Fantasy 𝘾𝙧𝙚𝙖𝙩𝙞𝙤𝙣

Lite_end · Oct 22, 2024

Guys yeh story mere dwara likhi hui pehli story hai and isme agar thodi galti ho to usse please ignore kar dena...

Iska update jld hi aayega...

And ees story mai love, adventure, action, fight, sab kuch hoga bas intezaar jld hi es story ke update ke sath milenge...

... INDEX...

Update	Name	Update	Name
Update-001	Majboori	Update-002	Trip
Update-003	Stealth	Update-004	Sense and Ant Strength
Update-005	Psycho Human Kidnapping Case	Update-006	Tardigrades DNA
Update-007	Rashte alag manzil ek	Update-008	Real Reason For Making Mutated Human
Update-009	Magic Core, Magic Path and Stars	Update-010	Temporary Teacher
Update-011	Secret About Ring	Update-012	White Black Tablet
Update-013	____	Update-014	____
Update-015	____	Update-016	____

... Characters...

S.
No.
Name
Age
Role
1>
Raj
18
Hero
2>
Sumita
43
Hero Mother
3>
Aakash
24
Hero Bhai
4>
Payal
23
Hero Bhabhi
(Aakash Wife)
5>
Aarohi
22
Hero 1st Sister
6>
Piya
20
Hero 2nd Sister
7>
Veer
18
Hero Best
Friend
8>
Dr. Vijay
39
Sumita ka
muh bola bhai
9>
Mayur
18
School Bully
10>
Aisha
31
Hero Class
teacher
11>
Subham
43
Delhi
Commissioner
12>
Anjali
23
Delhi IPS
13>
Soniya
18
Raj Ki Class
ki 3rd Topper
14>
Ayush
19
___
15>
Prerit
20
___
16>
Varun
20
___
17>
Tina
19
___
18>
Naina
20
___
19>
Mahendra
Gupta
55
____
20>
Mohan
Gupta
26
___
21>
Sanjana
__
Devpur ki teen
family mai se
ek ke head ki beti
22>
Ashutosh
43
White Rock Academy
Librarian
23>
24>
25>
26>

...Hero powers...

S.
No.
Ability
Rank
Color
1>
Stealth
SSS+
Blue
2>
_______
____
Golden
3>
Sense
F
Light Red
4>
Ant Strength
F
Light Red
5>
Regeneration
F
Light Red
6>
Dog Smell
F
Light Red
7>
Costume Change
F
Light Red
8>
S.
No.
Magic
Grade
Magic Core
Color
1>
Electric
0

2>
Fire
0

3>
Wind
0

4>
Water
0

5>
Ice
0

6>
Grass
0

7>
Earth
0

~OTHER CHARACTER POWER~

Name
Magic
Ability
Rank
Naina
Electric(6)
Fire(5)
Grass(4)
Ice(2)
Diamond-
Attack karna
and Marna
SSS
Ayush
Fire (5)
Wind(3)
Ice(2)
Illusion
S
Prerit
Ice(5)
Wind(4)
Water(3)
Ice Punch
S
Varun
Wind(4)
Water(3)
Space(1)
Flying
A
Tina
Grass(4)
Earth(3)
Healing
B
Sanjana
Wind(0)
Lock
__
Veer
None
Ant Strength
Regeneration
Dog Smell
F
F
F

Sonker · Oct 22, 2024

Bhai story mai kuch magic elements dalo or Maa pe story likho please

Sonker · Oct 22, 2024

Maa ,nani ,mosi or dadi jeso pe likho

Sonker · Oct 22, 2024

Or haa papa ko jarur rak na story mai koy ki papa ke same he to chod na hai sab ko

mistyvixen · Oct 22, 2024

Sounds interesting...try to start with family intro

good luck!

Lite_end · Oct 22, 2024

Sonker said:
Bhai story mai kuch magic elements dalo or Maa pe story likho please

Sonker said:
Maa ,nani ,mosi or dadi jeso pe likho

Sonker said:
Or haa papa ko jarur rak na story mai koy ki papa ke same he to chod na hai sab ko

Bro meri 1st story hai apne aap se likh raha hu..

mistyvixen said:
Sounds interesting...try to start with family intro good luck!

Thanks..

Lite_end · Oct 22, 2024

Update-01

Majboori...

6 September 2006...(EARTH)

Aaj bahut tez baarish ho rahi thi aur esa lag raha tha jese aaj bahut bada tufaan aane wala hai lekin kisi ko kuch nahi pata tha aakhir yeh sab ho kya ho raha hai..

Wahi dusri taraf jameen se lagbhag 500 se 600 km andar 2 insaan khade hue the un dono ki hi haalat bahut zada acchi nahi thi aur un dono ka pehnava bhi bahut alag tha..

Woh do insaan jinme se ek dikhne mai 30 se 34 saal ka ladka tha dikhne mai wahi woh ladki ki umar bhi ussi ke aas pass lag rahi thi..

Ladka - "Hume jld se jld isse yaha par chhod kar wapas jana hoga.."

Jese hi usne yeh kaha uske muh se thoda khoon nikalne laga shyd woh abhi kisi ladaai se yaha aaya tha..

Aur woh uske shareer pe mojuud ghavo se pata bhi chal raha tha..

Wahi us ladki ke hath mai ek 1 ya 2 hafte ka baccha tha jiske chehre bahut zada khubsurat aur pyara lag raha tha lekin jis ladki ne usse pakda hua tha uski bhi haalat us ladke jese hi thi..

Ladki - "aap plz isse jldi kijiye mai aur der yaha nahi ruk sakti aur yeh konsi jagah hai hum isse waha bhi rakh to sakte the na fir aap sab ne isse kisi aur duniya mai rakhne ke baare mai kyu socha...?" us ladki ke chehre aur hatho pe bhi khoon laga hua tha lekin usne apne bacche ko apne seene se lagaya hua tha..

Ladka us ladki ki taraf dekhta hai aur usse itna dara hua dekhkar uske dil mai bhi dard bhad..

Ladka -"_________ tum bhi iska jawaab janti ho agar woh saare hisse ek ho jate to hamaari puri duniya tabah wahi tabahi fir se jehlegi aur hum sabne har ek hissa ko ek alag duniya mai rakha hai aur 3 hisse apni duniya mai lekin yeh hissa bahut zada powerful hai kyuki.."

Woh aage kuch bol pata usse pehle hi un dono ko ek bhadi matra mai ek energy mehsoos hoti hai es energy ko mehsoos karte hi ladki ki aankhon mai aansu aa jate hai woh apne bacche ko aur tightly pakad leti hai..

Ladka -"unhe es jagah ke baare mai kese pata chala hume jld hi yeh karna hoga..." yeh kehte hue us ladke ke chehre pe dard aur uski aankhon mai aansu aa gaye the..

Ladki yeh sun kar uske aansu aur tezi se behne lagte hai..

Ladki -"Koi aur rasta hoga na hamaare bacche ko yaha mai nahi chhor sakti.."

Yeh kehte hue bhi uski aankhon se aansu pani ki tarah beh reh the aur woh baccha shyd bahut gehri neend mai tha ya kuch aur kyuki woh esa lag raha tha jese behosh ho..

Ladka -"Agar hume sabki jaan bachani hai to hume yeh karna hi hoga aur jldi hi karna hoga woh sab agar yaha aa gaye to hum hum ek sath itno se ladne ki condition mai nahi rahenge.. " usse bhi yeh nahi karna tha lekin uske pass aur koi rasta nahi tha usse apni duniya ko bachane ke liye apne bete ko yahi issi duniya mai chhodna tha..

Yeh kehte hue woh apne hatho mai thami hui hui ek black ring ko dekhta hai aur ek khoon ki drop jisme thoda sa golden color ke particles the us ring pe daal deta hai jisse woh ring 5 ya 6 min tak chamakne lagti hai..

Jese hi woh blood drop us ring se jud jati hai uska thoda effect us bacche pe bhi hota hai aur uska sundar aur pyara chehre thoda muljha jata hai lekin woh abhi tak apni behoshi mai hi tha..

Ladki jese hi yeh dekhti hai uski aankhon se aansu pani ki tarah behne lagte hai..

Ladka aage badh kar ladki ko aur apne bete ko tightly hug kar leta hai..

Ladka -"Es jung mai croro log maare gaye hai sabki zindagi khtm hui hai ab puri duniya ko bachane ke liye hume apne bacche ko yahi chhodna hoga.." yeh bolte hue uski awaaz kat rahi thi esa lag raha tha jese woh yeh nahi bolna chahta lekin yeh ek majboori thi uski..

Ladki kuch nahi bolti aur us ladke ko aur tightly hug kar leti hai dono ko hi woh energy aur zada feel hone lagti hai..

Ladka -"hum-hume jld hi kahi aur jana hoga woh log es ring ko nahi le payenge ring ke ass pass ka 100m ka radius ab seal ho gya hai.. "

Ladki kuch nahi bolti aur apne bacche ko abhi tak apne seene se lagaye hue thi shyd woh bas ab apne bacche ke sath jitna ho sake utna time bitana chahti thi..

Woh dono jane se pehle ek last baar us ring ko dekhte hai jiske charo taraf us blood drop ki wajah se ek barrier ban gya tha lekin us ladke ke hath mai abhi bhi us jese blood ki 10 drops aur thi..

Ladka us ladki ka hath pakadta hai aur waha se ek dusri jagah teleport ho jata hai..

Un dono ke waha se jane ke thodi der baad hi jameen ke us hisse ke upar se patthar tutne ki awaaz aane lagti hai..

Jese hi woh awaaz kam hoti hai koi chij bahut tez speed mai jameen pe aakr girti hai aur girti hi rehta hai..

Woh sabhi skeletons the aur un sab ki heights kisi giraf jitni thi aur woh bhi hazaaron ki gintiyon mai aur puri ki puri woh gufa skeleton se bhad chuki thi..

(Abhi ke liye mai skeletons ko S1 ya S2 karke denotes karunga..)

Jese hi sab logo ki nazar us ring pe padti hai sab apne ghutno pe aakr us ring ke samne rispect show karte hai..

Aur respect show karne ke baad ek skeleton aage jake jo shyd en sabhi skeletons ka leader tha woh us ring ko lene ke liye aage badhta hai.

Lekin woh aage badh pata usse pehle hi woh us barrier ko touch kar leta hai jiski wajah se uska shareer ek second mai hi dhul ban jata hai us bechaare ko to kuch smjhne aur bolna ka tak samay nahi mila..

Yeh dekh kar sabhi skeletons ek kadam piche hat jate hai..

S1 - "yeh konsa barrier hai itna powerful jo ek Emperor rank me skeleton ko bhi ese dhul bana de?"

Kisi bhi skeleton ke pass iska jawaab nahi tha...

S2 - "hum ring ke bina agar apni duniya mai gaye to.. "

Jese hi yeh sab sunte hai chhup ho jate hai..

S1 -"Yeh magic bhi hum bas abhi hi dhan se use kar sakte the ab hume bhi nahi pata humne agar yeh magic firse kara to hum kaha teleport honge?"

S2 -"us magic ka asar thodi der mai khtm ho jayega hume jld hi kuch karna hoga?"

Un sabhi skeletons ki skins ya kuch nahi tha, tha to bas ek haddi ka dhancha aur yaha mojuud har ek skeletons kisi shehar ko 1 ya 2 din mai khtm rakhne ki taaqat rakhta hai aur us Emperor rank ka leader uska to chhod hi do woh akele 25% duniya ki population ko ek 1 din ke andar khtm kar sakta tha khtm kar sakta tha lekin woh aaj khud dhul ban kar hawa mai ghul gya..

S1 -"jo yaha ring rakhne aaye honge hume unhe dhundna chaiye.. "

S2 -"pehel hi aadhe se zada skeletons unhe pakadne ke liye chale gaye hai lekin woh dono log ____ aur _____ hai.."

Jese hi har ek skeleton un dono ka naam sunta hai unki haddiyon tak mai thodi kanpan hone lagti hai...

S1 -"abhi tak hamaare kitne saathi mare gaye hai?" un dono ke baare mai pata chalne ke baad sabhi ko yeh to pata tha ki woh log jeet nahi rahe honge..

S1 aage apni baat continue karta hai.

S1 -"hume apne sath aur powerful demons ko lekar aana chaiye tha.. "

Koi kuch nahi bolta iske upar..

Wahi dusri taraf us ladka ki haalat pehle se zada kharab ho rai thi aur ab en skeletons se ladne ki wajah se woh aur zada mushkil mai tha usse apni patni aur apne bacche ki jaan bachani thi jiske liye usse en sabhi skeletons ko maarna padta lekin ek jung se ladne ke baad ab uske andar itni taaqat nahi bachi thi aur woh ab mentally and physically dono tarah se weak ho chuka tha physically to aap sabhi ko pata chal hi gya hoga aur mentally isliye kyuki woh apni life ka sabsa bada decision lene wala tha jo shyd majboori nahi hoti to woh kabhi nahi leta..

Wahi woh ladki ek jungle ke pass thi aur yeh ladaai ek jungle ke andar chal rahi thi andhere aur tufaan hone ki wajha se dhan se kuch dikhai nahi de raha tha lekin woh ladki apne bacche ko apne seene se lagate hue bhagti hai taaki woh apne bacche ko koi surakshit jagha chhod sake bhagne ki wajah se paani mai uske paau bahut tez awaaz kar rahe the jo wou skeletons bhi sense kar lete hai aur uske piche aane lagte hai..

Chhhhap.. chhhhap ki awaaz aa rahi thi jab woh pani mai bhag rahi thi..

Baarish padne ke baad bhi woh bacche apni nind se nahi jag raha tha aur ab woh thoda kamzor bhi dikh raha tha..

Ladki us bacche ko ek ped ke niche rakh deti hai aur uske pass hi gaanv se connect ho rahi ek sadak bhi thi ..

Ladki -" beta plz apni maa ka maaf kar do mai ek esi maa hu jo apne bacche ko hi apne aap se duur kar rahi hu plz beta mujhe maar kar de.. "

Woh ladki ghutno ke bal beth kar rote hue yeh sab keh rahi rhi aur uska hath apne bete ke chote aur pyare chehre ke gaalo ko thame hua the...

Aur woh baccha bhi behoshi mai hone ke baavjood apne chhote hatho ko apni maa ke hath pe rakh deta hai..

Shyd woh bhi apni maa aur pita se duur nahi hona chahta tha..

Yeh dekh kar us ladki ke chehre pe ek muskan to aati hai lekin woh muskan jld hi mayusi mai badal jati hai aur woh shyd aakhiri baar apne bacche ke pure chehre ko chumne lagti hai gaalo ko uske chhote aur mulaayam hatho ko...

Us ladki ko apne mind mai ek awaaz sunai deti hai yeh awaaz kisi aur ki nahi ussi ladke ki thi..

Ladka -"jld hi hume yaha se chalna hoga agar inhe hamaara baccha dikh gya to woh isse khtm kare bina yaha se nahi jayenge.. " yeh kehkar woh thodi der rukta aur kehta hai.. " mai aakhiri baar bhi apne bacche se nahi mil saka.... " woh yeh apne man mai keh raha th aur sath mai apni golden sword se ek ke baar ek skeletons ko giraye ja raha tha..

Ladki -"hamaari kismat mai hi apne bete ka sath nahi hai.. "yeh kehte hue woh apne bacche ke chehre pe hath pher rahi thi kabhi usse kuch abhaas hota hai aur woh ek second se bhi kam samar mai apni storage ring se ek sword nikal kar ek skeleton ke aar paar kar diya tha..

Ladke ko jese hi yeh smjh aata ahi woh turant kehta hai..

Ladka -"tumhe jld se jld waha se nikalna hoga aur bhi skeletons waha aate hi honge aur portal bhi jld ji close ho jayega.."

Jese hi ladka yeh kehte hai uske aur us lakdi ke sar ke upar ek chota s kaala badal sa kuch banne lagta hai jiski speed thodi kam thi lekin shyd 4 ya 5 min mai woh kaala badal ek insaan ko jane laayak ho jata..

Ladki -"mai apne bete ko yaha chhod kar kahi nahi ja - woh apni baat puri kar pati usse aur skeletons hona ka sense hone lagta hai..

Ladka -"______ jldi se mere pass aao abhi tum bahut zada weak ho akele itne skeletons se nahi lad paogi.. "

*slash* *slash* woh ladki un dono skeletons ko apni blue sword se ek ek slash se maar deti hai lekin fir woh apni talwaar ko jameen pe tika kar tez tez saanse lene lagti hai aur kab woh thodi normal hoti hai to rote hue kehti hai..

Ladki -"ma..mai..." woh aage kuch nahi bol pati ek nazar apne bacche ko dekhti hai jo abhi bhi gehri neend mai soya hua tha aur bahut masoom lag raha tha aur woh skeletons jinhe abhi us ladki ne maare the dhul ban kar gayab ho jate hai aur wah kuch saman pada hua tha ab jo agar es duniya mai kahi nahi milta tha lekin ladki us saman ko yaha nahi chhod sakti thi isliye woh usse touch karke apni storage ring mai rakh leti hai aur jaha se yaha aayi thi waps apne pati ki taraf jane lagti hai jate hue uske dil mai dard ho raha tha aakhir ek maa apne bacche ko akela kese chhod sakti thi lekin woh bhi kismat ke hatho majboor thi..

18 saal baad (23 October 2024)...

"Nahiiiiiiiiiiiiii..... "

Ek ladka ek bhayank sapna dekh kar apni neend se uthh jata hai jese hi woh uthta hai to uske side mai leti hui ladki bhi uski awaaz sunkar turant uth jati hai..

Ladki -"Raj aap thik to hai na?" yeh kehkar woh us ladke jiska naam Raj tha uska chehre ko apne seene se laga leti hai....

Ladki -"aapne aaj firse wahi sapna dekha jo bachpan se dekh rahe ho aap?"

Raj abhi bhi dara hua tha aur woh apne aap ko normal karne ki koshish kar raha tha aur jab woh thoda normal hota hai to woh aas pass dekhta hai to uske bed ke ass pass red roses ki petals bacchi gayi thi aur pura room candels aur red roses se decorated tha aur uske bed bhi phulo se sazaya gya tha..

Aur ek bahut khubsurat aur pyaari ladki ne usse apni baaho mai pakda hua tha..

Raj ko jese hi yeh ehsaas hota hai woh usse duur ho jata hai..

Raj - "dii please mujhse duur rahiye.. "

Dii matlab Raj abhi apni behen ke sath ek hi room mai suhaagraat mana raha tha..

Woh ladki jiska naam Naina tha usse bahut accha lag raha tha Raj ko apni baaho mai paa kar lekin jhatke se alag hone se woh Raj ko kha jane wali nazaro sed dekh rahi thi lekin fir bhi apne aap ko thoda control karke woh Raj ke chehre pe apna hath rakh kar puchti hai..

Naina -"kya aaj bhi tumhe wahi sapna aaya? jo har din aata tha?"

Raj kuch nahi bolta aur apni nazarein nichi kar leta hai isliye nahi ki woh jawaab nahi dena chahta tha balki isliye kyuki woh uski dii abhi ek silky nighty mai uske pass bethi hui thi aur thoda Raj ke gaal pe hath rakhne ki wajah se woh thodi jhuki hui thi jiski wajah se uska gehra cleavage reveal ho raha tha...

Raj jhatke se waha se uth jata hai aur hadbate hue kehta hai..

Raj -" di.. dii ma.. mai washroom se aata hu.. " yeh kehkar woh apne Washroom ki taraf bhag jata hai wahi Naina apne pati ko ese baccho ki tarah harkat karta dekh uske chehre pe ek pyaari si muskan aa jati hai aur woh wahi bethi apne bhai jo ab uska pati tha uska intezaar karne lagti hai..

Raj hadbate hue bathroom mai aata hai aur washbasin ke samne aakr apna muh baar baar dhone lagta hai taaki agar yeh koi sapna hai to wou es sapne se jldi se jldi uth jaye..

Lekin yeh koi sapna nahi tha usne lagbhag 10 ya 15 baar apne chehre ko pani se dhoya tha ab woh apne chehre ko mirror mai dekhne lagta hai ek 18 se 19 saal ka ladka jiski aankhen blue thi aur chehre bahut dikhne mai bahut zada handsome height 6 foot thi..

Muh dhone ki wajah se abhi woh thoda jhuka hua tha jisse uski shirt bhi thodi kash gayi thi matlab acchi khasi body bhi thi lekin ek chij uske chehre pe acchi nahi lag rahi thi thoda gussa tha aur uska chehre thoda muljhaya hua sa lag raha tha..

Kyuki aaj uski shadi hui thi woh bhi apni diiii se jo usse 2 saal badi thi arre wahi Naina, kabhi uski nazar apne hath mai pehni hui us black ring pe padti hai jisne uski puri zindagi badal ke rakh di thi...

Ab yeh jaana hai ki shadi aur yeh ring hero ki zindagi mai kese aaye to uske liye hum sabko kuch mahine piche jana hoga zada nahi bas 2 mahine piche...And ees story mai love, adventure, action, fight, sab kuch hoga bas intezaar jld hi es story ke update ke sath milenge..

Back in 20 September 2024...

Continue-

[Note : Ab shadi kese hui aur ring kese mili uske liye to aage ke updates padhne honge and plz batana kesa laga and 1st update ha agar koi mistake ho to plzz ignore kar dena...]

Lite_end · Oct 22, 2024

Sonker said:
Or haa papa ko jarur rak na story mai koy ki papa ke same he to chod na hai sab ko

Bro sorry yeh meri first story hai and abhi ke liye mai isme esa kuch add nahi karna chahta and incest hoga lekin dadi

really kuch zada age difference nahi aa jayega

mistyvixen · Oct 22, 2024

Lite_end said:
Update-01
Majboori...

6 September 2006...(EARTH)

Aaj bahut tez baarish ho rahi thi aur esa lag raha tha jese aaj bahut bada tufaan aane wala hai lekin kisi ko kuch nahi pata tha aakhir yeh sab ho kya ho raha hai..

Wahi dusri taraf jameen se lagbhag 500 se 600 km andar 2 insaan khade hue the un dono ki hi haalat bahut zada acchi nahi thi aur un dono ka pehnava bhi bahut alag tha..

Woh do insaan jinme se ek dikhne mai 30 se 34 saal ka ladka tha dikhne mai wahi woh ladki ki umar bhi ussi ke aas pass lag rahi thi..

Ladka - "Hume jld se jld isse yaha par chhod kar wapas jana hoga.."

Jese hi usne yeh kaha uske muh se thoda khoon nikalne laga shyd woh abhi kisi ladaai se yaha aaya tha..

Aur woh uske shareer pe mojuud ghavo se pata bhi chal raha tha..

Wahi us ladki ke hath mai ek 1 ya 2 hafte ka baccha tha jiske chehre bahut zada khubsurat aur pyara lag raha tha lekin jis ladki ne usse pakda hua tha uski bhi haalat us ladke jese hi thi..

Ladki - "aap plz isse jldi kijiye mai aur der yaha nahi ruk sakti aur yeh konsi jagah hai hum isse waha bhi rakh to sakte the na fir aap sab ne isse kisi aur duniya mai rakhne ke baare mai kyu socha...?" us ladki ke chehre aur hatho pe bhi khoon laga hua tha lekin usne apne bacche ko apne seene se lagaya hua tha..

Ladka us ladki ki taraf dekhta hai aur usse itna dara hua dekhkar uske dil mai bhi dard bhad..

Ladka -"_________ tum bhi iska jawaab janti ho agar woh saare hisse ek ho jate to hamaari puri duniya tabah wahi tabahi fir se jehlegi aur hum sabne har ek hissa ko ek alag duniya mai rakha hai aur 3 hisse apni duniya mai lekin yeh hissa bahut zada powerful hai kyuki.."

Woh aage kuch bol pata usse pehle hi un dono ko ek bhadi matra mai ek energy mehsoos hoti hai es energy ko mehsoos karte hi ladki ki aankhon mai aansu aa jate hai woh apne bacche ko aur tightly pakad leti hai..

Ladka -"unhe es jagah ke baare mai kese pata chala hume jld hi yeh karna hoga..." yeh kehte hue us ladke ke chehre pe dard aur uski aankhon mai aansu aa gaye the..

Ladki yeh sun kar uske aansu aur tezi se behne lagte hai..

Ladki -"Koi aur rasta hoga na hamaare bacche ko yaha mai nahi chhor sakti.."

Yeh kehte hue bhi uski aankhon se aansu pani ki tarah beh reh the aur woh baccha shyd bahut gehri neend mai tha ya kuch aur kyuki woh esa lag raha tha jese behosh ho..

Ladka -"Agar hume sabki jaan bachani hai to hume yeh karna hi hoga aur jldi hi karna hoga woh sab agar yaha aa gaye to hum hum ek sath itno se ladne ki condition mai nahi rahenge.. " usse bhi yeh nahi karna tha lekin uske pass aur koi rasta nahi tha usse apni duniya ko bachane ke liye apne bete ko yahi issi duniya mai chhodna tha..

Yeh kehte hue woh apne hatho mai thami hui hui ek black ring ko dekhta hai aur ek khoon ki drop jisme thoda sa golden color ke particles the us ring pe daal deta hai jisse woh ring 5 ya 6 min tak chamakne lagti hai..

Jese hi woh blood drop us ring se jud jati hai uska thoda effect us bacche pe bhi hota hai aur uska sundar aur pyara chehre thoda muljha jata hai lekin woh abhi tak apni behoshi mai hi tha..

Ladki jese hi yeh dekhti hai uski aankhon se aansu pani ki tarah behne lagte hai..

Ladka aage badh kar ladki ko aur apne bete ko tightly hug kar leta hai..

Ladka -"Es jung mai croro log maare gaye hai sabki zindagi khtm hui hai ab puri duniya ko bachane ke liye hume apne bacche ko yahi chhodna hoga.." yeh bolte hue uski awaaz kat rahi thi esa lag raha tha jese woh yeh nahi bolna chahta lekin yeh ek majboori thi uski..

Ladki kuch nahi bolti aur us ladke ko aur tightly hug kar leti hai dono ko hi woh energy aur zada feel hone lagti hai..

Ladka -"hum-hume jld hi kahi aur jana hoga woh log es ring ko nahi le payenge ring ke ass pass ka 100m ka radius ab seal ho gya hai.. "

Ladki kuch nahi bolti aur apne bacche ko abhi tak apne seene se lagaye hue thi shyd woh bas ab apne bacche ke sath jitna ho sake utna time bitana chahti thi..

Woh dono jane se pehle ek last baar us ring ko dekhte hai jiske charo taraf us blood drop ki wajah se ek barrier ban gya tha lekin us ladke ke hath mai abhi bhi us jese blood ki 10 drops aur thi..

Ladka us ladki ka hath pakadta hai aur waha se ek dusri jagah teleport ho jata hai..

Un dono ke waha se jane ke thodi der baad hi jameen ke us hisse ke upar se patthar tutne ki awaaz aane lagti hai..

Jese hi woh awaaz kam hoti hai koi chij bahut tez speed mai jameen pe aakr girti hai aur girti hi rehta hai..

Woh sabhi skeletons the aur un sab ki heights kisi giraf jitni thi aur woh bhi hazaaron ki gintiyon mai aur puri ki puri woh gufa skeleton se bhad chuki thi..

(Abhi ke liye mai skeletons ko S1 ya S2 karke denotes karunga..)

Jese hi sab logo ki nazar us ring pe padti hai sab apne ghutno pe aakr us ring ke samne rispect show karte hai..

Aur respect show karne ke baad ek skeleton aage jake jo shyd en sabhi skeletons ka leader tha woh us ring ko lene ke liye aage badhta hai.

Lekin woh aage badh pata usse pehle hi woh us barrier ko touch kar leta hai jiski wajah se uska shareer ek second mai hi dhul ban jata hai us bechaare ko to kuch smjhne aur bolna ka tak samay nahi mila..

Yeh dekh kar sabhi skeletons ek kadam piche hat jate hai..

S1 - "yeh konsa barrier hai itna powerful jo ek Emperor rank me skeleton ko bhi ese dhul bana de?"

Kisi bhi skeleton ke pass iska jawaab nahi tha...

S2 - "hum ring ke bina agar apni duniya mai gaye to.. "

Jese hi yeh sab sunte hai chhup ho jate hai..

S1 -"Yeh magic bhi hum bas abhi hi dhan se use kar sakte the ab hume bhi nahi pata humne agar yeh magic firse kara to hum kaha teleport honge?"

S2 -"us magic ka asar thodi der mai khtm ho jayega hume jld hi kuch karna hoga?"

Un sabhi skeletons ki skins ya kuch nahi tha, tha to bas ek haddi ka dhancha aur yaha mojuud har ek skeletons kisi shehar ko 1 ya 2 din mai khtm rakhne ki taaqat rakhta hai aur us Emperor rank ka leader uska to chhod hi do woh akele 25% duniya ki population ko ek 1 din ke andar khtm kar sakta tha khtm kar sakta tha lekin woh aaj khud dhul ban kar hawa mai ghul gya..

S1 -"jo yaha ring rakhne aaye honge hume unhe dhundna chaiye.. "

S2 -"pehel hi aadhe se zada skeletons unhe pakadne ke liye chale gaye hai lekin woh dono log ____ aur _____ hai.."

Jese hi har ek skeleton un dono ka naam sunta hai unki haddiyon tak mai thodi kanpan hone lagti hai...

S1 -"abhi tak hamaare kitne saathi mare gaye hai?" un dono ke baare mai pata chalne ke baad sabhi ko yeh to pata tha ki woh log jeet nahi rahe honge..

S1 aage apni baat continue karta hai.

S1 -"hume apne sath aur powerful demons ko lekar aana chaiye tha.. "

Koi kuch nahi bolta iske upar..

Wahi dusri taraf us ladka ki haalat pehle se zada kharab ho rai thi aur ab en skeletons se ladne ki wajah se woh aur zada mushkil mai tha usse apni patni aur apne bacche ki jaan bachani thi jiske liye usse en sabhi skeletons ko maarna padta lekin ek jung se ladne ke baad ab uske andar itni taaqat nahi bachi thi aur woh ab mentally and physically dono tarah se weak ho chuka tha physically to aap sabhi ko pata chal hi gya hoga aur mentally isliye kyuki woh apni life ka sabsa bada decision lene wala tha jo shyd majboori nahi hoti to woh kabhi nahi leta..

Wahi woh ladki ek jungle ke pass thi aur yeh ladaai ek jungle ke andar chal rahi thi andhere aur tufaan hone ki wajha se dhan se kuch dikhai nahi de raha tha lekin woh ladki apne bacche ko apne seene se lagate hue bhagti hai taaki woh apne bacche ko koi surakshit jagha chhod sake bhagne ki wajah se paani mai uske paau bahut tez awaaz kar rahe the jo wou skeletons bhi sense kar lete hai aur uske piche aane lagte hai..

Chhhhap.. chhhhap ki awaaz aa rahi thi jab woh pani mai bhag rahi thi..

Baarish padne ke baad bhi woh bacche apni nind se nahi jag raha tha aur ab woh thoda kamzor bhi dikh raha tha..

Ladki us bacche ko ek ped ke niche rakh deti hai aur uske pass hi gaanv se connect ho rahi ek sadak bhi thi ..

Ladki -" beta plz apni maa ka maaf kar do mai ek esi maa hu jo apne bacche ko hi apne aap se duur kar rahi hu plz beta mujhe maar kar de.. "

Woh ladki ghutno ke bal beth kar rote hue yeh sab keh rahi rhi aur uska hath apne bete ke chote aur pyare chehre ke gaalo ko thame hua the...

Aur woh baccha bhi behoshi mai hone ke baavjood apne chhote hatho ko apni maa ke hath pe rakh deta hai..

Shyd woh bhi apni maa aur pita se duur nahi hona chahta tha..

Yeh dekh kar us ladki ke chehre pe ek muskan to aati hai lekin woh muskan jld hi mayusi mai badal jati hai aur woh shyd aakhiri baar apne bacche ke pure chehre ko chumne lagti hai gaalo ko uske chhote aur mulaayam hatho ko...

Us ladki ko apne mind mai ek awaaz sunai deti hai yeh awaaz kisi aur ki nahi ussi ladke ki thi..

Ladka -"jld hi hume yaha se chalna hoga agar inhe hamaara baccha dikh gya to woh isse khtm kare bina yaha se nahi jayenge.. " yeh kehkar woh thodi der rukta aur kehta hai.. " mai aakhiri baar bhi apne bacche se nahi mil saka.... " woh yeh apne man mai keh raha th aur sath mai apni golden sword se ek ke baar ek skeletons ko giraye ja raha tha..

Ladki -"hamaari kismat mai hi apne bete ka sath nahi hai.. "yeh kehte hue woh apne bacche ke chehre pe hath pher rahi thi kabhi usse kuch abhaas hota hai aur woh ek second se bhi kam samar mai apni storage ring se ek sword nikal kar ek skeleton ke aar paar kar diya tha..

Ladke ko jese hi yeh smjh aata ahi woh turant kehta hai..

Ladka -"tumhe jld se jld waha se nikalna hoga aur bhi skeletons waha aate hi honge aur portal bhi jld ji close ho jayega.."

Jese hi ladka yeh kehte hai uske aur us lakdi ke sar ke upar ek chota s kaala badal sa kuch banne lagta hai jiski speed thodi kam thi lekin shyd 4 ya 5 min mai woh kaala badal ek insaan ko jane laayak ho jata..

Ladki -"mai apne bete ko yaha chhod kar kahi nahi ja - woh apni baat puri kar pati usse aur skeletons hona ka sense hone lagta hai..

Ladka -"______ jldi se mere pass aao abhi tum bahut zada weak ho akele itne skeletons se nahi lad paogi.. "

*slash* *slash* woh ladki un dono skeletons ko apni blue sword se ek ek slash se maar deti hai lekin fir woh apni talwaar ko jameen pe tika kar tez tez saanse lene lagti hai aur kab woh thodi normal hoti hai to rote hue kehti hai..

Ladki -"ma..mai..." woh aage kuch nahi bol pati ek nazar apne bacche ko dekhti hai jo abhi bhi gehri neend mai soya hua tha aur bahut masoom lag raha tha aur woh skeletons jinhe abhi us ladki ne maare the dhul ban kar gayab ho jate hai aur wah kuch saman pada hua tha ab jo agar es duniya mai kahi nahi milta tha lekin ladki us saman ko yaha nahi chhod sakti thi isliye woh usse touch karke apni storage ring mai rakh leti hai aur jaha se yaha aayi thi waps apne pati ki taraf jane lagti hai jate hue uske dil mai dard ho raha tha aakhir ek maa apne bacche ko akela kese chhod sakti thi lekin woh bhi kismat ke hatho majboor thi..

18 saal baad (23 October 2024)...

"Nahiiiiiiiiiiiiii..... "

Ek ladka ek bhayank sapna dekh kar apni neend se uthh jata hai jese hi woh uthta hai to uske side mai leti hui ladki bhi uski awaaz sunkar turant uth jati hai..

Ladki -"Raj aap thik to hai na?" yeh kehkar woh us ladke jiska naam Raj tha uska chehre ko apne seene se laga leti hai....

Ladki -"aapne aaj firse wahi sapna dekha jo bachpan se dekh rahe ho aap?"

Raj abhi bhi dara hua tha aur woh apne aap ko normal karne ki koshish kar raha tha aur jab woh thoda normal hota hai to woh aas pass dekhta hai to uske bed ke ass pass red roses ki petals bacchi gayi thi aur pura room candels aur red roses se decorated tha aur uske bed bhi phulo se sazaya gya tha..

Aur ek bahut khubsurat aur pyaari ladki ne usse apni baaho mai pakda hua tha..

Raj ko jese hi yeh ehsaas hota hai woh usse duur ho jata hai..

Raj - "dii please mujhse duur rahiye.. "

Dii matlab Raj abhi apni behen ke sath ek hi room mai suhaagraat mana raha tha..

Woh ladki jiska naam Naina tha usse bahut accha lag raha tha Raj ko apni baaho mai paa kar lekin jhatke se alag hone se woh Raj ko kha jane wali nazaro sed dekh rahi thi lekin fir bhi apne aap ko thoda control karke woh Raj ke chehre pe apna hath rakh kar puchti hai..

Naina -"kya aaj bhi tumhe wahi sapna aaya? jo har din aata tha?"

Raj kuch nahi bolta aur apni nazarein nichi kar leta hai isliye nahi ki woh jawaab nahi dena chahta tha balki isliye kyuki woh uski dii abhi ek silky nighty mai uske pass bethi hui thi aur thoda Raj ke gaal pe hath rakhne ki wajah se woh thodi jhuki hui thi jiski wajah se uska gehra cleavage reveal ho raha tha...

Raj jhatke se waha se uth jata hai aur hadbate hue kehta hai..

Raj -" di.. dii ma.. mai washroom se aata hu.. " yeh kehkar woh apne Washroom ki taraf bhag jata hai wahi Naina apne pati ko ese baccho ki tarah harkat karta dekh uske chehre pe ek pyaari si muskan aa jati hai aur woh wahi bethi apne bhai jo ab uska pati tha uska intezaar karne lagti hai..

Raj hadbate hue bathroom mai aata hai aur washbasin ke samne aakr apna muh baar baar dhone lagta hai taaki agar yeh koi sapna hai to wou es sapne se jldi se jldi uth jaye..

Lekin yeh koi sapna nahi tha usne lagbhag 10 ya 15 baar apne chehre ko pani se dhoya tha ab woh apne chehre ko mirror mai dekhne lagta hai ek 18 se 19 saal ka ladka jiski aankhen blue thi aur chehre bahut dikhne mai bahut zada handsome height 6 foot thi..

Muh dhone ki wajah se abhi woh thoda jhuka hua tha jisse uski shirt bhi thodi kash gayi thi matlab acchi khasi body bhi thi lekin ek chij uske chehre pe acchi nahi lag rahi thi thoda gussa tha aur uska chehre thoda muljhaya hua sa lag raha tha..

Kyuki aaj uski shadi hui thi woh bhi apni diiii se jo usse 2 saal badi thi arre wahi Naina, kabhi uski nazar apne hath mai pehni hui us black ring pe padti hai jisne uski puri zindagi badal ke rakh di thi...

Ab yeh jaana hai ki shadi aur yeh ring hero ki zindagi mai kese aaye to uske liye hum sabko kuch mahine piche jana hoga zada nahi bas 2 mahine piche...And ees story mai love, adventure, action, fight, sab kuch hoga bas intezaar jld hi es story ke update ke sath milenge..

Back in 20 September 2024...

[Note : Ab shadi kese hui aur ring kese mili uske liye to aage ke updates padhne honge and plz batana kesa laga and 1st update ha agar koi mistake ho to plzz ignore kar dena...]

Amazing start...

I guess Naina shouldn't be his real sister

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mistyvixen said:
Amazing start...

I guess Naina shouldn't be his real sister

Meri story hai mai kuch bhi kar sakta hu

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S. No.	Name	Age	Role
1>	Raj	18	Hero
2>	Sumita	43	Hero Mother
3>	Aakash	24	Hero Bhai
4>	Payal	23	Hero Bhabhi (Aakash Wife)
5>	Aarohi	22	Hero 1st Sister
6>	Piya	20	Hero 2nd Sister
7>	Veer	18	Hero Best Friend
8>	Dr. Vijay	39	Sumita ka muh bola bhai
9>	Mayur	18	School Bully
10>	Aisha	31	Hero Class teacher
11>	Subham	43	Delhi Commissioner
12>	Anjali	23	Delhi IPS
13>	Soniya	18	Raj Ki Class ki 3rd Topper
14>	Ayush	19	___
15>	Prerit	20	___
16>	Varun	20	___
17>	Tina	19	___
18>	Naina	20	___
19>	Mahendra Gupta	55	____
20>	Mohan Gupta	26	___
21>	Sanjana	__	Devpur ki teen family mai se ek ke head ki beti
22>	Ashutosh	43	White Rock Academy Librarian
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26>

S. No.	Ability	Rank	Color
1>	Stealth	SSS+	Blue
2>	_______	____	Golden
3>	Sense	F	Light Red
4>	Ant Strength	F	Light Red
5>	Regeneration	F	Light Red
6>	Dog Smell	F	Light Red
7>	Costume Change	F	Light Red
8>
S. No.	Magic	Grade	Magic Core Color
1>	Electric	0
2>	Fire	0
3>	Wind	0
4>	Water	0
5>	Ice	0
6>	Grass	0
7>	Earth	0

Name	Magic	Ability	Rank
Naina	Electric(6) Fire(5) Grass(4) Ice(2)	Diamond- Attack karna and Marna	SSS
Ayush	Fire (5) Wind(3) Ice(2)	Illusion	S
Prerit	Ice(5) Wind(4) Water(3)	Ice Punch	S
Varun	Wind(4) Water(3) Space(1)	Flying	A
Tina	Grass(4) Earth(3)	Healing	B
Sanjana	Wind(0)	Lock	__
Veer	None	Ant Strength Regeneration Dog Smell	F F F