Incest ★Jeevan Ek Sangharsh Or Rehsya★ (incest+ magical+ adventure)

[Devchaudhary]

Lekin bhai mujhe index me update post karna hai or me phone me uc browser use krta hu

 

[Rajthehunterr]

Jaburjust update bro abb Raghav 4 aayam mai jaakr Apne aapko powerful krega aur abb dev ke sath uski bhi life judne wali hai ekk ko nipta do dono nipat jaayange abb dekhna hai raghav Apne sath sath Dev ko kaise bachata hai aur power ko kaise haasil krta hai waise toh abhi bhi Raghav boht powerful hai aage Ka intzaar hai bhau keep writing keep rocking bro niceeeeee....

 

[Naughtyrishabh]

Behad hi shandar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Lag raha h ki abhi flashback hi chal raha h.
Bahut achhe bahut bada.

Or ab ,
Aage ka intjaar

(Update-11b)
me unke kamar ke upar aa gya unke kamar par apne dono hatho se malish karne lga
Kalpana- dam lga ke sarir me jaan
Vaan bhi hai ki kuch nhi khaya
Piya kha chla jata hai tera
Ab mene apne dono hatho ko jor se unki kamar par ragadna suru
Kar diya jis se meri body ka underwear wala hissa kabhi kabhi
Mom ke chutado par ragad kha rha
Tha jisse thoda thoda tanav ab mere
Ling me aane lga tha
Meri kamar mailsh ke karan ab mom halki halki siskiya le rhi thi aaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh ummmaaaaahhhhjjhhhh
Ha beta aise hi karte rho

Rghav: man me sala aj mom ne dusri baar mujhe itne pyar se beta kha
Khi mom meri malish se kush to
Nhi hai
Kalpana: beta or upar
Raghav: mom apka blouse hai bo tel se khrab ho jayega or phir ab
Mujhe hi bologi
Kalapna: acha theek hai to rehne de
Or mom. Ne jaise hi meri taraf karwat li uneh mera irection dikhayi degaya vo mujhe gusse se dekhne lagi
Kalpana: apni pant uthao or niklo yha se
Me sochne lga ye mom ko itni der me hi kya hogaya vo itni gusse me kaise thi abhi kuch der pehle
Khud hi enjoy kar rhi thi me mom ke sabd bolte hi bha se 9, 2, 11 ho gya vha se
Raghav man me: mom bhot khatarnak hai unse mujhe bachke rehna chahiye
Phir me bhar chla gya or mom ko pain killer lake di jise khakar unwh kafi rahat mili agle din me school se aane ke baad ghar ka kaam niptakar david ke ghar chla gya jha mujhe ritu didi ne mera doubts clear karaye
To vhi david ki hi trh uski nakchadi bhen minu bhi kisi ko tang karne
Me peeche nhi hat ti thi
Aisa nhi ki uske kafi bf bgrh the bas swbhav se thoda mirchi type ki thi
Or dusro ko paresan karna use
Acha lgta tha
Meenu: ritu didi kya ab jan seva kendra bhi kholne ka irada hai
Kya ya bas abhi ek hi hai
Mujhe uski bat sunke bhot gusa aaya
Par me kuch na bola bas
Apna sir neeche jhukaye rkha
Or uski trf na dekhna hi mujhe shi lga
Ritu gusse me: ye kya btamizi hai
Meenu khud ka to pdhai vdai me koi dhyan nhi or dusro ke fatte me tang
Adane aa jati hai
Tabhi meenu andar gusse me jati hai or ek notebook utha ke le aati hai
Meenu: dekh mere test marks 19/20
Kya tere lalu ke bhi aaye hai itne marks
Ritu: acha ji mujhe to pta hi nhi tha ki meri bhen ab itni hosiyar ho chuki
Hai vaise me teri teacher hoti to rujhe 12 marks bhi nhi deti apni hand writing dekh or do char or nuks nikalkar use chidane lagi
Meenu: tabhi to tu meri teacher nhi hai or vo bha se chali gyi
Ritu: beta iski baat ka bura mat manna tu mera chote bhai jaisa hai
Or use bhi apni badi bhen man vo kuch bol bhi deta to use dil par
Mat lena aise hi mera do saal tak yhi routine rha me didi ke kafi close ho gya tha ab vo mujhe gal pe kiss bhi
Kar deti or iske bhot se karan the
Jaise kabhi vo pani piya karti
Or mene kabhi unse pani mangta
To vo jaise hi glass dhulne ke liye
Hui mene unka bacha hua pani
Pi liya unhone mujhse kha
Ritu: raghav tune mera jhuta pani kyu piya
Raghav: didi ap hi to kehti ho ki me apke bhai jaisa hu or jhuta khane se pyar badhta hai
To unki ankho se ansu jhalak aaye the or unhone mere galpe kiss karke kha aj se mujhe bhi kbhi moka milega tera jhuta khane ka to me bhi khaungi or vo hasne lagi
Ab mera 10 th ka year tha me 15 cross kar chuka tha
Humare ghar mere bade mama
Ki choti beti manju aayi hui thi jo laghbhag mujhse three years badi thi
Meri life me abhi tak koi bhi sex instance nhi hua tha ek ko chodkar
Jiski mene bhot bhari kimat chukai
Thi mujhe khud bhi gyat nhi tha
Ki kya vo sabkuch mene hi kiya
Hai.
Manju ab kafi hari bhari ho chuki thi jo ab tak kali hai ya ful mujhe pta nhi tha.
Par vo mujhe bhot hi sexy andaz me dekha karti thi abhi deepti weekend par ghar gyi hui thi
Kabhi mere hoto pe kiss de diya karti thi or kabhi apne phone ko apne boobs ke bich rkh kar jab
Aata ghunth ti thi or kissi ki call aa jati to mujhe awaj lga diya karti thi
Or mujhe phone uske chuchiyo ki ghati dikhakar unme hath se nikalne ko kehti.
Pehle to mujhe sab ajib lgta par mene socha ho skta hai ye mujhse pyar karti ho or mujhe kehne me
Jhijakti ho aise hi ek din hum dono ek sath bethe the mujhe bhi
Use dekh kar kuch kuch hone
Lga tha me usse baat karna chahta tha par keh nhi pa rha tha
Mene uski jangh pe hath rkh diya to usne mujhe kha aa chal sote
Hai me bhi uske sath piche chla gya vo drawing room ki trh tha
Mujhe lga sayad ye bhi vo sab krna
Chahti hai usi room me meri bhen mom bhi bhetkar tv dekh rahe the hum piche pade ek bed par let gaye or humne rajayi le li
Me ab uske let ne ke kuch der baad uski jangho par apni ungliyo se sparsh kiya jab uska koi virodh nhi aaya to me halke halke apne hath ko uski jangho par move karne lga
Uski sanse bhi ab garam or tez ho gyi
Thi me ab apne hatho se uski jangho
Ko masalne lga tha mujhe ab kafi
Enjoy aane lga tha mera lund
Jo pichle do saal se kafi kam kdha hota tha meri utejna jo mere sarir
Mere sarir me kam bhav ab na ke
Saman bache the aj sirs par the
Ab manju ne karwat bdal li thi
Jis karan mujhe lga sayad iska
Man nhi hai to me apne labo
Ko uske kan ke pas le gya
Or halka sa uske kan
Ko chum liya, or kehne lga
Kya mujhe ise aage badhna
Chahiye agar tumhari sehmati
Nhi ho to tum bta skti ho me
Isse age or nhi badhunga
Par uska koi bhi uttar na pakar me kafi dubhida me aa gya tha
Mujhe lga sayad iske muh
Se kuch na kehna hi iski ha
Hai ab uski back mere front ki trf
Thi mene ghutno tak ka neckar
Pehna hua tha jisme mera lund ab
Kisi road ki trh khda abhi mere
Lund ka size bas 6 se 6.5 inch tak hi tha mene apna nikar wala hisa uske gand ke surakh par rkh diya usne niche salwar pehni thi or uske nich purple colour ki panty jis
Par ek sundar design bna tha
Ab me uske boobs ko uske suit ke upar se press karne lga jiske
Karan vo ab apna control kho
Chuki thi uska face ek dam red
Ho chuka tha kisi tamatar ki trh
Or vo ab halke halke moaning
Karne lagi uuuuuuuuuuuuuuhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhjjhmmmmmmmmmmmk
Ahhhhhhhmmmmmmmmmmmmmmhhhhhhhhhh
Mujhe lga sayad ab ye or age badhna chahti hai to mene apna lund apne short se bhar nikal kar uske hath me de diya or uske hoth pe kiss kar diya
Tabhi vo mujhse lipat gyi mene ab jaise hi uske salwar ka nada khola usne uthkar ek jhanatedar thapad
Mere gal par jad diya jiski awaj se
Aage bethe sabhi ka dhyan ab
Piche humari or chla gya
Mom ne ek dam se light jalayi mene bhi ab tak apna short thik kar liya
Tha mom ne meri dono bheno
Ko niche bhej diya jaise uneh kuch
Hone ki asahnka pehle se hi
Thi vo mere pass aayi or manju ko
Rota hua dekh.
Kalpana: gusse or ankho me aansu liye
Kamine kya kiya tune meri beti ke sath papi or mera girewan pakadkar
Chatakkk chtttaaak mere muh par dus barah thapad jad diye jise
Mere honth se khoon aa gya tha
Or meri shakal bandar ki trh laal
Ho chuki thi
Manju: bua tumhare bete ne mera rape karne ki kosis ki pta nhi is kutte ki nazar mujh par kitne din se thi or vo bhot jor jor se rone lagi
Mom apni ankho me ashu liye mujhe marti rhi ye din dekhne se pehle
Me mar kyu nhi gayi akhir tune vahi
Kiya jiska mujhe ab tak dar tha.
Mujhe tera gla usi din ghot dena
Tha jis din mujhe tere kukarmo
Ka abhas hua tha par me sochti
Thi ki sayad me tujhe ek din badal
Dungi par me aisa nhi kar
Payi tu janna chahta tha na
Ki mere andar ma wali mamta
Kyu nhi hai kyunki mujhe
Tere in kumkarmo ka pehle
Se hi abhas ho gya tha meri.
Kokh se mene tujh jaise ek rakhsas ko janam diya mujhe ghin aati
Hai apni kokh par hi. Nikalja kamine nikal ja or apni ye manhoos sqal dobara hume mat dikhana
Arey rakshas bhi tujhse khi ache hote hai vo apni ma bheno ke prati aisi najar to nhi rkhte
Meri ankho me ab selav umad pda tha me ghar se bhag gya me khud ko us din samapt karna chahta tha
Me ek truck ke aaye jaise hi kuda to kisi shakti dura me bha se gayab
Ho gya or mene khud ko
Ek barfile pahad jaise jgh par paya
Bha par mujhe ek sadhu dikhayi diye jo apni sadhna me bethe the
Me chillakr mujhe yha kon laya hai
Me ek papi hu me khud ko samapt kar dena chahta hu me apno ki hi najar me ek balatkari papi hu ab me or jina nhi chahta mujhe kisne bachaya hai or me us pahide se kudne hi wala tha tabhi kisi shakti ne mujhe bhi rok liya

 

[Naughtyrishabh]

Behad hi shandar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Kamal ho gya fir , flashback khatam.
Mzaaaa aa gya bhai waah.

Or ab ,
Aage ka intjaar

(Update-11c)
mujhe kisne bachaya hai or me us pahade se kudne hi wala tha tabhi kisi shakti ne mujhe bhi rok liya
Ab aage:
Mujhe kisi ki shaktiyo ne jakad liya tha me krodh me chodo mujhe
Me dust hu papi hu mujhe mar
JAne do mera ye sarir papi ho
Chuka hai ab iska bas ek hi upay
Hai ki me ise nast kardu
Tabhi mujhe un sadhu ki awaj aai
Thehro vats me tumeh kuch
Dikhana chahta hu
Apni akhein band karo or jaise
Hi mene apni ankhein band ki
Mujhe ab tak jo sare chije vo sari
Life mene ji thi mere samaksh
Ek flim ko dvd par lgakar speed me forward karte hai isi trh chalne
Lagi jaise mano samey ki gati
Ruk hi gai
Jise me ab tak apni galti smjh rha tha vo sab mujhe aise dikhayi diya
Jaise vo kisi sadyantra ka ek
Hissa ho or jisne vo sadyantra racha
Vo koi ger nhi mere apne the
Unka udhesya mujhe meri hi najar
Me nicha girakar mujhe samapt
Karna tha
Guruji: kya tum abhi bhi khud
Ki jeevan leela ko samapt karna
Chahte ho vats
Ragahav: guruji jab mere mata pita hi mere jeevan ko samapt karna chahte hai to ap mujhe kyu bachana
Chahte ho meri kya galti hai guruji
Unhone mere sath hi ye sab
Kyu kiya
Kya meri ma ne ye sabhi mere
Sath isliye kiya kyunki
Mere pita ne uneh chod diya
Guruji: nhi vats aisa kadapi nhi hai
Isme kuch galtiya tumhari bhi hai
Ye humara manus roopi sarir me,
Kam, vasna, krodh trishna se paripud hai galtiya sbhi se hoti
Hai or tumeh apne jeevan ke mehtva ko smjhna padega
Uske liye tumeh yog sadhna me jana
Padega unki bato ke prabhav se me
Yog nidra me chala gya tha jha mujhe
Kuch vijaynagar me hui ghatna
Dikhayi di jo mujhe
Guruji ne btaya ki is jeevan ka udhesya janne ke liye tumeh bha ka bhi satya janna anivarya hai.
Raghav ka flash back end
Me abhi monica mam ki class me betha sab soch rha tha ki
Monica: tumhara dhyan kidhar hai
I am asking you itne din se kha the
Tum
Mein: actually mam voo vo
Monica: acha thik hai betho class ke baad milo mujhse
Sachin or samir man me sale ne kya mast body bnayi hai ek mahine
Samir:mujhe lagta hai isne powder bgrh kuch mills li hai unse kya hota
Aj class lete hai sale ki interval
Me sale tune itni solid body kaise bnayi or kha tha tu itne din
Tu ye to nhi soch rha ki tu powder bgrh pikar apne sarir ko bhens ki trh fulakar humse mukabla kar lega
Raghav banvti andaz me: nhi yaar mujhe maf kardo bhai mujhse
Galti ho gayi or itna bolkar
Me unki taraf dekhkar hasne lga
Vo dono sale hume darata hai or samir ne apna ek ghusa jaise hi mujhe marna chaha tabhi me uske piche khda tha vo ye dekh ke dar ke bhag khade hue or me hasne lga mujhe dhyan aaya ki mam ne
Bhi mujhe milne ke liye bulaya tha me unke kamre me jaise hi phocha to dekha bha nitu mam bhi khadi
Thi nitu mam ka dhyan jaise hi mujh par gya bas vo mujhe ghure ja rhi thi
Nitu: kuch kaam tha tumeh?
Monica: ha mene hi ise bulaya tha
Raghav: ha mam kahiye kya kaam tha
Monica: tum ek mahine se gayab the or tumhare half yearly exams bhi aane
Wale hai tumhare ek mahina ka kam bhi chuth gya hai is bar tumhara
Board hai or tum aise chutia karte ho bina btaye kha chale gaye the
Kya tumeh is baar pass nhi hona bhulo mat is baar tumhara board
Hai
Raghav : mujhe yaad hai mam ap chinta mat karo me cover kar lunga
Monica: tum aajse ghar par aa jao
Me tumhare doubts or sylabus
Complete kra dungi or nitu mam
Bhi tumhari maths me help kar
Diya karengi
Nitu: ha kyu nhi tum mere ghar pe aa skte ho me tumse koi charge bhi nhi lungi
Raghav: thanks mam but mujhe lgta hai me sab cover kar skta hu meri bjh se me apko itni badi paresani nhi de
Skta.
Monica: gusse me nitu mam dekh rhi ho iska sarir ke sath sath attitude kitna bhad gya hai iski class le lo aaj hi
Break ke baad nitu mam ka period aata hai jinhone mujhe simplification Exponential, menturation ke question puche
Jinka mene shi shi answer de diya
Ye dekh kar puri class ka
Muh khula ka khula reh gya
Mam bhi bhochakki hokar mujhe
Hi dekh rhi thi

 

[Naughtyrishabh]

Ye update bhi sar ke upar se gya.

(Update-12).
Me bhi abhi tak is saubhagya se
Vanchit hu ki me apne putra ko
Apne stan se rasapan krau
Par meri kuch maryada hai jis karan
Me aisa karne me asmarth hu
Ab aage:
Dev : ap kyu asmarth hai?
Rohini: kyunki ab tum na hi ek abodh balak ho or na
Hi mere stan me se doodh
Aata hai, or tum mujhse
Aise bate na karo putra
Mujhe lajja aati hai.
Rohini : man me mera sarir harsh unmad se kyu bhar
Utha hai kya me apna
Patni dharm kho chuki
Hu nhi, nhi me ek brahman
Kul ki patni ke sath sath
Ek shikshak ki patni
Or mera pativrata or
Meri maryada hi
Meri prathista hai mujhe
Mujhe apni garima ko
Banaya rkhna hai
Or ye jo mere samaksh.
Hai ye to bas abhi ek
7 ya 8 varsh ka ek
Abodh balak hi hai or jise
Mene apna putra bhi to
Mana hai,
Mujhe jarur galatfami
hui hai jise me kam
Bhavna smjh rhi hu vo
Bas meri mamta or mera
Iske prati vatsalya hi hoga
Par vo ye nhi janti thi,
Ki ye balak kam ka hi ek
Roop hai jiski alokik, manoram chavi se hi
Koi bhi stree apna satitva
Bhul jaye, ye chehre par tez
Ye shakti koi sadharan nhi
Thi ye kai jeevan ki tapasya
Ka phal tha jo kisi janam
Me bhakti ajeevan
Balbrahamcharya ka palan
Kar is janam me prapt hui
Thi,
Dev: guru ma ap mujhe kafi chintit dikhayi de rhi hai
Apke mukh ke bhav bta
Rhe hai jaise apke man
Ki chinta apko khaye ja
Rhi hai,
Rohini ki tandra tut ti hai
Kuch nhi putra or vo mere
Sar ko apne sine se lgaye
So jati hai raat ko rohini
Ke sapno me ek 20 varsh ka
Purush aata hai jiski sarir ki
Kanti kamdev se ktai kam
Na thi or uske mukh ka
Tez bhi surya ke saman
Thi, or uska chehre par
Bas ek tez sa dikhayi pad
Rha tha, jo rohini ko
Aakar apni baho me bhar
Leta hai or apne hoth uski gardan par rkh deta hai
Rohini chah kar bhi use rok nhi pa rhi thi bas virodh
Me itna hi bol payi mat karo
, vrna me khi tumhare
Is kam or tez me khi beh
Meri man or maryada ko
Bhang na karo aaa kamashakt manusya me
To ye bhi nhi janti ki
Ap kon hai ap mnusya
Hi hai ya koi dev ya yaksh
Vo manusya: vakt rehte tumeh sab gyat ho jayega
Ye tumhare tapo ka hi
Phal hai jo aj me tumhare
Samaksh yha hu
Rohini: kintu me ek kisi ke kul ki bahu hu ek patni
Bhi hu or mene apne pati
Ka parigrhan kar chuki
Hu rohini ka
Ye kehte kehte ankh me se
Ansu nikal rhe the apne
Mere sarir ko chukar
Usko ganda kar diya hai,
Me apko srap deti hu.
Ki apke jis kam or tez se me lubhavit hui hu apke kul ki koi bhi stree khud ko lubhabit hone se. Rok na
Payengi or me
Apne sarir ko uske itna kehte hi vo manusya bha se
Gayab ho gya.
Par uski awaz ye bas ek sapna hai kintu tumhare
Ye khe sabd bhi ek leela
Ka hissa hai, tum khud
Ko koi kasta na phochao
Sundri ab jab tak tum
Mera swayam avahan
Na karogi me tumhare
Swapn me nhi aaunga


Tujhe pyar mera satayega aksar
Yadon ke toofan uthayega aksar
Zikr mera karne se pahle tu kuch
Soch ke muskurayegi aksar
Mera naam likh kar kitabon mein apni
Tu logon ke dar se mitayegi aksar
Baatein meri yaad ayeingi itni
Jitna tu unhe bhulayegi aksar
Uske jate hi rohini ki neendra khul jati hai
Vo apne charo or dekhti
Hai to ratri dhal chuki
Thi or uske uthne ka samay
Bhi ho gya,
Rohini: ye aj pehli baar
Mere swapn me koi anya purus kyu aaya or me usko
Khud ko chune se rok nhi
Payi or vo ye kyu kehke
Gya ki mera diya hua shap bhi ek leela ka prayojan
Hai or ab vo mere samaksh
Swapn me tbhi aayega
Jab me use swayam
Bulaungi bhala me use
Kyu bulaungi, rohini snan
Adi kar us kaksh me
Aati hai jha me soya hua
Tha or mere sar par hath
Pherkar utho
Putra subah ho gyi hai
Or apne gulabi hotho se.
Mere mastak par
Apna chumban ankit
Karti hai jisse use aisa
Abhas hota hai jaise
Mere sharir ka sparsh use us manusya ke sparsh
Jaisa pratit hota hai jise
Vo ek pal ke liye chokti
Bhi hai phir yeh sochkar
Bas vo to ek swapn tha use
Bhul jati hai ab me bhi uth
Chuka tha me bhi nityakarm kar jaise hi
Snan aadi karne ja rha.
Tha tabhi mujhe rohini
Ma bhi rok leti hai,
Rohini: kha ja rhe ho aj tumeh snan me karaungi
Dev: kintu mata ab me bda ho gya hu me snan aadi
Swayam kar skta hu raat ap hi to keh rhi thi ki me
Ab ek abodh balak nhi rha,
Rohini ki ankho me ashru
Aa gye mujhse ye dekha nhi gya vo jane lagi to mene
Unka anchal pakad liya
Rohini: ab kya hai tumne mere dil ko thes phochayi
Hai tum mujhe meri mamta
Mere vatsalya se mujhe
Vimukh rkhna chahte ho
Jao me tumse naraj
Hu
Dev :
Kasti ke musafir ne samandar nhi dekha,
Baton or ankho ko dekha par dil ke andar nhi dekha,,
Pathar samajhte hai mujhe mere chahne wale,
Hum to mom the hume kisi ne chukar nhi dekha......,
Rohini ka chehra ab hasi se khil utha tha
Rohini: ther badmas abhi batati hu rohini mere piche bhagne lagi par me unke hath na aaya tab vo thak gayi to me unke samukh
Ja kar beth gya kyu mata
Ap thak gyi abhi to apko
Snan bhi karana hai,
Unhone mujhe snan adi karaya or phir mujhe subah ka jalpan aadi kara kar
Mujhe meri gurukul
Ki pathsala me bhej diya
Mere jate hi uneh us
Ratri ke manusya ki yaad
Stane lagi
Rohini : ye mujhe kya ho rha
Hai mere man me baar baar
Usi ke bichar kyu aa rhe hai
Unki isi udhed bun me ratri bhi ho gayi or jab me aaya to
Mene dekha vo kisi ghen adhyan me hai mere sparsh
Pate hi tum aa gye
Or jab unhone mujhe dekha
To jaise vo kisi akash
Se dharti par aa gyi ho
Rohini: ye mujhe kya ho
Gya tha me itne chintan me
Kyu thi oooohh ye mujhe kya
Ho rha hai,
Rohini: putra tum hath muh
Dho aao me tumeh khana
Khila deti hu,
Or khana khilane ke paschat
Vo so gyi, unhone mujhe kal ki trh mujhe sulakar vo jaise hi nindra me gayi, to uneh
Kal ki us manusya ki khi
Gyi baat yaad aane lagi,
Or tabhi vo vyakti unke
Samaksh aa gya,
Rohini: tum kyu aaye ho yha
Vyakti: tumne hi to mera
Avahan kiya
Rohini: par mene to nhi
Kiya,
Vyakti: kya abhi tum mere chintan me nhi dubi hui
Thi
Rohini jhut: nhi me nhi thi
Vyakti: hahhhaaaa acha ye btao ye jhut tum mujhse bol rhi ho yaa khud se,
Rohini uski yeh baat sunkar
Sant ho gayi
Rohini : acha mujhe yeh btao tumne kha tha ki mera srap bhi ek leela ka prayojan hai or tumhare chehre par mujhe keval bas ek roshni hi kyu dikhayi padti hai,
Tumhara chehra mujhe spast kyu nhi dikhayi padta
Or tum ye jante ho ki mera sarir or atma ab ek bandhan me bandh chuke hai,
Ye jante hue bhi tum mera pativrat dharma kyu bhrasta karna chahte ho
Vyakti: nhi rohini mera udesya tumhare pati vrata ko bhrasta karna kdapi nhi hai,
Me is jnam me ek nar hu jiske
Janma lene ka udhesya is baar keval karm bhog hai.,
Kintu mera bhog bhi me
Apna karm samjhkar hi
Karunga me karm, karmbhandhan se mukt rehkar ke karunga,
Rohini: matlab mere pas aane ka udhesya bas tumhara apni kam bhavna ko pura karna
Hai bas tum yha mera sarir,
Pane ke liye aaye ho rohini ke mukh par krodh saf jhlak
Rha tha
Vyakti: nhi rohini aisa kdapi nhi hai meri atma to kabhi ki tumhari atma se judi hai,
Or agar mera udesya keval,
Tumhare sarir ko pana
Hota to me tumeh tumhare
Nidra me darsan kyu deta,

 

[Devchaudhary]

Update-17​

Rohini: tumne Mujhse ankhien band karne ke liye
kyu kha or vo sighra hi apni
Akhein khol deti hai to vo
Chila uthti hai mar gayi
Me gir jaungi mujhe niche
Utaro,
Raghav: rohini bharosa rkho
Me hu na tumhare sath
Or tej gati se use ude liye ja
Rha
Rohini dar ke karan mujhe
Kas ke pakad leti hai
Rohini: apni ankho ko tirchi karte hue agar me gir gai to dekho niche kitna ghera hai
Mujhe to niche dekhte hue bhi chakar aa rhe hai
Raghav: isi liye to kha tha apni akhein band karlo
Par tum sunti hi kha ho or
Phir vo meri ankho ki
Gehraiyo me dekhne lagi
Vakt bhot kam tha vrna
Man to mera bhi kar
Kar rha tha ki uski.
Ankho me dub jau
Rohini: tum dev nhi ho skte tum bhot gande ho mere dev ne mujhe aj tak nhi data
Raghav: kyunki vo jab tumeh mila to vo ek abodh balak tha or uske baad tumne use khud se dur kar diya or
Phir sayong bas jab tumne use pechana bhi to tumhari mulakat hi use thode samay ke liye hui.
Rohini:usse ka tumhara kya matlab hai kya tum dev nhi ho
Raghav: hu bhi or nhi bhi
Rohini : matlab
Raghav : matlab tum khud jan jaogi
Or phir hum kuch hi minto me vha phoch jate hai jha dev ka shav pda tha rohini jise dikh jor jor se vilap karne lagti hai lekin mai aisa hone nhi de skta
Tha mujhe turant hi dev ko
Swasth kar vapis apne
Samay ayam me phochna tha. Mene turant rohini ke mukh par hath rkh uske muh ko band kar diya jise rohini chat ptane lagi or usne
Apne tez dato se mere
Hath ko bhi kat liya
Raghav: rohini sant ho jao agar mere yha hone ka doga ko pta chal gya to me kuch nhi kar paunga.
Rohini : ghughu karti hui pehle ye btao kon ho tum
Kya tum koi behrupiye ho
Raghav: in sab bato ke janne se jyada is vakt humare liye
Dev ke pran bchana jaruri
Hai tab jakar rohini kuch sant hui
Uske sighra paschat mene
Rohini ko kuch osdhiya de
Di jo kisi bhi jher ka antidote thi or uske paschat me
dev ke sav ke smaksh bethkar apni indriyo ko puneh jagrit kar mene apna
Hath dev ke sar par rkh
Liya jise mere sarir se
Ek prakash ki kiran nikalkar
Dev ke sarir me bhi staphit
Hone lagi jisse hum do sarir
Ek pran ho jate hai hum
Sarir to do rehte kintu humari pran skhti ab ek hi
Rehti, ab mere sarir par
Bhi vhi ghav ke nishan banne lage jise ek baar dekh kar
Rohini phir se dar gyi,
Kyunki me use smjha chuka
Tha ki use kya karna hai
To usne vo jadi butiya
Piskar ghao ke sthan par
Bhar di jisse humare jitne
Sarir ke hisse me rakt pehla
tha vo utni hi hisso me reh
Gya or rudhir kadikayo
Me uska andidot phelkar ladne lga or kuch mene bhi apni indriyo ko jagrit
Kar sare vish ko ekatrit kar
Use muh se ek baar me
Hi bhar thuk diya.
Ab mujhe bhi kuch samay
Ke liye chakar aa gya tha
Ab humare sarir par keval
Ghao bache the vo bhi mere
Chetna aane par dhire dhire bharne lage, or idhar dev ke bhi ghao bharne lage or uski
Bhi chetna vapis aa gyi,
Dev: dhire dhire apni ankhein kholne lga use
Bas yaad tha to uske sarir
Par hue chaku ke var jo uski apni hi dadi or ma
Ne kiye the use
Apni shaktiyo ka vodh karne ke liye kuch samay ke liye
Yog me bethkar sant man
Se apne kundlini chakra
Ko bas jgana tha
ab uske
Pass mere dwara prapt ki
Gyi panch bhuto ki
Asth sidhiya to thi jinka
Awahan kar ishwar ke
Charnar vindo me dhyan
lga uneh upyog me lana
Tha, jisse purva bas uske
Pas kundlini shakti
Or saririk shakti thi jo ki
Ek veer purush me samanyat hoti hai,
Dev mujhe dekhkar gusse me tum kon ho behrupiye or
Vo mujhe marne ke liye
Dod pada or usne dono
Hatho ko jod kar ek ghusa
Bna mujhe jad diya
Jise mai piche ki
Or do kala kha kar gir gya
Me chahta to swaym ko
Usse bcha skta tha par
Me chahta tha use swayam bhi vodh ho
Jaise hi me utha me dekhta
Hu dev bhi gira pda hai
Or vo phirse or adhik
Guse me uthkar aata hai
Jo dard abhi mujhe hua tha
Sayad use bhi hua tha
Tabhi rohini bich me
Aa jati hai
Rohini: dev ye kya kar rhe ho tum kya tumeh kuch pta
Bhi hai
Dev: ap hat jaiye guruma bich me se ye ek behrupiya
Hai
Rohini: or isi behrupiye ne aj tumhari jaan bachayi
Hai
Raghav: yaar ye faltu me behrupiya behrupiya mat bulao mujhe i have a name
Dev or rohini achambe
Me kya?
Raghav: arey arey sorry sorry
Tab to dono or bhi gusse me
Aa jate hai or mujhe marne
Ke liye dod padte hai
Rohini: tumne dev ki jaan bchayi to iska mtlab mujhe
Suri bologe abhi ruko
Abhi btati hu,
Rabhi dono mujhe marne ke liye bhag pade rohini
Ne apni kohni mere pet me de mari or idhar dev ke muh se aksamik nikal pda
Aaaahhh or usne turant apna muh band kar liya
Rohini ascharya se kabhi
Dev to kbhi mujhe dekhne
Lagi,
Raghav: dekho mene tumse mafi mangi thi or me ye keh rha tha ki mera bhi ek naam hai mujhe behrupiya mat
Kho mujhe acha nhi lgta
Rohini: par tum to keh rhe the ki tum dev ho or tumhare
Samksh aate hi mujhe vo
Sab hota hai jo dev ke
Meri dil ki dhadkane bhad
Jati hai me apna apa kho
Deti hu aisa kyu hai,
Dev: ye ap kya keh rhi hai
Ap meri guru ma ho
Raghav: rohini se dhire se
Mujhe lgta hai ab iske hoto
Pe kiss de hi do
Rohini: kya kiss
Raghav: arey budhu chumban
Rohini sharma jati hai or kehti hai tum kitne nirlaj
Ho
Dev: kya kha isne apse
Rohini: kuch nhi
Dev: to ap itni sharma kyu rhi ho
Rohini: raghav se acha kya naam hai tumhara
Raghav: raghav
Rohini: to kya tum hi mere swapn me aate the
Raghav: arey yaar apko kaise smjhau hum dono ek hi hai dev or me ek dusre se bhin nhi hai abhi apne dekha na kaise iske sarir ke ghao
Mere sarir par ho gye the
Or phir jab apne ya isne mujhe mara to mar mujhe
Padi dard ise hua.
Rohini darte hue: to kya ab mere do premi hai haye ram
Ye me kis musibat me pad
Gyi
Raghav: arey devi me is samay ka nhi hu or apko ek hi se prem krna hai jaiye use kiss mera mtlab hai use chumban dijiye
Rohini: mujhe sarm aati hai
Idhar dev mujhe ghure ja
Rha tha kyunki humari
Atma bhale se hi ek thi par
Humare sarir alag alag
The or abhi usne kafi vakt
Se yog me nhi gya tha
Dusra uske sath hua abhi abhi hadsa
Raghav: arey jaiye to
Tabhi rohini dhire dhire
Dev ki or badhti hai
Dev: kya hua guruma
Or rohini apne dono
Hath uske gale me dal deti
Hai
dev: darte hue ye ap kya kar rhi hai
Tabhi rohini apne hoth uske
Mukh par rkh deti hai
Or use chumne lagti hai
Ab dev bhi is chumban ki gehrai me dub jata hai
Rohini apne dono hoto me
Dev ke upar ka hoth bhar
Leti hai or use chusne lagti
Hai rohini ki sase ab
Garam ho jati hai, dev bhi ab is chumban se kafi garam ho jata vo bhi kabhi dev ke upar wale hoth ko to kabhi niche wale hoth ko apne hotho
Me lekar chusne lagti
Hai theeek dev bhi isi prakar kar rha vo dono bhul chuke
The ki vo kha hai unke samaksh koi or bhi
Hai ya vo akele hai
Ab dev ne apne hatho se
Rohini ke chutado ko
Tham liya or uski tango
Ko apne kamar ke ird
Gird kar liya,
Or ek hath rohini ke sar ke piche le jakar or dusre
Hath ki finger uski gardan
Or kan ke niche ghumane
Lga or vo dono ek dusre ke
Hotho ko chume ja rhe the
Ab vo chumban me itna dub gaye the ki ek dusre ki jeebh ko bhi apne muh me lekar chusne lage the unka chumban karib dus minute chala
Or phir dono ne apne hotho ko alag kiya jab rohini
Ko apni dasha ka bhan hua
To usne sharmakar
Apna mukh dev ke sine me chupa liya,
Dev: rohini akhir tum mujhe mil hi gayi
Ab dev ko bhi apne purva janm ka gyan ho gya tha
Raghav: oh romeo or juliet jra idhar suno
Dev or rohini ab ye kon hai
Ye bhi tumhari trh hi do log
Hai mera matlab do jode
Hai
Raghav:dev kal tumeh kisi bhi samay me yog nidra
Me jakar apna kundlini
Chakra jagrit karna hoga
Jiske paschat tumeh sari
Chijo ka bodh ho jayega
Ab me chalta hu or idhar
Me apne sarir ko phir
Se ati sukhsm kar prapti sidhi se phir se usi sthan
Par phoch gya worm holl
Me jha samay aayam ka
4 tha dwar tha or phir me usme tirva gati se safar
Kar guruji ke sanmukh
Upasthit hua.

Idhar me apne aayam me aajata hu (me matlab raghav) or udhar dev ko pta nhi kya ho jata hai jo abhi kuch der pehle rohini ki
Gori chikni makhmali
Tango ko apni kamar kamar
Me kisi kundli ki trh lapet
Uske nitamb(chutaodo)
Ko apne hath me thame
Hue uske labo (hotho) ko aise chus rha tha jaise tataya
Ya madhumakhi fullo
Me se ras ko chusti hai
Ab usne rohini se apne mukh ko dusri or fer liya tha
Rohini: kya hua tumeh
Tumne apna mukh kyu mujhse pher liya
Dev : ye glat hai humein
Aisa nhi karna chahiye
Mujhe maf kardo mene tumhare labo ko chi me kitna gir gya apni hi guruma ke
Sath
Idhar rohini dev ki baat sun khamos hokar roye ja rhi
Thi use bhi smjh me nhi
Aa rha tha kya karein
Akhir ye to vo bhi janti
Thi bhale hi pichle janam me vo dev ki premika thi magar
Is janam me vo bhi kisi or
Ki patni thi par in sab dakiyanusi smaj ke bnaye gye niyam or apne abhi dev ke kiye gaye chumban or
Apni un bhavnao ke liye
Dukhi nhi thi jisme usne dev ko apna sab kuch man liya
Tha kyunki vo ab smaj ke in niyam or in bandhano se
Upar uth chuki thi akhir jab usne apni atma apne
Man se use apna sab kuch
Man liya tha to phir
Tan ka kya tan to bas miti hai.
Vo prem ki gehraiyo me purnth kho chuki thi.
Use dukh tha to bas is baat ka ki jo premi uske sapno me akar use prem ka path pdhata tha jis premi ne
Uski atma ko apne prem ke basibuth kar liya tha
Jisne uske hirdya me apne liye prem ki jyot jagrit ki thi
Jisne use is lok laj is smaj
Ke bandhano se upar
Uthaya tha aj vo hi use
Lok laj ka path pdha rha
Tha.
Dev: mujhe maf kardo or aao chalo me tumeh ashram me chod deta hu.
Rohini ab jor jor se rone lagi
Ab jaise hi dev ka dhyan
Rohini ki trf gya to vo ye sab dekh kar bhochaka sa reh gya use kuch smjh nhi aa rha tha akhir ye hua kya,
Uske dil me rohini ki ye dasha dekh kar ek bhot bhari tees si uthne lagi use lga
Sayad rohini uske is kritya
Ke karan ro rhi hai, use
Lga jo usne abhi rohini
Ke hotho ko is trh chuma vo sayad is bjh se jor jor se
Ro rhi hai use kuch na sujha
To usne rohini ke ghutne
Pakad liya or apne chehre
Par chinta or dukh ke
Bhav lakar
Dev: mujhe maf kardo tum jo sja mujhe dena chaho mujhe
Dedo mene tumhare sarir
Ko ganda kiya hai mujhe maro chahe to mere pran lelo par aise vilap na karo
Ab rohini ke sabra ka bandh tut gya abhi tak jo dard uske ansoo bankar beh rha tha
Jo dard vo rote sisyate
Hue bhar aa rha tha
Ab vo sabdo ke roop me bhar aane lga
Rohini: rote hue vah dev tum bade adakar ho bade dhutra ho pal pal me rang bdalte
Ho jaise admi na hoke
Koi girgit ho me smjh
Gayi tum bas mere dil ke sath khel rhe ho jab tumeh mujhe
Apnana hi nhi tha to
Kyu dilayi mujhe humare
Purva janam ke prem ki
Yaad kya mene kha tha tum mere sapno me aao
Or me bhi kitni pagal thi
In dus salo se til til mar rhi thi ki ab tum aaoge kab mujhse akar miloge kab mere pritam aayenge or khenge lo me aa gya meri priye ab tumhare
Intzar ki ghadiya khtam
Hui, arey me to apni zindagi ji hi rhi thi, kya mene tumse
Kha tha ki mere sapne me aao mujhe humare prem
Ki yaad dilao me janti
Hu tum bas apna ab mujhse
Pratishod le rhe ho bas or kuch nhi.
Aisa nhi tha rohini ko apne prem par bharosa nhi tha
Par vo bechari bhi kya karti
Pehle use khud is lok laj is smaj ka dar stata tha phir
Dusra dar jise vo apna putra.smjhti thi use chune
Par bilkul aisi hi bhavna
Ka jagrit hona jaisa vo
Apne premi ke liye karti
Thi or jis din use ye pta chla ki uska premi or vo
Balak ek hi hai tab to mano
Uspe jaise bijliya hi gir gayi
Ho lekin phir bhi usne swayam ko smjha liya
Kyunki vo prem ki us gehrayi or prem ki mahima ko
Smjh chuki thi usne smjh
Liya tha ki prem me kisi bhi prakar ki koi bhinta nhi
Hoti or jise vo mamta or vatsalya smjhti thi vo uske
Dil ka apne premi ke liye
Prem tha jisne use us samay balya avastha me dekh
Mamta ka roop le liya tha.
Or us din jab usne dev ko
Uski pron avastha me dekha tha usne uske mukh me
Apne us premi ka mukh dekha to vo man me kbhi sarma jati to kbhi kehti
Tum bade chaliya ho
Kya kya khel khelte ho
Samne bhi aaye to ek balak ka roop lekar
Lekin aj dev ki bato ne uske dil ko chalni kar diya tha
Dev rohini ki baat sun nirotar ho chuka tha kyunki vo to ye hi soch rha tha sayad rohini is baat se dukhi hai ki mene rohini ke hotho ko chuma hai
Rohini ab dev ki or dekhti
Hai jo ki ab kamosh kdha
Tha jo ab jaan chuka tha
Ki rohini ki dard kis takleef se guzri jisme na dev koi dev
Ka hath tha na rohini
Ki galti ye to bas samay ka
Khel tha jo aksar do premiyo
Or prem karne walo
Ki pariksha leta hai
Rohini soch rhi thi ki dev ko sayad uska sath acha nhi lag rha vo jha par khade the vo jgh thodi unchai par thi or
Usse thodi dur jane par
Ek jharna tha
Rohini ab puri trh se tut chuki
Thi vo soch rhi thi jis prem
Ke khatir mene ye janam
Liya or jis premi ke liye
Me ji rhi hu jab use hi meri
Kdar nhi to meri ye jindagi
Bekar hai mujhe
Mar jana chahiye, vo bha se
Ab tez gati se bhagne lagi
Dev ye dekh kar dang reh gya vo bhi rohini ke piche piche dodne lga or jor jor se
Uska naam pukarne
Lga rohini rohini
Magar vo ankho me ashoo
Liye bha se bhage ja rhi
Thi use pas me hi jharna
Dikhai diye jisme vo kud gayi

Idhar rohini ke jharne me kudte hi dev bhi chilakar
Rohini pukarta hai or uske piche vo bhi kud jata hai,
Rohini jharne me girte hi
Pani ke bhav ke sath behne
Lagi,
jha abhi vo mojud
The vo bhot hi ek sundar
Vn(वन ) tha jha sundar sundar pusp the podhe the ped ityadi the
ab samany si baat hai jha
Vn honge parkriti ki sundarta vyapt hogi
Vha khatre bhi isi prakar
Hone lajmi hai, chahe vo
Khatre kisi jeev jantu
Ke roop me ho chahe prakriti swayam hi apne roop me in khatro ko dharan kiye hue
Ho,
Idhar raghav ab apne samay aayam me sakushal phoch
Gya tha,
Usne vha phochte hi guruji ko sadar pranam kiya,
Raghav: guruji ab mera agla karya kya hai,
guruji: putra tum ab asth sidhiyo ki prapti ki or agrasar ho or dusra tumeh
Apne yog bal par apna rasta swayam bnana hoga
Me har samay jaruri nhi ki tumhara marg darsan
Tumhare sanmukh aakar hi
Karu ab me tumeh apni
Sari shaktiya de chuka hu
Ab tum mujhse bhi shaktisali ho chuke ho par kabhi
Bhi in shaktiyo ko khud
Par havi mat hone dena
Inke mad me chur na hona
Kyunki ye shaktiya tumhari
Hokar bhi nhi hai,
Shaktiya apne sath ek dayitva or jimedari lati hai, jinka upyog keval samaj or
Parkriti me vyavstha bnaye
Rkhne ke liye hota hai,
Raghav: agar me itna hi shaktisali ho chuka hu
To doga ko abhi kyu nhi mar skta.
Guruji muskurate hue
Tum doga ko marna jitna saral smjh rhe ho putra utna saral use marna nhi hai
Apni ankhe band karo
Or swayam hi apni shaktiyo ka doga ki shaktiyo se
Akalan karlo,
Jaise hi me apni anhein band karta hu me swayam ko ek andhkar me gufa me pata
Hu jisme khi koi dwar na
Tha vo gufa dekhne
Or uski banavat se hi pta chal rha tha kitni majbut
Hai usse dekhkar
Aisa prateet ho rha tha jaise
Kinhi kali chatan yukt
Pahadiyo ke andar ho
Jo andar se bhi kafi badi
Thi yha me doga ko samapt karne ke liye aaya tha
Tabhi doga mere samaksh aa jata hai jo ek sadharan
Manusya jaisa tha
Mene apni urja ko kendrit kar ek shaktisali talwar
Ka nirman kiya or idhar
Doga ke pet me ghusa
Diya jise doga ke muh se
Ek bhayanak chik nigal gyi vo mar gya, tabhi vo saksh
Jiske sarir me talwar thi
Ek bhayanak hasi hasta
Hai, or me pun: khud ko
Aisi jgh pata hu jha me abhi
Thodi der pehle tha
Ek kali vishal gufa jiske andar me chale ja rha tha
Kisi saksh ko dhundte hue
Jiska naam tha doga,
Tabhi vha par ek bhayank
Hasi gunjti hai
Hahhhaaa kya hua tum yha
Phir se tumne to mujhe
Mar diya tha ab kya mujhe
Phir se marne
Aaye ho or tabhi vo
Ek bhayanak detyakar
Chehre me mere samne
Prakat hota hai,

jo kareeb 20 feet jitna uncha
Tha jiske mukh se jehrile rasaynik,
Or visad visfotak gole nikal rhe the jinke liye kisi chatan ko bhi pingla dena
Koi namumkin karya nhi tha, or vo gole jaise hi jamin
Par girte bhi se vo chatanuma gufa us lava se dhekne lagi jaise hi bha
Par mere upar vo lava yukt gola girta me swayam ko niche ki or jhuka leta,
Oe jab vo mere pairo ke
Pass akar ke girta me swayam ko hawa me uchal
Leta ab mene swayam ko halka kar apni gati ko
Vayu se bhi tez kar liya or
Tirva gati se uski or
Udte hue apni shaki se farsa
Bnakar uski gardan kat
Dali, jiske kat te hi vo 20 feet ka sarir jamin pe ja gira
Ab me kafi thak chuka tha,
Ab vha par ho hasi
Phir se gunjne lagi or me pun khud ko usi gufa me khda
Pata hu jaise me abhi abhi gufa me aaya hu par mere
Sarir me vo thakavat saf
Jhalak rhi thi jo mujhe
Doga se ladne ke baad hui
Me phir us kali gufa me bhadne lga jisme me kisi ko dundh rha tha,
Tabhi pehle ki trh mujhe kisi ke hasne ki bhayanak gunj sunai
Deti hai, or vo pehle se bhi
Visad or krur roop me mere
Smksh kdha tha, ab usne khud
Ko ab kai anya rupo me baat
Liya tha, or ab vo apne
Hatho se bijli or kai anya
Shaktiya mujh par chodne
Lga jisne mere sarir ko
Jkad liya or vo bijli mere
Sarir se meri urja ko dhire
Dhire nast kar rhi thi
Jisse meri sochne smjhne
Ki shaktiya bhi nast ho chuki
Thi, ab usne chutki bjayi
Ab usne vhi bethe bethe mere
Sarir ke do tukde kar diye,
Tabhi mene apni ankhein
Khol li.
Guruji: kya tumne vats uski
Shaktiya tumse kitni prabal hai
Tum use chahe kitni baar
Hi mar lo vo pehle se bhi or
Adhik shaktisali hokar
Tumhare samaksh aa jayega
raghav: to kya me use kabhi
Bhi nhi mar paunga
Guruji: mar paoge kintu
Tum akele hi use nhi mar
Paoge jab tak dev us duniya me uski banayi hui tilism shaktiyo
Uske numaindo ko nhi mar
Girata uski adrisya duniya
Me phockkar use nhi
Hrata tab tak tum bhi doga
Ko nhi mar paoge.
Abhi tumeh swayam ko santchit rkhna hoga.
Tumeh uske dware failaye gye andhkar logo me vyapt
Buriyo ko or ache logo ko
Jo dharm ki disa me badh
Rhe hai lekin kuch bure
Log uneh bhi aisa bnana
Chate hai.
Unse un vyaktiyo ki raksha karo.
Smaj me insaniyat dharm ko
Felayo aj ki duniya me ek vyakti apne dukh se itna
Paresan nhi hota jitna
Vo apne sambhandi apne
Padosi ki khusio ko dekhkar
Paresan hota hai.
Doga logo ko apas me hi ladakar mar dega bure logo
Se ache logo par jurm karata
Hai.
Tumeh uske har mansube ko filhal nakamyab krna
Hoga tumeh apni mata,
Bheno or sambhandiyo ki uski
Hi ek anuchar chudail se
Unki raksha karni hai,
Kintu tum unke samaksh
Ab is rup me kdapi na jana.
Mene gurudev ko pranam kiya or vha se nikal gya me ab
Ye soch rha tha ki mujhe
Kha jana chahiye apne ghar
To me ja nhi skta or idhar
Mere 12 th ke exam bhi
Hai, ek baar mere man
Me aaya kyu na monika
Mam ke ghar chalu par
Unke ghar to unke pati
Rehte hai phir mene socha
Nitu mam ke ghar chlta
Hu vaise bhi unke pati
Out of country rehte hai, or vaise bhi vo school ki
Vice principal thi vo meri
Kafi help bhi kar sakti
Thi

 

[Devchaudhary]

Jaburjust update bro abb Raghav 4 aayam mai jaakr Apne aapko powerful krega aur abb dev ke sath uski bhi life judne wali hai ekk ko nipta do dono nipat jaayange abb dekhna hai raghav Apne sath sath Dev ko kaise bachata hai aur power ko kaise haasil krta hai waise toh abhi bhi Raghav boht powerful hai aage Ka intzaar hai bhau keep writing keep rocking bro niceeeeee....

Bhai raghav ne sampurna shaktiya.
Pa li hai ab use or shaktiya nhi milengi
Or ishtv shakti se badi koi shakti nhi
Hai tumne suna to hoga hi asth
Sidhi 9 nidhi ke data pavanputra
Vo chahe to pal bhar me duniya
Nasta kar skte hai isliye mene puri trike
Se raghav ke pass asth sidhiya hone
Ka jikra nhi kiya or villian ko agar
Hero chutki me hi hra de to aise
Tatti villain hone ka kya fayeda

 

[Devchaudhary]

Behad hi shandar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Kamal ho gya fir , flashback khatam.
Mzaaaa aa gya bhai waah.

Or ab ,
Aage ka intjaar

Bhai me 17 update de chuka or aise niras na hua karo story apne hisab se chal rhi hai agar kisi update me confuse ho jao
To dusre me usse bhar jarur aa jaoge

 

[Arjun Singh 72]

Awesome update
Ye bhot clear update that ismain
Kuch bhi confusion nahi hua
Keep posting

 

[Devchaudhary]

Awesome update
Ye bhot clear update that ismain
Kuch bhi confusion nahi hua
Keep posting

Chalo acha hai confusion hona nhi chahiye