Aaryapatel
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Sir bat achhi lagne ya buri lagne ki nhi hai story line ki hal, aapne jab ye plot shuru kiya yha aane ka us samay aditi ke man ki bhawana yahi show ki thi ki wo Birju aur Ramu se dur hona chah rhi hai aur ab aaram se usse phone sex kr rhi hai, bas is liye likha, agar aapko nhi pasand ki koi aapko story pr kuchh kahe to koi nhi aapki story jo marji likho bye TCstory achi nai lagri to mat padho rekha
Sir bat achhi lagne ya buri lagne ki nhi hai story line ki hal, aapne jab ye plot shuru kiya yha aane ka us samay aditi ke man ki bhawana yahi show ki thi ki wo Birju aur Ramu se dur hona chah rhi hai aur ab aaram se usse phone sex kr rhi hai, bas is liye likha, agar aapko nhi pasand ki koi aapko story pr kuchh kahe to koi nhi aapki story jo marji likho bye TC
Seems boring now... almost ek hi tarah ka seduction har insan se.. dheere -2 same type ka conversation lag rha hai.. har insan usse darta ahi aur dheere-2 aage badne ki sochta hia phir uski tarif karta hai aur manata hai...
Sir bat achhi lagne ya buri lagne ki nhi hai story line ki hal, aapne jab ye plot shuru kiya yha aane ka us samay aditi ke man ki bhawana yahi show ki thi ki wo Birju aur Ramu se dur hona chah rhi hai aur ab aaram se usse phone sex kr rhi hai, bas is liye likha, agar aapko nhi pasand ki koi aapko story pr kuchh kahe to koi nhi aapki story jo marji likho bye TC
Agreed with you Rekha rani ,
aur Prince srk bhai aapka jawab bahot hi galat... logon ki baat samjhne aur us par apne vichar rakhne ki bajay aap seedhe-2 mana kar de rahe ho.. galat attitude hai as writer ...
aur haaan hum padenge bhi aur likhenge bhi positive bhi aur negetive bhi ... aapko bardasht nahi to aap likhna band kar do...
story mai sex jada rha to story mai maza nai ata hai
Sir is plot ko kah rhi hu yha aditi Birju aur Ramu se dur jana chah rhi hai lekin wha turant phone sex kr rhi hai dono alag bat haimil rhe hai jisse muje birju chacha aur ramu chacha se dur rhena hai isse mai unke karib jane se khud ko rok paungi itne din mai main phir se vishal ki wife ban jaungi jo phle thi
Aditi vishal ki traf dek kr mai tmse dur nai jaa rhi hu mai un dono chacha se dur jaa rhi hu vishal mai phir se tmri pyari biwi banna chati hu
Vishal...wese tmne to bataya tha na aditi tm kafi saal se tmre mamu ke ghar nai gye the