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Hello everyone.

We are Happy to present to you The annual story contest of XForum

"The Ultimate Story Contest" (USC).

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Well iske baare mein thoda aapko bata dun ye ek short story contest hai jisme aap kisi bhi prefix ki short story post kar sakte ho, jo minimum 700 words and maximum 7000 words tak ho sakti hai. Isliye main aapko invitation deta hun ki aap is contest mein apne khayaalon ko shabdon kaa roop dekar isme apni stories daalein jisko poora XForum dekhega, Ye ek bahot accha kadam hoga aapke or aapki stories ke liye kyunki USC ki stories ko poore XForum ke readers read karte hain.. . Isliye hum aapse USC ke liye ek chhoti kahani likhne ka anurodh karte hain.

Aur jo readers likhna nahi chahte woh bhi is contest mein participate kar sakte hain "Best Readers Award" ke liye. Aapko bas karna ye hoga ki contest mein posted stories ko read karke unke upar apne views dene honge.

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Entry thread 7th February ko open hoga matlab aap 7 February se story daalna shuru kar sakte hain or woh thread 28th February tak open rahega is dauraan aap apni story post kar shakte hain. Isliye aap abhi se apni Kahaani likhna shuru kardein toh aapke liye better rahega.

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Update 25


Shopping time


To haunted house mae jitne bhi local gunde avi ke piche aayee hue the avi ne sabhi ko , unke asli raste tak paucha diya,
Aur saath mae avi abha ne mil kar haunted house ki trip bhi complete kar li..


Abha - ooh kafi romancak trip thi ye, ghost train se bhi jada maja aaya isme mujko hai na avi ..


Avi - ha maja kyu nahi aayega, jab itni hot girlfriend saath ho to maja hi maja..


Abha - huu tum mujko FIR se ched raho ho avi hu..


Avi - ok ok sorry sweetheart, sorry..


Abha - huu ab tik hai to ye bhi puri ho gai , ab kya , ab kaha ghumna hai hame..


Avi - ghumna to hai par yaha nahi kyuki baki jagha boring hogi hamare liye, to is trip ko yahi end karte hai..


Abha - ha main bhi yahi soch rahi thi ki isko khatm karte hai ab, par ab kya wapish ghar chalana hai kya..?


Avi - nahi abhi to nahi, chalo todi shopping hi kar lete hai, kya bolti ho sweetheart..


Ab bhaiya shopping ki baat ho aur koi ladki (aurat) mana kar de yesa to kabhi ho hi nahi sakta hai, aur abha bhi shopping ki baat sun kar khush ho gai..


Abha - ha ha kyu nahi chalo chalate hai shopping karane..


Avi - hai chalo FIR, yaha ka kaam to complete ho gaya hai...


Aur avi abha dono haunted park se bahar aayee aur wapish city ki taraf chal diye saath mae uske guards bhi..


Karib 20-30 minutes ke baad dono city ke andar pahuh gaye, aur avi ne bike rok di..


Abha - kya hua avi bike kyu roki aur yaha to ass -pass koi shopping centre bhi nahi hai..


Avi - are sweetheart mene bike isiliy to roki hai, taki tum mujko bata sako ki hum chalee kis taraf, matlb koi achi shopping centre ka address to hoga tumhare pass..


Abha - ooh main to bhul hi gai thi , ruko main abhi pata karti hu..


Aur abha ne apni saheli nitu ko call kiya..


Nitu - ohh hello meri jaan kya baat hai, itne dino baad apni friend ko yaad kiya.


Abha - Nitu main majak ke mood mae bilkul bhi nahi hu samjhi


nitu- ok sorry, sorry yaar tu bahut boring hai, bol kisliye call ki hai tu..


Abha - good to sun mujko ye bata main **** yaha hu to iske ass -pass koi acchi sa shopping centre hai kya..


Nitu - huu shopping centre kya baat lagta hai jija Ji ke saath gai hai ghumne tu,
Kher mujko kya hai to waha se 10 minutes ki duri par "All in one shopping centre" Khula hai abhi.. Tu wahi chali jaa..


Abha - nitu yaar jo abhi khula hai usne kya hoga..



Nitu - are yaar main khud abhi kuch din pahale hi gai thi waha shopping par, bahut hi accha shopping centre hai wo, har chij hai, acchi facilities hai waha par, tujko maja ayega tu bhindas ja waha and enjoy..


Abha - tik hai teri baat par vishvaas karke ja rahi hu, lekin agar wo mere layak nahi hua too..


Nitu - ha to teri agli shopping main khud apne pese se karna dungi bass..


Abha - good ok bye..


Nity -bye.. [Call end ]..


Abha - oo pata chal gaya yaha se right➡ lene ke bad 10 minutes ki duri par All in one shopping centre hai wahi chalte hai..


Avi - are you sure na.. Main tumhare bolne par chal raha hu ok.. Yesa na ho ki mujko waha kuch pasand hi na aayee..


Abha - are baba yesa nahi hoga ok chalo ab..


Ek baar FIR se bike start hui aur sidhe ja kar ruki, us shopping centre ke samne, avi ne bike park ki aur dono chal diye andar,
Dekhne mae to shopping centre bahut hi jabardat dikh raha tha..

Avi - huu mall to bahut hi achha dikh raha hai, dekhte hai yaha chije kitni acchi milti hai..
Par jaye kaha pahale?



Abha - Of course lady's clothes section mae aur kya, main pata karti hu kon se floor mae best one hai ruko tum..
Abha ek female employe se baat karane chal di,

Reception - hello mam how can I'll help you..


Abha - I want buy some clothes , so can you tell me where I can get..


Reception- yes mam in 4 floor, we sales best clothes...


Abha - ok thanks.. (Aur abha wapis avi ke pass aa gai) ..


Dono lift ki madad se pahuch gaye 4 floor par, aur waha bahut See shop's thi aur lagbhag sab mae customer ki bhid lagi hui thi..


Abha - huu lagta hai galat time mae aa gaye hum avi, yaha to bahut bhid lagi hui hai..


Avi - ha to kya hua todi aur shop's dekhte hai sayada khali ho koi..


Aur unko ek shop mil gai, jo abhi khali hui , aur dono chal diye andar.. Waha 2 salesgirl thi jo sayada kapdo ki packing kar rahi thi..
Jab avi abha dono andar gaye tho, dono salesgirl harkat mae aai,
Dono ye pahchan gai ki koi tagdi party hai..

1- hello mam hello sir, Wellcome to our shop..


2- hello mam and ( toda ghur kar) sir, how can we help you...


1- sir boliye apko kya chahiye hamare shop mae apko lady's and man dono ke clothes hai..


2- yes.. Yes aur apke liye hum special discount bhi denge sir...


Abha ye notice kar rahi thi ki dono salesgirl avi ko kuch jada hi line mar rahi hai.. Jisse usko toda gussa aur todi jalan matlb dono emotion aa rahe the..


Abha - ahmm main bhi yaha khadi hu, kya tum dono sirf inko hi, inki pasand puchne wali ho,
Ya main dusri shop dekh lu..


Dono salesgirl samajh gai ki madam gusse mae hai, aur wo ye bhi jaan chuki thi ki dono rich hai too..


1- no.. No.. Mam apko kahi jani ki jarurat nahi hai..


2- yes mam and we are sorry we try to close with your boyfriend..


Abha (blush) - ok.. Ok.. No problem ab mujko koi acchi se kapde dikhao..


1- ok mam please tell as witch tip, matlb kisliye, kisi party ke kiye, trip ke liye ya Marriage function.. Aur kitni tak chahiye apko mam..


Tabhi 2 ne 1 ko kohni mari our boli


1- idiot mam se kya puch rahi hai, sir se puch na, ki unko kis tarah kee kapdo mae dekhna hai mam ko..


2- oo sorry sorry to sir boliye kis tarah ke kapde nikale hum mam ke liye..


Avi - well my girlfriend is so beautiful, every dress is fit on him,
But I love too see him in saari, so show us your best items, and remember no money limit..


Dono salesgirl ek dusre ko dekhne lagi kyuki, wo jitni kimti kapde sale karti unko, unke piche kuch pese milte, aur avi ki baat sunte hi dono jaldi jaldi se uper ki or gai, jaha best sarri rakhi hui thi..


Yaha Abha ke gal tode gulabi ho gaye the, kyuki wo avi ke saath thi aur ajj avi uske liye kapde le raha hai.. Dusri wajha thi ki ajj kitne salo baad wo kisi ke saath aai hai, ajj usne kitna maja kiya..

Kuch minut mae dono girl's apne hato mae bahut si sarri le kar aa gai aur, abha ko dikhane lagi..

Abha saari dekhti to kabhi avi ko,

(She - hmm, wo chahti hai ki app uske liye koi saari choose karo..) She bolte hi avi ne turant hi ek Lal rang ki saari abha ki taraf kar di,
Aur abha bina bole usko pakad kar changing room ki taraf chal di...


1- sir kya apke liye bhi kuch dikha de..


Avi - mere liye kya us saari ki matching kuch hai tumhare pass..


2- ha.. Ha.. Bilkul hai sir hamaaree pass, rukiye mae abhi laati hu..


Idhar room mae abha ne sarri to pahan li, par uska blouse bhaut hi open tha piche ki taraf se jisko wo band nahi paa rahi thi, to usne awwaj laga li..


Abha - jara idhar aana to, mujko todi madad chahiye..


Avi turant abha ke changing room mae chala gaya, ab door to tode se hi power mae khul gaya aur jab wo andar gaya to samne ka nazara kisi bhi admi ki dil ki ghanti baja baja deta aur ghanta utha deta ..

To andar abha sise ki taraf mhu karke khadi hui thi , aur wo bahut hi jada hot lag rahi thi





Ab jese hi darwaja khula, abha ne avi ko dekha aur...

To be continued

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