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Main app ka name bata dunga par tum ye batao tumne meri story kholi kaise, jahan tak mujhe pata hai tumne kaha tha tum multi characters story nahi padhte ho!!!Update 23
bhai mere v teen sawal the ...
Pehela- sachcha me aisa koi app hai jiska use karke wo sab kar sakte hai jiska zeekr tumne apni thread pe kiya tha..?
Dushar- agar hai to bata do main v apni adhuri story ko pura karlu or agar nahi hai to kyo hum garib logo ka chutiya kat rahe ho...??
tishar- bata de bhai ...chutiya mat kat...garibo ki haya kyo lena chahta hai...???
Mujhe nahi pata main jayada aage ki nahi sochta hoon, jo currently samne aata hai usi par focus karta hoon.Lagta hai Karan ke chacha ji ka hanth hai ishme wohi hai jo Anantrajya se sambandh rakhte hai aur vinashika ke pita ho,
Ab mere mann mein aaya to maine puchh liya, sayad main story samjhne mein abhi bhi thoda immature hoon. Well dhire dhire mature ho jaunga. Hahaha .ish sawal ka koi matlab hi nahi Banta kyonki jab kaalrani ne thanasala pe hamla kiya tha toh nidhi ne apne angrakshak se vaani ko maze me le jane ko Bola tha ,ish se hi pata chalta hai ki maze kitni safe hogi
Hmmm nice queen of death. Name bhi to dangerous hi hai Vinashika. Matlab destruction.Bhai wo queen of death hai,powerful toh hogi hai aur Agrahak ne bola tha ki vinashika van rajya me apni power nahi use kar sakti kyonki wo sarnita ke adheen hai maybe.....
aapka kya khayal hai dhal bhai main ne sahi kaha ya nahi
Mujhe bhi shikao yaar ...mere ek update mein koi 20 ghante lag jaate haiMain app ka name bata dunga par tum ye batao tumne meri story kholi kaise, jahan tak mujhe pata hai tumne kaha tha tum multi characters story nahi padhte ho!!!
Well Answer hai *Google Docs*. Par kaise wo khud hi tumhe sikhna hoga main explain nahi kar paunga, jab use karoge to khud samajh jaoge.
Thanks a lotEkdum jabardast and shandar update
Obviously, bahut saare games khel khel kar I somewhat learned to describe fight scenes ...lekin agar english mein hote toh aur mst lagte...hindi mein words mujhe Google karne padte hai baar baarTo sabse pahle baat karte hai karan ki
To karan ne apni fighting skills ko improve kar liya hai jesa ki hamne is update me dekha hai ki kese vo skeleton se lad raha tha
Usse age kaa bhi plan kar rkha thaOr ye plan sarvas ne pahle se taiyar kar rakha tha ki agar kahi koi gadbad ho to vo sabka dyan apni or khichane ki koshis karega or un sab ko vaha se niklane ka ek moka dega
Mesaka pehle aa chuki hai....chapter 8 mein Spider hai wohAb aage dekte hai ki ye rani mesaka kon hai or uski doot viyali ko ravisha ne kyo pakad kar rak rakha tha
Sab yahan haram kyu bolte haiOr akir me aakansha or karan ka sex ekdum mast tha karan ke haram me ek or jud gayi hai
Haa sabko yahi kuch jayda axcha laga Smjh gye kyuThis is one of the best updates you have given!
Thanks lol. Jaise books main majorly padhte hoon vaisa hi dimag chalta hai kuch. Glad you're enjoying itIt took me some time to read the earlier updates, and I am too amazed by your writing.
Yes, he's important to the plot... remember how he was introduced in the story? That was moment it said that he'll be special. Thanks again!I liked the character of Shravas. His loyality is something that makes him unique and likable. I can only imagine the moment where he had to take tough decisions. You've built his character well.
Karan was always the child she couldn't have. So, it's obvious that she would care about him even more than his real mother!It was always evident that Akansha loved Karan from his childhood. That love and attractions was always there, and Akansha doesn't want him to be distracted.
Thanks thanks are baaba bas bhi karo abThe basis of this relation started from intial updates only, and that is one thing that makes your writing beautiful. How you have developed stories is amazing.
Climax of the season...!!!The story also proceeded firmly in this update. From the footnote, I can only imagine what may happen in future.
Working on itAwating eagerly for next update!
Tumhe to lagega hi saltyvixen, kyonki tum images khud se banati ho aur mujhe images free free mil jata hai.Mujhe bhi shikao yaar ...mere ek update mein koi 20 ghante lag jaate hai
Kon Jaa jaadu seekh liya hai Dhal
Tumhe to lagega hi saltyvixen, kyonki tum images khud se banati ho aur mujhe images free free mil jata hai.
Acha mujhe laga ke koi voice type wala fiction mil gaya hai...jisse speed double ho gye hai..blogger mein Infinite storage hote hai toh main whi prefer karti hoon.Usme direct images ko insert karne ka option hai, pahle download kar upload karna padta tha. Halanki blogger mein bhi ye available hai par blogger ka editing box phone mein achhe se work nahi karta hai.
Main jisme pichhle 2 updates se likh raha hoon usme bahut maja aa raha hai. Mera kaphi time save ho ja raha hai.
Dhal bhai ush ne ye bhi bola tha ki wo long story bhi nahi padhta hai .....Main app ka name bata dunga par tum ye batao tumne meri story kholi kaise, jahan tak mujhe pata hai tumne kaha tha tum multi characters story nahi padhte ho!!!
Aur aapko karna bhi nahi chahiye,kyon ki aapko khud ki bhi story likhni hoti hai.....Mujhe nahi pata main jayada aage ki nahi sochta hoon, jo currently samne aata hai usi par focus karta hoon.
You naughty boy.....Ab mere mann mein aaya to maine puchh liya, sayad main story samjhne mein abhi bhi thoda immature hoon. Well dhire dhire mature ho jaunga. Hahaha .
janha pe ho kaalraani ka washHmmm nice queen of death. Name bhi to dangerous hi hai Vinashika. Matlab destruction.