Fantasy ABHI -- THE WARRIOR (Completed)

[Aryanv]

Fabulous update bro.....
Golu ka cheptar close....
Ab knak ki baari

 

[ANUJ KUMAR]

Koi Baat nahi bhai pahle thik ho jao Phir dedena update

 

[Vickey1211]

Update - 115

ab tak aapne dekha k kaise Golark Ks ki chal mein aakar Abhi k virudh hua....
Abhi ne Divya drishti se Rasatal mein chal rahi jeevo ki gatividhya dekhi aur unn jeevo ka mool tallok bhi dekha ...Jaha usne Goark ki ek zhalak dekhi ......

ab aage.....

Abhi Ritu k saath niche aajaata hai ....aaj ka break fast dono bahu milkar bana rahi thi aur apne haatho se serve kar rahi thi ........

Abhi aur Ritu bhi pahunch gaye .......aur apni apni jagah baith gaye.......

Naina - kaha rah gaya tha betu aaj badi der laga di ........Aur Ritu tu bhi kaha thi....hamara toh bf khatam hone ko aaya ......

Ritu Abhi ki taraf muskurate hue - Mom woh aaj betu kuch jayada hi dyam kar Raha tha ....toh main isse bulane hi gayi thi .......wah aaj toh khane ki badi acchi khushbu aarahi hai ......

Mom - aaj ka naastha dono bahu ne banaya hai ..........

Rimpy - maa ji ...maine toh bas thodi help ki hai ..saara bf ..aaj chotti ne banaya hai......

Ritu - Wah meri choti bhabi ....toh gazab ki cook hai ....

Abhi ko Ritu mein aaya change samaz aaraha tha .....Lekin Abhi k thode pyar se woh khush thi Abhi k liye itna hi bahut tha.......


Bf k baad Abhi room mein chala gaya .....aur Rinku ko maansik sandesh bheja .......aur uske aane ka intejar karne laga .......

thodi hi der mein Rinku aagaya .....Abhi ne Rinku ko ghar par aur pariwar par gupt roop se poori tarah nazar rakhne k liye kaha ........

Rinku - muzhe toh pahli hi nazar mein yeh golu kuch gadbad laga ....lekin tumhe kuch jyada hi isspar vishwas tha isiliye main kuch nahi bola .......

Abhi - bas dhyan rakha ,Golu ko nahi pata chalna chahiye k tum aur tumahari team usspar nazar rakh rahi hai ........aur yadi koi khatra mehsus hue toh turant muzhse sampark karna .....Abhi pahle muzhe Rasatal ki problem dekhni hai ...aur uski jad tak pahinchna hai ....

Rinku - Tu bina kisi chinta k jaa main hu yaha...

Rimpy ander aate hue - ab kaha jaane ki baatein ho rahi hai ....arre wah Rinku .....accha toh Rinku bhi hai ......kaha the itne din ....

Rinku - bas bhabi ....kuch samay College ....kuch ....Abhi ...k diye kaamo mein aur kuch bacha kucha ...Lima ..k saath .....

Rimpy - accha shadi vaadi ka kya plan hai ......kab kar rahe ho ....

Rinku - College k baad hi soch raha hu .....

Tabhi Renu bhi room mein aajaati hai .....usse dekhkar Rinku ......

Rinku - Yaar yeh nayi entry kaun hai inse toh milaya hi nahi ...Kahi yeh nayi bhabi toh nahi ....

Abhi - haa yr ...yeh hai Renu teri nayi bhabhi .......

Rimpy - acvha aapne bataya nahi kaha jaane ki baat ho rahi thi...

Rimpy k puchne par Abhi usse Rasatal mein chal rahi pareshaniyo k baare mein batata hai ......

Rimpy - ohh ...Tabhi main kahu k itna kuch yaha ho raha hai aur Shivali di ka kuch pata nahi ...hum bhi aapke saath chalenge .....aur Renu bhi sabse mil legi .....

Abhi - lekin yaha bhi toh tumahari jarurat hogi .....

Rimpy aap chinta na karo hum bas ...unse milkar wapas aajaayenge .......

Thik hai tum pahuncho mein kisi ko lekar waha pahunchta hu .......

Rinku aur Abhi waha se nikal gaye .......Rinku Abhi k diye hue apne kaam mein lag gayi ussne apni team ko .....RVS ....Ritu ...Addu aur Naina ki safety mein laga diye jo unse ek duri banakar .....poori tarah satark the ....Aur Rinku ne ghar par nazar rakhne ki jimmedari apne upar le li .....

Abhi waha se nilkar Golu k paas pahuncha .....Yasha bhumi uske ghar ......

Abji ko iss tarah apne ghar aaya hua dekhkar pahele toh Golu hadbada gaya .......

Golu - arre bhai aap ....aayiye2 andar ....kitne dino k baad aap aaye hai accha laga ......

Abhi - kya kare bhai itne kaamo mein vayst rahne k kaaran samay hi nahi mil paata .....

Tabhi ander se kavya aate hue ...arre beta kaun hai ..jab Abhi ko dekha toh uske chehre par khusi aagayi .....Golu ne ab tak apni maa ko kuch nahi bataya tha ....

Kavya - arre beta ...aao aao ...aaj yaad aai hai tumhe humari ....inke jaane k baad ek baar bhi hamari khabar lene nahi aaya ...

Abhi - muzhe kshama kare chachi cahkar bhi nayi aa paaya ....apni vyastata k kaaran .....

Kavya - koi bast nahi beta mein samaz sakti hu ......lekin kabhi kabhi aaya kar accha lagta hai ......tu baith mein kuch khane k liye kuch laati hu ...
aur woh ander chali gayi ......
.Abhi - Golu muzhe tumahare saath kuch baat karni hai ...lekin yaha nahi kar sakte

Golu - aisi kya baat hai bhai ..jo yaha nahi ho sakti..

Abhi - hai kunch baat

itne der mein Kavya ne khane ka kuch le aayi ....

Naaste k baad Abhi Golu ko lekar Naag lok nikal gaya ......

Iss samay Naag raaj Abhi (AN )...sulehka ...Shivali ....Baithe hue ...inn jeevo se kaise nijat paayi jaaye woh soch rahe the.....Rimpy aur Renu bhi waha baithi thi

Abhi ko Golu k saath aaya dekhkar .......Sabhi khade ho gaye .....

Golu ka sach Abhi k jaane k baad ...Abhi k antarman se connected hone k kaaran ..Sivali sab kuch jaan gayi thi ....Abhi k saath Golu ko dekhkar ...Shivali ...kuch bolne k liye aage hi badi thi k Abhi ne usse shant rahne ka ishara kiya ......

Golark ko kuch toh andesha ho gaya tha k Abhi uske sach ko jaan gaya hai ......

Golu - Bhai tum muzhe yaha kyu laaye ho ......

Abhi - shayad tum jaante ho .....lekin kuch bhi kahne aur karne se pahele ......tumahare liye ek sach ko janana bahut jaruri hai .......

Abhi ne Golu ko ek jagah bithaya ....aur apne haath aage karke maya se Hawa mein ek screen se bana diya ...aur apni divya drishti ka prayog karke sab k saamne wahi drishya chalaya jab Abhi k haato GK ki mrityu hui thi .....

Jaise jaise drishya aage badha .....Glou ki aankhon se aansoo bah nikle .......ab woh sach jaan chuka tha k kin haalato mein ......Abhi k haatho GK ki maut hui thi ..

Abhi - Golu maine tumhe apna bhai maana ...aur tumne mere hi saath viswas ghat kiya ......kuch karne se pahele ...ek baar toh muzhse puch lete .....
Shivali toh tumhe apna chota bhai maanti thi ya usse hi puch lete ......

Golu - Main jaanta hu bhai muzhse bahut badi galti ho gayi.......Lekin mein kya karta .....uss samay maine di se pucha tha ...lekin unhone bhi muzhe kuch saaf saaf nahi bataya ....Aur aapka bhi koi pata nahi tha .....KS ...ne uske haatho aapki mrityu k baare mein bataya ....aur woh drishya dikhaya ......toh mein kisse puchta ....

Abhi - baad mein bhi toh puch sakte the jab mein tumse mila tha ......tumahari iss bhool k kaaran ek maasum Deepu ne apne paarn gawaye .......kya tum usse lauta sakte ho ....
tumhe pata hai GK mera mitra se bhi badhkar tha .......Jab KS k shdyanra ne uski jaan li toh mein aaweg mein bina kuch soche Ks ka mukabla karne pahunch gaya .......tabhi main buri tarah ghayal hogaya tha......

Golu - mein jaanta hu meri galti kshama yogya nahi hai .....Aap iske liye muzhe jo saza dena chahte ho muzhe sweekar hai .......

Abhi -tumahare jagah koi aur hota toh ab tak mein usse maut k ghat utar chuka hota ......lekin tum GK ki nishani ho isiliye abhi tak jeevit ho .......issbaar toh mein tumhe chodraha hu ....taaki tumahari mata ..niputi na hi jaaye .....parantu yadi phir tum mere raaste mein aaye ....toh din tumahare jeevan ka aakhri din ho .....

Chale jao yaha se ..iss pahele ...k mein kuch kar du n...
.tumahara chehra dekta hu toh nuzhe Usmein deepu ka kaatil nazar aata hai .......chale jaao yaha se ......

Golu - main itna bojz apne hriday par nahi sah sakta .......Vishwas ghat ka ek hi dand hota hai mrityu .....muzhe maar do bhai ......

Abhi - tumhe apni mata aur bahen k liye jeena hoga yahi tumahari saza hai .......

Golu - thik hai ....lekin jaane se pahele mein apne bigade hue kuch kaam sudharna chahta hu .....
phir Golu ne apni saari urja ekatrit ki ...Aur Naaglok ki dharti par chodi ......Golu ki urja naalok ka chakkar kaatne lagi .....aur jaha jaha bhi woh jeev chippe hue the unko jaakar lagi.....jisse woh tadspne lage aur ....wapas talatal lok mein wapas chale gaye ...

Golark ab waha se jaa chuka tha ......

Golark k jaane k baad Abhi sabse mila ......

Shivali Golark ka sach jaankar...dukhi thi ....Abhi Shivali k dil ki haalat jaanta tha ....

Abhi - tum kyu uske baare mein sochkar ...dukhi ho rahi ho .....Shivu ......

Shivali - jab main usse mili toh muzhe laga ek pyara sa bhai mil gaya.....mein uske mano bhav ko pakad hi nahi paayi ......

Abhi - Beeti hui baato ko chodo Shivu ...jo ho gaya so ho gaya ...ab hume aage aur satark hona hoga ....kyu ki ab hum ....maha yudh k bahut nikat hai .......chunautiya aur badne wali hai ......

Abhi muzhe apni agli yaatra par nikalna hoga .......talatal Lok ...

Talatal lok Vaitarni nadi k kaaran do hisso mein bata hua hai

ek hisse mein Yumraj ki nagri ....Sayamini poori hai jaha woh sabhi k karmo k anusar nayay karte hai...Vital lok mein 28 mein se 10 narak the...baaki bache hue 18 narak ...Yumlok k dakshini bhag mein the......

Aur Vaitarni nadi k dusri taraf unnjeevo ka vaas hai jinhe narko mein laaye gaye ....bhog sharir ...dharan ki hui jeevatmao ko dand dene k liye prayog kiya jata tha ......

Inn jeevo ka swami tha kank ....

aaj k liye itna hi ...
agla update kal ....

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Mast update h bhai
Maza aa gya

 

[Naina]

Abhi ne Divya drishti se Rasatal mein chal rahi jeevo ki gatividhya dekhi aur unn jeevo ka mool tallok bhi dekha ...Jaha usne Goark ki ek zhalak dekhi ......

yeh abhi sab kuch matlab sabhi kuch dekh sakta hai kya

Abhi Ritu k saath niche aajaata hai ....aaj ka break fast dono bahu milkar bana rahi thi aur apne haatho se serve kar rahi thi ........

Abhi aur Ritu bhi pahunch gaye .......aur apni apni jagah baith gaye.......

Naina - kaha rah gaya tha betu aaj badi der laga di ........Aur Ritu tu bhi kaha thi....hamara toh bf khatam hone ko aaya ......

Ritu Abhi ki taraf muskurate hue - Mom woh aaj betu kuch jayada hi dyam kar Raha tha ....toh main isse bulane hi gayi thi .......wah aaj toh khane ki badi acchi khushbu aarahi hai ......

Mom - aaj ka naastha dono bahu ne banaya hai ..........

Rimpy - maa ji ...maine toh bas thodi help ki hai ..saara bf ..aaj chotti ne banaya hai......

Ritu - Wah meri choti bhabi ....toh gazab ki cook hai ....

Abhi ko Ritu mein aaya change samaz aaraha tha .....Lekin Abhi k thode pyar se woh khush thi Abhi k liye itna hi bahut tha.......


Bf k baad Abhi room mein chala gaya ..

Yaar jab dekho tab bas thus thus ke breakfast karte rahte hain... ... mote na jayenge ye log..." bf karne ke baad " ha ha ha ha ha yeh dekho story wali naina kitni khush ho rahi.. bhukkhad kahin ki

Well well wel.. Story mein kayi dilchasp mod aaye aur aage bhi aayenge shayad.. hmm writer sahab unique style mein action ki sath sath kuch emotional touch bhi de rahe hai kuch updates mein.. great..
Khair.. Brilliant update with awesome writing skill writer sahab

frnds aaj meri tabiyat thik nahi hai ....bp bahut badh gaya hai ...badi ..mushkil se yeh chotta update likh paaya hu .....
aapke comments ka intezar rahega..

first of all tanav, tension, stress dene wale baaton se ya chijo se bilkul dur rahiye ...turant Doctor se salah lijiye... health is wealth... khud ka dhyan rakhiye...

 

[Akil]

Update - 115

ab tak aapne dekha k kaise Golark Ks ki chal mein aakar Abhi k virudh hua....
Abhi ne Divya drishti se Rasatal mein chal rahi jeevo ki gatividhya dekhi aur unn jeevo ka mool tallok bhi dekha ...Jaha usne Goark ki ek zhalak dekhi ......

ab aage.....

Abhi Ritu k saath niche aajaata hai ....aaj ka break fast dono bahu milkar bana rahi thi aur apne haatho se serve kar rahi thi ........

Abhi aur Ritu bhi pahunch gaye .......aur apni apni jagah baith gaye.......

Naina - kaha rah gaya tha betu aaj badi der laga di ........Aur Ritu tu bhi kaha thi....hamara toh bf khatam hone ko aaya ......

Ritu Abhi ki taraf muskurate hue - Mom woh aaj betu kuch jayada hi dyam kar Raha tha ....toh main isse bulane hi gayi thi .......wah aaj toh khane ki badi acchi khushbu aarahi hai ......

Mom - aaj ka naastha dono bahu ne banaya hai ..........

Rimpy - maa ji ...maine toh bas thodi help ki hai ..saara bf ..aaj chotti ne banaya hai......

Ritu - Wah meri choti bhabi ....toh gazab ki cook hai ....

Abhi ko Ritu mein aaya change samaz aaraha tha .....Lekin Abhi k thode pyar se woh khush thi Abhi k liye itna hi bahut tha.......


Bf k baad Abhi room mein chala gaya .....aur Rinku ko maansik sandesh bheja .......aur uske aane ka intejar karne laga .......

thodi hi der mein Rinku aagaya .....Abhi ne Rinku ko ghar par aur pariwar par gupt roop se poori tarah nazar rakhne k liye kaha ........

Rinku - muzhe toh pahli hi nazar mein yeh golu kuch gadbad laga ....lekin tumhe kuch jyada hi isspar vishwas tha isiliye main kuch nahi bola .......

Abhi - bas dhyan rakha ,Golu ko nahi pata chalna chahiye k tum aur tumahari team usspar nazar rakh rahi hai ........aur yadi koi khatra mehsus hue toh turant muzhse sampark karna .....Abhi pahle muzhe Rasatal ki problem dekhni hai ...aur uski jad tak pahinchna hai ....

Rinku - Tu bina kisi chinta k jaa main hu yaha...

Rimpy ander aate hue - ab kaha jaane ki baatein ho rahi hai ....arre wah Rinku .....accha toh Rinku bhi hai ......kaha the itne din ....

Rinku - bas bhabi ....kuch samay College ....kuch ....Abhi ...k diye kaamo mein aur kuch bacha kucha ...Lima ..k saath .....

Rimpy - accha shadi vaadi ka kya plan hai ......kab kar rahe ho ....

Rinku - College k baad hi soch raha hu .....

Tabhi Renu bhi room mein aajaati hai .....usse dekhkar Rinku ......

Rinku - Yaar yeh nayi entry kaun hai inse toh milaya hi nahi ...Kahi yeh nayi bhabi toh nahi ....

Abhi - haa yr ...yeh hai Renu teri nayi bhabhi .......

Rimpy - acvha aapne bataya nahi kaha jaane ki baat ho rahi thi...

Rimpy k puchne par Abhi usse Rasatal mein chal rahi pareshaniyo k baare mein batata hai ......

Rimpy - ohh ...Tabhi main kahu k itna kuch yaha ho raha hai aur Shivali di ka kuch pata nahi ...hum bhi aapke saath chalenge .....aur Renu bhi sabse mil legi .....

Abhi - lekin yaha bhi toh tumahari jarurat hogi .....

Rimpy aap chinta na karo hum bas ...unse milkar wapas aajaayenge .......

Thik hai tum pahuncho mein kisi ko lekar waha pahunchta hu .......

Rinku aur Abhi waha se nikal gaye .......Rinku Abhi k diye hue apne kaam mein lag gayi ussne apni team ko .....RVS ....Ritu ...Addu aur Naina ki safety mein laga diye jo unse ek duri banakar .....poori tarah satark the ....Aur Rinku ne ghar par nazar rakhne ki jimmedari apne upar le li .....

Abhi waha se nilkar Golu k paas pahuncha .....Yasha bhumi uske ghar ......

Abji ko iss tarah apne ghar aaya hua dekhkar pahele toh Golu hadbada gaya .......

Golu - arre bhai aap ....aayiye2 andar ....kitne dino k baad aap aaye hai accha laga ......

Abhi - kya kare bhai itne kaamo mein vayst rahne k kaaran samay hi nahi mil paata .....

Tabhi ander se kavya aate hue ...arre beta kaun hai ..jab Abhi ko dekha toh uske chehre par khusi aagayi .....Golu ne ab tak apni maa ko kuch nahi bataya tha ....

Kavya - arre beta ...aao aao ...aaj yaad aai hai tumhe humari ....inke jaane k baad ek baar bhi hamari khabar lene nahi aaya ...

Abhi - muzhe kshama kare chachi cahkar bhi nayi aa paaya ....apni vyastata k kaaran .....

Kavya - koi bast nahi beta mein samaz sakti hu ......lekin kabhi kabhi aaya kar accha lagta hai ......tu baith mein kuch khane k liye kuch laati hu ...
aur woh ander chali gayi ......
.Abhi - Golu muzhe tumahare saath kuch baat karni hai ...lekin yaha nahi kar sakte

Golu - aisi kya baat hai bhai ..jo yaha nahi ho sakti..

Abhi - hai kunch baat

itne der mein Kavya ne khane ka kuch le aayi ....

Naaste k baad Abhi Golu ko lekar Naag lok nikal gaya ......

Iss samay Naag raaj Abhi (AN )...sulehka ...Shivali ....Baithe hue ...inn jeevo se kaise nijat paayi jaaye woh soch rahe the.....Rimpy aur Renu bhi waha baithi thi

Abhi ko Golu k saath aaya dekhkar .......Sabhi khade ho gaye .....

Golu ka sach Abhi k jaane k baad ...Abhi k antarman se connected hone k kaaran ..Sivali sab kuch jaan gayi thi ....Abhi k saath Golu ko dekhkar ...Shivali ...kuch bolne k liye aage hi badi thi k Abhi ne usse shant rahne ka ishara kiya ......

Golark ko kuch toh andesha ho gaya tha k Abhi uske sach ko jaan gaya hai ......

Golu - Bhai tum muzhe yaha kyu laaye ho ......

Abhi - shayad tum jaante ho .....lekin kuch bhi kahne aur karne se pahele ......tumahare liye ek sach ko janana bahut jaruri hai .......

Abhi ne Golu ko ek jagah bithaya ....aur apne haath aage karke maya se Hawa mein ek screen se bana diya ...aur apni divya drishti ka prayog karke sab k saamne wahi drishya chalaya jab Abhi k haato GK ki mrityu hui thi .....

Jaise jaise drishya aage badha .....Glou ki aankhon se aansoo bah nikle .......ab woh sach jaan chuka tha k kin haalato mein ......Abhi k haatho GK ki maut hui thi ..

Abhi - Golu maine tumhe apna bhai maana ...aur tumne mere hi saath viswas ghat kiya ......kuch karne se pahele ...ek baar toh muzhse puch lete .....
Shivali toh tumhe apna chota bhai maanti thi ya usse hi puch lete ......

Golu - Main jaanta hu bhai muzhse bahut badi galti ho gayi.......Lekin mein kya karta .....uss samay maine di se pucha tha ...lekin unhone bhi muzhe kuch saaf saaf nahi bataya ....Aur aapka bhi koi pata nahi tha .....KS ...ne uske haatho aapki mrityu k baare mein bataya ....aur woh drishya dikhaya ......toh mein kisse puchta ....

Abhi - baad mein bhi toh puch sakte the jab mein tumse mila tha ......tumahari iss bhool k kaaran ek maasum Deepu ne apne paarn gawaye .......kya tum usse lauta sakte ho ....
tumhe pata hai GK mera mitra se bhi badhkar tha .......Jab KS k shdyanra ne uski jaan li toh mein aaweg mein bina kuch soche Ks ka mukabla karne pahunch gaya .......tabhi main buri tarah ghayal hogaya tha......

Golu - mein jaanta hu meri galti kshama yogya nahi hai .....Aap iske liye muzhe jo saza dena chahte ho muzhe sweekar hai .......

Abhi -tumahare jagah koi aur hota toh ab tak mein usse maut k ghat utar chuka hota ......lekin tum GK ki nishani ho isiliye abhi tak jeevit ho .......issbaar toh mein tumhe chodraha hu ....taaki tumahari mata ..niputi na hi jaaye .....parantu yadi phir tum mere raaste mein aaye ....toh din tumahare jeevan ka aakhri din ho .....

Chale jao yaha se ..iss pahele ...k mein kuch kar du n...
.tumahara chehra dekta hu toh nuzhe Usmein deepu ka kaatil nazar aata hai .......chale jaao yaha se ......

Golu - main itna bojz apne hriday par nahi sah sakta .......Vishwas ghat ka ek hi dand hota hai mrityu .....muzhe maar do bhai ......

Abhi - tumhe apni mata aur bahen k liye jeena hoga yahi tumahari saza hai .......

Golu - thik hai ....lekin jaane se pahele mein apne bigade hue kuch kaam sudharna chahta hu .....
phir Golu ne apni saari urja ekatrit ki ...Aur Naaglok ki dharti par chodi ......Golu ki urja naalok ka chakkar kaatne lagi .....aur jaha jaha bhi woh jeev chippe hue the unko jaakar lagi.....jisse woh tadspne lage aur ....wapas talatal lok mein wapas chale gaye ...

Golark ab waha se jaa chuka tha ......

Golark k jaane k baad Abhi sabse mila ......

Shivali Golark ka sach jaankar...dukhi thi ....Abhi Shivali k dil ki haalat jaanta tha ....

Abhi - tum kyu uske baare mein sochkar ...dukhi ho rahi ho .....Shivu ......

Shivali - jab main usse mili toh muzhe laga ek pyara sa bhai mil gaya.....mein uske mano bhav ko pakad hi nahi paayi ......

Abhi - Beeti hui baato ko chodo Shivu ...jo ho gaya so ho gaya ...ab hume aage aur satark hona hoga ....kyu ki ab hum ....maha yudh k bahut nikat hai .......chunautiya aur badne wali hai ......

Abhi muzhe apni agli yaatra par nikalna hoga .......talatal Lok ...

Talatal lok Vaitarni nadi k kaaran do hisso mein bata hua hai

ek hisse mein Yumraj ki nagri ....Sayamini poori hai jaha woh sabhi k karmo k anusar nayay karte hai...Vital lok mein 28 mein se 10 narak the...baaki bache hue 18 narak ...Yumlok k dakshini bhag mein the......

Aur Vaitarni nadi k dusri taraf unnjeevo ka vaas hai jinhe narko mein laaye gaye ....bhog sharir ...dharan ki hui jeevatmao ko dand dene k liye prayog kiya jata tha ......

Inn jeevo ka swami tha kank ....

aaj k liye itna hi ...
agla update kal ....

frnds aaj meri tabiyat thik nahi hai ....bp bahut badh gaya hai ...badi ..mushkil se yeh chotta update likh paaya hu .....
aapke comments ka intezar rahega.....

Toh samay rehte golu ko apni bhool ka aabhaas ho hi gaya parantu ks kya is haar ya yoon kahoon ki ek amogh shastr ke apne haath se nikal jane par khamosh toh nahin baithega dekhte hain ab woh kya karta hai aur aage kya kya hona hai

 

[abhi1008]

Update - 116

Ab tak aapne dekha Golark ko apni bhul ka ahsas ho gaya hai ......

ab aage ....

Talatal lok mein koi bhi bahari vyakti pravesh nahi kar dakta tha .....jab tak koi bhiter ka usse lene na aaye........kyuki Yaha yumlok bhi tha ...aur yumlok ka vidhan yahi tha ....

Golark Talatal lok k bahari hisse mein khada tha .......Usse apne maansik tarango se Kank ko sandesh bheja ........thodi hi der mein Kank ka ek sewak ..jo ek jeev tha ...usse lene aaya ........

Aur woh Golark ko lekar talatal lok k seema mein Bane shield ko jaise hi ussne sparsh kiya waha ek pravesh dwar ban gaya .....aur woh jeev Golu ko lekar bhiter pravesh kar gaya ........

woh jeev Vaitarni nadi se ek doori banakar ....chal raha tha ......

Vaitarni nadi se bhayakar jeevo .....ki aawaje ....aur ussko paar karte hue yumlok ki or jaane wale jivaatmao ki dard bhari cheekhe .....uss vatavaran ko aur bhi bhayawah bana rahi thi......

Woh jeev Golu ko lekar Ghane jungal ko paar karte hue ......ek ..kabile jaise jagah pahuncha ....jaha patthero ki gufao jaise laakho ki sankhya mein niwas sthan the....

Usse kabile ki jagah pattaro ka nagar hi kahna uchit hoga........

Yaha ek ajjeb si niravta aur shamsaan jaise khamoshi k beech ...ajeeb se jeevo ki ajeeb si awaaje aa rahi thi ......

woh jeev Golu ko lekar ek bhawan ..ya kaho pattaro se bani krutrim gufa mein pahuncha ...jaha ....Haddiyo k singhasan par virajman tha Kank ........

Uss jeev ne aur Golu ne Kank ko pranam kiya .......

Kank - aao ..aao Golark kya sandesh hai ........itne shighra dubara aane ka kya kaaran hai ...aur humara karya kaha tak pahuncha .......

Golu - Mahamahim ....Rakshak ki shaktiya aur badh gayi hai ....aur muzhe lagta hai .......Usse muzh par shak ho gaya hai .......

Kank - Yadi yeh sach hai ..toh yeh toh badi gambhir baat hai .......

Golu - Gambir toh hai paratnu ek marg hai ....jisse hum ek pal mein hi usse khatam kar sakte hai .uske kahatam hote hi uski shaktiya aazad ho jaayegi ........Phir aap unn shaktiyo ko sokh kar Ho jaaenge maha shaktishali....

Kank - parantu ...iskeliye ...usse yaha laana hoga .....yeh kaise sambhav hoga ......

Golu - uske liye bhi maine marg soch liye hai muzhe yaha 4 din ki vishesh pooja karni hogi .......jisse aisi urja ka nirman hoga jo uske pariwar ki shaktiyo ko sokh legi .....aur phir hum ussi k jariye .......Uss Rakshak ko vivash kar denge apne prrano ka samarpan karne k liye ...


Kank - wah ...Golu ...wah ..kya yojna banayi hai .....ab muzhe poota vishwas hai k humari yeh yojna safal hogi .......

Golu - Lekin in 4 dino k liye muzhe gupt sthan chahiye .....Inn 4 dino tak mein kissi se nahi mil sakta .....

Kank - tum iss baat ki chinta na karo .......main tumhe apne vishesh sthan le chalta hu ......Jaha kisi aur ko zhankne ki bhi aagya nahi hai .......

Kank Golu ko ek gufa mein le gaya .......jaha ek aasan ....aur ek hawan kund tha aur kuch bikhri hui haddiya ....Golu samaz gaya k yeh Kank ka ki koi pujasthali hai ......

Kank - thik hai ab tum apne karya mein lag jaao milte hai .......4 din baad ....lekin dhyan rahe yadi issbaar tum vifal hue .....toh ...

Golu - muzhe pata hai sarkar .....mera sir hoga aur aapka khadag ......

Aur kank waha se chala gaya ....Golu ne apne haath se ek urja pragat ki aur usse gufa mein chod di .....aur wih gufa pal bhar mein ekdum saaf aur shdh hogayi .......

Golu dhyan mudra mein baith gaya .....aur kisi se maansik samparak karne laga .....aur thodi der baad woh waha se adrisya ho gaya.......

Poori raat woh gufa se gayab tha .....subah hote hi woh wapas gufa mein pragat ho gaya .........thodi der usse gufa k bahar zhankar dekha phir .....Gufa k dwar ko ek shield se cover kar diya aur kuch der kuch utpatang si puja aur hawan kiya ..aur ..so gaya..........

Ab chalte hai patal lok mein ......

Patal lok mein KS apne crystal par Golark ki hat gatividhiyo par nazar rakh raha tha .........usne dekha k abhi Uska haath pakad kar kahi le gaya hai .......

Abhi ko andaja tha k hona ho KS yeh sab dekha raha hai ......toh usne Maya aur mantra shakti se Rasatal k uss kaksh ka drisya baadhit kar diya tha ....jisse KS waha kya ho raha hai na dekh paaye ......

Ks ko ab waha kya horaha hai yeh dikhna band ho gaya .........

kuch der baad usse dikhayi dene laga K Golark Rastal lok ki seema par khada hai ........aur KS k dekhte hi dekhte adrishya ho gaya........yu achanak Golu k adrishya hone se KS bechain ho gaya ..

tab usse dhyan aaya k Golark toh ek yaksha hai ....aur jeev ki alag alag urja hoti hai .......

toh ussne apne Dimbak naam k vishesh asur ko uss jagah bheja.... jaha usne Golark ko aakhri baar dekha ......

Dimbak jeevo ki urja sokhne wala asur tha ....issiliye kissi bhi prajati ki urja ko bahli bhati pehchan sakta tha ......

Dimbak jab uss jagah pahuncha ....talatal lok ki seema yaha se nikat hi thi ....Golu ki urja ko khojte hue ...woh Talatal lok ki seema par pahuncha .......
Waha usse do yaksho ki urja mehsus hui ......Jab woh aage bada ....toh ....dekha Golark tallok ...ki seema par khada hai ......usne ek aur yaksha ki adrishya urja thodi der k liye waha mehsus ki ......

Thodi hi der mein usne Kank k sewak k saath Golark ko Talatal lok mein pravesh karte hue dekha ......toh qoh waha se wapas KS k paas aagaya aur ....sab kuch bata diya ........

KS ne crystal mein ab talatal lok mein Kank ko Golark k saath baat karte hue dekha .......

KS k mann mein abhi bhi kuch prashna baaki the .......

K Abhi aur Golark k bich kya baat hui...???
Aur kyu adrisya ho gaya.......
Kya Talatal lok mein pravesh karne wala Golark asli hai ?
yadi woh asli hai ...toh woh adrisya yaksha kaun tha ...???

KS ne Rasatal ...Sutal ....Atal ...Vital......Tallok ...mein Abhi k alag roop dekhte ...
Usne ek Abhi ko ghar par bhi dekha .......Ab itne saare Abhi mein se asli Abhi kaha hai usse yrh pata karna tha........

iski shuruwat usne Abhi k ghar hi karne ki thani .....

Yaha ghar par Abhi ne apne frnds k liye chotti si party...Bahut dino se woh apne frnds k saath nahi mila tha ...isiliye yeh ek get together party thi ......

Rinku aur Sanku apni utpatang harkato se party mein dhamal macha rahe the .......Rimpy aur Renu ...Addu ...party mein shamil thi .....

kuch aankhien aisi bhi thi jo uss party mein ho rahi sabhi harkato par dhyan rakh rahi thi ........

Party khatam hote hote raat k 10 baj gaye the aur sabhi frnds apne apne ghar chale gaye ........

Abhi Rimpy Renu k saath lawn mein hi baitha hua tha .....k unhe apne charo taraf kuch hulchal si mehsus hui ....Jab tak woh kuch samaz paate lawn mein unhe charo taraf se asuro ne gher liya ..

Yeh asur baaki asuro se kuch alag the inke sharir se niranter .....baingani rang ki tarange nikalkar unke charo taraf ek ghera sa bana rahi thi ......

sabhi asur ek saath aage bade .....Abhi aur Rimpy Dono Satark ho gaye .......Aur Renu k paas Saptrisiyo se sikhi hui mantra shakti ki power thi ....teeno teen disha ki taraf muh karke khade the .......

Asur aage bade Abhi Ne panch tavo ki sammilit urja se unn asuro par waar karna shuru kar diya .

Lekin Abhi k woh waar unn asuro suraksha ghere par lagte ussmein sama jaate the .....jisse unn asuro ki shakti aur badh jaati thi ..,....

Rimpy ne Bhi apni urje se unn asuro par waar kiya .....Lekin unn asuro ka suraksha kawach Rimpy ki urja ko sokhne laga tha ....isase Rimpy Kamjor padne lagi .......

Yaha Renu k Mantra shakti ....k waar unn Asuro ko bechain karne lage ........Jisse Kai Asuro ka suraksha ghera tut gaya tha ......Abhi ne Rimpy ko Powers ka istemal karne roka .....Aur talwar lekar jut gaya unn Asuro ka saamna karne .......

Jin jin Asuro ka Suraksha ghera Renu apne mantra shakti se tod chuki thi thi ...Abhi apni Talwar se unka kaal ban raha tha .......

unki sanhya bahut thi ......ab Rimy bhi sambhal chuki thi ...aur ab apni Fighting skills se unka mukabla kar rahi thi .......

Bahar ho rahe shor k kaaran ...Sab bahar aaye toh dekha ...ghar k lawn mein ek sangram chida hua hai ........

Ritu aur Naina aage aahi rahe the k Abhi ne unhe ishare se mana kar diya ......

Ab Rinku bhi maidan mein aagaya tha .......Abhi ne usse kisi urja ka prayog karne se mana kar diya .......Toh Rinku ne ek danda utha liya ......aur bhid gaya asuro se .......

Yaha KS apne crystal par sab dekh raha tha ......

Abhi ne jab dekha k unn asuro ki sankhy bahut hai .....toh ab usne apne Shakti trishool ka aawahan kiya ......

Yeh trishool Aakash tavta aur parashakti ki urja se parpoorna tha .......

Ssari urja aakash mein sama jaati hai ...parantu aakash ko koi sama nahi sakta .....

Abhi ne shakti trishool ki bhayankar urja se asuro par waar karna shuru kiya .....jisse asuro mein hahakar machne laga ......aur sabhi asur waha se achanak gayab hogaye .......

Yaha Ks crystalein dekhte hue .....Hmm toh asil Abhi ghar par hi hai ......toh isska arth Taltallok mein Jaane wala golark hi hai ....

Ab KS vichar karne laga ....k aakhir yeh Kank Golark k saath milkar kya karne waala hai .......

Ks jaanta tha k Kank sarv shaktishali banana chahta hai .......usse Kank par viswas nahi tha ....

KS ko pata tha k Kank kabhi bhi apne fayede k liye uske pith mein chura bhaunk sakta hai .....isilye ..woh Kank se ek doori hi banaye rakhta tha ....

Waise toh Kank ki usase sandi thi .......
Kank ks k asuro k dwara apna dabdaba Talatal lok mein banaye rakhne k liye prayog karta tha .....jisse uski satta yaha k jeevo par bani rahe ......

yeh asur gupt roop se yaha rahte the.....jo yaha ki har khabar KS tak pahunchate hai .......

KS saari baato par vichar kar hi raha tha .....k ek sainik koi sandesh lekar aata hai....

Jisase KS ko pata chalta hai Kank Golark k saath milkar kuch aisa karne jaa raha hai k Rakshak ki saari shaktiya Kank ko prapt ho jaayengi .....

KS vicahar karne lagta hai k aisa kya karne wala hai Kank jo Rakshak ko samapt kar dega .......
yadi yeh satya hai ...muzhe uske har shadyantra ka pata lagana hoga ......jisase kank ki jagah muzhe woh saari shaktiya prapt ho jaaye .......

iss samay Golark jiss gufa mein tha ....woh jagah ...Kank ki sadhna sthali thi .....jiss kaaran KS apne crystal mein Golark kya kar raha hai nahi dekh sakta tha.......

Agle Teen din Tak golark ka tahi niyam ban gaya tha ......

din mein kuch puja hawan ...raat mein kisi se maansik sampark .......aur gayab hojaana ....phir subah wapas aajana .....

abhi k liye itna hi .......
agla update raat ko .....

 

[abhi1008]

Awesome update bhai keep posting

Thanku soo much bhai aapke awesome support k liye

aise hi saath banaye rakhe ...

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[abhi1008]

Fantastic update bhai ji

Thanku soo much bhai aapke fantastic support k liye

aise hi saath banaye rakhe ...

Latest update 116 posted .....

 

[abhi1008]

Nice update brother.
Golark ka maamla solve ho gaya. Dekhte hein Kank ka kya haal hota hai.
Keep rocking.

Thanku soo much bhai aapke fantastic & awesome support & comment k liye

aise hi saath banaye rakhe ...

Latest update 116 posted .....

 

[abhi1008]

बहुत ही खूबसूरत अपडेट भाई

Thanks bhai aapke beartiful support k liye

aise hi saath banaye rakhe ...

Latest update 116 posted .....