoon to humne
Khud hote dekha tha phir tum jinda
Kaise bache kya ye sach much me
Tum hi ho ya phir humara koi sapna
Hai, bhai aisa to keval tv serial or
Movies me hi hota hai ki koi markar
Bhi jinda ho jata ya kahi aisa to nhi
Jaise serial me kuch log mar jate hai
Or phir unki aatma unse bdla leti hai
Jo us saqs ke khooni hote hai, .
Ye bat kehte hue shivangi ke chehre
Par halka sa dar aa gya tha or sath
Hi ye sunkar amisha kj bhi fat gyi,
Shivangi: ddd dekho bhai tumeh
Marne me humara koi hath nhi tha
Lekin phir bhi agar tum humein
marna chaho to mar skte ho
Vaise bhi bhai ab is jindagi me
Kuch nhi bcha hai,
Raghav: arey arey pagal aisa nhi
Bolte or me koi mra vra nhi hu or mene
Uske hatho ko pakadkar apne dhadakte
Dil par rkh diya,
Dekho agar me mar gya hota to
Kya tum meri dhadkan ko mehsus
Kr pati,
Shivangi: shocked hote hai ha bhai
Ye to sach me ap jinda ho to phir
Vo kya tha kya ma ne apke badle
Kisi or ki jaan li or bhai ap us demon
Se kaise lade,
Mera bhai to ek sadharan ldka tha,
Tum mere bhai ho hi nhi dekho sach
Sach btao tum kon ho, mere bhai
Ke naam ka sahara lekar or humse

Mat khelo,
raghav: acha kya sach me, hmmm
kya sach me mein tumeh tumhara
bhai nhi lgta or mene uske kandho
se uske dono hatho ko tham liya
or uske chehre ko apni ungli se
upar uthate hu dekho meri ankhon
ko or dhyan se dekho inme meri
ankho me tumeh ek bebas lachar
bhai dikhayi dega jab ek bhai
dodo sagi bheno ke hote hue
bhi bheno ke pyar ke liye trsa
hai tdpa hai jo har pal tumeh dekhti rehti thi or chahti thi ki me tumhare pass jau or tumhare apni bahon
me bharlu apne gale se lga lu
par me kabhi aisa kar nhi paya
ye meri lachari kya tumeh nhi

dikhayi deti meri in ankho me,
or dekho us bete ki tdap ko jo
do do ma hote hue trsa hai ma
ki mamta bhari ek pukar ko
trsa hai uske anchal ki thandi chao ko uski mamta mayi dular
ko, vo dono meri ankho me
dekh rhi thi halanki mujhe
kisi baat ka dukh nhi tha
nahi kisi se koi sikwa gila tha
lekin meri ankho me ek sachayi
thi me jab ye sab bol rha tha
to me puri trh bhavnao me
veh chuka tha, yadi ap ek
insan roop me ho to ap kitne
bhi sadhu mahatma yogi or
shakti sali kyu na ho jao apke
apke emotions ansuo ka rup
lekar bahar aa hi jate hai,
meri ankho me uneh tadap
saaf dikhayi de rhi thi,
un dono ne mujhe apne gale se
lga liya,
amisha: humein maf kardo
bhai ab hum apse or kuch nhi
puchenge didi to apko khone
ke gam me bora gayi hai,
isliye apse vo sawal pe swal
kiye ja rhi hai ap hi humare
bhai ho humein ap ke humara
bhai hone par koi shaq nhi
hai, bas bhai ap humare sath
ho humare liye ye hi kafi hai,
or hume kuch nhi chahiye
raghav: man me me janta hu tum
dono ke man me bhot se swal
hai or tum uneh janne ke liye
bhot utsuk ho, or jo bhi tumne
abhi dekha vo ek samanya
ghatna nhi thi isliye tumhara
man us swalo ke uttar janne
ke liye vichlit hai par ab dev
dwara loca ki mayavi nagri
ke tvah hone se doga bokhla
gya hoga kyuki ab uska us
pure jungle par adhipatya
nhi rha or uski tantrik shakti
ka ek bhag bhi samapt ho
chuka hai,
Bahut hi rachnatmak roop se rekhankit ki gai ek manmohini drishyawli apne sath kabhi khushi kabhi gum ka anubhav karati hai. avaranniye prati hai.
 

Devchaudhary

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Idhar jaise hi dev yani mere dwara
Loca ko mar diya gya or doga
Ke adhipatya se us van ko mukt
Karaya gya to doga puri trh bokhla
Gya, kyunki yadi me uske shaktiyo
Ke ansh uske numaindo ko mitakar
Uske adhipatya ko khtam kar doga
Se ladta to me use asani se hra
Skta tha, kyunki phir vo purnth
Jeevit nhi ho skta tha uski tantrik
Shaktiya usse phir se jeevit nhi
Kar skti thi vo apni shaktiyo se
Phir vastvik me ho rhi ghatno ko
Kalpnik nhi kar skta tha usse marne
Se pehle is sansar me uske adhipatya
Ko mitana bhot avasyak tha,
Uske numainde jo uski puja karte
The vo burai ko pehlakar ki usse
Shaktisali bnate the, usse mitane
Se pehle uske dwara phel rhi buraiya
Kuritiyo ko mitana hi mere liye
Avasyak tha, idhar me rohini ko
Usi marg se le ja rha tha jha se
Mene is van me aagman kiya tha
Mujhe raste me vhi bolne wale
Vriksho ke marg se hokar jana
Tha, rohini to mujhe kafi gehrai
Se janti thi or vo khud bhi ek
Rishi ke sanghidya me reh chuki
Thi unki patni bankar bhale hi
Vo unse saririk roop se karib nhi
Aayi ho kintu unki siksha diksha se
Rohini parichit thi or dusra us ashram
Ki rohini bhi ek gurumata hi thi
Or ab to use mere or doga ke visay
Ka bhi purna abhas tha,
Rohini apni hirni jaisi akhon se
Bade hi prem bhavna se mere
Mukh ko dekh rhi thi uska dhyan
Marg par kam or mere mukharvind
Par jyada tha, ukse chanchal
Mrignayan phulo ki pankhudiyo
Jaise hoth, jisme jharber(strawberry)
Ka ras misrit tha,
Uske lalahat par chandra ke saman sheetalta thi vo bas mujhe hi dekhte rehna chahti thi, me bhi man me soch liye chalta ja rha tha,
Mere chehre par sankoch
Ki lakiro ko usne tadte hue
Pucha
Rohini: kha khoye hue ho dev kya soch rhe ho kya mujhse naraz ho is baat ko lekar ki me vha se aise kyu chali gayi thi or mene apne sath tumeh bhi musibat me dal diya mujhe maf kardo
Dev?
Dev: nhi baat vo nhi hai
Itna kehkar me chup ho gya
Rohini: oooh acha to me smjh gayi tumeh mera sath gawara nhi sayad isliye kyunki ab meri umar dhal rhi hai ab mujh me vo baat nhi rhi ya sayad me sundar nhi hu jo bhi hai agar tumeh
Mera sath gawara nhi to koi baat nhi dev tum mujhe gurukul me vapis chod dena me tumhare yado ke sahare hi apna jeevan vyatit kar lungi, me smjh chuki ho vo bas bita kal tha or vo sab to purva janam ki batein thi to Bhla ab unka is janm se kya smbhand rohini ki awaj bhari ho chali thi kyunki mujhse bichadne ka vo soch bhi nhi skti thi usne dil par pthar rkhkar ye sabd bol to diye the lekin us par kya biti thi vo bas keval rohini ko hi malum tha,
Dev: nhi rohini baat vo nhi hai, mai bas pehle isi baat ko lekar chintit tha ki yadi
Bhavnao or prem me padkar abhi tum jo kadam uthana chahti ho or phir aane bale samey me lok laj
Ki bediyo ka bandhan tumeh phir se gherta hai
Or yadi tum vapis phir se usi smaj me jana chahogi to vo samaj tumeh swikar nhi krega
Me chahta tha tum jo bhi faisla lo use purna nischay or dridhta se lo jisse aage chalkar tumeh apne hi faisle par pachtana na

Pade, lekin abhi meri chinta ka visay kuch or hi hai, or rahi
baat prem ki to prem to amar
hai use na umra ki or na hi
mrityu or janm ki bediya bandh
skti prem to atmao ka jod hai,
 

Nevil singh

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Idhar jaise hi dev yani mere dwara
Loca ko mar diya gya or doga
Ke adhipatya se us van ko mukt
Karaya gya to doga puri trh bokhla
Gya, kyunki yadi me uske shaktiyo
Ke ansh uske numaindo ko mitakar
Uske adhipatya ko khtam kar doga
Se ladta to me use asani se hra
Skta tha, kyunki phir vo purnth
Jeevit nhi ho skta tha uski tantrik
Shaktiya usse phir se jeevit nhi
Kar skti thi vo apni shaktiyo se
Phir vastvik me ho rhi ghatno ko
Kalpnik nhi kar skta tha usse marne
Se pehle is sansar me uske adhipatya
Ko mitana bhot avasyak tha,
Uske numainde jo uski puja karte
The vo burai ko pehlakar ki usse
Shaktisali bnate the, usse mitane
Se pehle uske dwara phel rhi buraiya
Kuritiyo ko mitana hi mere liye
Avasyak tha, idhar me rohini ko
Usi marg se le ja rha tha jha se
Mene is van me aagman kiya tha
Mujhe raste me vhi bolne wale
Vriksho ke marg se hokar jana
Tha, rohini to mujhe kafi gehrai
Se janti thi or vo khud bhi ek
Rishi ke sanghidya me reh chuki
Thi unki patni bankar bhale hi
Vo unse saririk roop se karib nhi
Aayi ho kintu unki siksha diksha se
Rohini parichit thi or dusra us ashram
Ki rohini bhi ek gurumata hi thi
Or ab to use mere or doga ke visay
Ka bhi purna abhas tha,
Rohini apni hirni jaisi akhon se
Bade hi prem bhavna se mere
Mukh ko dekh rhi thi uska dhyan
Marg par kam or mere mukharvind
Par jyada tha, ukse chanchal
Mrignayan phulo ki pankhudiyo
Jaise hoth, jisme jharber(strawberry)
Ka ras misrit tha,
Uske lalahat par chandra ke saman sheetalta thi vo bas mujhe hi dekhte rehna chahti thi, me bhi man me soch liye chalta ja rha tha,
Mere chehre par sankoch
Ki lakiro ko usne tadte hue
Pucha
Rohini: kha khoye hue ho dev kya soch rhe ho kya mujhse naraz ho is baat ko lekar ki me vha se aise kyu chali gayi thi or mene apne sath tumeh bhi musibat me dal diya mujhe maf kardo
Dev?
Dev: nhi baat vo nhi hai
Itna kehkar me chup ho gya
Rohini: oooh acha to me smjh gayi tumeh mera sath gawara nhi sayad isliye kyunki ab meri umar dhal rhi hai ab mujh me vo baat nhi rhi ya sayad me sundar nhi hu jo bhi hai agar tumeh
Mera sath gawara nhi to koi baat nhi dev tum mujhe gurukul me vapis chod dena me tumhare yado ke sahare hi apna jeevan vyatit kar lungi, me smjh chuki ho vo bas bita kal tha or vo sab to purva janam ki batein thi to Bhla ab unka is janm se kya smbhand rohini ki awaj bhari ho chali thi kyunki mujhse bichadne ka vo soch bhi nhi skti thi usne dil par pthar rkhkar ye sabd bol to diye the lekin us par kya biti thi vo bas keval rohini ko hi malum tha,
Dev: nhi rohini baat vo nhi hai, mai bas pehle isi baat ko lekar chintit tha ki yadi
Bhavnao or prem me padkar abhi tum jo kadam uthana chahti ho or phir aane bale samey me lok laj
Ki bediyo ka bandhan tumeh phir se gherta hai
Or yadi tum vapis phir se usi smaj me jana chahogi to vo samaj tumeh swikar nhi krega
Me chahta tha tum jo bhi faisla lo use purna nischay or dridhta se lo jisse aage chalkar tumeh apne hi faisle par pachtana na

Pade, lekin abhi meri chinta ka visay kuch or hi hai, or rahi
baat prem ki to prem to amar
hai use na umra ki or na hi
mrityu or janm ki bediya bandh
skti prem to atmao ka jod hai,
Yeh ishq nahi aashan pyare itna toh samage lijiye, Ik aag ka dariya hai aur doob ke jaana hai.
Bahut hi sunder aadhtan hai.
Dev aur Rohini ka prem to samaj ki maryadao se pre hai, Janm-Janam ka bandhan, do aatmao ka milan, Ek puran samarpan Jaisse chanda-chkori ka prem jishme vasna lesh matre nahi hai. Bahut sunder shabdsmuh ka paryog kiya hai, Jo nach rahe hai premdhun pe.
Tan se tan ka milan ho na paya to kya
Man se man ka milan koi kam to nahi.
 

Devchaudhary

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Raghav yani me apni dono beheno
Ke shivangi or amisha ke sar ko
Bade pyaar se dular rha tha vo
Vo dono mujhse is trh se chipki
Thi jaise fevicol ka jod ho,
Raghav: acha meri chpkaliyo
Ab jra ye btao tum dono ko bhuk
Lagi hai ya nhi,
Mere muh se apne liye chipkali
Sabd sunkar dono ne meri chati
Par ek jordar muka mara or phir
Dono ne mujhe apne hatho se
Piche ki or dhakel diya,
Me bhi bina kisi virodh ke piche
Jamin par gir gya ye vo suehre
Pal the jinka me varso se intezar
Kar rha tha bhai bhen ka prem
Unki jugalbandiya, unka hasna
Bat bat par ruth jana or phir
Hum bhaiyo ka uneh manana
Kabhi unki jyada kichai krna
Jis par kabhi kabhi to vo ro
Bhi deti hai, roti vo log hai lekin
Dil humara tdap uth ta hai
Jaise do jism ek jaan ho, halanki
Sabhi ki vichardhara ek jaisi nhi
Hoti lekin bhai bhen ka ye prem
Unka ek dusre se lohe or chumbak
Ke akarsan jaisa kabhi na
Khtam hone wala prem hai
Kabhi kabhi hum sath hone par
Ek dusre ka virodh karte hai
Unse gussa bhi hote hai lekin
Jab kabhi hum akele hote hai
To humein sabse pehli kami
Apne bhai bhen ki hi khalti hai,
Kyunki bhale hi vo humse kitne
Hi naraz or kitne hi khafa kyu na
Ho or humari musibat or humare
Bich me humare bhai bhen dhal
Ban kr aa jate hai,
Meri ankho me unki is jugalbandi
Se ansoo chalak aaye akhir aj
Me us prem ko prapt kar chuka tha,
Jisse me ab tak vanchit tha,
Meri ankho me ansoo dekhkar
Dono mere pass beth gayi or
Ghabrate hue kya hua bhai lagi
To nhi apko
Sorry bhai humein maf kardo humne
To mjak me aisa kiya,
Raghav: nhi meri chipkaliyo ye to
Prem ke ansoo hai jo tumhara
Prem pakar nikal aaye,
Amisha: ruthte swar me kya bhai
Apne humein phir se chipkali kha
Shivangi: ha bhai kya hum apko
Chipkali najar aate hai or vo dono
Mujhse muh pher kar beth gayi,
Raghav: arey nhi tum dono to meri
Rajkumari ho meri pyari gudiya ho
Or mene un dono ko apne hatho
Me utha liya, in dono ka yha rukna
Ab shurakshit nhi tha kyunki doga
Ke varchasp khtam karne ki suruat
Dev mayabi jungle se kar chuka tha
Ab vha un bolne wale pedo ka sasan
Tha, jiska naam tha tree beard
Manusyo ke khilaf jo isrhya or dwesh
Doga ne unke man me bharkar uneh
Paap ki rah par le gya tha vo dwesh
Bhavna ab dev unke man se nikal
Aaya tha, doga ka assan jariya
Mere mata pita or mere apne logo
Ko vasikrat karke mujhe marna
Ya nuksan phochana tha, kyunki
Vo janta tha me kitna bhi shaktisali
Kyu na ho jau apne bado ko aghat
Kabhi nhi karunga,
Me shivangi or amisha ko ab nitu
Mam ke pass le jana chahta tha
Kyunki unko me apne prem ki
Mishri ka swad chkka chuka tha
Kyunki hum dono ka samagam
Ho chuka tha isliye ab unpar
Doga ki kali shaktiyo ka koi bhi
Prabhav nhi padne wala tha,
Raghav : acha meri rajkumariyo
Abhi me tumeh humare kisi
Khas ke ghar le jane wala hu
Dono apni ankhein band karo
Or jaise hi un dono ne apni ankhein
Band ki me teleport ke jariye uneh
Mam ke ghar ke bhar le aaya
Shivangi or amisha shocked
Najro se dekhte hue bhai apne
Itne din koi jadu vadu sikha tha kya
Bhai ap koi jadugar ho kya
Ki chadi ghumai or ek dum se
Sab kuch bdal diya
Amisha: par didi bhai ke pass to
Chadi bhi nhi hai,
Raghav: shhhhh no more question
Janti ho ye humari strict vice
Principal nitu mam ka ghar hai dono
Ke ye sunte hi tote udh gaye,
Oooh bhai to hum yha bilkul nhi
Jane wale, bhai ap hume mrwane
Ke liye laye ho kya, ye khijiyayi
Billi humari class lga degi,
Bhai or ye tumhari kab se khas
Ho gayi, bhai chalo na khi or
Chalte hai or dono jane lagi
Par mene bhag kar uneh pkad
Liya or uneh apni bhujao me
Bharkar utha le gya,
Shivangi: arey bhai kya kar rhe
Ho chodo mujhe
Amisha: ha bhai chodo humein
Bhai hum apse naraz ho jayenge
Phir mene jaise hi door bell bajayi
Nitu mam ne akar gate khola
Nitu mam arey tum dono
Shivangi : ha mam sorry mam
Vo hum galti se yha aa gaye hai,
Amisha : mann me kyu na bhai
Ko thoda mja chakaya jaye
Vo mam darasal bhai hi humein
Yha laaya hai kyun bhai bolo mam
Ko,
Nitu: oooh acha toh ye baat hai
Isliye tum itni jaldi me the,
Sivangi: mtlab
Nitu: kuch nhi chalo andar chalte
Hai
Or phir hum teeno bhi unke sath
Andar chale gaye, nitu mam ne
Uneh guest room me bathaya
Unki chal abhi bhi thoda bigdi hui
Thi lekin unki yoni me ab pain
Nhi tha, bas khali chal or pairo
Ko rkhne ka dhang bdal gya tha,
Nitu : acha raghav ap mere sath
Aao mujhe apse kuch kam hai
Mere liye ap sabd sunkar to
Amisha or shivangi ke muh
Khule ke khule reh gaye,
Dono man me lagta hai bhai
Ne is khisiyayi billi par bhi koi
Jadu hi kiya hoga, vrna jo bhai
Se humesa jo chidi rehti thi aj dekho
Kaise ap ap kar rhi hai kuch to
Gadbad jarur hai,

 

Nevil singh

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(Update - 43a)
Raghav yani me apni dono beheno
Ke shivangi or amisha ke sar ko
Bade pyaar se dular rha tha vo
Vo dono mujhse is trh se chipki
Thi jaise fevicol ka jod ho,
Raghav: acha meri chpkaliyo
Ab jra ye btao tum dono ko bhuk
Lagi hai ya nhi,
Mere muh se apne liye chipkali
Sabd sunkar dono ne meri chati
Par ek jordar muka mara or phir
Dono ne mujhe apne hatho se
Piche ki or dhakel diya,
Me bhi bina kisi virodh ke piche
Jamin par gir gya ye vo suehre
Pal the jinka me varso se intezar
Kar rha tha bhai bhen ka prem
Unki jugalbandiya, unka hasna
Bat bat par ruth jana or phir
Hum bhaiyo ka uneh manana
Kabhi unki jyada kichai krna
Jis par kabhi kabhi to vo ro
Bhi deti hai, roti vo log hai lekin
Dil humara tdap uth ta hai
Jaise do jism ek jaan ho, halanki
Sabhi ki vichardhara ek jaisi nhi
Hoti lekin bhai bhen ka ye prem
Unka ek dusre se lohe or chumbak
Ke akarsan jaisa kabhi na
Khtam hone wala prem hai
Kabhi kabhi hum sath hone par
Ek dusre ka virodh karte hai
Unse gussa bhi hote hai lekin
Jab kabhi hum akele hote hai
To humein sabse pehli kami
Apne bhai bhen ki hi khalti hai,
Kyunki bhale hi vo humse kitne
Hi naraz or kitne hi khafa kyu na
Ho or humari musibat or humare
Bich me humare bhai bhen dhal
Ban kr aa jate hai,
Meri ankho me unki is jugalbandi
Se ansoo chalak aaye akhir aj
Me us prem ko prapt kar chuka tha,
Jisse me ab tak vanchit tha,
Meri ankho me ansoo dekhkar
Dono mere pass beth gayi or
Ghabrate hue kya hua bhai lagi
To nhi apko
Sorry bhai humein maf kardo humne
To mjak me aisa kiya,
Raghav: nhi meri chipkaliyo ye to
Prem ke ansoo hai jo tumhara
Prem pakar nikal aaye,
Amisha: ruthte swar me kya bhai
Apne humein phir se chipkali kha
Shivangi: ha bhai kya hum apko
Chipkali najar aate hai or vo dono
Mujhse muh pher kar beth gayi,
Raghav: arey nhi tum dono to meri
Rajkumari ho meri pyari gudiya ho
Or mene un dono ko apne hatho
Me utha liya, in dono ka yha rukna
Ab shurakshit nhi tha kyunki doga
Ke varchasp khtam karne ki suruat
Dev mayabi jungle se kar chuka tha
Ab vha un bolne wale pedo ka sasan
Tha, jiska naam tha tree beard
Manusyo ke khilaf jo isrhya or dwesh
Doga ne unke man me bharkar uneh
Paap ki rah par le gya tha vo dwesh
Bhavna ab dev unke man se nikal
Aaya tha, doga ka assan jariya
Mere mata pita or mere apne logo
Ko vasikrat karke mujhe marna
Ya nuksan phochana tha, kyunki
Vo janta tha me kitna bhi shaktisali
Kyu na ho jau apne bado ko aghat
Kabhi nhi karunga,
Me shivangi or amisha ko ab nitu
Mam ke pass le jana chahta tha
Kyunki unko me apne prem ki
Mishri ka swad chkka chuka tha
Kyunki hum dono ka samagam
Ho chuka tha isliye ab unpar
Doga ki kali shaktiyo ka koi bhi
Prabhav nhi padne wala tha,
Raghav : acha meri rajkumariyo
Abhi me tumeh humare kisi
Khas ke ghar le jane wala hu
Dono apni ankhein band karo
Or jaise hi un dono ne apni ankhein
Band ki me teleport ke jariye uneh
Mam ke ghar ke bhar le aaya
Shivangi or amisha shocked
Najro se dekhte hue bhai apne
Itne din koi jadu vadu sikha tha kya
Bhai ap koi jadugar ho kya
Ki chadi ghumai or ek dum se
Sab kuch bdal diya
Amisha: par didi bhai ke pass to
Chadi bhi nhi hai,
Raghav: shhhhh no more question
Janti ho ye humari strict vice
Principal nitu mam ka ghar hai dono
Ke ye sunte hi tote udh gaye,
Oooh bhai to hum yha bilkul nhi
Jane wale, bhai ap hume mrwane
Ke liye laye ho kya, ye khijiyayi
Billi humari class lga degi,
Bhai or ye tumhari kab se khas
Ho gayi, bhai chalo na khi or
Chalte hai or dono jane lagi
Par mene bhag kar uneh pkad
Liya or uneh apni bhujao me
Bharkar utha le gya,
Shivangi: arey bhai kya kar rhe
Ho chodo mujhe
Amisha: ha bhai chodo humein
Bhai hum apse naraz ho jayenge
Phir mene jaise hi door bell bajayi
Nitu mam ne akar gate khola
Nitu mam arey tum dono
Shivangi : ha mam sorry mam
Vo hum galti se yha aa gaye hai,
Amisha : mann me kyu na bhai
Ko thoda mja chakaya jaye
Vo mam darasal bhai hi humein
Yha laaya hai kyun bhai bolo mam
Ko,
Nitu: oooh acha toh ye baat hai
Isliye tum itni jaldi me the,
Sivangi: mtlab
Nitu: kuch nhi chalo andar chalte
Hai
Or phir hum teeno bhi unke sath
Andar chale gaye, nitu mam ne
Uneh guest room me bathaya
Unki chal abhi bhi thoda bigdi hui
Thi lekin unki yoni me ab pain
Nhi tha, bas khali chal or pairo
Ko rkhne ka dhang bdal gya tha,
Nitu : acha raghav ap mere sath
Aao mujhe apse kuch kam hai
Mere liye ap sabd sunkar to
Amisha or shivangi ke muh
Khule ke khule reh gaye,
Dono man me lagta hai bhai
Ne is khisiyayi billi par bhi koi
Jadu hi kiya hoga, vrna jo bhai
Se humesa jo chidi rehti thi aj dekho
Kaise ap ap kar rhi hai kuch to
Gadbad jarur hai,

Nice update.
Behtreen rachnakriti aai hai suraj ki pehli kirno per swar hokar dikha rahi hai rah pathiko ko prem ki, Prem hi ish jagat ka aadhar hai, prem hi veh mook bhasha hai jishse har prani bandha hua hai. Prem ke roop anek jinki vayakhya karna ashmbhav hai, vah to kan-kan me basa hai. Atulneeye!
 

Sabhi91

Active Member
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(Update - 43a)
Raghav yani me apni dono beheno
Ke shivangi or amisha ke sar ko
Bade pyaar se dular rha tha vo
Vo dono mujhse is trh se chipki
Thi jaise fevicol ka jod ho,
Raghav: acha meri chpkaliyo
Ab jra ye btao tum dono ko bhuk
Lagi hai ya nhi,
Mere muh se apne liye chipkali
Sabd sunkar dono ne meri chati
Par ek jordar muka mara or phir
Dono ne mujhe apne hatho se
Piche ki or dhakel diya,
Me bhi bina kisi virodh ke piche
Jamin par gir gya ye vo suehre
Pal the jinka me varso se intezar
Kar rha tha bhai bhen ka prem
Unki jugalbandiya, unka hasna
Bat bat par ruth jana or phir
Hum bhaiyo ka uneh manana
Kabhi unki jyada kichai krna
Jis par kabhi kabhi to vo ro
Bhi deti hai, roti vo log hai lekin
Dil humara tdap uth ta hai
Jaise do jism ek jaan ho, halanki
Sabhi ki vichardhara ek jaisi nhi
Hoti lekin bhai bhen ka ye prem
Unka ek dusre se lohe or chumbak
Ke akarsan jaisa kabhi na
Khtam hone wala prem hai
Kabhi kabhi hum sath hone par
Ek dusre ka virodh karte hai
Unse gussa bhi hote hai lekin
Jab kabhi hum akele hote hai
To humein sabse pehli kami
Apne bhai bhen ki hi khalti hai,
Kyunki bhale hi vo humse kitne
Hi naraz or kitne hi khafa kyu na
Ho or humari musibat or humare
Bich me humare bhai bhen dhal
Ban kr aa jate hai,
Meri ankho me unki is jugalbandi
Se ansoo chalak aaye akhir aj
Me us prem ko prapt kar chuka tha,
Jisse me ab tak vanchit tha,
Meri ankho me ansoo dekhkar
Dono mere pass beth gayi or
Ghabrate hue kya hua bhai lagi
To nhi apko
Sorry bhai humein maf kardo humne
To mjak me aisa kiya,
Raghav: nhi meri chipkaliyo ye to
Prem ke ansoo hai jo tumhara
Prem pakar nikal aaye,
Amisha: ruthte swar me kya bhai
Apne humein phir se chipkali kha
Shivangi: ha bhai kya hum apko
Chipkali najar aate hai or vo dono
Mujhse muh pher kar beth gayi,
Raghav: arey nhi tum dono to meri
Rajkumari ho meri pyari gudiya ho
Or mene un dono ko apne hatho
Me utha liya, in dono ka yha rukna
Ab shurakshit nhi tha kyunki doga
Ke varchasp khtam karne ki suruat
Dev mayabi jungle se kar chuka tha
Ab vha un bolne wale pedo ka sasan
Tha, jiska naam tha tree beard
Manusyo ke khilaf jo isrhya or dwesh
Doga ne unke man me bharkar uneh
Paap ki rah par le gya tha vo dwesh
Bhavna ab dev unke man se nikal
Aaya tha, doga ka assan jariya
Mere mata pita or mere apne logo
Ko vasikrat karke mujhe marna
Ya nuksan phochana tha, kyunki
Vo janta tha me kitna bhi shaktisali
Kyu na ho jau apne bado ko aghat
Kabhi nhi karunga,
Me shivangi or amisha ko ab nitu
Mam ke pass le jana chahta tha
Kyunki unko me apne prem ki
Mishri ka swad chkka chuka tha
Kyunki hum dono ka samagam
Ho chuka tha isliye ab unpar
Doga ki kali shaktiyo ka koi bhi
Prabhav nhi padne wala tha,
Raghav : acha meri rajkumariyo
Abhi me tumeh humare kisi
Khas ke ghar le jane wala hu
Dono apni ankhein band karo
Or jaise hi un dono ne apni ankhein
Band ki me teleport ke jariye uneh
Mam ke ghar ke bhar le aaya
Shivangi or amisha shocked
Najro se dekhte hue bhai apne
Itne din koi jadu vadu sikha tha kya
Bhai ap koi jadugar ho kya
Ki chadi ghumai or ek dum se
Sab kuch bdal diya
Amisha: par didi bhai ke pass to
Chadi bhi nhi hai,
Raghav: shhhhh no more question
Janti ho ye humari strict vice
Principal nitu mam ka ghar hai dono
Ke ye sunte hi tote udh gaye,
Oooh bhai to hum yha bilkul nhi
Jane wale, bhai ap hume mrwane
Ke liye laye ho kya, ye khijiyayi
Billi humari class lga degi,
Bhai or ye tumhari kab se khas
Ho gayi, bhai chalo na khi or
Chalte hai or dono jane lagi
Par mene bhag kar uneh pkad
Liya or uneh apni bhujao me
Bharkar utha le gya,
Shivangi: arey bhai kya kar rhe
Ho chodo mujhe
Amisha: ha bhai chodo humein
Bhai hum apse naraz ho jayenge
Phir mene jaise hi door bell bajayi
Nitu mam ne akar gate khola
Nitu mam arey tum dono
Shivangi : ha mam sorry mam
Vo hum galti se yha aa gaye hai,
Amisha : mann me kyu na bhai
Ko thoda mja chakaya jaye
Vo mam darasal bhai hi humein
Yha laaya hai kyun bhai bolo mam
Ko,
Nitu: oooh acha toh ye baat hai
Isliye tum itni jaldi me the,
Sivangi: mtlab
Nitu: kuch nhi chalo andar chalte
Hai
Or phir hum teeno bhi unke sath
Andar chale gaye, nitu mam ne
Uneh guest room me bathaya
Unki chal abhi bhi thoda bigdi hui
Thi lekin unki yoni me ab pain
Nhi tha, bas khali chal or pairo
Ko rkhne ka dhang bdal gya tha,
Nitu : acha raghav ap mere sath
Aao mujhe apse kuch kam hai
Mere liye ap sabd sunkar to
Amisha or shivangi ke muh
Khule ke khule reh gaye,
Dono man me lagta hai bhai
Ne is khisiyayi billi par bhi koi
Jadu hi kiya hoga, vrna jo bhai
Se humesa jo chidi rehti thi aj dekho
Kaise ap ap kar rhi hai kuch to
Gadbad jarur hai,
Superb dev bhai......
Kya ab story ka regular updates aayega.....
 

Devchaudhary

Active Member
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(Update-43b)
Rohini: acha to btao mujhe aisi

Konsi chinta hai jo tumeh sta rhi
Hai, me tumeh chintao ke bhavar
Me is trh ghira nhi dekh skti, or
Mere liye sabse bada dukh ka karan
To ye hai ki tum chintit meri bjh se
ho tumhari jo bhi chintaye hai
uneh tum mere samaksh ujagar
Karo me bhi tumhari chintao ka
Mukhya karan janna chahti hu,
Mere chehre par uski baato
ko sunkar muskrahat aa jati hai,
rohini: ascharyavhakit bhav se
kya hua dev tumhare is trh
muskurane ka karan, tum bade
thagiya ho dev tumhare chehre
ke ye bdalte bhav, tumhari ye
gol mol batein or tumhari ye leelaye
mujhe bismit karti rehti ek pal
ke liye to mujhe aise lagta hai
jaise tum bhi mujhse utna hi
prem karte ho jitna ki me tumse
karti hu, tumhare man me bhi
humare milan ke liye itni hi adhirta
or tadap hai jitna mere man me hai,
or me tumeh swayam se bhi jyada
janti hu, kintu tumhari chinta ka
visay or mujhe khud se dur karne
wali batein mujhe itna utpidan
phochati hai ki mera man karta
hai ki me khud ko smapt karlu
ye kehte kehte rohini ka kanth
rudan se bhar gya tha, me
rohini ko or dukhi nhi dekh skta
tha, rohini ke utpidan ka karan
mera swayam se hi anbhigya hona
tha, rohini ki palke mundi hui thi
usse soch ki gehraiyo se bahar
nikalne ki mere pas ek hi yukti
thi, man se to rohini purv janm
se meri thi, or is janm me bhi
in bite 12 varsho me bhi rohini ne
har pal meri yado ke sahare kis
prakar vyatit kiye ye keval rohini
Ka hirday ja skta tha rohini apne man
ko kis prakar smbhalti thi, mera
rohini ke swapn me aana use
humare prem ka bodh karana
uske hirday me prem ki aagni
ko charmotkarsh tak phochana
or uske ango ke sath krida kar
uski kamagni ko utpan kar gayab
ho jana, ye sab bhi to uski pariksha
hi thi,
Ek vibahit stree ki yuva avastha
Ki vyakulta jisme vo apne pati ke
Se milan usse samagam ( sambhog)
Ki vyakulta uske man ki adhirta
Ka vo samay jisme uske sarir ke
Aang unnat avastha me hote hai
Or har vivahit stree apne unnat
vakso or nitambo ka mardan
Apne pati ke majbut hatho dwara
Karana chahti hai vo chahti hai ki
Uska pati uske hotho ke ras ka
Mardan kare ek bhavre ki trh bankar
Uske ful jaise hotho se unka sara
Ras nichod le uske sarir ke har
Hisse ko prem kare,
Kintu rohini ka jisse vivah hua
Rohini ka tez uski shakti uske
Pati ko uske samip nhi aane deti
Thi uske samip aate hi uske pati
Ki kam icha nasta ho jati thi
Rohini bhi in sab se anbhigya
thi, vo apne pati ke karib jaana
Chahti thi lekin uski atma use
Aisa karne se roke rkhti thi
Kuch samay pasachat mere
Rohini ke swapn me aane or use
Humare prem ki yaad dilane par
Use in sab ka gyat hua tha,
Kitna kathin samay hoga vo
Rohini ke liye jab use gyat hua
Jise vo pati manti hai jise vo
Sadi kar chuki na hi vo uske
Tan ka swami hai na hi uske man ka
Uske man ka swami uska prem
Uski aatma ke sath jiska bandhan
Pehle se hi juda hai vo to koi or
Hi hai, ye rohini ke jeevan ki
pariksha ka pehla pdav tha jisme
Use kisi ek ko chuna tha ya to
Vo apne pati ko chunkar apne
Prem ko swaha ho jane deti or
Ajeevan prem ke liye tadapti rehti
Ya apne purva jeevan ke vachno
Ka palan kar
apne prem ko chunkar
Jeevan me aane wali chunotiyo
Purn rodiyo ka samna karne ke liye
Tyyar rehti ek aise vyakti se prem
Jo abodh tha jiski gurumata banne
Ka use avsar prapt hua tha,
Ek aisa premi jo keval swapn me hi
uske vaksho
Or nitambo ko chuta rehta usse
Adhuri rasleela kiya karta uske sarir
Ko uttejit or kamvibhor krke chla jata
Bdhka jata uski kamagni uske
Sarir ki sudha ko kintu vastivkta
Me rehta ek avodh bankar
Usne apni 12 varso ki yuva aayu
Keval intezar me bita di jab use or
Uske sarir ki sudha humare milan
Ke liye lalahit thi,
Aj me hamare milan ki pratiksha ki
Avdhi ko yahi smapt kar dene
Wala tha or yha se suru hone
wala tha uski prem pariksha ka
Agla pdav jo uske jeevan me

Irshya bharne wala tha,
 
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