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Fantasy A YOUNG WEREWOLF (COMPLETED)

Just yes or no

  • Yes

    Votes: 34 91.9%
  • No

    Votes: 3 8.1%

  • Total voters
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  • Poll closed .

Killerpanditji(pandit)

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*SMALL INTRODUCTION*


HERO:- "Khushal"
About:- 18 years long tall a handsome guy with cute face. Completed his school and ready to go to the college.
And other information you will know in the story.


MOTHER:- Naina, a mature lady. Her age is about 38 years. She is very pretty but little bit angry.


SISTER:- "TANIYA". She is twin of Khushal she is very pretty like an angel. She also completed her 12th, and ready to join the college. But she has anger issue and she also have a boyfriend.

FATHER:- Not important.


SAM:- Boyfriend of Taniya. He has very less role in this story so he is not important.



ALIYA:- age 18 and one of the hottest girl in the school and a cheerleader, she is also the student of khushal's school. Ande she had a great role in this story.



There are more characters in this story, whom we talk about going forward.


And main thing this is not a insect wali story?? so hope na lagaye.


UPDATE kal se regular aayenge, guys so some love.:love3::love3:
Nice introduction
 

Killerpanditji(pandit)

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Is story ke 11 Episode hai aur har episode ke minimum 7 parts hai maximum kitne bhi ho sakte hai.

So,
Episode 1 :- Bit by a girl and go through the Chances....

Episode 2:- khushal learnt what he has became....

Episode 3:- will khushal steal manisha and sofiya from Devastator's Pack....

Episode 4:- Khushal and Devastator's first confronation....

Episode 5:- Sara makes a mistake, khushal on defensive.....

Episode 6:- Khushal destiny is revealed..

Episode 7:- Khushal and Devastator plan to fight, aliya and sara chat....

Episode 8:- Khushal prepare for final showdown with Devastator...

Episode 9:- Everything goes terribly wrong....

Episode 10:- The aftermath of khushal's fight with vampires....

Episode 11:- The conclusion....

Jo bhi mene ye backchodi peli hai iska mujhe pata nhi kya kehte hai isko bas padh lena...

Update bhi thodi der baad aa jayega..
STAY TUNNED....
STAY SAFE....

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Qaatil

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EPISODE :- Bit by a girl and go through the Chances


Part:- first


{UPDATE:- 1}


Khushal ne piche ke darwaje ko chupchap band kar diya taaki uski maa aur judwa behen ki ladai ki awaz na sunayi de.
Aaj wo fir se lad rahe they aur khushal ko unki cheekh pukar sunne ka koi mann nhi kar raha tha.

Pichle month khushal aur taniya 18 years ke ho gaye they. Taniya ne apni 12th class complete karne ke baad ghar me ye baat ched di ki wo apne boyfriend sam ke sath live in relationship me uske flat me rehna chati hai.

( Chokiye mat ye log india me nhi rehte )

Lekin khushal ki mom naina ne is baat ka virodh kiya tha lekin ab ye baat roj raat ko tark- vitark ka visay ban gaya hai.
Naina ka ek sapna tha ki uske bache uske paas rehke hi college kare lekin taniya ka ye live in relationship ka bhoot unke sapne me fit nhi baith raha tha.


Aaj raat ko bhi hamesha ki tarah gehra andhera hai aur khushal ghar ke backyard me ek pedh ke niche baitha hua hai.
Usne apna chasma sahi kiya aur samne wale ped ki rekhao ko dekhne laga.
Wo khud nhi janta tha ki wo college ke baare me kaisa mehsoos karta hai.
Ek saal pehle inke pita ne inhe ek ladki ke liye chhod diya tha aur inke sir pe kayi loan bhi chhod gaye. Khushal ne socha usey kuch dino ke liye college chod dena chaiye aur apni mom ki help karne ke liye kuch kaam karna chaiye.
Uske grade ache they lekin itne ache nhi they ki wo puri scholarship le sake haa taniya le sakti thi. Khushal fir sochne laga ki wo apni mom ki salary pe kaise apni fees dega.


Wo apne pita ke chale jaane ke baad apne dada - dadi ke ghar me rehne chale gaye they kyuki unki mom unke ghar ka rent nhi de sakti thi. Halaki uski mom ke mata pita ne unki bhut help ki thi jitni unse ho sake.

Thode se badal hatte aur chandrma ne lakdiyo par apni roshni daali, khushal baithe-2 fisal ke let sa gaya tha aur soch raha tha ki kisi tarah is damankari raat se rahat to mili.

" Waise is desh me rehne ke faayde to bhut hai" - usne khud ke mann me socha


Usne BOG WATER CREEK ke baare me socha. Usey nhi pata tha ki log isey BOG WATER CREEK kyu kehte hai?
Lekin ek baar usko uske dadaji ne bataya tha ki sadiyo se log isey isi naam se jante hai. Ye CREEK me ek jagah ka naam hai jaha pata nhi kaha se paani ek chattan pe girta tha aur wahi aaspass jama ho jata tha bhut sunder jagah hai ye.
Khushal waha pe bethna aur frogs ko usme khelte dekhna bhut pasand tha. Wo hamesa is jagah aksar baitha karta tha jab wo pareshan ho ya uske dimaag me kuch baate chal rahi ho.

Aur same condition ab uske sath thi to wo chal diya us jagah ki taraf, lagbhag 20 minute ek baad wo us jagah pe pahucha aur yu raat ko akele jungle me ghumna khatre se khali nhi tha.
Time-2 par chandrma badalo me chup jaa raha tha jis ke kaaran raat ko andhera aur badh jaa raha tha aur sunsaan jungle aur bhi jyada khatrnaak ho raha tha. Wo jhadiyo me tripping karta raha aur rasta banane ke liye tehniyo ko dhaka deta raha, kaayi se dhaki chattan ko saaf karne ke baad wo uspe baith gaya aur us paani ko ghurne laga jo raat me kaala ho gaya tha.

"Mujhe ab iske ander ek bhi frog dikhayi nhi dega" khushal ne apne mann me bola.

Pattiyo ki sarsaraht ki awaj ne khushal ke sir ko jhakjhor diya, dar usey thoda bhut jakadne laga tha lekin jab waha koi dikhayi nhi diya to wo shaant ho gaya aur khud ke dimaag ko jhatka ki kuch bhi khatra nhi hai.

Tabhi usey laga ki ek racoon pani ke paas aa rha hai to usne socha sayad paani pine aa raha hoga.
Tabhi usne ek chapak ki awaz suni aur wo wahi baraf ki tarah jam gaya aur hamare khushal bhaiye ki gaand fat gayi kyuki usey ye racoon se bhut badi cheez lag rahi thi.

Khushal ne apne sarir ko bilkul bhi hilane ki kosis nhi ki aur apni aankho ko tez karke andhere me ghurne laga aur uske kaan to maano bas jungle ki har ek choti se choti ahat ko sunne ke liye taiyar they.

Badalo ne dheere-2 pool ke us side dekhne ki anumati de di aur chandrma ko itna bahar nikal diya ki waha pe andhere me ab sab dikhne lage, tabhi khushal ne dekha ki ek behad sunder si ladki pedho ki aad se bilkul nagn awastha me nikal ke aa rahi hai jo maahol ko kaafi garam kar rahi hai wo chalte huye aati hai aur paani me utarne lagti hai usne khushal ko nhi dekha tha kyuki khushal andhere me tha, lekin khushal to maano ruk sa gaya ho usse to hilla bhi nhi jaa raha tha.


Us ladki ne apna sir uper uthaya aur hawa sungh li. Usne apne sir ko sawdhani se daye baye moda jaise wo kisi khatre ka intezaar kar rahi ho. Khushal wahi baitha raha aur usey dekhta raha usne socha wo usey dekhega jab tak wo usey nhi dekh leti, lekin wo ladki to maano hawao ko sunghte huye khushal ki taraf dheere-2 badhi aur badhti rahi jab tak wo pahuch na gayi jaha khushal baitha tha.

Khushal ne apni taktaki uspe laga di, kyuki wo uske sudol sarir ko chodke kahi aur nhi dekh sakta tha.
Khushal ye bata sakta tha ki uske baal lambe hai par kis colour ke hai ye nhi.

Uske bhare huye stano (boobs) ne khushal ki aankho me kabza kar liya tha, kyuki uske stan chandrma ki roshni me bheege hone ke karan apni ek alag hi chamak bakher rahe they.

Ek shan (moment) ke liye chandrma ki roshni tez huyi aur khushal ko us ladki ke chere ke niche uske gale aur stano ko dhakte huye ek taral dikha jo ki thoda dark color ka lag raha tha.

Khushal mann me:- ye ye to khoon hai sayad isey chot lagi hai.

Khushal himmat karke:- Are you okay?


Khushal ka pura dhyan bas is baat pe tha ki is ladki ko sayad madat chaiye, khushal ne der na karte huye uske bagal ke pani me chalang laga di. Lekin aisa karna khushal ko bhut bhari pada aur khushal ke aise kudne se wo thoda ghabra gayi aur jaise hi khushal ne apna hath uske kandhe pe rakhne ke liye badhaya, us ladki ne apne tagde reflexes ya ye kahu usne sungh ke khushal ke hath ko pakda aur jor se uspe daant gada diye, khushal jor se chillaya aur kud ke usse dur ho gaya.

Khushal:- miss aapko chot lagi hai. Me bas aapki madad karne ki kosis kar raha hu.

Ladki:- stay away from me.

Wo ghurayi aur thoda sa bent hoke fighting stance le liya apne nagnta ko chupane ki bajaye jaise usey isse koi farak hi nhi padta ho.

Khushal:- dekho apko bleeding ho rahi hai apko hospital le jana hoga.

Tabhi khushal ko uska chera saaf dikhayi deta hai aur usey realize hota hai ki ye to aliya hai

Khushal:- Aliya! Kya ye tum ho?

Aliya:- ohh shit! Khushal ab tumhe yaha se niklna hoga.

Aur usko fir apne nagan awstha ka abhas hua aur wo pani me baith gayi ab bas uska face bahar tha.

Khushal:- lekin aap ahaat hai.

Aliya:- me ahaat nhi hu, ye mera khoon nhi hai , khushal ek baat dhyan se suno tumhe abhi yaha jana hoga. Me tumse promise karti hu ki kal tumhe sab samjha dungi. Please abhi ghar jaao please khushal!

Khushal ke sarir ka har hissa usey waha rukne ko bol raha tha par wo usey jaane ko keh rahi thi

Khushal :- thik hai me jaa raha hu lekin kal school me mujhe batana hoga ki ye sab kya hai?

Aliya:-okay i promise. Ab jaao.

Khushal:- kya tum wakayi me thik ho?

Khushal ka jaane ka mann nhi kar rha tha isliye usne baat aage badhayi.

Aliya ( gusse me) :- yes goddamm it. Get the fuck out of here.

Aliya ne palat ke doosri taraf dekha jaise usey kisi ke aane ka intezaar ho


Khushal pani se bahar nikal aaya aur jaane se pehle ek baar uski taraf dekha wo abhi bhi pani me chokana hoke baithi thi jaise koi khatra aane wala ho

Khushal waha se nikal jata hai aur pure raste jo ab huya usko apne dimaag me rakhke sochne lagta hai, usey kuch bhi samjh nhi aa raha tha kyuki aaliya ek dum nagan aur khoon se lathpath thi, usne in sab baato me apne hath ki taraf dhyan hi nhi diya jaha pe aliya ke kaatne ki wajah se uske hath se bhut sara khun ris raha tha aur aur uski white shirt ko adhi karne kamyab ho chuka tha. Usne faisa liya ki agar kal school me aliya nhi mili to wo bade adhikariyo se is baare me baat karega....

(Dekhte hai khushal ke sath aage kya hota hai aur aliya waha pe kya kar rahi thi aur kiska wait kar rahi thi.)


TO BE CONTINUED ??


APUN KO REBU MANGTA:hit:
Good one bro, keep it up ❤️❤️
 
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AK 25

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:congrats: for new story bhai....
Behtareen start hai story ki.... Ye India mein nhi kisi aur country ki based story hai :hmm2:

Jo bhi ho start to bhut achi hui hai :applause:

Bhai font and text normal rakhiye aasani rahegi... Color aap black ke lava koi aur dark colour use kar lijiye.

Baki abhi jyada kuch kahna mushkil hai par this is something new and agle update ka wait rahega
Thanks for your support bhidu :flowers2:
Jo bhi aapne batayi hai aage se dhyan rakhunga..
 

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Nice update and good start brother....
to baap ne dusri shadi karli or inko chor diya....maa ki kamai se gujara hota hai.....bahen apne ashiq k sath rehna chahti hai....par maa ko ye pasand nhi.... family hai to sath par ek tarike se bikhri hui hai...isi bich humara hero bahar ghumne Jaata hai aur chupke se ek nagn ladki ko tadta hai.... aur woh ladki in bhai sahab ko kaat leti... dekhte hai ki is katne se bhai sahab k andar kya hota hai ki jo yeh bhediya bante hai......
keep writing....
keep posting.......
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Thanks bhidu:rose:
Sath bane rahiye bas
 
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