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Fantasy Adventure of karma final chapter ( World beyond the world ) mystery of dungeon's .. Part 1

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भाई ये अछि स्टोरी है लेकिन इसका दूसरा पार्ट भी लिखना पिंटू भाई बिजी हो गए इसलिए दूसरा पार्ट नही लिखे है तो आप ट्राय करना दूसरा पार्ट लिखने का।
 

aditya

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Roshni me jate hi hum ko kuch bhi dikhai nahi de raha
tha hum kaha ja rahe kis aur badh rahe hai kuch bhi
dikhai nahi de raha tha .. Charo aur sirf roshni hi roshni
thi ..
Tabhi jaise hum kahi utre kiu ke mujhe mera jisam kahi
pada hua mahsoos ho raha tha Maine dono ke hath nahi
chode the .. Tabhi roshni gayab hone lagi abkho ke
samne se aur roshni gayab hote hote kuch naye rang
kuch nayi tasbire ubharne lagi.. Hame phirse dikhne laga
..
Main jab uth ke baitha to samne ka najara dekh
ascharya ho gaya ...
Hum jaha khade the wo dharti Nahi thi kuch solid roshni
pardasi type ke cristal pe khade the ..Maine idhar udhar
dekha to mujhe waha sirf Cristal ke bahar andhera aur
Kristal ke andar hum tin the .. ..
Main.. Yumina mohan tum dono thik ho ..
Yumina khadi hui aur ankhe malte huye boli...
Yumina.. Ye konsi jagah hai hum kaha hai ...
Maine gate spell ka istemal kiya mere samne gaye khul
gaya Maine asar gate se par kiya lekin pata chala hum
wohi hai Cristal me hi .. Gate spell yaha nakam ho gayi ...
Mohan .. Ye kaisi jagah hai na koi darwaja na kuch gaya
roshni hai lekin bahar gupt andhera kuch dikhai Nahi de
raha hai ..
Main .. Pata nahi .. Kya kehte ho kya karna chahiye ..
Yumina.. In Cristal ki diwaro ko tod du ..
Main .. Nahi jarur aisa kuch hoga jo hame yaha ke bare
me koi idea de sake ...
Thode waqt tak hum us Cristal ke andar dhundte rahe
lekin kuch nahi mila .. Tabhi achanak .. Cristal ki roshni
ghatne lagi bahar ka andhera jaise hamare najdik aane
laga ..
Tabhi Maine husna ko kaha ... Husna ye kya ho raha hai ..
Husna .. Malik lagta hai ye kristal me Jo roshni hai WO
andhere ko dur rakhe huye hai lekin roshni ghat rahi hai
..aur roshni chahiye nahi to hum bhi andhere me dub
jayenge...
Main.. Roshni ha hum jise abtak dhund rahe the wo
roshni hi hai hame aur roshni chahiye yaha se andhere
ko batana hoga tabhi pata chalega hum kaha hai ...
Husna taiyar ho ajao mujhe tumhari roshni ki taqat do ..
Tabhi husna mere andar agayi aur main dekhte hi
dekhte ek roshni ka insan ban gaya .. Mere jisam se
nikalti roshni ka asar ye hua ke Cristal ke prabhaw se wo
100 guna Jada badh gayi aur bahar ke andhere ko milta
aage badh ne lagi .. Aur jo najara hamare samne tha use
dekh jaise hum ascharya chakit ho gaye. ..
Hum Cristal me hawa me tair rahe the .. Aur hamare
niche ek puri alag duniya thi .... Tabhi Cristal achanak
niche us duniya ki aur badh ne laga .. Mujhe kuch samajh
nahi araha tha ho kya raha hai aur wo Cristal us duniya
ke ek jungle ke bich utar gaya ..
Jaise wo Cristal jungle me utra crital phighalne laga
pichal le wo humse dur akar lene laga .. Aur dekhte hi
dekhte wo Cristal hamare samne humse dugne akar ka
insani roop me tha ...
Hum ascharya se us Cristal wale admi ko dekh rahe the
..tabhi Cristal admi chote chote tukro me bikhar gaya
aur roshni me shama gaya .. Hame kuch samajh aata
usse pehle pura gayab ho gaya ...
Yumina... Ye kya hua kaha gaya ye ..
Main.. Pata nahi abhi hum hai kaha .. Ye ped dekho kitne
alag hai na ...
Mohan .. Ha aur janwar bhi .
Main.. Janwar kaha hai janwar. ...
Mohan .. Hamare Charo aur hum phir chuke hai..
Yumina ne aur Maine apni talwar nikal li mohan wind
magic ka use kar hawa me uth gaya ..
Hame gol se ghere ajeev chipkali jaise lekin Cristal ke
tarah hi the hare Cristal ke bane 2 fit hight wale
chupkali khade the gurra rahe the. .
Maine bhi apni talwar nikal li aur talwar ko bhi roshni
me badal diya .. Yumina bhi taiyar thi ..
Tabhi jaise ek ek karke hare crital wale chupkali hum pe
kud pade main aur yumina apni talwar ghuma unko
karne lagi .. Mere talwar se wo bich se kat jate lekin
yumina ke talwar se unke tukre tukre ho jate jaise kanch
ke hote hai ..
Idhar Mohan bhi apne wind magic se bawandar bana
unko hawa me uchal de raha tha aur jab niche girte tut
jate ... Karib 16 the waqt to nahi laga lekin ascharya
bahut hua .. Unko hara hi diya ....
Mohan .. Ye Cristal ka kya chakkar hai yaha .. Junwar bhi
Cristal ke .. Tabhi jaise kuch hone laga wo Cristal jo
Yumina aur mohan ke war se tute the wo bapas philhal
ke judne lage .. Lekin mere kate huye Cristal wale
chupkali nahi jude .. Yumina .. Ye kya ho raha hai ....
Main.. Ye dobara se Jud rahe hai.. Aise inko Mara nahi ja
sakta lagta hai ... Roshni ki taqat se haraya ja sakta hai..
Maine unko jisne ka mouka Nahi diya aur apni talwar
ghuma unko kat ta gaya jabtak waha koi na bacha ..
Mohan.. Jaldi se jungle se nikalna hoga warna aise aur
bhi honge unse samna ho jayega ...
Main.. Hmm sahi kaha .. Asman se humne dekha tha na
koi Nagar jaisa kuch hai is aur ..
Yumina... Ha Nagar hi hai ... Bada pyara nagar hai ..
Main.. Tumhe kaise pata ..
Yumina .. Dady ladkio ko pata hota hai kitni sundar dikh
rahi thi..
Main.. Kabhi kabhi sundarta chalawa bhi hoti hai .. Chalo
pehle pata kare hum hai kaha hamari duniya to Lagti
Nahi nahi ..
Main.. Monark prakat ho .. Mere pukarne se monark
mere pass tote ke roop me prakat ho gaya ..
Main.. Monark jao aur kisi ke najar me aaye bina is jagah
ke bare me jitni jankari ho sake lekar aao ..
Monark .. Ji malik ..
Main.. Husna bahar ajao .. Tabhi husna mere andar se
bahar agayi .. Main normal insani roop me agaya ... Chalo
pehle is jungle se nikalte hai....
Jis aur Nagar ko dekha tha us aur chal pade ..
Main.. Mohan tumhe kya lagta hai hame yaha kiu choda
gaya hai .. Wo Cristal admi hame yaha chod kaha gayab
ho gaya ..
Mohan .. Kya pata .. Pehle andhera phir ye duniya ho kya
raha hai hum dungen me aaye the na ..
Yumina .. Dady agar thik se socha jaye aisa nahi lagta
kause hamari pariksha li ja rahi ho .. Matlab pehli
pariksha andhere ko dur karna dusri pariksha yaha is
duniya me ..
Mohan .. To phir wo Cristal wala admi kon tha ..
Main.. Rakhwala .. Dungen ka rakhwala .. Agar hum
pehla padao par Nahi karte to hum hamesha ke liye
andhere me rah jate .. Ise ek khel ki tarah samjho ..
Padao par na kiya to usi me atak ke rah jaoge .. Khel se
bahar nikalne ka ek hi tarika hota hai khel ko jitkar ..
Hum bate karte huye jungle se nikle hi the ke tabhi
hamare samne dusri musibat khadi thi aur ye musibat
Choti nahi .. Bahut badi thi ek ped jiske har sakh hil rahi
thi .. Jaise hi hum jungle se nikal le pehla kadam khule
maidan me rakha ped ke sakhe hamari aur badh ne lagi
..
Hum piche ho gaye jungle me .. Sakhe ruk gayi.. ...
 
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Mohan .. Ye kya hai ped aise kaise ho sakta hai..
Main ..ghabrao nahi .. Maine kaha tha na agar padao par
nahi karoge to wohi atak ke rah jao ge .. Hame agar aage
Jana hai is ped ko harana hoga ...
Mohan .. Mere wind magic me itni taqat Nahi ke main is ped
ko ukhad saku ..
Main.. Hmm ukhad ne ki kya jarurat hai .. Yumina training
me hamesha taqatwar yodha dhundti thi na jao aur apne
talwar ki taqat dikhao ek ek sakh kat dalo lekin dhayan
rakhna wo tumhe chu bhi na paye ..
Yumina.. Ji dady .. Yumina talwar nikal taiyar ho gayi aur
doud padi ped ki aur ped ke sakh bhi yumina ki aur badh ne
lage jaise hi dono ek dusre ke karib pahuche Yumina uchal
gayi aur apni talwar ghuma sakh ke ke do dukre kar aage
badh thi chali gayi dusri sakh ne Yumina pe war kiya Yumina
kalabazi khati hui sakh ke tukre karti rahi .. Akhir me ped ka
sirf tana hi rah gaya uske sabhi sakh kat chuke the .. Ped aab
kuch nahi kar raha tha ..
Main.. Yumina ped ko bhi kat do ..
Yumina .. Kiu dady .. Tabhi ped ke tane se naye sakhaye
nikalne lage ..
Main.. Dekho isliye .. Tabhi yumina ne apni talwar ko water
magic se cover kar liya aur uchal te huye talwar ko puri
taqat se ghuma ped ke tane ke do tukre karte huye aage badh
gayi .. Ped kat ke gir gaya ...
Main aur mohan Yumina ke pass pahuch gaye ..
Yumina ..dady kuch ajeev sa mahsoos ho raha hai pehle aisa
nahi tha.. Jaise main pehle se halki aur tezz ho gayi hu ..
Main.. Hmm ( man me jaisa socha tha waisa hi hai .. Ye ek
tarah ke khel ke jaisa hai ..) Tab to achhi baat hai beti chalo
aage badh te hai asha karta hu sahar tak pahuchne me Aab
koi aur dikkat nahi hogi ..
Yumina .. Ye ajeev si jagah hai na dady ... Ped bhi hamla karte
hai phir wo Cristal ke janwar ..
Main.. Ha sahi kaha .. Mohan tumara kya mat hai kya ho
sakta hai ye ..
Kuch aur aage badhe to hame ek rasta mila jise dekh ke lagta
tha ye city ki aur ja raha tha hum bhi raste ko pakad chal
pade ..
Kuch aur gaye to monark lout aaya ..
Monark .. Malik aap jis aur ja rahe hai wo ek sahar hai .. Jise
adventurer city kehte hai ..
Main.. Adventurer city ..
Monark .. Ji malik aur city mage hai ladaku hai .. Manav hai
ardh manav hai .. Lekin jadatar ardh manav gulam hai ..
Main.. Gulam demi humans yaha gulam hai ..yaha bawastha
kaise chalta hai ..
Monark .. Yaha ek queen bhi hai jo is city ko chalate hai unke
kuch sena bhi hai jo bawastha chalate hai..
Main .. Bhasa kya hai ..
Monark .. Hum jaise hi hai samajhne me koi muskil Nahi hui
... Kuch chije aur hai jo mujhe samajh nahi aayi ..
Main.. Kya ..
Monark .. Malik ye yodha mage apne sath rang birange
pathar ke tukre late hai aur unke badle rakam le jate hai ..
Lekin ye pathar aate kaha se hai nahi pata ..
Maine jeb me hath dala aur ek Lal rang ka pathar nikal ke
bola aisa pathar kya ..
Monark .. Ji malik aisa hi ..
Main.. Hmm sahi andaza lagaya tha ..,( Jab yumina ne ped ke
do tukre kiye tabhi ped ke andar se ye pathar bahar gira jise
yumina ne nahi dekha tha lekin maine dekh liya tha .. Aur
usko utha liya apne magic se .. ) aur kuch khas ..
Monark .. Ha malik jab main city me prabesh kar raha tha
mujhe kuch ajeev sa mahsoos hua jaise koi shield ho lekin
main uke par ja paya …
Main.. Thik hai chalo baki khud pata ho jayega at least yaha
ki bhasa hum jaisi hai .. Hum chal pade adventurer city ki aur
..
Kuch dur chalne ke baad hame adventurer city dikhne laga ..
Aur city dur se hi pata chal raha tha kamal ki jagah hai .. Dur
se mahal ki uchai pata chal rahi thi hare aur safed rangka
mahal tha aur desine kuch gulab ke pholo jaisi thi ..
Adventurer city Charo aur se ek bade diwar se ghiri hui thi
aur ek bada sa gate bhi tha .. Hum us gate ke taraf hi badh
rahe the.
Kuch aage badhe to hame ek admio ka group dikha jisme 5
jawan ladke jo kabach aur talwar kulhadi jaise hathiyar ke
sath the aur unke sath ek ladki thi jiske hath me ek lambi
bhale jaisa chadi thi .. Jiske top pe ek pathar laga hua tha
jaisa ke Maine uthaya tha ..
WO hamare karib se gujarne lage hame dekh ke bhi an dekha
kar diya jaise humse koi matlab bhi na ho ..
Ye baat ajeev lagi hamare kapde alag the unse hame kuch
pucha kiu nahi kya hum yaha ke hai ke nahi ..
Hum bhi unke bagal se gujar ke aage magic city ke gate ki aur
badh gaye ..
Jab gate pe pahuche to waha kuch sainik tainat the .. Mujhe
laga ye jarur hame rokenge lekin aisa nahi hua .. Wo to sirf
khade rahe gate ke samne gate khula hua tha .. Hum gate se
gujar gaye ..
Yumina .. Kaisi ajeev jagah se .. Koi hume ROK ke sawal kiu
nahi puch raha kaha se aaye hai kaha ja rahe hai ..
Main.. Hmm ajeev to hai lekin sayad ye unke liye normal
hoga . city ka naam hi hai adventurer city .. Matlab jaha tak
mujhe lagta hai is city me jada tar log bahar se kahi se aate
hai .. Isliye kisi ko bhi yaha roka Nahi jata ..
Mohan.. To yaha ki suraksha kaise hoti hai ..kuch pata nahi
chal raha aur ye sainik kis kaam ke phir ..
Main.. Hmm kuch to hoga sayad ye log insano ko ya demi
humans ko dushman Nahi samajhte .. Unka dushman kuch
aur hoga jinke liye saink rakhe hai…
Gate ko par kar hum city me pahuch gaye aur sabse pehle
hamara samna hua ek bishal bazar se .. Aur kya bazar tha
Charo aur raste ke dono kinare chote chote hajaro stall lage
huye the falo ke khano ke kapdo ke aur bhi kayi … aur pura
market chahal pahal se bhara pada tha .. Insan Charo aur
kharidari kar rahe the unke kapde kuch purane dhang ke the
jaise abtak yaha sile huye kapde bane hi na ho .. Lekin unki
feeting aur pehen ne ka tarika behad alag tha jo sabko
khubsurat banati thi .. Lekin kuch sile huye kapde bhi dikhe ..
Hum aage badh rahe the tabhi mujhe do ladki jo bahut
purane aur gande kapdo me thi .. Unke kan aur dum dekh kar
pata chal raha tha wo demi Hunan hai .. Apne sar pe bade
bade potle liye market se gujar rahi thi tabhi achanak wo
hua jise dekh mera khun khol gaya ..
Raste chal rahe Ek meri hi umar ke ladke ne un dono ladkio
mese ek ko jor ka dhakka de diya ..
Dono ladkiya ek dusre se takra gir padi …
Ladka .. Tum gandi nali Ke hamare ilake me kya kar rahi ho
jao west jone mujhe chukar mera din bigad diya tum logo ki
sakal bhi nahi dekhna chahta .. Chhii mera din bigad diya ..
Ladka bapas us ladki ko lath Marne hi wala tha ke main bich
me agaya ..
Main.. Kya baat hai aap ko kya pareshani hai ..
Ladka .. Tumhare gulam hai kya .hatao is gandagi ko raste se
.. WO ladka itna bol chala gaya ..
Main ghuma aur un ladkio ko dekh bola ..
Main.. Aap dono ko chot to nahi aayi .. Maine unke potle utha
unko de diye .. Dono ladkiya mujhe ascharya se dekh rahi thi
kuch boli Nahi bas unke Ashu beh rahe the …
Tabhi waha ek bujurg aurat aayi ..aur ladkio ko dekh ..
Aurat .. Tum dono thik to ho na chalo yaha se … dono ladkiya
Us aurat ke sath chali gayi apne potliya uthake ..
Yumina .. Bechari dono .. Ye kaisi jagah hai kisi me insaniyat
nahi hai kya ..
Main.. Pata nahi lekin pata chal jayega .. Hum aage badh
gaye lekin aab kafi waqt gujar gaya tha sab ko bhukh lagne
lagi thi ..
 
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souma123

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nice update
 

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Awesome update
 

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waiting for update
 

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Nice update
 
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