Fantasy Abhi....The Wizard King

[abhi_mishra_91]

Nice update
Ye Kya baat h hua Kya h use
Keep posting

Nice update bro
Lgta hai hero kisi or dimention ya time ya planet me phuch gya hai
Isliye use sb itna ajjeb lg rha hai
Dekhte aage aage hota hai kya
Waiting for next

Thanks for your support guys....
Age age Pata chalega ki kaise ye hua

 

[abhi_mishra_91]

Congrats for new story bro

Nice

Thanks Guys ....
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[Abbasi]

Update:2

Previously:
Aaj mere saath kuch bhi thik nahi ho raha hai Main utha aur apni kismat ko gali dene lag gaya.Thode der baad main jhopdi se nikla tab bahar ka nazara dekh k main jyada pareshan ho gaya.”Saala main jungle mein kya kar raha hun”. Phir main jungle ko dekhne laga bahut hi ghana jungle hai. Par ek achhi khabar ye hai ki kuch 50mtrs baad ek bada rasta gaya hai.Mene jhopdi mein bapas aake ek pani k thaili mein jar se sarab bhara aur raste k paas chala gaya. Rasta kachha tha par bada tha.

Ab main sochne lag gaya ki jaun to kis aur jaun.Aaj to life mein kuchh bhi right nahi ho raha hai isiliye mene right k taraf chal pada.

Aab Aage:

Lekin saala mujhe laga ye discision bhi right nahi tha. Kai ghanto se main chal raha hun. Suraj bhi mere sar k upar aa gaya. Par mujhe koi gaon ya sahar nahi mila. Sala sarab bi khatam ho gaya.

Ese chalte chalte mujhe ek Aam ka ped dikha. Aur aam pake hue the. Lekin wo ped bahut bada tha. Badi muskil se main kuchh aam tod paya. Main jaldi se thode aam kha gaya aur baki bad k liye bacha k rakha. Thoda time rest lene k baad. Main phir se aage chal diya. Karib ek ghanta chalne k baad mujhe ek bail gadi dikhai diya. Wo gadi kichhad mein phas gayi thi. Ek buddha aadmi use dhakelne ki kausis kar raha tha.Jab main paas pahuncha to pass khade ek ladke ne madad k liye bola. Mujhe laga unki madad karni chahiye to mene jake wo buddha aadmi k sath gadi ko dhakka dene lag gaya. Mere dhakka dete hi gadi kichad se bahar aa gayi. Mujhe ye dekhe k bhi shock laga.

Budha Aadmi-”Bahut bahut sukriya beta. Tumne hamari bahut madad ki”.

Main-”Ji koi Baat nahi.”

Budha Aadmi-”Kahan ja rahe ho beta, tum kaho to mein chhod dun.”

Main-”Ji age koi gaon ya sahar hai kya. Mujhe wahin chhod dijiye.”

Budha Aadmi-”Beta ye gaon ya sahar kya hai.”

Main-”Ab sala isko gaon ya sahar ka matlab nahi pata. Kya bolun isse.” (Man Me)

Main-”Kaka jahan pe log rehte hai.”

Budha Aadmi-”Oh.. Tum Kabila aur Nagar ki Baat kar rahe ho.”

Main-”Haan Kaka main usi ki baat kar raha hun.”

Budha Aadmi-”Beta aage Dev Nagari padta hai. Hum log bhi wahan jaa rahe hain. Jaldi chalo beta ye jungle khatre se khali nahi hai.”

Main-”Ji kaka jaldi chaliye.”

Uske baad kaka jake age beth k gadi chalane lage aur mein unke side mein beth gaya. Gadi mein Char aadmi the. Aur gadi pichhe se band thi. Pehle kaka the unke baad ek budhi aaurat, Sayad kaki hongi, phir do bachhe ek 10-11 saal ka ladka ,aur ek 7-8 saal ki bachhi.

Main-” Namaste Kaki.”

Kaki-”Namaste Beta. Bahut bahut sukriya tumhara. Hame musibat se nikal ne k liye, Agar hum aur jyada phas jate to badi muskil ho jaati.”

Main-”Kaisi Musibat kaki.”

Kaki-”Lutere Beta Lutere.”

Main-” oho...”

Phir mene apne bag se kuchh aam nikale aur bachho ke taraf bada diye.

Bachhi-”Dadi, ye dekho. ye kya hai?”

Main shock ho gaya, Yaar Bacho ko aam k bare mein nahi pata.

Kaki-”Beta ye kahan se mila tumhe.”

Main-”Wo raste mein ek Bada Aam ka Ped tha wahan se le aya.Kyun Kya hua Kaki?”

Kaki-”Beta ye bahut durlav hai, ek ki kimat das(10) swarna Mudraye hain.”

Main-” Kya....”

Kaki-” Haan Beta....”

Mujhe aaj shock pe shock lag raha hai.Pehle ki Aam durlav hai aur phir ye swarna mudra kya ai aur jo bhi hai tab iski kimat 10 swarn mudraye hai. Ab sala mein puchhu to kisko puchhun.Kaki se puchhta hun.

Main-”Kaki ye swarna mudraye kya hain.”

Kaki-”Kya beta tumhe mudraye nahi pata.”

Mene Na mein sar hilaya.

Kai-”Beta Mudraye wo hain jiske badle hum saman kharid te hain ya bechte hain. Sab se niche Tambra Mudra, ye tambe se banti hai,uske baad Raupya Mudra, ye chandi se bante hain, 100 Tambra Mudraye milke ek Raupya Mudra banti hai, Uske baad Swarna Mudra, ye sone se banti hai,100 Raupya Mudraye milke ek Swarna Mudra banti hai,aur aakhri mein Surajatha Mudra, ye platinum se banti hai, ye bahut hi durlav dhatu hai. 1000 Swarna Mudraye milke ek Surajatha Mudra banti hai.”

Mujhe Ye sun ke aur bhi shock laga.

Main-”To Kaki, ek Tambra Mudra se kya milta hai.”

Kaki-”Beta,2 Tambra Mudra se ek waqt ka khana mil jata ek aadmi k liye hai.”

Mujhe ye sunke aur bhi shock laga. Sala Aaj to jhatke pe jhatke hi mil rahe hain. Phir mene ginti ki Ab tak mene 4 aam kha diye hain aur mere paas 10 hain.Phir mene kuchh soch ke bag se 3 aur aam nikale aur sabko ek ek de diya. Bachi k paas pehle se hi ek tha.

Kaki-”Beta Ye kya kar rahe ho. Ye bahut kimti hain.”

Main-”Kaki dekho mujhe iski kimat pata nahi thi jo aapne batai. Mere paas aur 6 hain to aap aarm se khaiye. Baccho ne bhi ye kabhi nahi khaya. To aap log kha lijiye bina kisi fikar kiye.”

Kaki aur Kaka Mana kar rahe the par Mere jid aur bachho k bare mein soch kar sab ne aam ka swad liya.

Bacchi-”Sukriya kaka, hame aam dene k liye.”

Main-“Koi bat nahi. Aam kaisa tha.”

Bachhi-”Bahut mithe the. Ye dekho Paras kaise kha raha hai.”Ladke taraf isara karte huye.

Paras ne bhi ek smile de diya aur Aam khane laga.

Main-”To beta aapka naam kya hai,”

Bachhi-”Mera naam Payal hai. Aur wo Mere Dadaji Haria aur Meri Dadi Rukmini Hai. Aap ka naam kya hai?”

Main-”Mera Naam ......Abhi....Mu....”

Payal-”Abhi kitna pyara naam hai.”

Main Abhi mujhe yaad nahi bol ne wala tha par Payal ko mera nam Abhi laga.Chalo kam se kam ek naam to mila mujhe.

Kaki-”Beta tum kahan ke rane wale ho aur kitni umar hogi tumari.”

Ab sala isk main kya jawab dun. Mujhe to kuchh bhi Yaad nahi.Jyada jhut bolna mujhe acchha nahi laga to mene sab sach bata diya.

Main-”Kaki Main aaj subha utha tab se mujhe kuchh bhi yaad nahi. Mujhe Mera naam tak yaad nahi tha. Main jungle mein jhopdi mein pada tha. Uske baad istaraf chal pada.”

Kaka-”Beta Ye to bahut bura hua tumhare saath.To beta aage kya karoge.”

Main-”Kaka age nagar main jake kuchh kaam karunga.”

Kaka-”Beta main ek baat kahun bura to nahi manoge. Meri Umar ho chuki hai ab mujhse jyada kaam nai hota hai. Tum dikhne mein abhi jawan lagte ho umar kuchh 19-20 hogi aur sarir bhi tumara achha majbut hai. Kya tum mere liye kaam karoge. Hamare saath rehna aur hamre sath khana. Kya kehte ho.”

Mene Kaka baat k bare mein socha. Mujhe to waise kuchh bhi yaad nahi hai aur mujhe wahan k bare mein bhi pata nahi hai. To unke saath rehne se hi mera phayda hai. Ye soch k mene unki baat man li. Thik Suraj dhalne se pehle hum log Nagar mein pahunch gaye.Hamar andar ane k baad Nagar k gate ko band kar diya gaya. Ye baat mujhe badi ajib lagi. Mene Kaka se puchha to unhone Surksha k liye boldiya. Shayad Luteron k bajah se ye soch kar mene bhi kuchh nahi bola.

Very nice, fantastic, awesome update ...................
Keep it up bro ..................
Waiting for next update ...................

 

[Pintupaul]

nice one Bro

 

[Silent Destroyer]

Bhai
Nice start
Waise apne sabdo me likh rahe ho to jarur padhunga par ye to sach hai ki iski prerna dusre story se li hui hai
Story ka naam nahi likhoonga but good that you are writing something on your own imagination either its source is other
I support you bhai

 

[QUASAR]

Congrats For The Story Bro...
Mast Story Hai.. Acha likh rahe ho.. Editing mein kafi mehnat kar rahe ho..
abhi read karke toh assa hi lag raha ki hero past mein a chuka hai.. shaktiya iske pass pehle se hi hai.. ab dekhna hai yeh past mein aya ya kuch aur chal raha. aur aya toh kaise, kon isse jungle mein laya.. let's se kya hota hai...

 

[abhi_mishra_91]

Update:3

Previously:
Mene Kaka baat k bare mein socha. Mujhe to waise kuchh bhi yaad nahi hai aur mujhe wahan k bare mein bhi pata nahi hai. To unke saath rehne se hi mera phayda hai. Ye soch k mene unki baat man li. Thik Suraj dhalne se pehle hum log Nagar mein pahunch gaye.Hamar andar ane k baad Nagar k gate ko band kar diya gaya. Ye baat mujhe badi ajib lagi. Mene Kaka se puchha to unhone Surksha k liye boldiya. Shayad Luteron k bajah se ye soch kar mene bhi kuchh nahi bola.

Aab Aage:

Wahan se hum log jake ek Saray(Hotel) pe pahunch gaye.Ye nagar ki sima ko lag k hai.Saray mein hum ne 2 rooms le liya aur fresh hone chale gaye. Main fresh hoke nikla to dekha mere bistar pe ek Jodi saaf kapda rakha hua hai. Shayad kaka laye honge.Mene saaf kapde pehan liya aur unlogo k paas chalagaya. Phir hum log niche jake khana kha liye.Khane k baad Kaki aur Bachhe room mein chale gaye.Aur Kaka Niche hukka marne Beth gaye.

Kaka-“Aur Beta kya tum bhi Maroge.”

Main-“Kabhi Mara Nahi Kaka.”

Kaka-“Lo beta Ek kash maar k dekho,sayad achha lage.”

Main-“Thik hai Kaka.”

Aur phir mein ne ek kash mara.Pehle Pehle mujhe kuchh hua. Phir sab thik lagne laga. Thode der baad me Kaka se bola.

Main-“Kaka Ye Payal aur Paras k Maa,Baba kahan pe hain.”

Kaka Ek lambi Saans lete hue bole.

Kaka-“Wo log aab nahi rahe. Kucch Din Pehle hi Unka nidhan hogaya tha.”

Main-“Ye bahut hi dukh ki baat hai. Kaise hua ye sab.”

Kaka-“Beta wo log Paas k Nagar ja rahe the tab Ek Junglee Janwar ka shikar ho gaye.”

Main- “Achha Ye baat hai. Kaka aap kya karte hain aur mujhe kya karna hoga.”

Kaka-“ Beta Mein Kheti Karta hun. Aur Tumhe Mere Saath Khet mein Kaam Karna hai. Subhe kaam karna hai aur dopehar mein bazar mein saman bechna hai.”

Main-“Thik hai Kaka. Aur Kaka wo aam ko kaise bechna hai.”

Kaka-“Beta hamara khet nagar k dusri taraf hai. Kal wahan jate waqt raste mein bahut bada bazar ayega. Wahan hum bech denge.”

Main-“Thik hai Kaka jaisa aap thik samne.”

Saray mein aaj kuchh jyada bhid thi. Mein bhi hukka marne lag gaya. Mein hukka mar k saray puri apni nazar ghumai. Dur k table ek kale kapde wala shaksh betha tha. Usko leke mujhe ajeeb si feeling aa rahi thi. Wo hamare taraf hi ghum raha tha.Uske aise dekhne se mujhe kuchh ajeeb se feeling aa rahi thi jaise mujhe dar aur gussa lag raha hai.Wo kuchh samay tak hame ghurta raha phir uth kar chala gaya. Uske jane se bhi mujhe kuchh thik nahi laga aur mein kaka se bola”Kaka chalo room chalte ,Raat kafi ho gay hai. ”

Hum log apne room mein aa gaye. Uske baad mein ne Payal aur Paras se bate ki aur phir main apne kamre mein aa gaya. Mujhe bar bar wo aadmi ka dhyan aa raha tha. Mujhe kuchh bura hone ka avash ho raha tha. Sab k so jane k baad main chupke se apne room se nikal kar kaka bale room mein chala gaya. Kaka bale room mein bed bada tha sab log ek hi bed pe soye hue the. Mein chup chap jake room k dusri taraf kursi par beth gaya. Karib Ek ghante baad mujhe kuchh halchal sunayi di.jaise ki koi room ka darwaja dhire se khulne ki kosis kar raha ho. Main bhi pura satark ho gaya. Chupk se jake sab ko utha diya aur sab leke ek kone mein chala gaya.

Tabhi room mein 3 nakabposh aadmi aye.(Bhai log unhe A1, A2, A3 likhunga)Wo sab kale kapde pehne hue the.Sab k haath mein khanjar the. Jaise wo log andar aye aur bed k taraf chal diye. Mene sab ko andhere me chhipe rehne ko kaha aur main unn nakabposh aadmiyon k paas dhire dhire badh gaya.Wo log bed k paas dekh ki koi nahi hai. Tab wo log idhar udhar dekhne lage. Main andhere me A3 k pichhe gaya aur uske hath aur munh daboch liya. Wo bahut hil raha tha par kuchh awaz nahi nikal pa raha tha. Tabhi A1 ne room mein lantern jala diya. Jaise hi ujala ho gaya tab wo log mujhe A3 ko pakade hue dekh liye.jab wo log meri taraf badhe tab mene A3 unlogo k taraf dhakel diya. Tino dhakka hoke gir pade. Dhakka kuch jordar hua tha. A1 aur A2 uth gaye par A3 nahi utha tha. A1 aur À2 ne mere upar Khanjar lekar hamla kar diya. Main ne hamle bachne k prayas kiya par mujhe bhi kuchh chote ayin.

Isi bich A3 ko bhi uth khada hua.Lekin wo meri taraf nahi aya wo sidha Kaka k taraf chal pada. Main to in logon ke sath lad raha tha mujhe iski khabar nahi thi. A3 jake sidha Payal pe hamla kar diya. Par bhich mein Kaka aa gaye unhone pure dum k sath uske war ko rok diya par Kaka ghayal ho gaye.aur unke munh se bhi chikh nikal gayi. Kaka ki chikh sunke bhi mera dhyan unki taraf chala gaya. Ishika fayda utha kar A1 aur A2 ne khanjar mere pet mein ghusa diya. Mere munh se bhi ek dard naak chikh nikal gayi.

Phir A3 ne Payal par hamla kar diya.Par ye kya. Uska war hawa mein hi ruk gaya.wo bar bar kausis karta raha par har bar uska war hawa mein ruk jata tha.Jaise koi adrishya kawach hai.unke war ko rok raha hai. Main ye dekh k shock ho gaya. Itne mein Saray k log aa gaye phir wo tino khidki se kud kar bhag gaye. Mera dard jaise badha tab main shock se nikla. Mere pet mein abhi bhi do Khanjar fase the. Dhire dhire meri ankhe band ho rahi thi aur mera sar chakra raha tha. Main wahin gir pada aur anke band karne se pehle Paras aur Payal ko meri taraf bahgte hue dekha. Aur phir sab kuchh andhera ho gaya.

 

[abhi_mishra_91]

Bhai
Nice start
Waise apne sabdo me likh rahe ho to jarur padhunga par ye to sach hai ki iski prerna dusre story se li hui hai
Story ka naam nahi likhoonga but good that you are writing something on your own imagination either its source is other
I support you bhai

Bhai sabhi writer ko kahin na kahin se ispiration milti hai.
mera story ka background match karsakta hai par main apni imagination se likh raha hun..
Thanks for your support Bhai

 

[abhi_mishra_91]

nice one Bro

Very nice, fantastic, awesome update ...................
Keep it up bro ..................
Waiting for next update ...................

Thanks for your support Guys
Update Posted

 

[abhi_mishra_91]

Congrats For The Story Bro...
Mast Story Hai.. Acha likh rahe ho.. Editing mein kafi mehnat kar rahe ho..
abhi read karke toh assa hi lag raha ki hero past mein a chuka hai.. shaktiya iske pass pehle se hi hai.. ab dekhna hai yeh past mein aya ya kuch aur chal raha. aur aya toh kaise, kon isse jungle mein laya.. let's se kya hota hai...

Thanks for your appreciation Bhai
hero ko sab kuchh yad ayega par usme abhi time hai....
Keep Supporting