Nevil singh
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कुछ नया थीम हे । कुछ नई तरकीब से अपनाया गया कहानी होने वाली है । पहला अपडेट बोहोत ही अच्छा लिखा है आपने मजा आयाUpdate 1
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(Update pahle, introduction baad mae )
Too is story ke naam se apko pata chal hi gaya hoga ki ye story bhi goan se hi hai (jese nauker ya raja), Abb naam ki kaampur hai to story mae kaam hi kaam hoga , ab kis tarah ka kaam hoga ye to sochne wale ki soch par nirbhar karta hai ..
To ab baat karte hai kaam ki, matlab story ki to story ek goan ki hai, jiska naam hai, Kantpur kyuki yaha par jis parivar ka rajj hai, uske purwajo ne is goan ka naam Kantpur rakh diya,
Par kahani ek yesa mod legi ki ye kantpur kab, kaampur mae badal jayega pata hi nahi chalega
(Bas Kaam hi Kaam hai )
To ye jo gaon hai wo charo taraf se ghane janglo se ghira hua hai, goan mae ane jane ka sirf ek hi rasta hai, magar aagar jada bharish ho to wo rasta bhi band ho jata hai...
Ab baat karte hai story ke main lead ka, To goan se lage hue ek kacchi ghar jisme sirf 3 chote room aur ek rasoi thi, aur ghar ke bahar kuch janwar bandhe hue the.. uske ek room mae do log lete hue, ek aurat aur mard..
Joki pati patni the, jo pati tha wo bichara arram se soo Raha tha, par uski patni ki ankhko se nind bahut door nazar aa rahi thi, wo aurat bahut hi chinta se apne kanare ki chat ko nihar rahi thi aur kuch soch bhi rahi thi, ab wo kyu soch rahi hai to chaliye fir
Aurat - Ye iswar ab main kya karu ajj us baat ko itna samay ho chuka hai, par yesa lagta hai ki kal ki hi baat ho..
Jo mene apni 18 saal ki umr mae ki thi ajj uska fall mujko milne wala hai, ha jo kuch us baba ji ne mujse kaha tha wo sab kucu hua, par ab sab kuch badlne wala hai kyuki ab mere ek lute bete ke pass us baba ji ke ashirwad ki wajha se kuch saktiya (Power) parapt hogi, Ab main kya karu ye baat main ajj tak sab se chupa kar rakhi hui thi, par ab kya hoga, ajj 12 baje wo hoga jiske bare mae us din us baba ne mujko bataya tha, Unke hi ashirwad ki wajha se ajj meri umr 41 sall ki ho gayi hai par mera ye sarir jese 30 sall ki umr mae hi ruk gaya hai, main 3 bacho ki maa hokar bhi abhi bhi jawan dikhti hu, saath mae meri jawani bhi abhi tak wese hi hai jese 18 sall pahle thi..
Aur fir wo aurat us samay mae kho gai jab ye sab kuch hua tha
Jab wo us din us jangle ke todi andar tak chali gai thi
Hum story ko age janege lekin usse pahle hume story ko kuch piche le jana hoga, jab is Sab chijo ka bij boya gaya tha
23 sall pahle..
Ek sunder si 18-19 sal ki ladki jungle mae gum rahi thi, Tikhe naina (ankhe), Sunder gulabi hont, lambe kamar ko chute hue ball 5.3 fit ki height ki wo ladki akele hi us jungle ke us hisse mae ajj pahli baar aai thi, charo taraf subder full , patte, choti nadi ki kal kalati hui madhur awwaj uske chanchal man ko bahut bah rahi thi,
par usse ye nahi pata tha ki ajj uska yaha aana uski niyati thi, usko koi dekh raha tha badhe dhyan se aur ek sadhu the jo is ladki ko bahut dhyan se dekh rahe the
Sadhu (man mae) - ye.. ye.. hamare saath kya ho raha hai ajj, ajj tak humne apni sabhi indrio ko apne kabhu mae rakha tha, par ajj is kanya ko dekh kar hamare andar ye itni kaam Ki ischa kyu ho rahi, hum apne app ko kabhu nahi kar sakte hai, hume apni kaam ki purti karni hi hogi..
Aur fir wo sadhu turant us jagha se gayab hue aur sidhe us ladki ke samne prakat ho gaye, kisi ko is tarha se achanak apne samne dekh wo ladki dar kar piche ki or gir gai tab sadhu bole
Sadhu - dekho kanya Humse daro mat, hum tumko koi nuksan nahi pauchane wale, Ratna sant ho jawo..
Sadhu ke muh se apna naam sun ratna ko samjh aa gaya ki ye koi sidh baba hai to, wo apne man ko sant karke boli..
Ratna - pranam baba, baba app Mera Naam jante hai, Aur is tarha se app mere samne aa gaye isse to pata chalta hai app, sakti sali ho par yaha kyu..
Sadhu- khush raho hamesa, Kanya hum kai 100 salo se is dharti par idhar se udhar jungle mae gum rahe aur kabhi tapasya bhi karte hai, par ajj hume tumse kuch daan chahiya..
Ratna - par sadhu baba, is samay main apko kya daan de sakti hoon abhi to mere pass kuch bhi nahi hai, ek kaam kariye app mere ghar aa jawo waha apko, apki icha ke hisab se daan mil jayega..
Sadhu- Ratna hum tumse daan mae koi vastu ya dhan (money) ki mang nahi kar rahe hai, hum tumhara komary (कौमार्य) chahiye..
Sadhu ki baat pahle to ratna nahi samjh pai, fir todi der baad wo badak uthi
Ratna (gusse se) - Baba main apko ek sidh sadhu samjh rahi thi aur app mere saath ye sab chii, app bhi auro ki tarah mere sarir ke saath chii, main jaa rahi hoon yaha se..
Sadhu baba apni kaam ke Wajha se unka sarir dard karne laga aur unki ankho se anshu aa ne lage, unki ankho se bahte anshu dekh ratna ruk gai aur boli..
Ratna - app ro kyu rahe ho sadhu baba kya hua..
Sadhu - Ratna humne apne jivan mae anek Aurto ko dekha par kabhi bhi kisi ke liye wo bawna hamare andar utpan nahi hui jo tumko dekh kar ho rahi hai, aur iski wajha se hamara sarir is dard ko sah nahi paa raha hai, hum jante hai ki tum ek nek dil aur Sanskari ladki ho par, kripya is sadhu ko apna komary dan kar do..
Sadhu ki baate aur uske dard ko dekh ratna ka dil pighal gaya aur wo boli.
Ratna - baba tik hai main tayar hu par, kya apke saath ye sab karne ke baad koi dusra pursh mujko apni patni manga, ya vivah ke baad wo mujko chod dega ki mene pahle se hi kisi ke saath..
Sadhu- Ratna uski chinta tum karo, hamare saath sambhog ke baad bhi tum kuwari hi rahogi aur hum tumhare kisi bhi ango ko spars bhi nahi karnege sirf ek ang ko chod kar aur saath hi hum tumgare us ang par nazar bhi nahi rakhenge
Aur ye bol kar sadhu ne apna hath aage kiya aur unke hath mae ek kale (black) colour ki patti aa gai, Sadhu ki bato ko sun kar ratna ne unke saath sambhog kiya (sirf - 10) mints tak, par isi bhich sadhu ko ratna ke ane wale jiwan ke bare mae sab kuch pata chal gaya
Fir sadhu khade ho gaya aur ratna se kaha
Sadhu - Ratna tumne ajj humpar bahut bada upkar kiya hai ye lo pahle apka komary (कौमार्य) punh pratp karo
Fir sadhu ke hanto se ek Safed roshni nikli aur jab wo ratna ke sarir mae gai, ratna fir se kuwari ho gai
Sadhu - Ratna sayad ye milan pahle se tay tha, ab main tumko kuch batana chahta hoon dhyan se sunna
Jab tumhara Vivah hoga tab tumko pahle do putriya pratp hongi jo tumhari tarha Sunder aur gunwan hogi aur un dono ka vivha ek bade khul mae hoga
Ratna ye jaan kar bahut khush ho gai, fir sadhu baba bole..
Sadhu- Ratna un dono putri ke janm ke 5 sal baad tum ek putr ki maa banogi aur is putr ko kuch saktiya milengi jab wo apni 18 sal ko pratp kar lege
Ratna - kis.. kis.. tarha ki sakti baba
Sadhu - Ratna tumne hamari kaam ki purti ki hai, iskiye tumhare putr ko kaam ki sakti prapt hogi saath mae aur bhi, par pahle sirf kaam aur kisi bhi ke man ki baat sunane ki sakti..
Ratna jab tumhara putr 18 sal ka hi jayega tab jo bhi stri (स्त्री) jo ki apne saririk sukh ya kaam ki Tripti se paresan hogi aur jiske dil mae tumhare putr ke liye pahle se kahi bhi kuch bhi kaam ki soch hogi, Tumhara putr usse sambhog jarur karega, aur jo bhi tumhare putr se sambhog karegi wo tript ho gi aur yadi uske dil mae santan ki chah hogi to usko maa banabe ka sukh bhi milega..
Ratna - baba.. baba yes mae to uske jiva mae kahi aurte aayengi kahi mere bere ko kuch bimari
Sadhu- (muskura kar) - Ratna tum chinta mat karo tumhare putr ko koi bimari kabhi chu bhi nahi payegi aur ye lo..
Fir sadhu baba ke hanto mae ek potli jesa kuch aaya jisko unhone ratna ko de diya aur bole
Sadhu - Ratna ji din tumhare putr ka janamdin hoga uske agle din tumhe subha uth kar naha dho kar, ye sindur apne sir par lagana hoga aur ha ye kaam tumhe tumhare putr ke, tumko dekhne se pahle karna hoga..
Ratna - baba agar kabhi bhul se main ye nahi kar paai to kya hoga..
Sadhu- to fir tumhare aur uske bich maa bete ke alawa wo rishta banega jo sirf ek pati patni ya premi ke bich hota hai.. ek mard aur stri ka rishta..
Sadhu ki baate sub ratna ka mhu khula ka khula rah gaya..
Sadhu - Ratna ek baat aur is sambhog ki wajha se jab tum 40+ ho jawo gi tab bhi tumhara sarir sirf 28-30 sal ki mahila jesa hi hoga, saath mae tumhari putri bhi tumhari tarha sundar hogi
Sadhu - ab tum jawo ratna aur meri ye baat kabhi mat bhulna, aur ha tumhare putr ki wajha se tere naan bahut ucha hoga..
Fir ratna sadhu baba ko pranam kar chali gai
Sadhu - Ratna maff karna humne tumko pura saty nahi bataya, akhir kya bolte hum ki tum aur tumhari dono betiya, tumhare hi putr ki patniya banengi saath mae, usske santan ki maa bhi, tumhare putr ki hi wajha se tumhara kaant pur "KAAMPUR" Main badal jayega
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Bas Kaam hi Kaam hai
शानदारUpdate 2
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To jo aurat is sanay jag rahi thi wo aur koi nahi balki kudh Ratna thi aur wo ajj se 23sal pahle jo kuch hua usi ke bare mae soch rahi thi..aur ajj wahi raat thi jab uska beta pure 18 sal complete hone wala tha
Aur usko is baat ka pata hi nahi chala ki kab sochte sochte wo nind ke gahre samunder mae dub gai..
Kuch ghanto baad raat ke 12 baj gaye aur idhar Ratna ke room ke ek room chodker, 3 room mae ek ladka soya hua tha, jisko is baat ki bahank bhi nahi thi ki kal uske jivan mae kya hone wala tha, kyuki kal sab kuch badal jayega
Tabhi uske room mae wahi sadhu baba, prakat ho gaye jo ajj se 23 sall pahle, uski maa ratna ke samne aaye hue the..
Sadhu baba ka sarir ab bhi wese hi tha jesa 23 sal pahla tha, sadhu baba ladke ko sota hua dekh muskura uthe aur apni hateli (jese kisi ko asirwad dete wakt karte hai tik wese hi) Aur bole..
(Note - to yaha jo 12baja wo us ladke ka 19janm din tha)
Sadhu - putr ajj se pahle jo bhi tum the ab wo tum nahi rahoge, ab tum kudh aur tumhare pass, stri (स्त्री) kudh chal kar aayegi tumse apni kaam tripti ke liye, aur tum unki kaam ko santust karoge, ajj se tumhare sochne ki sakti aur sarir sakti dono bahut tej ho jayegi, tum har kisi ke dil ki baat jaan sakoge aur saath mae agar tum chaho to kisi se kuch kara bhi sakte ho, siwaye apni maa ratne ke, ye asirwad hai hamara..
aur sadhu baba ke andar se ek prakas punj us ladke ke andar sama gaya, aur baba fir waha se gayab ho gaye jese wo yaha the wese hi..
Idhar ratna aur wo ladka dono hi nind ki aagosh mae the, aur wo ladka jisko kuch pata hi nahi tha ki aage uske saath kya hone wala tha..
Idhar subha ke 5 baj gaye the aur ratna ko ek sapna aaya, jis sapne mae wo sadhu baba hi the aur unhone bola
Sadhu- Ratna ab tumhare aur tumhare parivar ke jivan mae bahut kuch badlne wala hai, kyuki ab tumhare putr ko wo mil chuka hai jiske bare mae mene tumko bataya tha, ab tere uthne ka bhi samay ho chuka hai, kyuki ajj se tujhe tere putr ke uthne se pahle hi uthna hoga, nahi to tayar rahana, apne putr ki premika banane ke liye ..
Aur idhar jese hi baba ne ye sab kaha idhar ratna ki nind khul gai
Ratna ki sanse todi tej chal rahi thi saath mae, wo toda pasine mae bhi naha chuki thi, apne baju mae dekha to, uska pati abhi bhi soo hi raha tha
Ratna apni sanso ko kabu mae karke apne app se bolne lagi..
Ratna (man mae) - ye.. ye.. kesa sapna tha aur ye sapna hi tha ya un sadhu baba ne mujko sachet kiya, jarur unhine ne hi kiya hoga, achha hua warna main bhulhi jati ki mujko kya karna tha, ajj mera beta apne jivan ke us padaw par kadam rakhne wala hai, jaha se uske ziwan ki ek nai suruwat hogi..
Aur Ye soch ratna uthne lagi, uske uthne ki awwaj sun, uska pati bola (ankh band karke)
Pati - are ratna ka hua re tu itni subha - subha to nahi uthti To ajj kese, kuch baat hai kya
Ratna - kya ji app bhul gaye kya ki, ajj mere bete ka janmdin hai to socha rahi thi ki kul devi ke mandir chali jau, Fir ghar ke kaam bhito karne hote hai mujko..
Pati - are ha.. ha.. ajj mere bete ka janamdin hai, acha tik hai main bhi chalta hoon tere saath, main todi pratna kar lunga apne bete ki ane wale jivan ke liye, ki uske jivan mae koi bhi taklif na mile, aur jesa mujko tere jesi patni mili, sabhi guno mae 1 number usko bhi mile koi..
Ratna (man mae) - ek nahi ji kai milengi apke bete ko, itni milengi ki wo sambhal bhi nahi paye ga sayad, aur mujko to dar hai kahi meri devrani ko hi pahle bhog na laga le apka ladla, pata nahi kya hoga..
Aur fir dono uthe naha dho kar chal diye kul devi ke mandir ki or
To ab hum toda Goan ke bare main jan lete hai, to ye gaon charo taraf se ghane jungle se gura hua hai, Saath mae pahadi se bhi, aur yaha par bharsat ke mahine mae light na ke barabar hoti hai
(Ab jo mere dost pahadi ilake jese उत्तराखंड, ya हिमाचल ke ho unko pata hi hoga ki jada bharish se kya hota hai udhar)
Wese to yaha kabhi bhad jesi samasy nahi hui par light ki problem hames rahti thi par abhi todi kami hui hai, fir bhi sabhi ke gharo par lalten jarur mil jayega..
Goan ki prakritik sunderta ka nazara dekhne ke liye, yaha akshar tandi mae kuch tourist aate hi rahte hai,
Wese to goan bada hai, kyuki ye kuch kuch dori mae fela hua hua hai, matlab 4 ro disha mae felaa hua hai
Goan mae school sirf 8 class tak hi hai baki goan se 50 km door shar mae, isiliye jada tar bache kam padhe likhe hai
Lets intro
Ramu (hero ke papa ) - ek 55 sall ka insan jo apni, choti se khet aur badhi se apna parivar chalata hai, wese to ramu garib hai par bahut swabhami insan bhi, aur imandar bhi, ye apne parivar se bahut payar karta hai
Ratna (hero ki maa ) - Wese to iski umr 41-42 sall hogi par, sadhu baba ke ashirwad ki wajha se sirf 28-30 sal ki hi lagti, goll chahra, kale lambe ball, tikhe nain (ankhe), jinme hamesa kajal laga hota hai, dikhne mae bahut sundar, jis par kisi ka bhi dil fida ho jaye, par ajj tak yesa kabhi nahi ho paya kyu (wait and watch ) Ye 3 baccho ki maa hai, par dikhti nahi hai, apne bete se bahut payar karti hai
Rani, Rima (hero ki bahan ) - umr - 23-24 ye dono hi judwa hai matlab sirf 3-4 minat ka antar hoga, kubsurti mae bilkul apni maa par hi gayi, in dono ki shadi ho chuki hai wo bhi ek hi parivar ke andar, ye dono bahut hi bade parivar mae gai hai..
Ab app soch rahe hoge ki agar ye bade pativar mae gai to Ramu yesa kyu, to iski wajha hai, ramu ka sawbhiman usne ye bol rakha hai ki, uski dono betiya uski madad na kare, bas apne sasural mae khush rahe..
Ye jada tar apne maa ke ghar nahi aati hai, pichli baar karib 4 sal pahle inki shadi hui thi jab inka bhai 15 sall ka hoga
Raju (hero) - abhi 18sall pure hue hai umr ke hisab se baki sarir ke hisab se to kab ka pura ho chuka tha..
To hamara jo raju tha wo pahle kisi se baat nahi karta tha jada, bus uski zindagi uski maa aur dono bahno tak hi simit thi, fir jab uski bahno ki shadi hui tab, wo toda chup rahne laga, tab uski maa Ratna ne raju ko kusti aur kasrat ke liye bola, aur raju apni maa ki bato ko manane bhi laga aur goan mae akhade mae roj jata aur pasina bahata tha, aur Roj ki mahanat aur ghar ka desi dudh aur ghi ki wajha se Raju ka sarir uski umr se pahle hi jawan ho chuka tha, Aur Raju ko apni jawani ka ras chakhne ke liye goan ki bahut si aurte marti thi, abhi raju sirf 19 sall ka hua hai par usja sarir kisi 24-25 sall se hate kate pahakwan ki tarah tha
Hight 6 fit, rang gora - ankhe todi si nili aur tode lambe ball
Hari (raju ke chacha) umr 47 sal jada batane ki jarirat nahi kyuki inka jada role nahi story mae
Kamla (Raju ki badi chachi)
To ye hai Ratna ki choti devrani umr 32 sall inke aur inke pati ke bich khul 15-16 sall ka gep hai, ek sundar aur khush rahane wali aurat par, ek kaam vasna mae jalti hui aurat bhi, kyuki iska pati iski kaam ko santust nahi kar sakta, wese to kamaya ke piche bahut se log pagal hai, par kamaya kudh kisi ke piche pagal hai aur wo hai, uski bhabhi ka beta Raju, iski wajha hai raju ka mardana sari aur uske jism ki khushboo jo kisi bhi aurat ko divana bana, ye bas itna hi chahti hai ki, ye kisi bhi tarah se Raju ko apni jawani chka sake..
Komal (Raju ki choti chachi) ye bhi bilkul Kamla ki tarah hi apni jawani ki agg mae jal rahi hai aur ye bhi kisi bhi tarah se raju ko pana chahti hai...
to yesa kyu to apko bata du ki tino bhai ka ghar ek dusre se jada door nahi agar koi, komal ya kamla ke ghar ki diwal par aa jaye to, wo assani se Ratna ke ghar tank jank kar sakta hai, aur komal aur kamla dono hi, chup chuo kar raju ke sarir ko gura karte hai
Baki intro baad mae
Bas Kaam hi kaam hai
हाय कमला की नखरे उफ्फ । बड़ा ही मजेदार अपडेट था । शानदार लेखनीUpdate 3
To chaliye suru karte hai aj ka update
To jitne intro mene apko diye hai pichle update mae, wo log story mae main lead par hai, aur baki jab jarurat hogi tab dunga.
To sabse pahle hum chalte hain Kamla ke ghar, jiska ghar Raju ke ghar ke bilkul piche laga hua hai, Aur kamla ko bhi ye baat yaad thi ki ajj raju 19 sal ka ho gaya hai..
Wese to kamla jaldi utha nahi karti thi par, ajj wo subha jaldi utha gayi thi aur tayar bhi ho chuki thi
Jab hari utha to apni patni ko itni jaldi se utha dekh kar sochne laga
Hari- are ye main kya dekh raha hoon ye kamla, ajj kese uth gai itni jaldi, kahi hamari shadi ki salghira to nahi, agar yesa hua to ye mujko chodegi nahi..
Puch leta hoon kya pata koi aur baat ho..
Hari- are ye ajj suraj pachim se kese ug gaya, der tak soni wali meri biwi itni jaldi se kese uth gai ajj, kya baat hai ri..
Kamla - huu Ajj jaldi uth to kya hua, tum bhi sirf jaldi utha mat karo, apni uthaya bhi karo samjhe .
Hari- are.. are.. mene kya bol diya tujhse aur ye kya utha, uthna main kuch samjha nahi..
Kamla- ha kese meri baat samjh jawoge tum hu, agar samjh pate to ajj main bhi 4-5 baccho ki maa hoti huu...
Hari- kamla dekh tu mujko ye baat baat par tana mat diya kar, ab mujhse jitna ho sakta hai main utna to karta hi hu, ab teri aag tandhi nahi hoti to main karu..
Kamla - are kesi baat bol rahe ho hye, agar jab ghodi karidi hai to usko chane khilane hi padte hai, aur yaha mujko to sukhi gans bhi nahi milti chane ki baat hi chode..
Hari- ab main tujse kya bahash karu, achha wo sab chod aur ye baata itni jaldi tayar kyu ho gayi hai, kuch baat hai kya..
Kamla - huu apni biwi ka khayal to tumse rakha nahi jata hai, kam se kam itna to khyal rakha karo ki ajj hamare raju ka janmdin hai..to isiliye main ja rahi hoon Ratna didi ke ghar
Hari - achha.. achha to ye baat hai, ajj raju ka janmdeen hai, ruk main bhi aata hu tere saath..
Kamla - koi jarurat nahi hai abhi apko aane ki, dono agar chale gaye to tabele ko kon dekhega, ek kaam karte hain pahle main ja kar aati hu fir app aa jana tik hai..
Hari- ha teri bhi baat sahi hai, tik hai tu ja pahle main jara tabele se aata hoon..
Ab toda raju ke ghar chal dete hain, Jab raju ki aankh khuli to kal raat jo bhi hua, usko ek sapne ki tarha..
Raju(man mae) - hum bada hi ajib tha wo sapna, wo baba unki bate ki main kisi bhi aurat ki man ki baat sun sakta hoon, aur fir wo roshni, yesa lag raha tha ki ye sab kal raat ko hi hua , are bhai main bhi pagal hu are koi esa kese kar sakta hai, aur ye sambhog ka matlab kya hota hai,
hu chalo naha lete hu, maa bapu ajj bhi mandir gayi hongi hamesa ki tarah (matlab Wo dono raju ke har janam din par, subha uth kar wahi jate hai), Aur fir raju ne apne kapde uthare aur ek, lamba sa kapda (lungi jesa) apni kamar par band li..
Par raju jisko sapna samjh raha tha wo hakikat thi aur uski pahli Aurat kudh tayar ho kar uske ghar ki or aa rahi thi..
Raju bhi darwaja par kundi lagana bhul gaya tha, aur na hi ratna ne lagaya tha
Idhar raju Mast darwaje ki taraf pith karke nahane laga idhar, kamla raji ban tan kar, raju ke darwaje ke bahar kadhi hui aur
Kamla-(man mae) - kya karu yahi se awwaj du kyuki ratna didi To jarur mandir gai hongi, sirf wo jalim (Raju) hi hoga ghar mae, ek kaam karti hoon Pahle dekh leti hu, agar darwaja khula ho to bina awwaj kiye gus jaungi..
Aur vichar karke kamla rani ne darwaja khola aur jese hi wo darwaja ban karke piche mudi uska mhu khul - ka - khula rah gaya..
Kyuki uske samne raju uski taraf pith karke naha raha tha, wese to kamla kai baar raju ko chori chuoe dekh chuki thi, pae ajj Raju ki kaam sakti ki wajha se kamla sab kuch bhul gayi, aur sochne lagi
(Note - Raju ek aaine(mirror) ke samne bath kar naha tha, matlab Kamla ka kuch hissa, mirror mae dikh raha tha..)
Kamla (man mae) - haye re meri kismat ajj kitni achhi hai, Jiske sarir ko chup, chup kar dekhti thi ajj wo mere samne hai par main kuch nahi kar sakti hoon..
Par kamla ko ye kaha pata tha ki, Raju uske man ki baat sun chuka hai, par jab raju ke kano par ye baat gai to wo chonk gaya
Raju(man mae) - are ye to kaki ki awwaj hai par kaki yaha kaha, lagta hai mere kaan baj rahe honge
Aur ye soch kar raju ne ek maga pani apne sir mae daal liya, par is baar raju ko kamla dikh gai aaine mae par wo palta nahi, use kudh nahi pata kyu
Raju(man mae) - ye kya kaki yaha par kese matlab wo yaha kyu hai, kya kar rahi hai, aur ye awwaj
Raju ye soch hi raha tha ki Tabhi kamla fir ek baar sochne lagi..
Kamla - haye re jara is jalim ke hath to dekho kitne mote hai, jarur takatvar bhi honge,
par meri futi kismat, ye jalim to mere kisi isare ko samjhta hi nahi hai, are bas baar apni hateli se mere dono dudh ko masal deta aur bas, bas ek baar mere saath suhagrat mana leta to kya jata iska, wo ka bolte hai ha kass isko wo Kamasutra ki jankari hoti to, main is agg mae jalti na
Idhar raju kamala ke man ki sari bate sun raha tha, ki tabhi usne bola...
Raju- Kamasutra ye kya
Ki tabhi raju ke dimag mae hal chal hui aur kuch hi palo mae, usko puri ki puri Maharshi Vatsayan ki likhit kamasutra ka sampurn gayan ho gaya (uss kaam sakti ki wajha se)
Jo raju ajj tak har ladki ya aurat se baga rahta tha, jisko aurte ke bare mae kuch bhi nahi malum tha, ajj us raju ko puri ki puri kaam lila ki jankari ho gai..
Raju (man mae) - achha to Kamasutra ka matlab ek mard aur aurat ke milan ke tarike par likhi book hai (Kamasutra ek vishak grant hai dekh lena online), par ye kaki kyu chahti hai ki main usko santust karu
Tabhi raju us mirror mae kamla ko dhyan se dekhne laga, Aur usko pata chal gaya ki kamla Kaam ki aag mae jal rahi hai aur saath mae ye bhi ki uske chacha ab kisi kaam ke nahi..
Raju(man mae) - achha to isilye chachi hamesa mujko cheda karti thi kyuki wo cahati thi ki main unko payar karu, Bichari kitni paresan hai , aur kuch soch kar wo palta.
Jese hi Raju palta, usko dekh kar hi kamla ki chut ne anshu baha diya tha
Raju- are kaki app, wo bhi intni subha subha, aur ab kab aayi kuch kaam tha kya..
Kamla-wo.. wo.. are kuch nahi raju wo bas ajj tera janamdin hai na to, Tere pass aayi thi bas abhi hi, achha tu naha le main aati hoon..
Aur ye bol kamla palat gai aur fir sochne
Kamla - chal kamla iss pahle ye jalim tujko jane ko bol de, lagta hai ye meri baat samjhe ga nahi, lagta hai meri okhli (ओखली) mae koi pani nahi dalega (Samjh rahe ho samjh rahe ho)
Par bicharo kamla ko ye nahi pata tha ki, jo raju ab tak usse door bhaga karta tha, ab wahi raju usko (kamla) apne piche bhgayega
Raju - wo kaki kaha ja rahi ho tum are agar yaha aa gai ho to mera ek chota sa kaam hi kar do, jara meri pith ko ragad do mera hath nahi pahuch raha hai, jaldi se idhar aawo mere pass..
Raju ne ye baate ek mard ki tarha kahi jese koi apni biwi ko bolta hu, uski bate sun Kamla san ho gayi
Kamla (man mae) - haye ii ka, kahi ye sapna to nahi hai, raju.. raju ne mujko apne pass bhulaya, wo bhi yese jese (sharmakar) main uski biwi huu
Kamla ki man ki bate sun kar, raju bhi sochne laga,
Raju (man mae) - kaki biwi to tum meri kaka ki hi rahogi par, tumhre pati ka sara adikhar mera hoga, ajj tumko tandi kar dunga
Raju- are ka soch rahi ho tum waha par, mene bola na yaha aawo mere pass, to jaldi aawo yah
Kamla - ji.. ji.. aai
Kamla sirf itna hi bol, pai aur raju ke pass chali gai aur ek choti si table jesi chij mae raju ke tik piche bath gai aur uski gori pith dekh kar..
Kamla (man mae) - haye ri kamla dekh to jara jis pit ko tu door se dekha karti thi ajj tu, kudh usko apne hatho se chune wali hai, bas ye jalim ne ajj jese mujko adesh diya, wese hi bol de ki main iski biwi ban jawu to, ek awwaj bhi na bolungi mae.. Ha bas mujhe har din jam kar chode bas ye jalim..
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Raju(man mae) - hi hi ye kaki to bahut jada garam hai, pahle se hi tayar bathi hai ki kab, maib apni talwar iski miyan mae gusa du..
Raju- are ka soch rahi ho kaki jaldi se apna kaam suru karo, fir aur bhi kaam karane hai tumse
Kamla - ha.. ha.. kar rahi hu na itna bhi mat chila mujh par, main teri chachi hu lugai nahi samjha..
Raju - ha bhai ab hamari kismat hamare chacha ji ke jesi kaha ho gi
Kamla- kya.. kya.. matlab hai ki tere jasa jesi kismat, bhala yesi kon si chij hai unke pass jo tere pass nahi hai..
Raju- are chachi tum bhi na iti si baat nahi samjh pa rahi ho , are mere chacha ke tum jo ho, itni sundar aur payari biwi
Apni tarif sunana to har aurat ko bahut achha lagta hai, khas kar us insan ke mhu se jo uska apna ho..
Kamla - are.. are.. bhala yesa kya dekh liya tune jo mujko sundar bol raha hai huu..
Ab raju ne toda bato se kamla ki or kholne ki kosis ki, aur bola..
Raju- are ab kaha baat le ja rahi ho chachi app, kya kya hai tumhare pass ye main kese bolu , mujko sharam aati hai chachi aur kahi agar app gussa ho gai too, nahi nahi chodo
Kamla (man mae) - are jalim tere mhu se do mithe sab sunne ke liye to main kab se tayar thi aur yaha ajj to tu mujko puri ki puri chasni mae duba raha hai,
kamla - are.. are.. main bhala kyu , bura manungi ya tujhper guss karungi..
Raju- huu to soch lo chachi aur tumko meri kasam mae ab tumse jo bhi kahu ta KARU tum piche nahi hatogu na mujko roko gi
Raju ne karu sab par kuch jada jor diya, saath mae kasam bhi jisko sun kar hi kamla ki dil dak sa ho gaya, wo ye soch bhi nahi paa rahi thi ki, uska raju usse is tarah ki baat karega, par ajj kamla ko bahut achha bhi lag raha kyuki jis sarir ko wo chip chip kar dekha karti thi ajj, usi Raju ki pith ko wo apne hato se chu rahi thi, aur kudh hi garam bhi ho rahi thi, upper se raju ki ye bate
Kamla - haye daya isne to bato hi bato mae mujhe fasa diya saath mae kasam bhi de di wo bhi apni, ab kya karu main, ajj jis tarah se ye baat kar raha hai mujko ched raha hai, lagta nahi ki ye jalim aj hi sara ras pi lega, aur achha bhi hai wese bhi , ab main aur bardast nahi kar sakti hoon, chu main iska sarir rahi hu aur, chut meri gili ho rahi hai
Kamla - wo.. wo. wo.. tik hai.. tik hai.. teri kasam main tujko na rokun gi na tokungi..
Jese hi kamla ne ye kaha, Raju muskura utha aur tabhi wo hua, jiske bare mae ajj tak kamla sirf sapno mae socha karti thi
Bas Kaam hi kaam hai
बोहोत अच्छा दृश्य दर्शाया । मजेदार लचीलाUpdate 4
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Kamla - haye daya isne to bato hi bato mae mujhe fasa diya saath mae kasam bhi de di wo bhi apni, ab kya karu main, ajj jis tarah se ye baat kar raha hai mujko ched raha hai, lagta nahi ki ye jalim aj hi sara ras pi lega, aur achha bhi hai wese bhi , ab main aur bardast nahi kar sakti hoon, chu main iska sarir rahi hu aur, chut meri gili ho rahi hai
Kamla - wo.. wo. wo.. tik hai.. tik hai.. teri kasam main tujko na rokun gi na tokungi..
Aur jese hi raju ko kamla ki ijajat mili, usne wo kiya jiske bare mae kamla bhi nahi soch sakti thi, jese mene bola tha ki, raju ke gol chite stul jesi chij par batha hua tha, to wo turant gum gaya, jisse raju kamla ki taraf ho gaya
Kamla bechari mhu khole kabhi raju ke chahre ko dekhti to kabhi uski nazar raju ki majbut sine mae jati, tab raju muskurata hua bola
Raju - To Kaki Chaliye suru karte hai, Apki tarafi, magar uske liye apko mere pass aana hoga AUR toda..
Ek bichari kamla ko ajj Raju jatke par jatke de raha tha (wese wale jatke nahi jiske bare mae app log soch rahe honge ), upper se raju ki pit malish aur ab to raju ka adha nanga badan uske ankho ke samne tha, Aur abhi ko raju ne bola ki, AUR pass use sun kar to kamla ki bolti hi ban hi gai
Raju- kya hua kaki chup kyu ho gayi, abhi to meri kasam li hai ki app mujko rokogi nahi huu (Aur raju ne ankh mar di )
Kamla - to.. to.. mai.. main kaha tujko, tok rahi hu ab kasam kha li hai to kha li..
Fir Raju ne kamla ka hath pakda aur apni taraf kich liya, bichari kamla, yese raju ke pass gai, jese hawa ka koi jonka pato ko apne saath le jata hai, aur yaha to kamla rani sidhe hi, Apne Sapno ke hero raju ki god(गोद) mae ja kar bath gai,
Ab halat ye the ki Kamla ek taraf se raju ki god(गोद) mae bathi hui thi, Uski ek dudh ek taraf se raju ki majbut Sine mae das gaye the aur Raju ka Sher niche se, kamla ki jism ki garmi pakar Dhire Dhire sir utha chuka tha..
Kamla jis raju ko kabhi apji god (गोद) main batha kar khilati thi ajj wahi kamla, usi raju ki god(गोद) main bathi hui hai
(Note- apko bata du ki kamla ki shadi ajj se 10 sal pahle hui thi to us samay raju bahut chota tha matlab 9 sal ka to, kamla aur komal dono usko jada tar apni gid (गोद) main batha kar khana khikati thi..
Par yaha ab wo raju bacha nahi tha, Aur yaha to raju halka hakla, pani se bhinga hua tha, Aur kamla ki jism ki garmi raju ko achhi lag rahi thi..
Kamla ki to himat hi nahi ho rahi thi, kuch bolne ki, fir bhi usne jab, bolne ki kosis ki to, Raju ne apni ungli uske honto par rakh di aur bola..
Raju- shhh Kaki ab kuch nahi bolna nahi to main naraz ho jaunga, ab suno ki mere kaka kyu kushnasib hai..
Aur ye bol kar raju ne toda kas kar, komal ki nagi kamar ko, Ragad diya, aur majbut se pakad liya, Apni kamar par raju ke hato ka spars pate hi kamla sisk huti..
Kamla - aaaaaHhhhhhh, mmmmmm
Raju- kya hua kaki, kuch hua kya yesi awwaj kyu nikali.
Bichari kamla apne honto se to kuch bhi nahi bol pai, par main mae jarur bolne lagi..
Kamla (man mae) haye kese jalim hai re tu, ek to main yesi hi itni garan ho chuki hoon, aur tu mujko apni god (गोद) main batha kar aur garam kar raha hai, Aur jo chij meri payash mita sajti hai, wo meri kori gand ko chu kar, mujhe aur garam kiye ja raha hai, kab main tandi hongi re jalim ..
Raju kamla ki man ki bate jan kar bahut khush ho gaya ki, ab uska rasta clear hai, ab agli chal..
Raju ne apna ek hath sidhe kamla ki galo par rakh diya aur uski galo ko sahlate hua bole..
Raju- huu haye kaki, kya kismat hai mere chacha ki, ki dekho tumhare gal kitne naram aur fule hue hai, ji karta hai ki, codo tum naraz ho jaogi
kamla raju ki harkat aur uski bato se sex ki agg mae jalne lagi, wo samjh gai ki raju kya bolne wala hai
Kamla (nasili ankho se) - to kar ne, tu jo karna chahta hai kar na , ajj main tujko nahi rkungi, bas rukna mat
Ab kamla se aur control nahi ho raha tha, par raju to kamla ko aur tadpana chahta tha, to wo bola
Raju - kaki kitne naram gal hai apke, jara dekhu to sahi mine bhi ki, kaka ko kese lagta honga jab wo ye karte honge...
Aur raju niche juka aur bari bari se kamla ke dono galo ko chum liya,.
Kamla ki man ki murad ajj puri ho rahi thi, kamla sex ki aag mae jalti hui, apni ladkadati hui, hontho se boli..
Kamla - tu.. tu.. tere.. tere.. chacha ki baat chodna.. tu.. tu.. bata tujko kya kya pasabd hai mere main bol na re jalim..
Raju- kyu kaki, kaka ki baat kese chod de are, app to puri tarah unki hi ghodi ho na huu
Kamla (sex ke nashe) - are jalim, ha tere kaka ki hi ghodi hu main, par ab tere kaka mae dam nahi na ki is ghodi ki sawari kar sake, (Raju ki ankho mae dekh kar), kya tere andar dam hai savari karne ki..
Raju ne fir apna ek hath niche le jakar kamla ki, ek kulhe ko kass kar daba diya, jisse kamla ke mhu se ek miti siski nikal gai
Kamla- ahhhhh, Raaaaaajjjjaaa, ahhhhh mmmm
Raju- kya chachi ye ghoda 1 kya kai Ghodi ki Sawari kar sakta hai itna dam hai, is ghode ke andar par, ek baat bolo kaki, agar main ek baar sawari suru kar di fir, apni marji se kabhi bhi sawari karunga, tum jhel to pawogi na ..
(kamla ki khule (ass) ko apne hatho se masalte hue raju bola)
Kamla - ahhhhh, are jalim tu ek baar to sawari kar, fir ye ghodi rahegi to tere kaka ki, par iski sawari sirf tu karega..
Ab raju se bhi control nahi ho raha tha, kyuki raju ka sher apne uffan mae aa gaya tha, To raju ne sidhe kamla ko apni god(गोद) mae utha liya aur, ghar andar jakar, usko wahi uthar diya, aur.. aur diwali se chipka kar
Raju- kaki muje bata kya kaka tere in lal.. lal honto ko payar nahi karte hai..
Kamla- nahi re tere kaka se to kuch hota hi nahi hai, kyu
Raju- koi baat nahi kaki main hu na, ab main teri sari dili icha puri karunga
aur fir raju , apni pyari kaki ke, lal honto se apne hont chipka diya, ek payasi aurat (kamla), aur Kamasutra ka student raju, dono badi talab se ek dusre ke honto ka ras pine lage, kamla bichari to yese raju ke honto par tut padi, jese kisi bahut dino se bukhe ke samne roti aa jaye
Ab seen kuch yesa tha ki, kamla ke dono hath diwal se chipke hue tje, aur raju ka ek hath, kamla ke gale ke piche se pakda hua tha
Todi der baad, dono ne apni ye jabardast kiss khatm ki, kamla ki ankhe lal ho chuki tabhi raju uski ankho mae dekhta hua bola..
Raju- kaki wo kaki mujko bahut payas lagi hai mujhe kuch pina hai..
Kamla(nase ke jese) - ha.. ha.. bol na re tere kaki tera har hukm manegi bata kya piyega..
Raju- kaki mujhe na ajj dudh pine ka, bahut man kar raha hai..
Kamla- dudh pina hai tik hai, main abhi tere yaha se dudh lati hu..
Raju- kaki tum samjhi nahi mujhe wo dudh nahi pina hai, mujho to
Aur ye bol kar raju ne kamla ke balaus ko hata kar, uski ek dudh ko kass kar dabane laga aur bola..
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Raju - Kaki iska dudh pina hai mujko, bol pine degi na mujko isko bol na (aur ek baar kas kar uske dudh ko masal diya)
Kamla- ahhhhh hhhhh raaajaaa, aaram se re, dard hota hai, aaahhh dhire dhire, yese hi dhire se re, par inme dudh nahi aata hai re...
Raju- To kab ayega aata hai isme dudh isme kaki bolo..
Kaki- are jab Koi aurat baccha peda kare, tabhi isme dudh aata hai re, jalim..
Raju ne apne hont kamla ke honto ke paas le gaya aur dhire se, kamukta se, kamla se bola
Raju- achha kaki to iske liye, mujhe bina shadi ke hi, tere bacche ka bapp banana hoga..
Jese hi raju ne ye kaha kamla ki ankhe aur mhu kule raha gaye, Aur raju ne muke ka fayeda utha kar, ek baar fir apne hont, kamla ke honto se jod liye..
Kamla sab kuch bhul kar, Raju ke hont chus rahi thi aur idhar, Raju ne apne ek hath niche karke, kamla ki sari ke upper se hi, Apnd pure panje se, kamla ki chut ko daba diya, Kamla ye sahan nahi kar pai , kyuki wo bahut garam ho chuki thi, wo sisk padi par, uske honth raju ke girt mae the, Aur apne charamsukh ki wajha se, uski, dono ankhe upper ki or ho gai aur fir uski chut ka band tut gaya, aur kamla jadne lagi..aur us samay uske hont raju se alag ho gaye aur, Apni jivan mae ek alag hi santusti Uske chahre par dikh rahi thi...
Kaam hi kaam hai