Fantasy ABHI - THE WARRIOR 2 (Completed)

[abhi1008]

Bahot shaandaar mazedaar lajawab update
Bhai kahani apne end ki taraf h ya abhi koyi villain ki entry baki h by the way
Bahot shaandaar update

Thanku soo much bhai aapke shandar support k liye ....

Bhai abhi yeh end nahi hai ...picture abhi baaki hai mere dost ...



aise hi saath banaye rakhe ??

Update 66 posted.....

 

[mashish]

Update - 66

Arsalan aur Dhara ne ..apni sammilit urja se phir se Arin grah ki praja ka nirman kiya ....charo taraf phir se khushiyo ka samrajya sthapit ho gaya ....

ab aagee .....chalte hai ...Prithvi par aaj k samay .mein.......

ek navjawan ladka apne bedroom mein gahri nind soya tha ..chehre par maasumiyat aur hontho par muskan najane kiske sapno mein khoya tha .....kamre mein halki si night bulb ki roshni ....faili hui thi ....tabhi halke se uske bedroom ka darwaja khula ..aur koi..dhire dhire halke kadmo se uske bister ki or badha ....

bister tak pahunchkar usne pahle gaur se uss ladke ko dekha fir dhire se woh uske bed par chad gaya ....usne pane haath mein pakdi hui chij ko ek baar dekha ....jisse dekhkar uske chehre par muskurahat aagayi ....woh chij ek electronic horn thi ....usne ek baar aur uss gahri neend mein sote hue ladke k chehre par nazar dali .....aur uss horn ka button daba diya ....aur ek ..tez aawaj hui .piippiiiiiiiiiiii.....

Achanak hui iss tezz aawaj k kaaran ...woh ..ladka ..gahri need se ek zhakte mein uchala ..aur ..hadbadahat ....mein bed se niche gir gaya .....abhi woh kuch samazta .k ..usse khilkhilar hasne ki aawaj aayi .....

hehehehe...bhai dar gaye ..bhai ..dar..gaye ...he..he..he..he....

ladka - Nitu ki bacchi ...tu..ruk abhi tuze batata hu ....aur usne ....usko pakadne k liye ..bed par chalang laga di ...parantu woh usse pakad paata ..uske pahele hi ....woh ...woh bacchi ...jisne uske kaan k paas horn bajaya tha ...woh bed se utarkar bhag khadi hui ...woh ladka bhi uske picche ..pakadne k liye bhaga ....woh usse pakadta ..tabhi kamre ki light on ho gayi ....

uske saamne uski bua ....cake lekar khadi thi ...aur uske ..mom dad bhi the ....sabhi ek saath ...

Happy Birthday to you ...Happy Birthday to you ...Happy Birthday to dear Deepu Haappy Birthday to you .....

Yeh ladka tha ..Deepu ..yani ..k Thakur Deepak Singh .....Thakur Abhinav Singh yani k Abhi aur Rimpy Devi ..ka beta .....aur Jo Cake lekar khadi thi Woh thi Uski bua ..Adira .singh ..jisse Abhi pyar se Addu bulata tha ...issiliye ..Deepu bhi usse Addu bua kahkar hi bulata tha .. .aur woh choti bacchi thi uski ladli shararati aur cute si choti bahen Neetu ...

Addu ko Deepu mein wohi Deepu nazar aata tha jisse usne unn khatarnak saayo k kaaran kho diya tha .....issiliye woh ..Deepu par apni jaan chidakti thi ...shadi k baad uske bhi do bacche the ..woh deepu ka janamdin manane jo ab poora 18 saal ka ho gaya tha ....adhi raat ko cake lekar aayi thi .....

Addu ko cake lekar khade dekhkar Deepu bahut khush hua ...usne Addu k pair chue ....

Addu - betu tuze kitni baar mana kiya hai mere pair chune ko lekin tu hai k maanta hi nahi ...Addu ne Cake Rimpy ko pakdaya aur Deepu ko ..uthakar ..uske maate ko chuma ..aur sar par haath pherte hue ...boli - mera pyra baccha ...Happy birthday to you betu ...aur usse gale laga liya ....Deepu ko gale lagakar Addu ki aankhien nam ho gayi usse phri apne muh bole bhai Deepu ki yaad aagayi .....

Deepu - ( Addu se alag hota hua )....yeh kya hai bua phir aapki aankhon mein yeh aansoo ...( apne haaton se Addu k aansoo ponchta hua ) kitni baar kaha hai muzhe aapki aankhon mein yeh aansoo acche nahi lagte ...lekin har janamdin par aise hi hota hai ....muzhe lagta hai k mein hi bura hu ...meri hi wajah se aapki aankhon mein yeh aansoo aate hai na ...

Addu - nahi mere bacche tu toh meri khushi hai ....teri wajah se kyu aayenge yeh aansoo ..yeh toh bas ause hi ....

Deepu - toh phir promise karo ab dubara aisa nahi hona chahiye nahi toh mein aapse baat nahi karunga ....

Addu - ( kaan pakadte hue ) thik hai baba ..ab nahi karungi ...

Deepu - thats like my beautiful bua ..I love you .bua ...( aur Addu k gale lag jaata hai )

Adfu - i love you too mera baacha ....

itne der se Abhi ...Rimy aur .Neetu ..bua aur bhatije ka pyar chup chap khade dekh rahi thi .....

Abhi - aur kitni der aise hi yaha darwaje par khada rahna hoga ...bhai hum bhi yaha line mein hai Birthday boy ko wish karne k liye ....chalo pahele cake kaato ....

Rimpy - haa nahi toh kya kab se cake lekar khdi hu ab toh mere haath bhi dukh rahe hai ....

phir sab room k andar aate hai aur Rimpy wahi room mein ek table par cake rakhkar candle lagati hai ...Phir Deepu phoonk maarkar un candles ko buzhata hai ..aur cake katata hai aur ek baar sabhi phir gane lagte hai .....

Happy Birthday to you...Happy Birthday to you ....Happy Birthday To Dear Deepu ..Happy Birthday To You ......

Cake katne k baad ..Addu ...Deepu ..ko khilati hai ..Deepu bhi Aduu ko cake khilakar Aashirwad leta hai ...Phir ..woh Apni maa Rimpy ka Aashirwad leta hai ..Rimpy bhi ...apne bete ka maatha chumkar usse gale laga leti hai ....

Rimpy - kush raho mere bacche ...Bagwan kare mere betu ..ko meri bhi unar lag jaaye ..aur... ..jeewan mein aanewali saari musibate dur ho jaaye ...tu humsha aise ki kush aur swastha rahe .....apne ..jigar k tukde k sar par haath pherte hue Aashirwad deti hai ....

Deepu - kya maa ...aap bhi ....muzhe ..aapki unar nahi chahiye ..mein toh chahta hu ...aapka yeh mamta bhara anchal humesha mere sarpar bana rahe .....

Rimpy ek baar phir apne bete ki iss baat se ...uska maatha chum leti hai ...

Tabhi bed k side table par rakha hua mobile bajne lagta hai ....toh sabka dhyan yss or jaata hai ....lekin Deepu uss or dhyan nahi deta aur Apne pita Abhi k charan chuta hai ....Abhi usse kandhe se pakadkar uthata hai ..aur ..sar par haath rakhkar Aashirwad dete hue ...

Abhi - Jamandin Mubarak ho mere sher ....aaj tu poore 18 ka ho gaya ..ab samay aagaya hai tuze apne vansh ki parampara ko aage badhane ka ....mera Aashirwad hai k tu har jathinay ko paar jarta hua apne kkaksya ko prapt kare ...

Chotti Neetu bichari apne number aane ka intezar kar rahi thi ..bade der se chup thi lekin ab usse sabra nahi ho raha tha .....

Neetu - arre bhai muzhe bhi cake khilao na mein kab se wait kar rahi hu .....

Deepu - tuzhe toh mein bilkul bhi nahi khilaunga cake ...ek toh muzhe iss tarah uthaya aur jab mein bed se gir gaya toh ...badi hasi aarahi thi ....

Deepu ki baat sunkar Neetu ki aankhon mein aansoo aagaye ....jisse dekhkar Abhi ...

tabhi phir mobile baja ...aur sabhi ka dhyan uspar gaya ...

Rimpy yeh baar baar kaun ph kar raha hai ..ek baar baat toh kar le ....

Deepu - kuch nahi mom woh frnds honge jo wish karne k liye ph kar rahe hai baad mein baat kar lunga ....

Abhi - woh toh thik hai..... lekin yeh kya tarika hai . ...apni choti bahen se baat karne ka ...yeh bechari yoh ...tuzhe wish karne k chakkar mein ab tak soyi nahi ....aur tu hai k issase naraz ho raha hai ....

Neetu - papa mere bhai ko koi kuch nahi bologa ..aur aap daatoge bhi nahi ....

Abhi - kaan pakadte hue - sorry gudiya ...nahi bolunga ..

Addu - Chalo bhai yaha se inn do bhai bahen k bich hum bolenge toh yahi hofa ...inhe hi nipatne do ....

Deepu - kaan pakadte hue Neetu k aage ghutno k bal baith jaata hai ...
sorry gudiya mein toh mazak kar raha tha ....mein jabhi tuzhse naraj ho sakta hu ...

itna kahkar Deepu .ne. Neetu ko uthakar apni goad mein bithaya ....aur uske aansoo ponchte hue ...

Deepu - naraz hai meri gudiya apne bhai se ....

Neetu - ( muh fulate hue ) hmmm...aap bhi toh gussa ho gaye the ...

Deepu - nahi gudiya ..mein tuzhse kabhi gussa ho sakta hu ...tu toh meri jaan hai ...mai toh bas mazak kar raha tha .....

Neetu - saachi bhai aap muzhse naraj nahi ho na ....

Deepu - bilkul nahi gudiya .....aur cake ka tukda usse khila deta hai ....love you mera baccha ...
itna kahkar Deepu apni pyari si gudiya k gaal par kiss kar deta hai ....

Neetu - Love you too bhai ....lekin muzhe bhi aapko cake khilaungi ....

Deepu cake ki plate uske aage kar deta hai ...Neetu ek bada sa tukda uthati hai ...aur Deepu apna muh khol deta hai ...lekin ...tabhi Neetu ...cake ka Deepu k muh par mal deti hai ...aur turant godi se khudkar ....darwaje ki taraf bhag jaati hai ....Deepu usse dekhta hai ....toh muh chadkar ...Happy birthday bhai kahkar bhag jaati hai ...

Neetu ki iss shararat par sabhi hasne lagte hai ...Deepu k chehre par bhi apni iss natkhat bahen ki shararat par hassi aajaati hai .....

Abhi - ab jaldi se so joo beta ....kal hume gaon k liye nikalna hai ...tumahare janadin ka ustsav kal dumdham se wahi hoga ...aur haa apne frnds ko bola k nahi ...

Deepu - Haa dad sabko bol diya hai ....

Abhi - thik hai good night ....

Phir sab good night wish karte hai aur apne apne room mein chale jaate hai ...Yaha Deepu ka ..mobile phir baja ...usne number dekha toh uske hontho par muskurahat aagayi thi ....lekin saare chehre par cake laga tha ....issiliye woh usse saaf karne bathroom chala gaya ..fresh hokar aaya ...aur ...phir ...usne mobli se ussi number par dail kiya jisase usse baar baar call aarahi thi .....

Baar baar ring baj rahi thi lekin udhar se koi ph nahi utha raha tha ....Deepu samaz gaya ...k mamla gadbad ho gaya hai ...usse uss number par sorry ka msg bhej diya ...thodi der tak koi jawab nahi aaya ..phir msg aaya Deepu ne dekha toh gusse wala emoji tha ....
jusse dekhkar Deepu ne phir msg kiya ....

Nakam thi meri sab koshishe ussko manane ki
Pata nahi kaha se sikhi adaye jaalim ne rooth jaane ki ...

tabhi phir ek msg aaya ....
mohabbat ajamane ho to bas itana he kafe hai,
jara sa rooth kar dekho manane kaun ata hai…

Deepu ne phir call kiya kiya iss baar call utha liya ...yeh thi Kirti jo Deepu ki jaan uska pyar thi

Deepu - haaye meri jaan aakhir iss naachij ka call uthane ki jahmat utha hi li ...

Kirti - ek toh khud mera ph nahi uthate ho aur upar se muzhe hi dosh de rahe ho ...

Deepu - main kya karta jaan , uss samay mom dad ..bua aur Neetu thi toh kaise uthata ....

Kirti - toh kya hua ...unhe bata dete k unki bahu ka ph hai ....

Deepu - accha ji ...lagta hai shadi kuch jyada hi jaldi hai ..hai thik hai kal milo waise bhi gaon jaa hi rahe hai ..wahi shadi bhi kar lenge ...mein toh abhi chala mom dad ko yeh khush khabri dene ..

Kirti - nahi ..nahi...ruko ...mein toh bas aise hi kah rahi thi ....abhi toh humare khelne kudne k din din ...abhi toh humne acvhe se pyar ko enjoy bhi nahi kya ....

Deepu - aagayi na line par ...lekin ab tak tumne wish nahi kiya ..

Kirti - uff ..mein bhi na baaton mein bhul hi gayi ...Happy Birthday to my shona ...

Deepu - yeh kya sukha sukha ...ek kiss toh do na ...

Kirti - abhi nahi ..kal kar dungi gila ....abhi k liye sukha hi thik hai ...

Deepu - accha kya gila kar dogi ...

Kirti - hat ...aap bhi na kuch jyada hi naughty ho rahe ho ...abhi k liye bye Good night ...kal jaldi uthna bhi hai kitni tayari karni hai .....Love you babu bye ..

Deepu - Love you too sweetu ...good night ....

Abhi k liye itna hi ....
Agla update jald hi .....

lovely update

 

[abhi1008]

To aakhir kaar abhi apne grah arin pahuch hi gya with family ar waha pr reconstruction bhi ho gya ye bahut khub...sath me maha astra bhi prapt ho gya h...khusiyoon ke din aa gye hain...pr dekhte h in elbis kb tk yun hi chup rhega. Abhi ke jeevan me kaante to use bichhane hi h...uski khusiyon ko grahan to use lgana hi h.. ..ye shanti aane wale tufaan se phle ki khamoshi h...
Intzaar rhega agle part ka...bahut khub update...

Thanku soo much Rudra bhai aapke shandar support & super fantasic brilliantly written Review k liye ....

Bhai Ebils toh amar hai woh toh har kaal aur har samay mein kuch na kuch toh karega ...woh direct toh kissi ka kuch nahi kar sakta ...kyuki woh ek saaya hai ..usse kissi na kissi aise vayakti ka sahara chahiye jiske mann mein burai ho .aur yadi koi aise vyakti powers k saath ho toh kahna hi kya ....tab usse rokne k liye ..ishwar ya uske ansh ki aawashyakta hoti hai ....dekhte hai aage ...woh ab kya karta hai ...



aise hi saath banaye rakhe ??

Update 66 posted.....

 

[Akil]

So abhi tak Abhi ka past chal raha tha ab Deepu ki baari hai sanhaarak banne ki wese Deepu ki yaksh wali shaktiyaan kab jaagrit hongi?

 

[Hunterrrr69]

Update - 66

Arsalan aur Dhara ne ..apni sammilit urja se phir se Arin grah ki praja ka nirman kiya ....charo taraf phir se khushiyo ka samrajya sthapit ho gaya ....

ab aagee .....chalte hai ...Prithvi par aaj k samay .mein.......

ek navjawan ladka apne bedroom mein gahri nind soya tha ..chehre par maasumiyat aur hontho par muskan najane kiske sapno mein khoya tha .....kamre mein halki si night bulb ki roshni ....faili hui thi ....tabhi halke se uske bedroom ka darwaja khula ..aur koi..dhire dhire halke kadmo se uske bister ki or badha ....

bister tak pahunchkar usne pahle gaur se uss ladke ko dekha fir dhire se woh uske bed par chad gaya ....usne pane haath mein pakdi hui chij ko ek baar dekha ....jisse dekhkar uske chehre par muskurahat aagayi ....woh chij ek electronic horn thi ....usne ek baar aur uss gahri neend mein sote hue ladke k chehre par nazar dali .....aur uss horn ka button daba diya ....aur ek ..tez aawaj hui .piippiiiiiiiiiiii.....

Achanak hui iss tezz aawaj k kaaran ...woh ..ladka ..gahri need se ek zhakte mein uchala ..aur ..hadbadahat ....mein bed se niche gir gaya .....abhi woh kuch samazta .k ..usse khilkhilar hasne ki aawaj aayi .....

hehehehe...bhai dar gaye ..bhai ..dar..gaye ...he..he..he..he....

ladka - Nitu ki bacchi ...tu..ruk abhi tuze batata hu ....aur usne ....usko pakadne k liye ..bed par chalang laga di ...parantu woh usse pakad paata ..uske pahele hi ....woh ...woh bacchi ...jisne uske kaan k paas horn bajaya tha ...woh bed se utarkar bhag khadi hui ...woh ladka bhi uske picche ..pakadne k liye bhaga ....woh usse pakadta ..tabhi kamre ki light on ho gayi ....

uske saamne uski bua ....cake lekar khadi thi ...aur uske ..mom dad bhi the ....sabhi ek saath ...

Happy Birthday to you ...Happy Birthday to you ...Happy Birthday to dear Deepu Haappy Birthday to you .....

Yeh ladka tha ..Deepu ..yani ..k Thakur Deepak Singh .....Thakur Abhinav Singh yani k Abhi aur Rimpy Devi ..ka beta .....aur Jo Cake lekar khadi thi Woh thi Uski bua ..Adira .singh ..jisse Abhi pyar se Addu bulata tha ...issiliye ..Deepu bhi usse Addu bua kahkar hi bulata tha .. .aur woh choti bacchi thi uski ladli shararati aur cute si choti bahen Neetu ...

Addu ko Deepu mein wohi Deepu nazar aata tha jisse usne unn khatarnak saayo k kaaran kho diya tha .....issiliye woh ..Deepu par apni jaan chidakti thi ...shadi k baad uske bhi do bacche the ..woh deepu ka janamdin manane jo ab poora 18 saal ka ho gaya tha ....adhi raat ko cake lekar aayi thi .....

Addu ko cake lekar khade dekhkar Deepu bahut khush hua ...usne Addu k pair chue ....

Addu - betu tuze kitni baar mana kiya hai mere pair chune ko lekin tu hai k maanta hi nahi ...Addu ne Cake Rimpy ko pakdaya aur Deepu ko ..uthakar ..uske maate ko chuma ..aur sar par haath pherte hue ...boli - mera pyra baccha ...Happy birthday to you betu ...aur usse gale laga liya ....Deepu ko gale lagakar Addu ki aankhien nam ho gayi usse phri apne muh bole bhai Deepu ki yaad aagayi .....

Deepu - ( Addu se alag hota hua )....yeh kya hai bua phir aapki aankhon mein yeh aansoo ...( apne haaton se Addu k aansoo ponchta hua ) kitni baar kaha hai muzhe aapki aankhon mein yeh aansoo acche nahi lagte ...lekin har janamdin par aise hi hota hai ....muzhe lagta hai k mein hi bura hu ...meri hi wajah se aapki aankhon mein yeh aansoo aate hai na ...

Addu - nahi mere bacche tu toh meri khushi hai ....teri wajah se kyu aayenge yeh aansoo ..yeh toh bas ause hi ....

Deepu - toh phir promise karo ab dubara aisa nahi hona chahiye nahi toh mein aapse baat nahi karunga ....

Addu - ( kaan pakadte hue ) thik hai baba ..ab nahi karungi ...

Deepu - thats like my beautiful bua ..I love you .bua ...( aur Addu k gale lag jaata hai )

Adfu - i love you too mera baacha ....

itne der se Abhi ...Rimy aur .Neetu ..bua aur bhatije ka pyar chup chap khade dekh rahi thi .....

Abhi - aur kitni der aise hi yaha darwaje par khada rahna hoga ...bhai hum bhi yaha line mein hai Birthday boy ko wish karne k liye ....chalo pahele cake kaato ....

Rimpy - haa nahi toh kya kab se cake lekar khdi hu ab toh mere haath bhi dukh rahe hai ....

phir sab room k andar aate hai aur Rimpy wahi room mein ek table par cake rakhkar candle lagati hai ...Phir Deepu phoonk maarkar un candles ko buzhata hai ..aur cake katata hai aur ek baar sabhi phir gane lagte hai .....

Happy Birthday to you...Happy Birthday to you ....Happy Birthday To Dear Deepu ..Happy Birthday To You ......

Cake katne k baad ..Addu ...Deepu ..ko khilati hai ..Deepu bhi Aduu ko cake khilakar Aashirwad leta hai ...Phir ..woh Apni maa Rimpy ka Aashirwad leta hai ..Rimpy bhi ...apne bete ka maatha chumkar usse gale laga leti hai ....

Rimpy - kush raho mere bacche ...Bagwan kare mere betu ..ko meri bhi unar lag jaaye ..aur... ..jeewan mein aanewali saari musibate dur ho jaaye ...tu humsha aise ki kush aur swastha rahe .....apne ..jigar k tukde k sar par haath pherte hue Aashirwad deti hai ....

Deepu - kya maa ...aap bhi ....muzhe ..aapki unar nahi chahiye ..mein toh chahta hu ...aapka yeh mamta bhara anchal humesha mere sarpar bana rahe .....

Rimpy ek baar phir apne bete ki iss baat se ...uska maatha chum leti hai ...

Tabhi bed k side table par rakha hua mobile bajne lagta hai ....toh sabka dhyan yss or jaata hai ....lekin Deepu uss or dhyan nahi deta aur Apne pita Abhi k charan chuta hai ....Abhi usse kandhe se pakadkar uthata hai ..aur ..sar par haath rakhkar Aashirwad dete hue ...

Abhi - Jamandin Mubarak ho mere sher ....aaj tu poore 18 ka ho gaya ..ab samay aagaya hai tuze apne vansh ki parampara ko aage badhane ka ....mera Aashirwad hai k tu har jathinay ko paar jarta hua apne kkaksya ko prapt kare ...

Chotti Neetu bichari apne number aane ka intezar kar rahi thi ..bade der se chup thi lekin ab usse sabra nahi ho raha tha .....

Neetu - arre bhai muzhe bhi cake khilao na mein kab se wait kar rahi hu .....

Deepu - tuzhe toh mein bilkul bhi nahi khilaunga cake ...ek toh muzhe iss tarah uthaya aur jab mein bed se gir gaya toh ...badi hasi aarahi thi ....

Deepu ki baat sunkar Neetu ki aankhon mein aansoo aagaye ....jisse dekhkar Abhi ...

tabhi phir mobile baja ...aur sabhi ka dhyan uspar gaya ...

Rimpy yeh baar baar kaun ph kar raha hai ..ek baar baat toh kar le ....

Deepu - kuch nahi mom woh frnds honge jo wish karne k liye ph kar rahe hai baad mein baat kar lunga ....

Abhi - woh toh thik hai..... lekin yeh kya tarika hai . ...apni choti bahen se baat karne ka ...yeh bechari yoh ...tuzhe wish karne k chakkar mein ab tak soyi nahi ....aur tu hai k issase naraz ho raha hai ....

Neetu - papa mere bhai ko koi kuch nahi bologa ..aur aap daatoge bhi nahi ....

Abhi - kaan pakadte hue - sorry gudiya ...nahi bolunga ..

Addu - Chalo bhai yaha se inn do bhai bahen k bich hum bolenge toh yahi hofa ...inhe hi nipatne do ....

Deepu - kaan pakadte hue Neetu k aage ghutno k bal baith jaata hai ...
sorry gudiya mein toh mazak kar raha tha ....mein jabhi tuzhse naraj ho sakta hu ...

itna kahkar Deepu .ne. Neetu ko uthakar apni goad mein bithaya ....aur uske aansoo ponchte hue ...

Deepu - naraz hai meri gudiya apne bhai se ....

Neetu - ( muh fulate hue ) hmmm...aap bhi toh gussa ho gaye the ...

Deepu - nahi gudiya ..mein tuzhse kabhi gussa ho sakta hu ...tu toh meri jaan hai ...mai toh bas mazak kar raha tha .....

Neetu - saachi bhai aap muzhse naraj nahi ho na ....

Deepu - bilkul nahi gudiya .....aur cake ka tukda usse khila deta hai ....love you mera baccha ...
itna kahkar Deepu apni pyari si gudiya k gaal par kiss kar deta hai ....

Neetu - Love you too bhai ....lekin muzhe bhi aapko cake khilaungi ....

Deepu cake ki plate uske aage kar deta hai ...Neetu ek bada sa tukda uthati hai ...aur Deepu apna muh khol deta hai ...lekin ...tabhi Neetu ...cake ka Deepu k muh par mal deti hai ...aur turant godi se khudkar ....darwaje ki taraf bhag jaati hai ....Deepu usse dekhta hai ....toh muh chadkar ...Happy birthday bhai kahkar bhag jaati hai ...

Neetu ki iss shararat par sabhi hasne lagte hai ...Deepu k chehre par bhi apni iss natkhat bahen ki shararat par hassi aajaati hai .....

Abhi - ab jaldi se so joo beta ....kal hume gaon k liye nikalna hai ...tumahare janadin ka ustsav kal dumdham se wahi hoga ...aur haa apne frnds ko bola k nahi ...

Deepu - Haa dad sabko bol diya hai ....

Abhi - thik hai good night ....

Phir sab good night wish karte hai aur apne apne room mein chale jaate hai ...Yaha Deepu ka ..mobile phir baja ...usne number dekha toh uske hontho par muskurahat aagayi thi ....lekin saare chehre par cake laga tha ....issiliye woh usse saaf karne bathroom chala gaya ..fresh hokar aaya ...aur ...phir ...usne mobli se ussi number par dail kiya jisase usse baar baar call aarahi thi .....

Baar baar ring baj rahi thi lekin udhar se koi ph nahi utha raha tha ....Deepu samaz gaya ...k mamla gadbad ho gaya hai ...usse uss number par sorry ka msg bhej diya ...thodi der tak koi jawab nahi aaya ..phir msg aaya Deepu ne dekha toh gusse wala emoji tha ....
jusse dekhkar Deepu ne phir msg kiya ....

Nakam thi meri sab koshishe ussko manane ki
Pata nahi kaha se sikhi adaye jaalim ne rooth jaane ki ...

tabhi phir ek msg aaya ....
mohabbat ajamane ho to bas itana he kafe hai,
jara sa rooth kar dekho manane kaun ata hai…

Deepu ne phir call kiya kiya iss baar call utha liya ...yeh thi Kirti jo Deepu ki jaan uska pyar thi

Deepu - haaye meri jaan aakhir iss naachij ka call uthane ki jahmat utha hi li ...

Kirti - ek toh khud mera ph nahi uthate ho aur upar se muzhe hi dosh de rahe ho ...

Deepu - main kya karta jaan , uss samay mom dad ..bua aur Neetu thi toh kaise uthata ....

Kirti - toh kya hua ...unhe bata dete k unki bahu ka ph hai ....

Deepu - accha ji ...lagta hai shadi kuch jyada hi jaldi hai ..hai thik hai kal milo waise bhi gaon jaa hi rahe hai ..wahi shadi bhi kar lenge ...mein toh abhi chala mom dad ko yeh khush khabri dene ..

Kirti - nahi ..nahi...ruko ...mein toh bas aise hi kah rahi thi ....abhi toh humare khelne kudne k din din ...abhi toh humne acvhe se pyar ko enjoy bhi nahi kya ....

Deepu - aagayi na line par ...lekin ab tak tumne wish nahi kiya ..

Kirti - uff ..mein bhi na baaton mein bhul hi gayi ...Happy Birthday to my shona ...

Deepu - yeh kya sukha sukha ...ek kiss toh do na ...

Kirti - abhi nahi ..kal kar dungi gila ....abhi k liye sukha hi thik hai ...

Deepu - accha kya gila kar dogi ...

Kirti - hat ...aap bhi na kuch jyada hi naughty ho rahe ho ...abhi k liye bye Good night ...kal jaldi uthna bhi hai kitni tayari karni hai .....Love you babu bye ..

Deepu - Love you too sweetu ...good night ....

Abhi k liye itna hi ....
Agla update jald hi .....

Kya mixing kri hai Bhai amazing

 

[Rudrathakur]

Are wahhhh to ab hm pahuch chuke h prithavi ke modern era me abhi ke samaykaal me jisme uski 14 patniyon ke roop me RITUJA, VIBHAKTA, & SHIVALI ne janam liya tha...bahut achha lga iss kaal ke abhi aur uski family ko firse aise dekh kr...dekhte h ab aage kya hota h...deepu is the highlighter in the show now....
Lets begain the samay ka chakravyuh.....and niyati ka khel....waiting

 

[The king]

Nice update bhai or kya yaha se story me hero dipu he ya abhi hi hero he or kya ab Arslan wale logo ka kirdar ka end ho gaya he ya wo log bhi story me he waiting for next update

 

[Killerpanditji(pandit)]

Update - 66

Arsalan aur Dhara ne ..apni sammilit urja se phir se Arin grah ki praja ka nirman kiya ....charo taraf phir se khushiyo ka samrajya sthapit ho gaya ....

ab aagee .....chalte hai ...Prithvi par aaj k samay .mein.......

ek navjawan ladka apne bedroom mein gahri nind soya tha ..chehre par maasumiyat aur hontho par muskan najane kiske sapno mein khoya tha .....kamre mein halki si night bulb ki roshni ....faili hui thi ....tabhi halke se uske bedroom ka darwaja khula ..aur koi..dhire dhire halke kadmo se uske bister ki or badha ....

bister tak pahunchkar usne pahle gaur se uss ladke ko dekha fir dhire se woh uske bed par chad gaya ....usne pane haath mein pakdi hui chij ko ek baar dekha ....jisse dekhkar uske chehre par muskurahat aagayi ....woh chij ek electronic horn thi ....usne ek baar aur uss gahri neend mein sote hue ladke k chehre par nazar dali .....aur uss horn ka button daba diya ....aur ek ..tez aawaj hui .piippiiiiiiiiiiii.....

Achanak hui iss tezz aawaj k kaaran ...woh ..ladka ..gahri need se ek zhakte mein uchala ..aur ..hadbadahat ....mein bed se niche gir gaya .....abhi woh kuch samazta .k ..usse khilkhilar hasne ki aawaj aayi .....

hehehehe...bhai dar gaye ..bhai ..dar..gaye ...he..he..he..he....

ladka - Nitu ki bacchi ...tu..ruk abhi tuze batata hu ....aur usne ....usko pakadne k liye ..bed par chalang laga di ...parantu woh usse pakad paata ..uske pahele hi ....woh ...woh bacchi ...jisne uske kaan k paas horn bajaya tha ...woh bed se utarkar bhag khadi hui ...woh ladka bhi uske picche ..pakadne k liye bhaga ....woh usse pakadta ..tabhi kamre ki light on ho gayi ....

uske saamne uski bua ....cake lekar khadi thi ...aur uske ..mom dad bhi the ....sabhi ek saath ...

Happy Birthday to you ...Happy Birthday to you ...Happy Birthday to dear Deepu Haappy Birthday to you .....

Yeh ladka tha ..Deepu ..yani ..k Thakur Deepak Singh .....Thakur Abhinav Singh yani k Abhi aur Rimpy Devi ..ka beta .....aur Jo Cake lekar khadi thi Woh thi Uski bua ..Adira .singh ..jisse Abhi pyar se Addu bulata tha ...issiliye ..Deepu bhi usse Addu bua kahkar hi bulata tha .. .aur woh choti bacchi thi uski ladli shararati aur cute si choti bahen Neetu ...

Addu ko Deepu mein wohi Deepu nazar aata tha jisse usne unn khatarnak saayo k kaaran kho diya tha .....issiliye woh ..Deepu par apni jaan chidakti thi ...shadi k baad uske bhi do bacche the ..woh deepu ka janamdin manane jo ab poora 18 saal ka ho gaya tha ....adhi raat ko cake lekar aayi thi .....

Addu ko cake lekar khade dekhkar Deepu bahut khush hua ...usne Addu k pair chue ....

Addu - betu tuze kitni baar mana kiya hai mere pair chune ko lekin tu hai k maanta hi nahi ...Addu ne Cake Rimpy ko pakdaya aur Deepu ko ..uthakar ..uske maate ko chuma ..aur sar par haath pherte hue ...boli - mera pyra baccha ...Happy birthday to you betu ...aur usse gale laga liya ....Deepu ko gale lagakar Addu ki aankhien nam ho gayi usse phri apne muh bole bhai Deepu ki yaad aagayi .....

Deepu - ( Addu se alag hota hua )....yeh kya hai bua phir aapki aankhon mein yeh aansoo ...( apne haaton se Addu k aansoo ponchta hua ) kitni baar kaha hai muzhe aapki aankhon mein yeh aansoo acche nahi lagte ...lekin har janamdin par aise hi hota hai ....muzhe lagta hai k mein hi bura hu ...meri hi wajah se aapki aankhon mein yeh aansoo aate hai na ...

Addu - nahi mere bacche tu toh meri khushi hai ....teri wajah se kyu aayenge yeh aansoo ..yeh toh bas ause hi ....

Deepu - toh phir promise karo ab dubara aisa nahi hona chahiye nahi toh mein aapse baat nahi karunga ....

Addu - ( kaan pakadte hue ) thik hai baba ..ab nahi karungi ...

Deepu - thats like my beautiful bua ..I love you .bua ...( aur Addu k gale lag jaata hai )

Adfu - i love you too mera baacha ....

itne der se Abhi ...Rimy aur .Neetu ..bua aur bhatije ka pyar chup chap khade dekh rahi thi .....

Abhi - aur kitni der aise hi yaha darwaje par khada rahna hoga ...bhai hum bhi yaha line mein hai Birthday boy ko wish karne k liye ....chalo pahele cake kaato ....

Rimpy - haa nahi toh kya kab se cake lekar khdi hu ab toh mere haath bhi dukh rahe hai ....

phir sab room k andar aate hai aur Rimpy wahi room mein ek table par cake rakhkar candle lagati hai ...Phir Deepu phoonk maarkar un candles ko buzhata hai ..aur cake katata hai aur ek baar sabhi phir gane lagte hai .....

Happy Birthday to you...Happy Birthday to you ....Happy Birthday To Dear Deepu ..Happy Birthday To You ......

Cake katne k baad ..Addu ...Deepu ..ko khilati hai ..Deepu bhi Aduu ko cake khilakar Aashirwad leta hai ...Phir ..woh Apni maa Rimpy ka Aashirwad leta hai ..Rimpy bhi ...apne bete ka maatha chumkar usse gale laga leti hai ....

Rimpy - kush raho mere bacche ...Bagwan kare mere betu ..ko meri bhi unar lag jaaye ..aur... ..jeewan mein aanewali saari musibate dur ho jaaye ...tu humsha aise ki kush aur swastha rahe .....apne ..jigar k tukde k sar par haath pherte hue Aashirwad deti hai ....

Deepu - kya maa ...aap bhi ....muzhe ..aapki unar nahi chahiye ..mein toh chahta hu ...aapka yeh mamta bhara anchal humesha mere sarpar bana rahe .....

Rimpy ek baar phir apne bete ki iss baat se ...uska maatha chum leti hai ...

Tabhi bed k side table par rakha hua mobile bajne lagta hai ....toh sabka dhyan yss or jaata hai ....lekin Deepu uss or dhyan nahi deta aur Apne pita Abhi k charan chuta hai ....Abhi usse kandhe se pakadkar uthata hai ..aur ..sar par haath rakhkar Aashirwad dete hue ...

Abhi - Jamandin Mubarak ho mere sher ....aaj tu poore 18 ka ho gaya ..ab samay aagaya hai tuze apne vansh ki parampara ko aage badhane ka ....mera Aashirwad hai k tu har jathinay ko paar jarta hua apne kkaksya ko prapt kare ...

Chotti Neetu bichari apne number aane ka intezar kar rahi thi ..bade der se chup thi lekin ab usse sabra nahi ho raha tha .....

Neetu - arre bhai muzhe bhi cake khilao na mein kab se wait kar rahi hu .....

Deepu - tuzhe toh mein bilkul bhi nahi khilaunga cake ...ek toh muzhe iss tarah uthaya aur jab mein bed se gir gaya toh ...badi hasi aarahi thi ....

Deepu ki baat sunkar Neetu ki aankhon mein aansoo aagaye ....jisse dekhkar Abhi ...

tabhi phir mobile baja ...aur sabhi ka dhyan uspar gaya ...

Rimpy yeh baar baar kaun ph kar raha hai ..ek baar baat toh kar le ....

Deepu - kuch nahi mom woh frnds honge jo wish karne k liye ph kar rahe hai baad mein baat kar lunga ....

Abhi - woh toh thik hai..... lekin yeh kya tarika hai . ...apni choti bahen se baat karne ka ...yeh bechari yoh ...tuzhe wish karne k chakkar mein ab tak soyi nahi ....aur tu hai k issase naraz ho raha hai ....

Neetu - papa mere bhai ko koi kuch nahi bologa ..aur aap daatoge bhi nahi ....

Abhi - kaan pakadte hue - sorry gudiya ...nahi bolunga ..

Addu - Chalo bhai yaha se inn do bhai bahen k bich hum bolenge toh yahi hofa ...inhe hi nipatne do ....

Deepu - kaan pakadte hue Neetu k aage ghutno k bal baith jaata hai ...
sorry gudiya mein toh mazak kar raha tha ....mein jabhi tuzhse naraj ho sakta hu ...

itna kahkar Deepu .ne. Neetu ko uthakar apni goad mein bithaya ....aur uske aansoo ponchte hue ...

Deepu - naraz hai meri gudiya apne bhai se ....

Neetu - ( muh fulate hue ) hmmm...aap bhi toh gussa ho gaye the ...

Deepu - nahi gudiya ..mein tuzhse kabhi gussa ho sakta hu ...tu toh meri jaan hai ...mai toh bas mazak kar raha tha .....

Neetu - saachi bhai aap muzhse naraj nahi ho na ....

Deepu - bilkul nahi gudiya .....aur cake ka tukda usse khila deta hai ....love you mera baccha ...
itna kahkar Deepu apni pyari si gudiya k gaal par kiss kar deta hai ....

Neetu - Love you too bhai ....lekin muzhe bhi aapko cake khilaungi ....

Deepu cake ki plate uske aage kar deta hai ...Neetu ek bada sa tukda uthati hai ...aur Deepu apna muh khol deta hai ...lekin ...tabhi Neetu ...cake ka Deepu k muh par mal deti hai ...aur turant godi se khudkar ....darwaje ki taraf bhag jaati hai ....Deepu usse dekhta hai ....toh muh chadkar ...Happy birthday bhai kahkar bhag jaati hai ...

Neetu ki iss shararat par sabhi hasne lagte hai ...Deepu k chehre par bhi apni iss natkhat bahen ki shararat par hassi aajaati hai .....

Abhi - ab jaldi se so joo beta ....kal hume gaon k liye nikalna hai ...tumahare janadin ka ustsav kal dumdham se wahi hoga ...aur haa apne frnds ko bola k nahi ...

Deepu - Haa dad sabko bol diya hai ....

Abhi - thik hai good night ....

Phir sab good night wish karte hai aur apne apne room mein chale jaate hai ...Yaha Deepu ka ..mobile phir baja ...usne number dekha toh uske hontho par muskurahat aagayi thi ....lekin saare chehre par cake laga tha ....issiliye woh usse saaf karne bathroom chala gaya ..fresh hokar aaya ...aur ...phir ...usne mobli se ussi number par dail kiya jisase usse baar baar call aarahi thi .....

Baar baar ring baj rahi thi lekin udhar se koi ph nahi utha raha tha ....Deepu samaz gaya ...k mamla gadbad ho gaya hai ...usse uss number par sorry ka msg bhej diya ...thodi der tak koi jawab nahi aaya ..phir msg aaya Deepu ne dekha toh gusse wala emoji tha ....
jusse dekhkar Deepu ne phir msg kiya ....

Nakam thi meri sab koshishe ussko manane ki
Pata nahi kaha se sikhi adaye jaalim ne rooth jaane ki ...

tabhi phir ek msg aaya ....
mohabbat ajamane ho to bas itana he kafe hai,
jara sa rooth kar dekho manane kaun ata hai…

Deepu ne phir call kiya kiya iss baar call utha liya ...yeh thi Kirti jo Deepu ki jaan uska pyar thi

Deepu - haaye meri jaan aakhir iss naachij ka call uthane ki jahmat utha hi li ...

Kirti - ek toh khud mera ph nahi uthate ho aur upar se muzhe hi dosh de rahe ho ...

Deepu - main kya karta jaan , uss samay mom dad ..bua aur Neetu thi toh kaise uthata ....

Kirti - toh kya hua ...unhe bata dete k unki bahu ka ph hai ....

Deepu - accha ji ...lagta hai shadi kuch jyada hi jaldi hai ..hai thik hai kal milo waise bhi gaon jaa hi rahe hai ..wahi shadi bhi kar lenge ...mein toh abhi chala mom dad ko yeh khush khabri dene ..

Kirti - nahi ..nahi...ruko ...mein toh bas aise hi kah rahi thi ....abhi toh humare khelne kudne k din din ...abhi toh humne acvhe se pyar ko enjoy bhi nahi kya ....

Deepu - aagayi na line par ...lekin ab tak tumne wish nahi kiya ..

Kirti - uff ..mein bhi na baaton mein bhul hi gayi ...Happy Birthday to my shona ...

Deepu - yeh kya sukha sukha ...ek kiss toh do na ...

Kirti - abhi nahi ..kal kar dungi gila ....abhi k liye sukha hi thik hai ...

Deepu - accha kya gila kar dogi ...

Kirti - hat ...aap bhi na kuch jyada hi naughty ho rahe ho ...abhi k liye bye Good night ...kal jaldi uthna bhi hai kitni tayari karni hai .....Love you babu bye ..

Deepu - Love you too sweetu ...good night ....

Abhi k liye itna hi ....
Agla update jald hi .....

Nice update bro

 

[ashish_1982_in]

Update - 66

Arsalan aur Dhara ne ..apni sammilit urja se phir se Arin grah ki praja ka nirman kiya ....charo taraf phir se khushiyo ka samrajya sthapit ho gaya ....

ab aagee .....chalte hai ...Prithvi par aaj k samay .mein.......

ek navjawan ladka apne bedroom mein gahri nind soya tha ..chehre par maasumiyat aur hontho par muskan najane kiske sapno mein khoya tha .....kamre mein halki si night bulb ki roshni ....faili hui thi ....tabhi halke se uske bedroom ka darwaja khula ..aur koi..dhire dhire halke kadmo se uske bister ki or badha ....

bister tak pahunchkar usne pahle gaur se uss ladke ko dekha fir dhire se woh uske bed par chad gaya ....usne pane haath mein pakdi hui chij ko ek baar dekha ....jisse dekhkar uske chehre par muskurahat aagayi ....woh chij ek electronic horn thi ....usne ek baar aur uss gahri neend mein sote hue ladke k chehre par nazar dali .....aur uss horn ka button daba diya ....aur ek ..tez aawaj hui .piippiiiiiiiiiiii.....

Achanak hui iss tezz aawaj k kaaran ...woh ..ladka ..gahri need se ek zhakte mein uchala ..aur ..hadbadahat ....mein bed se niche gir gaya .....abhi woh kuch samazta .k ..usse khilkhilar hasne ki aawaj aayi .....

hehehehe...bhai dar gaye ..bhai ..dar..gaye ...he..he..he..he....

ladka - Nitu ki bacchi ...tu..ruk abhi tuze batata hu ....aur usne ....usko pakadne k liye ..bed par chalang laga di ...parantu woh usse pakad paata ..uske pahele hi ....woh ...woh bacchi ...jisne uske kaan k paas horn bajaya tha ...woh bed se utarkar bhag khadi hui ...woh ladka bhi uske picche ..pakadne k liye bhaga ....woh usse pakadta ..tabhi kamre ki light on ho gayi ....

uske saamne uski bua ....cake lekar khadi thi ...aur uske ..mom dad bhi the ....sabhi ek saath ...

Happy Birthday to you ...Happy Birthday to you ...Happy Birthday to dear Deepu Haappy Birthday to you .....

Yeh ladka tha ..Deepu ..yani ..k Thakur Deepak Singh .....Thakur Abhinav Singh yani k Abhi aur Rimpy Devi ..ka beta .....aur Jo Cake lekar khadi thi Woh thi Uski bua ..Adira .singh ..jisse Abhi pyar se Addu bulata tha ...issiliye ..Deepu bhi usse Addu bua kahkar hi bulata tha .. .aur woh choti bacchi thi uski ladli shararati aur cute si choti bahen Neetu ...

Addu ko Deepu mein wohi Deepu nazar aata tha jisse usne unn khatarnak saayo k kaaran kho diya tha .....issiliye woh ..Deepu par apni jaan chidakti thi ...shadi k baad uske bhi do bacche the ..woh deepu ka janamdin manane jo ab poora 18 saal ka ho gaya tha ....adhi raat ko cake lekar aayi thi .....

Addu ko cake lekar khade dekhkar Deepu bahut khush hua ...usne Addu k pair chue ....

Addu - betu tuze kitni baar mana kiya hai mere pair chune ko lekin tu hai k maanta hi nahi ...Addu ne Cake Rimpy ko pakdaya aur Deepu ko ..uthakar ..uske maate ko chuma ..aur sar par haath pherte hue ...boli - mera pyra baccha ...Happy birthday to you betu ...aur usse gale laga liya ....Deepu ko gale lagakar Addu ki aankhien nam ho gayi usse phri apne muh bole bhai Deepu ki yaad aagayi .....

Deepu - ( Addu se alag hota hua )....yeh kya hai bua phir aapki aankhon mein yeh aansoo ...( apne haaton se Addu k aansoo ponchta hua ) kitni baar kaha hai muzhe aapki aankhon mein yeh aansoo acche nahi lagte ...lekin har janamdin par aise hi hota hai ....muzhe lagta hai k mein hi bura hu ...meri hi wajah se aapki aankhon mein yeh aansoo aate hai na ...

Addu - nahi mere bacche tu toh meri khushi hai ....teri wajah se kyu aayenge yeh aansoo ..yeh toh bas ause hi ....

Deepu - toh phir promise karo ab dubara aisa nahi hona chahiye nahi toh mein aapse baat nahi karunga ....

Addu - ( kaan pakadte hue ) thik hai baba ..ab nahi karungi ...

Deepu - thats like my beautiful bua ..I love you .bua ...( aur Addu k gale lag jaata hai )

Adfu - i love you too mera baacha ....

itne der se Abhi ...Rimy aur .Neetu ..bua aur bhatije ka pyar chup chap khade dekh rahi thi .....

Abhi - aur kitni der aise hi yaha darwaje par khada rahna hoga ...bhai hum bhi yaha line mein hai Birthday boy ko wish karne k liye ....chalo pahele cake kaato ....

Rimpy - haa nahi toh kya kab se cake lekar khdi hu ab toh mere haath bhi dukh rahe hai ....

phir sab room k andar aate hai aur Rimpy wahi room mein ek table par cake rakhkar candle lagati hai ...Phir Deepu phoonk maarkar un candles ko buzhata hai ..aur cake katata hai aur ek baar sabhi phir gane lagte hai .....

Happy Birthday to you...Happy Birthday to you ....Happy Birthday To Dear Deepu ..Happy Birthday To You ......

Cake katne k baad ..Addu ...Deepu ..ko khilati hai ..Deepu bhi Aduu ko cake khilakar Aashirwad leta hai ...Phir ..woh Apni maa Rimpy ka Aashirwad leta hai ..Rimpy bhi ...apne bete ka maatha chumkar usse gale laga leti hai ....

Rimpy - kush raho mere bacche ...Bagwan kare mere betu ..ko meri bhi unar lag jaaye ..aur... ..jeewan mein aanewali saari musibate dur ho jaaye ...tu humsha aise ki kush aur swastha rahe .....apne ..jigar k tukde k sar par haath pherte hue Aashirwad deti hai ....

Deepu - kya maa ...aap bhi ....muzhe ..aapki unar nahi chahiye ..mein toh chahta hu ...aapka yeh mamta bhara anchal humesha mere sarpar bana rahe .....

Rimpy ek baar phir apne bete ki iss baat se ...uska maatha chum leti hai ...

Tabhi bed k side table par rakha hua mobile bajne lagta hai ....toh sabka dhyan yss or jaata hai ....lekin Deepu uss or dhyan nahi deta aur Apne pita Abhi k charan chuta hai ....Abhi usse kandhe se pakadkar uthata hai ..aur ..sar par haath rakhkar Aashirwad dete hue ...

Abhi - Jamandin Mubarak ho mere sher ....aaj tu poore 18 ka ho gaya ..ab samay aagaya hai tuze apne vansh ki parampara ko aage badhane ka ....mera Aashirwad hai k tu har jathinay ko paar jarta hua apne kkaksya ko prapt kare ...

Chotti Neetu bichari apne number aane ka intezar kar rahi thi ..bade der se chup thi lekin ab usse sabra nahi ho raha tha .....

Neetu - arre bhai muzhe bhi cake khilao na mein kab se wait kar rahi hu .....

Deepu - tuzhe toh mein bilkul bhi nahi khilaunga cake ...ek toh muzhe iss tarah uthaya aur jab mein bed se gir gaya toh ...badi hasi aarahi thi ....

Deepu ki baat sunkar Neetu ki aankhon mein aansoo aagaye ....jisse dekhkar Abhi ...

tabhi phir mobile baja ...aur sabhi ka dhyan uspar gaya ...

Rimpy yeh baar baar kaun ph kar raha hai ..ek baar baat toh kar le ....

Deepu - kuch nahi mom woh frnds honge jo wish karne k liye ph kar rahe hai baad mein baat kar lunga ....

Abhi - woh toh thik hai..... lekin yeh kya tarika hai . ...apni choti bahen se baat karne ka ...yeh bechari yoh ...tuzhe wish karne k chakkar mein ab tak soyi nahi ....aur tu hai k issase naraz ho raha hai ....

Neetu - papa mere bhai ko koi kuch nahi bologa ..aur aap daatoge bhi nahi ....

Abhi - kaan pakadte hue - sorry gudiya ...nahi bolunga ..

Addu - Chalo bhai yaha se inn do bhai bahen k bich hum bolenge toh yahi hofa ...inhe hi nipatne do ....

Deepu - kaan pakadte hue Neetu k aage ghutno k bal baith jaata hai ...
sorry gudiya mein toh mazak kar raha tha ....mein jabhi tuzhse naraj ho sakta hu ...

itna kahkar Deepu .ne. Neetu ko uthakar apni goad mein bithaya ....aur uske aansoo ponchte hue ...

Deepu - naraz hai meri gudiya apne bhai se ....

Neetu - ( muh fulate hue ) hmmm...aap bhi toh gussa ho gaye the ...

Deepu - nahi gudiya ..mein tuzhse kabhi gussa ho sakta hu ...tu toh meri jaan hai ...mai toh bas mazak kar raha tha .....

Neetu - saachi bhai aap muzhse naraj nahi ho na ....

Deepu - bilkul nahi gudiya .....aur cake ka tukda usse khila deta hai ....love you mera baccha ...
itna kahkar Deepu apni pyari si gudiya k gaal par kiss kar deta hai ....

Neetu - Love you too bhai ....lekin muzhe bhi aapko cake khilaungi ....

Deepu cake ki plate uske aage kar deta hai ...Neetu ek bada sa tukda uthati hai ...aur Deepu apna muh khol deta hai ...lekin ...tabhi Neetu ...cake ka Deepu k muh par mal deti hai ...aur turant godi se khudkar ....darwaje ki taraf bhag jaati hai ....Deepu usse dekhta hai ....toh muh chadkar ...Happy birthday bhai kahkar bhag jaati hai ...

Neetu ki iss shararat par sabhi hasne lagte hai ...Deepu k chehre par bhi apni iss natkhat bahen ki shararat par hassi aajaati hai .....

Abhi - ab jaldi se so joo beta ....kal hume gaon k liye nikalna hai ...tumahare janadin ka ustsav kal dumdham se wahi hoga ...aur haa apne frnds ko bola k nahi ...

Deepu - Haa dad sabko bol diya hai ....

Abhi - thik hai good night ....

Phir sab good night wish karte hai aur apne apne room mein chale jaate hai ...Yaha Deepu ka ..mobile phir baja ...usne number dekha toh uske hontho par muskurahat aagayi thi ....lekin saare chehre par cake laga tha ....issiliye woh usse saaf karne bathroom chala gaya ..fresh hokar aaya ...aur ...phir ...usne mobli se ussi number par dail kiya jisase usse baar baar call aarahi thi .....

Baar baar ring baj rahi thi lekin udhar se koi ph nahi utha raha tha ....Deepu samaz gaya ...k mamla gadbad ho gaya hai ...usse uss number par sorry ka msg bhej diya ...thodi der tak koi jawab nahi aaya ..phir msg aaya Deepu ne dekha toh gusse wala emoji tha ....
jusse dekhkar Deepu ne phir msg kiya ....

Nakam thi meri sab koshishe ussko manane ki
Pata nahi kaha se sikhi adaye jaalim ne rooth jaane ki ...

tabhi phir ek msg aaya ....
mohabbat ajamane ho to bas itana he kafe hai,
jara sa rooth kar dekho manane kaun ata hai…

Deepu ne phir call kiya kiya iss baar call utha liya ...yeh thi Kirti jo Deepu ki jaan uska pyar thi

Deepu - haaye meri jaan aakhir iss naachij ka call uthane ki jahmat utha hi li ...

Kirti - ek toh khud mera ph nahi uthate ho aur upar se muzhe hi dosh de rahe ho ...

Deepu - main kya karta jaan , uss samay mom dad ..bua aur Neetu thi toh kaise uthata ....

Kirti - toh kya hua ...unhe bata dete k unki bahu ka ph hai ....

Deepu - accha ji ...lagta hai shadi kuch jyada hi jaldi hai ..hai thik hai kal milo waise bhi gaon jaa hi rahe hai ..wahi shadi bhi kar lenge ...mein toh abhi chala mom dad ko yeh khush khabri dene ..

Kirti - nahi ..nahi...ruko ...mein toh bas aise hi kah rahi thi ....abhi toh humare khelne kudne k din din ...abhi toh humne acvhe se pyar ko enjoy bhi nahi kya ....

Deepu - aagayi na line par ...lekin ab tak tumne wish nahi kiya ..

Kirti - uff ..mein bhi na baaton mein bhul hi gayi ...Happy Birthday to my shona ...

Deepu - yeh kya sukha sukha ...ek kiss toh do na ...

Kirti - abhi nahi ..kal kar dungi gila ....abhi k liye sukha hi thik hai ...

Deepu - accha kya gila kar dogi ...

Kirti - hat ...aap bhi na kuch jyada hi naughty ho rahe ho ...abhi k liye bye Good night ...kal jaldi uthna bhi hai kitni tayari karni hai .....Love you babu bye ..

Deepu - Love you too sweetu ...good night ....

Abhi k liye itna hi ....
Agla update jald hi .....

nice update bhai maza aa gya ab story me deepu hero banega

 

[Anky@123]

Bhai bahut khub ant kiya ..bole to happy ending.lekin yaha ham pehuche kis waqt pe hai . Rimpy aur abhi aur addu yani ki first part ke bad ki kahani hai kya jaha abhi sare asuro ko mar chuka hai . Thoda clear kere nahi to kafi confusion creat ho jayega