Fantasy ABHI -- THE WARRIOR (Completed)

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Update - 84

ab tak aapne dekha k Abhi Atal lok mein pravesh karta hai ...waha kisi bacche ki jaan bachata hai....uske diye hue phool ko Abhi aur GK dono sunghte hai toh unhe waha Asur dihkhayi dene lag jaata hai , aur unka unse yudh hota hai.....

ab aagee.........

Abhi k saamne jamin par woh asur aakhri sanse le raha tha , aur Abhi ne
uski jeevan leela ek zhatke mein samapt karne k liye jaise hi aakhiri prahar karne wala hota hai k ,

usse Shivali ki dur se aawaj aati hui sunayi dene lagi.....

Abhi waha ruk gaya ....ab usse kuch anarth hone ki aashanka hone lagi......
tab tak Shivali waha pahunch chuki thi......uske aankhon mein aansoo the

.......Parantu Abhi ko inn aansuo ka kaaran nazar nahi aaraha tha...........

Abhi - kya baat hai jaan tum aise achanak yudh k bich mein yaha , aur tumahari aankhon mein ywh aansoo kyu.......

Tabhi Shivali ne apne paas se ek shishi nikali aur usse 2 bund jamin par gira si.......uss taral padaryh ki sugandh waha phailne lagi........uss khushboo Abhi k naak mein jaate hi usse ek jhatka laga ....kyu k saamne jamin par ...koi asur nahi GK tha....jo tadap raha tha.......

GK ko aisi haalat mein dekhkar Abhi ko saari baat samaz mein aagayi........ki usse kitni badi bhool hogayi....

Abhi niche baithkar GK ka haath pakad leta hai......GK ko aisi halat mein dekhkar Abhi ki aankhon mein aansoo aur apne.liye krodh aajata ki .....k itni shaktiyo k hone k baad bhi woh iss maya ko samz hi nahi paaya......
Abhi k maaya ko na jaanne ka kaaran hai k yeh koi maya thi hi nahi.....woh bhediya ...jungle ....ghar sab asli the ....Aur sammohak ka roop bhi bacche ka tha.....

aur Samohak ne unpar maya ka nahi Vidveshan vidya ka prayog kiya tha........jiske prayog se shatru aapas mein hi ladne lag jaate hai......

Shivali bhi niche baith gayi .....GK ki aisi haalat dekhkar rone lagi ....GK uske pita saman hi tha ....aur woh usse chacha ji bhi kahti thi.....

Abhi - Utho mitra ....muzhe kshama kar do mitra .......jaane kaise mein apne hi mitra ko nahi pechan paaya .......mein tumhe kuch nahi hone dunga......mitra .....apni aankhien kholo.....

GK badi mushkil se apni aankhien khplolte hue.....
Ahhhhh .....miiii...trrrra......iss....mein tuuumahara koi dooosh nahi ...hai...ahhhhh......mein bhi toh
...tumpar asur samz kar hi prahar kaar raha tha......

Abhi - bas karo mitra mein tumhe kkkuch nahi hone dunga .....
aur apna haath GK k sir par rakhta hai .....aur apni urja laga deta hai .....lekin koi asar nahi.....ABHI bar bar prayatna karta hai lekin sab vyarth....

Shivali Abhi k kandhe par haath rakhti hai......

Abhi - dekho na jaan......tum kuch kati kyi nahi ....tum toh bahut si vidya jaanti ho......

GK - bas....mitra...yahi tak tha hamara saath...
ab ..mere vidayi ka vakt aagaya hai.....muzhe khushi hai k mere aakhri samay mein tumere sane ho...mitra.....ek vachan do ..
mwre putra ko .....apni sharan mein le lena.....

Abhi - Shivali mein kyu isse thik nahi kar paa raha hu..

Shivali - kyu ki Hum yaksha sukshma sharir dhari jeev hote hai.....sthool shsrir k ghav toh thik ho sakte hai lekin sukshma sharir k nahi.....

Tabhi GK ne apni aakhri saans li ....aur uska sharir dhua bankar samapt ho gaya...

Abhi dono haath jamin par rakhkar ronelaga........apne hi haaton se apne mitra ki mrityu ka apradh bodh usse khaye jaa raha tha....

Shivali - shant ho jaao jan .....iss aansar mein jeewan aur mrityu ka samay pahele se hi nirdharit pahele se hi nirdharit hoti hai ....apne aapko sambhalo jaan.......

Abhi - kaisw sambhalu ....maine issi haatho se apne uss mitra ki hatya kar di jisne humesha mera saath diya....mere mitra se jyada mera ....bhai tha woh ......Ab...aur ....nahi .......Nahi chaiye muzhe aur shakti ......

jitni mere paas hai ussise mein ab asuro ka naash kar dunga.......

Shivali - aaweg mein aakar koi kaam na karo .......yodha ek yogi k tarah hota hai.....jo....sabhi prakar k moh se rahit hokar kewal apna karm karta rahta hai.......

Tumahara yeh krodh yeh udvignata uchit nahi .....yeh tumahari shaktiya sokh lengi........

Abhi - Muhze aur kuch nahi sunna hai ....mein ab aur kisi ka jeewan sankat mein nahi dal sakta .....tum bhi chali jaao .....nahi toh ...kya pata ....yeh hatyara......tumpar bhi waar kar de.....

yahi toh KS chahta tha......Acche logo ki sabse badi kamjori hoti hai uska bhavna pradhan hona....inhi bhavnao bhavnaye k adhin hokar woh kamjor pad jaata hai.......

Shivali rokte rahti hai lekin Abhi ab kisi ki sunnane ko tayar nahi tha......usse iss baat ka sabse jayda krodh tha k Uske hi haatho KS ne uske mitra ki hatya karwayi gayi......

phir ussne Apna shakti trishool pragat koya aur Patal lok jaane k liye ek portal khola...

yaha Patal lok mein KS apne singhasan par baitha hua jor jor se has rha tha....

KS - ha...ha...ha.....Rakshak yeh toh abhi shuruwat hai.....tune mere putra ki hatya karke .......tumne iss yudh ki shuruwat kar di......ha..ha...ha....

Apne hi haatho apno hi hatya ....ha ha haa .....ab kya karoge ......

Bhayaksha - wah pitashri ...wah....aap apratim ho .....

KS - Abhi toh yeh meri shakti ka ek chota ansh bhi nahi tha ...toh Rakshak itna vichalit ho gaya.......
Chalo sab Rakshak k swagat ki tayari karte hai.......

Durukti - Yeh aap kya kah rahe ho ....jiss ne mere putra ki hatya ki thi aap uske swagat ki baat kar rahe ho .......

Markesh - Haa pitashri ....hum uss Rakshak ka swagat kyu karenge.....

KS apne sir par haath maarta hua ........yeh mere maalok Eblis aise murakh mere hi saath bandhne the .....

KS - arre murkho ...yadi kuch samaz na aaye toh chup raha karo.......aur paas rakhe madira k pyale ko ek ghut mein khali karte hue.......saara maza kharab kar diya....

Yaha Abhi Atal lok se teleport hokar sidha patal lok pahunch gaya tha........Aur KS kmahal k bahar Shakti trishool haath mein lekar Ks ko yudh k liye lalkarne laga......

Abhi - KS bahar aaja aaj hibiss yudh ka faisla ho jaayega ....ab aur koi nirapradh nahi maara jaaye ga......

Tabhi Saamne se KS aate hue ......

KS - Swagat hai Rakshak tumahara mere iss lok mein ......aao jara humko bhi atithi satkar ka awsar do .....

Abhi - Atithi toh ab tum ho KS ab is sansar mein ab tumahari vidayi ka samay aagaya ......aur apne shakti trishool se urja ka gola banakar KS ki taraf choda .....jisse KS ne badi aasani se kisi gend ki tarah pakad liya aur dur uchal kar phenk diya......

KS - shant Rakshak shant....aise chote mote waar toh mere liye kisi se khilone se jayda nahin hai......muzhe tumse kuch baat karni hai........phir yadi yudh karna chaho toh woh bhi kar lena......

Abhi ne apne agni shool se uspar gole barsate hue ......Baat aur tumse ...kabhi nahi ......aur apni 5 tatva ki sampuran urja ek karke KS par war kiya ....lekin woh war KS ko chute hi chur chur ho gaya......

Krodh aur dikh k aaweg k kaaran Abhi k saare chakra supt ho gaye the ....jisse abhi ki sakti ab aadhe se bhi kam rah gayi thi .......Saari patniyo se sampark tutne k kaaran unse milan se milne wali shaktiyan bhi shithil ho gayi thi

KS - Dekho tumhe chahu toh abhi pal bhar mein masal sakta hu lekin phir bhi ek awsar de raha hu...
meri taraf aajao .....hum dono milkar iss sampurna brahamand par shasan karenge aur banjaayenga iss shristi k naye Bhagwan ....

Abhi ne krod mein bharkar ....saari bachi hui urja ko ekatrit karke apni gada mein daldiya.....aur poori shakti lagakar KS par waar kar diya........KS ne apni shakti se uss wara ko wapas Abhi k hi raraf mod dya .......jo Abhi ko lagte .....woh dur jaakar gira...........

KS ne bahut dhunda lekin Abhi usse kahi nahi mila....

Jaise hi patal lok mein Abhi ko war laga ...yaha ghar par choda hua Abhi ka roop dhua bankar udgaya........

aur Abhi k charo patniyo ka sampark Abhi se tut gaya .....Sabhi badi pareshan ho gayi .....Shivali Abhi sw sampark sthapit karne ka bad prayatna kar rahi thi .... lekin Abhi ka koi pata nahi ......

Yaha Ghar par bhi ....Achanak Abhi k aise jaane se sab bahut chinta mein the.....RVS ne bahut khoj ki Abhi ko dhund ne ki lekin koi fayda nahi ..........

Rimpy ...apna dukh apnw bhiter chupaye kewal apne pita k liye jee rahi thi...
Saare dost bhi Abhi k aise achanak chale jaane se dukhi the.......

sirf Rinkush hi tha jo jaanta tha kAbhi ko kuch nahi hua hai woh surakshit hai.....Bas sharir mein dard hone ki waha se itna jaanta tha k Abhi is samay kahi ghayal awastha mein hai.....

Abhi ko gayab hue 15 din ho gaye the .....KS ne bhi vahut dhundne ki koshish ki lekin pata nahi kar paaya......Aisi awastha mein Kaha jaa saktavhai usse samaz nahai aaraha tha......

Phir socha sahayd kisi danav ya asur ka bhojan ban gaya hoga....

Yaha kissi mahal k ek gupt andhere kasksh jaha prakash k liye kewal ek mashal thi .......aur wahi ek unche sthan par Maa Durga ki ek pindi thi ...jiske aage ..ek akhand jyoti prajwalit ho rahi thi.........ussi kaksh k ek kone mein bister par... Abhi ..behosh pada tha ...uske sir ...aur haath...pairo...par ..patti bandi hui thi........wahi paas ek ladki ek pani k katore mein kapda dalkar nichodte hue Abhi k sharir ko ponch rahi thi aur ek tak Abhi k chehte ko dekhe jaarahi ..thi.....

Usse poora Vishwas tha k yeh yuvak thik ho jaayega.......

Abhi ko pyar se dekhte hue .....apne mann mein ....( hey maa Bhagwati jisse roz mere sapno mein bhejkar aapne mere mann mein prem ki jyot jalayi aaj , aaj wahi mere saamne iss awastha mein , kripa karo maa....inhe shigra hi swastha kar do .....)

aur phir niche hokar Abhi k maathe ko chumti hai...... aur Abhi k seene par air rakhkar let jaati hai uski aankhon se nikle kuch aansoo Abhi k chati ko bhigo rahe the .........

Tabhi Abhi k shari mein kuch hulchal si hone lagi ......uske haat pair hilne lage......

jab uss ladki ne yeh mehsus kiye toh woh bahut khush ho gayi jaise usse sabkuch prapt ho gaya ho .......woh kanya Abhi ko dhire dhire awaaj dene lagi.......

Jaise hi Abhi chillakar uthne wala hota hai woh kanya Abhi k muh ko apne haato se band karne lag jaati hai jsse Abhi chilla na paaye.........

Aur ne aise kisi k dwara apna muh band karte hue dekhkar usse khixch liya...aur uske upar aagaya ........

aur jab Abhi ne apni aankhien kholi toh dekha do badi badi khubsurat aankhien usse ghur rahi hai .. ...aur uske komal haath abhibk muh par the .....

Abhi ne uska haath apne muh se hataya...aur....jor se pucha ....kaun ho tum .....

Ladki ne usse dhire bolne ka ishara...kiya .......Arre kitna jor se chikte ho ...dhire bolo na warna Pitashri ya unke guptachar sun lenge....

Abhi - dhire se---- Thik hai ab batao kaun hai tumahare pitashri aur tum kaun ho ....mein yaha kaise ....sab sach sach batao .......

Abhi iss samay bhi usske uper tha ......

Ladki - pahele mere upar se toh utho ....baapre.....kitne bhari ho tum ...mein toh dab hi gayi.....

Abhi utar jaata hai....thik hai ab bolo......

Ladki - Mera naam Madalsa hai ...aur ..meinasuraj Kalasur ki sabse choti putri hu ......

Jaise hi KS ka naam suna toh Abhi ka krodh phir badne laga ...aur usse sab yaad aane laga ........

Abhi - Tum muzhe yaha kyu lekar aayi ho .......ho toh tum bhi ussiki beti ......jarur tumahare mann bhi bhi kuch chal raha hoga ......main tum jaise asuro ki nich soch ko jaan gaya hu...

Madalsa ko iss baat se bada aaghat laga .....ussne sab kuch Abhi ko bata diya k Ghayal awastha mein jab woh usse mila toh toh usne apne pita se bachane k liye mahal mein hi bane Madalsa k gupt pooja kaksha mein le aayi.....aur yaha uska upchar karne lagi ......

aur yeh bhi bata diya k kai varshobse woh roz Abhi ko swapna mein dekhti aayi hai .....ussne ...Abhi..ki raksha swarth vash nahi prem vaah mein ki hai .....

Madalsa - Aap ab yaha se chale jaaye...mein aapkw yaado k sahare rah lungi ....lekin aapko koi hak nahi hai mere prem ko apshabdh kahne ka ....aur rone lagi ......

Abhi ko bahut bura laga ....k ...jissne apne pita ki parwah na karte hue uake prano ki raksha ki ....usne aaweg mein uspar hi krodh kar diya .........

Shivali thik hi kahti hai Aaweg aur krodh vyakti ko aknjor bana deta hai

Abhi aage jaakar Madalsa k aansoo pochta hai ...aur haath jodkar kshama maangta hai........

Abhi - muzhe kshama kardob...Rajkumari....jisska muzhe dhnyawad dena chahiye mein usspar hi krodh kar baitha ....kshama kare....

Madalsa - aapko muzhse kshama maangne ki koi awayshykta nahi hai.....aapka muzhpar pura hak hai kyu ki ...main kitne barso se aapko hi apne sarwaswa maan chuki hu.....

Abhi - Dekho Madalsa muzhe abhi bahut se kaam karne hai......Abhi meintumahare prem ko sweekar nahi kar sakta.....parantu mein vachan seta hu k ek din mein jarur aaunga ....

Madalsa - Mein aapki pratiksha karungi.........

Abhi ki shaktiya ab lupt ho gayi thi ....isiliye ...ab woh teleport nahi ho paa raha tha.....

Abhi - Madalsa ...kya tum muzhe prithvi lok chod sakti ho ......

Madalsa maa durga ki murti k paas jaati hai Aur mas ka sindoor ek kapde mein taabij jaisa bandkar Abhi ki baaju mein baand deti hai.....

Madalsa - Yeh aa pko ek baar apne gantavya tak pahuncha dega .......

aur Abhi Madalsa se vida hokar waha se nikal jaata hai.......

Madalsa ki aankhon mein virah k aansoo bhi the ...aur aage honewale .milan ki aas...

abhi k liye itna hi .....
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[Naik]

Update - 85

ab tak aapne dekha ...k GK ki mrityu se aavesh mein aakar Abhi patal lok pahunchta hai.....aur waha KS k saath mukable mein buri tarah jakhmi ho jaata hai....
waha Madalsa usseka upchar karti hai .....

ab aage - .........

Patal lok se nikalkar Abhi pahunch jaata hai pritvi lok , Apne ghar .......

Jab Abhi gate par pahunchta hai , toh basement k control room mein baithe RVS aur Naina ....waha screen par Abhi ko dekhte hai.......

Abhi ko dekhte hi ....dono turant waha se nikalkar ....ghar k ander pahunchte hai....tab tak Abhi hall mein pahunch chuka tha .....

Naina daudkar apne bete ko gale laga leti hai........

maa k gale lagkar Abhi k aansoo nikal ne lage .......
phir naina Abhi k matthe ko chumti hai......

Naina - kaha tha beta itne din pata ...hai ....mera dil bahut ghabra raha tha......aisa lag raha tha.k ...jaise...koi...tuzhe muzhse bahut dur le.jaa.raha.hai.......

aur tu yeh ro kyu raha hai beta ...sab thik toh hai...na....

Abhi - maa woh itne din baad aapko dekha na ...isiliye thoda emotional ho....gaya......thoda muskurate ...hue......bas..maa ..aap toh jaanti ho ...mere ..kaamo..k baare mein toh mein bas wahi kuch kaamo mein ulaz gaya tha .........

RVS - Beta jaane kyu muzhe kuch alag baat lag rahi hai.....sab kuch thik hai na ......itne din se na koi pata na koi khabar ......

Abhi - sabkuch thik hai dad ....aap..chinta na kare .......
waise Di aur Addu .. kaisi hai , aur Deepu ...

Mom - Beta tum khud hi jaakar dwkh lo sono ne apni kya haalat bana rakhi hai......

phir main waha se Addu k room mein gaya .....toh deka meri Addu jo hamesha khili hui rahati thi woh aaj badi hi kamjor haalat mein leti hui hai aur uske hi bagal mein Di ek haath Addu k sir par rakhkar baite baithe hi so gayi hai..........dono bahut kamjor lag rahi thi ....unke khile hue chehre murzhaye hue the .....

dono ki aisi haalat dekhkar mere dil mein ek huk si uthi......

Tabhi Addu bhai ...bhai....kahkar ekdum se uthkar baith gayi ...aur muzhe samne dekhkar mere paas aane k liye khadi hone lagi...Adfu ki aawaj sukar di ki bhi aankhien khul gayi....

mein daudkar addu k paas gaya aur usse gale se laga liye ......

Addu ...bhai ...aap aagaye bhai .......kaha chale gaye the muzhe chodkar.....aur kas k muzhe pakd liya.......

main uske sir par haath pherte hue .......gudiya yeh kya haalat bana li hai tumne ...apni ...aur si aap ...bhi ...aapse aisi umeed nahi thi ......


baccha tumhe toh pata hai na ....muzhe kitne kaam hote hai ...main bahut dur gaya tha jaha network bhi nahi tha toh kaise contact karta .....aur iss baat k liye dono ne khana pina chod diya .....

Addu - woh Bhai aap ka itne din sw kuch bhi pata nahi chala ....uar Rimpy di ko bhi nahi pata tha aap kaha hai......hamara dil bhi bahut ghabra raha tha.......

bhai sapne mein maine dekha tha k aapko koi maar raha hai ........
isliye bhai....

Main -Nahi gudiya sapne toh sapne hi hote hai sach thode hi hote hai..
ab promise karo dubara kabhi aisa nahi karogi ...humesha apna khyal rakhogi ....

phir maine uske maathe par kiss ki aur Addu ne bhi mere gaalo par ......aur phir mwre gale lag gayi ...aise..k yasi chod degi toh phir main kahi chala jaaunga......

Ritu di - Bas saara pyar Addu k liye mein toh jaisw kuch hu hi nahi .......

Main - Di ko bhi gale lagate hue....di aap mere liye pahli guru ho ....muzhe yaad hai kaise ek maa ki tarah bachpan mein mere khyal rahti thi.........aisa mat kaho di k aap mere liye koi mayne nahi rakhti.....

Di -- Arre betu maintoh bas aisw hibkah rahi thi .......

aisw hi kuch der humari baatein hone lagi........tabhi deepu bhi aagagya tha ..woh bhi muzhe dekhkar khush hogaya.........

uske baad humne saath mein khanna khaya ........aur maine aadu ko rest karne ka bolkar ...apne room mein aagaya .......

Mobile toh pata nahi kaha tha toh maine land line se ....Rimpy ko call kiya ........

pahele 2 baar mein kisi ne call nahi uthayi ...phir teesre ring mein ..Rimpy k Dad Khemraj ji ne call uthaya......



Khemraj (Kj) - Hello kaun ......

main - Uncle mein ......Abhi.....

Kj - beta Abhi kaha tha itne din se .... ....kaha chala gaya tha......tu thik toh hai na......

main - woh Uncle kuch kaam se bahar gaya tha, Rimpy kaisi hai Uncle....

Kj - Accha ab samzha k Rimpy kuch din se udas kyu rahne lagi hai......lagta hai tum dono mein anban ho gayi hai.........

Mein - Nahi Uncle aisi koi baat nahi hai, ..kya aap meri Rimpy se baat kara sakte hai.....

Kj - haa ek min hold karna beta......

Thodi der baad ....muzhe aisa laga k Rimpy ne ph uthaya hai ....lekin woh kuch bol nahi rahi thi .....mein usski khamoshi bhi sun sakta tha.........

mein - jaan naraz ho ....kuch bolo gi nahi .....tabhi muzhe aisa laga jaise woh ro rahi hai....

mein - dekho jaan tumhe meri kasam hai agar royi toh .....

Rimpy - pahele toh dard khud dete ho aur kahte ho aansoo na bahao........aur call cut ho jaati hai....

mein pareshan hokar sochne laga ...kya karu kaise jaau Rimpy k paas .........mein turant uske paas pahunchna chahta tha...

kyu ki saare chakra supt honr k kaaran meri powers bhi supt ho gayi thi....

Tabhi mere door par knock hua ...jab maine door khola toh saamne Rinku tha ........

Rinku - aise kya dekh raha hai yaar ....aur muzhe kas kar ..gale lagate hue.......


Main - kaise hai tu yaar .....

Rinku - yeh toh muzhe puchna chahiye aur tu puch raha hai......jaanta hu inn dinno mein tuzh par kya beeti hogi......khair woh chod chal ...tuzhe kahi le jaana hai.....

aur woh mera haath pakadkar teleport ho gaya kisi ghar ki chat par......

main - abe yar tu ab teleport hona bhi sikh gaya .....

Rinku - bhai yeh sab teta hibtoh kamal hai bas ussko thoda dhar laga raha hu....

Jab maine dekha ywh toh Rimpy k ghar ki chat hai toh mein Rinku ki taraf dekhne laga k jaha meri patniya muzhse koi contact nahi kar paa rahi hai .wahi yeh hai k merw sil ka haal sb jaanta hai.....

shayad isiliye k meri aatma ka ek ansh ismein hai ....aur sahi kahte hai k apni aatma k siwa humara saccha saathi koi aur nahi .....

phir main niche chala gaya aur Rimpy k room k bahar pahunch gaya .....aur ....ander ...dekha toh Rimpy bed par baithi soch mein gum thi ......

Jaise hi main uske kamre mwin gaya ...woh aakar muzhse lipat gayi .....maine bhi usse kaskar bahoon mwin bhar liya itne dino ki judayi k dard ko mitane ki koshish karne lage.....

phir maine ek halka sa kiss uske honto par kiya....aur usse alag hote hue .....

mein - yeh sab kya hai jaan .....

Rimpy - sawal toh muzhe karna chahiye aur tum kar rahe ho

Mein - jirne sawal karna ho kar lena ...lekin lagta hai tumne apna khyal rakhna hi chod diya hai.....

Rimpy - Jab tum ho dur chale jaaoge toh kya karna hai khyal rakhkar.........woh toh dad k liye hi mein apne aapko sambhale hue thi.....

Kuch der shikwa shikayat chalti rahi ....phir mainw Rimpy ko saari baat bata di.......

Rimpy - ohhh itna kuch ho gaya .....aap ne aisa kyu kiya agar aapko kuch ho jaata toh ...aapne yeh nahi socha ki yadi KS ko maarna itna aasan hota toh aapko itni shaktoya prapt karne ki jarurat hi kya thi .......

koi bhi kaam samay se pahele karne mein haani hi hoti hai.............

kuch der Rimpy se baat karne k baad mein Rinku k saath wapas ghar aagaya.......

Rinku k jaane k baad mein .....kuch der chat par tahla ...... suraya astha ho raha tha ....... sab panchi apne ghosle mwin laut rahe the.....

ab maine bhi faisla le liya apne karmpath par wapas lautne ka ....phir mein fresh hokar chat par ek aasan bichakar Padmasa mein dhyan laga kar baitj gaya .....pahele tohdi kathinayi hui ...lekin phir aum k naad ko bhiter sunne ka prayas karne laga ......aur dhyan karne laga .......dhire dhire chakro ki urja dikhayi dene lagi ......

Aise hi mein apne daily routine karne k saath saath mein saara samay dhyan hi karta tha ....aise hi 4 din aur bite tab tak mere saare chakra jaagrit hogaye the ,

aur 5 ve din dhyan mein gahan utarne k baad shushmana nadi par lipti hui kundalini shakti chamak uthi aur sab chakro ka bhedan kar k wapas apne sthan par aagayi ....

Tabhi mere bhiter se 5 Abhi alag alag roop mein bahar nikle

ek yaksha roop mein tha .....ek tha A1........ek Naag roop mein tha .......
ek pret roop mein tha , aur ek Rakesh k roop mein....phir mere yeh saare roop mere bhitar sama gaye .....aur meri saari khoyi hui shaktiya wapas aagayi .....Rakesh ko apne saamne dekhkar muzhe badi khushi hui .....

kuch Readers sochenge k itna kuch hogaya aur Rakesh ab tak kaha gaya tha .....toh Rakeah hero ki maarak shakti hai ...isiliye bina aawahan k woh pragat nahi ho sakta ........


Tabhi room mein Shalu ...Shivali....Sulekha aur Bhadra pragat hui ......
aur Abhi ko wapas pahele roop mein dekhkar badi khush .thii.........kuch ruthna manana chala ......Shivali lekin abhi bhi ghusse mein thi

Abhi - kya baat hai jaan Abhi bhi naraj ho ....

Shivali - maine aapko pahele hi aagah kiya tha ....lekin aapne toh meri koi baat suni hi nahi thi...

phir maine apni yatra jaha chodi thi wahi se shuru karne ka vichar banaya .......aur apne do roop ek sangharak aur ek Ghar par chodkar ...Abhi phir nikal gaya ....

iss safar mein abhi k saath tha Rinku.......Rakesh ko ghar aur nagar ki jimmedari dekar Abhi chala gaya .......

Yaha Atal lok mein Asuro ka aatank bahut bad gaya tha ....asuro ki sahyata se kaale bhediyo ne safed bhediya ko harakar bhaga diya tha ...jo jungle mein bhesh badalkar jeewan guzarne par vivash the....

Abhi jab portal khol kar Atal lok pahuncha toh phir woh ussi jungal pahunch gaya......jaha usne apne param mitra GK ko khoya tha ....

Ab Abhi poori tarah satark tha ......uss van ko paar karke Abhi Atal lok k vishal nagar k samip pahunch gaya...nagar se bahar ek zhadiyo se bhara ek uncha sa tila tha jaha khade hokar Abhi nagar ko dekh raha tha .....

Bade bade shikhar uss nagar k shobha bada rahe the.......Abhi uss nagar ko gaur se dekh hi raha tha k .

.......Tabhi Abhi k saamne dhadam se ek bada sa kaala bhediya aakar gira .......
usse koi teer laga tha ....jisse khun baha rah tha.....Abhi ne Saamne dekha toh....

aaj k liye itna hi .......
agla update kal .........

Bahot shaandaar mazedaar update dost

 

[Abbasi]

Very nice, fantastic, awesome, fabulous amazing update ..............
keep it up bro ................
Waiting for next update ..............

 

[Naik]

Update - 86

Ab tak aapne dekha Abhi ne apna safar wahi se shuru kiya jaha se choda tha.....

Abhi waha k nagar ko ek tile se dekha raha tha k ek Bhediya uske aage aakar gira

ab aage......

Abhi ne dekha saamne koi nakab pahane shiikari ladki (SL) kahdi hai....
Jo Abhi ko ghur ghut kar dekh rahi thi......

SL - yeh kaun ho tum aur yaha zhadiyon mein chupkar kya kar rahe ho..........kahi koi chor toh nahi jo nagar mein pravwesh karnebki soch rahe ho........

Abhi - haa mein ek chor hi hu ,...ab bolo kya kar logi ....

SL apne teer us mare hue bhediye k sharir se khinch te hue....

SL - Achha chor ho tabhi yaha se chup chup kar nagar ko dekh rahe the....... ....lekin aisa sochna bhi mat ......haa yadi marne ka shauk chada ho toh jaa sakte ho......

aur woh palatkar jaane lagi.........

Abhi - yeh ladki ruko toh .....aur uske piche piche chalne lagta hai...........waise tum kaha rahti ho ......lagata hai koi shikari ho tabhitoh uaa bhesiye ko aise hi maar diya......

SL - tumhe usse kya .......waise apne pran bachane ka ashikar sabko hai .......woh muzhe maarne wala tha toh maine usse maar diya ......waise tum mera piccha kyu kar rahe ho ........

Abhi - Mein koi piccha nahi kar raha.......main yaha ajnabi hu .....muzhw pata nahi lag raha hai kaha jaau......kya tum meri madat kar sakti ho .....

SL - Nahi ........tum jitne jaldi ho sake yaha....se chale jaao .....

Abhi - tum bhi toh kahi rahti hogi ......wahi kuch aashray mil jaata toh .......
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SL - Main yaha paas hi kabile mein rahti hu .....lekin ...tum waha nahi jaa sakte........

Abhi - lekin kyu .......

SL - kyu ki waha koi bhi insan prevesh nahi kar sakta........

Abhi - kyu tum insan nahi ho ....

SL - ghurke usski taraf dekhte hue aage badh jaati hai........

aur ek asadharan speed mein waha se nikal jaati hai......

aur jab rukti hai toh Abhi ko apne saamne paati hai .....tum insan hokar itni tezi se kaise daud sakte hai ........

Abhi - Woh sab choda ....mein jaanta hu k tum koi insan nahin .
bhediya manav ho ......muzhe bas apne stan tak le jaao ho sakta hai mein tahari kuch madat kar saku..........

SL - Madat toh baad mein karoge ...pahele yeh toh batao k kyu apne praan ...sankat mein dalkar humari madat karna chahte ho.....

Mann mein ( jaane kaun hai ...isse dekhkar kyu aisa lag raha hai koi janam janam ka naata hai )
Lekin aise mere saath kaise chaloge

.....kisi anjan ko waha pravesh mana hai .....

Abhi - Accha toh yeh baat hai....toh Abhi apne pret roop mein aajata hai .........

Abhi ko aise pret roop dharan karte hue dekhkar woh hairan ho gayi....

SL - sach sach batao kaun ho tum ......kahi tum wohi toh nahi ...jiske baare main maine suna hai pret lok ko kisi ne asuro se mukt kar diya hai.....Haa....Rakshak

Abhi - haa mein wahi ...hu

Abhi k muh se itna sunte hi uakw chehre par ek alag hi chamak aagayi ......usse ek aasha ki kiran dikhayi dene lagi ......

aur phir woh Thodi hi der mein Abhi ko lekar apne kabile pahunch gayi........chalte chalte usne apna naam DAKSHA bataya .......

Yeh dekhne mein toh koi aadiwasio ka kabila lag raha tha lekin Abhi jaanta tha .....yeh koi Adiwasi nahi sab bhediya manav hai.....

Abhi is samay pret roop mein tha jo kisi saaye ki tarah thi.

SL - yeh raha hamara kabila ......aur woh rahi mere baba iss kabile k sardar ki kutiya ......
aur chali jaati hai.....

Abhi us kutiya k ander jaata hai toh waha dekata hai k lakdi k ek aasan par koi baitha hai jissne kisi kabile k sardar jaise kapde pahne hue hai.......yeh tha Atal lok ka Raja AAHUK (AK)

Abhi pret Roop mein tha isilye kewal ek mashal se prakashit uss kutiya mein dikhayi nahi de raha tha......

Abhi - Atal lok k Raja ko mera pranam.....

AK - kaun ho tum .......aut kaise muzhe jaante ho ........lagta hai tum Daruk k hi koi bheje hue ho ....saamne aao ......

Abhi - Chupkar yoh aap rah rahe ho ....apne rajya aur apne kartvya ko tyag kar.......ek Raja ko yeh shobha nahi deta ..........aur Abhi Apne vastavik roop ko usske aage pragat kar deta hai .......

Jaise hi AK Abhi ko apne saamne dekhta hai ........toh usski aankhon mein ek alag chamak aa jaati hai .......Rakshak ...aap......lekin maine toh suna tha aap KS k haatho maare gaye........
lekin mwin jaanta tha trilok ki koi shakti aapka ahit nahi kar sakti hai........

Abhi - Aap muzhe kaise jaante hai .......

AK - Dwaper yug k ant mein aap hamare lok mein aaye the ........aur aapne yaha apna vishesh Dhanush mere sangrakshan mein choda tha ...
aayiye baithiye .......

Aur Abhi usske paas k ek aasan par baith jaata hai.........

Abhi - Muzhe toh iss samay kuch yaad nahi ......accha woh Dhanuah ab kaha hai......

AK - usse maine mahal k paschimi bhag mwin wk sarower mein chipaya hai......

Abhi - aap apna Rajya chodkar yaha kaise aaye ......aur iss tarah chupkar kyu rah rahe ho ......

AK - iski shuruwat bahut pahelw ho gayi thi .....
jab muzhe iss lok ka karya saunpa gaya tha .....toh mera chota bhai Daruk mere saath hi tha ....hum dono bhai mein bahut prem tha ......lekin humare vicharo mwin bahut matbhed the ......woh humesha hinsa dwara apna varchaswa sthapit karne k pakah mein tha ......

usse shaktiya prapt karne ka ek junun se tha ........isilye woh chupkar kaali shakti ki upasna karta tha ........

jab iss baat ka pata humare pita ko laga toh uhone usse rajya se bahar kar diya ........lekin maa k kahne par issi lok mein usse ek alag rajya sthapit kar diya ....yahi putra moh mein kiya gaya unke jeewan ...ka sabse galat nirnaya tha ......ek ..din usne dhoke se mata pita ko apne rajya mein bulaya aur unki hatya kar di ......... ............

uske baad Daruk ne asuro se sandhi kar li aur unki sahyata sw muzhe harakar Rajya par kabja kar liya .......woh hamare logo ki nirmam hatya karne laga .......toh usse bachkar hi hum yaha uss jagah aagaye ....yeh iss lok k ban devta ka shtan hai ....yaha koi bhi kali shakti prawesh nahi kar sakti .......

Tabhi waha Daksha aajati hai .....

AK - yeh hai meri beti Daksha .....

Abhi - mein isse mil chuka hu ....yehi toh muzhe yaha tak laayi hai.....
waise badi bahadur hai ......maine dekha hai kaise ek hi teer se ek vishal kaale bhediye ko maar giraya....

thodi der aise hi baatein hoti rahi .....phir kis tarah Daruk aur Asuro se Atal lok ko mukt karna hai iss par vichar hone laga......

AK dwara Abhi ko pata chala k Iss lok ki saari urja Atal mani mein hai usse apni kaali shakyio dwara Daruk nw apne vash mein kar rakha hai......

jab tak woh mani uske paas hai woh jab cahe iss aampurna lok mein vinash faila sakta hai.....

Aur daruk ka vadh ussi dhanush se ho sakta hai jo ....Waha k sarower mein AK ne chupaya hai , usska marg mahal se hi hokar jaata hai........

Atal mani ki shaktiyo se usne apne rajya ki seema bandh rakhi hai .....koi bhi bina usski aagya se waha pravesh nahi kar sakta .......

AK ne bataya k jab tak uske paas woh mani hai tab tak sidhe usspar aakraman bhi nahi kar sakte.........

Saari baaton par vichar karke Abhi ne gupt roop se hi apne karya ko anjam dene ka socha ........

pahele toh Abhi ne apne Shakti trishool se uss kabile par aisa kawach bana diya jisse koi bhi sakti bhed nahi sakti .......phir usne ......Apni charo patniyo ko Rakesh aur Rinku ko waha bulaya.....

Sab se milkar poori sthiti k anusar yudh niti par vichar hone laga.....

Bhadra k milan se mili shaki k kaaran Abhi ko koi kaali shakti ki deewar pravesh karne se nahi rok sakti thi.....lekin Atal mani k kaaran Daruk satark ho jaayega iss kaaran woh vichar chod diya ....

KS k saath Abhi k yudh k baad uske gayab hone k kaaran Sabhi Asur Rakshak ko mara hua samazhkar aaswast the ....isiliye Atal lok mein koi vishesh asur ki niyukti nahi hui thi.....

Vichar k baad yeh tay hua k Abhi aur Sulekha apne naag roop se Dahrti k niche se uss sarower tak pahunchenge ...aur Dhanush prapt karenge........

aur kisi tarah mani tak pahunckar usse apne adikar mein le lenge .......

Tab tak AK ....Shivali....Shalu .....Bhadra....Rakesh ...aur Rinku apni apni tukdiyo k saath Nagar ko caharo taraf se gher lenge ......

aur Jaise hi Abhi ka ishara milega sab ek saath aakrman kar denge.....

Raat mein kaali shaktiyan adhik chetan aur balwan hoti hai issiliye ..subah se hi iss yojna par karya aarambh karne ka nirnay hua .....

raat mein vishraam k liye sabka alag alag kutiya mein prabandh kar diya gaya ....

yaha Abhi ki kutiya mein charo patniya thi ........

Rinku - Accha dost best of luck raat k liye

Abhi - arre bhai raat k liye best of luck kyu....

Rinku muskurate hue .....Accha meri bhabiyon gud night.....bole toh shubh raatri.....
aur chala gaya

Abhi samaz gaya k yeh bfl kis liiye tha....

Abhi ander aakar baith jaata hai ......

Shivali - hmmmm toh bada nain mataka chal raha tha kya baat hai....

Abhi - nahi toh main toh tum sabko hi dekh raha tha ......

Shalu - Accha ji jaise k humme pata hi nahi .....Woh ladki kya naam hai uaska....

Sulekha - Daksha yahi naam hai na ..kaise ghur ghur kar dekh rahi thi tumhe ......mann kar taha tha k uski aankhon mein hi das lu.....

Abhi - Sulekha ko apni baahon mein khinchte hue ....Das toh tum mere dil ko chuki ho meri naagin......mein toh bas aise hi .....

Bhadra - kya aise hi ....milan k samay bade bade vaade humse ...aur nain..mattaka ..kisi aur se.....

Abhi Bhadra ko bhi apni aur khinchta hai aur paas bitha leta hai ....
ab Abhi k ek aur Sulekha aur dusri aur Bhadra ..aur dono haath dono k gale mein

Tabhi Shalu Shivali se ..dekho na didi ....hum toh jaise kuch hai hi nahi.....

Abhi arre meri jaan tum meri goad mein baith jaao......

Shivali - aur mein ....kaha baithu......baat ko ghumao mat ......Pahele batao yeh Daksha ka kya chakkar hai......

Abhi - mann mein ( hey bhagwan ...ab tu hi baccha ..)

Shivali - Kaam khud karte ho aur bhagwan ko bachane k liye kahte ho....

Abhi - tum toh sab kuch jaanti ho jaan ...meri agli shakti ki srot hai Daksha.....
aur burra sa muh banakr chup chap baith jaata hai....

Shalu - ale ale....ale...dekho toh hamare bhole sajan rooth gaye....aur Sulekha aur Shalu jor se Abhi k dono gaal khinchte hue ....arre mera babu shona ...pareshan ho gaya......

Aur charo patniya hasne lagti hai ......Abhi ko pata tha ..k yeh sab uski khichayi kar rahi hai....aur abhi bhi isska maza utha raha tha....

Shivali - Dekha jaan tum toh itne se pareshan ho gaye ...kabhi humara socha hai k kite kitne dino tak hum toh tumse mil nahi paate.....

Abhi Khada hokar Shivali k paas jaata hai aur usse gale lagata hai......Muzhe apni galti ka ahsaa hai jaan .....

phir aisi hi woh raat charo k saath kuch khatti meethi baat aur pyar mein bith gayai ......

Subah 4 baje sb apni apni yojana k anusar badh chale apni manzhi ki or.......

Abhi aur Sulekha AK k batayi hui ek surang mein Naag roop mein pravesh karte hai......thodi hi dur jaakar........

Abhi k liye itna hi ...
Agla update ...raat ko.....

Excellent update brother great going
Thanks for lovely update

 

[Naik]

Update - 87

ab tak aapne dekha Abhi ne Atal lok k Raja Aahuk se milkar lok ko asuro se mukt karne ki yojana banayi.........
Abhi Sulekha k saath naag bankar Apne Divya dhanush ko prapt larne nikal gaya......

ab aage .......

Abhi aur Sulekha dono uss surang se aage badh hi rahe the ....k aage do raste mile ....jis mein se ek raasta unke manjil k paas pahunchta tha.....

dono meinse kis marg par badhe ....tab abhi ka dhyan ek raaste k i geeli mitthi par gaya .....vichar aaya k ho na ho yeh rasta kisi jal srot tak jaata hai

.......jaise jaise woh aage bade surang aur sankri hoti gayi ek samay aisa aaya k aage surang band mili ....sirf ek chotti si jal ki dar kisi srot se aarahi thi.....

Dono apna roop chota karke uss jal srot mein pravesh kar gaye aur jaakar nikale nagar k pichle bhag mein bahne wali nadi tak .......jaha se nagar mein jal aapurti k liye jagah jagah naher nikalti thi .....

Abhi suryoday hone hi wala tha ....aur ...brahma muhurat yani subah 4 se 6 tak koi bhi negetive energy ka jor bahut kam hota hai isiliye yogi ussi samy ko dhyan k liye prayog karte hai....

Abhi sulekha issi awsar ka labh uthakar ussi nahar k sahare nagar k bhiter aage badne lage.......ab dono nagar k bhiter praveah kar gaye the .......ab bas unhe janna tha ki sarover kaha hai.......

nahar mein bahte hue dono mahal k phiche bagiche tak pahunch gaye.......aakash mein .Surya ki laalima nazar aane lagi thi.....

AK se unhe pata chala tha .....mahal k pichle bagiche se hi sarover tak rasta jaata hai.......

yaha Abhi kisi bhi maya ka prayog nahi kar sakta tha.....

Abhi unhe jald hi yaha se aage badna tha....Abhi Sulekha ko lekar Sarover ki disha mein teleport ho gaya aur

Sarover k saamne ek bagiche mein pragat ho gaya .....

yaha Daruk ko Atal mani ne sanket de diya k koi bahari 2 sarp paschim disha mein sthit sarover k nikat ghus aaya hai .....woh iss samay aadi nind mein tha ...isiliye usne iss baat par jyada dhyan nahi diya ..... socha k sarp hi toh hai .....unse usse kaisa bhay ... ...

Daruk ko yaha chipaye divya dhanush k baare mein nahi pata tha ......isiliye usne iss baat par jayada dhyan nahi diya ........

Yaha Abhi aur Sulekha dono sarover k paas pahunh gaye........Subah ki kiran Sarover par pad rahi thi ....aur usmein kamal khil rahe the........

Jaise hi Abhi ne uas sarover k jal ka sparsh kiya uske jal mein ek bhuchal aa aagaya ......jiske aawaj thode hi dur par pahra de rahe sainiko tak pahunch gayi.......

aur woh uss sarover k nikat aagaye .......Sarover ka jal gol gol ghumne laga yahi sanket tha Dhanush tak pahunchne ka ......Abhi aur Sulekha dono apne roop mein aagaye the....

Abhi ko shighra Dhanush prapt karna tha ...toh woh uas sarover mein pravesh kar gaya , Jisse dekhkar saink aage aaye ...toh Sulekha bhi apni talwar lekar unka aaamna karne sajj ho gayi...

Sulekha ko charo taraf se sainiko ne gher liya ....4 sainiko ne ek saath uspar waar kiya ...toh sulekha phurti dikhate gol ghumte hue hawa mein uchal gayi aur charo aapas mein takra kar gir gaye .....itne der mein Sulekha ne .....piche kahde sainiko mein se do ko upar pahuncha diya .....tab tak charo sambhal gaye....aur aage bade toh sulekha ....ne do k war ko block kiya aur baki do uchalkar jor dar kick jabde par maari ....jisse unka jabda tut gaya .....ab woh talwar sidhi kark chakra k saman gol ghumne lagi jisse pal bhar mein hi do sainik dharashayi ho gaye .....Sulekha ne dekha ki ab waha koi sainik nahi hai....toh woh sarover ki taraf mud gayi .......

tabhi usse piche se ghurane ki awaaj aayi ....woh phir palti ...toh dekha do bade se kaale bhediyo ne uspar chalang laga di .......abhi woh Sulekha tak pahunchte k do teer aakar unhe lage ....jisse do k sharir jalkar gir gaye......

Jab Sulekha ne piche dekha toh Waha Abhi Divya Dhanudh k saath khada tha......


Ab tak Daruk ko yaha honewali sthiti ka pata chal chuka tha......Woh Atal mani ke dwara vinaah phaine ki kriya shuru kar chuka tha ......

Abhi turant Sulekaha ko lekar Mahal k raja k kaksh mein teleport hogaya........

uss kash mein koi nahi tha ......Abhi ko shighra Atal mani tak pahunchna tha toh usne pret roop dharan kar liye jo har tarah ki kaali shaktiyo pahchankar ko bhed sakta tha......pret roop mein Abhi ko Uss kaksh ke niche ek tahkhane ka aabhas hua ......

Toh Abhi jamin se pravesh karke sidha waha pahunvh gaya ....Yaha jab Sainiko ko Sanket mil chuka tha toh woh uss kaksh tak pahunchne lage ......

aur Sulekha akeli unka mukabla karne lagi , jaise sakshat ranchandi hi dusto ka sanghar kar rahi ho ......

Yaha Daruk ki kriya poori ho chuki thi isske pahle woh mani tak pahunchta Abhi ne woh mani utha liya aur ek jordar kick uske seene par maari ......
jisse woh dur jaakar gira ...Apne haato se mani nikal jaane k kaarn woh bahut krodh mein aagaya ......

Daruk - kuan ho tum ....aur tumahari himmat kaise hui yaha tak pahunchne ki .....bhale hi mani tumne le liya ho ....lekin ab tum mera haatho se nahi bach sakte ......

Aur woh bhayankar bhediya manav k roop mein aagaya.........
aur ussne apni speed k prayog kar ke Abhi par apne panjo sw war karne laga ......lekin Abhi k divya kawach k kaaran usska ek bhi waar abhi ka kuch nahi bigad paaya ....

isse uska krodh aur badne laga ...aur woh urja gole se uspar prahar karne laga ......Abhi ne apne agni shool se waar kiya lekin woh Daruk ka kuch bhi nahi bigad paaya.....

Dono ek dusre par waar kar rahe the lekin dono k waar k asar ek dusre par nahi ho raha tha.....

Yaha Sulekha akeli aarahe sainiko ka saamna kar rahi thi .....unn bhediya manavo k rakt se woh jagah laa ho gayi thi ....... sainik bhi ab apne bhediya roop mein aagaye the ......

Iss samay 100 k lagbhag bhediya manv Sulekha ko ghere the......

Abhi Sulekha saamne walo par waar karne badi hi thi k piche se ek bhediye ne uski taraf chalang laga di........

aur ek jordar panja Sulekha k pith par laga ......isse Sulekha ka krodh charam par badh gaya .....aur woh ab vishal naagin k roop mein aagayi.....

Naaglok ki Rani hone k kaaran uske andar naagmani ki urja sakriya ho gayi.....aur woh ab ek ..ek karke bhediyo ko nigalne lagi.......bhediyo mein bagdad mach gayi....

Yaha Abhi ko AK ki baat yaad aayi k Divya dhanush se hi Daruk ka vadh ho sakta hai .....toh ussne Divya dhanush ko pragat kiya aur uski pratyancha khichi ...toh uspar ek jalta hua teer pragat hua ....

Abhi ne Daruk par woh teer choda ...jiske lagte hi .....woh wahi ...jalkar rakh ho gaya ....uske jalte hi Atal mani kaali shatiyo se mukt hogaya .....Abhi ne Agi ban aakash mein chodkar sanket diya .....jisse Shivali aur baakiyo ne ek saath humla kar diya ....

Daruk toh mar chuka tha ....lekin abhi uske sainik aur asur baaki the .......

Abhi tahkhane se nikal kar jab bahr aaya toh Sulekha k vishal naagin roop ko dekha .......woh manav bhediyo mein badle hue sainko ka kaal ban gayi thi .......

Usse dar k waha se saare sainik nagar ki aur bhage waha unka swagat ...Ak aur uski sena ne kiya .......Sulekha ne pahli baar yeh roop dhara tha .....isiliye woh apne aape se bahr ho gayi .....

Iss roop mein Sulekha krodh aur vish ki adhikta k kaaran apne hosh mein nahi thi .....woh apne saamne jo bhi aaye bas usse nigal lena chahti thi.....

Abhi usse wapas laane k liye pukar ne laga ....lekin jaise woh sun hi nahi rahi thi........Abhi uske saamne jaakar usse shant karne laga .......

Sulekha ne jab Abhi ko dekha toh woh usse bhi nigalne ko aage badi ........Abhi ne uski aankhon mein dekhkar poore pyar se aur dil ki gahrayi se pukara ......Shant ho jaao Sulekha ........tab Sulekha apne vastavik roop mein aagayi.......

adhik urja k prayog k kaaran woh behosh ho gayi ....Abhi ne usse apni baahon mein tham liya ....

Abhi Sulekha ko lekar mahal se bahar aane laga ....tabhi Shivali Apni tukdi k saath mahal pahunch gayi......

Shivali - Sulekha .....aap chinta na karo thik ho jaayegi yeh ....mein isse dekhti hu aap bahar sambhalo ......

Yaha nagar mein danavo ek bahut bada bhawan tha jab unhe humle ka pata chal toh woh bhi maidan mein aagaye .....Rinku Sahlu ki tudki danav mahal tak pahunch chuki thi .......

Shalu dono haatho mein talwar lekar lad rahi thi uaki talwar se saptrangi urja nikal rahi thi ......
jo jis bhi danav ko lagti woh wahi dher ho jaata .......iss baat ko danav bhi jaan gaye toh woh aage dhal karke Shalu se ladne lage ....Ab shalu nunja technique ...filp ...back filp jump aadi ka prayog karke pahele toh unke haatho par war kare dhal girati phir talwar ki war se unhe yamlok pahuncha rahi thi ......

Rinku toh bas iss adbhut talwar baaji ko dekh raha tha.....tabhi usne dekha k ek deewar k picche koi 4 k lag bhag danav Shalu par chipkar war karne wale the .........

toh Rinku bhi chupte hue unke piche pahuncha .....aur jor se ek k pith par maarte hue .....bola .....Dhaapa......aur woh danav muh k bal gir gaya....baki teen Rinku ko ghur k dekhne lage .....

Rinku bhi daant dikhakar haste hue .....arre bahi chupan chupayi khel rahe the ......yeh bhai toh out ho gaya....ab mein chupunga ...tum dhundo......

iss samau aisi be sirpair ki baate sunkar danav apna sir khujane lage .

....Tabhi Rinku ne ek k kaskar gaal par chanta maara ....saala mein yaha bor ho raha hu aur tum sir khuja rahe ho ....aur bhaga .....danav bhi uske piche bhage .......

3 danav picche lage the k tabhi 6 danav aahe bhi aagaye.....aur Rinki dhadam se takaraya jisse do niche gir gaye .....

Rinku - sorry bhaiyo lagi toh nahi .....(ab uske saamne 9 danav the ) accha chalo chupan chupayi cancle ab kabaddi khelte hai ......

Aur Woh unke sath sach mein kabbadi khelne laga .....lekin saath mein unki garden bhi todne laga.......

Yaha Abhi Apne dhanush se Kaale bhediya manavo ka sanghaar kar raha tha........

Daksha apne pita ka saath de rahi thi aur bade bahaduri k saath mukabla kar rahi thi .....

Bhadra Pret roop mein Danavo k Bhiter pravesh kar k unhe fadkar nikal rahi thi.....

Rakesh apne sher roop mein bhediyo aur danavo ka kasl bana hua tha ....jo bhi uske saamne aata woh uske panje ya jabde ka shikar ho jaata......

Ussi samay Danavo k liye banaya bawan bharbhara kar gir jaat hai aur ussmein se pragay hota hai ek vishalkaye Danav aur kaale bhediya manv ki urja ko milakar banaya hua ek daitya.....

Jo pragaht hote hi bhayankar garjana karne laga ........

Rakseh uske saamne aagaya.........iss samay Rakesh uss daitya k saamne aisa lagraha tha jaise ...vishalkaye haathi k aage ek chota sa hiran ka baccha......

Rakesh usski aur bada toh ussne Rakesh ko uthakar jor se dur phenk diya ........jisse usse kuch chote aayi ........

Tab tak Sulekha normal ho gayi thi .....isiliye Shivali Ab bahar aagayi thi ...tabhi usne dekha k ek vishal daitya ek ghar ko uthakar ghayal Rakesh par waar karne wala hai toh Shivali ne apni urja ka jordar prahar usske haath par kiya jisse uske haat sr woh ghar tutkar niche gir gaya ...ab daitya ka dhyan Shivali par gaya......aur shivali apni urja k prahar se usse ladne lagi.....

Aur saath saath hi apni vidya ka prayog karke Rakesh ko surakshit sthan par pahuncha diya.......

Ab tak uss nagar k saare kaale bhediye maare jaa chuke the Aur danav bhi maare jaa chuke the ....jo thode bahut bach gaye the woh chipkar uss daitya ki ladai dekh rahe the aur usski jeet ka intejar kar rahe the....

Ussi samay Abhi...AK....Rinku .....Shalu....Bhadra....Daksha.....sabhi waha pahunche ...jaha Shivali uss maha daitya k saath ladh rahi thi ......

Abhi ab uss daitya k saamne aaya .....aur Shivali ko piche kiya ........
Abhi haath mein gada lekar usspat waar karne laga......Tabhi AK ne Abhi ko Atal mani ka pravog karne ko kaha ......

Toh Abhi ne turant woh mani nikalkar iss tarah pakda ko surya ki roshni usse takarakar uss maha daitya par pade......Jaise hi iss tarah surya ki roshni uss maha daitya ko lagai woh wahi jalkar samapt ho gaya......

Ab yudh khatam ho gaya tha...aur Atal lok ka rajya wapas AAHUK k paas aagaya tha........

Rakesh ko Shivali ne heal kar diya.......
Shalu ko kuch kharoche toh aayi thi lekin usske ander vish hone k kaaran bhediye ka vish uska kuch nahi kar saka ......

Abhi ne sabke Saath milkar .....AK ka rajyaabhishek kiya .....

AK - Aap sab ka bahut bahut dhanyawad ....aaj aapke hi kaaran iss rajya ki khushiya laut aayi hai.......

Abhi - Maharaj issmein dhnyawad ki kya baat hai yeh toh humara kartavya tha.......

AK - Phir bhi Rakshak hum aapko kuch dena chahte hai ....yadi issmein aspki patniyo ki marzi ho toh.......

Apne pita k muh se yeh baat sunkar Daksha samaz gayi .....pahele toh woh sarma gayi ....phir kahi Abhi ki patniya mana na kar de issi aashanka k saath unki taraf dekhne lagi ........jisse drkh Shivali samaz gayi......

Shivali usske paas gayi aur apne haath se usska chehra utahakar ....waise dikhti toh thik thak hi hai hume manzoor hai.......

Daksha badi masumiyat k saath Shivali k taraf dekhti hai ...aur Shivali usko apne gale kaga leti hai.........

Atal lok ki riti riwajo se Abhi ka vivah Daksha k saath hua .......

Suhagrat ki raat .....

Abhi - tum khush toh ho na .........

Daksha - hmmm

Abhi - Lekin muzhe toh aisa nahi lagta.....tumne ek baar bhi apna prem pragat nahi kiya .....lagta hai .....tum muzhse prem nahi karti.....

Daksha ab bhi chup baithi bas Abhi ko dekhti hai......

Abhi - Thik hai toh phir jab prem hi nahi hai toh milan kaise hoga tum soo jaao mein chala bahar ...aur bed se uth gaya......k Daksha ne Abhi ka haath pakad liya jab Abhi ne mudkar dekha toh jaise Daksha k aasnsoo nikalne wale the ......
Abhi turant baith jaata hai aur usske aansoo ponchta hai ...

Abhi- Arre arre mein toh bas tohda mazak kar raha tha .....aur kaan pakadte hue maaf kar do muzhe.......

Daksha - aapne toh meri jaan hi nikal di thi...aur kahte ho ki maazak tha......

Abhi be usse baho mein bhar liya aur usske honthon ka chumban liya .....dono ek dusre k pyar mein gahra utarte chale gaye ......Aur pyar aur milan ki aas unhe apne charam par le aayi ...aur dono ek dusre mein kho gaye.......

Abhi ko iss milan se prapt hui Healing power..... dur shravan.....Aur takat ...jisse Abhi ki rakat ab dugni ho gayi.....aur ghran shakti .....

Aaj k liye itna hi ..........
Agla update kal........

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ab tak aapne dekha Atal lok asuro se mukt ho gaya hai........
Abhi ko apni agli shakti Daksha k roop mien mil gayi hai.....

ab aage ...........

Atal lok mein parajay ki baat se KS timila gaya....
KS - Kaise ....aakhir kaise Rakshak bach gaya.........humne toh uski aisi haalat kar di thi ki....uska marna tay tha.......lagta hai humare bich hi koi hamare shatru ka sahayak hai...........

jo bhi hai woh itna jaan lo ......ki woh apni hi jaati ka drohi hai........

jis Rakahak ne humesha se hi har yug mein aasuro ka nash hi kiya hai......uske iss yug k janam ka bhi yahi kaaran hai........

Jiaka sankalp hi hum sab ka nash hai ....kya uaki sahyata karne hum asuro k saath kiya gaya droh nahi hai......

yaad rahe humare purvaj Rakshas raaj Ravan sarva samarth the ....lekin apne hi bhai Bibhishan k chal k kaaran maare gaye.........

waise hi koi bibhishan humare bich hai.........woh shayd yeh bhul gaya k Asurraj Kaalasur ki uspar drishti nahi padegi......

hum usse ek aur awsar dete hai.....vichar karne ka ......
k jiski woh sahyata kar raha hai woh ....humare bete ka ...aur na jaane kitne aaur veero ka hatyara hai.......

Atal lok ki parajay se, hamari parajay nahi hui hai........

aanewale maha yudh mein Abhi 8 mahine aur baaki hai........

aap sab apni shaktiyo ka aur badao.....kyu k yudh nirnayak hoga .....sabha sthagit......

aur sabhi asur waha se chale jaate hai.....kewal bhayaksh rah jaata hai.......

Asur raj jab apni sabha ko sambodhti kar rahe the.....tab sabha k bahar koi unki baatein sunraha tha .......sabha samapt hone k baad uski aankhon mein aansoo the......

Bhayaksha - Kshama kare pitashri ....yadi aagya ho toh kuch kahu.....

KS - kaho .....

Bhayaksha - pitashri yadi aap jaante hai ki humare bich woh drohi kaun hai jisne Rakshak ki sahyata ki thi toh aapne usse dand dene ki bajaye ..ek aur awsar de diya......

KS - (kutil muskurahat aankho mein chamak liye) putra mein koi bhi karya aise hi nahi karta......KS ki har baat k piche ek kaaran hota hai ......aur tum abhi woh samazne mein asamarta ho........

Yaha Abhi Atal lok ko apne suraksha ghere mein bandh kar waha se vida hokar ghar aagaya
tha......

Subah ki apni daily routine poori karke ,Abhi Ritu k room ko or gaya ....
kyu ki Apne roop se usse kuch aisi baatein ko jiske liye Abhi ne Ritu di se milna jaruri samzha .....

Room ka door ander se band tha......Abhi door knock karne hi wala hota hai .....toh andar se Ritu ki awaj aarahi thi jaise kisi se baat kar rahi ho......

Abhi ne socha k jara dekhe toh di itne sawere kis k saath baat kar rahi hai......isiliye qoh apne room mein aagaya ....aur Daksha k milan se mili shakti dur shravan se waha ki baatein sun raha tha .....ab Abhi ko saf saf dono or ki saari baatien sunayi de rahi thi.....

jaise jaise baatein aage badh rahi thi.....Abhi k chehere par chinta k lakeere nazar aane lagi.......
Ritu ne call cut karne se pahle kuch aisi baat kah di k Abhi ki aankhien bhar aayi.......

ussi samay door par knock hui ....lekin Abhi apne hi khayalo mein gum tha.......

Tabhi bahar se aawaj aayi ...bhai darwaja kholo na kya kar rahe ho.....aAbhi ne jab bahar Addu ki aawaj suni toh jaakar door khol diya

Addu - kya bhai aap bhi kitne der se mein aapko bula rahi hu .........

Abhi - arre gudiya mein gallery mein tha ....isiliye sunayi nahi diya.......

Addu - gud morning bhai.....aur apnr dono haath aage kar deti hai.......

Abhi addu ko gale laga leta hai......aur uske matthe par kiss kar deta hai ......aur Addu ko lekar ander aajata hai.......

Addu - bahi aap pareshan lag rahe ho........kya baat hai....

Abhi - kuch bhi toh nahi gudiya .....aur tuzhe aisa kyu laga....

Addu - bhai main jab apne room mein thi toh muzhe aisa laga ko aap sad ho......isilye mein yaha aagyi....

Abhi - Addu ko apnigoad mein bithakar gale laga leta hai .....ohh meri pyari gudiya ....kitna sochti hai apne bhai k baare mein ......

Addu ko gale laga kar humesha Abhi ki saari tension khatam ho jaati thi.......

Abhi - Accha betu vacation kaisi kat rahi hai.....

Addu - kya bhai .....mein toh bore ho rahi hu ......Aap bhi busy rahete hai.....bas saara din gahr par .
kahi bahar ghumne ka plan banao na bhai .......

Abhi - accha meri gudiya bor ho rahi hai.......toh batao kaha jaana chahti ho........

Addu - Bahi kal mumma baat kar rahi thi k chaachi ka call aaya tha .....
Sonu bahut jidd kar rahi hai aapse milne ki .....Parso uska birthday hai .....

Abhi - Thik hai gudiya maine usse aane ka wada bhi kiya tha ....apne kaam mein itna busy ho gaya k muzhe yaad hi nahi raha.......ab vacation k baaki din hum USA mein sonu k saath bitayenge .....

Addu - wow bhai....I luv u aur Abhi k gaal par kiss kar deti hai......

Abhi - Luv u too ..gudiya ....aur Abhi bhi kiss kar deta hai hai......
tab tak breakfast ka time ho jaata hai......Toh Abhi aur Addu niche aajate hai .....Mom aur Dad dining table par hi the ......lekin Ritu nahi thi.....

Abhi - Mom dad k pair chuta hai aur apne chair par baith jaata hai.....

Abhi - Mom di nahi aayi break fast karne........

Mom - maine bulaya ...lekin kah rahi hai Abhi bhuk nahi hai office mein hi kha lungi .....yeh ladki bhi na aajkal isska kuch samaz mein hi nahi aaraha hai.......

Abhi - aap rukiye mein bula kar laata hu .....

Aur abhi Ritu k room ki aur chal deta hai .......knock kar deta hai.......
lekin darwaja nahi khulta .....andar aw aawaj aati hai.....

Ritu - kya hai .....

Abhi - Di main hu .....aaj aap Breakfast karne nahi aayi ....chalo na di.....

Ritu - tu jaa muzhe abhi bhook nahi hai ....mein office mein hi kha lungi.....

Abhi - chalo na di pls .....

Tabhi door khul jaata hai aur Abhi ander aajata hai....

Ritu - kya hai ...tuzhe samaz nahi aaraha jab bola bhook nahi hai.....toh kyu pareshan kar raha hai.....ab jaa muzhe office k liye tayar hona hai...

Ritu ne kabhi Abhi se aise baat nahi ki .thi ...aaj apni di ka aise baat karna usske dil ko dukh pahunch raha tha .....aur uske aankhon mein aansoo uski haalat bayan kar rahe the .....

Abhi ki aankhon mein aansoo dekhkar Ritu normal ho gayi.....

Ritu - kya betu tu ab bada ho gaya hai ...aur itni si baat par kya baccho jaise aansoo bahane lag jaata hai ......thik hai chal ...chalte hai....

Abhi - Rahne do di aap kyu pareshan hoti ho ......mein hi pagal hu .....jo aapko pareshan karne aagaya ...sorry....

Ritu - chup ab jayada bolega ..toh khayega ek .....aur Abhi ko gale laga leti hai.......

sorry betu bas kuch problems k wajah se thodi tense thi aur saara frustration tuhh pat nikal diya ...

Abhi - toh muzhe batao na di kya problem hai.....

Ritu - kuch khas nahi woh business se related hai......
cahl ab bahut bhook lagi hai .......

Aur Abhi k saath niche aajati hai ....breakfast hone k baad di aur Dad office k liye jaane lage toh maine Dad ko rok liya k muzhe unse kuch jaruri baat karni hai...

Dad ruk jaate hai ...main Dad k saath unke Room mein chala jaata hu ....

Dad - haa toh bolo beya aisi kya jaruri baat hai.....

Mein - Dad kya aapne kuch dino se Ritu di mein change notice kiya .....

Dad - Beta businesd k kaamo mein itna ulaz gaya hu k jayada tho nahi lekin kuch din se woh kuch tense lag rahi hai...aur kuch chup chup rahene lagi hai.......

maine socha shayad yeh kaam k pressure k wajah se hai.....

Dad parso sona ka birthady hai ...mein soch raha hu k kuch dino k liye waha ho aau aur di ko bhi le jaau hosakta hai di ka mann kuch fresh ho jaaye......Addu bhi jaana chahti hai......

Dad - beta main toh nahi aa paaunga ....tum apni mom ko bhi le jana saath ......

Phir maine mom se kaha toh woh raazi ho gayi.......

Uske baad meine socha kyu na Rimpy ko bhi le jaaya jaaye.........

toh main Teleport hokar sidha Rimpy k terrace par pahunch gaya ...aur utarkar room ki gallery mein aagaya ..aur curtain k piche se ander jhanka ......socha k Rimpy ko surprise karunga ....toh mein khud yaha surprise ho gaya

Andar Rimpy change kar rahi thi .....black leggins ...aur upper sirf black bra .......bed par kuch t shirts padi hui thi aur woh decide nahi kar paa rahi thi k kaunsi pahnu.......

Tabhi mere muh se nikal pada .....
Jaan yeh red top accha rahega .....Achanak meri aawaj sunkar woh chaunk gayi aur aawaj ki disha mein dekhne lagi .....tab tak mein chup chuka tha .....

Rimpy - mein bhi na ....yeh Abhi ne toh muzhe pagal kar diya hai jagah jagah woh hi dikhayi deta hai aur ab toh awaaj bhi sunayi dene lagi hai .....

aur usne white top utha liye.....toh mein phir bolne k liye curtain pakadkar khade hi hone wala tha....k curtain niche gir gaya ...aur mein saamne aagay .....

parda girne aur mere dikhne ki wajah se Rimpy phir chaunki .....aur muzhe apne saamne dekhkar .....

Rimpy - yeh kya hai jaan ...aise bhi koi aata hai ....tum darwaje se bhi toh aasakte the ...aise hi muzhe dara diya ........ab khade kyu ho ander aajao.......

Lekin Abhi Rimpy k khubsurti mein aisa kho gaya k usse jaise kuch hosh hi nahi raha, bas aankhien fade fade dekh raha tha ......

jab Rimpy ko apni halat ka ahsas hua ....toh usne dono haath apne seene par rakh liye ......aur sharmane lagi.....

Rimpy - Aise kya dekh rahe ho udhar muh karo muzhe change karna hai .....

lekin abhi ander aakar uske paas khada ho jaata hai....

Abhi - abhi toh kah rahi thi ander aajao ...aur kah rahi ho muh udher karo.....aur Abhi apne haatho se uske haath hatne lagta hai toh Rimpy aharam k maare uske seene mein chup jaati hai.....

Abhi - uff yeh ada ....jaan ...humse hi parda ...aur phir bahon mein samana ....gazab hai yrh ada .....Abhi bhi kas kar usse gale laga leta hai......
dono ek dusre ko mehsus kar rahe the ....Abhi ne Rimpy ka chehra uper kiya ..aur usski aankhon mein dekhne laga ....dono k honth ek dusre k karib aagaye....ek dusre k saansoo ki khushboo aur bekarari bada rahi thi ....dono k honth ek dusre se mil gaye ....aur kiss chalu hi hua tha k.....Door knok ki aawaj aayi.......aur aawaj aayi Rimpy k dad Khemraj ji ki

jo shayad curtain girne ki aawaj sukar aagaye the ....

Kj - beta Rimpy kya hua yeh aawaj kaisi thi ....

Rimpy saans bhari hone k wajah se badi mushkil se

Rimpy - kkkuuuch....nahhhhi ...dad....

Kj - phir yeh aawaj kaisi ....

Rimpy - woh dad curtain ki pipe kuch kamjor ho gayi thi ...mein usse band kar rahi thi k woh ukhadkar poori gir gayi .....aur uske wajah se window par rakha gamla bhi girkar tut gaya........

Kj - kahi tuzhe chot toh nahi aayi aur yeh teri saans kyu phool rahi hai.....

Rimpy - kha phul rahi hai dad ...mein change kar rahi hu aap chaliye mein abhi aayi......

Kj - jaldi aaja beta mein tuzhe breakfast k liye hi bulane aaraha tha k aawaj aayi .....

aur woh niche cahle gaye .....

Rimpy - ab acche bacche ki tarah bahar jaao aur front door se andar aao mein bhi ready hokar aati hu ........

Abhi - kya jaan ....jaam hontho tak aakar chala gaya ....uff ....aur Abhi waha se teleport hokar ....Rimpy k ghar k door par pahuncha aur bell bajayi

Abhi k liye itna hi .....
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