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Story main super natural powers, fantasy world, system kuch waqt k liye hona chahiyey

  • Yes (fantasy world+super powers+system)

    Votes: 6 75.0%
  • Sirf fantasy world(no super powers and system )

    Votes: 0 0.0%
  • No(realistic story hi behtar hai)

    Votes: 2 25.0%

  • Total voters
    8

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** Update 8 **
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Asma aur sahil dono kamre m ek dusre ki taraf peet kiye chup chap bethe the
Sahil ko bohot hurt huwa tha
Jab use pata chala k us ka bhai kamran drug dealer satan k sath kaam kar raha tha
Aur is se bhi zyadha hurt woh kisi aur baat se tha
Qk use pata chal gaya tha k us ki biwi asma us k hi bhai kamran aur aur satan se chudwati hai
Na sirf us ne chudwaya bal k un k peshap ko bhi peya
Sahil ne bohot try kiya tha asma ko khush karne k liye us ne oral sex main bhi kafi maharat hasil kar li thi
Sirf is liye k asma is se khush ho jaye
Magar asma phir bhi bahir chudwati rahi
Aur fahad (jese sahil apna beta manta tha) bhi sahil ka beta nahi bal k kamran k beta tha
In baton ko soch soch kar sahil ander hi andar tooth raha tha
Asma ko bhi todha sa realize huwa k
Usne sahil k sath ghalat kiya
woh bechara toh har waqt us k sath kada tha

Na kuch kaha na kuch pucha mere past k baare main
Aur laga raha mujhe khush karne main
Pr main ne us se nafrat sirf is liye ki k
Us ne mere khilaf apni family ka itna kehna mana k mujh se shadi kare
Baki khamiya toh us main joh thi woh usne khud toh nahi chuni thi
Kala hona lund k bajaye lulli milna aur uper se premature ejaculation
Yani timing bilkul na k barabar hona
Meri aag thandi nahi ho rahi thi sahil se pr woh koshish karta
Woh har waqt mere liye mojoud hota pr main ne us k bare main kabhi nahi socha k us ko kese lagta hoga
Aur aaj jab usne mujhe mere 2 yaaro se chudwate huwe aur us k peeth peche uski burai ghairo se karte huwe dekh liya
toh main ne olta use hi na mard hone k taane diye
Shayad main ne use kuch zyadha hi keh diya
Sahil aur asma apne man main apni apni baate soch rahe the
*tud*
K achanak ek tez awaz aayi kesi bari lakdi girne ki
Aur kuch lamhe baad fahad joh courtyard main padhai kar raha tha us ki cheekh aai
Mamma!! papa!!!
Yeh awaz sunte hi asma aur sahil dono apni apni socho se nikal kar bahir ki taraf aae


Sahil jaise hi courtyard mein qadam rakhta hai, uski chadhi zameen par halki si awaaz karti hai.

Woh dekhta hai keh main door toot kar neche gira huwa tha aur fahad apni jagah nahi hota

Waha sirf us ki ketabain aur note book bikri huwi padi thi

Raat ki hawa thandi thi, lekin uske seene mein kuch jal raha hota hai—
bechaini… jo bina wajah ke nahi thi.
Asma bhi uske peeche aa chuki hoti hai. Uska chehra peela par jata hai.
“Yeh Fahad ki awaaz thi…?”
Uski saans tez ho jati hai.
Agla lamhe andheray se log nikalte hain.
Teen… phir chaar… phir aur.
Aur phir woh do chehray.
Kamran.
Aur Satan.
Sahil ki aankhon mein gussa nahi—pehle yaqeen toot-ta hai.
“Bhai…” Kamran muskurata hai, wohi purani, zehreeli muskurahat.
“Ab bhi ek paon par kharay hone ka shauq hai?”
Asma ka jism jaise pathar ka ho jata hai. Uski nazar Kamran se takrati hai—aur phir neeche jhuk jati hai.
Yeh jhukna… Sahil sab samajh jata hai.

jahan sach bina alfaaz ke cheekh raha hota hai.

Kamran—jo saalon pehle achanak gaayab ho gaya tha.
Asma—jo khamoshi mein toot rahi thi.
Aur Satan—jo is sab ko mazay ke taur par dekh raha tha.
Achanak asma ki nazar fahad pr padti hai jis k gale pr kamran ne chaku raka hota hai
Asma( ghabrati huwi tez awaz se): kamran yeh kya kar rahe ho yeh humara beta hai
Asma use dur se hi kehti hai

Magar humara lafz sun kar Sahil ki awaaz bharra jaati hai.
“Toh yeh tha woh sach… jo tum dono chhupa rahe thay.”
Sahil ko video se pata toh chal hi gaya tha
Pr usne abhi tak is baare main asma se baat nahi ki thi

Sahil ki baat sunne k baad bhi kamran kuch nahi kehta
Pr Satan hans deta hai, dheemi lekin zehreeli hanssi.
“Sach?”
Woh aagay barhta hai.
“Sach toh yeh hai, fauji… ke tumhari biwi ne tumhari bed par sirf neend nahi li.”
Asma cheekhti hai.
“Bas karo!”
Satan uski taraf dekhta bhi nahi.
“Wohi bed… jahan tum khud ko mard samajhte thay.”
Yeh tana Sahil ke seene mein goli ki tarah lagta hai.


Kamran Fahad ko aagay dhakka deta hai.
Bachcha laraz raha tha,
aankhon mein aansu jam chuke the.
“papa… mamma.... ”
Uski awaaz toot jaati hai.
Fahad ki yeh tootti awaz sun kar sahil ko dil main dard hota hai k
Us ka beta use pukar raha hai
Pr aaj use apne mulk aur family main kisi ek ko chunna tha
Wahi asma awaz sunte hi sedhe dodhte huwe fahad ki taraf jati hai
Pr pohncne ne se pehle hi ek goli ki awaz ghar main goonjti hai

Fahad jese hi apni ammi ki taraf dekta hai us ki rooh hi kaanp jati hai

Uski ammi red dress main us se kuch kadam door zameen pr khoon se latpat bilkul sakin halat main padhi thi.
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Update 8 yahi khatam hota hai
Readers se suggestion lena tha k main story main fantasy world, super power, system temporary tor pr add kar sakta hoon
Ya story sirf realistic world main hi ho
 

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** Update 9 ***

⚠️ Warning / Content Notice

Is update mein shadeed tashaddud, khoon-kharaba aur brutly murder ke manazir bayan kiye gaye hain. Yeh content kuch readers ke liye pareshan-kun ya disturbing ho sakta hai. Sensitive readers aur kam-umar afraad isay parhne se gurez karein.

Fahad jese hi apni ammi ki taraf dekta hai us ki rooh hi kaanp jati hai

Uski ammi red dress main us se kuch kadam door zameen pr khoon se latpat bilkul sakin halat main padhi thi.
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Fahad(chillate huwe): ammi!!!

Satan: lagta hai mahol todha emotional ho gaya toh sabhi log 2 min tak is ki mot ka gham manate hai

Phir 2 mint tak sirf fahad ki rone ki awaze ghar main goonj rahi thi

Aur fahad apni ammi ki taraf jane lagta hai pr kamran uski gardan pr rakhe huwe chaku ko aur gardan pe dabata hai
Jis se fahad ki gardan se ek boond khoon niklta hai

Fahad apni jagah sidha kadha ho kar thook nigalta hai

Fahad nam ankho se apni ammi ki lash ko dekh raha hota hai

Sahil bhi apni patni ko dekh raha hota hai
Bina kisi emotions k jess us k andar emotions hi mar gaye ho

Usk hath se chadhi gir chuki thi

Magar jab uski nazar fahad k gale se nikal rahe khoon ki boond pr padhti hai

Toh woh ek per se hi sidha kamran ki taraf jata hai fahad ko chudane

Pr satan bena waqt zaya kiye ek aur goli sahil k us per main marta hai joh sahi tha

Goli per main lagte hi sahil ek cheekh k sath zameen pr gir jata hai

Fahad(apne papa ko zameen pr karahte huwe dikh ker cheekhta ha) papa!!!

Ghar main sirf sahil ki karhne aur fahad ki rone ki awaz hi chal rahi thi

Itne main kisi k chalne se kadamon ki awaz aati hai joh sahil ki aur hi badh rahe the
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Aur woh koi aur nahi satan tha

Satan: tumhe kis ne kaha tha hamare kaam main tang adhane ka (haste huwe) pehle hi ek tang thi ab woh bhi gawa di

Sahil bas neche pada sun raha tha us ki ankhon main bebasi saaf dik rahi thi

Satan: Wese shayad tum soch rahe ho k yeh hame marega hi toh saboot dena ka kya faida
Toh main tumhare liye todha asaan kar deta hoon agar saboot de diya toh asaan mot doonga jise tumhari biwi ko diya
Shayad is liye k mera dil us pe a gaya tha pr tumhare aur tumhare bete ki mot se mujhe kuch farq nahi pade ga ab yeh tum pr hai k kis tarah moat chutte ho apne aur apne bete k liye

Itne main satan kamran ko ishara karta hai

Kamran ek hath se fahad k face pe chaku ko rakhta hai aur doosre hath se use tightly pakad leta hai
Jis se fahad bilkul bhi harkat nahi kar pata

Aur deere deere us k face pe chaku ko aur ander gosane ki koshish karta hai
Tez daar wale Chaku k face main guste hi skin katna shoru hoti hai

Aur fahad ki dard bari cheekhin ghar main goojh utti hai

Sahil apna dard bhool k jaldi se satan k age zameen pr hi hath jodh leta hai

Sahil: plz plz usko jane do main tumhe USB deta hoon plz usko jane do woh bachcha hai
Plz!! Plz!!

Satan sahil k aise zameen pr gidhgidhate huwe dekh k hasne lagta hai

Satan: tujhe kis ne kaha tha hum se panga lene k liye tujhe pata nahi hai k hamre peeche don ka hath hai
Aur USB toh tujhe dena hi hai
Tu ek retire army officer hum se bidhne ki soch raha tha
Tujhe apni retirement main hi khush ho jana tha
ab tujhe batata hoon k hum se bidhne ka kya anjaam hota hai

Itna bolte hi kamran fahad k kaan ko chaku se katne lagta hai

Fahad chatpatane lagta hai aur khud ko chudane ki nakaam koshish karta hai pr kamran ne use bohot tightly pakda howa tha jis se woh hil bhi nahi pata

Fahad k kaan ka operi hissa sir se alag hone lagta hai
Aur khoon behna shoru ho jata hai

Fahad ki dard bari tez tez cheekhain ghar k sannate ko tor rahi thi


Satan: bohot waqt ho gaya tha main ne yeh cheekhien nahi suni thi yeh dard wali chekhien sunna ek alag hi sangeet hai
tum sab taliya bajaw kitni mehnat kar k cheikh raha hai iska hosla badhaw shabash

Phir sare gunde kamran aur satan taliya bajane lag jate hai aur waha fahad tadap tadap kr cheekh ra ha hota hai

Phir satan taliya bajana band kar deta hai toh baqi sab bhi band kar dete hai

Satan: mujhe laga tha bachcha hai shayad utna is ki cheikhon main maza nahi ayega pr main ghalat tha


Sahil(rote huwe): chodho use chodho (kamran se) plz chodho use tumhe toh pata hai na k yeh tumhara beta hai phir bhi tumhe zara bhi reham nahi aa raha plz chodho use

Sahil ki batain sun kar bhi kamran k face pr kuch bhi bhav nahi aate

Itne main satan kamran ko rokne ka ishara jarta hai
Toh kamran rok jata hai pr abhi bhi fahad ko nahi chodta

Fahad ka ek kaan upar se thodha sir se alag ho gaya tha aur us se khoon hi khoon beh raha tha

Jese dikh k kisi ki bhi rooh kanp jaye pr waha satan k log aise hi chup chap kadhe ho k dekh rahe the
Jese in k liye yeh koi aam baat ho

Satan(sahil se): tumhe kya lagta hai yeh tumhara bhai hai iski ankhon main dekhon kya tumhe lagta hai is ko kabhi pachtawa hoga k is ne apne hi bete ka kaan sir se alag kiya
Nahi har giz nahi q k yeh tumhara kamran nahi hai yeh aab mera admi hai
Na kisi ka baap na kisi ka bhai sirf aur sirf mera Admi!!!

Sahil kamran ki ankhon main dekhta hai pr us ki ankhe khali hoti hai

Satan: ok ok ok
Main tumhe ek chance deta hoon
Wese marna toh tum dono ko hai hi pr agar
Tumne mujhe entertain kiya toh shayad thodha asan moat doon

Sahil(jaldi se): teek hai main tayar hoon ap us ko chod do

Satan: chodne ki baat kis ne ki tumse

Idhar udhar dekhte huwe

Satan(ek admi se): kya tu ne ki
(phir dosre se) kya tu ne ki

Pr sab shant hi kadhe the

Satan(sahil se joh zameen pr hi pada tha): USB kahan hai

Sahil: u u upar roomm mainn hai

Satan : yeh toh achi baat hai jaldi law (us k pairo ko dekhte huwe) pr tum toh langde ho ( kuch sochte huwe shitani smile k sath) chalo khel ko todha aur mazedar banate hai
(sahil se) tum jaldi woh saboot yaha law agar late huwe toh har 30 seconds k baad ek ek goli chale gi is larke pr

Sahil (gidgiate huwe): plz plz aisa mat karo woh uper k room main hai

Satan(devil smile): yahi toh khel ka maza hai main dekhna chahta hoon k langda kitna tez chal sakta hai ha ha ha
( gundon se) tum sab kya dekh rahe ho ginthi shuru karo

Gaunde: 1. 2. 3

Sahil ginthi sunte hi apne haton ki madad se sidhyo pr chadhne lagta hai
Woh apne pairo ko jis se khoon beh raha tha usko gasittne lag jata hai

Gunde: 12. 13

Sahil k per k khoon se sidhya poori tarah beeg jati hai aur satan yeh dekh ker has raha hota hai

Gunde: 25. 26. 27. 28. 29.
Sahil rengte rengte uper chad ker room ki taraf jata hai toh use goli chalne ki awaz aati hai
Aur is k sath fahad ki ek aur dard bari cheikh sunai deti hai pr woh kuch nahi kar sakta tha

Gunde( phir se ginti suru karte hai) : 1, 2

Sahil jaldi jaldi kamre main jate hi almari ko pakadte huwe utne lag jata hai aur almari ko khol ker safe kholne lagta hai k use ek aur goli chalne ki awaz k sath dard bari cheikh sunai deti hai
Woh USB nikal ker phir se zameen pr rengte huwe sidhyo ki taraf aata hai

Gunde: 17 18

Sahil jaldi pohonchne k liye sidhyo pe khud ko ludka leta hai

Satan( usko ludakte huwe dekh ker) : yeh toh kafi tez hai mujhe laga tha k shayd 3 4 koli aur mardoonga

Sahil k sidhyo pe ludakne ki wajah se sir aur naak se khoon behne lagta hai pr woh iski parwa kiye baghair rengte huwe usko USB deta hai

Woh fahad ki taraf dekhta hai joh zameen pr pada dard se karah raha tha
Usk jism se jagah jagah khoon nikal raha hota hai
Jis se saaf saaf pata chalta hai k usko kahan kahan pe goli lagi hai

Sahil se USB lete huwe woh ek aur goli fahad k halak(gale) pr chala deta hai jis se fahad wahi tarap tarap ker mar jata hai

Sahil ki ankho se apne bete ki mut per ansu toh beh rahe the pr use is baat ki rahat thi k ab use aur dard nahi jhelna pade ga

Satan(kamran se) : ab is ka kya kare kon si saza de ese

Kamran(joh khamosh reh ker sirf dekh raha tha): wese saza toh ese pehle hi bohot mil chuki hai magar ese aur saza deni bhi zaroori hai k aage hum se koi ulajne ki ghalti na kare

Satan(tali marte huwe): mujhe laga tha k tujhe apne bhai ki yeh halat dekh ker taras ayega
Magar tum ne sabit ker diya k tum mere admi ho

Satan phir gun sahil ki taraf point ker k us ki back main 3 4 goliya mar deta hai jis se sahil khoon se lat pat neeche zameen pr hi sir rakhta hai

Satan: ghabraw nahi tum abhi nahi mar rahe main ne back main goli mari hai jis se tum kuch 15 20 ghante zindha reh ker mout ka maze dhire dhire lo gye

Yeh keh ker satan apne admiyo k sath waha se nikal jata hai

Sahil apne hi ghar ke farsh par pada tha۔ aur unko andhere main ghayab hote huwe dekhta raha.

woh ghar jo kabhi hansiyon se bhara rehta tha، aaj laashon ki khamoshi se bojhal tha۔ us ke bagal mein us ki biwi aur bachche ke be-jaan jism pade thay

woh nishaniyan jo Satan ne reham ke baghair chheen li thin۔

Jismon se behte khoon ne farsh par lakeerein bana di thin، aur har ek lamha sahil ko ehsaas dila raha tha ke maut us ke andar dheere dheere utar rahi hai۔


Lab kanpe۔ awaaz toot-ti hui nikli، jaise har lafz khoon mein dooba ho۔

Sahil(dard se karahte huwe) : kya main ne kuch ghalat kiya tha
(apne bete aur biwi ko dekh ker) jis se mujhe aur mere biwi bacho ko is tarah marna padh raha hai kya yaha koi insaf karne wala nahi hai woh shetan (satan) drugs se massom bacho ki zindagi tabah kerta hai larkiyo ki tashkari kerta hai na jane kitne logo ki be rehmi se jaan li hai use jeene ka haq hai aur hum jo us k khilaf awaz utate hai unhe nahi
Yeh kaha ka insaf hai

Us ki aankhon se aansu beh kar farsh par gir pade—biwi aur bachche ke khoon se mil kar۔

“Main mazboot nahi tha…

agar mujhe ek aur moqa mil jaye…

sirf ek…

to main dikhana chahta hoon ke zulm k nishan mitte hai k nahi

In ko in k kiye ki saza 100 gunah kar k lothaooga

Bas... sirf... ek... moqa…”

Aur phir ghar par woh khamoshi utar aayi jo cheekhon se bhi zyada bhaari hoti hai۔
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Ap apni raye de k main story main fantasy world add karoon ya sirf realistic world main hi likhon.
 

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