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Thanks a lot Maxawesome update, my mind was flowing freely .
This was just a small gesture..Interested: Sonali kuch jyada hi interested hai Karan me jo ush ki harkat aur hav bhav se Pata chalta hai aur dushri taraf hamare aakash bhai sahab hai jo payal ke khwab dekh dekhne lag rahe hai, OMG
Sonali ne Karan ka hanth pakad aur boli tarkash tumhare sath hai (ye baat payal ko batani padegi )
He's just tha most loyal servant...ab toh koi doubt bhi nhi hai uspe...story mein uske entry bhi special hi likhe the isliye...aur aage bhi special hi hai...so stay on your seatsHonesty : sharvas ne apni wafadari dikhate hue aakash se puch hi Liya kaun ho tum
Woh toh obvious hi hai...ek maa ke liye 1 hafte ya 2 din ke liye bhi uske bache dur hote hai toh...fir se milte hai toh feelings aa jate haiEmotions : aap ne bacchon ko etne din baad dekh nandani ne unko gale laga Liya, ek Maa ke liye ushke bacche kya hote hai ek Maa hi samajhti hai jo nandani me dikha.
Exactly!! Payal ke saath toh bas Aakansha hi thi bachpan se...so just guess how she would have felt ke woh sab bas ek jooth tha...very disheartening...vaise bhi Payal ke story bahut lambi hai....Ig the longest after Karan? MbLove and care : Karan ne jo fysla Liya sahi Liya ki payal aur nandani ko abhi ish sab se dur rakhna hi sahi hai kyon ki akansha se dono hi bahut karib hai khas kar payal.
Yeh chapter toh aa gya ab...ispe jayda nhi bolungi...but unn eyes ka aage ke seasons aur chapters mein role aayega...kyuki 4ron artifacts are not simple at all...unke pichle bhi raaz hai...ye batata hai ki Karan kitni fikr karta hai apni maa aur bahen ki. Karan ko apni mausi ki jaan khatre me lagi.aur khoj been ke liye mahal me bhi ghushne jaraha Hai aur sayad Karan ravisha ki soul dekh sakta ho apni ankhon se jish se ravisha ka raaz khul Jaye.
You fell for it?? Acha bewakoof banayaDangerous : watchtower pe jo scaleten archer baytha hai ushki arrow ke nishane pe sayad Karan ho ga it's to dangerous, kya Karan bacha lega khubko aur sabko ?
She's just like that...kuch kuch hote hai aise bhi...horny all time...Sex : I can't say anything I ignored this part in story and prchi ko itni craving kyon hai sex karne ki I think she loved Karan
Bahut kuch jhelna padega aise toh...but ending will be happy one...Last and my fav....part : Karan and payal conversation part Is fav.... aur first time payal ko jeleouy feel hue ki karan
,Sonali ko dekh raha hai ab ayga maza jab Sonali Karan ke pass aygi aur payal ko jeleousy feel hogi (mujhe Sonali ka yun chipakna pasand toh nahi ayga but jhel na toh padega chipdi ko yaar abhi toh aur aayngi )
Lmfao what? Wdym peeche...yeh koi nibba nibbi thodi likhungi main yahanaur Karan jab ye dekhe ga ki Aakash payal ke piche hai to Karan ka kya hoga?
Karte hoon kuch... jaydatar story se hi bhar jata hai pura chapter....aise scenes toh main kitne bhi bhar doon...filler wale...bas kya hai.One suggestion, payal and nandni didn't meet long time so some time spent together and talk something.
Abhi aur kuch bacha haiBaki soch ke likhunga baad me
Wo koi aysi waysi ladki nahi hai wo payal hai payal wo ushko ayse kayse dekh sakta haiThanks a lot Max
This was just a small gesture..
Yaar har cheez ko literally nhi Lena chahiye!...Kise sundar ladki ke taraf ek second dekh liya toh Akshaya uske peeche pad gaya... Wah bhyi...
He is not servant ,he was a bodyguard of past king,he is a protector of the kaljayi.he is a special character of the story....He's just tha most loyal servant...ab toh koi doubt bhi nhi hai uspe...story mein uske entry bhi special hi likhe the isliye...aur aage bhi special hi hai...so stay on your seats
HammWoh toh obvious hi hai...ek maa ke liye 1 hafte ya 2 din ke liye bhi uske bache dur hote hai toh...fir se milte hai toh feelings aa jate hai
Very painfull for payal ..... aur main apni last breath tak ka wait bhi kar sakta hu sirf payal ki story dekhne ke liye....Exactly!! Payal ke saath toh bas Aakansha hi thi bachpan se...so just guess how she would have felt ke woh sab bas ek jooth tha...very disheartening...vaise bhi Payal ke story bahut lambi hai....Ig the longest after Karan? Mb
I got it what are you sayingYeh chapter toh aa gya ab...ispe jayda nhi bolungi...but unn eyes ka aage ke seasons aur chapters mein role aayega...kyuki 4ron artifacts are not simple at all...unke pichle bhi raaz hai...
Little bit...You fell for it?? Acha bewakoof banaya
Toh Aditya ko pata le itni khujli hai toh (oops sorry )She's just like that...kuch kuch hote hai aise bhi...horny all time...
Kya main aapne dil pe mountain rakh lu kya....aur ending tak lagta hai mera heart โฅ se ho Jayga....Bahut kuch jhelna padega aise toh...but ending will be happy one...
I don't like nibba nibbi ,aur ishi reson se main ne apna phone 3 baar thoda bhi haiLmfao what? Wdym peeche...yeh koi nibba nibbi thodi likhungi main yahan
You are the writer of the story ...sis.....Karte hoon kuch... jaydatar story se hi bhar jata hai pura chapter....aise scenes toh main kitne bhi bhar doon...filler wale...bas kya hai.
sayad lekin tum ne wo siyappa pa ditta...Abhi aur kuch bacha hai
M bhi thoda ghumne chala gya tha isliye dekh nhi paya kuch din sorrySorry for replying late...next update will be updated by tomorrow...you know ke abhi Christmas aur new year ke celebrations chal rhe hai...
Nahi bas good vibes wali or disney ki or time travel movies jyada dekhi to isliye Disney movies ke karan se hamesa achcha karne or insaan m kuch achcha dekhne ki kosis karta hu jo kafi time successful bhi hota h, aur kuch time nhi still ye kosis man ko khus rkhne ke liye achchi hThanks a lot...and why are you so sweet
Bilkul sahi bat h, meetha bol diya, hum bilkul bhi meethe nhi hOoooooyyyyeee.......... ham meethe nahi haii......chori....
Yaar had hai bato ham log ko meetha bol diya....
You too guys...wish you the bestest new year 25.Happy New Year iss thread ke chahne walo or khaskar mistyvixen ma'am aapko aur Mrxr aapko bhi aur sabhi ko...
She's just a Lil bit YandereUpdate 20
Ye Prachi to Karan ko khush karne ka ek bhi mauka nahi chhod rahi hai...
Ravisha bas Karan ka dhayan bhatkana chati thi...kyuki usse pehle ke Chapter mein Karan ke uske taraf lust ka pata chal gaya tha tha...chapter 10 bematlab ka nhi tha... Ravisha is very possesive about Akanhsa. Kyu hai woh uske peeche bahut bada reason hai...aage.Prachi ko pahli baar Ravisha ne Karan ko saunpa to phir Ravisha ne aisa kyon kiya tha wo kya test karna chahti thi???
Because woh Nandani ke kehne kehne pe wahan gyi thi...uske gayab hone ke baad... skeletons fight karte time hi apne asli roop mein hote hai...so she didn't have time... Payal se Ravisha ne yeh secret itne saal tak chupa ke rkha tha. Baaki kisi ko bhi kuch bhi secret ka pata chalta toh woh baksha nhi jata...like Vikram...he was not someone who was already in the skeleton crew.Ye Prachi yadi Nandini ka wafadar hai to to kya use Ravisha ke bare mein kuchh pata nahi chala???
Brother in arms... You mean ke beech mein toot jati hai? Hmmm...dekhte hai... Sonali ke wajah se misunderstandings aate ke nhi...Karan ko apna pahla dost Akshay aur Sonali ke roop mein mila hai, let's see inki dosti kitni strong hoti hai ya phir bich mein hi kisi ret ki dher ke jaisa bikhar jata hai.
Paplu...bas aise hi soch ke rkh diya...hindi ke naam suit nhi kar rhe the dragons ko isliye...abhi toh chota hai...jab bada hoga tab maza aayega aur wings bhi hai uske...*Veleys* hmmmm nice name *how to train your dragon* mein dragon ka name *(Paplu)* tha. It will be interesting ki ye dragon kis had tak Karan ko battle mein help karta hai.
Yess very important for next seasons too...4ron artifacts ke peeche ke bhi kaafi raaz hai...and it can be passed to anyone...so just wait for nextWell *Karan* ne apni Ananta-netra ke karan sipahi ke vaish mein kannal ko pahchan paya aur apne mausi Akansha ke bare mein kuchh had tak soch paya hai ki mausi musibat mein hai ye power Karan ke liye hidden boon ki tarah hai jo Karan ko sahi aur galat ko recognise karne mein help rahi hai.
Thanks a lot for this amazing review Dhal. And a very very happy mew yearWell nice and beautiful update. Well best review ka award aap kisi aur ko de *misty* dear mere se achhe achhe comments Maine aapki story par dekha hai.