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Dhanyawaad.
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Shayad ye kahaani Asif uski aami aur doctor ki khaanise milti julti hai
usme bhi sabhi paatr ek khuti se hi latke pade hue the
shayad ye cuckold lekhak ki fantasy ho sakti hai aur achchhi bat hai aur achchhi bat hai cuckold hona bura bhi nahi hai
kher likhavat achchi hai lekin sab se jyada chudaai hi hai
us kahaani me bhi sab Adi ki rakhail ban jati thi aur shayad yaha bhi ( Aurat ya female kya utni gai gujari hai ???)
randi jaise shabd kutiya jaise shabd kisi bhi female ko pasand nahi aayenge
jyadatar ladies aise shabdo ko ya pure scene ko ignor kar deti hai
kher sab ka pata nahi MAI TO KAR HI DETI HU
asha rakhti hu kahaani achchhe se jaye
muje aisa lagta hai ki kahaani ko lambi karne ke liye paatr add kye jate hai
Sabse pahle to main nhi janta ki aap mahila hai ya purush, par jis tarah se aapne msg kiya to main mahila maan kar chalta hu.
To pahli baat, ye cuckold koi fantacy nhi hai, ye real experience hai, aur jiski ammi ko maine use kiya hai wo xf se hi mila tha, but saare patra real nhi hai, kuch sirf chat par ye chahte the ki unki ammi ko bhi add karu, unki aisi marji thi to maine unko bhi add kar liya.
Aur haa, jo police wala add hua hai wo real hai, but cuckold nhi, bas uski family ke sampark me hu to use add kar liya kuch masala laga kar likhuga.
Fir rahi gaali ki baat ya aourat ko randi bolna, to sex ke douraan kai saari masti ho jati hai.
Par ye masti pati-patni ke beech nhi hoti isliye aapko saayad maza nhi aata hoga pad kar.
Jab dusre ki ammi ya biwi chodne milti hai to wo full sath deti hai aise sex me, kyoki use bhi gair mard ka maza aata hai na.
Ye apna-apna experience hai, par ek baat pakki hai ki gair ke sath sex me gaali ya aise word normal baat hai jo apni biwi ke sath use nhi hote.
Aur fir un ladko ki demand bhi rahti ki unki ammi ke character ko kaise likhu to aise words aa jate hai.
But kosis karuga ki jyada bura na likhu , aage dekhna aur fir batana.
I wish ki aapko sex ke alawa bhi kafi kuch milega kahani me, aage dekhte jaaye kaafi kuch hoga.
Aur haa, ye dusri kahani ki tarah nhi hogi ye baat pakki hai, sex ke sath drama aur suspence bhi milega.
Dhanyawaad.
Thanks for reply
Sab ki alag alag choice hoti hai
ha mai mahila hu tabhi muje aise words pasand nahi jo mahilao kosambodhit kiye jate hai ( randi hai to randwa koi nahi hai ???)
jab ki dusaro ki aurato ko chodta jarur hai par wo randva nahi hai right ???? sirf wo mahila randi hai ( MALE DOMINATED WORLD AND TENDENCY)
aap story writter ho aap ko jo likhna hai likhe ye readers pe hai ki kitna edit ya ignore kare
ya fir wo kahani hi chhod de jis me pasandgi ka nahi
aap ki kahani aur likhavat dono hi achchhihai aur wo likhte rahe
aap apni style chnge na kare wo sab reader pe chhod de
to be frank with you ye reply padhhne ke bad shayad mai age ki kahani padhhu
maine to ye kahani chhod di thi
ek tarah se dekha jaye to mai yaha kisi bhi kahani padhhne ke layak hi nahi hu sab jagah mutual nahi hote jaisa maine kaha randi hi ho sakti hai randva nahi
thik usi tarah har kahani me mefale ko degrade kiya hi jata hai pata nahi usme kya maja hai kher female hone se muje purush ke maja ka andaj nahi aayega swabhavik hai
aap likhte rahiye
Nice story....waiting for next update..