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[luckysearch12]

Ab hum jaiso ko to bolne ka koi haq hi nahi reh gaya hai ....

kuch bol do to logo ko lagta hai ki tana dia ja raha hai.... aur waise bhi jo log kismat par chor diye hai update dena.... unse kya hi expectation rakhe aur bole...

waise bhi ye kahani mein kuch bacha nahi... aisi kahaniya regular update se padne par hi samjh aati aur maja aata .. nahi to sab bhool jao aur bekar lagti ...

aur jo writer ye sochte hai ki aisi kahani par mahine -2 mahine par ek update dene se readers ko maja ata hai.. to aise fake view dene wale readers se aap hi khush raho...

 

[Ankitshrivastava]

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Update will come on weekend.....

Thanks buddy..........

 

[Ankitshrivastava]

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Updates weekend par aayge.......

Thanks buddy...........

 

[Ankitshrivastava]

जितना समय प्रत्येक रीडर को जवाब देने में आप लगाते उससे कम समय में आप अपडेट दे सकते है । और अगर कोई स्टोरी लिखी है तो उसको कम से कम समय में खत्म होना चाहिए चाहे रीडर्स के अच्छे या बुरे कॉमेंट मिले। पर यहां तो राइटर तो खुद ही पेज को संख्या बड़ाने में लगे हुए कॉमेंट देकर । अत्यंत दुर्भाग्य पूर्ण बर्ताव है एक अच्छे और काबिल लेखक के लिए कि वो इंतजार करे कब रीडर्स कॉमेंट करे कब हम आंसर करे ??

Nahi dost mujhe nhi lagta ki reply dena aur story likhna same thing hai.....may b koi accha writter bata sake....to puch lena....aur mujhe bhi bata dena......

Mere liye reply dena easy hai...kyoki reders ki soch aur unka qus mere saamne hota hai.....mujhe koi extra dimaag nhi lagana hota hai reply dene me.......

Jabki meri story ke liye mujhe kafi kuch sochna padta hai....kai baar likha hua hata kar kuch naya bhi likhna hota hai....kyoki main story ki koi link miss nhi karna chahta.....

Main nhi chahta ki readers padne ke baad bole ki kuch bhi likh diya....koi link hi nhi....aur sirf sex story to hai nhi....past, present nd future ko ek sath dimaag me rakh kar likhna mere liye to easy nhi hai...saayad acche writter aise hi chutki me likh sakte ho...but mere liye tough hai....

Halaki main manta hu ki itna gap sahi nhi....but life hi kuch aisi hai ki na chahte huye bhi delay ho jata hai....koi marji se ya masti me gap nhi karta.....

Rahi baat time ki....to main xp se story likh raha hu...jo xf par aa kar khatm hui....but adhuri nhi rahi....aur readers ko theek bhi lagi.....

Rahi baat taano ki...to maine kisi reader ko mana nhi kiya ki mujhe taane na de....ye unka rights hai to wo bol sakte hai....

But yes....main is vertual world ke liye real life ko avoid nhi kar sakta....wo jyada imp hai...jaise sabki hoti hai...aapki bhi hogi...

Isliye delay ho sakta hai....but story adhuri nhi rahegi....

Aur page badane se mujhe koi paisa nhi milta.....to aisa kyo karuga.....wo to readers hi bolte hai ki gaayab mat hua karo....to thoda time milte hi unhe reply de jata hu...taki pata chale ki main haayab nhi hu....bas update ready nhi...

Baki kya bolu.....apna-apna pov hai...nd i respect dat.....but sabse jyada apne pov ko manta hu......aur us hisaab jab abhi real life se break mile tabhi update likhta hu.....

Well...update ls comming on weekend....

Thanks buddy....................

 

[Ankitshrivastava]

Ab hum jaiso ko to bolne ka koi haq hi nahi reh gaya hai ....

kuch bol do to logo ko lagta hai ki tana dia ja raha hai.... aur waise bhi jo log kismat par chor diye hai update dena.... unse kya hi expectation rakhe aur bole...

waise bhi ye kahani mein kuch bacha nahi... aisi kahaniya regular update se padne par hi samjh aati aur maja aata .. nahi to sab bhool jao aur bekar lagti ...

aur jo writer ye sochte hai ki aisi kahani par mahine -2 mahine par ek update dene se readers ko maja ata hai.. to aise fake view dene wale readers se aap hi khush raho...

Maine to kisi ko bolne se mana nhi kiya.....readers ka apna rights hai....kuch bhi bole.....main ans karuga.....to rokne ki baat hi nhi aai meri taraf se.....ok.....

Rahi baat kismat ki....to us par meri puri life hai.....story to badi chhoti cheek hai.....isse jyada kya bolu........

Baat kare story ki....to usme kya hai ye story hi bataygi......time lagega....but puri hogi.....tab time nikaal lena......

Aur view ki baat kare....to fake ka kya bolu....ye xf hi fake identity par tika hua hai.....to jab insaan fake....to view fake bhi ho sakte hai.....

But ye apne pov par hai....ki aap real aur fake ko kis tarah dekhte ho...

Ho sakta hai jo mere liye real ho wo tumhare liye fake ho....ya iska ulta bhi ho sakta hai........to ye matter rahne hi dete hai.....kyoki katilo ke sahar me ek katil ki talaas muskil ho sakti hai....right....

Thanks buddy.................

 

[luckysearch12]

Maine to kisi ko bolne se mana nhi kiya.....readers ka apna rights hai....kuch bhi bole.....main ans karuga.....to rokne ki baat hi nhi aai meri taraf se.....ok.....

Rahi baat kismat ki....to us par meri puri life hai.....story to badi chhoti cheek hai.....isse jyada kya bolu........

Baat kare story ki....to usme kya hai ye story hi bataygi......time lagega....but puri hogi.....tab time nikaal lena......

Aur view ki baat kare....to fake ka kya bolu....ye xf hi fake identity par tika hua hai.....to jab insaan fake....to view fake bhi ho sakte hai.....

But ye apne pov par hai....ki aap real aur fake ko kis tarah dekhte ho...

Ho sakta hai jo mere liye real ho wo tumhare liye fake ho....ya iska ulta bhi ho sakta hai........to ye matter rahne hi dete hai.....kyoki katilo ke sahar me ek katil ki talaas muskil ho sakti hai....right....

Thanks buddy.................

Maine ye nahi kaha ki tumne roka... maine ye kaha tha ki kuch bol dunga to logo ko lagagea ki tana de raha hai...

story ki hi to bol raha ki itne kirdar aagaye hai dheere-2 aur add hote ja rahe ... phir itna gap update mein.. to koi chance hi nahi banta ki readers ko wo sare link yaad rahe... only option is ki pureai updates phir se pado...

aur ab fake view wali baat aise jawab doge .. kaha ki baat ko kaha ghuma de rahe to ab baat hi kya kare..

well update jab regular honge tab dekhnge ki kahani kitni samjh aarahi hai....

THIS TIME NOT WAITING FOR NEXT UPDATE

jab aayega to pad lenge

 

[Suniya]

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[Lovly singh]

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[Lovly singh]

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[Sushil@10]

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