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rajat_123

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Ek salah or mangna chahta hun
Mein pehli bar kahani likh raha hun yahan par kya is forum par bhagwan ka naam likhna mana hai
 

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Congratulations for new thread bro
 

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Mein rajat ,
Aj ek esi khani shuru karne jaa raha hun jo kahani reality mein hui to hai par sabse gupt rehsyao mein likhe Jani wali kahani ban sakti is kahani har ek lafz sach hai bas mein characters aur jagah ka name change karunga🙏🏻

Update 1.
Ek chote se kasbe jiska nam harshpur tha mein rehne wala ek ladka bahut hi sidha or bhola jisko gali kya hoti ye bhi nahi pata par bhole ka purn samarpit bhakt jab vah leen hota bhole mein tab usko yad hi na rehta ki kha par hai vo Maan ka saaf .
Bachpan me maa ne ek dor de di thi hath mein bhole ki aur kaha kabhi mat chodna ise , ek din bhole ko bhi lagne laga is chote se bhakt ka kitna saaf man hai
Or isiliye unhone is bhakt ki pariksha lena socha or pure 3.5 varsh tak pariksha li phele uska naam ashvin tha par bad mein bhole ne sapne mein darshan de uska naam rakha surya
Ashvin ko koi nahi janta tha ek anath tha uski maa or pitaji ka ek car accident mein mratyu ho gayi thi or ab wo akela pad gaya tha taw - chacha ne usko god lekar uska sab property par kabja le liya or usko bhatakna chod diya us vakt uski umr keval 18 varsh thi , uske pas pese ke naam par ek 10 rs ka note tha jab use ghar se nikal diya ghar ke pas mein railway station tha to rat ko ek general dibbe mein beth gaya or ho chala uski
Jindgi ka naya safar shuru
Kehte hai mitti se bhare lote ko dhan se bharne ka koi fayda nahi , lote ko khali karna hi hoga dhan bharne ke liye isiliye uska lota yani jindgi purn rup se khali ho chuki thi woh ek fakir ke mafik ho gaya
Mumbai ki train mein betha tha wo
Aur jab betha tha sochte sochte ankh lag gayi or Mumbai pahuch gaya bhatakta bhatakta ek bhole ke mandir mein pahucha mandir band hone wala tha to garbh grah mein chup gaya or nind lag gayi uski sham ke time mandir ke kapat khule pujari ji andar gaye unhe ashvin dikha jo gehri nind mein soya tha attractive personality thi par sharir par phate kapde the pujari ji ne sir par hath pherte hue ashvin se pucha kon ho , to usne sara kissa suna diya , to pujari ji ko bada pyar aya uspar or daya bhi , pujari ji ki koi santan nahi thi, unhone socha kal hi to mene arji lagayi aur aj ye ladka shayad bhole ne hi bheja hai ise mere liye to pujari ji ne kaha tum mere sath mere ghar chaloge waha tumhe jo tumhare maa baba ka pyar ho tumse chin Gaya tha wo wapis milega tumhe Ashwin ki ankho mein ansu aa gaye
Aur usne pujari ji ko jor se gale laga liya aur balance bigda gir pade par gale tab bhi Lage rahe yeh sab ghatna garbh grah keandar hi ho rahi thi bhole ke samne।
Agar story line acchi lagi ho to plz like , comment and share
 

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Dusra part kal dunga ,🙏🏻 dhanyawad
 
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Agar ap sabh ko story ka title and Surat acchi lagi ho to shuruat thodi si slow rahegi par age stor y bahut jyada intresting ho jayegi shuruat base hogi story ka only 1 update or slow rahegi
 
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बढ़िया शुरुवात रजत भाई। बहुत समय बाद कुछ अलग पढ़ने को मिल रहा है।

ओर हमें उम्मीद है अपडेट समय से आयेंगे।
 
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💖💖💖💖💖💖🌺🌺🌺🌺🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝
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rajat_123 भाई अगला अपडेट आयेगा या फिर नहीं
 

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rajat_123 भाई अगला अपडेट आयेगा या फिर नहीं
Ayega bhai bas wait kar raha tha
 
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