Bhai Chapter 13 tak padha hai... kahani kaafi seductive hai... achchi writing hai..... mazedar screenplay hai... scenes bohot mast chal rahe hain....Chapter - 13
Main khidki ke paas chhupa, apni saanson se joojh raha tha, par meri aankhein Noor aur Hira ke bistar pe thami hui thi—woh dono ek jungli lay mein ek doosre mein ghul rahe the, Noor uske upar thi, uski salwar ab poori tarah neeche sarki hui, uski kamar Hira ke lund ke saath ek tez taal mein hil rahi, uski har siski kamre mein goonj rahi. Hira ne uski kameez ke neeche haath dala, uski chhati ko masalte hue bola, “Teri ye garmi mujhe pagal kar rahi hai, aur zor se kar,” aur Noor ne apne hoth uske kaan ke paas le jake kaha, “Tu bhi to ruk nahi raha, mujhe aaj tabaah kar de,” uska jism ek taakat ke saath uske upar lehra raha, uski aankhein band, chehra ek pyaas aur sukoon se jal raha. Mera lund pant mein ek dard sa ban gaya—haath tezi se chal raha, aur ek jhatke ke saath main pehli baar khatam ho gaya, ek garam lehar mere jism se nikli, par meri aankhein unpe jami rahi, Noor ki wo besharmi, uski wo taakat, mujhe phir se uksa rahi. Hira ne usse palat diya, ab Noor bistar pe peeth ke bal thi, uski taange uske kandhon pe, aur Hira uske andar ek zor ka jhatka maar raha—har dhakke ke saath Noor ka jism hil raha, uski cheekhein ek geeli awaaz mein badal gayi, “Aur tez, mujhe aur chahiye,” aur Hira ne uski kamar pakad ke apni puri taakat laga di. Main ye dekh raha tha—meri Noor, jo mere saath ek minute bhi nahi tikti, ab Hira ke saath ek jungli taakat mein kho gayi, mera lund phir se tan gaya, haath ruk nahi raha, ek doosra jhatka aaya, main phir khatam ho gaya, par ye tamasha band nahi hua, meri rooh ek aag mein jal rahi.
Phir Noor ne ek sharaarti hasi ke saath Hira ko roka, uske lund ko haath mein liya, aur condom ko dheere se khench ke nikal diya, “Ye to ab uktahat de raha tha, ab asli maza lene de,” usne mazaak mein kaha, condom ko side mein phenkte hue, aur Hira ne ek gehri hasi chhodi, “Tu to meri jaan le legi,” aur usne usse phir se apne neeche dabaya. Noor ne uske kandhe pakad liye, uski taange uski kamar ke charon taraf lapeti, aur Hira ne ek naye josh ke saath uske andar jhatke maarne shuru kiye—Noor ka jism ab ek lehar ki tarah hil raha, uski saansein ek sangeet ban gayi, “Bas aise hi, mujhe yahi chahiye,” aur Hira ne uske hothon pe apne hoth rakhe, unka milan ab ek aag ka toofan tha. Main ye sab dekh raha tha—ye bees minute mere liye ek sadi jaisa tha, main to ek minute bhi nahi tik pata, par ye dono ek doosre mein itna kho gaye ki waqt jaise ruk sa gaya. Mera lund phir se tan gaya, haath beqabu tha, ek teesra jhatka aaya, main phir khatam ho gaya, par Noor ki wo hasi, uska condom nikalna, uski wo taakat, mujhe baar-baar uksa rahi—Hira ki taakat, Noor ka josh, unka ye besharm milan, meri aankhon ke saamne ek aisa tamasha tha jo mujhe hairaan chhod raha. Meri rooh jal rahi, par main chhupa hua, unki is duniya ka ek ajnabi, bas dekh raha, har pal ek nayi aag mere jism mein bhar raha.
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Hira ka jism ek toofan ban gaya, usne Noor ko bistar pe zor se dabaya, uski taange uski kamar ke charon taraf jakdi hui—ek gehri cheekh uske muh se nikli, par usne Noor ke kandhe pe daant gadaye, awaaz ko uski twacha mein daba diya, uska jism Noor ke andar ek jungli lay mein hilta raha. Main khidki ke paas chhupa, chhoti si jhiri se dekha—Hira ne Noor ko neeche kasa hua, uski kamar uske haathon mein jakdi, aur uska lund bina condom ke ek aakhri jhatka maara, uska beej uske andar faila, thoda uski jaanghon pe gira, geeli chamak Noor ki twacha pe chhodi. Mera lund pant mein dard kar raha—haath tezi se chala, ek garam jhatka aaya, main khatam ho gaya, itna zor se ki aankhein band hui, sar ghuma, main khidki ke neeche ladkhada ke gir pada, ek pal ke liye behosh sa. Hosh aaya to paseena kameez mein geela—maine phir jhanka, Hira aur Noor poori tarah nange, bistar pe ek doosre ke bagal mein letay. Hira ke haath mein bidi thi, usne ek lamba kash kheench ke dhuaan chhoda, Noor ki taraf badhaya, “Le, ek baar try kar, maza aayega,” usne kaha, ek sharaarti hasi ke saath. Noor ne bidi li, “Tu bhi na, kya-kya karwata hai,” usne shikayat ki, par ek chhota sa kash maara, turant khansne lagi, dhuaan uske hothon se nikla. “Ye to jalati hai, gandi hai!” usne haste hue kaha, bidi wapas Hira ko di. Hira ne uske baalon ko sehla ke bola, “Arre, thodi si aadat daal, teri saanson mein bhi dhuaan dilchasp lagta hai.” Noor ne uske seene pe ungli ghumayi, “Dilchasp to tu bolta hai, par main to isse daaru ke saath kabhi try karungi, tab dekh tu,” aur dono has pade. Noor ne uski taraf jhuk ke kaha, “Tu mujhe aisi cheezein karne pe majboor karta hai, kabhi socha bhi nahi tha main aise khelungi.” Hira ne uske hothon pe haath rakha, “Aur tu mujhe aise pagalpan ke liye uksati hai, abhi to aur khelna hai,” usne kaha, ek gehri muskurahat ke saath.
Noor ka jism abhi garmi se chamak raha—usne Hira ka lund dekha, jo dheere-dheere phir se tan raha. “Ye kya, itni jaldi wapas?” usne mazaak kiya, ek shaitani hasi ke saath, “Lagta hai tujhe meri zabaan ka swaad chahiye.” Hira ne bidi ka ek aur kash liya, “Teri zabaan to jadoo hai, chal dikhla phir,” usne kaha, aur Noor ne uske lund ko haath mein liya, apne hoth uspe rakhe, dheere-dheere chusne lagi, uski jeebh uske supade pe ghoom rahi, ek geeli awaaz kamre mein faili. Hira ki aankhein band hui, Noor ke muh ke maze mein khoya. Main ye dekh raha tha—ye ek gandi tasveer jaisa tha, Noor ka ye roop, jo mujhse kabhi nahi dikha, Hira ke saath itna khula, itna sharaarti, uski har baat, uski khansi, uska bidi ka mazaak, uska lund muh mein lena, meri rooh ko chhed raha. Mera lund phir tan gaya, ek nayi aag jism mein bhar rahi, par main chhupa hua, unki is duniya ka ek ajnabi, Noor ki is besharmi se jal raha.
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Noor aur Hira ek chhoti si saans ke baad phir ek doosre mein doob gaye, unka doosra daur shuru ho gaya—Noor bistar pe peeth ke bal leti, uski nangi twacha paseene se chamak rahi, uski salwar aur kameez kahin kone mein padi, aur Hira uske upar jhuka, uski aankhein ek bhukhi pyaas se bhar gayi. Noor ne uske seene pe haath rakha, ungliyan uske paseene mein geeli, “Abhi bhi itni garmi bachi hai tujhme?” usne sharaarti andaaz mein pucha, apni taange uski kamar ke charon taraf lapet te hue. Hira ne uske hothon pe apne hoth rakhe, ek lambi chumban ke baad bola, “Teri wajah se ye aag kabhi nahi bujhegi, ab dekh main kya karta hoon,” aur usne uski kamar pakad ke apna lund uski chut pe rakha, dheere se andar dabaya, Noor ki ek lambi siski nikli, uska jism ek lehar ki tarah hil gaya. Main khidki ke paas chhupa, ye sab dekh raha—Hira ki sahanshakti, uski taakat, mujhe hairaan kar rahi, meri Noor uske saath ek aisi duniya mein thi jo main kabhi chhu nahi saka, aur main isse khush tha, ek gandi si khushi meri rooh mein daud rahi. Mera lund ab tan nahi raha—kai baar ragadne ke baad ek thakan si chha gayi, par Hira ki ye taakat, Noor ka ye josh, mujhe hairaan chhod raha, meri aankhein unpe jami hui.
Hira ne Noor ke kandhon ko pakda, uske andar ek tez lay shuru kiya, har dhakke ke saath Noor ka jism bistar pe hil raha, uski cheekhein ek geeli awaaz mein badal gayi, “Aur kar, mujhe pura jala de,” usne kaha, aur Hira ne uske kaan ke paas bola, “Tujhe aaj jannat dikhla dunga, bas mere saath chal.” Unka milan ek toofan sa tha, Noor ke haath Hira ki peeth pe noch rahe, uski saansein ek jungli sangeet ban gayi. Hira ne ek pal ke liye meri taraf dekha, uski aankhon mein ek chhedti si hasi—woh jaanta tha main wahan hoon—usne apne hothon se pani ka ishara kiya, aur main ek ajeeb si khushi se bhar gaya, ek perfect cuck ki tarah. Main dheere se khidki se hata, kitchen ki taraf bhaaga, dil ek gandi umang se dhadak raha—main apni biwi ke aashiq ke liye pani laane ja raha tha. Kitchen mein maine ek jug mein nimbu sharbat banaya, nimbu ka ras nichodte hue meri ungliyan kaamp rahi, soch raha ki Hira abhi bhi Noor ke andar hai, aur main yahan unki khidmat kar raha hoon. Wapas khidki pe aaya, nimbu sharbat ka jug haath mein liye, maine Hira ko ishara karne ki koshish ki, par woh ab Noor ke upar ek naye josh mein tha—usne uski taange kandhon pe rakhi, uska lund uske andar ek tez lay mein andar-bahar ho raha, Noor ki cheekhein ek lambi, bhaari siski mein badal gayi, “Bas aise hi, mujhe aur chahiye,” usne kaha, uska jism paseene se geela, Hira ke har jhatke ke saath hil raha.
Main chhupa hua, ishara karta raha, par Hira ka dhyan sirf Noor pe tha. Yeh sab bees minute se chala, mere liye ek sadi jaisa lamba—main to ek minute bhi nahi tik pata, par Hira ki sahanshakti, Noor ka josh, mujhe hairaan chhod raha. Aakhir mein Hira ka jism zor se kamp gaya, usne Noor ko aur zor se dabaya, ek gehri siski ke saath uske andar khatam ho gaya—Noor ki aankhein band ho gayi, uska jism ek aakhri lehar ke saath hil gaya, ek lambi, bhaari cheekh uske muh se nikli, uska charam sukh itna zor ka tha ki woh bistar pe lagbhag behosh si ho gayi, abhi bhi haanfte hue, apni saanson ko sambhal rahi. Main ye dekha—meri poori zindagi me jab se nikah kar ke sath hun, maine Noor ka charam sukh kabhi nahi dekha, uski ye taakat meri rooh ko jala rahi.
Hira dheere se bistar se utra, darwaza khola, aur bahar aaya—mujhe dekha, ek thodi si hasi ke saath jug le liya, “Achha kiya,” usne dheemi awaaz mein kaha, aur wapas kamre mein gaya, Noor abhi bhi bistar pe leti, paseene se geeli, apni saansein sambhal rahi.
Hira ne jug se do glass bhare, ek Noor ko diya, aur dono ek saath thanda, taaza nimbu sharbat peene lage. Noor ne ek ghoont liya, ek lambi saans chhodte hue kaha, “Tu to bada achha bawarchi hai, Hira, ye nimbu sharbat to dil khush kar diya—kab banaya?” Hira ne uske baalon mein haath phera, “Bas, jab tu jannat mein thi, tab,” usne mazaak kiya, aur Noor ne ek sharaarti hasi ke saath uske seene pe haath maara, “Tu bhi na, har cheez mein maza daal deta hai.” Dono has pade, ek doosre ke jism ke paas baithe, nimbu sharbat ke ghoont lete hue, Noor ki hasi aur Hira ki muskurahat kamre mein goonj rahi. Main chhupa hua, unki is duniya ka ek ajnabi, Noor ki is nayi taakat se jal raha, par ek gandi si khushi bhi thi.
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Noor aur Hira bistar pe ek doosre ke jism se lipte hue let gaye, nange, paseene aur garmi se chamakte—Hira ne Noor ko apni baahon mein kheench liya, uske baalon mein haath pherte hue kaha, “Ab thodi si neend le le, meri jaan, tu to aaj raat poori tarah pighal gayi.” Noor ne ek thaki hui hasi ke saath uske seene pe sir rakha, “Tu bhi to rukne ka naam nahi le raha tha, ab bas thodi si rahat chahiye,” usne dheemi awaaz mein kaha, aur dono dheere-dheere neend ki aagosh mein doob gaye, bistar pe ek doosre ke jism se chipke, thandi hawa ki masheen unki twacha ko sehla rahi. Main khidki ke paas chhupa, ye dekh raha—meri rooh ek ajeeb si khushi aur jalan se jal rahi, par mera jism thak chuka. Main dheere se hall ki taraf chala, sofa pe let gaya—ek purana, kath ka sofa, jisme na pankha tha na koi aaram. Maine apna phone nikala, alarm paanch baje ka set kiya—ammi-abbu subah chhe baje uth jaate, usse pehle Hira ko nikalna hoga. Sofa ke neeche ek patli chadar pe lette hue, meri aankhein band hui, par neend ek lambi ladai thi—Hira aur Noor ka tamasha meri aankhon ke saamne nach raha, aur main ek thaki hui khushi ke saath so gaya.
Subah jab alarm baja, meri aankhein ek jhatke se khuli—mera lund dard kar raha, kai baar ragadne ke baad ek sujan si thi, ek ganda sa dard jo mujhe har pal yaad dilata ki maine kya dekha. Main uttha, paseena meri kameez mein geela, hall ki garmi mujhe kha chuki, par main kamre ki taraf chala—darwaza band, andar thandi hawa ki masheen ka halka sa sur sunayi de raha. Maine darwaza khatkhata, dheemi awaaz mein kaha, “Hira, nikal ja, ammi-abbu abhi uthne wale hain.” Andar se ek halki si harkat hui, Hira ki awaaz aayi, “Haan, aa raha hoon.” Main bahar chala gaya, ghar ke main darwaze pe khada hua, aur ghanti baja di—jaise main abhi ghar aaya, ek rasmi dakhila. Noor thodi der baad bahar aayi—uske baal uljhe hue, kameez idhar-udhar, chehra paseene aur thakan se bhara, uski aankhein ek ghabrahat se mujhe dekhi, jaise woh chhupane ki koshish kar rahi. Main andar chala, uske saath, ek achha cuck ban ke—uski ghabrahat dikhi, par maine kuch nahi kaha, bas ek thodi si muskurahat di. Kamre mein gaya, jahan Hira meri biwi ke saath raat bhar raha—bistar abhi bhi ganda, Noor ki khushboo aur Hira ki garmi abhi bhi hawa mein. Meri nazar ek kone mein padi strawberry condom pe gayi—main khud laaya tha kal raat, par istemaal nahi hua, ek mazaak sa laga. Main muskura diya, ek ajeeb si khushi ke saath—meri rooh abhi bhi unki raat ke jadoo mein thi. Noor abhi bhi apne kapde theek kar rahi, uski ghabrahat chhup nahi rahi, par main bistar pe let gaya, thakan meri aankhon pe chha gayi, aur main so gaya, Hira aur Noor ke tamashe ki yaadon mein khoya hua.
Next update kabtak aye geGuys got Sick, will continue when I am feeling better. Thanks for support
I agree on this one... And Chapter 15 mein ye nahi dikhaya ke Noor ghar kese aayi aur usne Imran ko kya reason diya ke wo ghar later kyu ho gayi thi... ye dekhna bhi kaafi hot rehta... lekin shayad wo reh gaya hai batana.... Imran ko puchhna chahye tha...Bahot acha likh rahe ho
Magar ek suggestion hai
Kahani ko reality se door mat hone do
Noor ke andar samaj ka darr baqi rakho
Aur jaise raat ko hira noor ke kamre me so gaya tha wo reality se thoda hat ke tha
Us time noor ke andar ye darr honi chahiye thi ki kahi imran na aajaye
Aur kahin subah wo time me hira ko bahar na kar sake
Baaqi story bahot mast hai
get well soon brother..... and give us dhamakedar updates.Guys got Sick, will continue when I am feeling better. Thanks for support