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sara ke ghar kaise aaya phir.. apne ghar se nikal ke sara ke ghar tak jab aaya toh suraj ki roushni na padi uspe kyaThanks for your beautiful review
And first thing vampire bas sun ki rays mein nahi nikal sakte bahar aur is time rick ek ghar mein hai to no sunrays and country canada hai matlab barf no sun rays
And saasen atak SI gayi thi, puri band nahi huyi thi.
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Nyc nyc fasana chahti ho but fasenge nahi humsara ke ghar kaise aaya phir.. apne ghar se nikal ke sara ke ghar tak jab aaya toh suraj ki roushni na padi uspe kya
aur vampire kab se saans lene laga..
Woh mare huye creatures hote hai

So khushal ke asli ma baap koi aur hi hai.. planning bhi khushal ki hi hai.. bas yahan pe ek twist hai hai ki yeh naina ya aliya ya rick yeh sab shayad mile huye hai...{UPDATE:-21}
Ye sab karke khushal normal hua aur samna ka nazara dekh ke khushal ke chehre pe saitani smile aa gayi.
Khushal:- Devastator tune aur tere baap ne asli darindagi dekhi hi kaha hai tumhe kya lagta hai tumhare paas hi dimag hai. Everyone is devil until the real devil comes. The game is on devastator.
Ab aage:-
Khushal tyler ke ghar se nikla aur apni car mein baitha aur phone nikal ke ek mssg kar diya kisi ko samne se bhi mssg aaya jisme likha tha done.
Aur ye mssg padh ke khushal khus ho gaya aur apni car ko sara ke ghar ki taraf dauda diya. Kuch 30 minute ki driving ke baad khushal sara ke ghar ke samne ruka aur sidha sara ke ghar ke ander ghus gaya. Sara hall mein baithi tv dekh rahi thi.
Khushal:- sara pack your bags for 1 week tum yaha nahi reh sakti, tumhari jaan ko khatra hai.
Sara:- okk wait.
Sara ne bhi jaldi se apna bag pack kiya aur apne parents ke liye ek message chod diya ki wo khushal ke sath jaa rahi hai ek week ke liye.
Khushal ne sara ko car mein bithaya aur car ko city ke bahar ki taraf mod di. Lagbhag 45 minutes ki driving ke baad wo log ek building ke samne ruke khushal ne sara ko car se bahar nikala aur aur building ki taraf chal diya, sara ko ye sab dekh ke hairani nahi ho rahi thi kyuki wo pehle bhi yaaha aa chuki thi. Dono under aaye aur lift ke paas aake khushal ne apna hath scanner pe rakh aur lift khul gayi.
Dono lift mein baith khushal ne 10 press kiya aur kuch hi second mein wo 10th floor pe pahuch gaye. Aur us floor pe bas ek door tha khushal ne us door pe ek red button ko press kiya to uske samne ek scanner aa gaya jispe khushal ne fir se apna hath rakh diya. Aur aisa karte hi wo door bhi khul gaya.
Dono ander gaye to ye ek apartment jaisa tha, ek dum luxurious dono ander aaye to samne hall ke sofe pe ek admi aur ek aurat baithi huyi thi. Wo dono khushal ko achanak se yaha dekh ke khus bhi huye aur shocked bhi.
Khushal:- mom! Dad!
Aur bhaag ke dono ke gale mil gaya.
Sara bhi un dono se gale mili aur fir wo chaaro sofe pe baith gaye.
Real mom:- beta tum yaha itni jaldi aa gaye to hamare plan ka kya hua kahi fail to nahi ho gaya.
Khushal:- nahi mom plan to fail nahi hua hai bas maine change kar diya hai plan ko bas ab naina aunty aur taniya ko safe kar doon fir ek ko bhi mahi chodunga.
Dad:- waise beta reader log to susupense mein hi mar jayenge.
Khushal:- inka bhi suspense khatam kar dunga lekin abhi nahi abhi to devastator ko khatam karna hai aur fir uske baap ko.
Dad:- lekin aise story ka plot change nahi karna chahiye.
Khushal:- ohhh come-on maine aisa karke aur mazedaar bana di hai story.
Dad:- chalo koi baat nahi.
Khushal:- okk main ab chalta hu sara ka dhyan rakhna.
Real mom:- kaha jaoge pehle.
Khushal:- pehle naina aunty ko bachane.
Teeno haan mein mundi hila ke khushal ko sehmati di aur khushal ko hug karke waha se vida kiya.
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Khushal building se bahar aaya aur jis car mein aaya tha usko wahi chod ke ek sports car nikali yellow colour ki aur usko dauda diya apne ghar ki taraf. Is time khushal ke face pe koi tension nahi thi balki wo khus tha ki uska plan kaam kar raha hai, jo usne bhut time se banaya hai.
Khushal ne apni car ko full speed mein pel diya aur 2 ghante ki driving ko 1 ghante mein cover karke apne ghar pahucha.
Car ko thodi door rok ke car se bahar aaya aur aankhe band karke kuch kara usne jisse uski smell normal ho gayi taki uski asliyat koi na pehchaan sake.
Main chupchap apne ghar ki taraf ho liya aur fir door se na jaa karke back door se ghar mein ghusa taaki kisi ko pata na lage ki main yaha aa chuka hu.
Khushal dabe kadmo se ghar ke ander ghusa aur hall ki taraf chal diya aur hall mein pahuchne se pehle ek curtain ke piche chhup gaya taki dekh sake ki kya ho raha hai. Aur usne hall mein dekh to koi nahi tha. Lekin isko thodi der hi intezaar karna pada kyuki sab log hall mein aa gaye jisme shaamil they aliya, manisha, sofiya, allen, naina aur rick.
In sab ko ek sath dekh ke khushal chonk gaya kyuki usne ye accept nahi kiya tha, usey laga tha ki ye log naina ke sath galat karenge lekin yaha to ulta tha aur ye rick yaha kya kar raha hai.
TO BE CONTINUED ??

balconies isliye hote taaki taazi hawa ke sath sath suraj ki kiran bhi pade...Nyc nyc fasana chahti ho but fasenge nahi hum
Saara ke ghar balcony se aaya
And saas isliye le raha tha kyuki wo koi normal vampire nahi hai aur ye baat clear ho chuki hai aage ke updates mein![]()

balconies isliye hote taaki taazi hawa ke sath sath suraj ki kiran bhi pade...
abhi tak khangali hi kaha hai story ko...savaalon list abhi tak aayi nahi hai... so don't worry
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koi nahi i am ready 




Red and blue ek source of energy hai jo kabhi khatam nahi hoti aur ye khel pehle se chala aa raha hai species badlti hai lekin energy wohi rehti haiab werewolf na rahke red guardian blue guardian ban gaye....
Wo sab ek chaal thi kyuki khushal nahi chahta tha ki uska sach itna jaldi king ko pata lageagar werewolf tha hi pehle se hi toh aaliya ki jariye kaatna
Taniya bhi bachpan se ek alpha werewolf hai aur wo waha se bhaag aayi kyuki john nahi rok sakta usey ya ye kahu ki devastator ne usey jaanbujh ke bhagne diya taki wo khushal tak pahucheKamal hai abhi tak werewolf bani bhi nahi aur devastatur aur uske gang se bachke bhi nikal aayi taniya.
Naina khushal ko khatam nahi kar sakti kyuki naina ki koi aukad nahi hai uske samne aur wo waise bhi usey bas itna pata hai jitna king ne usey bataya hainaina jab werewolf thi hi aur upor se is guardian whatever ki chamchi thi toh abhi tak kis liye ruki huyi thi... kis baat ki intezaar thi... jab khushal werewolf nahi bana tabhi chaal chal deti... intezaar kyun kiya... btw dusmani kya hai khushal se aur uske family walo se...
Bhediya hai lekin us time bhediya nahi tha wobhediya banne ke baad bhi sofe pe baith hai..
Wo pehle se hi behosh hone wale theyVegetarian werewolves se hai kya joh kaleja khata dekh behosh ho gaye
aur ek alpha ko seconds mein marna not possible Ye masooom sawal theywaise ye mahaz kuch masoom se savaal hai..
Isse bhi bahot zyada masoom savaalon ki jhadi baad aayenge ji![]()
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bahut khub...
Ab jaake lag rahi hai kahani manav bhediyon ki... khoon se bhari sani huyi update...
Khair.. lagta hai yeh khushal koi powerful werewolf mein se ek hai... pure blood wala maybe..
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skill
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naina jiSo khushal ke asli ma baap koi aur hi hai.. planning bhi khushal ki hi hai.. bas yahan pe ek twist hai hai ki yeh naina ya aliya ya rick yeh sab shayad mile huye hai...
Khair let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skill![]()
sab golmal hai

Awesome update bhai ji{UPDATE:-23}
Ab situation ye thi khushal bich mein khada tha aur uske samne naina aur rick khade they aur baaki 8 ne usey gher rakha tha.
Sab khushal ko dekh ke ghurra rahe they lekin khushal saant khada tha, usey pata tha ki wo saanti se ye ladayi jeet sakta hai bas usey gussa na aaye..
Ab aage:-
Khushal ye sab soch hi raha tha ki 2 vampire uski taraf aage badhe unki speed itni tez thi ki normal insaan ko dikhe bhi na lekin khushal ko wo saaf dikh rahe they undono ne khushal ko dhakka maarke girana chaha lekin khushal dono se bachke side hua hi tha ki uske pith pe ek laat padi jo allen ne maari thi khushal ne bhi palat ke ek laat allen ko de maari aur khushal ki laat ka impact bhut jyada tha to allen piche udta hua diwar se jaa takraya, khushal ne apna waar karke is taraf dekha hi tha ki uske muh pe teen mukke ek sath pade aur ye kaafi tez they.
Ye mukke aliya, sofiya aur manisha ne maare they khushal ko gussa aa raha tha lekin wo khud ko control karke unki taraf muda ho tha ki uski pith pe do laat padi jo baaki ke do vampires ne maari thi khushal thoda aage ko hua aur jaise hi undono ki taraf palta to rick ne uske sir pe laat maari aur ye laat itni tez thi khushal ghutno pe aa gaya, aur ghutno pe aaya hi tha ki 8 mukke ek sath uske face pe pade.
Khushal ki asliyat bahar aana chahti thi lekin khushal khud ko badi mushkil se control kiye huye tha.
Ab haal ye tha ki khushal bich mein pada tha aur 8 jane usey pit rahe they.
Rick aur naina sofe pe baith ke is khel ka maza le rahe they. Ab khushal bhi kayi der se pitey jaa raha tha to uski bhi aankhe band ho gayi aur wo behosh.
Rick:- bahut kamzor hai ye Devastator ko isey khatam kar dena chahiye.
Naina:- nahi isko aise nahi maar sakte ye jiska beta hai wo king ke sabse bade dushman they ab wo to mar gaye to ab wo saari dushmani isse nikalana chahte hai.
Aliya:- matlab!
Naina:- wo isko pehle ander se todna chahte hai aur fir isko tadpa tadpa ke maarna.
Rick:- pata nahi wo aisa kyu chahte hai lekin hum mein se koi nahi puch sakta unse ye sab.
Naina:- haa kyuki wo red gaurdian hai.
Allen:- ab is so called alpha ka kya karna hai.
Naina:- isko fek aao kisi hospital ke saamne.
Allen ne apni mundi hillayi aur un vampires ke sath nikal gaya khushal ko uthake aur ye sab lag gaye jasan manane.
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Khushal ki aankh khuli tab wo taaza mehsoos kar raha tha uski body mein bilkul bhi dard nahi tha. Uske dimag mein saari ghatnaye aane lagi kaise wo behosh hua ya fir usne sirf natak kiya behosh hone ka. Uski aankho mein aansoo aa gaye, usey umeed nahi thi ki naina se ki wo devastator ka sath degi
Tabhi khushal ka dhyan apne bagal mein gaya waha taniya baithi so rahi thi uski face pe is time duniya bhar ki masoomiyat thi. Lekin ye yaha aayi kaise.
Khushal ko pata tha devastator taniya ko nahi badal sakta kyuki taniya bhi uski tarah ek alpha hai wo bhi janam se tabhi khushal uski tension nahi le raha tha.
Khushal ne taniya ke sar pe hath fera to taniya ne apni aankhe khol di aur khushal ko muskurate huye dekhke jhat se uske galle lag gayi aur rone lagi.
Taniya:- bhai mom ne aisa kyu kiya hamare sath.
Khushal:- kya kiya?
Taniya:- unhone khud mujhe us devastator ke sath bheja tha unhone mujhe behosh lar diya tha lekin main huyi nahi thi wo sab plan bana rahe they aapko maarne ka, main badi mushkil se bhaag ke aayi aur aur main ek werewolf bhi hu.
Aur wo zor zor se rone lagi.
Khushal bas uske baalo mein hath ferta raha.
Khushal:- taniya tumhe pata hai ki naina hamari sagi maa nahi hai.
Taniya:- khushal dekh ye kya bol raha hai tu aur wo nahi hai to kon hai hamare sage parents.
Khushal:- jaldi hi milwa dunga. Waise tune mujhe dhundha kaise?
Taniya:- wo main yaha se guzar rahi thi to maine aapko sense kar liya aur yaha aa gayi.
Khushal:- okk! Lets go.
Taniya:- app thik to hai na .
Khushal:- i am alpha and you are also an alpha, wo bhi janam se kyuki hamare mom-dad bhi werewolf hai.
Taniya kuch nahi boli wo bas process kar rahi thi in sab baato ko.
Khushal khada hua aur apni shirt pehni aur ek call kiya kahi pe aur khada hoke taniya ka hath pakda aur hospital ke bahar aane laga. Wo bahar aaye to unke samne ek chamchamti Mercedes khadi thi black colour ki taniya to sochi hogi kisi ki lekin uski aankhe tab badi huyi jab uske driver ne aake salute kiya aur back door khol diya un dono ke liye.
Taniya:- bhai ye kiski car hai.
Khushal:- hamarai haiaaur aisi bahut si car hai hamare paas.
Taniya kuch der chup rahi aur fir ekdum se boli.
Taniya:- bhai plan kya hai aapka, main aapke sath hu hum dono milke maarnege unhe.
Khushal:- wait! Plan bhi hai lekin maarunga sirf main unko tum bas ghar pe rahogi tumhe kuch ho gaya to.
Ab khushal kya batata usko ki wo sab uske samne kide makode hai wo devastator bhi bacha hai uske samne bas takkar ka to ek hi hai KING - THE RED GAURDIAN.
Khair car usi buliding ke aage ruki aur wohi sab hua jo sara ke time hua tha bas sara normal thi lekin taniya ek bachi ki tha curious thi aur har cheez ko dhyan se dekh rahi thi.
Wo dono apne apartment ke samne aaye aur bell bajayi lekin no response aise hi do teen baar bajayi lekin no response, ab khushal ek baar aur bajata usse pehle usey ek tez chikh sunayi di jo ki sara ki thi aur uske agle hi pal khushal ki ek laat darwaze pe aur darwaze ka to pucho mat kya haal hua
Lekin ander ka haal dekh ke khushal aur taniya wahi jam gaye. Ander uske mom-dad bandhe huye they aur sara ka bezaan sarir pada tha khoon se lathpath.
Aur samne sofe pe baith tha king aur uske bagal mein 2 shaks khade they ek tha destroyer aur ek tha John.
King:- ohhhoo dekho kon aaya hai KHUSHAL-THE BLUE GAURDIAN mere ko takkar dene wala ek shaks jisne doobara janam liya hai. Hahahhaha.
Khushal ko sara ke marne ka dukh tha bhut jyada tha kyuki wo usse bhut pyar karta tha lekin ab, ab to uske paas jaise jeene ki koi wajah hi na ho lekin usne jaldi hi apne human emotion pe kaabu paa liya aur jhatke se apne asli roop mein aa gaya "the blue gaurdian".
Aur wo is roop mein itna khoobsurat aur attractive lag raha tha ki koi bhi ladki fida ho jaaye aur uski aankhe ekdum blue ho chuki kisi bulb ki tarah. Muscles bhi badh gaye they.
Khushal:- king maine tujhse ye ghatiya harkat ki umeed nahi ki thi.
King:- umeed to mujhe bhi nahi thi ki tune janam le liya aur mujhe bataya bhi nahi wo to kal tune meri wife ko maara apne asli roop mein aaake bas usi time mujhe tera aura feel ho gaya. Nahi to tu devastator ko aram se maar deta agar main nahi bich mein aata to.
Khushal:- tu apne usool bhool raha hai sayad, tune mere kisi kareebi ko maara hai aur ab main bhi tere kareebi ko maarunga.
King:- ye john khada ye tera hua.
Khushal:-i want your son tyler
King:- what? Kabhi nahi.
Khushal:- say it again
Aur ye baat khushal ne itni tez boli thi ki ek baar to king bhi kaamp gaya lekin wo apne dil pe pathar rakhke john ka hath pakda aur waha se nikal gaya.
Devastator jiski fatt chuki thi wo bhi unke piche jaane laga lekin khushal ne usko uski garden se pakad liya .
Devastator bhi apne alpha form mein aa gaya lekin wo bacha tha khushal ke saamne, lekin wo ek try to karna chahta tha to usne ghum ke punch maarna chaha lekin uske ghumte hi khushal ka hath uski chest ke ander tha aur uska dil khushal ke hath ke sath bahar aa gaya.
Wtf ek second mein mar gaya wo process bhi nahi kar paya, taniya to ye scene dekh ke behosh ho gayi aur khushal ke mom dad bhi lekin khushal uska dil kha gaya kyuki alpha ka dil khaane se takat kayi guna badh jaati hai.
TO BE CONTINUED ??