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Fantasy Abhayendra....The Dragon Lord

Ajay

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Sham ka waqt tha. Paschim me Suraj dub raha tha. Ek Pahad k upar ek 15-16 saal ka ladka gum sum betha hua tha. Suraj dub ne k baad wo uth kar Pahad se niche aa gaya. Pahad k niche ek gaon tha. Gaon k sare ghar aas paas the par ek ghar thoda dur tha. Uss ghar pe ek budha aadmi tha. Ladka uss ghar k taraf chala gaya.

Budha Aadmi-“ Aa gaye bete.”

Ladka-“Haan Dadaji.”

Dadaji-“ Chalo khana khalo.”

Ladka-“ Chaliye.”

Phir dono khana khate hain. Khana khane ke baad ladka apne room ki taraf chala jata hai aur ek kitab padhne lagta hai. Kitab me cultivation k bare bataya gaya. Cultivation ek tareh ka process hai jiske madad se warrior apne aap ko takatwar banate hai.

Ye kitab basic cultivation k bare mein batata hai. Ladka usse roj padhta tha par 4 saal hone ko hai par wo cultivate nahi kar sakta tha. Kyun ki uske body me uske meredian bahut kamzor the. Jab bhi wo thoda mehnat karta wo thak jata tha. Gaon k sabhi log cultivate kar sakte the par wo nahi kar sakta tha. Uske dadaji ne kai jadi buti ki madad li par kuchh na hosaka. Gaon k sabhi bachhe 12 saal se cultivation startjar dete hain. Uske Dadaji bhi ek 4th rank Martial Artist cultivator hai. Unki umar ab 70-80 ho chuki hai. Basic cultivation k 9 stage hote hai.

1st-3rd Rank ko Martial Learner,

4th-6th ko Martial Artist aur

7th-9th ko Martial Master bolte hai.

Gaon me sabse jyada takatwar gaon k pradhan hai jo ki 6th rank Martial Artist hai. Uske Dadaji 5th rank mein aate hai. Ye sab sochte sochte wo so gaya.

Subga subha uth kar wo apna kam khatam kar ke dadaji k pas jake beth gaya. Phir dono ne khana khake paas k jungle k taraf chale gaye. Kuchh dur chalne k baad wo log jadi buti ki talash karne lage. Jungle k bahari taraf kuchh sadharan jungli janawar aur kuchh sadharan beast the.( Yahan beast ka matalab hai jo janwar baki janawar se takatwar hai, aur wo cultivate kar sakte hain.) Dadaji un sab janwar aur beast se bach k jadi buti late the. Kuchh der baad wo log ek jagah pahunch gaye jahan pe ek 100 yrs ka ginseng tha. Par lekin dikkat ye hai ki uske paas ek Bear tha. Wo uss medicine ki rakhwali karta tha.

Dadaji-“ Beta, wo dekho wo ek Black Stripped Bear hai aur wo 3rd rank Beast hai. Uske pith pe dekh rahe ho na 3 stripes hai. Black Stripped Bear ka main strong point uska defence hai. Aur offence k liye wo apne panjhe ka istemal karta hai. Aur agar sikar uske panjhe mein phas gaya ho to wo apne danto ka istemal karke apne sikar ko khatam karta hai. Uska weak point ye hai ki uski speed bahut kam hai aur gardan(neck) area pe uska defence kam hai. Wo dekho wo ek ginseng ki hifazat kar raha hai. Us ginseng ki color aur smell se pata chalta hai ki wo ek 100 yrs Blood Red Ginseng hai. Uska use body ko strong karta hai aur wo tumhe cultivate karne me madad karega.”

Ladka-“ Par dadaji ye bahut risky hai. Aap risk mat liziye.”

Dadaji-“ Are tum ne apne dadaji ki kya samajh rakha hai aise 3rd rank Beast ko me aise masal sakta hun.”

Ladka-“ Par dadaji tab aap jawan the. Ab aap budhe ho gaye ho.”

Dadaji-“ Are kuchh nahi hoga tum jake us Patthar ki pichhe chup jao aur dekho mein kaise uss bear ko marta hun.”

Ladka-“ Par dadaji”.

Dadaji-“ Par war kuchh nahi.”

Ladka jaake pathhar ki pichhe chhup jata hai aur Dadaji uss bear k paas chale jate hain. Bear ko jab Dadaji ka smell pata chalta hai tab wo palat kar dekhta hai aur ek jordar dahad lagata hai.

“Roarrrrrr…..”
Congratulations for new story
 

Ristrcted

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:congrats: for first story...
Nice start
keep writing
 

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“Roarrrr….”

Bear ne age badh kar dadaji ki taraf daud gaya. Phir usne apna panjha dadaji k taraf marne laga.

“Flaming Metal Fist”

Dadaji ne apne fist ko bear k taraf age badha diya. Jab dono me takrab hua to aas paas ki jamin hil gayi. Dono apas me takra kar pichhe hogaye. Dadaji 5 kadam pichhe ho gaye aur Bear bas 3 kadam pichhe aya tha. Uska defence bahut strong hai. Rank difference hone k babajut wo dadaji par havi tha. Uske baad bear phir se dusra panjha mara. Par dadaji ne apne footwork ka iste mal karke wahan se khisak gaye aur fir ek kick jad diya.

“Dark Panther Kick”

Bear ab thoda injured ho gaya. Par uska war ab jyada takatwar ho gaya tha. Wo pura gusse se lad raha tha. Aise hi dono ne kuch 15 min tak ladhai ki ye pura ghamasan yudhh tha. Dadaji ko bhi kuchh chote ayi thi aur Bear bhi injured tha.

“Roarrrr…”

“Ahhhhh…..”

Bear ka panjha dadaji k haath mein ghus gaya tha aur Dadaji ka fist uske gale ghus gaya tha. Bear chatpata raha tha par dadaji ne ek kick uske sar par mara.

Kuchh minit baad wo bear mar gaya par dadaji bahut ghayal ho gaye tha. Ladka unke paas daud kar chala gaya.

Ladka-“Dadaji”

Dadaji-“ Kuchh nahi hua mujhe. Ye bas mamuli chote hain.”

Uske baad ladka dadaji ka Marhampati karta hai aur uske baad ginseng ko thik se apne bag me rakhta hai.

Dadaji-“ Hum log jungle k bahut bhitar hain, abhi bapas jana thik nahi hai. Yahi kahi raat gujar na chahiye.”

Uske baad dadaji ek Pahad ki taraf chal diye. Pahad pe ek gunfa tha. Kafi bada tha, shayad Bear ka hoga. Wo dono gunfa k andar chale jate hain. Phir ladka kuchh lakdiyon ko ikattha kar k khana banane lag gaya. Udhar Dadaji gunfa k andar chhanbin karne chale gaye. Gunfa k andar ek chhota sa talab tha.wahan k pani thanda tha. Jab Dadaji ne wahan pe nahane k liye ghuse tab ek anokhi chis hui.
 

ABHISHEK TRIPATHI

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“Roarrrr….”

Bear ne age badh kar dadaji ki taraf daud gaya. Phir usne apna panjha dadaji k taraf marne laga.

“Flaming Metal Fist”

Dadaji ne apne fist ko bear k taraf age badha diya. Jab dono me takrab hua to aas paas ki jamin hil gayi. Dono apas me takra kar pichhe hogaye. Dadaji 5 kadam pichhe ho gaye aur Bear bas 3 kadam pichhe aya tha. Uska defence bahut strong hai. Rank difference hone k babajut wo dadaji par havi tha. Uske baad bear phir se dusra panjha mara. Par dadaji ne apne footwork ka iste mal karke wahan se khisak gaye aur fir ek kick jad diya.

“Dark Panther Kick”

Bear ab thoda injured ho gaya. Par uska war ab jyada takatwar ho gaya tha. Wo pura gusse se lad raha tha. Aise hi dono ne kuch 15 min tak ladhai ki ye pura ghamasan yudhh tha. Dadaji ko bhi kuchh chote ayi thi aur Bear bhi injured tha.

“Roarrrr…”

“Ahhhhh…..”

Bear ka panjha dadaji k haath mein ghus gaya tha aur Dadaji ka fist uske gale ghus gaya tha. Bear chatpata raha tha par dadaji ne ek kick uske sar par mara.

Kuchh minit baad wo bear mar gaya par dadaji bahut ghayal ho gaye tha. Ladka unke paas daud kar chala gaya.

Ladka-“Dadaji”

Dadaji-“ Kuchh nahi hua mujhe. Ye bas mamuli chote hain.”

Uske baad ladka dadaji ka Marhampati karta hai aur uske baad ginseng ko thik se apne bag me rakhta hai.

Dadaji-“ Hum log jungle k bahut bhitar hain, abhi bapas jana thik nahi hai. Yahi kahi raat gujar na chahiye.”

Uske baad dadaji ek Pahad ki taraf chal diye. Pahad pe ek gunfa tha. Kafi bada tha, shayad Bear ka hoga. Wo dono gunfa k andar chale jate hain. Phir ladka kuchh lakdiyon ko ikattha kar k khana banane lag gaya. Udhar Dadaji gunfa k andar chhanbin karne chale gaye. Gunfa k andar ek chhota sa talab tha.wahan k pani thanda tha. Jab Dadaji ne wahan pe nahane k liye ghuse tab ek anokhi chis hui.
Nice update
 
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