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Adultery A K the don

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andyking302

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aalu

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revo update 1&2....

neend khulte hi aisi manhoos khabar maa aur baap dono ek jhatke mein khatm... jis pariwar ne jeete jee inhe nahin apnaya jab lawarish ho gaya toh iski yaad aa gayee... bete ka farz toh isse ada karna hi tha mukhagni de ke... lekin jiss gadii ka warrish isse banaya jaa rah ussi gaddi waalo ne toh isse aur iski maa ko dutkara tha... akhir dada ko pote se bara prem hota hain aisa suna hain kya unki ikchha na hui ek baar bhi isse dekhne kee jeete jee...

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aur unke marne ke baad bhi udhar se koi nahin aaya inhe lene... wo toh bhala ho uske papa sachhe insan the jo saath na chhora nibhate aaye akhiri saans tak... sach kahe toh ek tarah se rakhel kee hi izzat toh samaaz deta hain aisi patni ko... mana kee dadajee ke samay mein uske papa kee na chali lekin jab wo khud maalik don ya raja kahe jo bhi ban gaye tab unhone kyun nahin shamil kiya...
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isse chah bhi na hain aur honi bhi na chahiye jis khokhle samman kee chalte usse aur uski maa ko dutkara gaya uss taaj ka kya fayda jo jeete jee samaan na de saka aur marne ke baad sar ka taaj ban gaya yeh...
 
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aalu

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revo update 3 & 4....

ghar mein sabhi iss gaddi pe hi baithna chahte hain... isse iss jhamele mein parna bhi na chahiye koi apna kehne ke liye bacha bhi toh na hain idhar... aur iske mama ko kyun itni chul machi hain iske gaddi pe baithane kee... inka kya labh jo itni jor diye jaa rahe hain... //// man kee shakti deemag hi toh sabse bari takat hain iss sansar mein... asli kaun nakli kaun apna kaun paraya kaun shab yahee toh pehchan karta hain aur yahee deemag jab doosre deemagg mein jhankana shuru kar de toh asli takat tab paida hoti hain....

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man ke baate jante wakt kisi ne aisa jikra na kiya jo iske pita ke ahit mein haath ho... lekin isse pasand kisi ne na kiya... akhir takat hain hi aisi cheej wo bhi 40 gaon pe lalach toh aana hi tha... lekin mera phir se wahee prashn hain iske pita ne warish banne ke baad bhi iski maa ko wo haq kyun na diya... raja hi sarvesarva hota hain uski hukam kee nafarmani kaun karta bhala... aur utne paise the toh aise kitni rakhail rakh shakte the wo do ghar hi kharid ke koi ehsan na kiya unhone ispe...

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papa kee terahvi tak toh ruka lekin kya maa ke liye wo karm jaroori na hain... kya beta wo sirf baap ka hi hain apni maa ka nahin.... sala yehan toh alag hi raag hain matlab iska baap bhi aaiyaas kism ka aadmi tha.. tabhi udhar bas 7 din tak hi aata tha.. jab idhar badal badal ke maze jo mil rahe the... chakri karna alag baat hai yehan toh gulam paal rakhhe hain... titlil ek batooni ladki hain jo iske roop pe mohit ho chuki hain... lekin yeh abhi shok mana raha hain apne maa baap ke gujarne ke aur aisi awastha mein vyabhichar kya sahi hota... khair uska apne oopar kaabu hain...
 

aalu

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revo 5 & 6 update....

ek marte hue admi ke vachan ke karan inke saath aisa sulook hua... marne waale mar gaye lekin jo jinda the unhe toh khus rahne ka haq tha... samaj kaise dekhta hoga doosri patni anaitik sambandh yahee toh kehta hoga... muh pe na keh sake lekin peeth pechhe yahee ijjat rahii hogi... aur mana kee iski maa ko idhar aana manahi thee lekin kabhi isse kyun nahin le ke gaya iska baap... ek vachan iski maa se bhi kia tha jeevan bhar saath nibhane ka wo toh tor diya doosre ke liye... khair jo beet chuka uski baate kaisi lekin dukh toh hota hain yaad kar ke...

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akhir jiske pass behen nahin hoti wo behen ke pyar ke liye tarasta jaroor hain aur ek aisa insan jo ek hi jhatke mein anath ho jaye achanak itne riste milne pe prem vashibhoot ho hi jata hain... saala sara dosh kee jar hi yeh dadi aur dada hee hain... lekin bhai yeh kriti kaun hain intro se nadarad thee...

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waise ksii shog kee halat mein ghar mein aisa swagat kiya nahin jata jaisa aniket ka kiya gaya hain... dadi ne bhi vachan ka wasta de ke palla jhar liya khair launda nyee maal matlab maa ko dekh ke unka dukh dard door karna chah raha hain... ab gaddi pe baithne ka sabhi keh rahe hain aur don toh title mein bhi hain toh baithega hee...

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wasie sauteli maa itna jyda pyar dikha rahi hain akhir majra kya hain pati ke baad kaheen beta mmhmhmm pe dular aa raha hoga... khair naye pariwar mein swagat hain aniket ka...

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aalu

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revo update 7 & 8....

akhir kaisa raja aur kaisi praja ... democracy hain bhai wo log ek raja pe kyun nirbhar hone lage samashya ke liye nyayalay hain police hain... toh yeh kis prakar dekhbhaal karega... khair ek baat agar aaj uski maa jevit hoti sirf baap hi mara hota toh kya tab bhi uska swagat hota iss haweli mein... nahin yeh ek tarah se sabhi matlabi log hee toh hain.. besahara hue toh yaad aa gayee...

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kahir itni pyari do chhoti behne hain koi bhi bhai pighal jaye... jo itne warso se intejar mein thee akhir kabhi toh milenge apne bhaiya se... lekin aana yehan kuchh sukoon ke pal de bhi na saka aur yeh gehma gehmi shuru ho gayee... dushmano ko bhi yeh mauka sahi jaan para shokakul pariwar pe hamla aur jyada gehra ghaoa... ya phir naye raja ka kaam tamam... kaheen chacha iske toh nahin in shab ke pechhe...

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desi tammanchey standard toh bari low hain inke guard kee.... irada toh wifal kar gaya lekin bachte bachate ghayal ho hi gaya... shayad inka leader bata sake asli kaatil kaun hain... kisne isse anath kiya.. lekin koi sahi salamat bacha nahin saare ghayal aur jo bacha wo maut ke muh mein hain... ab jinda ho toh bata sake bheja kisne hain..
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marne wala purana dushman akhir iske baap ne usse saja jo dilwayee thee... kahir samsher singh pushtaini dushmani nibhate aaya hain.. kya wahee hain isss shabke pechhe ya koi aisa jisse gaddi kee chah hain iske rishtedaro mein se hee...
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lekin iski dono bua abhi tak apne eklaute bhanje se milne na aaye na hi wo apne bhai ke shog mein upasthit thee...
 
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