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Fantasy Adventure of karma final chapter ( World beyond the world ) mystery of dungeon's .. Part 1

Mahiirathore

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Superrrrr Update Bhaiii
Adventure bahut majedar hota ja rha h
Ese hii lage rho
 
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Lajawab update bhai
 

aditya

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Update 24
Hum bhi waha pahuch gaye .. Restro khacha kharch
bhara Hus tha karib 20 se 25 table the jinme 10 se 12 log
baith aram se kha pi sakte the ..
Hum pahuche aur idhar udhar najar doudai to hame simi
aur uska group dikh gaya .. Simi ne bhi hame dekh liya ..
Simi .. Yaha ajao .. Ha idhar .. Hun unke table pe pahuch
gaye..
Main.. Hame der to nahi hui ..
Huda .. Nahi nahi abhi ti hum bhi pahuche hai ..
Hum unke ulat taraf baith gaye… lekin Rita aur mita nahi
baithi ..
Main.. Rita mita kya hua baith jao ..
Rita.. Malik hum apke barabar kaise baith sakte hai ..
Tabhi meri najar restro ke Aur tables pe gayi .. Wo sab
Rita aur mita ko hi dekh rahe the .. Sayad unko Rita aur
mita ka yaha aana achha nahi laga ..
Main.. Baith jao koi kuch bhi kahe main hu na .. Baith jao ..
Tabhi ek ladke ki awaj aayi ..
Ladka.. Hey tum dono yaha kya kar rahi ho .. Kaha tha na
tum nali ke kide yaha dikhna Nahi .. Jao paschim me
waha apna gandagi failao ..
Maine mud ke dekha to wo wohi ladka tha jo us din pehli
baar bazar me dikha tha inko lat mari thi ..
Main khada ho gaya .. Tumhe kya dikkat hai inko nahi
mujhe batao …
Ladka .. Tum to tum ho ye tumhare gulam hai kya inko
yaha kiu laye ho .. Ye kide is jagah ko ganda kar denge ..
Main.. Ganda ha ho to raha hai lekin unke wajah se nahi
tum jaise gandi nali ke kido ke wajah se ..
Ladka… kya kaha mujhe gandi nali ka kida kaha ..
Tumhari itni himmat ..
Main.. Kiu bura laga .. Tum us kide se bhi battar ho jo sad
jate hai .. Aab agar ek sabd bola to tum kabhi bol Nahi
paoge ..
Ladka .. Lagta hai tum yaha naye naye aaye ho isliye
mere bare me nahi jante. . main subuki hu subuki ..
Main .. To kya tere naam ka mala japu ..
Subuki .. Lagta hai tum aise nahi manoge .. Aab ye faisla
chunowti se hi hoga .. Main tumhe chonowti de raha hu
mukable ka .. Agar main jita to tum mere pair pakad
maafi mangoge ..aur apni sakal phir kabhi nahi dikhaoge
yaha ..
Main.. Agar main jeeta tum ghutne pe jhuk ke inse maafi
mango se aur kabhi bhul ke bhi kisi bhi demi human ki
bejjati nahi karoge ..
Subuki .. Hahaha manjur hai ….
Hum restro ke bahar agaye sabhi adventurer jo waha
moujud the mashal lekar restro ke bahar roshni karte
huye gol se hamare Charo aur khade ho gaye ..
Subuki .. Tumhe pata nahi main 7 we padao ka adventurer
hu .. Tum mujhse jeet na to dur ki baat hai agar ab bhi
maafi mang lo main tumhe Jane dunga ..
Main.. Achha dekhu to sahi satwe padao ke adventurer
me kitna dam hai .. Idhar subuki talwar liye khada tha
idhar main.
Huda .. Karma ke samne kya subuki tike ga jo humne aaj
dekha hai ..
Simi .. Ha lekin subuki bhi to satwe padao ka adventurer
hai dekhte hai ..
Yumina … hahaha satwe ho ya 12 padao ka mere Dady ke
samne koi nahi tik sakta .. Dekho aab Dady kaise khelte
hai subuki ke sath .. Agar dady ne ek kadam bhi piche
hata liye main man lungi wo har gaye ..
Main talwar liye khada tha .. Subuki chikhte huye aage
badha jaise ek hi war se mere talwar ke tukre karna
chahta ho .. Aur pehla war jor ka kiya .. Maine talwar ko
bas halka sa guma diya ..subuki ki talwar mere talwar se
takra chhitak gayi ..
Subuki aur gusse me agaya aur mujhpe hath ghuma
ghuma war karne laga aise war jaise wo meri jaan Lena
chahta ho lekin uske har war ko main apni talwar se kat
ta hute chitak de raha tha ..
Ek min se do min do se 5 min ho gaye main apni jagah se
ek kadam nahi hila aur subuki ki sanse ukhad gayi talwar
chalate huye .. Usne akhri bachi hui takat laga mujhpe
war kiya .. Tabhi Maine apne talwar pe thoda sa apne
hatho ka bal de diya .. Subuki ki talwar ko kat te huye
meri talwar gujar gayi ..
Subuki ghutne ke bal bath ke lambi lambi sanse lete huye
kabhi apni talwar ko dekhta kabhi mujhko ..
Main.. Har man rahe ho .. Ya magic ka bhi istemak karna
hai ..
Subuki .. Har aur main nahi main har Nahi manunga .. Wo
khada hone laga aur apne hath aage kar aap ke gole hath
pe bana ne laga .. Mujhe sararat sujhi .. Maine apna slip
spell jo kafi waqt se istemal nahi kiya wo kar diya .. Mere
slip no spell se subuki khade khade phisal gaya .. Uska
magic adhe me hi rah gaya .. Wo dobara khada hone ki
kosis kar raha tha ke tabhi maine dobara slip spell kiya ..
WO dobara gir pada .. Sabhi adventurer ki haste haste
halat karab ho gayi.. Bechari me aab jaan baki Nahi bachi
thu khade hone tak ki ..
Main chalte huye uske pass pahucha aur uske gardan pe
apni talwar rakh Ke bola … kiu har mante ho aab ..
Subuki .. Ha har manta hu .. Mujhe maaf kar do Aab main
aur nahi lad sakta ..
Main.. Maafi mujhse Nahi in dono se mango ..
Subuki kisi tarah uth ke ghutno pe agaya aur bola ..
Mujhe maaf kardo mujhse galati ho gayi ..
Main subuki ko wohi chod bapas restro me agaye .. Is baar
Rita mita hamare sath baith gayi unke ankhe nam thi ..
Main.. Tum dono gulam Nahi ho thik hai hamare is naye
chote pariwar ka hissa ho .. Khud ko itna kamjor mat
samjha karo ..
Phir humne khane pine ka karyakram suru kar diya ..
Latika aur bakio ke man me kayi sawal the hamare bare
me .. Lekin kisi ki aab puchne ki himmat nahi ho rahi thi ..
Khana khatam kar hum ghar lout aaye raat kafi ho gayi
thi sabhi sone chale gaye lekin mujhe nind Nahi arahi thi
mujhe waqt ka khayal rakhna tha hum yaha is duniya me
Jada nahi ruk sakte the .. Mujhe jaise kahani me tha har
padao ko par kar 12 we padao tak pahuchna tha .. Tabhi
aage koi rasta mil sakta tha ..
 
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Raat beet ne gayi andhera chat gaya bahar roshni hi roshni
ho gayi ..
Ek ek kar hum sabhi ki nind bhi khul gayi aur hum taiyar
hone lage .. Ghar ka mahol badal gaya tha aab latika aur
garan khush the lekin ye khushi kabtak kayam rahne wali
thi pata nahi kiu ke hum yaha basne to aaye nahi thi hame
hamare duniya tak loutne ka rasta chahiye tha ..
Aaj nahi to kal hum lout jayenge apni duniya me tab inki
khushi ka kya hoga ..
Hum taiyar ho gaye latika ne khana bana liya kuch naste me
aur kuch adventure Ke waqt din me khane ke liye pack kar
liya ..
Hum chal pade rita aut mita ko wohi ghar me chod ..
Jab hum gate me pahuche to sabki najar humpe thi ..
Waha sabhi mil gaye simi ka group bhi ..
Simi .. To aaj kaha ka irada hai ..
Latika .. Yehi jane jaha bolenge le chalungi ..
Main.. Tisre padao ki aur ..
Simi .. Lekin karma ji aap to 5 we padao ka asani se samna
kar rahe the phir tisre padao pe kiu..
Main.. Aap Nahi samjhengi sidhio ke har paidan se hokar
chalna chahiye warna phisal bhi sakte hai ..
Hum tisre padao ko aur chal pade .. Tisra padao ke danav bhi
kuch khas nahi the gorila type ke danav the jo apni taqat se
hamla karte the …. Us din tisra padao aur agle din choutha
padao bhi par kar hum panchwe padao pe ja pahuche …
Matlab aab hum jungle ke sabhi padao par kar chuke the .. 5
we padao me minator ke sath hum samna kar rahe the ..
Main yumina aur latika unko gher ke humla kar rahe the aur
mohan apne wind magic se unka dhayan bhatka raha tha …
Aur hum mouka dekh minator pe war kar rahe the …
Charo aur chattan hone ke wajah se hum asani se chattano
pe se kud ke unko mar rahe the..
Us din humne 12 minator ko khatam kiya sath milke .. Aur
hum loutne lage …
Raste me simi ke group se mulakat ho gayi jo panchwe padao
pe hi thi lekin humse dur ke ilake me the …
Huda … karma bhai aaj kitne minator ko halal kiya ..
Main.. Pata nahi ginti nahi ki ..
Garan.. 12 aaj insab ne milke 12 mare hai ..
Huda .. Kya bhai karma lagta hai tumhare hote 5 we padao pe
ek bhi minator nahi bachne wala ..
Main .. Nahi aisi koi baat nahi aaj hi akhri din tha 5 we padao
ka kal chhathe padao pe Jane wale hai …
Latika .. Nahi hum kal koi adventure nahi karne wale hai ..
Hum lagatar 5 din se ek naye padao ko par kar rahe hai ..
Hame thoda sochna chahiye thoda aram bhi chahiye…
Main.. Are ha main tp bhul hi gaya jisam ko aram ki bhi
jarurat hoti hai. ..
Simi latika ke kan me .. Latika ye ho kya raha hai tumhare
group me har roj ek naya padao aise par kar rahe hai jaise
wo kuch bhi na ho .. Hame ek ek padao par karne me mahino
lag jate hai .. Tab jake hum khud ko agle padao pe Jane ke
liye taiyar kar pate hai ..
Latika .. Simi mera biswas kar main unke sath adventure pe
hu lekin abtak mujhe unke taqat aur hunar ka sahi andaza
nahi ho paya hai .. Andaza lagayi bhi kaise Maine abtak nahi
dekha inka ek baar bhi koi war khali jate huye ..
Simi .. Kya keh rahi ho .. Sach me.. Lekin agar ye aise hi upari
padao pe chadte rahe to kahi kuch khatra na ho jaye…
Latika .. Main bhi yahi soch rahi hu isliye Maine kal inko
adventure pe aane se roka hai .. Dekho inko 22 minator ka
samna karne ke bad bhi aise hai jaise kuch hua hi na ek
kharoch tak kisi ko nahi aayi ..
Main.. Latika kal hum adventure Nahi karenge to kya
karenge ..
Latika .. Ek kaam karte hai kal hum mahal ke pass wale khule
maidan me picnic karenge ..
Main.. Hmm idea bura nahi hai ..
Simi .. Picnic .. Achha hai hum bhi thak chuke hai agar bura
na mane to hum bhi ap logo ke sath join kar le ..
Latika .. Ha ha kiu nahi .. Jarur ..
Main.. To thik hai kal ek jordar picnic ho jaye …..
Wo din bhi beet gaya hum shubha taiyar ho nikal pade picnic
ke liye ..
Hum purab me mahal ki taraf badh rahe the aur mahal ke
dakshin me tha wo khula maidan … nanhe komal ghaso se
bhara ankho ko sukun Dene wala ..
Hum apne sath picnic ka pura saman kekar aaye the bas
lakdiy lani baki thi ..
Main.. Latika tum sab taiyar karo main lakdio ka intezam
karta hu ..
Rita mita .. Malik hum apki madat karte hai lakdiya ikatha
karne me … us khule maidan ke ant me ek chita Lekin Ghana
pedo ka jamawda tha usme mujhe kuch dukhi dali dikhi main
dono ko liye waha agaya ..
Dono niche gire huye dukhi daliya ikatha karne lagi aur
main pedo ki aur dekhne laga .. Ped Jada unche to nahi lekin
kafi unche the ..
Main.. Tum dono niche pade lakdiya uthao main pedo pe se
sukhi dali todta hu ..
Rita .. Sambhal ke malik ..
Main.. Meri fikar chodo .. Main ek chalang Ke sath ped ke
sabse unchi mazboot dali pe tha ..
Phir apni talwar nikal sukhi dalio ko kat ne laga .. Tabhi
mujhe Rita aur mita ki chikh sunai di ..
Maine niche dekha to waha kuch sainik the ..
Main pedo ke dalio pe se kud ke niche utar aaya ..
Rita aur mita dono dare huye the ..
Main.. Ji main apki kya madat kar sakta hu ..
Sainik.. Tum ho kya in dono ke malik..
Main.. Ji ha apko koi taklif ..
Sainik.. Taklif ke bachhe yaha kya kar rahe ho tumhe ped
karne ke jurm me giraftar kar sakte hai samjhe ..
Main.. Nahi samjha .. Dekhiye humne ek bhi kachhi dali Nahi
todi sirf dikha dali todi hai ..
Sainik.. Humse Japan chalata hai.dekh hum tumhe Jane de
sakte hai bas in dono ko hamare sath..
WO kuch aur bol pate usse pehle meri talwar nikal aayi ..
Main.. Apni gandi jaban kabu me rakho warna tum yaha se
jinda nahi bachoge ..
Sainik.. Hame talwar dikhata hai itni himmat .. GI raftar kar
lo isko .. Jaise hi WO aage badhne lage mera spell Sunai diya ..
Paralize .. Mera ye spell karna tha ke sabhi sainik aag badhte
badhte jam gaye .. Unka jisam jawab de gaya tha wo hil nahi
pa rahe the .. Aab wo khud ko balance Nahi kar paye aur gir
gaye wohi .. Wo 2 the ..
Main.. Rita mita chalo lakdiya lo der ho rahi hai ..
Rita .. Malik ye ye …
Main.. Daro nahi ye aab kabhi pareshan nahi karenge ..
Dono darte huye lakadiya ikatha karne lagi .. Kuch 10 min
baad hum bapas lout aaye ..
 

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Bhai ek or update de hi do
 
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Siraj Patel

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Bahut hi Shandar aur lajawab update bhai ekdum jhakaas dhamakedar mind blowing update,
Aap ki mehnat aur imagination ne is Kahani Mein Char Chand laga diye hai,
Keep going
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