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Good condition,..... lekin koi serious le tab naWoh toh shi hai readers ke liye...ab meri liye conditions....
Agar next update ke time se pehle target pura nhi hua toh seedha next update ke time jayega woh update...matlab 3 din late
How's that?
Aage pure tnc padho ...Good condition,..... lekin koi serious le tab na
Itne active viewers h xforum pe but inko jane kyu appreciate krne me dikkat h, or Account create kr lo nhi to koi or email id se jo follow kr rhe vo log km se km...Length main pehle se decide nhi karte... chapter wise pehle soch lete hoon kitna likhna hai... isliye length upar neeche ho skte hai...
Fix kya karna agar time pe target pura honge...toh week mein 2 aa jayenge nhi toh next wed/sun ko hi jayega iska matlab ek toh min aayega hi week mein. Log pata hai socthe hai chalo aaj nhi toh kal aa jayega bas yhi baat hai...
Bahut saare toh bina like kiye nikal lete hai...starting ke chapters mein bahut saaree 50 touch karne wale hai...aur yahan dekho ...bas isliye yeh sab karna pad rha hai
I wouldn't comment anything about other stories but mere saare jo bhi kuch likhte hoon...woh sab majorly english novels se seekha hai...yahan maine mushkil hi koi story puri padhi ho...Ek series or h "chirharan" karke usko bhi follow kar rha hu vha 2 din ke andar me 60 likes kar dete h yha pta nhi kyu nhi krte.
Baki uski bhi story achchi h, aapki bhi uhni hi shandar h but usko dekhke I believe 60 likes tk aaram se pahuch skte h.
Itne active viewers h xforum pe but inko jane kyu appreciate krne me dikkat h, or Account create kr lo nhi to koi or email id se jo follow kr rhe vo log km se km...
Length main pehle se decide nhi karte... chapter wise pehle soch lete hoon kitna likhna hai... isliye length upar neeche ho skte hai...
You know what,tum story likhti raho aur apni conditions se update do...Fix kya karna agar time pe target pura honge...toh week mein 2 aa jayenge nhi toh next wed/sun ko hi jayega iska matlab ek toh min aayega hi week mein. Log pata hai socthe hai chalo aaj nhi toh kal aa jayega bas yhi baat hai...
Ye ish liye hai kyon ki log sirf sex pe focus karte hai unko adventure,aur fantasy se koi matlab nahi hai .....Bahut saare toh bina like kiye nikal lete hai...starting ke chapters mein bahut saaree 50 touch karne wale hai...aur yahan dekho ...bas isliye yeh sab karna pad rha hai
Toh bhai wo ish liye hai ki wo jo writer hai ush ne pahle bhi kai storys likhi hai ,intact main ne bhi ek story padhi thi ushki radha kar ke kuch thi wo bhi bahen-bhai ki Wajah se aur aur logo ko sex chahiye ,unkk jyada dimag nahi Lagana chahte hai ishliye hi romance ki storys bahut kam hai yanha pe....Ek series or h "chirharan" karke usko bhi follow kar rha hu vha 2 din ke andar me 60 likes kar dete h yha pta nhi kyu nhi krte.
Baki uski bhi story achchi h, aapki bhi uhni hi shandar h but usko dekhke I believe 60 likes tk aaram se pahuch skte h.
Itne active viewers h xforum pe but inko jane kyu appreciate krne me dikkat h, or Account create kr lo nhi to koi or email id se jo follow kr rhe vo log km se km...
Nhi...do days fix hai toh inko bhi feel hoga ke hamare wajah se late ho rha hai
You know what,tum story likhti raho aur apni conditions se update do...
Aur ayse agar ek week me ek update ki baat karogi na toh sabhi soch lenge like karne se kya hoga wayse bhi 1 week me update aa hi Jayga... ish se Lose tumhara hi hai ....
Xxx is necessary but har update mein toh main bhi nhi padh skte...agar story 80 percent hai toh xxx 20 percent hona chaiye...aur kise bhi story ke comments hi bata dete hai kaise story hai...agar kise mein bas xxx ke baat ho rhe hai bolna...aur bahut saaree ache story hai lekin dekhna comments mein unke koi xxx ke baare mein baat nhi karta (ya bahut kam karte hai) because they have something even more interesting about that...Ye ish liye hai kyon ki log sirf sex pe focus karte hai unko adventure,aur fantasy se koi matlab nahi hai .....
Ho sake to yahan thread pe kisi aur author ke baare mein comments karne se bacho max...kya karna hai....I know my readers are one of the best here...comment section hi dekh lenaToh bhai wo ish liye hai ki wo jo writer hai ush ne pahle bhi kai storys likhi hai ,intact main ne bhi ek story padhi thi ushki radha kar ke kuch thi wo bhi bahen-bhai ki Wajah se aur aur logo ko sex chahiye ,unkk jyada dimag nahi Lagana chahte hai ishliye hi romance ki storys bahut kam hai yanha pe....
Dekhte hai kya bolti publicNhi...do days fix hai toh inko bhi feel hoga ke hamare wajah se late ho rha hai
4-5 update is good for 1 xxx scenes, aur ek story hai xforum ki maybe exclusive hai meri bahen ek stripper ush story me sirf 3 se 4 scenes hai sirf but story hit hai .....Xxx is necessary but har update mein toh main bhi nhi padh skte...agar story 80 percent hai toh xxx 20 percent hona chaiye...aur kise bhi story ke comments hi bata dete hai kaise story hai...agar kise mein bas xxx ke baat ho rhe hai bolna...aur bahut saaree ache story hai lekin dekhna comments mein unke koi xxx ke baare mein baat nhi karta (ya bahut kam karte hai) because they have something even more interesting about that...
I know fantasy aur adventures storys without xxx ke likhi jaa sakti hai ....Auron ke chordo mere story aise hai ke xxx nikal ke bhi likhe jaa skti hai...xxx is an add-on...not a component in it.
ok sister ..... aur mera toh 1st & last seen hi ye story hai .... kaho toh 5-6 account banau aur har account se alag alag tarah ki comment aur review deta raha.....Ho sake to yahan thread pe kisi aur author ke baare mein comments karne se bacho max...kya karna hai....I know my readers are one of the best here...comment section hi dekh lena
Thanks! Yeah I understand...you didn't want any controversy...but you know all kind of people are here ...some might take that offensively...I'm not comparing with anyone, I'm just saying that 35 likes are doable target, but due to sheer negligence of readers story pace is slowing down.
Which shouldn't be case. I don't want to comment about other stories and writers, It was used as reference nothing else.
Don't make any issue regarding that if it's a disputable comment I can edit that comment to remove the concerned line.
Edited my comment .
Now it shouldn't be a problem.