Fantasy ABHI - THE WARRIOR 2 (Completed)

[Vk248517]

Dhasdu update bro

 

[abhi1008]

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Update 67 posted.....

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[ashish_1982_in]

Update - 67

Kalasur k maare jaane Abhi ne 14 loko ki vyavastha dekhne k liye ...apne 14 roop sthapit kar diye ...aur sadharan roop mein Prithvi par apne pariwar k saath Sang harak ka kartvya nibhate hue rahne laga ....

Abhi k dada dai k marne k baad ab RVS aur Naina Gaon rah rahe the ..Shahar ki saari jimmedari ab Abhi ne sambhal li thi ....

Rimpy ko chodkar uski sabhi patniya ...uske mukhya ..teen patniyo mein sama gayi thi .....Shivali ...Ritu ..aur .Vibhakta ..ko bhi santan sukh ki kaamna thi ....aur Rimpy bhi garbh wati thi ...issiliye Abhi Apni charo patniyo k saath ....aur Pariwar k saath rahne ka nirnay liya ...

waha rahkar ek taraf toh apne putra hone k kartvya ko nibhate hue apne pita RVS ka saara karya bhar sambhal raha tha ....wahi dusri or sangharak bankar apradh jagat mein panapne wale apradiyo ko uchit dand dekar apne kartvya ka nirvah kar raha tha ....

bhale hi Abhi ne KS k saare asuro ko maar diya tha ...parantu abhi bhi kuch asur jo uss mahayudh se bhag gaye the ..woh chupkar pritvi par rah rahe the ....aur apradh jagat ka niyantran kar rahe the ....

Burai rakt beej ki tarah hoti hai ..jaise jaise iska ant hota jaata hai ..waise waise aur naye burai k numainde paida hote rahete hai ....aise hi 8 asur jo KS k sainik the aur uss yudh se bachkar bhage the ..unke paas saririk bal k alwa aur koi power bahi thi .....woh yaha prithvi par gupt roop se rah rahe the ....unhone ..under world par kabja banaya hua tha ....Sangharak k bhay se woh pragat roop mein toh kuch nahi kar paa rahe the ...lekin ..abhi bhi kai apradh gupt rup se chal rahe the ....

yeh 8 asur humare system mein aise ghus gaye the ...k ..koi bhi ...unke vastavik roop se unhe nahi jaanta tha .....yaha tak k unke liye kaam karne walo ne ...bhi unhe Kabhi nahi dekha tha ... ....unki pahunch system mein bahut gahri thi ....unhone apne syndicate ka naam Black Eagle rakha tha ...Under World yeh naam hi kaafi tha ... Sangharak k kaaran ab Under world hawala ...neto k jariye corruption ...aur chote mote apradh ...par survive ka rahe the .....

Samay par Rimpy ne ek sundar balak ko janam diya ..Abhi ne uska naam ..Thakur ..Deepak Singh (Deepu) rakha , Deepu k janm k ek kuch mahino baad Shivali ..Ritu ..aur Vibhakta k bhi ek ek santan hui ....Shivali ka beta Shivom ....Ritu ka beta ...Krishna ....Aur Vibhakta ...ka Virat ....

unn teeno mein apni matao ki kuch shaktiya bachpan se hi thi ...Golu un teeno k thoda bade hone k baad ....unke prashikshan k liye ....Maha guru k aashram le gaya tha ...

Deepu mein janam se koi vishwsh powers nahi thi .. uske bhiter apne nata pita k gun the .... buddi mein apni mata Rimpy ki tarah tez ...aur bal ..aur shaurya mein apne pita saman tha ....uski Bhi training 5 varsh ki umar se hi shuru ho gayi thi ....

best fighters ..aur trainers usse trained kar rahe the ....jab unki training poori hui toh Abhi khud usse yog ..dwara apne chakra ..jagrit karne ka prashikshan dene laga ....Kabhi Kabhi Rakesh aur Rinku bhi usse ..weapon training aur fighting skills sikhate the ...

Shivam..... Krishna aur Virat k jaane k baad Abhi ne apne Sangharak roop ko wahi choda ...aur ....Apni teeno patniyo k saath Janalok chala gaya ...kyu ki paruwarik moh se jyada unke liye ...apna kartavya ..jyada jaruri tha ....

Aaj Deepu 18 saal ka ho raha tha ...unke vash ki paramprao k anusar ...aaj Gaon k mahal mein sthit gupt Shivalaya mein ...aaj ..usse Sangharak ki shaktiya ...prapt hone wale thi . ek bahut badi jimmedari uske kandhe par aane wali thi ....

Deepu gahri neend mein soya ...apne sunahre sapno mein khoya tha ...k tabhi uske mobile ka alaram baj utha ....jisase uski need khul gayi ....abhi subah 5 baje ka samay ho gaya tha ..woh jaldi se utha ....aur apne nityakarm niptakar ...dhyan mein baith gaya ....Abhi k prayatno ....aur uski kadi mehnat k kaaran ..woh aagya chakra tak k chakra jagrit kar chuka tha ....Janam se bhale hi usmein koi powers nahi thi ...paratnu apne athak prayas ..aur kadi training karaan ....aaj woh har tarah ki fighting skills aur mein poori tarah trained ho gaya tha ....aur saath hi apne chakro ki urja ka prayog karna bhi sikh gaya tha ....

Aise hi dhyan karte hue usse kaafi samay bit gaya tha ....jab usne aankhien kholi toh saamne dekhkar uske chehre par muskurahat aagayi ....uski pyari gudiya ...uske saamne ....uske hi saman aasan jamakar baithi hui thi ....aur ek aankh kholkar usse dekh rahi thi ...

Deepu - kya kar rahi hai ..meri pyari choti shaitan ...

Neetu - bhai mein koi saitan thode hi hu ...mein toh Neetu hu na ....

Deepu ne usse apni goad mein khich leta hai aur uske gaal par kiss kar deta hai ....accha toh kya jar rahi thi meri gudiya ..

Neetu - woh toh mein aapko wish karne aayi thi na toh aap ause dhyan mein baithe the toh mein bhi baith gayi ....

Deepu - lekin tumne toh wish kiya hi nahi ....

Neetu - apne sar par haath maarte hue ...ooffo mein toh bhul hi gayi ...GM bhai ...& Haapy birthday ....aur Deepu k gallo par kiss kar deti hai

Deepu - thanku mera baccha ...ab ..jaao aur jaldi se tayar ho jaao ...hume aaj gaon k liye bhi nikalna hai ....

Neetu chali jaati hai ...abhi subah k 9 baj gaye the ....Deepu ko aaj apne aur teen maa Shivali ..Ritu aur Vibhakta ki kami bahut khal rahi thi ...aur uske teeno bhai ..Shivom ...Krishna ..aur ...Virat ...ko bhi woh bahut muss kar raha tha ...usne kai vaar Abhi se pucha tha ....lekin Abhi uske iss baat ko taal deta tha ....
.Deepu ab utha ...aur apne bed k paas gaya toh ..waha ek naya ...ek suit tha jo Rimpy ne rahka tha ..jab Deepu dhyan mein tha .....tayar hokar woh neeche aaya ....

Neeche Abhi drawing haal mein baitha subah ki news dekh raha tha ...Addu aur Rimpy kitchen mein Breakfast bana rahi thi ...ghar mein naukaro k hote hue bhi ...BF ..woh khud tayar karti thi ...

Deepu ne Abhi k pair chuye ....aur Aashirwad liya ...

Abhi - usse gale lagate hue ...jeete rho mere bacche ...mera Aashirwad hai k jeevan k har oadav par tumhe safalta mile ....

Deepu bhi Abhi k saath baitkar News dekhne laga ....

News reader - roopnagar k ...mahshur tourist spot mein hue aaj ek aur haadsa ....yaha k sarowar mein tairne gaye 4 navyuvako ka kuch pata nahi chala ...dekhne walo ka kahna hai ...sarowar k kinare ...nahate hue ...achanak pair fisalne se ..woh sarower k gahre oaani mein kahi kho gaya ...uss samay waha maujood kuch tairako ne unhe dhundne ki koshish ki lekin unka kuch pata nahi .....aapko taad dila de ...k abhi kuch din pahele bhi aisa hi gaadsa hua tha tha ....

hum puchna chahte hai aakhir prashasan kya kar raha hai kab tak aise hi ..baccho ki jaane jaati rahegi .....

Deepu - aapko kya lagta hai papa ....kahi inn mein toh kissi aur ka koyi haath nahi .....

Abhi - inn news walo ko bas koi mauka chahiye hota hai sarkar ko gaali nikalne ka ...ab ..inn sab .mein sarkar kya karegi .....yeh zheel bahut badi ..aur gahri hai ..puchle hafte ..bhi aisa hi juch haadsa hua tha ...toh pahele muzhe bhi kuch shak hua ....uss samay bhi 6 bacche iss zheel mein lapata ho gaye the ....maine bhi unhe dhundne ka prayatna kiya ....lekin woh kahi nahi mile ...iss samay baarish k kaaran ...zheel mein paani bahut hai ..aur .....yeh zheel ghane jungle tak jaati hai ....waha bahut bade bade magarmach hai hosakta hai ...woh bacche unhi ki bhent chad gaye ho

tabhi ek aawaj ne unka dhyan aakashit kiya .....Arre bhai baap bete mein kya baat ho rahi hai jara hume bhi toh pata chale ....yeh tha Sunil Singh ..Adira k pati ....aur yske saath the uske do bacche ...ladka shubham jo Neetu ki hi umar ka tha ...aur 6th mein padhta tha ...Aur ladki thi ...Priyanka jo 8th mein thi .....

Abhi - aao aao Sunil ...woh khuch khas nahi bas asise hi news k baare mein baatein chal rahi thi ...Aao baitho ...aur batao kaise chal raha hai business ..

Sunil - woh sab baad mein saale sahab pahele jara Birthday boy se toh mil le ....

Deepu ne aage badhkar Sunil k pair chue ...aur Sunil ne bhi usse Aashirwad diya ...

Tabhi Shubham aur Priyanka daudte hue aaye jaise unmein race si lagi ho ....Shubham daukar sidha Deepu se lapak gaya ....

Shubham - mein jeet gaya ..mein jeet gaya ....

Sunil - Shubham ..aur priyu yeh sab kya hai ....

Priyanka - maine kuch nahi kiya dad yeh toh shubham ne hi bolo tha ..k kaun sabse pahele bhai ko wish karta hai ....

Deepu - arre ismein race lagane ki kya baat hai tum dono aao ....aur Deepu ne dono ko apni baahon mein bhar liya dono ne Deepu k gaal par kiss karte hue usse ek saath wish kiya ....tabhi Neetu bhi tayar hokar aagayi ....

thodi der baccho mein aisi hi thodi masti chalti rahi ..phir naukar ne aakar ...bataya k Breakfast tayar hai ....sabhi Dinning hall mein pahunch gaye ....Addu aur Rimpy aaj khud serve kar rahi thi ...Breakfast ki khushbu bahut acchi aarahi thi issiliye sabhi ka dhyan bf ki taraf tha ...lekin Deepu ko toh jaise kissi ka besabri se intajar tha ....

Tabhi dinnig room k darwaje par uski nazre jaise tahar gayi ....waha Kirti ..black top ..aur ..blue jeans mein kamal lag rahi thi ....uski kajrari aankhien gulabi patle honth aur doodhiya rangat ...
Deepu jaise usmein kho saa gaya tha ...Kriti bhi apne Rajkumar ko dekhkar jaise kho hi gayi thi ...woh kaskar apne meboobk seene se lagna chahti thi ...lekin itne sab k hote hue ..aisa karna sambhav nahi tha ....

Rimpy aur Abhi ka dhyan Deepu par gaya ...k woh kaha khogaya hai ..jab unhone Kirti ko dekha toh sab samaz gaye ....unhe apna samay yaad aagaya ....k....ek din Rimpy aise hi khadi thi aur Abhi bhi usse aise hi ghur raha tha ....apne bite hue palo ko yaad karke unke chehre par muskan aagayi ......

Tabhi darwaje se do jaane pahchane shaksh aaye .....yeh tha Rinku ..aur Uski Patni Lima .....Kirti unhi ki beti thi .....

Rinku - Arre bhai ....jara humare liye bhi ruk jaate ...naaste k liye ...wah bhabhi kya khusbu aarahi hai .....

Lima - kya aap bhi itne bade ho gaye ho lekin bachpana nahi gaya ....

Abhi - bhabhi ..iss dumchale ko kuch mat kaho yeh jaisa bhi hai aise hi accha hai ....

Abhi aage badhkar Rinku ko gale laga leta hai ....Lima bhi Rimpy k gale lag jaati hai ...

Lima - kriti se ....arre beta waha kyu khadi ho ...ghar mein toh yaha aane k liye badi utawli ho rahi thi ...ab yaha kya ho gaya

Rimpy - vas karo Lima tum neri bacchi ko kuch nahi kahogi ...itna jahkar Rimpy ..Jirti k paas jaakar uske sar par haath pherti hai aur usse gale laga leti hai ....

yaha Rinku bhi Deepu ko wish karta hai ....Deepu bhi Rinku aur Lima ka Aashirwad leta hai ...Kirti bhi usse wish karti hai ....phir sabhi dinning table par baith jaate hai ...Kirti ..thik Deepu k saamne baithi hui thi ...issiliye Uske dhyan baar baar uski taraf jaa raha tha ...

Abhi deere se Deepu ko - ab ghurna bas karo barkurdar aur bf karo hume jaldi nikalna bhi hai ...

uske baad kirti aur Deepu ki aankh micholi k saath saath ..Breakfast ..hua ...uske vaad sabhi ..apni apni gaadiyo mein gaon ki or nikal pade ...Deepu k kuch khas college k frnds bhi aaye the ..jinke baare mein aage pata chalega ..unke liye ...badi ...gadi arrange ki thi ....

Gaddiyo ka kaarwa Old Roopnagar ki taraf badh chala ......

Yaha gaon mein Rana mahal aur poora gaon sajaya hua tha ..ab yeh goan bhi ek nagar mein badal chuka tha ....lekin abhi bhi yaha k logo ka mkya kaam tha kheti ....

Rana Mahal poori tarah phoolo se sajaya hua tha ...RVS aur Naina ...jhud apne pote k swagat ki tayari ...dekh rahe the ....Abhi k nana nani toh ab nahi rahe the .....Abhi k chacha bua aur unke parwar sabhi waha aaye hue the ...yaha inke baare mein itna detail nahi bataunga ..kyu ki iss part mein unka koi khas role nahi hai ...

RVS Aur Naina ko Abhi k kaafile ki Gaon mein pravesh karne ki khabar milti hai ...toh woh pooja ki thali liye mahal k mukhya dwar par kgade ho jaate hai ....tabhi unke intejar ki ghadiya samapt ho jaati hai ....aur gadiyo k kaafila waha aakar ruk jaata hai ...

RVS aur Naina apne jigar k tukde Deepu ka tilak karte hai aur uski aarti utarte hai ....Depu apne dada dadi k pair chuta hai ...RVS usse uthakar gale laga leta hai ...

RVS - mere sher teri jagah waha nahi taha mere dil mein hai ...aur uski pith thaptapate hue ....wah ab toh tu bilkul gabru jawan ho gaya hai ....

Deepu ne Naina ka bhi Aashirwad liya ...Naina ne uske maathe ko chuma ....aur usse gale laga liya ......yaha Deepu se milne walo ki line bahut lambi thi ..uski sona aur pari bua ....Abhi ki bua chacha mama & family ...Sabse milte milte bahut der ho gayi .....Abhi k sabhi dosto ki vyastha mahal mein ho gayi thi ....Abhi ...Maha guru k shisya aacharya Divyansh jo ab unka gurukul sambhal rahe the ....unke saath Magal k guot shivalaye mein Abhishek ki tayari kar rahe the ...

suryastha ho gaya tha ...Shuvalaya k saari tayariya ho ..gayi thi ....Abhi Deepu ko lekar ...Mahal k apne kaksha ....k deewar k paas pahuncha ...tabhi uss deewar mein ek gupt dwar pragat ho gaya ..Deepu aascharya se uss dwar ko dekh raha tha ...kyu ki woh kai baar yaha aa chuka tha aur iss kaskh mein kai kai dino tak rah bhi chuka tha ..parantu usne kabhi yeh dwar yaha nahi dekha ....

Abhi Deepu ko lekar uss dwar mein pravesh karta hai aur shivalaya pahunch jaata hai ...yaha pahunchkar toh Deepu aur aaschrya chakit rah jaata hai hai ....kyu ki yaha ek aur Abhi uski aur teeno maaye Shivali ..Ritu ..Aur Vibhakta jinhe woh bahut miss karta ..woh wahi khadi thi .....apni teeno maa ko dekhkar Deepu bahut khush hua ...lekin abhi bhi woh confusion mein tha ..k ek Abhi uske saath tha aur ek uski teeno maao k saath ....

Deepu k saath jo Abhi tha woh tha A1 jo Abhi k janalok jaane k baad sangharak ki bhumika aur pariwar ka kartavya sambhal raha tha ....

Abhi - aise kya dekh rahe ho beta ...miloge nahi apne pita se ...

Deepu ne ek bazar A1 par daali ..toh usne haa mein ishara kiya ...Deepu ne aage badhkar Abhi k charan chuye ...Toh Abhi ne bhi usse gale lagakar Aashirwad diya ....
uske baad Deepu apni teeno maao se bhi mila aaj itne varsho baad usse apni inn teen matavo se milkar bahut accha laga ...woh teeno bhi uska maata chumkar usse gale lagakar uspar apni mamta luta rahi thi ...

lekin Deepu abhi bhi Abhi k do roopo se confuse tha ....tab Abhi ne usse saari baat sanskep nein bata di ....apne pita ki shaktiyo ka gyan hote hi uski shraddha aur badh gayi ...usne phir apne Pita k charno mein naman kiya ..

Deepu - maa Mere teeno bhai kaha hai ...unhe dekhe bhi vahut varsh ho gaye hai ...

Shivali - beta woh bhi golu chachu k saath aate hi honge ...

uske baad Deepu k haatho aacharya Divyansh k dwara Rudra abhishek karaya gaya ...aur uske baad ..Abhi ne sankalp karke ...Sangharak ...ki saari shaktiya ....Deepu ko pradan ki ..woh shaktiya ek prakash k roop mein Deepu k bhiter pravesh kar rahe ..thi ..aur uske prabhav se usse halke halje zhatke bhi lag rahe the .....

Sangharak ki shakti prapt hote hi Deepu ...k haath mein ek divya talwar pragat ho gayi ...ab Deepu ban gaya .. apradhiyo ka kaal sangharak ...

Abhi k liye itna hi ...
Agla update jald hi ....

doston yaha mein aapko batana chahta hu k har kaha ni ka ek hi main hero hota hai . aur ek main villan ....Iss bhag mein Deepu ka part jyada hai lekin main villan ko maarega apna hero Abhi hi ....
kuch readers yeh bhi soch rahe honge k Arsalan ...Darmen ..kcera ka iss modern era se jya connection hai aur kahani uss saamay se iss era mein kaise pahunch gayi ....toh unke liye vas itna hi kahunga k Darmen k era se uss modern era ka bahut gahra connection hai ....saath bane rahite aapko dhere dgere sab pata chal jaayega .....aur gaa ..apne valuable comments aur review dena mat bhuliyega ...
Stay safe & Stay Happy ....

fantastic update bhai maza aa gya ab dekhte hai ki aage kya hota hai

 

[Naik]

Update - 67

Kalasur k maare jaane Abhi ne 14 loko ki vyavastha dekhne k liye ...apne 14 roop sthapit kar diye ...aur sadharan roop mein Prithvi par apne pariwar k saath Sang harak ka kartvya nibhate hue rahne laga ....

Abhi k dada dai k marne k baad ab RVS aur Naina Gaon rah rahe the ..Shahar ki saari jimmedari ab Abhi ne sambhal li thi ....

Rimpy ko chodkar uski sabhi patniya ...uske mukhya ..teen patniyo mein sama gayi thi .....Shivali ...Ritu ..aur .Vibhakta ..ko bhi santan sukh ki kaamna thi ....aur Rimpy bhi garbh wati thi ...issiliye Abhi Apni charo patniyo k saath ....aur Pariwar k saath rahne ka nirnay liya ...

waha rahkar ek taraf toh apne putra hone k kartvya ko nibhate hue apne pita RVS ka saara karya bhar sambhal raha tha ....wahi dusri or sangharak bankar apradh jagat mein panapne wale apradiyo ko uchit dand dekar apne kartvya ka nirvah kar raha tha ....

bhale hi Abhi ne KS k saare asuro ko maar diya tha ...parantu abhi bhi kuch asur jo uss mahayudh se bhag gaye the ..woh chupkar pritvi par rah rahe the ....aur apradh jagat ka niyantran kar rahe the ....

Burai rakt beej ki tarah hoti hai ..jaise jaise iska ant hota jaata hai ..waise waise aur naye burai k numainde paida hote rahete hai ....aise hi 8 asur jo KS k sainik the aur uss yudh se bachkar bhage the ..unke paas saririk bal k alwa aur koi power bahi thi .....woh yaha prithvi par gupt roop se rah rahe the ....unhone ..under world par kabja banaya hua tha ....Sangharak k bhay se woh pragat roop mein toh kuch nahi kar paa rahe the ...lekin ..abhi bhi kai apradh gupt rup se chal rahe the ....

yeh 8 asur humare system mein aise ghus gaye the ...k ..koi bhi ...unke vastavik roop se unhe nahi jaanta tha .....yaha tak k unke liye kaam karne walo ne ...bhi unhe Kabhi nahi dekha tha ... ....unki pahunch system mein bahut gahri thi ....unhone apne syndicate ka naam Black Eagle rakha tha ...Under World yeh naam hi kaafi tha ... Sangharak k kaaran ab Under world hawala ...neto k jariye corruption ...aur chote mote apradh ...par survive ka rahe the .....

Samay par Rimpy ne ek sundar balak ko janam diya ..Abhi ne uska naam ..Thakur ..Deepak Singh (Deepu) rakha , Deepu k janm k ek kuch mahino baad Shivali ..Ritu ..aur Vibhakta k bhi ek ek santan hui ....Shivali ka beta Shivom ....Ritu ka beta ...Krishna ....Aur Vibhakta ...ka Virat ....

unn teeno mein apni matao ki kuch shaktiya bachpan se hi thi ...Golu un teeno k thoda bade hone k baad ....unke prashikshan k liye ....Maha guru k aashram le gaya tha ...

Deepu mein janam se koi vishwsh powers nahi thi .. uske bhiter apne nata pita k gun the .... buddi mein apni mata Rimpy ki tarah tez ...aur bal ..aur shaurya mein apne pita saman tha ....uski Bhi training 5 varsh ki umar se hi shuru ho gayi thi ....

best fighters ..aur trainers usse trained kar rahe the ....jab unki training poori hui toh Abhi khud usse yog ..dwara apne chakra ..jagrit karne ka prashikshan dene laga ....Kabhi Kabhi Rakesh aur Rinku bhi usse ..weapon training aur fighting skills sikhate the ...

Shivam..... Krishna aur Virat k jaane k baad Abhi ne apne Sangharak roop ko wahi choda ...aur ....Apni teeno patniyo k saath Janalok chala gaya ...kyu ki paruwarik moh se jyada unke liye ...apna kartavya ..jyada jaruri tha ....

Aaj Deepu 18 saal ka ho raha tha ...unke vash ki paramprao k anusar ...aaj Gaon k mahal mein sthit gupt Shivalaya mein ...aaj ..usse Sangharak ki shaktiya ...prapt hone wale thi . ek bahut badi jimmedari uske kandhe par aane wali thi ....

Deepu gahri neend mein soya ...apne sunahre sapno mein khoya tha ...k tabhi uske mobile ka alaram baj utha ....jisase uski need khul gayi ....abhi subah 5 baje ka samay ho gaya tha ..woh jaldi se utha ....aur apne nityakarm niptakar ...dhyan mein baith gaya ....Abhi k prayatno ....aur uski kadi mehnat k kaaran ..woh aagya chakra tak k chakra jagrit kar chuka tha ....Janam se bhale hi usmein koi powers nahi thi ...paratnu apne athak prayas ..aur kadi training karaan ....aaj woh har tarah ki fighting skills aur mein poori tarah trained ho gaya tha ....aur saath hi apne chakro ki urja ka prayog karna bhi sikh gaya tha ....

Aise hi dhyan karte hue usse kaafi samay bit gaya tha ....jab usne aankhien kholi toh saamne dekhkar uske chehre par muskurahat aagayi ....uski pyari gudiya ...uske saamne ....uske hi saman aasan jamakar baithi hui thi ....aur ek aankh kholkar usse dekh rahi thi ...

Deepu - kya kar rahi hai ..meri pyari choti shaitan ...

Neetu - bhai mein koi saitan thode hi hu ...mein toh Neetu hu na ....

Deepu ne usse apni goad mein khich leta hai aur uske gaal par kiss kar deta hai ....accha toh kya jar rahi thi meri gudiya ..

Neetu - woh toh mein aapko wish karne aayi thi na toh aap ause dhyan mein baithe the toh mein bhi baith gayi ....

Deepu - lekin tumne toh wish kiya hi nahi ....

Neetu - apne sar par haath maarte hue ...ooffo mein toh bhul hi gayi ...GM bhai ...& Haapy birthday ....aur Deepu k gallo par kiss kar deti hai

Deepu - thanku mera baccha ...ab ..jaao aur jaldi se tayar ho jaao ...hume aaj gaon k liye bhi nikalna hai ....

Neetu chali jaati hai ...abhi subah k 9 baj gaye the ....Deepu ko aaj apne aur teen maa Shivali ..Ritu aur Vibhakta ki kami bahut khal rahi thi ...aur uske teeno bhai ..Shivom ...Krishna ..aur ...Virat ...ko bhi woh bahut muss kar raha tha ...usne kai vaar Abhi se pucha tha ....lekin Abhi uske iss baat ko taal deta tha ....
.Deepu ab utha ...aur apne bed k paas gaya toh ..waha ek naya ...ek suit tha jo Rimpy ne rahka tha ..jab Deepu dhyan mein tha .....tayar hokar woh neeche aaya ....

Neeche Abhi drawing haal mein baitha subah ki news dekh raha tha ...Addu aur Rimpy kitchen mein Breakfast bana rahi thi ...ghar mein naukaro k hote hue bhi ...BF ..woh khud tayar karti thi ...

Deepu ne Abhi k pair chuye ....aur Aashirwad liya ...

Abhi - usse gale lagate hue ...jeete rho mere bacche ...mera Aashirwad hai k jeevan k har oadav par tumhe safalta mile ....

Deepu bhi Abhi k saath baitkar News dekhne laga ....

News reader - roopnagar k ...mahshur tourist spot mein hue aaj ek aur haadsa ....yaha k sarowar mein tairne gaye 4 navyuvako ka kuch pata nahi chala ...dekhne walo ka kahna hai ...sarowar k kinare ...nahate hue ...achanak pair fisalne se ..woh sarower k gahre oaani mein kahi kho gaya ...uss samay waha maujood kuch tairako ne unhe dhundne ki koshish ki lekin unka kuch pata nahi .....aapko taad dila de ...k abhi kuch din pahele bhi aisa hi gaadsa hua tha tha ....

hum puchna chahte hai aakhir prashasan kya kar raha hai kab tak aise hi ..baccho ki jaane jaati rahegi .....

Deepu - aapko kya lagta hai papa ....kahi inn mein toh kissi aur ka koyi haath nahi .....

Abhi - inn news walo ko bas koi mauka chahiye hota hai sarkar ko gaali nikalne ka ...ab ..inn sab .mein sarkar kya karegi .....yeh zheel bahut badi ..aur gahri hai ..puchle hafte ..bhi aisa hi juch haadsa hua tha ...toh pahele muzhe bhi kuch shak hua ....uss samay bhi 6 bacche iss zheel mein lapata ho gaye the ....maine bhi unhe dhundne ka prayatna kiya ....lekin woh kahi nahi mile ...iss samay baarish k kaaran ...zheel mein paani bahut hai ..aur .....yeh zheel ghane jungle tak jaati hai ....waha bahut bade bade magarmach hai hosakta hai ...woh bacche unhi ki bhent chad gaye ho

tabhi ek aawaj ne unka dhyan aakashit kiya .....Arre bhai baap bete mein kya baat ho rahi hai jara hume bhi toh pata chale ....yeh tha Sunil Singh ..Adira k pati ....aur yske saath the uske do bacche ...ladka shubham jo Neetu ki hi umar ka tha ...aur 6th mein padhta tha ...Aur ladki thi ...Priyanka jo 8th mein thi .....

Abhi - aao aao Sunil ...woh khuch khas nahi bas asise hi news k baare mein baatein chal rahi thi ...Aao baitho ...aur batao kaise chal raha hai business ..

Sunil - woh sab baad mein saale sahab pahele jara Birthday boy se toh mil le ....

Deepu ne aage badhkar Sunil k pair chue ...aur Sunil ne bhi usse Aashirwad diya ...

Tabhi Shubham aur Priyanka daudte hue aaye jaise unmein race si lagi ho ....Shubham daukar sidha Deepu se lapak gaya ....

Shubham - mein jeet gaya ..mein jeet gaya ....

Sunil - Shubham ..aur priyu yeh sab kya hai ....

Priyanka - maine kuch nahi kiya dad yeh toh shubham ne hi bolo tha ..k kaun sabse pahele bhai ko wish karta hai ....

Deepu - arre ismein race lagane ki kya baat hai tum dono aao ....aur Deepu ne dono ko apni baahon mein bhar liya dono ne Deepu k gaal par kiss karte hue usse ek saath wish kiya ....tabhi Neetu bhi tayar hokar aagayi ....

thodi der baccho mein aisi hi thodi masti chalti rahi ..phir naukar ne aakar ...bataya k Breakfast tayar hai ....sabhi Dinning hall mein pahunch gaye ....Addu aur Rimpy aaj khud serve kar rahi thi ...Breakfast ki khushbu bahut acchi aarahi thi issiliye sabhi ka dhyan bf ki taraf tha ...lekin Deepu ko toh jaise kissi ka besabri se intajar tha ....

Tabhi dinnig room k darwaje par uski nazre jaise tahar gayi ....waha Kirti ..black top ..aur ..blue jeans mein kamal lag rahi thi ....uski kajrari aankhien gulabi patle honth aur doodhiya rangat ...
Deepu jaise usmein kho saa gaya tha ...Kriti bhi apne Rajkumar ko dekhkar jaise kho hi gayi thi ...woh kaskar apne meboobk seene se lagna chahti thi ...lekin itne sab k hote hue ..aisa karna sambhav nahi tha ....

Rimpy aur Abhi ka dhyan Deepu par gaya ...k woh kaha khogaya hai ..jab unhone Kirti ko dekha toh sab samaz gaye ....unhe apna samay yaad aagaya ....k....ek din Rimpy aise hi khadi thi aur Abhi bhi usse aise hi ghur raha tha ....apne bite hue palo ko yaad karke unke chehre par muskan aagayi ......

Tabhi darwaje se do jaane pahchane shaksh aaye .....yeh tha Rinku ..aur Uski Patni Lima .....Kirti unhi ki beti thi .....

Rinku - Arre bhai ....jara humare liye bhi ruk jaate ...naaste k liye ...wah bhabhi kya khusbu aarahi hai .....

Lima - kya aap bhi itne bade ho gaye ho lekin bachpana nahi gaya ....

Abhi - bhabhi ..iss dumchale ko kuch mat kaho yeh jaisa bhi hai aise hi accha hai ....

Abhi aage badhkar Rinku ko gale laga leta hai ....Lima bhi Rimpy k gale lag jaati hai ...

Lima - kriti se ....arre beta waha kyu khadi ho ...ghar mein toh yaha aane k liye badi utawli ho rahi thi ...ab yaha kya ho gaya

Rimpy - vas karo Lima tum neri bacchi ko kuch nahi kahogi ...itna jahkar Rimpy ..Jirti k paas jaakar uske sar par haath pherti hai aur usse gale laga leti hai ....

yaha Rinku bhi Deepu ko wish karta hai ....Deepu bhi Rinku aur Lima ka Aashirwad leta hai ...Kirti bhi usse wish karti hai ....phir sabhi dinning table par baith jaate hai ...Kirti ..thik Deepu k saamne baithi hui thi ...issiliye Uske dhyan baar baar uski taraf jaa raha tha ...

Abhi deere se Deepu ko - ab ghurna bas karo barkurdar aur bf karo hume jaldi nikalna bhi hai ...

uske baad kirti aur Deepu ki aankh micholi k saath saath ..Breakfast ..hua ...uske vaad sabhi ..apni apni gaadiyo mein gaon ki or nikal pade ...Deepu k kuch khas college k frnds bhi aaye the ..jinke baare mein aage pata chalega ..unke liye ...badi ...gadi arrange ki thi ....

Gaddiyo ka kaarwa Old Roopnagar ki taraf badh chala ......

Yaha gaon mein Rana mahal aur poora gaon sajaya hua tha ..ab yeh goan bhi ek nagar mein badal chuka tha ....lekin abhi bhi yaha k logo ka mkya kaam tha kheti ....

Rana Mahal poori tarah phoolo se sajaya hua tha ...RVS aur Naina ...jhud apne pote k swagat ki tayari ...dekh rahe the ....Abhi k nana nani toh ab nahi rahe the .....Abhi k chacha bua aur unke parwar sabhi waha aaye hue the ...yaha inke baare mein itna detail nahi bataunga ..kyu ki iss part mein unka koi khas role nahi hai ...

RVS Aur Naina ko Abhi k kaafile ki Gaon mein pravesh karne ki khabar milti hai ...toh woh pooja ki thali liye mahal k mukhya dwar par kgade ho jaate hai ....tabhi unke intejar ki ghadiya samapt ho jaati hai ....aur gadiyo k kaafila waha aakar ruk jaata hai ...

RVS aur Naina apne jigar k tukde Deepu ka tilak karte hai aur uski aarti utarte hai ....Depu apne dada dadi k pair chuta hai ...RVS usse uthakar gale laga leta hai ...

RVS - mere sher teri jagah waha nahi taha mere dil mein hai ...aur uski pith thaptapate hue ....wah ab toh tu bilkul gabru jawan ho gaya hai ....

Deepu ne Naina ka bhi Aashirwad liya ...Naina ne uske maathe ko chuma ....aur usse gale laga liya ......yaha Deepu se milne walo ki line bahut lambi thi ..uski sona aur pari bua ....Abhi ki bua chacha mama & family ...Sabse milte milte bahut der ho gayi .....Abhi k sabhi dosto ki vyastha mahal mein ho gayi thi ....Abhi ...Maha guru k shisya aacharya Divyansh jo ab unka gurukul sambhal rahe the ....unke saath Magal k guot shivalaye mein Abhishek ki tayari kar rahe the ...

suryastha ho gaya tha ...Shuvalaya k saari tayariya ho ..gayi thi ....Abhi Deepu ko lekar ...Mahal k apne kaksha ....k deewar k paas pahuncha ...tabhi uss deewar mein ek gupt dwar pragat ho gaya ..Deepu aascharya se uss dwar ko dekh raha tha ...kyu ki woh kai baar yaha aa chuka tha aur iss kaskh mein kai kai dino tak rah bhi chuka tha ..parantu usne kabhi yeh dwar yaha nahi dekha ....

Abhi Deepu ko lekar uss dwar mein pravesh karta hai aur shivalaya pahunch jaata hai ...yaha pahunchkar toh Deepu aur aaschrya chakit rah jaata hai hai ....kyu ki yaha ek aur Abhi uski aur teeno maaye Shivali ..Ritu ..Aur Vibhakta jinhe woh bahut miss karta ..woh wahi khadi thi .....apni teeno maa ko dekhkar Deepu bahut khush hua ...lekin abhi bhi woh confusion mein tha ..k ek Abhi uske saath tha aur ek uski teeno maao k saath ....

Deepu k saath jo Abhi tha woh tha A1 jo Abhi k janalok jaane k baad sangharak ki bhumika aur pariwar ka kartavya sambhal raha tha ....

Abhi - aise kya dekh rahe ho beta ...miloge nahi apne pita se ...

Deepu ne ek bazar A1 par daali ..toh usne haa mein ishara kiya ...Deepu ne aage badhkar Abhi k charan chuye ...Toh Abhi ne bhi usse gale lagakar Aashirwad diya ....
uske baad Deepu apni teeno maao se bhi mila aaj itne varsho baad usse apni inn teen matavo se milkar bahut accha laga ...woh teeno bhi uska maata chumkar usse gale lagakar uspar apni mamta luta rahi thi ...

lekin Deepu abhi bhi Abhi k do roopo se confuse tha ....tab Abhi ne usse saari baat sanskep nein bata di ....apne pita ki shaktiyo ka gyan hote hi uski shraddha aur badh gayi ...usne phir apne Pita k charno mein naman kiya ..

Deepu - maa Mere teeno bhai kaha hai ...unhe dekhe bhi vahut varsh ho gaye hai ...

Shivali - beta woh bhi golu chachu k saath aate hi honge ...

uske baad Deepu k haatho aacharya Divyansh k dwara Rudra abhishek karaya gaya ...aur uske baad ..Abhi ne sankalp karke ...Sangharak ...ki saari shaktiya ....Deepu ko pradan ki ..woh shaktiya ek prakash k roop mein Deepu k bhiter pravesh kar rahe ..thi ..aur uske prabhav se usse halke halje zhatke bhi lag rahe the .....

Sangharak ki shakti prapt hote hi Deepu ...k haath mein ek divya talwar pragat ho gayi ...ab Deepu ban gaya .. apradhiyo ka kaal sangharak ...

Abhi k liye itna hi ...
Agla update jald hi ....

doston yaha mein aapko batana chahta hu k har kaha ni ka ek hi main hero hota hai . aur ek main villan ....Iss bhag mein Deepu ka part jyada hai lekin main villan ko maarega apna hero Abhi hi ....
kuch readers yeh bhi soch rahe honge k Arsalan ...Darmen ..kcera ka iss modern era se jya connection hai aur kahani uss saamay se iss era mein kaise pahunch gayi ....toh unke liye vas itna hi kahunga k Darmen k era se uss modern era ka bahut gahra connection hai ....saath bane rahite aapko dhere dgere sab pata chal jaayega .....aur gaa ..apne valuable comments aur review dena mat bhuliyega ...
Stay safe & Stay Happy ....

Bahot shaandaar mazedaar lajawab update dost

 

[abhi1008]

Mind blowing fantastic update brother
Aap dekhna yah hai ki dipu ki kahani kya hai
Kya dipu ke pass bhi magical power hai
And aage Ki story mein dipu lead role mein Hoga ya abhi
Otherwise
my story
R.R.Raj-Safar Aadi Se Ant Tak

Bahut bahut dhnyawad bhai aapke shandar saath aur superb fantastic comment k liye

Deepu ki powers k baare mein dhire dhire pata chal hi jaayega ...bhai ..iss part mein deepu ka role jyada hoga lekin ...main Hero toh Abhi hi hoga ..



aise hi saath bahaye rakhe??

Update 67 posted.....

 

[mashish]

Update - 67

Kalasur k maare jaane Abhi ne 14 loko ki vyavastha dekhne k liye ...apne 14 roop sthapit kar diye ...aur sadharan roop mein Prithvi par apne pariwar k saath Sang harak ka kartvya nibhate hue rahne laga ....

Abhi k dada dai k marne k baad ab RVS aur Naina Gaon rah rahe the ..Shahar ki saari jimmedari ab Abhi ne sambhal li thi ....

Rimpy ko chodkar uski sabhi patniya ...uske mukhya ..teen patniyo mein sama gayi thi .....Shivali ...Ritu ..aur .Vibhakta ..ko bhi santan sukh ki kaamna thi ....aur Rimpy bhi garbh wati thi ...issiliye Abhi Apni charo patniyo k saath ....aur Pariwar k saath rahne ka nirnay liya ...

waha rahkar ek taraf toh apne putra hone k kartvya ko nibhate hue apne pita RVS ka saara karya bhar sambhal raha tha ....wahi dusri or sangharak bankar apradh jagat mein panapne wale apradiyo ko uchit dand dekar apne kartvya ka nirvah kar raha tha ....

bhale hi Abhi ne KS k saare asuro ko maar diya tha ...parantu abhi bhi kuch asur jo uss mahayudh se bhag gaye the ..woh chupkar pritvi par rah rahe the ....aur apradh jagat ka niyantran kar rahe the ....

Burai rakt beej ki tarah hoti hai ..jaise jaise iska ant hota jaata hai ..waise waise aur naye burai k numainde paida hote rahete hai ....aise hi 8 asur jo KS k sainik the aur uss yudh se bachkar bhage the ..unke paas saririk bal k alwa aur koi power bahi thi .....woh yaha prithvi par gupt roop se rah rahe the ....unhone ..under world par kabja banaya hua tha ....Sangharak k bhay se woh pragat roop mein toh kuch nahi kar paa rahe the ...lekin ..abhi bhi kai apradh gupt rup se chal rahe the ....

yeh 8 asur humare system mein aise ghus gaye the ...k ..koi bhi ...unke vastavik roop se unhe nahi jaanta tha .....yaha tak k unke liye kaam karne walo ne ...bhi unhe Kabhi nahi dekha tha ... ....unki pahunch system mein bahut gahri thi ....unhone apne syndicate ka naam Black Eagle rakha tha ...Under World yeh naam hi kaafi tha ... Sangharak k kaaran ab Under world hawala ...neto k jariye corruption ...aur chote mote apradh ...par survive ka rahe the .....

Samay par Rimpy ne ek sundar balak ko janam diya ..Abhi ne uska naam ..Thakur ..Deepak Singh (Deepu) rakha , Deepu k janm k ek kuch mahino baad Shivali ..Ritu ..aur Vibhakta k bhi ek ek santan hui ....Shivali ka beta Shivom ....Ritu ka beta ...Krishna ....Aur Vibhakta ...ka Virat ....

unn teeno mein apni matao ki kuch shaktiya bachpan se hi thi ...Golu un teeno k thoda bade hone k baad ....unke prashikshan k liye ....Maha guru k aashram le gaya tha ...

Deepu mein janam se koi vishwsh powers nahi thi .. uske bhiter apne nata pita k gun the .... buddi mein apni mata Rimpy ki tarah tez ...aur bal ..aur shaurya mein apne pita saman tha ....uski Bhi training 5 varsh ki umar se hi shuru ho gayi thi ....

best fighters ..aur trainers usse trained kar rahe the ....jab unki training poori hui toh Abhi khud usse yog ..dwara apne chakra ..jagrit karne ka prashikshan dene laga ....Kabhi Kabhi Rakesh aur Rinku bhi usse ..weapon training aur fighting skills sikhate the ...

Shivam..... Krishna aur Virat k jaane k baad Abhi ne apne Sangharak roop ko wahi choda ...aur ....Apni teeno patniyo k saath Janalok chala gaya ...kyu ki paruwarik moh se jyada unke liye ...apna kartavya ..jyada jaruri tha ....

Aaj Deepu 18 saal ka ho raha tha ...unke vash ki paramprao k anusar ...aaj Gaon k mahal mein sthit gupt Shivalaya mein ...aaj ..usse Sangharak ki shaktiya ...prapt hone wale thi . ek bahut badi jimmedari uske kandhe par aane wali thi ....

Deepu gahri neend mein soya ...apne sunahre sapno mein khoya tha ...k tabhi uske mobile ka alaram baj utha ....jisase uski need khul gayi ....abhi subah 5 baje ka samay ho gaya tha ..woh jaldi se utha ....aur apne nityakarm niptakar ...dhyan mein baith gaya ....Abhi k prayatno ....aur uski kadi mehnat k kaaran ..woh aagya chakra tak k chakra jagrit kar chuka tha ....Janam se bhale hi usmein koi powers nahi thi ...paratnu apne athak prayas ..aur kadi training karaan ....aaj woh har tarah ki fighting skills aur mein poori tarah trained ho gaya tha ....aur saath hi apne chakro ki urja ka prayog karna bhi sikh gaya tha ....

Aise hi dhyan karte hue usse kaafi samay bit gaya tha ....jab usne aankhien kholi toh saamne dekhkar uske chehre par muskurahat aagayi ....uski pyari gudiya ...uske saamne ....uske hi saman aasan jamakar baithi hui thi ....aur ek aankh kholkar usse dekh rahi thi ...

Deepu - kya kar rahi hai ..meri pyari choti shaitan ...

Neetu - bhai mein koi saitan thode hi hu ...mein toh Neetu hu na ....

Deepu ne usse apni goad mein khich leta hai aur uske gaal par kiss kar deta hai ....accha toh kya jar rahi thi meri gudiya ..

Neetu - woh toh mein aapko wish karne aayi thi na toh aap ause dhyan mein baithe the toh mein bhi baith gayi ....

Deepu - lekin tumne toh wish kiya hi nahi ....

Neetu - apne sar par haath maarte hue ...ooffo mein toh bhul hi gayi ...GM bhai ...& Haapy birthday ....aur Deepu k gallo par kiss kar deti hai

Deepu - thanku mera baccha ...ab ..jaao aur jaldi se tayar ho jaao ...hume aaj gaon k liye bhi nikalna hai ....

Neetu chali jaati hai ...abhi subah k 9 baj gaye the ....Deepu ko aaj apne aur teen maa Shivali ..Ritu aur Vibhakta ki kami bahut khal rahi thi ...aur uske teeno bhai ..Shivom ...Krishna ..aur ...Virat ...ko bhi woh bahut muss kar raha tha ...usne kai vaar Abhi se pucha tha ....lekin Abhi uske iss baat ko taal deta tha ....
.Deepu ab utha ...aur apne bed k paas gaya toh ..waha ek naya ...ek suit tha jo Rimpy ne rahka tha ..jab Deepu dhyan mein tha .....tayar hokar woh neeche aaya ....

Neeche Abhi drawing haal mein baitha subah ki news dekh raha tha ...Addu aur Rimpy kitchen mein Breakfast bana rahi thi ...ghar mein naukaro k hote hue bhi ...BF ..woh khud tayar karti thi ...

Deepu ne Abhi k pair chuye ....aur Aashirwad liya ...

Abhi - usse gale lagate hue ...jeete rho mere bacche ...mera Aashirwad hai k jeevan k har oadav par tumhe safalta mile ....

Deepu bhi Abhi k saath baitkar News dekhne laga ....

News reader - roopnagar k ...mahshur tourist spot mein hue aaj ek aur haadsa ....yaha k sarowar mein tairne gaye 4 navyuvako ka kuch pata nahi chala ...dekhne walo ka kahna hai ...sarowar k kinare ...nahate hue ...achanak pair fisalne se ..woh sarower k gahre oaani mein kahi kho gaya ...uss samay waha maujood kuch tairako ne unhe dhundne ki koshish ki lekin unka kuch pata nahi .....aapko taad dila de ...k abhi kuch din pahele bhi aisa hi gaadsa hua tha tha ....

hum puchna chahte hai aakhir prashasan kya kar raha hai kab tak aise hi ..baccho ki jaane jaati rahegi .....

Deepu - aapko kya lagta hai papa ....kahi inn mein toh kissi aur ka koyi haath nahi .....

Abhi - inn news walo ko bas koi mauka chahiye hota hai sarkar ko gaali nikalne ka ...ab ..inn sab .mein sarkar kya karegi .....yeh zheel bahut badi ..aur gahri hai ..puchle hafte ..bhi aisa hi juch haadsa hua tha ...toh pahele muzhe bhi kuch shak hua ....uss samay bhi 6 bacche iss zheel mein lapata ho gaye the ....maine bhi unhe dhundne ka prayatna kiya ....lekin woh kahi nahi mile ...iss samay baarish k kaaran ...zheel mein paani bahut hai ..aur .....yeh zheel ghane jungle tak jaati hai ....waha bahut bade bade magarmach hai hosakta hai ...woh bacche unhi ki bhent chad gaye ho

tabhi ek aawaj ne unka dhyan aakashit kiya .....Arre bhai baap bete mein kya baat ho rahi hai jara hume bhi toh pata chale ....yeh tha Sunil Singh ..Adira k pati ....aur yske saath the uske do bacche ...ladka shubham jo Neetu ki hi umar ka tha ...aur 6th mein padhta tha ...Aur ladki thi ...Priyanka jo 8th mein thi .....

Abhi - aao aao Sunil ...woh khuch khas nahi bas asise hi news k baare mein baatein chal rahi thi ...Aao baitho ...aur batao kaise chal raha hai business ..

Sunil - woh sab baad mein saale sahab pahele jara Birthday boy se toh mil le ....

Deepu ne aage badhkar Sunil k pair chue ...aur Sunil ne bhi usse Aashirwad diya ...

Tabhi Shubham aur Priyanka daudte hue aaye jaise unmein race si lagi ho ....Shubham daukar sidha Deepu se lapak gaya ....

Shubham - mein jeet gaya ..mein jeet gaya ....

Sunil - Shubham ..aur priyu yeh sab kya hai ....

Priyanka - maine kuch nahi kiya dad yeh toh shubham ne hi bolo tha ..k kaun sabse pahele bhai ko wish karta hai ....

Deepu - arre ismein race lagane ki kya baat hai tum dono aao ....aur Deepu ne dono ko apni baahon mein bhar liya dono ne Deepu k gaal par kiss karte hue usse ek saath wish kiya ....tabhi Neetu bhi tayar hokar aagayi ....

thodi der baccho mein aisi hi thodi masti chalti rahi ..phir naukar ne aakar ...bataya k Breakfast tayar hai ....sabhi Dinning hall mein pahunch gaye ....Addu aur Rimpy aaj khud serve kar rahi thi ...Breakfast ki khushbu bahut acchi aarahi thi issiliye sabhi ka dhyan bf ki taraf tha ...lekin Deepu ko toh jaise kissi ka besabri se intajar tha ....

Tabhi dinnig room k darwaje par uski nazre jaise tahar gayi ....waha Kirti ..black top ..aur ..blue jeans mein kamal lag rahi thi ....uski kajrari aankhien gulabi patle honth aur doodhiya rangat ...
Deepu jaise usmein kho saa gaya tha ...Kriti bhi apne Rajkumar ko dekhkar jaise kho hi gayi thi ...woh kaskar apne meboobk seene se lagna chahti thi ...lekin itne sab k hote hue ..aisa karna sambhav nahi tha ....

Rimpy aur Abhi ka dhyan Deepu par gaya ...k woh kaha khogaya hai ..jab unhone Kirti ko dekha toh sab samaz gaye ....unhe apna samay yaad aagaya ....k....ek din Rimpy aise hi khadi thi aur Abhi bhi usse aise hi ghur raha tha ....apne bite hue palo ko yaad karke unke chehre par muskan aagayi ......

Tabhi darwaje se do jaane pahchane shaksh aaye .....yeh tha Rinku ..aur Uski Patni Lima .....Kirti unhi ki beti thi .....

Rinku - Arre bhai ....jara humare liye bhi ruk jaate ...naaste k liye ...wah bhabhi kya khusbu aarahi hai .....

Lima - kya aap bhi itne bade ho gaye ho lekin bachpana nahi gaya ....

Abhi - bhabhi ..iss dumchale ko kuch mat kaho yeh jaisa bhi hai aise hi accha hai ....

Abhi aage badhkar Rinku ko gale laga leta hai ....Lima bhi Rimpy k gale lag jaati hai ...

Lima - kriti se ....arre beta waha kyu khadi ho ...ghar mein toh yaha aane k liye badi utawli ho rahi thi ...ab yaha kya ho gaya

Rimpy - vas karo Lima tum neri bacchi ko kuch nahi kahogi ...itna jahkar Rimpy ..Jirti k paas jaakar uske sar par haath pherti hai aur usse gale laga leti hai ....

yaha Rinku bhi Deepu ko wish karta hai ....Deepu bhi Rinku aur Lima ka Aashirwad leta hai ...Kirti bhi usse wish karti hai ....phir sabhi dinning table par baith jaate hai ...Kirti ..thik Deepu k saamne baithi hui thi ...issiliye Uske dhyan baar baar uski taraf jaa raha tha ...

Abhi deere se Deepu ko - ab ghurna bas karo barkurdar aur bf karo hume jaldi nikalna bhi hai ...

uske baad kirti aur Deepu ki aankh micholi k saath saath ..Breakfast ..hua ...uske vaad sabhi ..apni apni gaadiyo mein gaon ki or nikal pade ...Deepu k kuch khas college k frnds bhi aaye the ..jinke baare mein aage pata chalega ..unke liye ...badi ...gadi arrange ki thi ....

Gaddiyo ka kaarwa Old Roopnagar ki taraf badh chala ......

Yaha gaon mein Rana mahal aur poora gaon sajaya hua tha ..ab yeh goan bhi ek nagar mein badal chuka tha ....lekin abhi bhi yaha k logo ka mkya kaam tha kheti ....

Rana Mahal poori tarah phoolo se sajaya hua tha ...RVS aur Naina ...jhud apne pote k swagat ki tayari ...dekh rahe the ....Abhi k nana nani toh ab nahi rahe the .....Abhi k chacha bua aur unke parwar sabhi waha aaye hue the ...yaha inke baare mein itna detail nahi bataunga ..kyu ki iss part mein unka koi khas role nahi hai ...

RVS Aur Naina ko Abhi k kaafile ki Gaon mein pravesh karne ki khabar milti hai ...toh woh pooja ki thali liye mahal k mukhya dwar par kgade ho jaate hai ....tabhi unke intejar ki ghadiya samapt ho jaati hai ....aur gadiyo k kaafila waha aakar ruk jaata hai ...

RVS aur Naina apne jigar k tukde Deepu ka tilak karte hai aur uski aarti utarte hai ....Depu apne dada dadi k pair chuta hai ...RVS usse uthakar gale laga leta hai ...

RVS - mere sher teri jagah waha nahi taha mere dil mein hai ...aur uski pith thaptapate hue ....wah ab toh tu bilkul gabru jawan ho gaya hai ....

Deepu ne Naina ka bhi Aashirwad liya ...Naina ne uske maathe ko chuma ....aur usse gale laga liya ......yaha Deepu se milne walo ki line bahut lambi thi ..uski sona aur pari bua ....Abhi ki bua chacha mama & family ...Sabse milte milte bahut der ho gayi .....Abhi k sabhi dosto ki vyastha mahal mein ho gayi thi ....Abhi ...Maha guru k shisya aacharya Divyansh jo ab unka gurukul sambhal rahe the ....unke saath Magal k guot shivalaye mein Abhishek ki tayari kar rahe the ...

suryastha ho gaya tha ...Shuvalaya k saari tayariya ho ..gayi thi ....Abhi Deepu ko lekar ...Mahal k apne kaksha ....k deewar k paas pahuncha ...tabhi uss deewar mein ek gupt dwar pragat ho gaya ..Deepu aascharya se uss dwar ko dekh raha tha ...kyu ki woh kai baar yaha aa chuka tha aur iss kaskh mein kai kai dino tak rah bhi chuka tha ..parantu usne kabhi yeh dwar yaha nahi dekha ....

Abhi Deepu ko lekar uss dwar mein pravesh karta hai aur shivalaya pahunch jaata hai ...yaha pahunchkar toh Deepu aur aaschrya chakit rah jaata hai hai ....kyu ki yaha ek aur Abhi uski aur teeno maaye Shivali ..Ritu ..Aur Vibhakta jinhe woh bahut miss karta ..woh wahi khadi thi .....apni teeno maa ko dekhkar Deepu bahut khush hua ...lekin abhi bhi woh confusion mein tha ..k ek Abhi uske saath tha aur ek uski teeno maao k saath ....

Deepu k saath jo Abhi tha woh tha A1 jo Abhi k janalok jaane k baad sangharak ki bhumika aur pariwar ka kartavya sambhal raha tha ....

Abhi - aise kya dekh rahe ho beta ...miloge nahi apne pita se ...

Deepu ne ek bazar A1 par daali ..toh usne haa mein ishara kiya ...Deepu ne aage badhkar Abhi k charan chuye ...Toh Abhi ne bhi usse gale lagakar Aashirwad diya ....
uske baad Deepu apni teeno maao se bhi mila aaj itne varsho baad usse apni inn teen matavo se milkar bahut accha laga ...woh teeno bhi uska maata chumkar usse gale lagakar uspar apni mamta luta rahi thi ...

lekin Deepu abhi bhi Abhi k do roopo se confuse tha ....tab Abhi ne usse saari baat sanskep nein bata di ....apne pita ki shaktiyo ka gyan hote hi uski shraddha aur badh gayi ...usne phir apne Pita k charno mein naman kiya ..

Deepu - maa Mere teeno bhai kaha hai ...unhe dekhe bhi vahut varsh ho gaye hai ...

Shivali - beta woh bhi golu chachu k saath aate hi honge ...

uske baad Deepu k haatho aacharya Divyansh k dwara Rudra abhishek karaya gaya ...aur uske baad ..Abhi ne sankalp karke ...Sangharak ...ki saari shaktiya ....Deepu ko pradan ki ..woh shaktiya ek prakash k roop mein Deepu k bhiter pravesh kar rahe ..thi ..aur uske prabhav se usse halke halje zhatke bhi lag rahe the .....

Sangharak ki shakti prapt hote hi Deepu ...k haath mein ek divya talwar pragat ho gayi ...ab Deepu ban gaya .. apradhiyo ka kaal sangharak ...

Abhi k liye itna hi ...
Agla update jald hi ....

doston yaha mein aapko batana chahta hu k har kaha ni ka ek hi main hero hota hai . aur ek main villan ....Iss bhag mein Deepu ka part jyada hai lekin main villan ko maarega apna hero Abhi hi ....
kuch readers yeh bhi soch rahe honge k Arsalan ...Darmen ..kcera ka iss modern era se jya connection hai aur kahani uss saamay se iss era mein kaise pahunch gayi ....toh unke liye vas itna hi kahunga k Darmen k era se uss modern era ka bahut gahra connection hai ....saath bane rahite aapko dhere dgere sab pata chal jaayega .....aur gaa ..apne valuable comments aur review dena mat bhuliyega ...
Stay safe & Stay Happy ....

awesome update

 

[AAS]

Nice update

 

[The king]

Nice update bhai or questions he kya yaha dono samay ke abhi sath me aayenge kya waiting for next update

 

[Nevil singh]

Bahut bahut dhanywad Mitra aapke iss utsaha vardhak ...prashansniya ...aur adbhut shabdo se susajjit aapki tipoaniyo k liye .....

mein ek bahut sadharan vyakti hu bhai bas prayatna karta hu apne marg par nane rahne ki .....aapke iss prashansa poorna udgar k liye ati aabhar .....

aapke shabh aur uttam vichardhar bhi yahi darshati hai k aap ek shreshtha vyaktitva ..aur shudh hriday k swami hai ...Jo dusro ki bhawnao ko bakhubi samazte hai ...


aise hi saath banaye rakhe??

Update 65 posted.....

Shukriya mitr hridey se, itna maan dene ke liye.

 

[Nevil singh]

Update - 66

Arsalan aur Dhara ne ..apni sammilit urja se phir se Arin grah ki praja ka nirman kiya ....charo taraf phir se khushiyo ka samrajya sthapit ho gaya ....

ab aagee .....chalte hai ...Prithvi par aaj k samay .mein.......

ek navjawan ladka apne bedroom mein gahri nind soya tha ..chehre par maasumiyat aur hontho par muskan najane kiske sapno mein khoya tha .....kamre mein halki si night bulb ki roshni ....faili hui thi ....tabhi halke se uske bedroom ka darwaja khula ..aur koi..dhire dhire halke kadmo se uske bister ki or badha ....

bister tak pahunchkar usne pahle gaur se uss ladke ko dekha fir dhire se woh uske bed par chad gaya ....usne pane haath mein pakdi hui chij ko ek baar dekha ....jisse dekhkar uske chehre par muskurahat aagayi ....woh chij ek electronic horn thi ....usne ek baar aur uss gahri neend mein sote hue ladke k chehre par nazar dali .....aur uss horn ka button daba diya ....aur ek ..tez aawaj hui .piippiiiiiiiiiiii.....

Achanak hui iss tezz aawaj k kaaran ...woh ..ladka ..gahri need se ek zhakte mein uchala ..aur ..hadbadahat ....mein bed se niche gir gaya .....abhi woh kuch samazta .k ..usse khilkhilar hasne ki aawaj aayi .....

hehehehe...bhai dar gaye ..bhai ..dar..gaye ...he..he..he..he....

ladka - Nitu ki bacchi ...tu..ruk abhi tuze batata hu ....aur usne ....usko pakadne k liye ..bed par chalang laga di ...parantu woh usse pakad paata ..uske pahele hi ....woh ...woh bacchi ...jisne uske kaan k paas horn bajaya tha ...woh bed se utarkar bhag khadi hui ...woh ladka bhi uske picche ..pakadne k liye bhaga ....woh usse pakadta ..tabhi kamre ki light on ho gayi ....

uske saamne uski bua ....cake lekar khadi thi ...aur uske ..mom dad bhi the ....sabhi ek saath ...

Happy Birthday to you ...Happy Birthday to you ...Happy Birthday to dear Deepu Haappy Birthday to you .....

Yeh ladka tha ..Deepu ..yani ..k Thakur Deepak Singh .....Thakur Abhinav Singh yani k Abhi aur Rimpy Devi ..ka beta .....aur Jo Cake lekar khadi thi Woh thi Uski bua ..Adira .singh ..jisse Abhi pyar se Addu bulata tha ...issiliye ..Deepu bhi usse Addu bua kahkar hi bulata tha .. .aur woh choti bacchi thi uski ladli shararati aur cute si choti bahen Neetu ...

Addu ko Deepu mein wohi Deepu nazar aata tha jisse usne unn khatarnak saayo k kaaran kho diya tha .....issiliye woh ..Deepu par apni jaan chidakti thi ...shadi k baad uske bhi do bacche the ..woh deepu ka janamdin manane jo ab poora 18 saal ka ho gaya tha ....adhi raat ko cake lekar aayi thi .....

Addu ko cake lekar khade dekhkar Deepu bahut khush hua ...usne Addu k pair chue ....

Addu - betu tuze kitni baar mana kiya hai mere pair chune ko lekin tu hai k maanta hi nahi ...Addu ne Cake Rimpy ko pakdaya aur Deepu ko ..uthakar ..uske maate ko chuma ..aur sar par haath pherte hue ...boli - mera pyra baccha ...Happy birthday to you betu ...aur usse gale laga liya ....Deepu ko gale lagakar Addu ki aankhien nam ho gayi usse phri apne muh bole bhai Deepu ki yaad aagayi .....

Deepu - ( Addu se alag hota hua )....yeh kya hai bua phir aapki aankhon mein yeh aansoo ...( apne haaton se Addu k aansoo ponchta hua ) kitni baar kaha hai muzhe aapki aankhon mein yeh aansoo acche nahi lagte ...lekin har janamdin par aise hi hota hai ....muzhe lagta hai k mein hi bura hu ...meri hi wajah se aapki aankhon mein yeh aansoo aate hai na ...

Addu - nahi mere bacche tu toh meri khushi hai ....teri wajah se kyu aayenge yeh aansoo ..yeh toh bas ause hi ....

Deepu - toh phir promise karo ab dubara aisa nahi hona chahiye nahi toh mein aapse baat nahi karunga ....

Addu - ( kaan pakadte hue ) thik hai baba ..ab nahi karungi ...

Deepu - thats like my beautiful bua ..I love you .bua ...( aur Addu k gale lag jaata hai )

Adfu - i love you too mera baacha ....

itne der se Abhi ...Rimy aur .Neetu ..bua aur bhatije ka pyar chup chap khade dekh rahi thi .....

Abhi - aur kitni der aise hi yaha darwaje par khada rahna hoga ...bhai hum bhi yaha line mein hai Birthday boy ko wish karne k liye ....chalo pahele cake kaato ....

Rimpy - haa nahi toh kya kab se cake lekar khdi hu ab toh mere haath bhi dukh rahe hai ....

phir sab room k andar aate hai aur Rimpy wahi room mein ek table par cake rakhkar candle lagati hai ...Phir Deepu phoonk maarkar un candles ko buzhata hai ..aur cake katata hai aur ek baar sabhi phir gane lagte hai .....

Happy Birthday to you...Happy Birthday to you ....Happy Birthday To Dear Deepu ..Happy Birthday To You ......

Cake katne k baad ..Addu ...Deepu ..ko khilati hai ..Deepu bhi Aduu ko cake khilakar Aashirwad leta hai ...Phir ..woh Apni maa Rimpy ka Aashirwad leta hai ..Rimpy bhi ...apne bete ka maatha chumkar usse gale laga leti hai ....

Rimpy - kush raho mere bacche ...Bagwan kare mere betu ..ko meri bhi unar lag jaaye ..aur... ..jeewan mein aanewali saari musibate dur ho jaaye ...tu humsha aise ki kush aur swastha rahe .....apne ..jigar k tukde k sar par haath pherte hue Aashirwad deti hai ....

Deepu - kya maa ...aap bhi ....muzhe ..aapki unar nahi chahiye ..mein toh chahta hu ...aapka yeh mamta bhara anchal humesha mere sarpar bana rahe .....

Rimpy ek baar phir apne bete ki iss baat se ...uska maatha chum leti hai ...

Tabhi bed k side table par rakha hua mobile bajne lagta hai ....toh sabka dhyan yss or jaata hai ....lekin Deepu uss or dhyan nahi deta aur Apne pita Abhi k charan chuta hai ....Abhi usse kandhe se pakadkar uthata hai ..aur ..sar par haath rakhkar Aashirwad dete hue ...

Abhi - Jamandin Mubarak ho mere sher ....aaj tu poore 18 ka ho gaya ..ab samay aagaya hai tuze apne vansh ki parampara ko aage badhane ka ....mera Aashirwad hai k tu har jathinay ko paar jarta hua apne kkaksya ko prapt kare ...

Chotti Neetu bichari apne number aane ka intezar kar rahi thi ..bade der se chup thi lekin ab usse sabra nahi ho raha tha .....

Neetu - arre bhai muzhe bhi cake khilao na mein kab se wait kar rahi hu .....

Deepu - tuzhe toh mein bilkul bhi nahi khilaunga cake ...ek toh muzhe iss tarah uthaya aur jab mein bed se gir gaya toh ...badi hasi aarahi thi ....

Deepu ki baat sunkar Neetu ki aankhon mein aansoo aagaye ....jisse dekhkar Abhi ...

tabhi phir mobile baja ...aur sabhi ka dhyan uspar gaya ...

Rimpy yeh baar baar kaun ph kar raha hai ..ek baar baat toh kar le ....

Deepu - kuch nahi mom woh frnds honge jo wish karne k liye ph kar rahe hai baad mein baat kar lunga ....

Abhi - woh toh thik hai..... lekin yeh kya tarika hai . ...apni choti bahen se baat karne ka ...yeh bechari yoh ...tuzhe wish karne k chakkar mein ab tak soyi nahi ....aur tu hai k issase naraz ho raha hai ....

Neetu - papa mere bhai ko koi kuch nahi bologa ..aur aap daatoge bhi nahi ....

Abhi - kaan pakadte hue - sorry gudiya ...nahi bolunga ..

Addu - Chalo bhai yaha se inn do bhai bahen k bich hum bolenge toh yahi hofa ...inhe hi nipatne do ....

Deepu - kaan pakadte hue Neetu k aage ghutno k bal baith jaata hai ...
sorry gudiya mein toh mazak kar raha tha ....mein jabhi tuzhse naraj ho sakta hu ...

itna kahkar Deepu .ne. Neetu ko uthakar apni goad mein bithaya ....aur uske aansoo ponchte hue ...

Deepu - naraz hai meri gudiya apne bhai se ....

Neetu - ( muh fulate hue ) hmmm...aap bhi toh gussa ho gaye the ...

Deepu - nahi gudiya ..mein tuzhse kabhi gussa ho sakta hu ...tu toh meri jaan hai ...mai toh bas mazak kar raha tha .....

Neetu - saachi bhai aap muzhse naraj nahi ho na ....

Deepu - bilkul nahi gudiya .....aur cake ka tukda usse khila deta hai ....love you mera baccha ...
itna kahkar Deepu apni pyari si gudiya k gaal par kiss kar deta hai ....

Neetu - Love you too bhai ....lekin muzhe bhi aapko cake khilaungi ....

Deepu cake ki plate uske aage kar deta hai ...Neetu ek bada sa tukda uthati hai ...aur Deepu apna muh khol deta hai ...lekin ...tabhi Neetu ...cake ka Deepu k muh par mal deti hai ...aur turant godi se khudkar ....darwaje ki taraf bhag jaati hai ....Deepu usse dekhta hai ....toh muh chadkar ...Happy birthday bhai kahkar bhag jaati hai ...

Neetu ki iss shararat par sabhi hasne lagte hai ...Deepu k chehre par bhi apni iss natkhat bahen ki shararat par hassi aajaati hai .....

Abhi - ab jaldi se so joo beta ....kal hume gaon k liye nikalna hai ...tumahare janadin ka ustsav kal dumdham se wahi hoga ...aur haa apne frnds ko bola k nahi ...

Deepu - Haa dad sabko bol diya hai ....

Abhi - thik hai good night ....

Phir sab good night wish karte hai aur apne apne room mein chale jaate hai ...Yaha Deepu ka ..mobile phir baja ...usne number dekha toh uske hontho par muskurahat aagayi thi ....lekin saare chehre par cake laga tha ....issiliye woh usse saaf karne bathroom chala gaya ..fresh hokar aaya ...aur ...phir ...usne mobli se ussi number par dail kiya jisase usse baar baar call aarahi thi .....

Baar baar ring baj rahi thi lekin udhar se koi ph nahi utha raha tha ....Deepu samaz gaya ...k mamla gadbad ho gaya hai ...usse uss number par sorry ka msg bhej diya ...thodi der tak koi jawab nahi aaya ..phir msg aaya Deepu ne dekha toh gusse wala emoji tha ....
jusse dekhkar Deepu ne phir msg kiya ....

Nakam thi meri sab koshishe ussko manane ki
Pata nahi kaha se sikhi adaye jaalim ne rooth jaane ki ...

tabhi phir ek msg aaya ....
mohabbat ajamane ho to bas itana he kafe hai,
jara sa rooth kar dekho manane kaun ata hai…

Deepu ne phir call kiya kiya iss baar call utha liya ...yeh thi Kirti jo Deepu ki jaan uska pyar thi

Deepu - haaye meri jaan aakhir iss naachij ka call uthane ki jahmat utha hi li ...

Kirti - ek toh khud mera ph nahi uthate ho aur upar se muzhe hi dosh de rahe ho ...

Deepu - main kya karta jaan , uss samay mom dad ..bua aur Neetu thi toh kaise uthata ....

Kirti - toh kya hua ...unhe bata dete k unki bahu ka ph hai ....

Deepu - accha ji ...lagta hai shadi kuch jyada hi jaldi hai ..hai thik hai kal milo waise bhi gaon jaa hi rahe hai ..wahi shadi bhi kar lenge ...mein toh abhi chala mom dad ko yeh khush khabri dene ..

Kirti - nahi ..nahi...ruko ...mein toh bas aise hi kah rahi thi ....abhi toh humare khelne kudne k din din ...abhi toh humne acvhe se pyar ko enjoy bhi nahi kya ....

Deepu - aagayi na line par ...lekin ab tak tumne wish nahi kiya ..

Kirti - uff ..mein bhi na baaton mein bhul hi gayi ...Happy Birthday to my shona ...

Deepu - yeh kya sukha sukha ...ek kiss toh do na ...

Kirti - abhi nahi ..kal kar dungi gila ....abhi k liye sukha hi thik hai ...

Deepu - accha kya gila kar dogi ...

Kirti - hat ...aap bhi na kuch jyada hi naughty ho rahe ho ...abhi k liye bye Good night ...kal jaldi uthna bhi hai kitni tayari karni hai .....Love you babu bye ..

Deepu - Love you too sweetu ...good night ....

Abhi k liye itna hi ....
Agla update jald hi .....

Bahut hi utam vakyo se ek aur naye avtaar me aa khadi hui rachna v prem parsango aur parivarik sukhmay palo se nihit ek aur nayi v vilkshan update mitr ki jaadui kalam se bahut hi khubsurat hai.