sunoanuj
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khani ke page pure hone ki bahut bahut shubhkamnaen
Shukriya bhai,,,,Accha story chal rha hai bhai ab thoda direct direct kam ho rha ye bahut accha baat hai. Waiting for next update.
Pareshaniya to sabke paas hoti hain bhaiya ji lekin writer log bhi to time nikaal kar kahani likhte hain. Kya wo badi fursat me baithe huye hote hain?? Corona kaal me to har insaan apna kaam dhaam chhod kar ghar me hi baitha hota hai aur fir kahaniya padhne ke liye jab logo ko time mil jata hai to kya chhota sa review dene ke liye logo ko time nahi milta??? Yaha dosh sirf writer bas ka hi nahi hai bhaiya ji, kahi na kahi readers ka bhi dosh hai. Khair koi baat nahi,,,,Agree.... % agree.
शायद लोगों की परेशानियां होंगी । आखिर नोटबंदी , जी एस टी के बाद कोरोना काल भी तो है न ! फायनेन्शियल प्रोब्लम तो सौ में नब्बे की होगी । सभी प्रोब्लम एक बार में ही खड़ी हो गई थी ।
अब
क्या होगा, जब भाभी से मुलाकात होगी,
कोई तो बात है जो भाभी को परेशान कर रही है
Shukriya bhai,,,,Nice very nice
Shukriya bhai,,,,Superb updates bhai.....!
5 updates ek sath padhe...!
Story bhut hi interesting hoti ja rhi hai
Shukriya bhai,,,,Bahut he jbardust jaa rahi hai kahani ... lekin Shubham bhai har update me aisa lagta ki kuch baki rah gaya ...
ab dekhte hai able bhag me bhabhi ke dimag me kya chal raha hai ?
khani me suspense khul hee nahin raha hai Murari ko kisne mara ? Sahukaron or vaibhav ke Cusion ki kya khichadi pak rahi hai ? Kusum itni mature baten kaise karne lagi? Or bade Thakur apni gaddi kisko dena chahahte hai ...
khani ko ab sametne ki jarurat hai sex kam karke khani ko aagey badhao....
Shukriya bhai,,,,,