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Fantasy ABHI -- THE WARRIOR (Completed)

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Ameer Khan Khan

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ab tak aapne dekha ki MS dharti par apne banaye drugs se charo taraf ha-hakar macha raha hai.....
aur yaha A1 4 th astra prapt kar chuka hai...

ab aage ......


mein GK k saath baitha apne agle padav k baare mein vichar kar raha tha .........ki ab Vyomastra aur Trishul kaise prapt kiya jaaye ......itna toh pata tha k yeh aakash tatva ki shaktiyan hai.......

meine socha k jis tarah Vayu tatva k astra tak pahuncha ussi tarah aakash tatva tak bhi pahuncha jaaye

toh meine aakash tatv ka apne sharir mein kendra Vishuddhi chakra par dhyan lagaya ........jaise jaise dhyan gahra hota gaya muzhe alag alag naad sunayi dene lage .....kabhi sangeet ki dhwani .....kabhi Om ki dhwani.....bas badi der tak dhyan karne par bhi kisi nishkarsh par na pahunch saka......

vichar karne laga ki ab kya kiya jaaye.
tabhi muzhe Shivali k dwara diye gaye locket ka dhyan aaya....

toh gale mein pade uss locket ko haath mein lekar meon ussase hi puchne laga ........

mein - locket ko shivali samazkar....
meri pyari Shivi mein toh bhul hi gaya tha ki tum locket k jariye mere saath ho....... itne kam samay mein tumhe muzhse kitna gahra prem ho gaya
ki itne dur se tum mera dard mahsus karti ho

aur mein hu ki tumhe bhul jaata hu ..
tabhi us locket se 2 boond paani k gire aur uska rang lal hogaya.....muzhe aise laga jaise woh meri baate sun raha ho.... aur ro raha ho


mein - arre Shivi tum kyu ro rahi ho...
aise naraj toh na ho ....aur mein uss lacket ko chum liya....toh woh gulabi rang ka ho gaya aur idher udher uchalne laga......

muzhe yeh dekhkar badi hairani hui
ki dekho kaise yeh khushi se uchal raha hai.........yeh meri saari baat samaz raha hai.....

mein - arre tum toh dekho sharmakar kaise gulabi ho gayi ho......ab aise uchalna band karo......aur batao kya tum meri sahyata kar sakti ho..

muzhe aakash tatva k trishul ki khoj hai ..parantu woh kis disha mein prapt hoga iska pata nahi chal raha hai....

tabhi woh locket shitr ho gaya aur chamakne laga usme se ek chitra pragat hua.........usko dekkar..

arre yeh toh humare aashram k Shivalaya ka chitra hai......
parantu muzhe abhi gurudev ka diya hua lakshya pura karna hai...
tum muzhe yeh batao k muxhe woh trishul kaha prapt hoga...

toh phir wahi chitra ......tab muzhe uss sivakaya mein rakhe hue ek purane trishul ka smaran ho aaya.......

idska arth yeh hai ki yeh atim astra muzhe wahi prapt hoga......lekin isse pahle gurudev se aagya maangni hogi

tabhi mera dhyan apne haath mein sthit gurudev k anguthi ka dhyan aaya

maine shraddha se usko pranam kiya
aur man mein --- hey gurudev aapke bataye hue astro mein se antim astra aashram mein hi sthit hai usse prapt karne k liye muzhe waha aashram mein aana padega......ab muzhe waha aane ki sweekriti dijiye gurudev ....

mein abhi yeh bol hi raha tha k achanak waha ka sab drishya badal gaya aur ab mein aasram mein ....ussi Shivalaya mein gurudev k saamne baitha tha........

aise achanak se yaha apne aapko dekhkar hairan ho gaya


gurudev muzhe dekhkar muskura rahe the.....swagat hai putra aakhir tumne unn astro ko paa hi liya...

parantu abhi trishul baaki hai ...

mein - Guru dev yeh sab aapke hi aashirwad ka pratap hai ....aap jaise samarth guru ka aashirwad jisske saath ho woh asafal kaise ho sakta hai............
Trishul toh yahi Shivalaya mein hai gurudev hai ....toh ussko prapt karne mein kaisi kathinayi...

Gurudev - Putra bina aatma k sharir jaise vyarth hota hai waise hi iss trishul ki saari shaktiya kahi aur bandhi hui hai jaha pahunch ne ka marg issi Shivalaya se hokar jaata hai usse tumhe khojna hoga....

ab tum jaso apne mitro ko mil lo aur kal pratha aarti k baad tum apne lakshya ki aur agrasar ho jaana....

aur mein gurudev ko pranam karke chal diya apne mitro ko milne....


jab tak A1 apne mitro ko milta hai hum dekhte hai dusri aur Roopnagar mein

yaha RVS bahut pareshani mein basement mein training hall mein idhar se udhar ghum raha tha tabhi Abhi aur naina bhi waha pahunch jaate hai

Niana - aise pareshan na hoyiye koi na koi haal nikal aayega

RVS- kaise Naina ...kaise ....kya fayeda hai inn shaktiyo ka jab hum kisi ko bacha nahi paa rahe hai

chotte chote bacche students sab jaise pagal se hue hai abhi toh sirf mahanagro aur kuch saharo tak hi yeh hi haha hai aise hi chalta raha toh
pura desh hi isski chapet mein aajayega

mein nahi dekh sakta yeh sab.......apni puri powers lagane par bhi mein yss tak nahi pahunch paa raha hu jisne yeh sab kiya hai....

aur na hi mein unn baccho ko thik kar paa raha hu.......

Naina - aise hosla haarne se kya hoga
aapne ab tak kitno ki jindagiya bachai hai .........Jab jab bhi burayi badti hai toh usske daman k liye parmatma bhi koi na koi upay dhundta hai.....

Abhi - haa dad aap pareshan na ho

tabhi Contro room se msg aaya

Sir RAW chief aapse baat karna chate hai ......phir RVS apne cell se RAW chief se baat karta hai
yes ...haa sir ....koi baat nahi mein abhi waha pahunchta hu.....aisi maut dunga usse k burai karne walo ki ruh kaanp jaayegi.....

mein - kya hua dad...

RVS - bete lagta hai k abhi sab thik ho jaayega

Raw chief k paas mere liye ek msg aaya tha ....ki .......ussmein kssi jagah code batakar muzhe waha aane ka challenge kiya gaya hai
chief uss code kovdecode nahu kar paaye ...lekin mein uss address ko samaz gaya hu
yeh lattitude aur longitude milakar jagah ka code banaya gaya hai....

now lets the hunt begins....

mein - Dad mein bhi chalta hu...

dad phir apne 5 agents muzhe lekar teleport ho gaya hum sab mask mein the........jab hum waha pahunche toh dekha ek chotta sa kamra hai jisme halki si roshni aarahi hai ....waha ek aadmi bada pareshan hokar drink kar raha tha.......

hum sab ko achanak apne saamne dekhkar woh apni chair se uchalkar gira...

aadmi - arre teri toh saala bc tut gayi re kamar......phir hamari traraf dekhkar jor se chillata hua
aree baap re bhooot ...bhooot ..bhoot


saala bc tu bhoot log apun ko maarne aayele ho kya ....kahi tum yum doot toh nahi .....saal pappu tu toh gaya re aaj ......mom ..apun ko bolti thi k galat dhanda mat kar ...lekin nai ...apun ko toh sunne kaich nai tha ...

tum 7 yumdut log akele apun ko lene aaye ho....lekin apun ko marne ka nahi gai re ....

kahkar idhar uhdhar bhag raha tha..
tabhi dad..... hmm toh tu hi hai woh jissne muzhe challenge kiya tha

Pappu - arre Sangharak bhai ...wah apun toh tumkoich dhund rahela tha

dad - yeh sab drugs failakar ab natak kar raha hai...

pappu - arre nahi nahi bhai mana ki mein harami hu lekin itna bada harami nahi hu bhai ....ki chotte chotte bacche logo ko aisi takleef pahunchau

woh toh mein tumko yeh sab karne wale ka naam batana chahta tha...

dad - toh tumne police ko kyun nahi bataya

pappu - Bhai yeh ek bahut bada zhol hai pata nahi kaun kaun saala bik gaya hai....

phir pappu MS k saath hui meeting se lekar ab tak ki saari jaankari.....RVS ko deta hai.....

aur rote hue bahi chodna nahi uss haram k pille ko , mera baccha bhi uss drug ka shikar ho gaya hai bhai..
ghar par bandhkar rakha hai ussko bhai

dad - woh durg kaunsa hai kya tum vata sakte ho...

pappu - naam toh nahi pata lekin apun k paas woh drug pada hai

apun ko bhi yeh kasm diya gayela tha magar apun ka dil hi nahi mana.....
saara drugs apun k godown mein hai

apun unko zhoot boltkar ki drugs supply ho raha hai .bachta raha

phir dad ne usse drug ka sample lekar baaki drugs ko destroy kar diya

aur pahunch gaye reasearch lab
uss drug ka antidod bannane ki koshish jaari hui......

Yaha RVS ne MS tak pahunch ne ka bada praytna kiya lekin unki teleportation ki power bhi unhe waha nahi le jaa rahi thi....

drugs k wajah se school band the

ki Maine socha ki kyu ba aaj Rimpy Ko surprise diya jaaye ....toh pahunch gaya mein unke ghar.....bahut baar unke gahr jaa chuka tha phir bhi pahle ander Rimpy k dad k pa ko inform kiya gaya aur pa ne HM uncle khar permission mil hi gayi...

ander gaya toh Uncle pa se kisi baat ko discuss kar rahe the....muzhe dekhkar......
arre beta aao .....sorry ..takleef k liye
lekin tum samz sakte ho asjkal haalat hi aise hai

jaao beta Rimpy ander hai ...

mein Rimpy k room mein pahuncha toh dekha door khula hai ...room mein enter kiya toh dekha Rimpy nahi hai

maine socha shtad bathroom gayi hogi .
mein room mein idhar udhar ghumne laga toh meri nazar almari k door par padi tabhi dekha k woh door khula aur usmein se nikli Rimpy ...

mein sochne laga ki yeh andar kya kar rahi thi ...muzhe achanak saamne dekhkar wo hadbada gaayi....

abhi k liye itna hi ....
agla update raat ko ......

sooperb update bro
 
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ab tak aapne dekha A1 Trishul ki khoj mein aashram aaya

aur pappu bhai k dwara RVS ko MS k baare mein pata chala aur drugs sample mila...

Abhi Rimpy k ghar mein gaya
usse Rimpy wardrobe se nikalte dihki....

ab aage......,.......


abhi mein Rimpy k room ko dekh hi raha tha ki meine wardrobe k darwaje se Rimpy ko dejh jo muzhe aise aapne saamne dekhkar hadbada rahi thi

mein - arre sweetu tum wardrobe mein kya kar rahi thi .....wardrobe kapde rakhne k liye hota hai.......
insaano k rahne k liye nahi.....

Rimpy - woh .....w....oh ......mein ..
kkkkkkuch nahi.....baas aaaaise hi

mein usske paas gaya - toh itna ghabra kyu rahi ho.....usske maathe par aaya padina pochte hue ......
aur dekho toh a/c chalu hote hue bhi kitna paseena aarahi hai......

aur maine usse apne gale laga liya

Rimpy - Babu tum jaante ho ki main Reasearch ka kaam karti hu

mein - haa jaanta hu .....toh issmein kya hai...

Rimpy - aao mein tumhe kuch dikhati hu
aur mera haath pakadkar wardrobe k ander le jaane lagi

mein - arre... arre yeh kya kar rahi ho muzhe isske andar kyu le jaarahi ho

tabhi ussne wardrobe ka darwaja khola ....toh ussmein muzhe ek screen dhikayi di ....woh jab uske aage khadi hui toh ussmein se ek ray nikli aur uske chehre par padi aur waha ek door open hua ...mein hairan tha yeh dekh kar .......ki kya ho raha hai ....
ek secret chamber mere ghar k nichee aur ek yaha bhi ...
jab mein ander gaya toh waha ek lab dikhayi di jaha tarah k tarah k chemicals the aur dihayi diye bahut saare gadgets ....tabhi humare saamne ek chotti bachi aayi ....

welcome mom mein aapke liye kya kar sakti hu

mein - yeh sab kya hai Rimpy ..aur yeh pyari si bacchi kaun hai....lekin yeh kuch alag tarike se baat kyu kar rahi hai ....aur tumhe mom kyu kah rahi hai....

Rimpy -- arre arre babu ek saath kitne sawal....thik hai toh suno

Yeh hai meri personal privat lab jaha mein apne experiments karti hu ...

aur yeh hai guddi meri banayi hui humanoid robot....

lekin abhi inn sab baato ko chodo aur

idhar dekho.......
woh muzhe ek screen k aage le gayi

dekho aajkal jo bimari school k baccho mein fail rahi hai jisse sab jagah tabhai mach rahi hai.

mein uspar reasearch kar rahi hu

yaha dekho meine aise hi ek bacche ka blood sample ek hospital se badi mushkil se haasil kiya ...

aur jab meine uupar reasearch kiya toh paaya k yeh koi bimari nahi hai

kuch aur hai yeh koi aisa siram ya drug hai jisse vaccho k DNA mein change aaraha hai......
its too dangerous..... lekin aam human body iss change ko accept nahi kar paa rahi issiliye woh sab pagal ho rahe hai aur apne ko hi khatam kar rahe hai......
agar kisi ki body is DNA change ko accept karti hai toh human se badal kar kuch aur ho jaayega....

shayad koi ajeeb sa jeev ya kuch aur

kyu ki jaisa change inke dna mein aaraha hai waisa dna iss dharti par kisi ka bhi nahi ho sakta...

mein - ohh god agar yeh bilkul aisa hi hai jaise tum kah rahi ho toh sach mein bahut dangerous hai yeh ...

issko rokne ka koi upay

Rimpy - Science mein kuch bhi impossible nahi hai .....agar iss duniya mein koi sawal paida hota hai toh saath saath uska jawab bhi paida ho jaata hai.....

jaha tak meine reasearch ki hai ....
toh isska antidod ussi drug se ban sakta hai jisse yeh Dna mein change aaraha hai.....

mein - Rimpy ismein hamari koi madad kar sakta hai......tum kaho toh unhe yaha bula sakta hu....

Rimpy - haa lekin iss jagah ki privacy barkarar rahni chahiye....

mein - abhi yaha itni badi problem hai aur tumhe privacy ki padi hai

Rimpy - tum muzhe galat mat samjho
yaha tum dekh rahe ho kitne saare gadgets hai.....agar yeh kisi aise k haath lage jo desh ka dushman ho toh aur nayi problem aajaayegi

mein - tumne aise gadgets banaye hi kyu jo vinash ka karan bane...

Rimpy -- Vinash toh weapons aur
atomic weapon bhi karte hai lekin woh desh ki suraksha k liye jaruri hai
isiliye .....

mein - tum iss baat ki chnta mat karo kyu ki jinhe mein bulane wala hu woh desh k gaddro k liye chalti phirti maut hai....

phir meine dad ko call lagayi.....
Mein - Agent sir shayad aap kjis solution ko dhund rahe ho woh mil gaya hai.....jaldi se aap HM sir k ghar k ander ek secret chamber hai waha aajao....

dad samaz gaye ki unhe yaha Sangharak k roop mein aana hai..

tabhi woh waha teleport hokar aagaye

unko sangharak k roop mein acahanak apne saamne pragat hote dekh kar.....rimpy ghabra gayi ..aur mere taraf dekhne lagi...

Dad - awaaj change karke - ghabrao mat beti ........

Rimpy - siiir ...yadi mein galat nahi hu toh kya ...woh hi ....RAW k famous agent hai jiske naam se hi underworld khanpta hai...

dad - bilkul thik beti mein woh hi hu

phir Maine dad ko saari baatein batayi

jisse sunkar unhe ek aasha ki kiran dhikhayi di

dad - welldone beta ...agar yeh safal raha toh saari problem solve ho jaayegi... ...kya tum humari reasearch lab chalogi.....

Rimpy sir - mein abhi sabke saamne aana nahi chahti ....yadi aap muzhe woh drug laa de toh.....
agar antidod ban gaya toh uss formula se aap apne lab mein bhi ussko bana sakte ho...

fir dad waha se teleport hokar chale gaye aur wapas uss drug k saath aagaye.

Rimpy uss drug k sample ko decode karne ki koshidh karne lagi ..

kareeb 2 hr ho gaye ussko try karte hue.
Rimpy - sir yeh drug homeopathic medecine bannane k tarike se bana hua hai ......jisme alcohal k jariye kisi bhi chij ki power nikal kar mother tincher banaya jaata hai ...

jaise poison k asar ko rokne k liye poison se hi medicine banti hai ussi tarah.....

phir Rimpy ne ek tube mein uss drug ko milaya phir koi chemical
aur uss tube k chaaro taraf 4 chote gadgets rakh diye.....jis mein se rays nikal kar uss tube par pad raha tha

Rimpy iss process mein 8 hr lagenge

aur aapka antidode tayar..

dad - hume bahut maatra mein isse banana hoga....
toh iskeliye tih hume bahut matra mein drugs lagegi

Rimpy - no sir ...ek baar yeh medicine tayar ho jaaye toh homeopathic formule se issi se hum bahut maatra mein antidode vana sakte hai...

ab hume 8 ghante intejar karna tha..

ab dekhte hai A1 kya kar raha hai...


guru ji se milkar jaise hi mein waha pahucha kaha mere saare mitr yudh kala ka abhyas kar rahe the

muzhe jab unhone aate dekha toh saare bahut khush ho gaye sab mere gale mile .....

Rakesh - abhinandan mitra jo tune prapt kita hai usske upalakshya mein aur mere gale lag gaya...

CT - yaar tu toh bilkul badal hi gaya
yeh tera shari pahle se bahut mazboot hogaya......baajuon ko chute hue

arre yeh toh kisi vajra k saman kathor ho gaye hai ....aise kya kha k aaya bahar se.....

sab muzhe bahar ki duniya k baare mein puchne lage...toh maine manda gaon ki baat batayi toh sab hasne lage

Uday - tu jitna marji shaktishali ban jaa lekin rahega langoor ka langoor hi
arre bahar ki duniya mein dhan ki awasyakta hoti hai...
Shalu sahi kahti hai tuzhe langoor

tabhi mein - acha mitr muzhe kuch kaam hai, sandhya ki aarti mein milte hai

CT - khub jaanta hu tere kasm ko

jaa sarover par ...wahi par milegi

main bhi muskurate hue nikal faya sarover ki taraf

waha jaakar maine dekha Shalu gumsum si kinare par baithi thi ek tak
jal mein dekhto hui...

jo Shalu humesha shararti aur khush rahti thi ussko aise udaas dekhkat muzhe kuch accha nahi lag raha tha

tabhi mere gale ka locket garam hone laga toh muzhe ajeeb laga...
mein locket se - ohho toh meri Shivi ko Shalu se jalan ho rahi hai...
tabhi maine uss locket ko chuma toh phir woh gulabi ho gaya aur sheetal ho gaya.
mein - Dekho Shivi mere prem par bharosa rakho.....

phir mein ek ped k piche chupkar

Shalu.... meri pyari Shalu ...tu ..badi chalu

phir meib apni gati se sthan badalkar dusri taraf chala gaya aur waha se bhi usse pukara...

meri aawaj sunkar woh charo taraf dekhne lagi ....lekin mein usse kahi par bhi nazar nahi aaya ..

toh phir woh vahi baith gayi ...

Shalu - Dekho na aaj muzhe kya ho gaya ab tum muzhe charo taraf se tumahari hi awaaj aarahi hai...

mere kaan bajne lage.....hai jaldi aajao na abhi dekho tumahare bina tumahari Shalu kya haal ho gaya hai

tabhi mein achanak usske saamne aa
gaya....

ab muzhe dekhkar ....
Shalu - mein jaanti hu ki tum yaha nahi ho....abhi mein tumhe haath lagaungi tum gayab ho jaaoge ...aur woh rone lagi....

mein usske pass jakar uske aansoo ponchte hue - arre meri shalu ki aankhon mein yeh aansoo bikul bhi acche nahi lagte ...

jab ussbe muzhe dekha ki nein sach mein uske saamne khada hu...
toh ussne jor se muzhe gale lagaya

muzhe gale lagaye woh roti rahi ..
jab thodi der baad woh chup hui toh bahut saari baatein humare bich hui

samay kaise beet gaya pata hi nahi chala.......sandhya ki aarti ...mitro k saath bhojan aur Rakesh k saath dhyan.....

Dusre din subah k nityakarm aur dhyan k paschyat mein mandir gaya

aarti khatam hone k baad mein jaha woh trishul raha tha waha gaya ...yss trishool kovdhyan se dekha toh uske ek taraf surya bana hua tha toh dusri taraf chandrama ka....

ab uss trishool ki urja ko khojne k liye uss mandir k ek ek kone ko bade dhyan se dekhne lagai tabhi ek jagah mandir ki parakrama mein piche ki aur muzhe wahi nisan dikhayi diye jo trishul par ankit the

meine unn nishano dabakar dekha toh niche ek chotta sa raasta khul gaya ..
toh mein bhi ussmein chala gaya toh dekha ek galiyaara hai ....mein chalte jaa raha tha ki galiyara tha ki khatam hone ka naam nahi le raha tha
tabhi meri drishti waha k deewar par vane hue chitro par padi.....

aaj k liye itna hi ......
agla update kal........

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aapne dekha kaise A1 apne lakshya ki aur bad raha hai

ab aage......


jaise hi maine saamne dekha toh muzhe woh dirshya dekhkar apni aankon par vishwas nahi hua

maine saamne dekha ki waha ek vishal brahma rakshas baitha hua hai aur uske paas hi mere mitr aur Shalu badhe hue hai......

waha ek bade chule par ek handi chadi hui hai ...aur woh rakshas apne ek khadag ko patther par ghis kar dhar tez kar raha hai.....

mein - kaun ho tum aur mere sabhi mitro ko aise bandhkar kyu rakha hai

Bhramharakshas(BS) - Mein ek brahmaha rakshas hu aur yeh tumahare saare mitra aaj mera bhojan banenge.........aaj hi anek varsho k baad mein jaga hu......aur muzhe abhi bahut bhook bhi lagi hai.....

mein - chod do mere sabhi mitr ki anyataha muzhe tumhe dand dena hoga...

BS -- ha....ha....ha tum doge muzhe dand ....kya tum iss shristi k nayaydhish ho ......jaao aur muzhe bhojan tayaar karne do..

mein - tum aise nahi maanoge....aise kahkar maine apni shaktiyon se uspar waar karna chaha.......parantu meri koi bhi shakti waha kaam nahi kar rahi thi.....
Shalu - Abhi ....bachalo abhi humko ..
dekho yes rakshas hume khanne ki tayari kar raha hai..........Abhi jaldi kuch karo ......bahi toh yeh hume kha jaaye ga aur sabhi frnds mera naam pukar ne lage.....

unki woh daatu aawaje sunkar mere mann mein khalbali si machne lagi..

kya karu kuch samaz mein nahi aaraha tha....ek dar bhi lag raha tha ki agar aaj mein innko nahi bacha paaya toh iss baat ka kalank muzhe jeewan bhar rahega......aur Shalu ko kuch ho gaya toh.......nahi.......nahi meib aisa nahi hone dunga......

mein uss BS ki taraf maarne k liye dauda........toh ussne muzhe dhajka mara aur mein dur jaskar gira...

Shalu rone lagi....ussko rota dekhkar meri asnkon mein bhi aansoo aagaya

BS - kyu baas nikal gaya dum ..itna hi tha.....

ussne meri taraf ek talwar bada di aur
yeh lo issase praytna karo phir mein talwar se waar karne uski aur dauda

toh ussne apne khadag k ek hi waar se talwar k tukde kar diye.....

main apne aapko asahaya mehsus kar ne laga tabhi ussne apna khadag Shalu ko maarne k liye uthaya

toh mein apni puri takat ektrit kar ke jor se chikha nahiiiiiiiii....ruk jaao

mere aise pukarne se woh ruk gaya
aur meri taraf dekhkar...

BS - kshama karna yuvak ...parantu mein inhe nahi chod ....mein bhuka hu muzhe bhojan chahiye...

mein - inhe chod do yeh iss k badle tum kuch aur khalo .....

BS - mein ek rakshas hu aur mera bhojan maas hai yadi innke badle tum muzhe uttam mass laakar de dete ho toh meim innhe chod dunga

mein - kahase laakar du mein

BS - Kahi aur se laane ki aawashyakta nahi hai....jo muzhe chahiye woh hai tumahara maas ...,..

mein - thik hai mere pran dekar bhi yadi mein kisi k jeewan ki raksha hoti hai toh muzhe sweekar hai....

Shalu - Nahi Abhi hume mar jaane do tumahare pran mulyawan hai .....

mein - jo vyakti kisi k pran na bacha paaye woh mulyawan kaise ho sakta hai ...

mein BS k saamne apni gardan zhuka kar....
mein apne aapko apni iccha se aapne aapko aapke supurd karta hu ....kripaya ab mere mitra ko chod dijiye..
Tabhi BS ne apna chamchamata hua kgadag uthaya ....aur meine aankhien band kar li .......

Jab badi der tak kuch nhi hua toh maine apni aankhien kholkar dekha
toh ekdum chakit sa ho gaya .....

kyuki mein abhi aashram k ussi shivalaya mein ...uss shakti trishul k aage khada tha........na waha BS tha

na mere koi mitr bandhe hue the
aur na hi shaalu ...

wih trishool adbhut prakash se chamak raha tha......aur usje upar ek prakash punj .....

tabhi uss prakash punj se aawaj aayi

Dhynya ho putra tumne yeh siddh kar diya ki tum inn shaktiyo ko prapt karne k yogya ho ......hum tumpar bahut prassana hai...

jo kisi ki raksha k liye apne praano k bali dan k liye bhi tayaar rahe ....woh hi rakshak banne k yogya hai

Aaksh tatva ka goon tyag hai ...
aur tum tyag ki uss pariksha mein safal hue.......yeh lo dharan karo putra ...aakash Tatva ki anant shaktiyon se paripurana Shakti Trishool

tum isski sahayata se brahmand mein kisi bhi jagah jaa sakte ho
( power of teleport)
aur woh trishul prakash roop se mere bhiter sama gaya ........usske mere bhiter sammate hi apna roop aakash saman vyapak lagne laga....

apne lakshya ko prapt kar ke mein bada hi aanadit tha....

tabhi wah Mahaguru aaye aur unhone bhi mere abhinandan kiya....mandir se bahar nikla toh dekha raat ho chuki thi ...tih mein bhi chal pada apni kutiya ki aur.....mere mann mein nitanter chal raha tha waha meri koi bhi shakiya kasm kyu nahi kar rahi thi...

phir socha gurudev se puch lunga aur aapni kutiya mein aakar baith gaya


A1 ko kutiya mein rahne dete hai Aur dekhte hai RVS kya kar raha hai

school aur college ki list se students aur teachers ka ilaj shuru ho gaya tha

kuch toh pahle hi apne aapko maar chuke the aur kuch aise bhi the Jinki body ne Dna change ko accept kar liya tha ..unnko MS apne secret addo par le jaa chuka tha woh kuch alag jeev mein badal chuke tha jinka aadha sharir manav ka tha....aur unko thi toh sirf khoon ki pyas......

baaki jo bacche the woh thik ho rahe the.......RVS ne socha ki ab toh yeh problem solve ho gayi

lekin phir ab dusre shahro aur alag alag desho mein mein yeh drugs failne laga......

govt security agencies ki ek combine meeting chal tahi thi......jisse khud HM sir handle kar rahe the

HM - Officers hum ne socha tha ki problem khatam ho rahi hai...

lekin hum galat the ..medicine hone k baad bhi hum iss drug se logo ko bacha nahi paarahe hai

Raw chief - sur pahle jin cities mein yeh drugs fail rahi thi waha ki conditio toh under control hai....

lekin ab nayi cities iss se affected ho rahi hai....

HM - Aap kya kahte ho Agent sangharak aap k paas toh special powers hai...

RVS - sir ab tak jaha yeh drugs fail raha tha waha k sabhi chotte motte dealers ka safaya ho gaya hai ......

Inn sab dealers ko supply karne wala LALA ko hum dhund rahe hai...

CBI chief - sir humne Shak k binah par DK Science and Reasearch ki saari lab seal kar sdi gayi hai...
uske MD ko bhi hum dhund rahe hai...

HM - jaldi se kuch karo nahi toh charo taraf aisi tabahi machegi ki koi bhi surakshit nahi hoga...

RVS - sir jab tak hum isske root tak nahi pahunchte tab tak aise hi chalta rahega ...hum thik karte rahenge aur woh phir hame challenge karta rahega

HM - Do whatever you want ..but i want aal the criminals dead aur behind the baars......


RVS - mere informer (pappu bhai) ne
jo bataya hai uss mein Abhi sirf 3 din aur hai usske baad poore world mein gar city mein yeh drug fail jaayega toh
hum phir kuch nahi kar paayenge..

mein apni puri koshish karunga aur aap sab officers bhi double active ho jaaiye.......its time to hunt the bloody criminals....

abhi k liye itna hi....
agla Update raat ko....

Shandaar update bro
 
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abhi tak aapne dekha RVS Rimpy k banaye antidot dwara MS k failaye vinash ko thik karne ka praytna kar raha hai.....

saari govn failte hue drug k prabhav se pareshan hai

Rvs bahut koshish karke bhi MS tak nahi pahuch paata

yaha A1 5 shastro ko prapt kar chuka hai...

ab aage......

A1 apne laksha ko prapt karke bada prasanna tha ...gurudev se milkar apni kutiya mein pahuncha hi tha k dekha waha Rakesh baitha hua tha...

main apne param mitra ko dekhkar bada prasanna hua aur ussko gale lagaya .....

Rakesh - muzhe kshama karo mitra mein aapki iss yatra mein koi sahayta nahi kar paaya.....
jab aap Jwalamukhi parvat par sankat mein ghir gaye the tab bhi nahi aa paaya........

ek sacch mitra wahi hota hai jo apne mitra ki vipatti mein sahayta kare
parantu mein chahte hue bhi sahayata nahi kar paaya......gurudev ne muzhe rok rakha tha.....mitra

mein - parantu mitra maine toh tumhe kuch nahi bataya ....phir bhi tumhe meri saari yaatra ka pata hai....yeh kaise ........tum bahut rahasyamayi ho

lagta hai tum sab kuch jaante ho mitra ....main kaun hu ...mitra ...mera parichay kya hai.....muzhe kuch bhi yaad nahi hai........muzhe lagta hai k tum sab jaante ho......muzhe batao mitra....

Rakesh - kshama karna mitra ......abhi uchit samay nahi aaya hai........abhi aap vishram karo .....kal milte hai..

mein - uff yeh uchit samay ...bhi na jaane kab aayega ......

Rakesh k jaane k baad maine kuch der locket k saath baat ki.......
aur so gaya .....

yaha RVS ....Rimpy ....aur Abhi apna poora samay drugs se affected logo ko thik karne lage....

aur Saath saath mein RVS apne 5 agents aur abhi ko lekar drugs dealers ka safaya kar rahe the.......

jis jis desh k jis city mein drugs affect kar raha tha RVS teleport hokar waha k drug dealers ka safaya kar raha tha

Unworld k log bure fas gaye the drug supply karte hai ...toh Sangharak ki talwar ka saamne matalb maut...
agar supply nahi karte hai tih MS k asuro dwara maut ......

Har desh mein sangharak k naam ki dahsaht gundo mein failne lagi

lekin isse MS ko koi farak nahi pad raha tha ab woh apna kasm maya k sahare aur apne asuro dwara karne laga......ab tak apne drugs se usne kareeb 1000 logo ko apne gulam jeevo mein badal chuka tha......

RVS ne sthiti ko apne haath se nikalta dekh ........dhyan mein baithkar mahaguru ko yaad kiya....

thodi hi der mein Mahaguru waha pragat ho gaye....

RVS - Pranam mahaguru...

Mahaguru - kaho vats ...kyu yaad kiya hume...

RVS - gurudev aapse kya chipa hai ....
aaj saari manav jaati sankat mein hai
aur jo iss vinash ka karan hai uss tak mein aoni puri urja laga kar bhi nahi pahunch paaraha hu.......

ab aap hi koi marg batayie...

Mahaguru - Putra tum jisko dhund rahe ho ....woh koi sadharan manav nahi hai........woh Asur senapati Mayasur hai jo assuri maya ka swami
hai

tum uss tak nahi pahuch sakte....
tumahari bhraman shakti
( teleportation) kewal iss prithvi lok tsk simit hai ......

aur woh aasur Prithvi lok k niche Tallok mein baithkar yeh vinash phaila raha hai....

RVS - toh kya kare gurudev kaise uss tak pahunche......

mahaguru - uss tak pahunche se pahle usske banaye hue vish se dushit hue logo ka upchar awashyak hai..

RVS - parantu Guru dev yeh drug poore vishwa mein alag alag desho k kai sharo k logo ko prabhavit kar chuka hai.....hum kis prakar unn logo tak pahunche......yeh samaz mein nahi aaraha hai .......

Mahaguru - putra kewal vigyan se iss samasya ka haal nahi nikalsakta...

tumhe vigyan k saath saath devik shakti ka bhi prayog karna hoga...

RVS - kis prakar ki devik shakti gurudev....

Mahaguru - putra Niana k paas jo Nirman shakti hai Aur Rimpy k paas jo Aadhunik vigyan ki shakti hai dono ko milakar prayog karna hoga.

shastra bhi kahte hai putra

Udyamein karyani sidhyanti


udyam hi har karya ko siddh karne ki kunji hai.....

abhi tumahare paas kewal 2 din hai

teesre din hoga ek mahayudh jo iss samasya ko samapt kar dega...

itna kahkar Mahaguru chale gaye...

aur RVS soche laga k kis prakar k vigyan aur shakti k mel se iss samasya ka hall nikala jaa sakta hai...

aaj k liye itna hi...
agla update kal....

Zabardast update bro.
 
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ab tak aapne dekha ......
mahaguru ne Naina aur Rimpy
dono ki sahayta se drug ki samasya ka hal nikalne ki aur ishara kiya.....
aur saath hi saath ek yudh ki aur ishara kiya.......

ab aage.........


RVS .........Rimpy ki lab mein Abhi ko lekar pahunch jaata hai ......

RVS - beta ....tumne iss chotti si umar mein adbhut gyan paaya hai.....
aaj tumahare hi ......karan hum iss vinash ko rok paaye hai.......

lekin abhi bhi lakho aise hai jinn tak yeh medicine nahi pahunch paa rahi hai....kya kuch aisa ho sakta hai ki hum unn tak yeh antidote pahuncha sake ...........kya kuch aise gadget hai jo medicine ko affected person tak pahuncha kar inject kar de...

Rimpy - Sir medicine ko carry kar k inject kar ne wale 5 micro robot mere paas hai , jo dikhne mein bilkul honey bee ki tarah hai.....hum unhe computer dwara operate kar k kisi patient tak pahucha sakte hai......

yeh khud kisi patient ko pehchan ke antidote inject nahi kar sakte.....

Abhi - agar innmein koi aise sensor laga de jo aurra ko dekhkar pahchan jaaye ki kaun normal hai kaun patient
toh humara kaam ban sakta hai....

yeh drug logo k dna mein badlav laa raha hai......agar dna mein badlav aaraha hai toh aurra mein bhi change aayega .......

Rimpy - haa yeh ho sakta hai ek normal person aur affected dono k body nikalne wali body heat aur waves mein bahut antar hota hai.......
yes hum yeh kar sakte hai....
lekin sir sirf 5 micro robot se kya hoga
hume toh laakho tak yeh antidote pahunchana hai.....

RVS - tum iss baat ki chinta mat karo
jald hi inn mein woh changes karo ...
Abhi tum bhi Rimpy ko madat karo
muzhe kal subah tak result chahiye

Rimpy aur abhi raat bhar apne kaam mein lage rahe aur tayar ho gaye aise 5 Honey bees robot....

RVS unn 5 robots ko Naina k paas le aaya.....Naina ne apni Nirman shakti
( power of creation) se unn 5 ko 5cr
mein badal diya aur RVS ne unnko har un jagah par pahuncha diya
jaha iss drug ka asar dekha gaya tha

aise hi pura din iss kaam mein lag gaya..
RVS ki poori team bahut khush thi ...
Rimpy aur Abhi bhi bahut khush hue

kai raato se jag kar jis kaam mein lage hue the aakhir woh pura hua....


nayi subah ki aasha k saath woh raat bhi beet gayi..

ek nayi urja k saath savera hua ...

Abhi apne room mein so raha tha....
tabhi aisa laga ki jaise ko koi thande paani ka badal uss par fat gaya ho .......chapak

ohhh ahhh ....baarish ...baarish....
karke chillate hue utha ........toh dekhta hai k poora gila ho chuka tha
aur saamne khilkhilati hue Addu haath mein khali balti liye hue....

Addu - ha..ha....hi....hi...hi..bhai....
.......Happy Holi .....hi...hi..hi

mein - Addu ki bacchi ....tu.....toh ruk jaa abhi.....batata hu ...tuzhe holi....
aur bed se uthkar addu ko pakadne k liye dauda.... woh wahi balti chodkar room mein idhar udhar bhaagne lagi...
aur abhi usske piche....

Addu - hi..hi..bhai ...muzhe nahi pakad sakte ......

mein - accha bacchu ..muzhe challenge.....tu ..ruk ab...

aur phir meine addu ko pakad liya aur uske pet mein gudguli karne laga...

woh ...hiiii....hiii...nahiii...hiii.hhhhi
bhai ...chod...do..na....

mein - bahut shaitan ho gayi hai tu gudiya......aise koi uthata hai...
dekho muzhe poora gila kar diya

tabhi mein apne bed k side table par pade hue paani k jug ko uthane k liye muda ......gudiya haath se chutkar door ki taraf bhagi.....aur maine uss jag ka paani uski aur phenka ...lekin tab tak....woh door khol chuki...thi
aur ....chapak.......
saamne Ritu di thi ...jo muzhe uthane aa rahi thi......achanak paani girne se
di bhi hadbada gayi ...

Di - Betu yeh kya chal raha hai yaha
.....subah subah paani se bhiga diye

mein - nahi di ....yeh ..addu ..ne pahle muzhpar paani phenka tha ......isiliye

lekin aap bich mein aagayi....

Di - koi baat nahi betu tum dono ruko muzhe kuch baat karni hai....mein wasroom se hokar aayi.......

di washroom mein chali gayi ...

mein - dekh ...gudiya tere wajah se di
bhig gayi.....

Addu - sorry bhai.....woh aap itne dino se mile nahi ......aur jab mein yaha aayi toh aap soye the....maine aapko aawaj bhi di lekin aap toh uthe hi nahi
isiliye...

Mein - ohh....meri pyari gudiya....mein kaise tuzhe bhul sakta hu ..woh toh mein kaam mein bahut busy tha beta
sorry...mera baccha..

aur mein kaan pakadke niche baith gaya ...toh gudiya bhi uchakar meri goad mein baith gayi aur gale laga liya

tabhi washroom ka darwaja khula aur di haath mein balti lekar.....

hum ne jaise hi dekha hum jaldi khade ho gaye....aur jaise hi door par pahuche ....tabhi mom aagayi aur idhar di ne tab tak paani ka war kar diya tha ...hum jaldi se niche baithe

aur ....chapak........aur mom poori bhig gayi..... yeh sab itne jaldi hua k mom ko kuch samaz hi nahi aaya...

mom - Ritu yeh sab kya hai....kya haalt kar di hai room ki......
tum se aisi ummid nahi thi .....

mein - sorry mom issmein didu ki koi galti nahi hai.....aap unhe mat daato

Addu -- nahi mom yeh meri...

Mom - chup ho jao sab ab ek dusre ki vakalat karna band karo.....aur meri baat suno......aaj hum sab gaon jaa rahe hai.......jaldi se ready ho jaao...

gaon ka naam sunkar hum khush ho gaye ....

yaha RVS apne family ko saath lekar Gaon pahuncha Abhi ..addu ..aur Ritu
apne Dada daadi se milkar bahut khush hue......gaon k khet pahad aur nadi mein sab ne khub enjoy kiya

innhe yahi chodte hai dekhte hai aashram mein kya ho raha hai....


Aashram k sarover k kinare A1 aur shalu baithe hue baatein kar rahe the

Shalu - Abhi tum itne din muzhse dur rahe.....tumhe pata hai....k yeh din kaise gujare hai.......pata nahi kyu ek din bhi tumhe na dekhu toh jeewan niras sa lagne lagta hai......kya tune muzhe kabhi yaad kiya tha....

mein - nahi....

Shalu - isska arth yeh hai k mein hi pagal hu ....tumahare hriday mein mere liye koi prem hi nahi hai...

aur uski aankon mein aansoo aagaye

mein uske aasoon pochte hue----
sach mein Shalu tum pagal ho.......yaad usse kiya jaata hai jise hum kabhi kabhi bhul jaate hai.......
aur tum toh meri prerna ho tumhe kaise bhul sakta hu ....aur phir shalu ko maine gale laga liya.......

tabhi mere gale mein pada locket garam hone laga jisse shalu ko chatka laga ......toh alag hote hue...

Shalu - ohh .....yrh kya hai tumahare gale mein .....garam ....issne toh muzhe jala hi diya.......

ab mein usse kya batata .....

kuch nahi ....yeh toh bas......

Tabhi CT ki aawaj se hum dono ka dhyan uss taraf gaya

CT - Tum dono ka ho gaya ho toh ....
jaldi chali .....gurudev ne bulaya hai

utna kahkar woh chala gaya....

hum bhi waha se uthkar chal diye ..

Guru dev shivalaya k prangan mein aasan par baithe the aur waha par mere sabhi mitr aur shikshak khade the

Mahaguru - baccho ab tumahari shiksha ka pahla charan samapt hua

ab tum sab ko ek yudh mein bhag lena hoga......issko tum pariksha bhi samaz sakte ho .......

yeh pariksha unhi k liye hai jo astra vidya , 5 tatvo ki vidya ka abhyas kar rahe the.....

aaj tum sab apni apni vidhya ka acche se abhyas kar lo......

kal hoga tumahara saamna ....
yeh jaan lo k yeh yudh bada bhyankar hoga ...kai kathinayi aayegi......mrityu ka bhay bhi hoga.......
tumhe usse bhaybhit nahi hona hai

yeh yuddh sansar ki raksha k liye hai
aage chalkar tumhe jis uddyshya ko paana hai uske liye toh bas yeh ek shuruwat hai.....
apne aap par aur apni vidya par vishwas rakho........
aap mein se yaadi koi aisa hai ki jisse sansar se jyada apne jiwan ki chinta hai toh abhi bata de.........

yaha unhi ko chun kar laaya gaya hai.
jinki aage chalkar ek bahut bade uddesya ko poora karne mein bhumika hogi........

mrityu se bhaybhit hone walo ka yaha kaam nahi .......
aur waise bhi - shastra kahta hai

Mrityur janmata viram dehen saha jaayate...

har prani ki mrityu usske janm ke saath hi nirdharit ho jaati hai

issiliye jeewan woh hi hai jo sansaar k kasm aaye....

Maha guru ki baate sunkar muzhe kisi bahut bade yudh ka aabhas ho raha tha.........saare waha khade shishyo k mann mein mahaguru k baato se urja si bhar gayi thi sab ek swar se tayar ho gaye.....aur apne apne kala ko aur tez bannane l liye abhyas mein jut gaye......

abhi k liye itna hi....
agla update jald hi......

sooperb update bro.
 
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ab tak aapne dekha ....drug se affected logo ka ilaj ho gaya

RVS apne family k saath gaon aagaya .......

aur aashram mein mahaguru ne shisyo ko yudh k liye tayar rahne ko kaha....

ab aage...


RVS mahal mein bane hue gupt Shivalaya mein dhyan kar raha tha k ussi samay waha mahaguru ki aawaj gunji , -- putra utho hum tumahare mahal pahunch gaye hai....

RVS ne jaise hi mahaguru ki aawaj suni ....toh turant waha se teleport hokar mahal mein jaha unke purwajo ki sabha lagti thi uss hall mein pahuncha....

Waha Mahaguru k saath unke shishyo ko bhi aaya hua dekha...

RVS - pranam mahaguru...

mahaguru - yashashvi bhav putra

waha khade A1 ne jaise hi RVS ko dekha toh usse apnapan sa laga ...
mann mein ( jaane kyu aisa lag raha hai k mera inse koi gahra naata hai)

Maha guru k saath waha aaye hue the
A1...Rakesh....CT.......uday.......shalu
vajrabahu.....lomesh.....paranjaya...
aur ..kartik
shikshako mein se bhi 5 tatvo ki shiksha dene wale...acharaya pawan
....Adniwesh......Dhara (female).....
Varun......aur acharya Vyom .....
aaye the
Rakesh ne aage badhkar RVS ke charan chuye

RVS - Kaise ho putra.....itne varsho baad dekha hai bilkul waise hi ho....
aur gale laga liya....

Rakesh ko gale lage dekhkar A1 bhi aage aaya .....aur ussne bhi RVS k charan chu liye.....jaise hi RVS ne usse dekha toh turant kandhe se pakad kar uthaya...

RVS - arre beta tumahara sthan waha nahi mere hriday mein hai ......arre waha kitna bada ho gaya hai tu....
aur A1 ko gale laga liya ....

RVS ki aankhien bhar aayi .....unke gale laga ne se A1 ki bhi aankhon mein aansoo aagaye.....woh samaz nahi paa raha tha ki aisa kyu ho raha hai...
phir RVS ek ek karke sabse mila

mahaguru - putra ab samay aagaya hai iss yudh k liye dono ko ek karne ka
tum usse lekar Shivalaya pahuncho mein isse lekar aata hu

RVS - parantu guruvar kya yeh sabhi iss yudh mein hamare saath chalenge

mahaguru - haa putra

RVS - parantu guruvar yeh toh abhi bahut chote hai.....

Mahaguru - putra yeh sab dikhne mein chote hai paratu bade se bade yoddha ka saamna karne mein shaksham hai....

tum woh karo jo maine kaha hai...

RVS phir waha se chal pada aur Abhi ko apne saath lekar Shivalaya pahuncha.....toh waha Mahaguru A1
ke saath khade the

jaise hi dono ne ek dusre ko dekha
toh hairan ho gaye....

Abhi - apne mann mein .....arre yeh kaun hai jo bilkul mere jaisa hai ....
isse dekhkar kyu aise lag raha hai...k jaise yeh mera hi ek hissa hai.....

tabhi Mahaguru ne dono ko apne paas bulaya aur unke sir par haath rakha

dono k sir par haath rakhte hi waha ek tej prakash utpanna hua jisse RVS ki aankien band ho gayi....
aur jab aankein kuli toh dono ek ho gaye......

ek hote hi waha bhayankar urja ho gayi.....Abhi ka sharir chamkne laga aur aanko se neele rang ki roshni nikal lagi.......

dono ki yaadein ek ho gayi......ab Abhi ko sab kuch yaad aagaya ki kaise usne janm liya.....aur woh kaun hai

Maha guru - Swagat hai maharakshak
ab samay aagaya hai pahle yuddh ka

Abhi - Pranam Mahaguru....mein toh kabse iss ki pratiksha kar raha tha...
ab Mayasur ko pata chalega apni seemao k ulanghan ka parinam kya hota hai........asuro.....sawadhan ..
tumahari maut aarahi hai...
KAAL.......kaha ho....

Jaise hi Abhi ne pukara toh Rakesh waha pragat hua Aur vishal Sher k roop mein badal gaya aur Abhi k saamne sir zhukakar khada ho gaya

Abhi usske sir par hasth pherte hue

kaise ho mitra ......

tabhi woh dahada

Abhi - jaanta hu mitra tum bhi dushto k sanghar ki hi pratiksha kar rahe ho
ab hoga sanghar ....phir woh loin golden prakash mein badlkar.....Abhi k ander sama gaya aur ban gaya Abhi k chest par ek tatto...



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ab Abhi ne pukara -- VAYU....kaha ho

tabhi waha ek kaal ghoda hinhinate hue pragat hua....

yeh wahi ghoda hai jisse abhi ne dada ji k farmhouse mein dekha tha.....
asal mein woh Abhi ki hi waha rahkar partiksha mein tha....yeh Abhi ka Vahan tha

Ghode ne bhi Abhi ko dekhkar sir zhukaya aur Abhi k shari mein sama gaya .....aur abhi k haath mein ek
tatto ban gaya



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usske bad teeno Shivalaya se bahar aagaye jisska darwaja Abhi k dada k room mein khulta tha....

jaise hi dada aur dadi ko Abhi waha baithe dekha toh ...Abhi ne unke pair chue

dada - wah mere sher ...aaj kuch badla badla sa lag raha hai...
aur dada ne gale laga liya

Abhi k Andar A1 ne toh kabhi parwar dekha hi nahi tha .....ab woh apne pariwar k baare mein sab jaan chuka tha.....
dada dadi ko milne k baad ab usski nazre maa ko dhundne lagi

Abhi - apne mann mei ( Jaanta hu mere yr tu maa ko dhund raha hai...
itne varsho tak tu unse dur raha hai)

phir - Abhi Naina k room mein gaya

Naina - Aao beta mein abhi tuze hi yaad kar rahi thi.....maa ko dekhkar ander k A1 ki woh yaad taza ho gayi thi jab usse aone bhiter unki chavi dikhi thi.....Aaj maa ko dekhkar usske aankhon mein aansoo aagaye aur uss daudkar maa ko gale laga liya ...

usske aansoo dekhkar maa bhi tadap uthi.....arre betu kya ho gaya kyu ro raha hai beta......chup ho jaa na...
muzhe bata...dekh tu jaanta hai mein teri aankon mein aansoo bardast nahi kar sakti....

Abhi - kuch nahi hua mom bas ....aise hi aaj bachpan ki yaadein taaza ho gayi.....ek baar phir gale lag gaya...

phir Abhi Ritu aur addu se bhi mila

aaj Abhi k andar A1 ko pariawar ka pyar kya hota hai iss baat ka ahsas ho gaya....

ab wapas Mahaguru aur apne mitro k paas pahuncha....

maha guru - Putra ab aur jyada vilamb mat karo Tal lok jaane ka maarg kholo

tab Abhi ne apne Shakti Trishool ko pragat kiya aur aakash tatva ka dhyan karte hue hawa mein gol ghumaya

waha prakash ka ek gol ghera pragat hua aur sabhi ussmein sama gaye

sabki aankhien badh ho gayi thi..

jab aankhein khuli aur saamne dekha toh ......

abhi k liye itna hi .....
agla update jaldi hi.....

Bohat hi zabardast update bro.
 

Ameer Khan Khan

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ab tak aapne dekha mahaguru apne shisyo k saath Rana mahal pahunch gaye

Abhi k do roop aapas mein mil gaye

aur Abhi ki sangharak shakti , Kaal ( Rakesh) aur usska Vahan Vayu usmein sama gaye

Abhi k dwara banaye gaye port se sab Tallok mein pahunche

ab aage ----+


Jaise hi hum waha pahunche toh dekha ki waha ki jameen pahad sab kaale hai ....ek tarah ki negative energy si waha chaayi hui hai....

tabhi waha ek badbudar hawa ks zhonka chale laga toh humne uss aur dekha jaha se yeh badbu aarahi thi

waha manav laasho ka dher tha...
kuch sadi gali haalt mein toh kuch ki sirf haddiya rah gayi thi .....aur kuch ajeeb se jeev unko ka rahe the



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hum abhi unko dekh hi rahe the k unnka dhyan hamari taraf gaya ....
aur woh kuch ajeeb si awaaje nikalne lage.........aur dekhte hi dekhte waha l000 k lagbhag waha woh jeev ikatthe ho gaye.....

CT - mein soch hi raha tha k koi toh aayega swagat k liye......lo aagaye

mahaguru ne usski aur dekha toh woh chup ho gaya....

woh jeev laar tapkate hue hamari taraf badne lage toh hum bhi tayar ho gaye

humne unpar apar apni shaktiyo k energy balls banakar fenkne lage...

lekin unpar hamare energy balls ka koi asar nahi ho raha tha

Acharaya Agnivesh ne Aag k golo se unpar humla kiya lekin ye kya ...

agni ka unko sparsh hote hi unka sharir pahle se dugna ho gaya...

abhi woh hum tak pahunchne hi wale the k Uday aur Shalu ne prithvi tatva ki urja se saamne ghane pedo ki diwar si bana di aur maine .....prithvi tatva ki urja se unko unhi pedo k tahnio se jakad diya.......

maine dekha k unn saare pedo mein aag lag rahi hai tabhi mahaguru ne kaha.....
yeh thande khoon wale prani hai (cold blooded) inko sheeth lahar se roko
aur sampt karo ....

tab acharya Varun aur Pawan ne apne urja milakar un jeevo par chodi...

aur woh jeev jamne lage ..

mein - sabhi apne apne shastro ko sambhalo ...aur jo jo jeev jamte jaye unhe samapt karo......
mainr bhi apne ek haath se jal tatva aur vayu tatva ki mili hui urja k gole unnjeevo par fenkna shuru kiya aur ek haath mein talwar lekar unka nash

Dekhte hi dekhte unn sab jeevo ka safaya ho gaya....

wahi mayasur ek kaale patter se bane hue ek mahal ek haal mein baitha apni maya se sab dekh raha tha....

MS - ha ...ha..ha....abhi toh sirf mayasur k maaya k shuruwat hai....
tum sab ki mrityu hi tumhe yaha le aayi hai

idhar sabhi jeevo ko samapt karke ,hum sab aage badne lage.....

sab satark the........
mayasur ki maaya k karan hum teleport hokar bhi sidhe usske saamne nahi pahunch sakte the...

abhi hum chal hi rahe the k jamin hilne lagi .....aur aakash se bhi hawa tez bahne lagi tabhi humne dekha ki jamin se danav bahar nikalne lage..

aur bhayankar garjana karne lage....
aur tabhi aakash se bade bade ajeeb se panchi mandrane lage......

Unn danavo ko dekhkar Vajrabahu

innko toh mein maslunga ....tabhi ussne bhi apni aankhien band ki aur woh bhi ek bade se danav k roop mein badal gaya......unn danavo ko pakad pakad kar maslne laga.....

tabhi aakash mein udne wale ajeeb se panchiyon ne bhi humpar humla kar diya......meine maha guru aur sabhi apni apni urja k gole unnpar chod rahe the.......mein bhi apni talwar se unko samapt karne mein laga hua tha....

lekin jaise jaise hum unhe samapt karte unki sankhya aur badti jaati

yaha danav bhi bad rahe the tabhi ek ne CT ko pakad liya aur aakash mein le jaane laga toh meine apne urja se usse roka...

Kartik apne urja chakro se , RVS talwar se ....Agniwesh...Varun ....Pawan ....Dhara....Aur vyom apne apne urja gole se.....Uday gada se ...Shalu talwar aur apni urja se unnpar humla karne lage ...unnki badti sankhya dekhkar ab mera krodh badne laga aur meine pukara....KAAL

tabhi Kaal ek vishal sher k roop mein unn danawo par tut pada aur meine talwar lekar aakash ki aur chalang lagayi Aur apne vahan Vaayu ki shaki se aakash mein udte hue unn pakshiyo ka sanghar karne laga...

unki badhti sandya ko dekhkar mera krodh aur badne laga ......tabhi mere mann mein mahaguru....puutra shaant ho jaao aur apne gyan netro ka prayog karo .....
tabhi udte hue maine chitt ko ekagra kar k apne chkro ki urja ko jagrit kiy aur pragat hui mere maathe ek prakash kiran .....jo jaha jaha padti waha waha danao aur udne waale jeevo ka nash hone laga....

iss tarah ek aur choti si vijay hume prapt hui.....

tabhi mere mann mein mahaguru ki phir se aawaj aayi .....putra Mayasur k maya ki urja maine yaha mehsus ki hai.....woh hume dekh raha hai....

ab hume usse wahi dikhana hai jo woh dikhana chahta hai......

main gurudev ki baat samaz gaya aur maine apna shakti trishool pragat kiya
aur uski sahayta se sabhi saathiyo ko ek raksha kawach se surakshit kar diya ...jisse mayasur ki maaya bhed nahi sakti thi......

Yaha mayasur sab dekh raha tha ki achanak usne dekha ki sab k sab gayab ho gaye abhi woh yeh soch hi raha tha ki saare kaha chale gaye...

tabhi phir saare ussi jagah dikhayi dene lage......

Mayasur ne dekha ki uske iss humle mein Mahaguru ..abhi aur baaki saathi bhi jakhmi hogaye....

MS - ha...ha..ha chale the muzhe samapt karne ab khud samapt ho jaayenge ....tabhi ussne aur bade aur khatar nak jeevo ko waha bheja.....

Maya sur dekh raha tha unn bhayankar jeevo ko dekhkar Mahaguru samet sab bahut dar gaye
phir bhi sab apni poori shakti lagakar

lad rahe the k tabhi ek jeev ne Mahaguru ko nigal liya apne guru ko aise samapt hote dekhkar sabhi hatash ho gaye.......ab unnsab mein ladne ki urja hi nahi bachi

unki saari urja woh jeev sokh rahe the aur ek ek karke sabko kha rahe the
kuch hi der mein unn jeevo ne Mahaguru aur unke sabhi shshiyo ko apna gras bana liya.....

Apne shatruo ko itni aasani se samapt hua dekhkar unnka ahankar aur badne laga.......
Ahankar hi vinash ka mool hai yeh asuro ko kaun samzhaye...

sab asur prasana the aur mayasur ki jay jaykar karne lage.......

tabhi mayasur ko ek bhayankar visfot ki aawaj sunayi di............

aaj k liye itna hi.......
agla update kal.....

Bohat hi shandaar update bro.
 

Ameer Khan Khan

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ab tak aapne Abhi & team ko mushkilo ka saamna karte hue aage badte hue dekha....

mayasur aur uske saathi apne dushman k samapt hone ka jasan hi mana rahe the......
Ek visfot ki aawaj aayi......

ab aage........


jaise bhayankar visfot ki aawaj aayi sab ka jashan ruk gaya.......

abhi Mayasur kuch karta k tabhi ek asur jo mahal k mukhya dwar ka rakshak tha ghayal awastha mein waha aaya
s.....wa..mi maaahal.. par aaakr....
bolte bolte wahi dharashayi ho gaya...

Yaha Raaste mein sabhi jeevo aur danavo ka sanghar karte hue ....

Abhi sab k saath Mayasur k mahal tak pahunch chuka tha .....Aur ussine apne agnishool k dwara bhayankar visfot se mahal k mukhya dwar ko dharashayi kar diya tha....

Mayasur ne mahal k ek uncche nirakshan stambh (minar) par se jab Abhi ...Mahaguru aur sabhi ko surakshit dekha toh usse apni aankhon par bharosa nahi hua....

mayasur - accha toh mayasur se hi maya khel......bahut accha ....hai ab
dekho meri ...maya bacche...

Tabhi yaha Abhi mahal ki aur dekh raha tha ki kahi se bhi koi khatra aasakta hai......ki tabhi dekte hi dekhte woh mahal waha se adrishya ho gaya..........

ab sab ne saamne dekha toh ek bahut hi suder phoolon se bhara hua bagicha waha pragat ho gaya jissmein ek bacchi titliyon k piche bhag rahi hai

achanak apne saamne se drishya badalte dehkar hairan the.....

sabhi uss bachi ki masoomiyat aur khilkhalti hui hasee se mohit ho gaye

jaane kaisi maya thi k sabko ab apne saathi dikhayi dene band ho gaye sab bhul gaye ki woh yaha yudh k liye aaye hai.........ab uss bacchi k jagah sabko woh nazar aanelaga jisse woh sansar mein sab se jyada prem karte hai........Shalu ko abhi.....RVS ko addu
aise hi.....sabko woh nazar aanelage jis k prati unke man mein moh ho

tabhi sab ne waha bhayankar sarp ko dekha......aur usne uss mayavi bacchi ko nigal liya sabko aisa dikha ki unka koi apna kaal k gras mein sama gaya

sab apni apni jagah baithkar rone lage

iss maya se Mahaguru aur Abhi achute the .......Sabko bilakh bilakh kar rota hua dekhkar Abhi unko Sambhalne ka praytna kar raha tha

Mahaguru - Putr hume shigra hi iss maya ko todna hoga.....
Abhi ne uss maya ko todne ka pyatna kiya lekin sab vyarth ....

Mahaguru - maya ko yadi koi bhed sakts hai toh woh hai antarman ka prakash......apne antarman ki drishti ka prayog karo.....

Abhi ne phir apne antarman mein dhayan lagaya toh usske sharir se ek divya prakash pragat hua jo waha charo taraf fayl gaya......

aur samapt hui woh maaya....
sab ki chetna wapas aagyi ...toh apne aapko jameen par baitha rota dekhkar sabko ascharya hua...

Abhi - Garajte hue ......Mayasur....
kya tum iss maya k picche chupkar apne aapko bachana chate ho murkh

himmat hai toh humara saamna karo

Mahal ki taraf se Tabhi Mayasur bahut se asuro k saath aata hu....

mayasur - bacche ab tak toh mein tum sab k saath khel raha tha.....

ab tayar ho jaao marne k liye .....

tabhi ek agni ka gola ( fire ball)
mayasur ne Abhi k taraf choda....

aur abhi ne ussko bich mein hi rok kar wapas unn asuro par choda jisse kai asur aag mein zhulas gaye....

apne war ko aise apne virudh jaata dekhkar woh gusse mein bharkar apni talwar lekar Abhi ki taraf dauda....

Abhi ki talwar aur ms ki talwar jab takrayi tho bhayankar awwaj hui

Mahaguru bhi ek trishool se asuro ka sanghhar karne lage.....Kartik toh jaise asuro k liye mrityu daata ban gayi jo bhi uske saamne aata pal bhar mein tukdo mein badal jaata.....

Rakesh bhi apne kaal roop mein apne panjo se asuro ko chir phad raha tha

RVS bhi apne sangharak roop mein apni khooni talwar ki pyaas buzha raha tha.....

Vajrabahu bhi bade se danav
(Hulk jaisa) lekar asuro ko masalraha tha...

Uday shalu , CT aur sabhi aacharya apne apne tatvo ki urja se aasuro ko mukti pradan kar rahe the .......

yha mera yudh mayasur se jor se chal raha tha dono ek dusre k war ko bakhbi rok rahe the.....

tabhi ms saamne se adrsya ho gaya abhi mein usse dekh hi Raha tha

ki tabhi talwar ka jor dar prahaar meri pith par hua aur gunji cheekh....nahiiiii

yeh aawaj shalu ki thi jo muzpar prahar hone se vichlit ho gayi thi...

lekin uss prahar se muzhe kuch nahi hua ......maine apne shari par dekha k ek kawach aagaya....mein soch hi raha tha k yeh kawach kaha se aagaya

toh uper se aawaj aayi ......mitra iss mahayudh k liye muzhe bhul gaye tabhi mein uss aur dekha toh waha
GK Khada tha.......yeh Kawach Shivali ne bheja hai.....

aur ab GK ne bhi apne bhitar se apne mayavi danav pragat kiye aur bhid gaya....
yaha ab mein .....mayasur pith par humla karta hai......

Ms - ha...ha..ha baato mein samy na gava yudh kar ....aur abki baar woh ek gada se muzh par humla karne laga ...toh main bhi apni gada se uspar waar karne laga......meri gada k prahar se usski gada chur chur ho gayi......
aur meine ek jor ka waar uski chatti par kiya.....jisse usdke muh se khoon nikalne laga .....ab woh waha se gayab hokar .....aakash se humla karne laga

mein bhi apne vahan Vaayu ki shakti se aakash mein udte hue usspar humla karne laga.......

Mayasur baar baar chipkar waar karta unmein se kuvh muzhe lage aur thode bahut ghav bhi ho gaye.....

tabhi Maine apne agni shool aur aur Vayavastra ki prachand urja ko milakar .....mayasur par prahar kiya

aur woh aakash se dharti par aagira..

maine socha ki ab isska khel khatam ho gaya hai....mein bhi niche aagaya

toh dekha ki mayasur bahut jakhmi ho gaya tha badi mushkil se khada hone ka prayatna kar raha tha ....

tabhi uske chere par ek muskan ubhri
mein uski muskan ko samaz paata ki usse pahle muzhe ek cherkh sunayi di

ahhh ...Abhiiiiiiiiii......Maine dekha ki Shalu dur bahut jakmi haalat mein thodi dur par padi thi .......mein uske aur bada hi tha k mere saamne ek maha bhayankar asur Krodhsur aagaya ....tabhi Mahaguru...

putra tum Shalu ko dekho.....tab tak mein isse sambhalta hu...

aur mahaguru usse ladne lage aur main ..pahuncha shalu k paas.....

Shalu ka sir goad mein rakhkar....
Shalu kyu kiya tum ne aise .....kya samazti ho tum apne aapko ....shalu utho.....utho.....nahi...mein tumhe kuch nahi hone dunga......shalu

hua yeh tha k jab Abhi Mayasur ko dekhraha tha ki tabhi Krodhasur ne apni prachand urja ...se uupar piche se humla kar diya ......toh Abhi ko bachane k liye ....Shalu bich mein aagayi.....

Shalu -- Aaaabhhii tum thik toh ho na
aur apna ek haath abhi k gaalo par rakhte hue......lagta hai tumahara saath yahi tak tha ...aaaaahhhh.....
aabhii...mein tuumse ....aur sahlu ki aankhien band ho gayi....

Abhi - Nahhhhiiii Shalu tummm aise nahhhi kar sakti.....

Ab abhi ka krodh bahut badh gaya tha
bhayankar garjna k saath.....
Sabhi dur haat jaao ab sirf mein hi inn ka sanhaar kauruga ...

abhi k shari se bhayankar urja ki lapte nikal rahi thi .....aur gunj uthi sabhiasuro ki chikh pukar ......abhi ka bhayankar roop ho gaya tha jaise Mahakaal hi shrishti k sanghar k liye pragat ho gaye ho....
kuch hi palo mein sabhi asur raakh mein badal gaye.....mayasur waha se bhag chuka tha .....lekin sirf ek hi asur Krodhasur Abhi k saamne data hua tha...
jaise jaise abhi ka krodh badta jaata waise waise....krodhasur bhi bad raha tha.....aur bhayankar garjana k saath abhi par war kar raha tha .....

sabhi dur khade dekh rahe the.....

Mahaguru abhi ko kuch batane ka praytna kar rahe the ....lekin abhi k iss bhyankar roop k saamne woh bhi bhi jaa paa rahe the.....

Abhi krodhasur k praharo ko badi muskil se zhel raha tha ...kya kare kaise iss asur ka saamna kare...
kuch samaz nahi aaraha tha...

rabhi usske fale mein pada locket chamakne laga.......aur uss mein se aawaj aayi

shant ho jaao Abhi ....dhyraya se kaam lo ...yeh asur tumahari krodh se hi urja prapt kar raha hai aur tumahare shaktiyo ko apne bhitar sokh raha hai

agar tum shant nahi hue toh sab samapt ho jaayege.....

locket se aanewali aawaj Shivali ki thi

Abhi ab apne aapko shant karne laga
aur OM ka uchaaran karte hue....

hriday chakra ko jaagrit kiya jisse ek divya sheetal prakash Krodasur par pada aur woh tadapne laga dekhte hi dekhte usski saari urja samat ho gayi
aur phir woh kahi vilupt ho gaya....

yudh samapt hua.....Abhi apne ghutne k baal jamin par baith gaya
Ohhh Shalu ...muzhe ...kshama kar ..do ..mein tumhe nahi bacha paaya....
mein hi tumahare prem k laayak nahi hu ......

tabhi ek haath Abhi ko apne khande par mehsus hua aur piche mudkar dekha toh Shalu Dhara ka sahara lekar khadi thi apne dard ko apne bhitar chupaaye Abhi ko dekh rahi thi....

Yahi toh prem hota hai...

Shalu ko dekhkar mein jaldi se utha aur gale laga liya.........usse jeevit dekhkar.....muzhe aisa laga jaise sabkuch paa liya ho....

Dono ek dusre ki bahoon mein sab kuch bhul gaye ki yaha sab log unhe hi ghur ghur kar dekh rahe hai.....

Tabhi CT - arre mitra ab bas bhi karo
hum sab yaha khade khade budde ho jaayenge ...

tabhi hum alag hue Shalu sharmajar Dhara k pichhe chup gayi ....aur main bhi sharam k maare sir zhukakar khada tha....

tabhi mahaguru aaye aur muzhe gale laga liya -- Bahut bahut abhinandan
putra iss vijay k liye

Mein - gurudev yeh hum sab ki vijay hai.....yadi aapka aasirwad na hota aur sab ka saath na hota...yeh vijay mere liye kathin thi

Tallok aasuro k naash baad bahut sunder ho gaya tha har taraf hariyali
sunder sunder pushpa charo taraf khil rahe the.....aur uss kaale mahal ki jagah Chamakta hua swarn mahal

RVS - gurudev kahin yeh bhi koi maya toh nahi......

Mahaguru - nahi putra ..asuro k yaha aane se pahle Tllok aise hi tha jo aasuri shaktiyon ki wajah se ujad tha

lekin ab unke vinash k paschyat ab woh apne asli roop mein aagaya tha

Mahaguru - Shalu Tumahare pita yaha k Raja the jinki hatya Karke mayasur ne apna shashan sthapit kiya...

ab tum iss lok ki Rani ho ...Putri Abhi tum chotti ho isiliye ...Dhara Aur Aacharaya Varun tumahare saath iss Rajya ka karyabhar sambhalenge....

Phir Mahaguru ne Shalu ka
rajyabhishek kiya .....aur phir Acharya Varun aur Dhara ko waha chodkar sab wapas prithvi lok pahunche ...

Shalu Abhi se dur hone par bahut dukhi thi....paratu apna kartavya ki poorti k liye Apne pita k parya ko aage badane lagi.........

Abhi ne bhi usse aane ka Vachan diya tha......

Prithvi lok pahunche se pahele Abhi ne Apne shakti trishul dawra ek kawach ka nirman kar diya tha jisse ab koi asur patal se prithvi par na aasake..
parantu abhi bhi pritvi par lobha sur mohasur gupt roop se manav man ko prabhavit kar rahe the

Prathvi par pahunchne k baad Abhi k sharir se mahaguru ne A1 ko alag kar diya aur apne shishyo aur A1 ko lekar
aashram pahunch gaye....

aur Abhi apne pariwar aur frnds k saath .....samay aage bada ....
ab Abhi ka admission College mein ho gaya, aur ab sabhi tarah k fighting skills aur technology mein expert ho gaya tha
.....addu ...Dehradun k school mein apni padai kar rahi thi...
Ritu apni padai poori kar chuki thi...
Aur apne papa k saath bussiness ka kaam dekh rahi thi ....
naina ka samay apne baccho aur pati
ki khushi mein guzarne laga....

aaj abhi ka college mein pahla din tha
Bada hi khush tha....apni college life k shuru hone se.....

abhi k liye itna hi.....

agla update jald hi.....

Sooperb update bro.
 
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