Romance Aakhri Imtihaan

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Synopsis - Ek thi rani, Ek tha rank, Dono ki duniya alag, Kya hoga jab ek tufaan ek chhatan se takraiyega.

This story is entirely fictional.

Main Cast

1. Saba Faisal - Age 47 Years

2. Lal Chand Machan - Age 19 Years

This is 8 part story.

 

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Chapter No - 1 :: Rani aur Rank

Saba ke ankhon me anshu tha, uske ye anshu thode dukh ke aur thode khusi ke the, aaj uske sabse choti beti ki nikah ke baad ki bidai thi, Saba ne apne zindagi ke sare kaam aaj bakhubi kar diya tha, Saba ke dil me aajh sakun tha, aur wo apne sauhar Saeed ke sath khadi ho jati hai,

-saeed aaj bahut dil ko sukun mil raha hai, hamare teeno bachche aaj settle ho gaye hain,

-haan saba,

miya bibi dono ke ankhe naam si thi, aur wo wapas ghar me wapas jaane lage, saba ka sauhar uske kamar pe hanth rakh diya tha, saba ko apne sarir pe kisi tarah se kamuk uske sauhar se ummid hi chor di thi, aur wo andar hi andar thodi sihar gayi, saba ka sauhar apne muh uske kaan ke paas lata hai,

-bibi, aap upar kamare me chalo, main aata hun,

saba sanket samajh jati hai, aaj kayi saal baad uske miyan mood me the, aur wo utsuk ho upar wale kamare me chali jati hai, aur bistar pe let jati hai, aur apne miyan ka intejaar karane lagati hai, uske maan me ristedaar logo ka bhi thoda darr tha, lekin wo apne sauhar ko mana nahi kar sakti thi, wiase hi saba saeed ka kafi der intejaar karati rahi lekin wo aane ka naam hi nahi le raha tha, aur dekhate hi dekhate saba ko nind aane laga, aur wo so gayi wahin uska sauhar piche batchit ke chakkar me apni begum ko bhula diya,

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Lal chand machan ek anath ladaka tha, uska naam bhi uske anath hone ka parichay deta tha, wo ek lal rang ke kapare me chandani raat ko hospital ke paas machan ke paas mila tha, aur kisi aadmi ne uska naam hi yahi rakh diya, Lal ek atyant hi kamchor ladaka tha, wo na padha aur na koi kaam karata tha, uska dinbhar ka maksad sirf ek tha, pet me khana, hagna aur chodana, Lal har waqt chut ke talash me rahta tha, Lal ne kariban sau auraton ko chod chuka tha, use apne aap kafi bharosa tha ki wo kisi bhi aurat ko pata apne lund pe nacha sakta tha, Lal ne apne chut ka shikar ka suruwat ki apne hi anath aalay me kaam karane wali ek mahila se,

Lal ko usi din se chut ki lat lagi hui thi, lekin lal ko bade umar ki bhabhiya aur aunty bahut jyada pasand the, we uske liye kisi nasha ki tarah the, lal ko bachpan me kabhi maa ka pyar nahi mila tha, sayad isi wajah se wo badi umar ki auraton ko patane ke liye apna pura jaan laga deta tha, aur aaj tak use har aurat ko choda tha jispe usne apne nigah daale the, Lal ke andar koi janwar sawar ho jata tha, aur wo bade umar ki auraton ko apne niche laane ke liye kuch bhi karane ko tayyar tha, aur jab tak wo paa nahi leta wo kisi bechain pret ki tarah bhatakata rahta, wo har cheez bhul jata, wo insanyit bhi bhul jata tha, wo kisi bhi had tak jaa sakta tha,

Lal abhi apna lund apne sabse sikar se chuswa raha tha, ye ek 2 bachco ki maa rashma thi, jise lal ne bade aaram se apne bas me kar liya tha, aur ab uske muh ka maje le raha tha,

Lal ko aise hi mast low maintanance wali shadi sudha auratain pasand thi jo uske maa ke umar ki honti, aur piche se is aurat ke pati ka awaz aane lagata hai, lekin wo lal ko chuppe lagate rahti hai, aur lal ke chehre pe muskan aa jata hai, usne ise apne bas me kar liya tha, lal ek jod dar thappad rashma ko marata hai, aur wo ladkhada ke girane lagati hai, lekin uska muh phir bhi lal ke lund ke chuppe lagate rahta hai, aur lal niche der hansane lagata hai, aur apna lund khinckar apne pant me kar leta hai, aur rashma ko wapas apne pati ke paas jane ka ishara karata hai, lal phir wahan se nikal jata hai, aur sidhe sweta chachi ke ghar jata hai, sweta chachi is garib tole me thodi amir thi, aur lal us se khana aur paise mangane aaya tha, sweta chachi apne chut chudai ke badale kuch rukhi sukhi aur kuch chutte lal ko de deti thi, lal ko dekh sweta chachi sidhe use apne kamare me jaane ka ishara karati hai, aur khud jhat se apna saree utha let jati hai, aur lal sweta chachi ka chut bajane lagata hai, kuch der chadh ke chodane ke baad lal sweta chachi ko ghodi bana deta hai, aur wo apna lund se sweta chachi ka chut ke sath khelene lagata hai,

tabhi wahan se kisi ke tez cheekhane ki awaz aati hai, aur sweta aur lal dono darr jate hain, samane aur koi nahi sweta ka pati khada tha, uska chehra dekh lal darr jata hai, wo jhapatta mar ke lal ki aur lapakata hai, lekin lal baal baal bachata hai, is shor se aaspas ke log jhutane lagate hain, aur wo sab milkar lal ko pakad lete hain, use khub galiyan sunate hain, aur uski khub kutai hoti hai, lal ko pitate piate adhmara kar diya jata hai, aur phir use wahin pe nadi ke kinare phek ke log aa jate hain, lal wahan kafi der baad honsh me aata hai, aur wahan se tute kadamo se chal padata hai sahar ki aur.

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saba ka nind tut jata hai, usko apne sauhar pekafi gussa aa raha tha, wo uthkar niche jati hai, wahan pe kuch labaour saafai kar rahe the, aur saba apne sauhar ko dhundh rahi thi, jo use kahin nahi dikhata hain, saba yu hi baith jati hai, saba ko baithe baithe hi bechaini hone lagati hai, use aisa lag raha tha jaise koi use ghur raha hai, tabhi uski badi beti jo apne ghar nikalane wali thi uske paas aa jati hai, aur saba gale lagane ke liye uth jati hai,

saba koi aisa lag raha tha ki koi use ghur raha hai, tabhi saba ka najar ek labour pe jata hai, joki use lagatar ghure jaa raha tha, aur saba andar se kanmp jati hai.................

 

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Chapter No - 2 :: Pyar

Saba ko apne sauhar se beintehaan mohabbat thi aur hai, lekin saba ko apne sauhar se pyar se jyada unki ijjat thi, saba ka nikah tab hua tha jab wo highschool me hi thi, wo jamana alag tha, wo bhale na padhi thi lekin apne sare bachche ko usne talim di thi, saba ne jindagi me sirf do logo ke sath deh ka rista banaya tha, ek jo usne jawani me galti kar di thi, aur dusara uska sauhar saeed, usne apne nikah ke baad pura jiwan sirf apne sauhar aur apne bachcho me lagaya tha, aur wo khus thi, thodi si khuddari bhi thi apne bachcho ko safal hote hue dekh kar, saba ka pariwar bhi khusi se bhara tha, kul mila kar saba ka jiwan bilkul maje me chal raha tha, lekin saba ke jiwan me ek kami thi, jo wo ab jyada mehsus karati thi, wo tha uska deh ki pyas, saba ka sarir ki pyas, uski yovan usse kuch mang raha tha, jise saba khud nahi de sakti thi, saba ka sarmgah me uska komal chut ki kulbulahat din b din badh rahi thi, saba ko is baat ka ehsas tha, lekin wo bebas thi, uska jo karne wala tha uska sauhar use puri tarah se darkinar kiye hue tha,

Lal ka sarir ka chot ka ghav abhi bhara nahi tha, aur wo buri tarah le langda kar chal raha tha, use kisi ghar me saaf safai ka kaam mila tha, wo kamchor kam karana to nahi chahta tha, lekin khane ke liye usne majboori me ye kaam liya tha, Lal jab is ghar par pahuncha to uske ankh fat gaye, itna alisan bangla use sirf govinda ke film me dekhe the, Lal baki labourers ke sath kaam karane laga, lekin wo Kam kam aur apne ankhe firate hue, koi bhi mehngi saman chura raha tha, Lal aise hi choti choti saman ko apne jeb me bhare jaa raha tha, aur aise hi wo najare phira raha tha, tabhi uski ankhe ek aurat pe padi, salwar pehane hue is aurat ko dekh Lal ke lund ek jhatake me khada ho gaya, Lal ki najar kisi chumbak ki tarah us aurat pe chipak gayi, aur wo bahut gehari najar se uski har chal dekh raha tha, us aurat ke bhadi bare mamme kapado ke bhitar chalane pe haule haule hil rahe the, aur Lal ka lund phupkare mar raha tha, uske baad uski najar bade bade tarbooj pe gayi, Lal madhosh sa ho gaya, aur chip chip ke apne najar us aurat pe gada liya,

Saba ko kuch der se aisa lag raha tha jaise koi use dekh raha ho, aur wo andar hi andar sihar jati hai, Saba ka najar idhar udhar gaya lekin use koi nahi dikha, tabhi saba ki badi beti aa jati hai, jis se wo gale milane ke baad baatein karane lagati hai, tabhi saba ki najar padati hai Lal pe, aur wo sakpaka jaati hai,

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Saba ki najar Lal se ladi hui thi, aur Lal bhi lagatar saba ko ghure jaa raha tha, Saba ne pehale aise batameez insaan ko nahi dekha tha, aur Saba ke sir pe gussa chadhane laga, aur wo kuch bahana bana ke apne kamare me jaane lagi, aur apne hall me baith gayi,

Saba ke chehre pe ajeeb si sikan thi, usne aise badtameez insan ko pehale nahi dekha tha, jo use usi ke ghar me vaheshi ki tarah ghure jaa raha tha,

-saba aap aise chintit kyu baithi hui hain,

Saba ki najar uske sauhar pe padati hai, aur wo aage badh kar use gala laga leti hai,

-Are saba kya kar rahi ho, abhi ghar me itne log hai, choro mujhe,

Saba apne sauhar ko chorana nahi chahti thi lekin wo Saeed ko achche se janati thi, aur wo chor deti hai,

-Khana ban gaya madam to jara khana laga dijiye,

-Han bana ke gayi hai, aap baitho main khana nikalwa deti hun,

-aap nahi khaiyega Saba,

-Nahi Saeed mera bhukh nahi hain, aap khao,

Saba apne ghar ke nukar se khana nikal dene ko bolke upar chhat pe chali jaati hai, Saba ko dukh aur kafi gussa aa raha tha, Saba chhat pe kuch der ghum kar apna man halka karati hai, lekin uska gussa aur badh jata hai, uska sauhar ne use kamare me bheja tha, aur Saba andar se sex ke liye tayyar ho gayi thi, aur ab wo apna baat bhi yad nahi tha, Saba ke andar thoda narazagi aur badh jati hai,

Saba yuhin apne jiwan ki baaton pe dhyaan de rahi thi, uskae dil me achchanak se wo galti yaad aa gayi, jo usne apne jawani ke josh me kiya tha, aur wo apne sapane me kho jati hai

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Saba ek all girls urdu school me padhati thi, us school me muskil se 12 ladkiyan thi, wo jamana alag tha, khud saba ke abbu ammi nahi chahte the ki Saba aage padhe aur uske liye rista khoj rahe the, Saba khud beman school jati thi, Saba ko bhi ab nikah ka soch achcha lagane laga tha, Saba ko uske abbu har din school lane aur lejane aate the, Saba ki saheliyan bhi usi ki tarah band band rahane wali thi, aisa Saba ko lagata tha,

Saam ka waqt tha aur Saba apne abbu ka intejaar kar rahi thi, Saba ke samane hi dheere dheere school khali hone laga, Saba thoda dar gayi, thodi der intejaar karane pe bhi wale walid nahi aaye to Saba thoda ghabrane lagi, isi ghabrahat me Saba ko pyas lagi, aur Saba chapakal ke paas jaane lagi pani pine ke liye, ye chapakal school ka nahi baliki school se thoda bahar public ka tha, Saba wahin pe kal chala ke pani pine lagi, Saba ko akele kal chalane me dikkat ho raha tha, wo kal chala ke aage jaati, tab tak pani ruk jata, Saba ko jhallahat hone lagi, aur gusse me kal ke bagal me baith gayi,

Saba yuhin muh latkaye hue thi ki kal se pani nikalane laga, Saba thoda ghabra ke piche dekhi, wahan pe ek anjaan ladaka khada tha, Saba biha kisi mehram ke kahin nahi jaati thi, aur yahan uske liye ek ladaka paani chala raha tha, Saba ka dil kiya ki daud ke school wapas jaaye aur abbu ka intejaar kare, lekin uski pyas kafi thi, aur wo aage jhuk pani pine lagati hai,

Saba kuch der me pani pii ke hatane lagati hai, aur wo ladaka bol padata hai,

-aapne pani pii liya,

Saba ka sarir darr se kanmp raha tha, uske Sir gol gol hilane laga, aur Saba jabardasti bol padati hai,

-haan, aap kal chala band kar dein,

Wo ladaka kal chalana band kar deta hai, Saba ko lag raha tha ki wo chala jayega, lekin wo nahi jata hai, aur Saba ko ek baar upar se niche dekhata hai, Saba jo Burkhe me thi, uske sarir me sihran daudane lagati hai,

-aapse kuch bolun to aap bura nahi manoge na,

Saba ye sun aur ghabra jaati hai, lekin ab wo thoda apne aap pe kabu kar li thi,

-boliye,

-aap bura nahin maonge to bolunga,

Saba ka ek nazar apne abbu ko khoj raha tha, lekin abhi tak unka koi ishara nahi pata chal raha tha,

-nahin manungi,

Saba ka darr se halat kharab tha, aur ab uska sarir kanpane laga tha, jo us ladake ko saaf dikh raha tha, wo ladaka kuch der Saba ko dekhata hai, aur Saba uske najar se aur ghabrane lagati hai, aur wo ladaka bolata hai,

-Fauzia main tumse bahut ishq karata hun, aur main tumhare bina zinda nahi rah paunga,

Saba ye sun sann rah gayi, phir use ehsas hota hai ki ye ladaka us se galati se ye sab bol raha tha, use sayad uske burkhe me uski sahpathi Fauzia jaisi dikh rahi thi, Saba ek taraf thoda rahat ka saans leti hai, to dusare taraf use thoda mayushi bhi hota hai,

-main main Fauzia nahin hun, main Saba hun,

Saba ke muh se nikalata hai,

Wo ladaka thoda ghabra jata hai,

-maaf kar dijiye main aapko koi aur hi samajh baitha,

Aur wo ladaka aage jaane lagata hai, Saba andar se kafi mayush ho jaati hai, tabhi piche se uske abba jan ka awaz aata hai aur Saba unke sath ghar nikal jati hai.

Ab agle din se Saba Fauzia pe najar rakhane lagi, Fauzia us class me sabse choti thi, aur wo hamesha abaya pehan kar rakhati thi, Saba ko aisa kuch alag hote hue nahin dikha,

Saba yuhin dophar me baith alima ka diya padh rahi thi, tabhi uska najar Fauzia pe pada, wo idhar udhar dekh rahi thi, aur aisa lag raha tha jaise wo kahin chup ke jaane ka soch rahi hai, school chalate kahin bhi chup kar jaana bilkul namumkin tha, lekin Saba ko lag raha tha wo kuch na kuch gadbad karane ke firak me hain, uske dimag me us din wo ladaka aata hai, Saba bhi piche se Fauzia pe najar rakhe rahati hai, aur jaisa Saba ko laga tha Fauzia chupkar usi chapakal ke taraf nikal jati hai, aur Saba bhi uske piche nikal jaati hai, Saba ke samane Fauzia Chapakal ke bagal me bane gali me chali jaati hai, aur wahan bane ek khandar me ghus jaati hai, Saba bhi piche piche wahin pahunch jati hai,

-anhn anhn aaaanhn,

andar se kisi ke mimiyane ki awaz aa rahi thi, Saba ka nash uske sir pe chadh gaya, Saba ne aisa awaz apne ammi-abbu ke kamare me se suna tha, aur andar Fauzia thi, Saba ka pura sarir romanchit ho gaya, aur uska sir jhatake khane laga, Saba ne himmat dikhayi aur andar jhank kar dekhane lagi,

Aur Saba wahan se tez kadamo se bhagati hai,

-hai allllh,

Saba ne jo andar dekha, wo sapane me bhi nahi soch sakati thi, andar Fauzia us ladake ke god me, aur us ladake ka ang Fauzia ke andar, Saba ka dimag chakarane lagata hai, aur usne apne abaya ko bichawan bana rakha tha, Saba ka pura sarir akadane laga, aur wo class me pahunchti hai,

-saba aap kahan thi,

Andar ek karmchari us se puchati hai, Saba ghabra jati hai,

-wo baji, main pani pine gayi thi,

-achcha, waise aapne Fauzia ko dekha hai kya, wo bhi gayab lag rahi hai,

Saba is baat pe chup rahati hai,

-main nahi janati baji,

Saba uske baad sidhe soch me jaati hai, uska sarir abhi bhi kanmp raha tha, aur wo ghatna uske ankh ke samane kisi film ki tarah chal raha tha, Saba ko mehsus hota hai ki uska pyajama geela ho gaya tha, Saba apna hanth apne jindagi me pehali baar apne sarmgah me dalaati hai, aur uska sarir kanmp jata hai, Saba ka hanth roke nahi rukata, aur wo apne safed sarmgah ke gehrai me apna ek anguli utar deti hai,

Saba ka halat kharab ho raha tha, aur uska pair kanpane lage, Saba ki uttejana charm pe pahunch gayi aur uske pair ne uska sath chor diya aur wo soch me dhamm se gir gayi, aur uska chut ek fuarra chod uske pyajama pura geela kar deta hai,

Bahut muskil se Saba masik ka bahana kar bach jaati hai, use wahin pe Fauzia dikhati hai, bilkul masoom abaya me lipati, usi abaya ko usne bichawan bana kar,

-hai aaaaaaaaaaalh,

Saba ghar ko chali jaati hai,

Saba ke ammi abbu us din kafi khus the, aur kuch der me use bhi bata diya jata hai, Saba ka rista tay kar diya gaya tha, kisi Saeed naam ka aadami se, Saba ye khabar sun kafi khus hui, kyuki andar hi andar wo chahati thi ki koi use pyar kare Fauzia ki tarah, Saba uske baad school jana band kar deti hai, aur uska sara dhyaan uske nikah pe lag jata hai, Saba ke nikah ke lagbhag 4 mahine the, aur wo ghar me baith sirf sajati sawanrti thi, aur kuch bhi nahi, Saba ke andar ka utha havas bhi kuch din me dabane lagata hai,

Saba ka aise hi din bit raha tha, uske ghar me usi ke nikah ke liye kuch banaya jaa raha tha, uske liye kafi laboureres aaye hue the, Saba apne hijab me baithi hui thi, Saba yuhin baith ke apna kaam pe dhyaan de rahi thi, tabhi wahan pe kaam karane wala ladaka use dekh kar ankh mar deta hai, Saba andar se saham jaati hai, aur daud ke ghar ke andar ghus jaati hai, Sana ko phir wahi ahsas hota hai jo use wo ladake se hua tha, Saba ka sarir machalane laga, wo ab us ladake se bach ke rahane lagi, apne kamare me dubak kar, kaam kuch hi din chala aur Saba chip chip ke bach gayi, aur usne chain ki saans liya jab agle din koi labour nahi aaye, karzkram suru ho gaya aur pura pariwar aur khud Saba usme masgool ho gaye, Saba isi beech uth kar kuch der hawa khane nikalati hai ki uske kandhe pe kisi ka hath padata hai, aur Saba chaunk jati hai, ye wahi labourer tha,

-aaa aaaha aaaauu atum yaaaaha kya kar rahe ho,

Saba apne aap ko sambhalate hue bolati hai,

-daro nahi, aur kripya halla mat karo,

Saba chup ho jati hai, aur dheere se lekin gusse se puchati hai,

-pagal ho tum, himmat kaise hui teri mere sarir pe hath dalane ki, dafa ho jao lanati,

Wo ladaka chup chap wahin khada rahata hai,

-main aapse pyar karata hun, aapke bina main mar hi jaunga,

Saba chaunk jaati hai, is labour ne uske nikah ka samiyana banaya hai, aur ab ye kya bak raha hai,

-lanati dafa ho jao yaha se,

Saba ka gusse se sara sarir kanmp raha tha, Saba wahan se sidhe apne kamare me bhag jati hai, aur koi use bulane aaye to tabiyat ka bahana bana deti hai,

Lekin wo ladaka har din Saba ke ghar ke bahar aa chakkar katane laga, aur apne udas manhusiyat wala sakal bana leta, Saba ke nikah ka din paas aa raha tha, Saba ko samajh me nahi aa raha tha ki wo kya kare, wo apne pariwar walon ko bata sakti thi, lekin asliyat ye tha ki use khud isme bahut maja aa raha tha, aur wo chup chup ke us ladake ko satate hue dekhati thi,

Saba ke nikah ka samay aa gaya tha, aagle din saba ke liye ek aadmi ghodi chadh aane wala tha, Saba lekin kuch aur hi gul khila rahi thi, use ab is ladake me bada maja aane laga tha, aur phir Saba ek aisa faisala kiya jiske wajah se usne apne aap ko kafi kosa, lekin andar hi andar use kafi lazzat bhi aya.

Agle din Saba ka barat tha, aur aaj santi thi, log jaldi soo gaye the, Saba apne khidki se bahar jhanki to use wo ladaka wahin dikha, Saba apna himmat juta ke us ladake ko ishara karati hai, wo ladaka ko yakin nahi aata hai ki Saba use bula rahi hai, aur wo daudate hue Saba ke paas aata hai, aur Saba use ishare se chhat pe bulati hai,

-ye ladake, tum kyu mera picha karate ho, dekahte nahin tum mujhe nahi paa paoge, waise bhi kal mera nikah hai, tum chale jao yahan se,

Lekin us ladake ka kuch aur hi plan tha, aur wo jhapatte se Saba ko pakad leta hai, aur Saba ko chumane lagata hai, aur dusare hanth se Saba ka laal lehanga utarane lagata hai, Saba kuch der samajh nahi paati ki akhir kya ho raha hai, lekin uska sarir janata tha ki use kya chahiye aur Saba apna kapada utarane ke khud sath dene lagi,

Aur dekhate dekhate Saba kasarir nagn hogaa, aur wo ladaka Saba ko wahin pade barat ke liye laye tosak pe gira deta hai,

Saba ki saans tej chal rahi thi, aur us ladake ki bhi, chandani raat ke rosani me chamate Saba ka sarir dekh wo ladaka pagal ho raha tha,

Saba ka chehra us ladake par tha, aur uska Saba pe, wo ladaka Saba ka pair faila deta hai, aur Saba bhi mansik roop se tayyar ho jati hai, Saba apne sarmgah joki pani bahane se bilkul chikna ho gaya tha, ek garam rod mehsus karati hai, Saba ko romanch aur dar ka ajeeb misran mehsoos hota hai,

Achanak hi wo ladaka Saba ke muh pe apna muh rakh deta hai, aur pure taqat se apna lund Saba ke chut me daalane lagata hai,

Saba ki kanwari choot ek jhatake me phat jaati hai, Saba buri tarah se machal rahi thi, lekin wo ladaka Saba ko apne kabu me kar liya, aur ek aur jhatka deta hai, aur Saba ka chut ka baal. uske ladake ke jhat ke baal se mil jata hai, Saba ka sarir sthil ho jata hai, kuch der ke liye Saba ka hosh chala jata hai, Saba ko ko kuch paani jaisa chut se nikalate mehsus hota hai, Saba waise hi us ladake ke niche aadhe ghate tak padi rahi, Saba ko phir hosh aa jata hai, aur wo ladaka haule haule Saba ka chut me lund andar bahar karane lagata hai, aur Saba ko kuch der me lazzat se bhar jaati hai, Saba ko kuch der me kafi maja aane lagata hai, aur wo us ladake ka sath dene lagati hai, wo ladaka Saba ke chut me apna mani dalane lagata hai, aur phit apna lund bahar khinchata hai,

Bilkul laal, Saba ye dekh darr jati hai,

Lekin wo ladaka jhat se chut ko apne gamchi se saaf kar deta hai, aur phir Saba ko chumane lagata ha, Kuch der me Saba dubara tayyar ho jati hai, aur phir undono ka dusara pari suru hota hai, isbaar Saba ko utna dard nahi hua aur wo maje se lund lene lagati hai,

Saba tessari baar chudane ke baad uske, Saba ke andar jama mani risane lagata hai, Saba do baar jhad gayi thi, aur usko uthane tak ka himmat nahi tha, aur uske kokh se mani risane lagata hai,

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Saba yuhin soch kar aahein bhar rahi thi, ki usko apne piche koi mehsus hota hai, Saba piche murati hai, ye wahi labourer tha, Saba ghur ke use dekhati hai,

-kya chahiye tumhe, tumhe upar aane se kama kara tha na sahab ne,

wo ladaka Saba ko ghurate jata hai,

-kya chahiye badtameez ladake,

wo ladaka aage badhata hai, aur Saba ko apne gale me le leta hai, aur Saba ka bade bade nitamb ko masalane lagata hai,

-hai lalllah kya kar raha hai, aaaaaaah,

Uske baad wo ladaka Saba ke mamme pakad usko chumane lagata hai, uska jeebh Saba ke gale ko romane lagate hain, aur Saba ek bakari ki tarah memane lagati hai, Saba bina kisi virodh ke ye sab jhel rahi thi,

-aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah, haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaai raaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaabaaaaaaaaaaaaaa,

Wo ladaka ye sun jhat se chod deta hai, aur Saba wahin pe hanfane lagati hai,

-Madam main aapse bahut pyar karata hun, mujhe ek mauka dijiye main aapko saboot dunga apne pyaar ka,

Saba wahin khade khade ascharyachakit us ladake ko jaate dekahte rahati hai, Saba ko apne chut se rista hua pani mehsus hone lagata hai,

 

[irfaaaaaaan]

Chapter No - 3 :: Nafrat

Lal wahan se tez kadamo se bhag jata hai, use khud yakin nahi ho raha tha ki usne kaise itni himmat dikha di, is khatun ko usi ke ghar me pariwar walon ke bich me daboch liya, uske sauhar uske ristedaar uske bahche sab wahin pe the, Lal ko kafi darr lag raha tha ki aage ye khatun kya faisala leti hai, Lal man hi man bhagane ka plan bhi banane laga, usne piche saba ki halat tak pe gaur nahi kiya, jo wahin stabdh khadi hui thi,

Saba ka muh kisi machali ki bhanti khul band ho raha tha,

Saba ko yakin nahi aaya ki uske sath kya hua, wo apneaap ko sambhal nahi paa rahi thi, saba ka sara sarir me ajeeb si kanpan thi, jise wo hata nahi paa rahi thi, saba ke andar ki sihran uske mamme aur uske sarmgah ko garam kar rahe the, Saba wahin kuch der khadi kanpati rahi, phir dheere dheere use honsh aane laaga ki uske sath kya hua hai, aur use gussa aane lagata hai,

Saba wahan se bhagate hue us ladake ke piche jaati hai, Saba ka gussa ab uske sir pe tha, wo us ladake ko aukat dikha dena chahti thi,

Lal ko saba uske taraf gusse me aate hue dikhati hai, wo samajh jata hai uska yahan khatiya khada ho chuka hai, aur wo jhat se apne chappal ko pehan wahan se Saba ke pahunchane ke pehale ghar se nikal bhag jata hai, Lal abhi haal me pita tha, aur wo abhi bhi langada ke chal raha tha, wo abhi mar nahi khana chahta tha,


Saba Lal ko bhagate dekh thodi teji dikhati hai, lekin wo pehale hi nikal jata hai, Saba lekin use bahar nahi dhundhane jati hai,
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Lal yuhi bhatak raha tha, uske pet me kafi chuhe kud rahe the, lekin uska dhyaan sirf us aurat pe tha, Lal ne uske apne bahon me liya tha aur use ye malum pad chuka tha ki ye aurat kafi madak hai, aur Lal aise hi badi umar ke madak sudol sarir wale auratein ko bhogana chahta tha, lekin Lal ko aisa laga ki usne direct us aurat ko pakad apna chance bigad liya tha, tabhi Lal ke pet me se awaz aata hai, use kafi tez bhukh laga hau tha, Lal ko samajh me n ahi aa raha tha ki wo kya kare, uske paas is sahar me koi sahara nahi tha, aur wo kam chod bhag aaya tha, Lal waise hi sadak ke kinare baith gaya,

Saba ke hanth se wo ladaka bhag ke nikal gaya tha, wo apne naak se hunkar nikalate hue apne kamare me jaati hai, Saba apne kamare me let jati hai, Saba ek kafi under sexed aurat thi, aur use apne andar ke pyas ke bare me jara bhi andaza nahi tha, aur Saba letate hi iska ahsas ho jata hai, Saba ko apne jangh me kafi kapada chipka hua mehsus karata hai, Saba sarm se laal ho jati hai, use mehsus ho jata hai ki ye kuch aur nahi usi ke sarm gah se rista hua pani tha,

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Lal ka bhukh badhata jaa raha tha, use samajh me nahi aa raha tha ki wo kya kare, aur idhar udhar bhatakane laga, lekin dophar ke tez dhup me dukane bhi kafi band thi, Lal bhik mangane ko soch raha tha lekin wo ye achche se janata tha ki koi use bhik nahi dega, Lal ke sare darwaje band ho rahe the, tab lal ko yaad aata hai ki us aurat ke ghar khane ko milane wala tha, kaam ke baad, Lal ka dimag ka batti khulata hai, aur wo wahan se uth apna kapada saaf kar wapas us dilkas hasin ke ghar ke aur nikal jata hai, wahan pahunch ke haal chaal paat karata hai ki koi hungama to nahi hua aur use pata chalata hai ki wahan kuch shor nahi hua tha, Lal chip ke khane wale jagah pe chala jata hai, wahan pe wo jhat se thali utha khane pe tut padata hai,

Saba sone ki kosis karati hai, lekin uske sarir me jalag badhate hi jaa raha tha, uska halat kafi kharab hone laga aur upar se uska sauhar kahin bahar vakalat me vyast tha, Saba ko is se jyada gussa apne kalpana pe aa raha tha, jab wo ankhein band karati wahi ghatiya ladaka uske jahan me aa raha tha, Saba dheere dheere apne upar se kabu khone lagati hai, aur uska hanth apne sarmgah ki taraf badh jata hai,

-aaaaaaaaaaaah uimaaaaaaa, aaaaaah eeeee eeeee aaaaaaaah,

Saba ki anguliyan uske chut me rengane lagati hai, Saba ka sarir aise bhaati bana hua tha ki uska haanth kabu ke bahar jaane laga, kuch hi palon me Saba ka sarir akadane laga, aur wo apne charm seema pe pahunchane lagi,

aur idhar Lal khana kha leta hai, ab uska dimag phir kaam karane lagata hai, Lal phir usi mehbooba ko dhundhane lagata hai, Nikah ke baad log kafi thake haare hue the, isliye use koi tok nahi raha tha, aur Lal har kamare me jaa apne dilkas jaan ko dhundhane lagata hai,

Saba apne manzil pe pahumchane wali thi, uske haanth apne aap hi aage piche upar neeche ho rahe the, ki achanak bahar se darwaza khulata hai,

-krrrrrrrrrrrrrrk,

aur Lal ke samane badhawashi ki halat me Saba aur Saba ke samane usko sapane me satane wala wo ladaka, Saba apne aap ko rokane ki kosis taq nahi ki aur uska pura sarir akad jata hai, aur wo wahin dharasai ho jaati hai,

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Lal ke samane wo khatun apne sarmgah ko kas kar pakad apne aap ko rokane ki kosis kar rahi thi, lekin nakamyab ho rahi thi, Lal bhi karahate apne jaan ko dekh aage badhata hai, aur ek jhatake me Saba ke dono pairon ko pakad leta hai, Saba abhi is halat me nahi thi ki use wo rok paye, aur iska fayada utha Lal uska pyajama sarka deta hai, aur apna dono hath Saba ke jangho pe laga deta hai,

Saba ki sarir machali ki tarah chatpata to rahin thi, lekin uske andar ki taqat jaise khatam si ho gayi thi, Lal Saba ke pair failata hai, aur uske samane wo cheez thi jiski wo talash me tha, is aurat ki madak chut, laar tapkati hui, gulabi chut jo uske maa ke umar ki thi, Lal ki ankon me chamak tha, uska dil bhi tezi se dhadakane laga, usne aisa madak aurat pehale sayad hi dekha tha, Saba ki halat bilkul kharab thi, use mehsus ho raha tha, ki koi gair mard uske sarm gah ko ankh laga raha tha, uske jhang ko failaye hue tha, lekin use himmat nahi ho rahi thi ise mana karane ki, aise hi kuch pal bita aur Lal ki saans saba apne sarmgah pe mehsus ki aur wo siharane lagi, uska chut dubara pani me dubane laga, Saba karati bhi to kya, agar wo sor karati to wo logo ko kaise samjhati ki yahan kya ho raha hai, Saba ki hosh to aa gaya tha lekin phir bhi wo murtad wahi leti rahi, Lal Saba ke sarir ko niharane lagata hai, Lal uske baad Saba ka dhake hue tan se kapade ko upar kar deta hai, aur Saba ka bade bade mamme uske muh ke samane aa jate hain,

Lal is aurat ke mamme dekh pagal hone lagata hai, uske muh se lar tapak jata hai, Saba ne lekin is harqat se himmat juta leti hai, aur jhat se kapade ko pehan baith jati hai,

-kya hua tumhe achcha nahi laga,

Saba ki surat rone jaise ho gayi thi, aur wo apna sarir chipa leti hai,

-sssaaaeed, please,

Lal phir saba ke paas jata hai, aur uske chehre ko pakad leta hai,

-abhi to kitna tumhe achcha lag raha tha,

-nahi cch ch chale jao tum yahan se,

Lal aur aage badhata hai, uska chehra ab saba ke chehre ke samane tha, aur Saba tabhi jod se chekhati hai, aur Lal wahin gir jata hai,

-bachao mujhe, SAAAAAAEEEEEEEEEEEDDDDDDDDDDD,

Lal ghabra jata hai, use samajh me nahi aaya ki ye kya hua, Lal darr jata hai, wo pehale se langda raah tha, jo aage badh Saba ka muh pakad leta hai,

-sali kya kar rahi hai, mera jaan legi kya,

Saba ki ruashi aankhein us ladake pe thi, aur wo ladaka uske muh ko pakad chup kara raha tha, Saba phir jedhojahat chutane ko karane lagi lekin wo chut nahi paa rahi thi,

-choro mujhe eeeeeh aaaaaaaaaaah hato mere paas se,

ab saba aur lal me hatapai suru ho jati hai, Lal Saba ko kas kar pakada hua tha, Saba na chut paa rahi tha, na halla kar paa rahi thi, uske ankhon se ab anshu kafi tez chalane lagate hain, Saba ko samajh me nahi aa raha ki akhir usne aisa kya gunah kar diya ki alh use ye saja de raha hai,

Lal ko kisi ke aa jane ka darr tha lekin kafi der me bhi koi nahi aaya to wo thoda himmat lata hai,

-dekh main tumse bahut pyar karata hun, mera jab pehali nazar tumpe pada main tabhi se tumse pyar karata hun, mere paas kuch nahi hai dene ko siwaye jaan ke, please tum bhi mujhse pyar kar lona,

Saba ye sun sant ho jati hai, ye Lal bhi mehsus karata hai, aur wo saba ke muh se hanth hata leta hai, Saba ke ankhon me anshu abhi bhi tair rahe the,

-I hate you, samjhe ladake main tumse ture dilo jaan se nafrat karati hun,

Ye sun Lal ko gussa aa jata hai, nafrat nafrat, Lal ye sabd apne dilkas se badast nahi kar paa raha tha, aur Saba use aur galiyan sunane lagati hain,

-tum gawar jahil, garib tujhe himmat kaise hui mere taraf aankh utha ke bhi dekhane ki,

Saba ab Lal ko galiyan nikalane lagi, aur Lal andar se thoda hil sa gaya, use ye jara bhi ummid nahi thi, Lal ab saba ko chor deta hai, aur wahin khada saba ke nange sarir ko niharane lagata hai, Lal kisi kimat pe saba ko nahi chor sakta tha, uska janwar use nahi chodane deta, aur Lal saba ko jod se ek thppad marata hai, aur saba rone lagati hai,

-chup sali,

Saba dheere dheere ro rahi thi, uska sarir phir nidhal ho jata hai, aur Lal apna pant utarane lagata hai, Saba ye dekh kanmp jati hai, uska darr se halat kharab ho jata hai, aur wo aur rone lagati hai, Saba ki nazar is ladake ke lund pe padati hai, aur wo use jaane ki beekh mangane lagati hai,

-chor do allah ke liye mujhe chor do, tum mere bete jaise ho,

Saba ki awaz rone se sukh gayi thi, aur bahut muskil se nikal rahi thi, aur Lal ke andar ka haiwan ab kuch sunane ko tayyar nahi tha, lekin Lal is aurat ka rape nahi karana chahta tha, wo is se sayad asli me pyar kar baitha tha, lekin use apna nishan is aurat pe lagana tha taki wo ispe apna haq jata sake, aur Lal saba ke muh ke samane uske baal ko pakad apne lund ko aage piche karane lagata hai,

-chor do, aaaaah,

Saba apne nazar ko is kale chamadi wale lund se haatne ki kafi kosis kar rahi thi, lekin uski nazare wahi gad jaa rahi thi, Saba ke samane har cheez ab slow motion me chal raha tha, Lal kuch dino se apna pani nahi nikala tha, aur wo kuch der me apne manzil pe pahunch gaya, aur wo apna mani saba ke chehre pe girane laga, Saba ko ye sab yakin hi nahin ho raha tha, aur dekhate hi dekhate wo ladaka saba ke muh apna nishan laga ke bhag gaya,

Saba kuch der me uthi, use kafi galiz sa mehsus ho raha tha, aur wo alh ka naam lene lagi, aur mafi mangane lagi, aur aise hi wo uth nahane ko chali gayi,

Wo ladaka wahan se apna muh chupa ke bhag gaya, lekin use malum tha ki abhi ghee nahi nikala hai.

 

[irfaaaaaaan]

It seems like no one is interested for this story, ending it............

 

[Guffy]

Hello Everyone



We are Happy to present to you The annual story contest of Xforum "The Ultimate Story Contest" (USC).



Jaisa ki aap sabko maalum hai abhi pichle hafte he humne USC ki announcement ki hai or abhi kuch time Pehle Rules and Queries thread bhi open kiya hai or Chit chat thread toh pehle se he Hind section mein khulla hai.



Iske baare Mein thoda aapko btaadun ye ek short story contest hai jisme aap kissi bhi prefix ki short story post kar shaktey ho jo minimum 700 words and maximum 7000 words takk ho shakti hai. Isliye main aapko invitation deta hun ki aap Iss contest Mein apne khayaalon ko shabdon kaa Rupp dekar isme apni stories daalein jisko pura Xforum dekhega ye ek bahot acha kadam hoga aapke or aapki stories k liye kyunki USC Ki stories ko pure Xforum k readers read kartey hain.. Or jo readers likhna nahi caahtey woh bhi Iss contest Mein participate kar shaktey hain "Best Readers Award" k liye aapko bus karna ye hoga ki contest Mein posted stories ko read karke unke Uppar apne views dene honge.



Winning Writer's ko well deserved Awards milenge, uske aalwa aapko apna thread apne section mein sticky karne kaa mouka bhi milega Taaki aapka thread top par rahe uss dauraan. Isliye aapsab k liye ye ek behtareen mouka hai Xforum k sabhi readers k Uppar apni chaap chhodne ka or apni reach badhaane kaa.



Entry thread 7th February ko open hoga matlab aap 7 February se story daalna suru kar shaktey hain or woh thread 21st February takk open rahega Iss dauraan aap apni story daal shaktey hain. Isliye aap abhi se apni Kahaani likhna suru kardein toh aapke liye better rahega.



Koi bhi issue ho toh aap kissi bhi staff member ko Message kar shaktey hain..



Rules Check karne k liye Iss thread kaa use karein :- Rules And Queries Thread.


Contest k regarding Chit chat karne k liye Iss thread kaa use karein :- Chit Chat Thread.




Regards : XForum Staff.

 

[Aakash.]

Hello everyone.

We are Happy to present to you The annual story contest of XForum

"The Ultimate Story Contest" (USC).

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Jaisa ki aap sabko maloom hai abhi pichhle hafte hi humne USC ki announcement ki hai or abhi kuch time pehle Rules and Queries thread bhi open kiya hai or Chit Chat thread toh pehle se hi Hind section mein khula hai.

Well iske baare mein thoda aapko bata dun ye ek short story contest hai jisme aap kisi bhi prefix ki short story post kar sakte ho, jo minimum 700 words and maximum 7000 words (Story ke words count karne ke liye is tool ka use kare — Characters Tool) . Isliye main aapko invitation deta hun ki aap is contest mein apne khayaalon ko shabdon kaa roop dekar isme apni stories daalein jisko poora XForum dekhega, Ye ek bahot accha kadam hoga aapke or aapki stories ke liye kyunki USC ki stories ko poore XForum ke readers read karte hain.. Aap XForum ke sarvashreshth lekhakon mein se ek hain. aur aapki kahani bhi bahut acchi chal rahi hai. Isliye hum aapse USC ke liye ek chhoti kahani likhne ka anurodh karte hain. hum jaante hain ki aapke paas samay ki kami hai lekin iske bawajood hum ye bhi jaante hain ki aapke liye kuch bhi asambhav nahi hai.

Aur jo readers likhna nahi chahte woh bhi is contest mein participate kar sakte hain "Best Readers Award" ke liye. Aapko bas karna ye hoga ki contest mein posted stories ko read karke unke upar apne views dene honge.

Winning Writer's ko well deserved Awards milenge, uske alawa aapko apna thread apne section mein sticky karne ka mouka bhi milega taaki aapka thread top par rahe uss dauraan. Isliye aapsab ke liye ye ek behtareen mouka hai XForum ke sabhi readers ke upar apni chhaap chhodne ka or apni reach badhaane kaa.. Ye aap sabhi ke liye ek bahut hi sunehra avsar hai apni kalpanao ko shabdon ka raasta dikha ke yahan pesh karne ka. Isliye aage badhe aur apni kalpanao ko shabdon mein likhkar duniya ko dikha de.

Entry thread 7th February ko open hoga matlab aap 7 February se story daalna shuru kar sakte hain or woh thread 25th February tak open rahega is dauraan aap apni story post kar sakte hain. Isliye aap abhi se apni Kahaani likhna shuru kardein toh aapke liye better rahega.

Aur haan! Kahani ko sirf ek hi post mein post kiya jaana chahiye. Kyunki ye ek short story contest hai jiska matlab hai ki hum kewal chhoti kahaniyon ki ummeed kar rahe hain. Isliye apni kahani ko kayi post / bhaagon mein post karne ki anumati nahi hai. Agar koi bhi issue ho toh aap kisi bhi staff member ko Message kar sakte hain.


Story se related koi doubt hai to iske liye is thread ka use kare — Chit Chat Thread

Kisi bhi story par apna review post karne ke liye is thread ka use kare — Review Thread

Rules check karne ke liye is thread ko dekho — Rules & Queries Thread

Apni story post karne ke liye is thread ka use kare — Entry Thread

Prizes

Position	Benifits
Winner	1500 Rupees + Award + 30 days sticky Thread (Stories)
1st Runner-Up	500 Rupees + Award + 2500 Likes + 15 day Sticky thread (Stories)
2nd Runner-UP	5000 Likes + 7 Days Sticky Thread (Stories) + 2 Months Prime Membership
Best Supporting Reader	Award + 1000 Likes+ 2 Months Prime Membership
Members reporting CnP Stories with Valid Proof	200 Likes for each report

Regards :- XForum Staff

 

[rumia32]

Bahut khub..

 

[Aakash.]

Hello everyone.

We are Happy to present to you The annual story contest of XForum

"The Ultimate Story Contest" (USC).

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"Chance to win cash prize up to Rs 8000"
Jaisa ki aap sabko maloom hai abhi pichhle hafte hi humne USC ki announcement ki hai or abhi kuch time pehle Rules and Queries thread bhi open kiya hai or Chit Chat thread toh pehle se hi Hindi section mein khula hai.

Well iske baare mein thoda aapko bata dun ye ek short story contest hai jisme aap kisi bhi prefix ki short story post kar sakte ho, jo minimum 700 words and maximum 7000 words ke bich honi chahiye (Story ke words count karne ke liye is tool ka use kare — Characters Tool) . Isliye main aapko invitation deta hun ki aap is contest mein apne khayaalon ko shabdon kaa roop dekar isme apni stories daalein jisko poora XForum dekhega, Ye ek bahot accha kadam hoga aapke or aapki stories ke liye kyunki USC ki stories ko poore XForum ke readers read karte hain.. Aap XForum ke sarvashreshth lekhakon mein se ek hain. aur aapki kahani bhi bahut acchi chal rahi hai. Isliye hum aapse USC ke liye ek chhoti kahani likhne ka anurodh karte hain. hum jaante hain ki aapke paas samay ki kami hai lekin iske bawajood hum ye bhi jaante hain ki aapke liye kuch bhi asambhav nahi hai.

Aur jo readers likhna nahi chahte woh bhi is contest mein participate kar sakte hain "Best Readers Award" ke liye. Aapko bas karna ye hoga ki contest mein posted stories ko read karke unke upar apne views dene honge.

Winning Writer's ko well deserved Cash Awards milenge, uske alawa aapko apna thread apne section mein sticky karne ka mouka bhi milega taaki aapka thread top par rahe uss dauraan. Isliye aapsab ke liye ye ek behtareen mouka hai XForum ke sabhi readers ke upar apni chhaap chhodne ka or apni reach badhaane kaa.. Ye aap sabhi ke liye ek bahut hi sunehra avsar hai apni kalpanao ko shabdon ka raasta dikha ke yahan pesh karne ka. Isliye aage badhe aur apni kalpanao ko shabdon mein likhkar duniya ko dikha de.

Entry thread 15th February ko open ho chuka matlab aap apni story daalna shuru kar sakte hain or woh thread 5th March 2024 tak open rahega is dauraan aap apni story post kar sakte hain. Isliye aap abhi se apni Kahaani likhna shuru kardein toh aapke liye better rahega.

Aur haan! Kahani ko sirf ek hi post mein post kiya jaana chahiye. Kyunki ye ek short story contest hai jiska matlab hai ki hum kewal chhoti kahaniyon ki ummeed kar rahe hain. Isliye apni kahani ko kayi post / bhaagon mein post karne ki anumati nahi hai. Agar koi bhi issue ho toh aap kisi bhi staff member ko Message kar sakte hain.


Story se related koi doubt hai to iske liye is thread ka use kare — Chit Chat Thread

Kisi bhi story par apna review post karne ke liye is thread ka use kare — Review Thread

Rules check karne ke liye is thread ko dekho — Rules & Queries Thread

Apni story post karne ke liye is thread ka use kare — Entry Thread

Prizes

Position	Benifits
Winner	4000 Rupees + Award + 5000 Likes + 30 days sticky Thread (Stories)
1st Runner-Up	1500 Rupees + Award + 3500 Likes + 15 day Sticky thread (Stories)
2nd Runner-UP	1000 Rupees + 2000 Likes + 7 Days Sticky Thread (Stories)
3rd Runner-UP	750 Rupees + 1000 Likes
Best Supporting Reader	750 Rupees + Award + 1000 Likes
Members reporting CnP Stories with Valid Proof	200 Likes for each report

Regards :- XForum Staff