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Fantasy ABHI -- THE WARRIOR (Completed)

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Ameer Khan Khan

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ab tak aapne dekha .........
Rasatal mein sthit naaglok..
ki Rajkumari kisi ko apna pati maan chuki hai.....

Aur yaha Rimpy k saath pyar k kuch pal.....bitane Jaha Abhi gaya tha......waha talab k kinare ek ladki ghyal aur behosh awastha mein mili..,..

ab aage.......


Abhi ne uss ladki ko paani se bahar nikal diya......dono ussko uthane ki koshish karne lage.....

Rimpy ...ne ussko pulse check karte hue-- .....abhi hume jaldi se isse hospital le jaana hoga......iiski pulse bahut dheere dheere chal rahi hai.....

Abhi ne apni usse heal karne ki koshish ki lekin sab bekar........

sochne laga ki isske upar meri healing power kyu istemal nahi kar rahi......
aakhir yeh hai kaun.......iss jakhmi aur behoshi ki haalat mein bhi isske chehre ka tez aam insano se alag hai..

Abhi ne usse goadi mein uthakar hospital le gaya......aur admitt kara diya......doctors k bahut koshish k baad bhi uss ladki k haalat mein koi sudhar nahi aaraha tha......

uss ladki ko dekhkar jaane kyu ...Abhi k dil mein ek dard sa ho raha tha.....

Abhi ne usske mann mein bhi zhankne ki koshish ki lekin koi aawaran usse aisa karne se rok rahi thi.........

iss sab mein bahut der ho gayi thi....

Rimpy ko ghar chodkar.....Abhi apne ghar aagaya......

Aur apne hi khayalo mein khoye hue
apne room ki aur jaaraha tha

Tabhi mom ki aawaj aayi.....

Mom - betu....aaj bahut der kar di...
aur kya hua ...kuch pareshan sa lag raha hai......

mein - Kuch nahi mom bas ...thoda thak gaya hu.....woh sports festival ki tayyari chal tahi hai......

Mom - dekh betu .....tu...muzhe .zhoot bhi nahi bol sakta......teri aankhien kuch aur kah rahi hai.....

aur mom ne mere sir par haath phere
mamta ka woh sparsh mere sir par hote hi meri aankhon se aansoo beh nikale......aur maa ne muzhe gale laga liya......

mien - pata nahi maa...aaj muzhe aise lag raha hai.....koi mera apna dard mein muzhe pukar raha hai....muzhse dur jaa raha hai......lekin itni powers hote hue bhi.....na toh mein uss aawaj tak pahunch paa raha hu ......aur....jaan paa raha hu ki woh kaun hai.........

mom - Betu ek baat dhyan rakhna ...ki tera janm ek bahut bade udeshya k liye hua hai.....tu aisa kamjor nahi pad sakta........Tridev tere saath kuch anarth nahi hone denge......

maa ki baate sunkar mere dil ko kuch aaram mila......

aur mein Addu k room ki aur chal pada .......jab mein andar gaya toh Addu aur Deepu dono ek saath padh rahe the.......

Mein - aare wah ...lagta hai khub jamkar padai ho rahi hai.......

Meri aawaj sunkar dono daud kar aaye aur muzhe gale laga liya....

Addu - Bhai aaj aap kaha the......mein pata hai aapka kitna wait kar rahi thi...

Mein - wait .....aur woh kyu betu.....

Addu - Kitne din se aap hume bahar nahi le gaye......chalo na bhai bahar...chalte hai ........phir hum ice cream bhi khaayenge......

mein - gudiya hum icecream toh yaha ghar mein bhi kha sakte hai.......

Addu - nahi ...muzhe ...jaana hai matlab jaane........aur muh fulaye khadi ho gayi.....

Mein - arre gudiya....thik ..hai ..ok done.....lekin ....Ritu di ko aane do ..
unhe bhi saath le jaayenge...........

Addu khusi se uchal kar gale lagi aur mere gaal par ek kiss kar di......

Deepu - bahi muzhe bhi le jaaoge.....

Mein - kyu nahi chottu.....tu bhi toh mera bhai hai.....aise kyu bol raha hai

phir mein apne room mein aagaya aur fresh hokar ...bed par baithe baithe aaj hui baaton k baare mein sochne laga......

Addu se milkar ab muzhe halka mehsus ho raha tha......aisa humesha hota tha......k jab bhi main pareshan hota......toh usse baat karke meri saari pareshani aur dard dur ho jaati

Tabhi mahaguru ne jo baat Addu k baare mein batayi....ki woh pranshakti ki dharak hai......toh muzhe ek aasha ki kiran nazar aayi........

lekin isske liye muzhe addu ko waha lejana hoga......

yeh sab sochte sochte meri aankh lag gayi......aur door par ho rahe Knock....knock...ki aawaj k saath khul gayi.....

meine door khola toh dekha Ritu di thi

Di - yeh kya hai betu ....Addu toh bol rahi thi...ki.....aaj ...tumne bahar ghumne ka plan banaya hai...tum ho ki sorahe ho........Addu...Deepu..toh kab se tayyar hokar baithe hai......

mein bhi tayar hogayi.......ti bhi jaldi ready hokar niche hasl mein aaja .....

Aur di chali gayi.......mein bhi tayar hokar niche chala...gaya......humne...pahle park jaane ka socha.........aur hum nikal gaye...

abhi thodi hi dur ghar se humari gaadi ..nikali hi thi.....ek buddha se bhikari gaadi k aage aagaye......Car ko break lagate lagate gaadi thodi usse touch ho hi gsyi....aur woh saamne sadak par gir gaya.........mein turant.....car se nikal ....aur usse sambhale laga...

Mein - arre baba....kahi chot toh nahi aayi......yeh driver bhi na .....dekh kar nahi chala sakte....


Budda - Beta usse mat daanto......meri hi galti hai.....ek toh buddhape k kaaran muzhe dikhayi nahi deta.....aur mein bina idhar udhar dekha sidha sadak paar kar raha tha

Mein - kaha jaana hai baba chalo hum tumhe chod dete hai.....

budda - beta tum kyu takleef lete ho....mein jaha rahta hu...waha tumahari gaadi nahi kaa sakti.....
tum bas muzhe sadak ..paar karwa do

phir maine usse sadak paar karai

aur wapas gadi mein aagaya.....

(Woh buddha jaane kyu gaadi ki taraf dekhkar muskura raha tha....usske aankhon mein alag hi chamak thi)

mein bhi yaha soch raha tha ki kahi toh iss baba ko maine dekha tha ...lekin ..kuch...yaad nahi...aaraha....

Phir hum park pahunche......uss park k ek kone mein baccho k khelne k liye bahut kuch tha.......waha aur bhi bacche ......Addu aur Deepu waha khelne mein magan hi gaye......

Mein aur Ritu di waha baithe kuch college ki toh kuch business ki ..toh kuch maatru sadan (anath aashram )
ki baatein kar rahe the..........

Tabhi mera dhyan Addu ki taraf gaya
jo zhadiyo mein na jaane kya dekh

rahi thi.....bina hile dule.....Deepu usse aawaj de raha tha lekin woh sun hi nahi rahi thi.......tabhi mein waha gaya toh dekha......ek kaala bada sa
Lagbhag 20 ft lamba naag tha......

Aadu uski aankhon mein dekhkar bilkul stabdh si khadi thi......

muzhe dekh kar woh naag waha se chala gaya ....aur addu ko hosh aaya

Addu muzhe dekhkar ....gale lag gayi
bhaaaai woooh saaap...bahut bada

mein - kaha hai saanp aadu yaha toh kuch nahi hai.......chalo ab bahut khelna hogaya.......

Phir mein waha se ek Acche se Restaurant pahuncha......

jaane kyu aisa lag raha tha k koi humara piccha kar raha hai......

maine jaanne ki koshish ki lekin nahi jaan paaya......
socha mera waham....hoga.......

Hum wahi ek table par baith gaye
aur humne khane ka order diya....

khana bahut tasty tha......khane k baad dessert ka order kiy aur Addu aur Deepu k liye unki fav ice cream

mein - Di jab tak Ice cream aati hai...
tab tak mein wash room se hokar aata hu.......

jab mein wash room se bahar aaya ..
toh dekha koi adhed umar ka aadmi
di aur addu se kuch baat kar raha hai

Jabtak mein table pahuncha woh aadmi chala gaya tha......

abhi table tak pahunchta tabhi kisi ka call aagaya .....mein - hello


udher se - Kaise ho mere pyare dushman.......

Mein - kuan ho tum ....aur tumhe yeh nu kaha se mila......

woh - mein kaun hu woh chodo......
bade rakshak bante ho ......pahele apne bahen ki raksha toh kar lo.....

jab mein table ki taraf dekha toh ..Di aur Addu waha nahi thi.......idhar udhar dekha toh.....woh restaurent k bahar nikal rahi thi.......mein tezi se un tak pahuncha......tab tak woh sadak par pahunch chuki tih tabhi ek truck full speed mein uss aur aata dikhayi di

Mein - diiiiii...Addu....lekin woh kuch sun hi nahi rahi thi.......Truck unhe kuchalne hi wala tha k......

aaj k liye itna hi.......
agla update jald hi......

Sooperb update bro
 
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ab tak aapne dekha......
Abhi Ritu..Addu...Deepu....k saath ghumne jaata hai.....
waha Ritu aur addu ko kisi adhed k saath baat karte hue dekhta hai....
aur ek rahasymai vyakti ka ph
Ritu aur addu ki taraf truck tezi
se aana.....

aur ab aage........


Jaise hi truck ekdum kareeb aaya Ritu aur addu ko rondne hi wala tha
ki.......dhadammm............

ek bhayankar aawaj k saath uss truck k saamne k parkhache ud gaya aur bhayabkar takkar se dhua utha.....

uss bhayankar aawaj se Ritu aur Shalu par jo kisi ne Sammohan kiya tha woh tut gaya......jaise hi dono ko hosh aaya
Dar kaare dono ek dusre ko chipak gaye......sab ka dhyan iss aur gaya..
aur jab dhua hata....toh waha khada tha Sangharak (RVS ne ab apni powers bhi abhi ko dedi thi, aur ab Abhi tha Sangharak)

logo ne Sangharak ka naam bahut suna tha........waha logo ki bhid ikatthi ho gayi thi........

Tabhi saamne aaya.....aur Ritu se aawaj badal kar.....Aap thik toh ho na
kahi kuch chot toh nahi aayi......

Ritu ki ghabrahat k kaaran aawaj hi nahi nikal rahi thi ....fir bhi.....himmat juta kar......k...kkkkan ...h..oo....tum

Abhi - Main hu Apridhiyo k liye maut
jo muzhe Sangharak k naam se jaante hai....

jaise hi kuch logo ne naam suna toh waha logo mein kusur phusar hone lagi ....kuch log naare lagane lage
Sangharak...Sangharak...

aur Abhi teleport hokar normal dress mein bhid k picche aagaya....aur daud kar Ritu aur Addu ko gale laga liya..

Abhi - Dii maine kitni aawaje lagayi lekin aapne toh meri aawaj suni hi nahi....yadi aapko kuch ho jaata toh...
mein....bhi nahi rahta.....

Ritu - Rote hue.....pata nahi bhai bas muzhe itna yaad hai mein kisi se baat kar rahi thi uske baad kya hua....muzhe kuch bhi nahi pata....aut jab hosh aaya....toh mein yaha thi....

Addu - Bhai jaldi se chalo yaha par....
muzhe bahut dar lag raha hai....

Mein - Na ....gudiya darte nahi....mein hu..na.......abhi ne usse gale lagaya aur sir par haath pherne laga.....
usske baad.....Restaurent se Deepu ko liya aur ghar ki aur nikal gaye....

Car mein baithe baithe sochne laga
ki aaj ka din hi kuch ajeeb tha....

pahele woh ladki....phir woh naag...aur ......ab yeh haadsa

Tabhi abhi ko ph bajne laga toh dekha ussi Unknown nu se call aarahi hai...

Abhi iss samay call nahi utha sakta tha......lekin krodh ki wajah se uski aankhien laa ho gayi.....

Addu gadi mein bhi addu ko pakad kar baithi thi......

Ritu di gumsum si baithi thi ....Deepu ko toh kuch pata nahi tha...

aise hi hum ghar pahunche......aur apne Room mein chale gaye.....Addu mere hi saath thi....mom ko humne bata diya tha ko bahar se hi kha kar aaye hai.......

Addu mere paas hi so gayi thi.....
Maine apni team ko mere cell par aaye hue call ko trace kane k liye kaha

Ab mera cell meri team k saath connected tha......tabhi muze call aayi

Udhar se - ha...ha...ha..Bahut khub Rakshak.....aakhir tune bacha hi liya ...lekin kab tak......

mein - haramjade.....tu ek baar saamne aaja.....phir dekh teri aatma bhi punarjanam lene k liye daregi...

Woh - arrre ..arre...arre..itna gussa..
saamne bhi aaunga....abhi toh shuruwat hai....abhi se ghabra gaye..
ha...ha...ha......

aur call cut ho gayi ....
tabhi shalaka ko call aayi....

sir aapke saath baat karte hue usne 4 location badli......hume samaz nahi aaraha hai yeh ussne kaise kiya....
its impossible....

Mein - woh sab chodo usski aakhri location batao.....

aur mein teleport hokar uss jagah pahuncha ....woh ek gufa thi.....
jab mein ander gaya toh waha....koi nahi tha......jab maine charo taraf dekha toh ek kagaj par kuch likhawat dekhi.......likha tha ......
lets begins the race....Rakshak....

Apradhi kitna bhi shatir ho lekin koi clue chod hi deta hai........

niche galti se ussne sign kiye tha...
jaha chote se akshar mein likha tha
SR

Mein wapas aagaya......socha ki kaun ho sakta hai.....aur sign ka photo click karke shalaka ko bhej diya.......

vichar aaya....yeh kya ho raha hai ...uss ladki ko heal karna chahta tha nahi kar paaya.....iss anjane dushman tak pahunchna chahta hu lekin nahi pahunch paa raha hu......
sign dekhkar kuch kuch toh shak hua
lekin......phir socha yeh kaise ho sakta hai.......

aaj ki iss hadse k kaaran Abhi addu ko uss ladki tak nahi le jaa paaya....

socha ki kal dekhte hai.....

muzhe nind nahi aarahi thi socha kya karu......tabhi Rimpy ka khayal aaya toh thodi der ussase baatein ki.....

phir bhi mann ashant tha.....ki locket chamakne laga......

mein - sorry jaan aaj k iss vyastata mein tumse baat karna hi bhul gaya...
aaj mera mann bada ashant hai....
kash tum yaha aasakti.....

tabhi wah ek roshni pragat hui.....
aur ussmein se nikli meri pyari Shivali

woh kuch bolne hi wali thi....k maine addu ki taraf ishara karke chup karaya aur usse lekar teleport hokar chat par chala gaya......

Chat par pahunchte hi ...

Shivali - kya hua jaan ..kyu itne pareshan ho......

mein - kya tumhe nahi pata.....tumahara toh mann is locket se juda hua hai na....

Shivali - muzhe sab pata hai......lekin aap kyu bhool jaate ho ki aap is shrusti k maharakshak ho......
aisi badhaye toh aapke saamne aati hi rahegi.......aur bhavishya mein toh ...

Mein - kya bahvisya mein.....batao

Shivali - abhi nahi jaan.....muzhe kshama karna......

mein - kya tum muzhe prem nahi karti

Shivali - aisi baat mat karo jaan .....tumahare liya toh mera saara jeewan samarpit hai.......paratu Baba ne tumahri kasam dekar batane se mana kiya hai......bas itna hi bata sakti hu k bhavisya mein aane wale sanket se kewal ...tumhe sansar ki nashvarta ka gyan hi bacha sakta hai

mein - thik hai tum ab jaao .....aur mein mud gaya......

ussne piche se muzhe baahi mein bhar liya.....aise toh naraj na ho jasn nahi toh mein jee nahi paaungi...aur usski aankon se aansoo behne lage jinhe maine apni pith par mehsus kiye

mein palta aur usska chehra pakad kar usdke aansoo ka pine laga...

mein - jaan mein tumse kabhi naraj nahi ho sakta......woh toh bas aise hi

aur meine apne honth usske hontho par rakh diye aur chumne laga , iss chumban mein sirf pyar tha vasna ka lesh maatra bhi nahi tha.....

thodi der aise hi hum ek dusre ki baaho mein the......meri saari pareshani usske pyar ne har li thi.....

Shivali - Jaan ab humare milan ka samay aane wala hai ....abhi 15 din baad Aanewali Shivraatri par humara vivah hoga......

phir woh chali gayi....aur mein bhi apne room mein aakar so gaya tha

Dusre din urhkar maine aoni daily routine puri ki......Abhi bf ready nahi hua tha toh socha Dad se mil lu

Dad , mom aur didu hall mein baithkar news dekh rahe the....ussmein viral videos k upar programme aa raha tha....

News reader - ab aap agla video dekhe
ek hi raat mein yeh video poore world mein fail gaya hai.....

deko kaise ek Rahasymayi insan ne teji se aate truck k parkhache uda dite aur do ladkiyo ko bachaya.....

phir kal wale hadse ka video chala...


Dad aur mom meri taraf dekhne lage

tabhi news reader - Kya jiss Sangharak k nasm se poora underworld kaanpte hai....yeh wahi hai yaa koi aur........123 is number par sms karke baataye......har news ki poori khabar dikhayega humara channel.....

Dad - Beta yeh sab kya hai itna kuch ho gaya aur tumne hume bataya nahi

Di - Dad meine hi betu ko mana kiya tha batane k liye.......socha aap pareshan ho jaaoge.......

Dad - beta mere liye meri pareshani se jyada tum sab important ho....

Tab tak bf aagaya tha.....Addu aur Deepu bhi niche aagaye the.....

Dad ne call karke family ki security ko aur bada diya aur di Deepu aur Addu ko kisi anjan se milne k liye mana kiya

maine pahele hi subah uthte hi sabko apne shakti trishul ki shield se surakshit kar diya tha....


Tab tak Rimpy aagayi .....aur hum chal diye college......

Clollege mein aaj bhi daily ki tarah practice hui......aur kuch padai....

Abhi k liye itna hi .....agla update kal

Readers k liye -
kya aap mein se koi bata sakta hai ki woh anjan dushman kaun hai.....


aur ab tak ki kahani mein Abhi k honewali patniyo mein se kitno ka jikar hua hai......

Shandaar update bro.
 
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ab tak aapne dekha.....Abhi ko rahsyamay dushman ka ek clue mila..........Abhi ke udvighna Mann ko shivali ne shaant kar diya tha..........

ab aage..........

Abhi ne Shakti trishool se banayi shield dwara apne pariwar aur apne ghar ko surakshit kar diya tha......isisliye ek Gufa mein baithe.....Vichtra se dikhne wale aadhe manav aur aadhe k saath
woh anjana dushman......jisne kaala chonga pehna hua tha......jissase unska muh nahi dikh raha tha ....Apne saamne rakhe Crystal k gole ko ghur kar dekh raha tha......kaha gaya tu Rakshak......

yeh kaise possible hai.......nahiiii mere malik ki shaktiya apaar hai........tuzhe nahi chodunga Rakshak........
jaise tune muzhe mere apne ki maut k aag mein jalaya hai.....waise hi ab main bhi tuzhe woh dard dunga .....jissase ....tu tadapta rahega...........ha....ha...ha......


sammne jal rahi aag mein ussne .....ek katore mein bhare kisi insaan k taaze khoon ki aahuti di..........
Aur agni aur bhadak uthi......aur uss prakash mein chamak utha MLA Sudhakar ka chehra.......

ab sawal yeh aata hai ki issne itni shakti kaha se haasil ki ........
toh dekhte hai chota sa flashback.......
Darasal jab MLA ko mara samazhkar ...Abhi ki team ne usse jungal mein uss chod aaye jaha pahle bhi kai apradhiyo ki laasho ko thikane lagane k liye laaya jaata tha.........waha.....

Mayasur k drug se ....jo ...insaan ajeeb se jeevo mein badal gaye the woh issi jungal mein ek gufa mein rahte the iss jagah ko , Mayasur ne aise band diya tha ki koi jeev bina kisi shaitan k Pujari ki aagya k bina bahar na jaa sake.......MS k jaane k baad woh jeev yahi bandhkar yeh gaye....yaha fenki hui laasho ko aur jungli janwaro ko khakar ....apni bhuk mitane lage.....

Jab MLA apni maut k bahut kareeb tha...toh raat ko wahi jeev yaha aaye.....aur jaise hi woh usse khane k liye aage bade......toh unke leader ko MLA ki body mein kuch hulchal , aur usske shari mein bahut maatra mein negative energy mehsus ki........

jisse dekhkar un jeevo ka leader bahut khush hua .....usse MLA mein yaha k bandhan se aazadi nazar aane lagi.....
phir ussne MLA ki body ko le jaakar...gufa k ander MS k dwara sthapit ek Kaale patther par chod diya.......uss samay MLA khoon se sana hua tha......
MLA ke khoon se woh patthar san gaya aur ussmein se ek kaale rang ki urja nikli ....aur MLA k body mein sama gayi.......kuch hi der mein woh ekdum thik hua .........
aur aawaj aayi .......Eblis ki.......

aur issi gufa mein apna badla lene k liye Eblis ki sadhna karte hue powers haasil ki........


Yaha Abhi apni team k saath baitha tha ......
Shalaka - sir Aapne jo sign ki ..pic bheji thi woh pata chal gaya hai kiski hai .......humne ajj tak jiss bhi gang ka safaya kiya.....usske saare leaders ki writing humne kahi na kahi se nikali aur uss Sign se match kiya........and the resiut is shocking.....

Abhi - muzhe pata hai....k...Woh MLA SUDHAKAR ka sign hai,

Arnold - Lekin sir ...how is this possible...........woh toh mar gaya tha......aur jaise ki aapne bataya....ki usske paas kuch special powers hai...
agar woh MLA hi hai toh usske paas powers aayi kaha se......

Abhi - woh toh mein pata kar hi lunga.......lekin iss baar usse aisi maut milegi k dekhne walo ki ruh kaanp jaayegi.........

Phir abhi ne Control room mein baithkar saare shahr ki gatividhio ko dekhne laga.......Jab se RVS ne apni shaktiyan aur Sangharak k saare adhikar Abhi ko diye tab se Ghar k nicche basement mein bane control Room ab Abhi aur usski team hi dekhti thi.......

Shalaka - Sir Shahar mein ek koi E company naam se koi Company aayi hai........aur aate hi ussne.......yaha ki bahut saari choti ...moti companies kharidi......

Aur saath hi xyz college bhi kharid liya hai....

Abhi - kya kuch illigel activities ka pata chala

Shalaka - nahi sir.....sab kuch normal hai.....aur toh ussne aspke dwara chalaye jaa rahe anath aashram ......aur Nari niketan mein sab mein koi total 100cr diye hai.....
humne pata karne ki koshish ki ....Lekin ab tak hume iss E company k Owner k baare mein pata nahi chala........

usski baatien Sunkar ....jaane kyu Abhi k chehre par muskurahat aagayi.......

Abhi basement se nikalkar ...ghar aagaya...aur Addu k room mein chala gaya....


Addu abhi k diya teddy ko pakad kar baithi thi.......

Abhi - kya kar rahi ho gudiya......

Addu - arre bhai aap......maine toh dekga hi nahi.....

Abhi - usske sir par pyar se haath pherte hue......aise kya soch raha hai mera baccha....jo mere ander aane ki bhi khabar nahi hui........

Addu - bhai agar mein maar jaati toh.....

Abhi -- Adduuuu....chup kar beta aisa nahi bolte.....

Addu - Nahi bhai ....muzhe bahut dar lag raha hai.......

Mein - Addu .....accha tuzhe woh yaad hai.......
jisne ussdin tumhe bachaya tha ....kya naam tha usska...
sssss...saang...kya

Addu - haste hue......bhai.......Sangharak.....
aur bhai woh kitna power ful hai......kaise ek punch mein ...truck ko tod diya tha.....aur usske paas magic bhi hai....kaise gayab ho gaya tha......
bhai.....lagta hai woh koi ....Super Hero....hai...

mein - accha gudiya milegi Ussi Super Hero se.......

Addu - haa ..lekin yaha kaha hai bhai Super Hero....

mein - pahle tu apni aankhien band kar....
phir Addu ne apni aankhien band kar di
aur Abhi apne sangharak roop mein aagaya.....

mein - Gudiya ab aankhien kholo
Jab ussne aankien kholi toh hairan hui

Addu - bhai aap kaha ho.....

Mein - Gudiya mein hi Sangharak hu....

Addu - Arre bhai wah.....aap toh Super hero ho......ab mein nahi darungi bhai...
mein dono baahe failakar.....aaja meri gudiya...
aur Addu ko maine gale laga liya......
mere iss roop ko dekhkar ab usske andar ka saara dar dur hogaya .....

mein - Gudiya mere saath
chalogi......tumhe ek didi se milana...hai.......

Addu - kaun hai bhai woh.....
mein - Gudiya woh bahut bimar hai ...hume usse milne jaana hai

Phir mein Addu ko lekar hospital ki chat par teleport ho gaya...

Addu - arre wah bhai aapke pass toh sachmuch ka magic hai....hum ghar se sidha yaha aagaye ...

mein - gudiya lekin yeh baat top secret hai ...promise karo tum kisi ko nahi bataogi....

Addu - promise bhai.....

phir hum chal diye ussi room k oor jaha woh ladki admit thi ...jo muzhe jakhmi haalat mein talab par mili thi......
iss samay doctor usska check up kar rahe the...

mein - Sir...kya..kuch....sudhar..
aaya.....

doc - hum apni poori koshish kar rahe hai.....

abhi mein inki blood report hi dekh raha tha....hairan karne wali baat hai , ki inka blood aam insano jaisa nahi hai.......aur kaun se group ka hai yeh bhi pata nahi chal raha hai.......

maine socha ab yeh doc bawal machayega....

toh usski memory mein se saari baatien maine hata di....
phir dr chala gaya......

ab addu aur mein usske bed k paas gaye..

Addu - Bhai innko kya hua hai......

mein - betu tum hi inka haath pakad kar puch lo

toh addu ne jaise hi usska haath pakda...ek urja si maine addu k sharir se nikalkar uss ladki k ander jaate hue maine mehsus ki.....

usski body mein hulchal shuru ho gayi
aur usski aankhien khul gayi.....
aankhien khulte hi woh idhar udhar dekhne lagi.....

usski neeli aankhon mein jaane kaisi kashish thi....

ki na jaane kyu mein ussmein khota chala gaya....
jab usski nazar Addu padi......

Addu - arre dekho na bhai innko hosh aagaya......
didi aap kaun hai aur aapko kya hua....

ladki - mein....meinn...kaun hu......aur yaha

Addu - bhai inhe toh kuvh bhi yaad nahi hai...
jab uss ladki ne meri taraf dekha toh usski aankhon mein aansoo aagaye...aur zhatke se uthkar mere gale lag kar roti rahi ......aur rote rote behosh ho gayi...

phir mein addu aur uss ladki ko lekar ghar k ek room mein teleport ho gaya......

ussko waha bed par litaya.....woh Addu ki pranshakti se bilkul thi thi bas kuch maansik pida k kaaran behosh ho gayi thi.......

Addu thodi der muzhse baatein karke apne room mein chali gayi

aur meine niche aakar Mom Dad ko saari baatein batayi....
dono jaakar uss ladki ko dekh aaye.....

Ritu di ghar par nahi thi.....woh nariniketan k kuch kaamo mein busy thi........

Phir aaya ek naya savera.......phir subah routine k baad mein dhyan mein baitha

jaise jaise dhyan gahra hota gaya......7 chakro ki urja muzhe dikhne lagi.......aur dikhi kundalini shakti jo do muh wale sarp ki tarah....

Mooladhar chakra k niche hamari 3 mukhya nadi
IDAA.....PINGALA....AUR SHUSHMANA

kundali shakti Shushmana naadi k dwar par saade teen phere lekar baithi hoti hai.....
isske jagrit hone par vyakti anant shaktiyon ka swami ho jaata hai.....

Aaj achank Sarp shakti kundli ka darshan kar k , mein apne ander aur jyada shakti aur urja ko mehsus karne laga.....

Dhyan mein muzhe mahaguru ki aawaj aayi...

Putra ab samay aagaya hai , tumahare 14 loko ki shaktiyo ko prapt karne ka...

isski shuruwat .....Bhuvalok k yakshya lok se hogi...

dhyan k baad mein ek baar phir uss ladki k room mein gaya

woh abhi so rahi thi .....uska maasum chera dekhkar jaane kyu aisa lag raha tha ki mera issase koi gahara sambandh hai......


usske baad Rimpy k saath masti karte hue College gaya.......

abhi k liye itna hi ---
agla update jald hi.......

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ab tak aapne dekha k Abhi ne Rimpy ko apna sach bata diya....
aur addu ki Pranshakti se hospital mein uss Ladki ko thik karke ghar lekar aaya


ab aage......

College mein kuch khas nahi hua....bas thoda yr dosto se milna...
thodi padai......Sports practice.....aur Rimpy k saath thodi masti...


Sham ko jab mein college se ghar aaya....toh mom muzhe lobby mein hi baithi hui mili

mein - hii mom....aur unke paas hi sofe par baith gaya...

mom - arre mera betu.....shukar hai aaj apni mom k paas baith gaya.......kitne din se tuzhe sahi se dekha tak nahi.....

mein - mom ki godi mein sir rakhkar lete hue..

Mom aap toh sab jaanti ho ......college aur Rakshak ...Sangharak.....bas issi mein itna ulaz gaya hu ...k chahkar bhi mein samay nikala karta.......

mera bhi bahut mann karta hai aapki mamata ki chav mein thoda aaram kar lu......

mom mere baalo mein haath pherte hue .....

jaanti hu mere bacche......aur samzhti bhi hu ...........tu har din kitne khatro ka saamna karta.......usse ...dekhkar ...kabhi kabhi ek maa ka dil ghabra jaata hai.....

aur maa ki aankhon se do bund aansoo k mere chehre par aa gire
mein mom k ansoo ponchte hue.....

mein - kyu chinta karti ho mom......
aapke bete ko kuch nahai ho sakta.....
accha mom...uss ladki ko hosh aaya k nahi.....

mom - haa beta hosh toh aagaya lekin usse apna naam tak yaad nahi......

pahele toh bahut der woh gumsum si thi lekin Addu ki baato ne uss normal kar diya

abhi addu aur deepu bhi ussi k saath hai........thodi hi der mein Addu usse itna ghulmil gayi
mein chalo mom dekhte hai , Mein bhi jara dekhu toh......

aur mein mom k saath uss room mein chala gaya....waha jaakar dekha toh waha teeno Tv par Jurassic world dekh rahe the.....woh Addu k piche dubakkar baithi hui thi aur dheere se addu k piche se garden nikalkar Tv k taraf dekhti aur phir Dubak jaati...
usski iss harkat ka Addu aur Deepu khub maza le rahe the.....

mein - Gudiya yeh kya chal raha hai....

Deepu - Dekho na bhai yeh didi tv par yeh dinosar dekhkar dar rahi hai ...kahti hai yeh muzhe kga jaayega.....hiii...hi...hi...

Addu - Haa bhai isse toh kuch bhi pata nahi hai ...kabhi tv dekhkar dar jaati hai.....kabhi...light dekhkar......

mein - tv band kar deta hu......

mom - Addu galat baat.....aise kisi ki hasee nahi udate beta....

Addu - sorry mom.......

Mom - uss ladki k paas jaate hue.....
kaise ho beta ab ......dekho tum isse apna hi ghar samzho....

mein usske paa jaakar.........ab kaisi tabiyat hai tumahari......

woh garden niche karke baithe hue thi....aur waise hi apni aankho ko upper karte hue........

muzhe kya hua hai........muzhe toh mere naam bhi nahi pata..........kal maine tumhe dekha tum muzhe maar rahe the na.....

Addu - arre buddhu ...(.apne sir par haath maarte hue....) bahi maar nahi rahe the tum hosh mein aakar bhai k gale lagkar ro rahi thi......

woh - mein buddhu nahi hu ....aur kisi choti si bacchi k tarah muh fulakar baith gayi..

uski iss ada par muzhe bahut pyar aaraha tha.....dil kah raha tha k abhi gale laga lu...

mom - arre kyu pareshan kar rahi ho isse aur usske sir par haath pherte hue....

Meri taraf betu isse toh apna naam yaad nahi hai.....lekin kuch toh naam hona chahiye...

Mein - mom isska naam Sulekha hai.......

Sulekha - meeeeraa naam Sulekha ..haa.....lekin muzhe kuch yaad kyu nahi aaraha hai......


phir sir padakar.....muzhe dard ho raha hai...........ahhhh......

tab meine usske sir par haath rakhkar apne healing power ka istemal kiya toh usska dard khatam hi gaya.........aur woh meri taraf dekhne lagi

Sulekha - kya aap muzhe jaante ho......muzhe kyu aisa lag raha hai k meine aapko dekha hai
maine usske aankon mein usske jeewan ki kuch zhalkiya dekhi....usske mata pita...sakhi saheli......aur usska woh meri painting banana......

lekin uske saath kya hua kaise woh ghayal hui aur yaha pahunchi.....
yeh sab nahi dikh raha tha....jaise koi anjani shakti muzhe rok rahi thi...
ab mein usska mere prati pyar jaan chuka tha....

mere prati usska itna gahra prem dekhkar k woh apna naam tak bhul gayi ....lekin dil se meri tasveer bhula na paayi......tabhi toh hosh mein aate hi jab muzhe apne saamne dekha.........

gale lagkar maano aansoo se apne judai ka dukh bayan kar rahi ho, uske iss pyar ko dekhkar meri aankhien bhi nam ho gayi.....

Sulekha - aap kyu ro rahe ho....aapko aise rote dekhkar mera bhi rone ka mann kar raha hai...

Mein - arre mein kaha ro raha hu..woh toh bas aankhon mein kuch chala gaya hai...

aur mein waha se nikal gaya......

apne Room mein aakar sochne laga ki woh kaunsi aisi shakti hai jo muzhe Sulekha k past tak pahunchne nahi de raha hai.......

pahle toh mein usse heal bhi nahi kar paa raha tha.......lekin aaj.......lagta hai kisi bahut powerful shakti ne isspar koi magic kiya hai.....
jo addu k pranshakti se thodi kamjor ho gayi....

ab sulekha ghar mien ghul mil gayi thi
Addu aur Deepu k saath khub banti thi....
meine kai baar notice kiya ki usski aankhien muzhe hi dhunti rahti thi.....

aur jab mein ussase baat karne jaata....toh sarmakar bhag jaati....
Khair aise hi din bitne lage......aur Mahashiv raatri ka din nazdeek aaya.....

Hum log har saal apni Shivraatri gaon k Rana mahal mein hi manate the ..

toh maine college se 4 din ki chutti li......Rimpy bhi humare saath jaarahi thi......Addu Aur Deepu ne bhi school se 4 dino ki leave le li thi......

MahaShivraatri k 2 din pahele hum nikal gaye gaon ki taraf.....

Pahli gadi mein mom aur dad the....
dusri mein main baith gaya toh meri dono taraf Rimpy aur Sulekha baith gayi

Sulekha ko mere saath bahith dehkar Rimpy ko gussa aaraha tha aur Rimpy ko mere pass baithe dekhkar Sulekha usse kha jaane wali nazar se dekh rahi thi
aur dono k bich mein main fasa...tabhi meri jaan addu ne bachayi

Addu - bhai muzhe aur Deepu ko aapke saath baithna hai

Rimpy - Gudiya Tum Sulekha di ko lejao

Addu - nahi .....muzhe bhai k saath hi jana hai

aur phir Rimpy aur Sulekha Ritu di k saath baith gayi aur mein baccha party k saath.....

Sham hote hote hum gaon pahuche, Panchi apne gharo mein laut rahe the , unhe dekhkar hume bhi aise laga k duniya ki bhaga daudi kar ke hum apne ghosle mein aagaye ho.....

Dada dadi Gate par hi badi besabri se humara intejar kar rahe the
pahle Dad aur Mom ne unka aashiwad liya

phir jaise hi main pair chune laga tih dad ji ne muzhe kas kar gale laga liya...


Dada ji - Aa gale lag jaa mere sher...
kaisa hai mere bacche....

mein - aapke aashirwad se ....accha hu dada ji

phir Ritu di .....Rimpy.....Addu ..Deepu...aur Sulekha bhi dada dadi se mile

Dadi ji ne Sulekha k baare mein pucha toh ....Dad ne unhe sab bata diya

Dada ji - badi pyari bacchi hai....(sir par haath pherte hue) kuch yaad nahi toh kya hua .....ab hum hi tumahara pariwar hai....


phir hum sham ko sham ko gaon ke nadi kinare ghumne chale gaye....

waha ki shudh hawa , pahadi charo taraf hariyali...aur nadi ka bahta kal kal karta hua paani , sahar se dur prakriti k paas ......sab ek dum khush the......

Rimpy toh mera saath chod hi nahi rahi thi.....aur Sulekha bas dur se dekh dekh kar ..udaas si ho rahi thi......

nadi k kinare chalte chalte hum pahadi k najdik ek band pade mandir k paas pahunche......iss mandir ka darwaja band tha.......jane kitne sadiyo se band tha.....yeh mandir aam mandiro se alag tha mandir charo taraf .....Dragon jaise kisi jeev ki murtiya bani hui thi.....

maine socha dada ji ko iss baare mein jarur pata hoga.....unse hi puch lunga.....

phir hum wapas mahal aagaye........

Dada ji se jab uss mandir k baare mein pucha ...toh unhone taal diya.......kaha samay aayega toh tumhe khud hi iss baare mein pata chalega.....

aise hi do din bit gaye aur ab aaya Maha shivraatri ka din.......

Mahal mein subah se hi pooja aur hawan ki tayari chal rahi thi........
mein dada ji aur dad k saath Mahal k gupt Shavalya gaye....

waha humne Rudraabhisek se Bhagwan bholenath ka poojan kiya...
pooja khatam hi hui thi k mere gale mein pada locket chamakne laga.......

toh mein samaz gaya ab yaksha lok jaane ka samay aagaya hai.....

mein - dad ab muzhe apni pahli shakti prapt karne k liye jaana hai ........
lekin samaz nahi aaraha Aaj k din mere na rahne par sab kya sochenge......

tabhi mere locket se ek aur Abhi nikla jo bilkul meri hi tarah tha......mein sochne laga ki yeh ab kaha se aagaya.....meine toh isse nahi pragat kiya .........

Tabhi waha GK pragat hua ......mitra yeh Shivali ki mayavi vidya dwara rachit hai ....

jab tak aap apna waha ka karya poora nahi kar lete tab tak yeh yahi rahega.....

phir mein GK k saath nikal gaya Bhuva lok mein sthit Kuber ji ki nagri Alkapuri..

yaha pahuch kar maine apne sukshma sharir ki urja ko badaya ....toh muzhe woh nagar dikhayi diya....


aur mein pahuncha Waha k mukhya Shivalya.....Shivali se milne ki umang mere mann ko sungandhit kar rahi thi......

aaj k liye itna hi.....
agla update kal........


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Abhi Alkapuri k saunadrya ko dekhte dekhte Shiv mandir pahuncha.....


Shivalaya k mukhya dwar ko divya pushpo se sajaya gaya tha.......
Aur uss dwar k dono taraf yaksha kanya haath mein pushpo k thal lekar khadi thi.....

aur wahi paas mein Bade bade dhol ...aur nagade bajane wale the.....

jaise hi Abhi waha pahuncha .....uska swagat bade jor shor se hua......

Andar pahunchkar dekha toh ....Shivalaya ka prangan nagar pramukh yaksho se bhara pada hai........

GK abhi ko ek kaskh mein le gaya.......Abhi ki nazare Shivali ko khoj rahi thi....

GK - Mitra abhi aur thodi pratiksha kar lo........vivah se pahele aaap unhe nahi dekh sakte....

mein - koi baat nahi mitra......lekin tum mere saath hi bane rahna.....yaha itne logo k bich ...muzhe kuch alag sa lag raha hai.......aur pahli baar vivah kar raha hu na....

GK - ha...ha....ha....kya...mitra ...aap..bhi

Tabhi waha Kuber ji aagaye.......Alkapuri k Raja swayam Dhan k swami Kuber ji ko waha dekhkar yaksho ki bhid badne lagi......
Kuber ji ne Abhi ko honewale vivah ki shubh kaamnaaye dekar......aur upahar swaroop ek divya haar......jisse pahen kar na bhook lagegi na pyas
dekar chale gaye......

Ab GK ne Abhi ko Swarn Alankaro aur mukut se sajaya....
aur Vivah mandal par le gaya......
.waha jab Shivali apni sakhiyo k saath aayi ....toh Abhi jaise stabdh rah gaya........

Saikdo chandrama k sheetal prakash sa chamakta hua uska saundariya shabdo mein nahi bataya jaa sakta......laal vastro mein bahut sunder lag rahi thi....

usski aankhon ki chamak aur adharo ki muskan .....advitiya thi....
woh bhi Abhi ko iss roop mein dekhkar mantra mugdha si ho gayi thi....
phir Dono ne pahle milkar Shiv poojan kiya......aur phir poori hui Vivah ki rasme.....

Shivali k Pita ji ...jo mandr k mukhya pujari........woh aaj bahut bhi prassna the.....
k aaj unke beti ki iccha puri ho rahi hai.....
Aur saath hi saath udaas bhi.....kyu ki ab woh unse dur jaarahi hai

Vivah ki rasmein poori hone k baad .....Sabhi sakhiyo ne Shivali ko milan kaksh tak pahunchaya...
jo pura phoolon sr saja hua tha.....

waha jaakar Shivali saje hue bister par baith gayi aur apne priyatam ka intezar karne lagi

Tabhi GK bhi Abhi ko kaksh tak chod gaya....

Abhi jaise hi ander gaya......toh Shivali ko ghunghat odhe baithe hue dekha......

woh uss aur bada.....Shivali ka hridaya joro se dhadak raha tha....,..

Abhi usske paas baithte hue .....Shivu ..dekhogi nahi meri taraf .....aur usse dheere se pakad kar apni or modte hue.......
usski thuddi ko apni ungli upper karta hua........Uff Shivu......tumahara yeh saundrya ....muzhe aur ghayal kar raha hai......ab aur der tumse dur nahi rah sakta hu.........aur abhi aage badte hue
usko bahon me...bhar leta hai...

Or uski aakhon me dekhne lagta hai..... dono ab apne dil ki baate aakhon se kar rahe the. .....dono ki garm saase ek dusre ko uttejit kar rahi thi.
Dono ke hont najdik aate ja rahe the. or fir mil jaate hai..... Or dono ek dusre k honto ko chusna suru ka dete hai. bahut hi dhere -2 ek dusre ke honto ko chus rahe the. ....athah prem or milan ki aas.....dono ko aur adhir kar rahi thi.....

Abhi uski peth par haath pher raha tha..... ukahdti saansoo ne unka chumban tod diya.... lekin fir se dono ke hont mil jate hai...... par is bar chumban thora sa aur gehra tha..... Abhi k haath kapdo k upar se Shivali ke badan par chal rahe the..... dono k iss milan se waha ek urja utpanna ho rahi thi.....chumban phir se tuta dono ek dusre ko dekh rahe the..... ek khushi si jalak rahi thi dono k chehre par......

Abhi Shivali ko dekhte huye use bister par lita deta hai. or ..... uske paas let jata hai. or apne honto ko fir se uske honto pe rakh kar chumne lagta hai.....or apni jeeb ko bhi uske muh me dal deta hai. ....Shivali bhi uski jeeb ko chusne lagti hai...... Abhi ka hath is samay usske ke nange pet par chal raha tha ...,aur. wo usko rahla raha tha...... or niche hath apna kam kar raha tha......Abhi ne apni ek ungli uski gahari naabhi mein rakh kar kuredne laga tha. ....to Shivali aur uttejna se uske honto ko chusne lagi.... Or apni jeeb bhi usne Abhi ke muh me gusa di..... . ab Abhi ka jo haath pet ko sahla raha tha. ..woh neeche ki or aane laga aur Shivali k sarir ki uttejna aur badne lagi...... uski yoni se kuch bunde nikal gayi thi.

Abhi k haath ab uske stano tak pahunch chuke the.... . Shivali ko toh kuch hosh hi nahi tha....Abhi ka haath stani par mehsus karte hi ....uska jism kaanp gaya......Abhi usse makmal jaise mulayam stano ko dabane laga

Shivali - Jaaann.....sssss..ahhhhh.
..yeh ..kkaisa...ahsas hai

Shivali madhosh si hoti ja rahi thi. ....Abhi ne ab usske stano ko vastro k aawran se aazad kar diya......kesar mile hue doodh ki rangat liye......aur gulabi ....nipple.......

Abhi ne kiss todi .....aur baith kar iss sundarta ho niharne laga...

Shivali ne jab dekha Abhi uske stano ko dekh raha hai.......toh sharmakar......apne dono haatho se stano ko chupane ka prayas karne lagi....

Abhi - yeh kya jaan .......aise sharmaogi...toh kaise humara milan hoga.....
aur uske haath ko hata kar .....deere -2 dabane laga......

Shivali -- ssss..ahhhh...haa...kkkya karu......ufff...jaan ....muzhe lajja bhi aarahi hai...

Abhi - haye meri Shivu........ milan bhi chahti ho aur sharam bhi aarahi hai.....
ab Abhi ko sabra nahi ho raha tha. ..

..ab woh niche ki aur sarakte hue..... uski grdan ko chumne laga........ or wo niche ki or badhne laga or uske hath Shivali k stano ko dabane me lage the. .....ab wo uske stano ke bich ke hisse ko chumne laga .....uske gore stano ko dekh kar to wo bhi bahut uttejit ho gaya tha.... gore gore aur gol stano par chamakte hue gulabi nipple.......

Shivali ki aisi awastha thi k .........ek to usko sharam aa rahi thi.....aur dusra wo aur jyada uttejit hoti jaa rahi thi....,..Uski yoni kaamras baha rahi thi. .....

Abhi ab Shivali k gulabi nipples chusne laga..... ab usse ruka nahi ja raha tha. .....Abhi ka ek haath ab uske lehnge ka nada kholne lag gaya tha......aur ab woh sirf panty mein thi........aisa nazara dekhkar ......Abhi ko ab sabar karna mushkil ho raha tha.....

to wo uske upar se uthkar kadha ho jata hai apne sare kapre utar deta hai. or ek dum nirvastra.. uski or badta hai. .....pahele toh Abhi ko iss tarah dekhkar Shivali ne apni aankhien band kar di......phir dheere dheere kholkar Abhi ko dekhne lagi........
.
Par uske ling ko dekh kar ussne apni aakhen fir band di.......dheere se phir aankhien kholkar dekhne lagi.......wo uske tane hue vishal ling ko dekh kar or bhi uttejit hone lagi.......sath me dar bhi lag raha tha..... ki itna bada ling jab uske andar jayega to uska kya hoga......

Is samay kai tarah ki bhawnaye usske mann mein pragat hone lagi......dar bhi tha, uttejna bhi thi, atha prem bhi tha aur stri ka gahna....lajja..bhi.......

Shivali - aise mat dekho. na...jaan .....muzhe bahut sharam aarahi hai....

Abhi – Dekh raha hu ...Shivu....
tumahare is adbhut saundrya ko jaan…….
aur mehsus kar raha hu tumahare prem ki gahrayi ko...

Shivali Abhi k aankhon mein apne liye atha prem dekhkar.....Usska haath pakad kar apne upar khich leti hai.....aur chumne lagti hai..…

Abhi bhi ab usko chumte hue niche ki aur jaane laga.....

ek adbhut saptrangi urja unke shair se nikal rahi thi.....

Abhi ab shivali k nipple ko khub chusne laga aur uska ek haath pet se niche hote hue ....panty k upar se ....shivali ki yoni ko sahlane laga

Apni yoni par Abhi ka sparsh mehsus kake Shivali toh jaise kaanp gayi
usski siskariya aur tez ho gayi.......jisski aawaj abhi ko aur jyda uttejit kar rahi thi

ab Abhi niche ki aur aane laga or pet par chumne laga...aur uski naabhi mein jibh chalane laga

Shivali – oooohhh aaaahhhhhh, aaahhhh…. Haan.....ufff ....jane ....kya ho raha hai....saare sharit mein jaise urja ki adhikta ho gayi....hai....kuch alag si tarange ...sharir mein daud rahi hai...... ohhh aaahhhhh

Ab abhi ka haath usski penty k andar chala gaya.....Shivali ki garm ...makhmali....aur kaamraas se bhari hui yoni ka sparsh hote hi.....
dono k sharir ko zhatke lag rahe the.....Abhi uski yoni ko sahlane laga...

dono ki siskariyon se woh kamra gunj raha tha

abhi uski yoni ko masalta hua....ab....usski jangho ko chumne laga.....ek..haath..se...yoni...ko...masalta....aur...ek..haath..se....usski...jangho...ko...sahlane laga........Shivali ki ...yoni kaamras...se..bhar..gayi...thi..

Shivali - sshhh...ahhhh....jaan.
.kuch...karo..na..ab..aur muzhse sahan nahi ho raha ...yeh..kaamagni...kahi..muzhe..jala..na..de....

ab Shivali ka haath bhi Abhi k ling par chala gaya tha....woh usse haath mein pakad kar sahlane lagi

Shivali k naram haato ka apne ling par sparsh paakar....Abhi...ki..saanse aur...siskariya or tez ho gayi.....

Abhi - ahhhhh...ufff...sssss..
jaan...haa..aise..hi....tumahare..iss sparh ne ahhh

ab Abhi se aur sabar nahi hua aur usne ...Shivali ki penty nikal di...
usski gulabi...smooth....
fuli...hui..kaamras...chodti hui yoni ko dekh kar toh jaise woh pagal ho gaya....aur pagalo ki tarah yoni ko chumne laga....aur jibh se usski yoni ko kuredte hue...kaamras pine laga....

Shivali usske sir ko dabati hui.....ahhhhh jaan yeh kya kar diyaa....uff ..yeh..kaisi.....agan ..hai..
uffff....jaan ab aur....der....mat...karo..ahhhj
aur woh abhi ko khichne lagi....
abhi samaz gaya.....aur woh ab 69 position mein aagaya....
usska ling
Shivali ko chu raha tha

jisse woh aur jyada uttejit hone lagi....
yaha abhi usski yoni ko chus raha tha....

aur Shivali ...ling ko muh mein lene ka prayatna kar rahi thi......
usne apna pura muh khol kar ling ko muh me lene ki kosis ki.... Per wo gaya hi nahi....

toh Shivali fir se kosis karti hai..... or apna pura muh khol leti hai.... or uske supade ko honto me daba kar kosis karti hai. is bar thoda ling muh me tha.... lekin usske liye yeh bahut kathin tha.....

ussne chusna chod kar ling ko chatne lagi or chat chat kar uske pure ling ko gila kar deti hai.

Dono ab apni vasna k charam par pahuch chuke the......isiliye ab
abhi piche hat jata hai. ....or usko bister per lita deta hai.

Shivali bhi iss milan k liye aatur thi... ...Abhi ab Shivali ke uper tha or uski yoni par ling ko set kar diya tha..... lund yoni ke upper rakhte hi dono madhosh se ho jaate hai ...... or ab ek pal bhi nahi dono se ruka nahi ja raha tha. ......

usne turrant hi Shivali ki kamar ko kas ke pakad kar usko apne niche daba liya... Or dheere 2 andar dalne laga......
Shivali ko bahut adhik dard hone laga....

Shivali - ahhh....jaan...yeh ...pida....lagata hai jaise mere pran nikal rahe hai....

Abhi - ling ko bahar nikalta hua ....shivu....tumahara dard muzhse dekha nahi jaa raha.....

Shivali - Yeh dard toh har kuwari kanya ka sapna hota hai...jaan.....aap....ek hi baar mein poora ander kar do...jitna dard ho....mein sahlungi...

ab abhi ne ek jor ka zhatka lagaya.... Uska ling uski yoni or uske kuware pan ko chirta hua ade se jayda ghus gaya. ....Shivali ne kaskar apna muh band kar diya....aur dard sah liya.....usski aankhon k kinare se aansoo nikal pade....aur chehre par muskurahat.....…phirvbhi ek siski nikal hi gayi..... Aaaaahhhhaaaaa….

Abhi ne turrant hi dusra dakka laga diya or is bar pura ling andar tha...... or wo andar kisi chij se takra raha tha...... Shivali ki ek or jordar chikh gunj uthi.....

Abhi is par bhi nahi ruka or fir ling dheere 2 ander bahar karne laga....Or dheere 2 Shivali ka dard ....aanand se bhari siskiyo mein badalne laga

Ling bina ruke aage piche ho raha tha. or Abhi ka muh uske stano ko chusne me laga tha.... tabhi Shivali ke hath uske sir ko pakar kar dabane lagta hai... to abhi ki najar uske chehre par padti hai. ....uske chehre per dard ...

milan ki khushi... behte aashu...aur sambhog ka aanand....k bhav ek saath the......

Shivali ki yoni bahut adhik maatra mein kaamras chod rahi thi....ab ussko maza aane laga tha....
wo jor jor se siskiya le rahi thi or badbada rahi thi – aaaahhhh or chusiye… kha jaiye inko…. Aaahhhh jor se dakke maro na jaan… bahut maza aa raha hai ab ….. aahhhh oohhh ssss aaahhh aaahhh or tez karo….

Abhi - ahhhh ufffff jaan ....yeh milan bada anand dayak hai..ahhhhh
aur Abhi k dakke tez hote ja rahe the...... yoni me pani ki bajah se ......awaje aa rahi thi. ...

Or dono ki kamar ek saath tal se tal mila kar thirak rahi thi. Dono do se ek ho rahe the ...aur unke sharir se nikalne wale saptrangi urja ka prakash aur tez ho raha tha....

dono uttejna ki charmsukh ki or bad rahi the.... Dono apne jeewan k pahle kaamsukh ...mein dub chuke the....aur kuch bhi bole ja rahe the. per wo ruke nahi the abhi tak, or kuch hi der me

Dono ka kaamras chutne lagta hai.....yeh inke jeewan ka pahla skhalan tha....dono uss pal k charam sukh ko aankhien band karke mehsus karne lage..

Tabhi dono k sharir se nikalne wali saptrangi urja ...ek hokar ek prakash punj mein badal jaati hai.......aur Abhi k sharir mein sama jaati hai....

uss k Sharir mein samate hi abhi k sahair ko zhatke lage ..phir shaant ho gaya...

ab abhi ki jubani.....

muzhe aise lag raha tha....mere andar ek adbhut urja ka sanchar ho raha hai.....

Abhi ne apni aakhein kholi.....aur dekha k Shivali aankhein band kar k aaj hue pratham madhur milan k aanand ka anbhav kar rahi thi.....

Abhi ne Shivali....k maate par kiss kiya....

aur Shivali ne apni aankhein kholi.......
Abhi - Jaan.....kaisa lag raha hai hamare pratham milan k baad...

Shivali - iss alokik anubhav ko mein shabdo mein nahi bayan kar sakti....
ab se mein aapke charno ki daasi hu.....aap hi mere liye mere bhagwan hai....

Abhi - usse gale lagate hue ...nahi jaan tumahari jagah charno mein nahi mere dil mein hai...
aur dono ek dusre ki aagosh mein so gaye

iss tarah Abhi ko apni shakti....Mayavi vidya prapt ho gayi....

abhi k liye itna hi.......

agla update jald hi........

Sooperb update bro.

To Abhi ki pehli shaadi ho gaye aur usko apni 14 mese 1 shakti mil Gaye . Ab baaki ki 13 ko kese paata hai Dekte hai aage kya hota hai.
 
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ab tak aapne dekha k Abhi Aur Shivali ka milan ho gaya hai.......aur usse Mayavi vidya ki shakti prapt ho gayi hai

ab aage.........


milan ki raat bit gayi ab aaya naya savera.........Subah Abhi aur Shivali ne ek saath bhagwan bhole nath se aashirwad prapt kiya...........

ab samay tha vidayi ka...........Dono ne Shivali k pita se aashirwad liya.........

Shivali bahut dukhi thi ab tak toh woh Abhi se dur rahi thi lekin ab milan k baad Abhi se dur rahana usse gawara nahi tha......

Abhi - Jaan.....samzha karo na.......
.bas kuch samay aur.......baad mein hum sabhi saath rahenge.......abhi muzhe bahut kaam hai........

Shivali - ab mein tumse aur dur nahi rahsakti......muzhe pata hai.....aap ko abhi bahut lamba raasta tay karna hai.........

Abhi - Tum muzhse dur kaha ho......iss locket k roop mein toh humesha saath ho......aur waise bhi hum jab chahe ab ek dusre se mil sakte hai....

Shivali ki aankhon mein aansoo aagaye.....Abhi ne usse gale lagaya......aur usske hontho par apne honth rakh diye , ek pyar bhare kiss k saath dono alag hue.....

aur abhi Gk ....Aur Kuber ji ko milkar waha se vida hua.......

waha se vida hokar Abhi apne mahal k room mein teleport ho gaya.......

waha pahunch kar dekha toh Addu abhi k bed par soyi hui hai......

aur Mayavi abhi vahi paas baitha hua hai.....abhi ko dekhkar......woh usske paas aaya .....aur Abhi ko dekhte hue adrishya ho gaya.......usske adrishya hote hi......usski kal ki saari smritiya abhi mein sama gayi........

Abhi ab sote hue Addu k paas gaya jo teddy ko pakde hue so rahi thi.......usske maasum se chehre ko dekhkar abhi ko pyar aaya......toh ussne addu k maathe par kiss kar diya.....

aur addu k chehre pat muskurahat aagayi.......aur usski aankhien khul gayi....

Addu - gm bhai......

Abhi - Gm gudiya ......abhi uth jaao.....aaj hume wapas jaana hai betu....jaao jalsi se fresh ho jaao.......

Addu - kya bhai sone do na......abhi toh bahut der rahi....
aur abhi ka haath pakde phir sone lag jaati hai......

Tabhi Ritu di room mein enter karte hue.......

Di - Gm bhai......ufff yeh maharani abhi tak soyi hai......

addu.....uth jaa na .....dekh ...abhi hume Gaon k mandir bhi jaana hai ...aur ...phir ghar bhi toh jaana hai.....aur addu ka haath pakadkar utha diya...

addu - aankhein malte hue......kya didu.....aap....bhi.....Aur phir di k saath chali gayi.....

Ab mein bhi waha se nikalkar nicche pahuncha......aur bahar aaya......waha mahal k bahar bane hue park mein

Dada ji aur Dad baithkar kuch baatien kar rahe the........meine waha jaakar dono k charan chuye.........

Dada - khade hokar muzhe gale lagate hue.........kaisa hai mera sher........aur hamari pahli bahu ..kaisi hai........

mein dada ji ki taraf dekhkar ---- kya dadu aap bhi.....kaun si bahu.....abhi toh meri shadi bhi nahi hui.......

Dada ji - Ha...ha...ha....beta tere baap..ka bhi baap hu mein .....muzhse kuch chipa nahi hai.......
waise kab mila raha hai bahu ko........

Dad - Beta sab kuch thik toh ho gaya na......matlab.......shaktiyon ko prapt karne ka pahla charan........

Mein - Haa dad....mein jis karya k liye gaya tha woh pura ho gaya......

tabhi mahal se ek sewak aaya........
Chote malik .....aapko.....Badi Rani ( Dadi) ne bulaya hai.....

phir mein waha se Dadi k paas gaya......Dadi aur mom waha baithi hui baatein kar rahi rhi.......

muzhe dekhkar......mom khade ho gayi ......aagaya betu.....aur muzhe gale lagakar......
meri bahu kaha hai ....usse....saath nahi laaya.....

mein....sochte hue ki ....arre yaha toh sabko pata hai........aur mein soch raha tha k mom ko kaise baataunga.......

mein - kya mom .......yani k aapko sab pata hai......

Dadi - aur haa muzhe bhi......
phir maine dadi k charan chuye.......

Daadi - humesha khush raho beta.......aur mere piche dekhkar ....aao beti....tum bhi ..kyu aise khadi ho.....
maine socha ab dadi kise bula rahi hai...toh picche mudkar dekha toh waha Shivali thi....

Shivali bhi aage aayi aur dadi k charan chu liye.......

Dadi usske chehre par haath pherte hue.......kitni payari bacchi hai.......jug jug jiyo meri bacchi......
aur phir usse gale laga liya........

Phir Shivali ne mom k pair chuye.......mom ne apna haath usske sir par rakha ........sach mein betu ....hamari bahu.....toh ...bahut hi sunder hai ....bikul pari ki tarah....aur uthakar usse gale lagaya.....toh

Shivali ki aankhon mein aansoo aagaye...

mom usske aansoo pochte huye......arre kya hua beta kyu ro rahi ho.....kahi mere betu ne kuch kaha toh nahi.....

Shivali - nahi ....maaji....Baxhpan se maine kabhi maa ka sukh nahi jaana isiliye jab aapne mere sir par haath rakha toh mere aansoo nikal aaye.....

mom - Beta main bhi toh ab tumahari maa hi hu na.......ab jab bhi maa se milne ka mann kare .....aajana.....
phir aise hi mina milana aur kuch baatien chalte rahi......

aur Shivali muzhse milkar wapas chali gayi

Phir hum sab family Gaon k bade Shivalaya pahunche........

waha ek jansabha ka aayogan tha.....
Mandir mein darshan kar k Hum uss sabha mwin gaye....

waha gaon waale apni samasya bata rahe the.........

Dada ji aur Dad unki samasya sun rahe the.....
t
abhi ek buddha pujari sa dikhne wala khada hua...

B..pujari - Raja sahab Ab ab usske jaagne ka samay nazdik aagaya.....hume iss baare mein bhi kuch sochna chahiye.....

Dada ji - Pujari ji ...aap baith jaayiye hum iss baare mein baada mein baat karenge......

uske baad hum sab mahal wapas aa gaye .......maine Dada ji lo pucha ki woh pujari kya baat kar raha tha.....toh unhone baat taalte hue kaha ki beta jab uchit samay aayega tab tumhe sab pata chal jaayega......

mein bhi mann mein sochne laga....na jaane aur kitne rahsaya hai jo muzhe ab tak pata nahi.....

phir Lunch hone k baad hum wapas apne ghar aagaye.......

Ghar pahunchkar maine bhi Rimpy ko usske ghar chod diya........

Raat ko dinner k baad jab mein apne room mein aaya aur bed par letkar asnkhien band karke kuch sochne laga......ki tabhi muzhe aisa laga ki koi muzhe dekh raha hai..........

mein waise hi aankhein band karke -- kya dekh rahi ho Shivu .........

Shivali - aapko kaise pata chala....ki mein hi hu

Mein - bas aise hi mera pyar tumhe mehsus kar sakta hai......
aur maine usse pakad kar apne upar khich liya aur phir humare honth mile aur kiss shuru hogaya.....thodi der aise hi ek dusre ko pyar karne k baad....

Shivali - kya baat hai jaan .....aap kyu pareshan ho rahe the.....

mein - pareshan nahi toh ........

Shivali - Aap muzhse nahi chupa sakte ab mera mann aapse jud chuka hai....
aap Sulekha k baare mein soch rahe the na....

mein - haa jaan samz nahi aaraha hai k kaise usske dard ko dur karu.......

Shivali - Uspar naagmani aur kaale jaadu ka prayog hua hai.........kaala jaadu ek tamsik vidya hai ....isiliye aapki satvik shaktiya usske sach tak nahi pahunch paarahi thi.......
hamare milan k baad ab aapmein yaksho k bhi gun aagaye hai....yaksho mein Rajogun k saath saath tamo gun bhi hota hai......ab aap Sulekha ko thik kar sakte ho......

Mein - Shivali tum kya ho......tumhe sab kuch kaise pahle se hi pata hai tum bahut rahsyamayi ho.......aur usse bahhon mein bhar leta hu.....

Shivali - jaan aapse kuch maangu ......
mein - yeh kya baat kar rahi ho jaan......tumhara toh muzhpar ab poora hak hai....

mein tumhe vachan deta hu .....bolo kya chahiye

Shivali - Bas itna hi k aap kabhi mera mann nahi padhoge....

kyu ki kuch aise rahsya hai jo samay se pahle aapka jaanana uchit nahi.....
mein - thik hai ...aao ab so jaate hai .....
aur mein usse baahon mein lekar so jaata hu......

subah 4 baje apne samay par meri aankhein khuli ......Shivali bhi chali gayi....

ab mein apna daily routine pura karke dhyan mein baith gaya......aaj dhyan mein muzhe apne ander bahut adhik maatra mein saptrangi urja dikhayi di....aur saath saath kuch gahre neele rang ki bhi ........

Aaj mein Sulekha ke rahsya tak pahunchna chahta tha......issliye.....maine mayavi vidya ka prayog karke apne do roop aur banaye......

ab waha teen Abhi the koi bhi unmein fark bata sakta.....har baat mein teeno ek jaise

Abhi k inn roopo ko R1 , R2 aisa likhunga

Maine ek roop ko college k liye bhej diya.....aur ek ko Sangharak ki bhumika nabhane......

phir maine Rakesh ko taad kiya ....woh mere bhiter se pragat hua....

Rakesh - thoda naraz sa dhik raha tha.....

mein - kya baat hai mitra muzhse naraj ho

Rakesh - Nahi ...aap toh mere malik ho ...mein aapse kaise naraj ho sakta hu.....

Mein - malik nahi .....mitra hu ....main jaanta hu k itne din baad tumhe yaad kiya isiliye naraj ho....
parantu kya karu mitra kuch kaamo mein ulaz gaya tha...

phir maine Rakesh ko gale lagaya......

Rakesh - muskurate hue ....kaho mitra kyu yaad kiya...

mein - Rakesh tum MLA ka pata karo.....aur usske har kaam ki jankari muzhe do......
lekin haa .....tum abhi kuch mat karna ....uusko toh mein hi maut dunga....
aur Rakesh chala gaya.........

yaha R1 Rimpy k saath college Chala gaya.....Aur Abhi Sulekha k Room mein.......

Sulekha bed par gumsum si baithi kuch soch rahi thi.....

Jaise hi Abhi ko apne paas dekha.....woh uth kar khadi ho gayi....
Abhi - arre ..arre kyu ghabra rahi ho....baitho.....

usse kandhe se pakdar bitha diya aur khud bhi usske paas baith gaya....

Abhi - kya soch rahi ho.....

Sulekha - kuch nahi......lekin aap yaha......aaj ...gaye colllll...mein ...

mein - ha..ha..ha..tum bhi woh collll nahi college hota hai........haa nahi gaya muzhe tumse kuch baat karni hai.......

Sulekha - kya.....

Mein - Tum humesha muzhe kyu dekhti rahti ho...

Sulekha - mein kaha dekhti hu.....

Mein - Dekho Sulekha mein jaanta hu ki tum muzhse pyar karti ho...

Sulekha - lekin aap toh uss Rimpy se pyar karte hai.....

Mein usska haath pakadkar .....usski aankho mein dekhkar...kya tum muzhpar vishwas karti ho....
toh mere saath chalo....aaj tumhe tumahare mann mein chal rahe saare prashno k uttar mil jaayenge.....

aur mein usse lekar ussi jagah teleport hokar chala gaya.....jaha woh muzhe mili.thi.......ab usske mann mein zhankkar muzhe sab kuch pata chal gaya tha ki usske saath kya hua tha......

toh usse woh sab yaad dilane k liye .....maine apni maaya se wahi drisya usske saamne pragat kiya jiske baad uski yaaddast chali gayi thi..........

Naaraj prasanna aur Nagraani Ulupi bediyo mein bandi hue the aur Senapati Vishank haath mein Naag mani lekakar hasse jaa raha tha....

Vishank - ha..ha...ha.....Sulekha maine socha ki tuzhse vivah kar ke Naaglok ka raja ban jaaunga.....lekin ......tune mere saare irado par paani pher diya......
dekh teri iss karni ka fal tere mata pita kaise bhugat te hai......

aur apni kaali shakti aur naag mani ki shakti ko milakar ek aag ka gola NP aur Ulupi ki or phenkta hai aur.......uss aag mein dono jalne lage.....

apne mata pita ko dekhkar Sulekha ki chikh nikal gayi.......nahhi ...chod do mere mata...pita ko.....tum jo kahoge.....mein woh karne ko tayar hu.......mat maaro unhe......

Vishank - ha...ha...ha...ha...ab aayi na raaste par.......aur kuch mantra bolta hua haath aage jarta hai....aur woh aag shant ho jaati hai.....

NP aur Ulupi ki haalat bahut bekar ho gayi thi...

Vishank - dasiyo ko bulakar --- le jaoo Rajkumari ko aur vivah k liye tayar karo.....

yaha jab Sulekha ko dasiya tayar kar rahi thi k tabhi ....uski sakhi Vinaya aagayi........baaki dasiyo ko waha se bhech diya......mein apni sakhi ko tayar karugi .......dekhu toh kitni sunder lag rahi hai........
aur dheere se..uske kaan mein ........

Rajkumari ji Vivah k baad Vishak aapke mata pita ki bali chane wala hai .....aap unhe mukt karne ka koi upay kijiye.......

tab tak mein yaha aapka roop lekar Inn sabka dhyan hatati hu.....

ab Vinaya ne Sulekha ka roop dhar liya aur Suleka ne Vinaya ka......aur

apne mata pita ko chudane pahuch gayi mahal k gupt raaste se......jaha usske mata pita band the......waha ka prahri Raja ka wafadar tha ..usski madad se se Sulekha ne apne mata pita ko chudaya.....aur gupt raaste se bahar nikalne lagi......abhi woh teeno bahar nikalne hi wale the k ......

dhaadam unke saame Vinaya ki laash aakar giri......aur aawaj aayi ....

Vishank ki........Rajkumari yeh tune thik nahi kiya ......muzhe hi chalne chali thi........

.aur ek bhayankar urja ka waar unn teeno par kar diya.....jisse waha visfot hua Lekin NP aur ulupi ne Apne pran dekar Sulekha ko surakshit kar diya aur gupt dwar se bahar nikal diya......

Apne mata pita ko marte hue dekhka

Sulekha ki chikh nikal
gayi..
nahhhhhhhi........

aaj k liye itna hi ....
agla update kal....

Zabardast update bro.
 
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ab tak aapne dekha Abhi apni mayavi vidya ka prayog karke Sulekha k saamne wahi drishya pragat karta hai....jisske wajah se usski yaddast chali gayi thi........aur ussmein woh apni sakhi Vinaya ko aur mata pita ko marte hue dekhti hai

ab aage........

Jaise hi Sulekha ne yeh drishya dekha toh uski chikh nikal gayi ....nahiiii......
aur woh ghutno k bal jameen par baithkar rone lagi........

tabhi uss apne kandhe par kisi ka haath mehsus hua.......jab ussne waha dekha toh ab na toh naaglok tha na hi woh drishya saamne Abhi khada tha........jaise hi ussne Abhi ko dekha ......woh khade ho gayi aur Abhi k gale lagkar rone lagi.....

Sulekha - Rote hue......aagaye aap .....dekho na kaise Ussne mere mata pita aur sakhi ko maara........
aur fut futkar rone lagi............

Abhi usske sir ko sahlakar usse shant kara raha tha............

Abhi - Bas ..ab aur ...nahi...
Sulekha..aaj nikal do apne andaer ka saara dukh bahar........aaj k baad

....mera vachan hain k inn aankhon mein fir kabhi mein yeh aansoo nahi aane dunga......

Tabhi Sulekha Abhi se alag hote hue..........Abhi k seene mein apne haatho se mukke marte hue......

Sulekha - kyu aaye ho aap meri jindagi mein ......maine toh aapko kabhi dekha bhi nahi tha .....fir kyu........aap k hi wajah se mere saamne ....mere mata pita aur sakhi ki mrityu hui hai........yadi aap ....mere sapno mein aur mere mannn mein na aate ....toh muzhe aapse prem na hota.......aur Vishak k dwara mere mata pita ki mrityu na hoti .......aur.phir jameen par baithkar rone lagi......

Sulekha dwara Abhi k seene par kiye gaya prahar se abhi k sharir ko toh koi chot nahi aayi.....
lekin woh har prahar usske dil par laga.......
aur uski aankho mein aansoo aagaye.....

Abhi - mannn mein ....Vishak .....tayar hoja .......aaraha hu mein .......
aur Sulekha ki or dekhkar......Sulekha poch lo inn aansovo ko .........

tum yadi apne mata pita ki mrityu ka muzhe kaaran maanti ho toh wohi hi sahi........

Usske liye tumhe jo saja thik lage wih tum muzhe dedena.......lekin usske pahle .......muzhe Vishak ...ko usske kiye ki saza de du.......
Cahlo tumhe ghar chod aao............utho.....bas aaj apne iss apradhi ki baat maan lo ..usske baad tum swatantra ho....apna jeewan jeene k liye......

Abhi ki baatein sunkar Sulekha ko ahsas ho gaya ki usne apne dukh mein kitni badi galti kardi.....jiska intejar woh barso se karti aarahi thi ....
jab aaj woh usske saamne hai......toh usse uss apradh ka dosh de diya jo ussne kiya hi nahi

Sulekha - Nahi...mein ghar nahi jaaungi ...mein bhi aapke saath chalungi

Abhi - Ek apradhi k saath tum kyu jaaogi.....chinta mat karo ......bina tumahare diye dand ko bhoge ........mein kahi nahi bhagunga...
bas.....pahele ....apna kaam kar lu......

Abhi ki baat sunkar Sulekha se raha nahi gaya

Sulekha - bas kariye aap ......aap koi apradhi nahi.....apradhi toh mein hu .....ki mein hi devta ko ..apne dukh mein andhi hokar apradhi kah baithi...

muzhe ksahma kar do.........mera sab kuch toh samapt hogaya yadi aap bhi dur hogaye toh mein jeevit nahi rah paaungi......

aur phir rone lagi.......

Abhi ne usse kandhe se uthakar gale laga liya..........Chup ho jaao Sulekha

mein tumhe chodkar kahi nahi jaa raha.........bahut ro liya tumne ...ab rone ki baari ....unki hai .....jinhone tumhe rulaya hai........aur usska chehra haath mein pakad kar .....usse shant hone ko kah raha tha......
lekin woh hai ki roye jaa rahi thi.......

Toh Abhi ne apne Honth uske hontho par rakh diye aur usse chumne laga.........

Achanak huye iss chumban ko pahele toh Sulekha samaz nahi paayi......phir woh bhi Abhi ka saath dene lagi.......dono ek dusre ke hontho ko chum rahe the......issmein koi vaasna nahi thi.....tha toh bas ek dusre k liye atha prem.....

Apne chumban ko tod te hue abhi Sulekha ki aankon mein dekhkar......

Abhi - mein aise hi itne der se tumhe chup kara raha tha......lekin ab pata chal gaya tum kaise chup hoti ho.......ab kabhi dubara ise karogi toh aise hi chup karaunga.....

Sukekha Abhi k seene mein apna muh chupakar......
kya aap bhi......bade woh ho.....

Abhi usse kas k gale lagata hai.....

Abhi - Sulekha ab tumhe ghar chodkar muzhe jaana hoga......naaglok

Sulekha - mein bhi aapke saath chalungi

Abhi - Nahi ......waha pata nahi kaun kaun se khatre honge..........tum ghar pat hi surakshit ho.......

Sulekha - muzhe aapar pura vishwas hai aap muzhe kuch nahi hone doge........aur mein aapne saamne ....Uss Vishak ko marte hue dekhna chahti hu.....

Mein - thik hai ...toh....phir chale.........
Ab naaglok tak pahunchne k liye

Abhi Sulekha ko lekar teleport ho gaya......lekin ye kya woh phir ussi talab aur waterfall k saamne pahunch gaya.......

Tab Abhi ne socha ho na ho Naaglok jaane ka gupt marg yahi kahi hona chahiye........

Abhi ne charo taraf Nazar daudayi......toh usski nazar watefall tak jaakar ruk gayi........usske mann mein aaya .....ho satka hai issi mein se woh gupt marg ho jaha se Sulekha yaha tak aayi........

Abhi aur Sulekha uss zharne k niche pahunche or girte hue paani ko paar karke dekha ki uss zharne k pichhe ek gufa hai....toh dono uss gufa mein aage bade.......

thodi hi dur jaakar dekha ki gufa waha band hai...........Abhi ko waha kisi tarah ki saatvik urja ka aabhas hua jo aage ka raasta roke hue thi.............

Mein - kaun hai yaha.......jo gupt roop se hamara raasta roke hue hai..........

Sulekha uss band gufa ko dekhkar kuch kuch samaz rahi thi........

Sulekha - Maa aap yahi ho na.....pita shri....mein aap dono ko mehsus kar sakti hu.....tabhi waha ek neela prakash pragat hua.......or ussmein se pragat hue do aakritiya.......

jinhe dekhkar Sulekha ki aankhon mein aansoo aagaye.......

Sulekha - kya pitashri kyu kiya aapne aise.........mera jeewan bachane k liye aapne apna jeewan ka balidan kyu diya.........
(woh do aakritiya Naagraaj Prasana aur Ulupi ki aatmaaye thi jo jo apni aatmshakti se iss dwar ko band kiye hue thi taaki Vishank Sulekha tak na pahunch paaye......)

NP ki aatma - putri hum tumhe aapni aankho k saamne marte kaise dekh sakte the......aur ab sharir tyagne k baad hume pata chala k tumahara janam kyu hua hai......ab hum bahut khush hai k sansaar k ek maha udeshya ko pura karne k liye pahli aahuti hamari hui........

putri koi bhi dharam karya balidan k bina pura nahi ho sakta.......
hum bahut khush hai.....k tumhe..
apna jeewan saathi mil gaya hai......

hey shristi k Maha rakshak ..... meri beti ka khayal rakhna ....ab hum mukt ho sakte hai......

Aur dono ki aatma aakash mein vilin ho gayi........

unke waha se jaate hi waha ek portal khul gaya....Abhi Sulekha ko lekar uss mein chala gaya......aur jab bahar aaya toh dekha naalok ki ek pahadi k paas dono khade hai ......Abhi ne apne Shakti trishul se Uss portal ko band kar diya ....au aage bada......

Sulekha - yahi paas mein ek gaon hai .......hume waha jaana chahiye......yeh naaglok ki rajdhani se bahut dur hai.........

apni pehchan chupane k liye dono ne .....apna roop badal liya ....ab abhi bhi naaglok ka hi koi yuvak lag raha tha...........

dono chalte chalte uss gaon mein pahunche..........

toh dekha ki waha ekdum sannta faila hua tha........gaon mein koi nazar nahi aaraha tha.......

dono ek ghar k darwaje par pahunche......aur aawj lagayi......badi der k baad ek buddhe se vyakti ne dwar khola......uske chehre se dar aur udasi saaf zhalakti thi......
apne sammne ajnabiyo ko dehkar..aur hairan ho gaya......

Abhi - kaka hum bahut dur se chalkar aaye hai.......socha thoda iss gaon mein aaram kar le.....lekin yeh ek jo hume suna tha bilkul usske viprit hai......

Buddhe vyakti ne unhe chup rahene ka ishara kiya aur ander le aaya....
dono ko baithate hue......

kaka - tum log yaha kyu aaye ho......jaante nahi yaha tum jaise jawan logo k liye bahut khatra hai....

Abhi - Kaka hum toh kalakar hai ..aur yeh meri patni hai........humne yaha k Nagraj prassana k baare mein bahut kuch suna hai k woh bade hi dayalu hai ...toh hum unke saamne apni kala ka pradarshan karne aaye hai......

kaka - Beta woh ab purani baat ho gayi iss samay yaha Vishak aur asuro ka raaj chalta hai........Vishak ek Shaitan ka pujari hai......ussne Naagraj ko dhoka dekar yaha ka raaj hatiya liya hai ......naa jaane woh aur unka pariwar ab kaha hai.......

jab se Unka rajya gaya ...tab se yaha assuro ka aatank macha hua hai......Vishank se unki mitrata hai .....jab chahe kisi ko utha lete hai.....yaha k saare jawan naag unke bandi bane hue hai........aur naag kanyae dassiya .......

suna hai roj ek naag kanya ki waha bali di jaati hai.....

poore naag lok mein iss samay aatank faila hua hai....

uss buddhe ki baat sunkar Sulekha ki aankhon mein aansoo aagaye.....

kaka - beti tum kyu ro rahi ho.......ab toh humare aansoo bhi sukh gaye .....
aasuro ne mere bete aur bahu ko hamri asnkho k saamne kha liya aur hamare jawan pote ko utha kar le gaye.......abhi raat hone wali hai .....kal subah hi tum dono bhi yaha se chle jaana....

Mein - kaka jaayenge toh ab yeh asur yaha se.......
ab unn sab ki maut yaha aagayi hai...

Kaka - nahi beta ....tum akele kaise unka saamna kar sakte ho...
kyu apne aur apni patni k pran sankat mein dal rahe ho....

tab maine apna Aur Sulekga ka roop unke saamne pragat kiya
aur unhe sab bata diya aur saath hi apne Rakshak hone ka bhi parichaya diya....

Kaka - bahut dukh hua NP k baare mein jaankar....aur khushi bhi hui Raajkumari ji ko jeevit dekhkar..

aapke baare mein maine apne purvajo se suna tha ...k ..ek din iss brahmand ka Rakshak Naaglok ka raja banega......kya aap wahi hai....

Meine tab apni maya se apne purva janam k roop ko pragat kiya.....jisse dekhkar woh budda haath jodkar ghutno k bal baith gaya.....

Mein - arre kaka aapke yeh haath hamare sir par acche lagte hai....
aur meine unhe haath pakadkar utha diya.....

Phir maine apne panch tatva ki shakti se waha kuch fal aur khane ka saaman pragat kiya aur Kaka ki madat se uss gaon k har ghar mein pahunchaya.....

Raat ko hum khana khakar kal se shuru honewale ek naye sangharsh k baare mein vichar karte karte sogaye.....

abhi k liye itna hi.......
agla update jald hi.......


Mind blowing update bro.

To Sulekha ko apne baare mai pata chal gaya .

Aur ab dono naag lok aakar us dusht se bachane achuke hai .

Ab Dekte hai aage kya hota hai.
 
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ab tak aapne dekha ko Abhi Sulekha k saath Naaglok pahuvh gaya hai......waha ek gaon k ek ghar se usse yaha honewale atyachar k baare mein pata chalta hai

ab aagee.........

Raat bit gayi ab Abhi ne aage badne ka socha.......kaka se milkar vidai li aur Sulekha k saath waha se nikal gaya............

Naag lok k nagar mein bina rok tok k ghumne k liye ......Abhi ne mayavi vidya se Sulekha aur apne aap ko asur roop mein badal liya........


ab dono asuro ki tarah hi lag rahe the..........Dono ne iss rup mein aasani se nagar mein pravesh paa liya tha.........

uss nagar mein jagah jagah asur waha k vaasio par atyachar kar rahe the.......

waha gadiyo mein pashuvo ki jagah waha k yuvao ko lagaya gaya tha ...jinpar chabuk se prahar kiya jaa raha tha......

.kahi koi asur saare aam kisi naag kanya ko nagn karke atyachar kar raha tha.......

kuch ko bina kisi apradh k sirf manoranjan k liye sarre aam maut k ghat utara jaa raha tha ....kul milakar waha nark jaisa hi mahol tha......

Aise hi dono nagar mein aage badte badte.......Mahal tak pahunche...

jaise hi dono mahal k ander pravesh kar rahe the ...ki waha k pahredar ne roka........
yeh tum dono kaha bhiter jaa rahe ho.....

Abhi - Hum maharaj se milna chahte hai.......unke liye vishesh samachar hai........

P - Kya samachar hai .........yahi batao......tum abder nahi jaa sakte ho........

Abhi - Nahi hume jo batana hai wo him maharaj se hi barayenge....aur tum hime nahi rok sakte ...tumhe pata nahi k maharaj ne hum asuro k saath sandhi ki hai.....

P - Kya tumhe nahi pata k Naag ho ya Asur ya maharaj ka Vishwas paatra....andar wahi jaa sakta hai........jisske paas maharaj ki di hui vishesh mudra hai..........

Mein - Mudra haa.....woh toh thi........Abhi apne kapdo mein mudra dhundne ka baatak karta hai.......arre lagta hai ussi jagah chut gayi jaha hum raat ko ruke the thik hai abhi aata hu.....

Abhi waha se nikal gaya.......aur nagar mein kai assuro se puchtach karne k baad usse pata chala k mahal mein wahi pravesh kar sakta jiske paas vishesh mudra ho......

Aur woh mudra sirf maharaj k guptcharo aur mahal k sainoko k hi paas hai......unmein se bhi har koi maharaj se nahi mil sakta.......Vishak se kewal usske vishwas paatra mantri.....ya mukhya asur yodha hi mil sakte the......

Abhi ne kai baar teleport hokar sidha Vishak k mahal k andar jaane ka prayatna kiya lekin ...woh mahal Eblis ki kaali shaktiyo k suraksha ghere mein tha........

Abhi ne pata kiya k mahal ka mukhya Rakshak kuch rasiya kism ka Naag hai,

iss samay woh naag kanyao k saath maze karne rang mahal gaya hua tha

Abhi ne apni maya se suder si naag kanya pragat ki.....aur Sulekha k saath rang mahal chal diya.....

waha pahuch ka ussne dekha k bahut se mahal k adhikari naach gaane k saath madira ka aanand utha rahe hai

kuch unmein se jabardasti unn naagkanyao ko nagn kar rahe hai......
woh drishya Sulekha se dekha nahi gaya .....lekin kya kare....

Abhi ne mukhya adhikari k saamne apni maayavi kanya ko le gaya.....
aur usse pranam kiya......

Ma - Kaun ho tum ...aur apsara jaisi kanya kaun hai tumahare saath.......

mein - hum dono aaj hi patal lok se aaye hai.....asur raaj ne yaha k mukhya adhikario k liye visheh upahar bheje the ....mein mahal gaya tha lekin aap waha nahi the, waha se muzhe pata chala ki aap yaha milege.....toh aapka yeh uphar aapko saunpne yaha aa gaya.......

Ma - arre waha itna sunder uphar .....

mein - Isse bhi sunder aur hai......ek kamre ki taraf ishara karte hue.....yadi aap chahe toh inhe bhi dekh sakte hai.......
Ussne haath mein pakdi hui sarab ki surahi k aakar ki sone ki bottel rakhi .....aur zhatke se utha ..

ma - lekin muzhe charo k charo chahiye.....

mein - jarur waha chaliye ...yaha aur bhi adhikari hai ...agar inhe pata chalega toh aapko kuch nahi milega.........

Ma - ha...ha...chalo.....woh pura nashe mein mast tha......aur jaise hi ussne aage kadam badaya.........
dhadammmmmm ........ayiiiiiiiii.....woooooo....ahhhhhh

aur woh dekhkar maine apna haath apne sir mein maara..........aur meri hasee nikal gayi

Socha kuch kaam shanti se nikal lu lekin sab bekar......ab bal se hi kaam lena padega......

aayeiye dekhte hai kya hua......jaise hi woh adhikari aage badha usska pair fisal gaya aur sidha woh uss sone ki bani hui bottel par gira aur woh bottel aadhi usske pichwade mein ghus gayi. thi.......

yeh sab itne jaldi hua ki pahele toh kisi ko samaz hi nahi aaya....toh kuch ki haasi nikal gayi...

aur kuch ne iss kand ka muzhe aur sulekha ko doshi maankar apne shastra nikal liye..........

aur Sulekha toh uss adhikari ki aisi haalat dekhkar jor jor se hasne lagi.......

Ma - Arre dekh kya rahe ho haramiyo......uthao muzhe.....ahhhhh....
aur pakdo inn doni ko saalo ne meri hi le li ahhhhhh......yeh bottel ....

Aur ab waha k kuch Ussko sambhalne k liye bade aur kuch mere aur sulekha ki or.....

maine bhi ab inka khatama hi uchit samzha aur apni talwar pragat ki ..

aur pahele toh ek laat uss bottel par lagayi jo aadhi uss adhikari k pichwade mein ghusi thi......jo ab poori tarah ander ghus chuki thi aur usske pran bahar ........

Sulekha - Inhe samapt karne ka awsar toh muzhe milna chahiye.....kyu ki yeh sab mere pita k doshi hai jo Vishak k haatho bik gaye.....

toh maine ek talwar uski aur bada di aur wahi khada hokar dekhne laga.....

Ab Sulekha talwar ko kisi ninja ki tarah lahrakar aage badi ......aage se tabhi 4 sainik usski aur bade aur charo ne ek saath humla kar diya.....

jab tak unki talwar usse chu paati woh uchalkar unke picche pahunch gayi.........aur bijli k tezi se pal bhar mein hi do ka si dhad se alag kiya

baki do abhi mude hi the k sulekha ki talwar unka pet fad chuki thi.....

muzse raha nahi gaya Suleka ki yeh tezi dekhkar jor se sitti bajayi......waha meri naagin bahut khub...

apne saathi yo ka aisa haal dekhkar bache hue pahle toh thoda dar gaye lekin phir sab ek saath aage bade........waha kul milakar 25 k lagbhag aur bache the.......sab ek saath Sulekha ki or aage bade.....

sulekha talwar lahrate hue aage badi aur waha gunj uti ceekhe ek bhi talwar usse chu tak nahi paa rahi thi waha charo taraf sainiko k tukde kat kar girne lage......aur khoon se woh jagah laal ho gayi thi......

tabhi ek sainik chupke se Sulekha k picche se talwar ka waar karne hi wala tha .......tabhi meine ussko apni talwar k ek waar se bich se chir diya........

waha ka drisya dekhkar waha kahadi naag kanyaye dar k maare thar thar kaanp rahi thi.......
saare sainik maare ja chuke the

Sulekha ne charo taraf dekha toh kisi ko waha ek khambe k picche kisi ko chuppe dekha......toh Sulekha ranchandi banakr waha pahunchi aur jaise hi apni talwar uthayi

woh dono haath jodkar thar thar kaanpte hue jor se chillaya.....
nahiiii ....mat maroooo mmmuuuzhhe.......

Aur maine Sulekha ka haath pakad liya........tab tak woh jo dikhne mein mahal ka koi adhikari lag raha tha......aage se gila aur picche se pila ho gaya tha........

Mein - Ruk jaao meri naagin .....yeh hamare kaam aasakta hai.....

woh - meeein aapke kyaaaa kaam aasakta hu.....kahi aap muzzhe khane wale toh nahi hoooo
dekho muzh akele ko khakar aapko kya milega.......

Sulekha meri taraf dekhne lagi......yeh kya bol raha hai......hum isse kyu khayenge.....
ladayi k dauran woh yeh bhul chuki thi k hum abhi bhi asuro k bhes mein hai....

sahayad isiliye naagkanyaye .bhi bhaybhit thi........

tab humne apna vastavik roop pragat kiya Sulekha ko dekhkar Woh adhikari chaunk gaya ....aur sabhi naag kanyao k chehre par khushi ......

Woh - Rajkumari ji....aap....muzhe maaf kar de rajkumari ji.......main uss samay Vishank ka saath dene k liye vivash tha........

Sulekha - Vivash the .......itna bada vishwasghat......pahele toh .....muzhe ....pitashri aur mata ko mukt karne mein madat ka natak kiya aur.....jab hum nikal rahe the tab Vishak ko tumne sab kuch bata diya.......Tumhe maine dekha tha Uss din Vishak k saath.....

tumahare hi kaaran meri bachpan ki sakhi Vinaya Aur mata pita ki mrityu muzhe dekhni padi .....ab mein tumhe jivit nahi dekh sakti......

woh - Muzhe kshama kare Rajkumari ji......muzhe mat maaro ....mein aapko mahal mein pahunche ka marg bata sakta hu.......aur Vishank k ant ka maarg bhi......

Mein - thik hai toh phir bolo.....hum tumhe jivit chod denge.....

woh - toh suniye......aapne jis adhikari ko sabse pahle maara hai woh mahal k bahari Suraksha mein tanat sainiko ka adhikari tha......

usske paas ek mohar hai jisse dihkhakar woh mahal k andar senanayak ko saari suchna dene mahal k bhitar jaa sakta tha......aap uska roop lekar mahal mein pravesh paa sakte hai....

Vishak ne apne Kamre ko aur apne aapko kaali shaktiyo se surakshit kar rahka hai...........isiliye uska vadh karna bahut kathin hai..........

yadi phir bhi koi kisi bhi tarah uska vadh karde......toh uski raksha karne wali kaali shakti .......sampurna naaglok ka vinash kar degi.....

mein - Aise se toh kis prakar uska vinash hoga

Woh - ek raasta hai .....jaha tak muzhe pata hai..........ki uske kamre mein ek gupt marg hai jo kisi gufa tak jaane ka raasta hai......waha woh kisi kaali shakti ki upasna karta hai........aur uski woh upasna ek naagkanya ki bali par samapat hoti hai.........

yadi kisi prakar uss bali ko rok diya jaaye..........toh jo Kaali shakti uski raksha karti hai......wohi usski bali le legi............

lekin uss gufa ki raksha bhayankar mayavi asur karte hai.....

mein - tumhe yeh sab kaise pata.....

woh - Vishak ....ko bhog k liye aur bali k liye mein hi kanya lejakar deta hu....
ab toh aap muzhe mukt ka doge .....

mein - Haa kyu nahi.....tumne jo itni mahatvapuran jaankari jo di hai......
Sulekha mukt kar do isse........

aur sulekha ne ek hi waar se usska sir dhad se alag kar diya........

Sulekha - muskurate hue --- lo kar diya mukt.....

mein - mann mein --- baap re kitni khatarnak hai meri yeh naagin .....Vivah k baad na jaane mera kya haal karegi....

Sulekha - kya soch rahe ho....ab aage kya kare...

mein - hadbadate hue - kkkkucch nahi...bas aise hi......waise tum bahut acchi ladti ho ....

Sulekha - Meine yeh sab apne pita se sikha tha.....

usske baad maine Pahele wale adhikari ka aur Sulekha ne Akhri wale ka roop le liya aur unki mohre lekar chal diye mahal ki or.....

aaj k liye itna hi......

agla update kal .......


sooperb update bro.
 
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