Superb story .....abhi puri padhi....gajab....
Bahut jabardast likhte ho bhai....apka hindi bhasha pe prabhutv hai....toh apki lekhni aur khubsurat lagti hai.....
This is one of the best stories I've ever read....
Jis tarah se dhere dheere story ko unfold kiya hai wo wakai kabil e tarif hai...
Story mai incest ko bahut khub introduce kiya wo bhi sahi jagah pe......
Kya Isme gauri aur viraj ke bich bhi incest hoga?
Ek suggestion hai..
Saare incest relations ko sensuously aur seductively batana bhai...to maja aayega...
Eagerly waiting for next