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Adultery AAKHIR AISA KYO KIYA..

BhumiJangid

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Kaafi acchi story hai, kaafi maza b aa rha h kahani padhne me. But mujhe aisa lagta hai hai ki isme puja ko fasaya gaya h. Aur uske husband ko yeh yakin dilaya gya h ki puja ne uske sath bewafai ki hai, jabki puja ko is baat ki bhank b nhi thi ki un dono ko dur karne ki planning kaafi log milkar kar rahe hai aur punni ko b yahi yakin dilwaya gya ki puja ab usse apna rishta todkar sanjay ke sath chudai ka maza le rhi hai aur iske liye un logo ne photo, audio aur video editing ka sahara liya. Aur last me punni aur puja ko behosh karke alag alag room me sula diya aur jab punni jaga to puja ko nangi dekh kar uska dil toot gya😭😭 bechara punni.. Aur punni ke jaane ke baad puja ne b sanjay se uske bete ke liye shadi ki hai. Jaisa mujhe lagta h, maine bata diya. Ab aage ki kahani hamare writer hi jaane.
But mujhe khusi hogi agar aisa hi hua ho.
 

Ankitshrivastava

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Yeah total unnecessary short me bhi khatm ho sakta tha side characters ke saath itna sex scenes me itna time barbad

Agar short me nipta deta....to logo ko samjh kaise aata...ki writter ankit hai......

Well.....adultery hai.....sex to hoga hi....kyoki kuch readers sex scene chahte hai......unka bhi dhyaan rakhna hota hai na....to main time waste nhi manta.....

Baki story to continue rahegi hi......


Thanks buddy............
 

Ankitshrivastava

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Hi
Kaafi acchi story hai, kaafi maza b aa rha h kahani padhne me. But mujhe aisa lagta hai hai ki isme puja ko fasaya gaya h. Aur uske husband ko yeh yakin dilaya gya h ki puja ne uske sath bewafai ki hai, jabki puja ko is baat ki bhank b nhi thi ki un dono ko dur karne ki planning kaafi log milkar kar rahe hai aur punni ko b yahi yakin dilwaya gya ki puja ab usse apna rishta todkar sanjay ke sath chudai ka maza le rhi hai aur iske liye un logo ne photo, audio aur video editing ka sahara liya. Aur last me punni aur puja ko behosh karke alag alag room me sula diya aur jab punni jaga to puja ko nangi dekh kar uska dil toot gya😭😭 bechara punni.. Aur punni ke jaane ke baad puja ne b sanjay se uske bete ke liye shadi ki hai. Jaisa mujhe lagta h, maine bata diya. Ab aage ki kahani hamare writer hi jaane.
But mujhe khusi hogi agar aisa hi hua ho.

Story to wahi chalegi jo maine soch kar rakhi hai.....baki aap khush hoge ya nhi....ye aap hi batana.......

Thanks buddy............
 
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Agar short me nipta deta....to logo ko samjh kaise aata...ki writter ankit hai......

Well.....adultery hai.....sex to hoga hi....kyoki kuch readers sex scene chahte hai......unka bhi dhyaan rakhna hota hai na....to main time waste nhi manta.....

Baki story to continue rahegi hi......


Thanks buddy............
Mai chahta hu me scene..pooja aur rajesh ka plz kab likhhonge ak bhai dono ka romance..
 
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