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Fantasy Adventure of karma final chapter ( World beyond the world ) mystery of dungeon's .. Part 1

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Mast aur awesome update bhai
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Update 32
Hum rakam lekar ghar lout aaye jaha sabhi apni apni
thakan mita rahe the ..
Garan ne unko invitation ka bataya to latika behad
khush hui .. Lekin hum nahi ..main abhi in mahal walo
se dur rahna chahta tha lekin sath sath mera dimag
keh raha tha mujhe Jana chahiye waise bhi abhi tak
Queen ki sakal bhi nahi dekhi thi humne ..
Din to kisi tarah beet gaya raat ko hum sabhi taiyar ho
gaye jo tha hamare pass usi se aur chal pade mahal ki
aur ..
Invitation dikhate hi hame mahal me prabesh hasil ho
gaya ..
Hum mahal ke mykhya dwar se dakhil ho gaye aur ek
saink jo hame rasta dikha raha tha uske sath ek hall
me pahuch gaye jaha pehle se hi mantri Sena nayak
aur mage rakasha thi .. Him ko dekh unhe Jada khushi
to nahi hui lekin unke hotho pe jo jhuthi muskan thi
main unke par dekh sakta tha tabhi waha queen ki
entry hui sabhi mantri sena nayak mage rakasha
unke aage jhuk gaye .. Hum bhi jhuk gaye Queen ki
izazat me. .
Queen akar hamare samne khadi ho gayi Maine najar
utha unko dekha to dekhta rah gaya .. Wo ek 20 se 25
saal ki umar wali ek jawan khubsurat ladki thi.. Kuch
der dekhte hi mujhe achanak kuch ajeev sa ehsaas hua
Lekin us waqt hi queen ki awaj aayi ..
Queen .. To tumhi ho jinhone 8 padao ko bhi par kar
liya hai …
Latika .. Ji my Queen ..
Queen...hmm kabile tarif bahut khud kayi jamano se jo
na koi kar paya wo tum sab ne kar dikhaya .. Bahut
khub ..
Latika .. Sukriya my queen ..
Queen …. Aaj hum ne tumsab ki bahaduri bhare
karname ke kiye ye dawat rakhi hai .. Khao pio maze
karo ..
Main ..my Queen aap ka sukriya hum jarur dawat ka
maza lenge lekin mujhe nahi lagta yehi karan ke liye
aap ne hame yaha Nahi bulaya hai ..
Queen ne mujhe kuch der dekha aur boli.
Queen .. Tum tumhara naam kya hai ..
Main.. Karma mera naam hi karma hai ..
Queen.. hmm to tumhi karma ho kafi tezz lagte ho
mahal me bahaduro ki bahut jadurat hai yahi kaam
karna chahoge ..jindagi ki sabhi murad puri ho jayegi ..
Main.. My queen aap ab bhi asal mydde pe nahi aaye
hai ..
Queen .. Thik hai tum sahi keh rahe ho tumlogo ko
yaha bulane ke piche mukhiya karan hai ..tum log ..
Main.. Hum kuch samjhe nahi ..
Queen .. Tum log 8 we padao pe pahuch gaye ho aur bhi
aage badhne ki ichha hogi lekin tum logo ko yahi
rukna hoga…
Main.. Kiu my queen hum 12 we padao tak pahuchna
chahte hai aur devil queen se mukabla karna chahte
hai . .
Queen .. Yehi hum nahi chahte tum logo ke aisa karne
se hum aur hamare is desh ko nukshan pahuch sakta
hai .. Isliye tum log aage Jana band kar do ..
Main .. Maafi my queen ye mumkin nahi auro ke jaise
hum bhi is duniya ke nahi hai hai aur hame bhi loutna
hai hamari duniya me isliye hum apna ye adventure
ROK nahi sakte ..
Queen .. Ye mera adesh hai .. Queen ka adesh ..
Latika .. Maafi my Queen jarur hum aage nahi
badhenge maafi .. Latika Dari hui thi uske liye ye sab
kuch kuch Jada hi tha .. Wo samajh nahi pa rahi thi ..
Main.. My Queen hame izazat de hum aab chalna
chahenge … phir main bina ruke waha se chala gaya
mere piche baki bhi agaye …
Hamare jate hi queen sabhi ki aur dekh ke …
Queen .. Mantri ji adesh jari kiya jaye koi bhi 8 we
padao se aage nahi badhega …
Mantri ji .. Ji my Queen …
Queen ..aur insabhi pe najar rakhi jaye .. Agar unhone
adesh ka ulanghan kiya turant giraftar kar liya jaye …
Hum waha se nikal ghar pahuch gaye..
Yumina .. Dady aage ..
Latika .. Aage kya hum 8 we padao se aage nahi badh
sakte …
Main.. Latika pehle ye batao tumhe hamare faisle lene
ka huq kisne diya .. Tum group leader ho na to bina
group se puche Queen ke aage apni kamjori ki dikhai ..
Latika hamara safar yehi tak tha … abtak kafi rakam
jama ho gayi hogi tum dono bhai bahan shanti se kafi
samay tak ji sakte ho … hamara group yahi tut jata hai
.. Mujhe fark nahi pad ta yaha ki Queen kya keh ti hai
mujhe jivan bhar is duniya me nahi rahna hai .. Meri
awaj thodi kathor ho gayi thi latika saham chuki thi ….
Latika .. Maine to isliye kaha tha ke Queen ye chahti
hai ..
Main.. Latika tumhe kya lagta hai mujhe tumhare us
queen ki koi parwah hai .. Nahi mujhe rasta dhundna
hai .. Yaha log roj adventure kar ya to mare jate hai ya
jakhmi hote hai .. Ye jindagi nahi hai … aise jiya nahi
jata …
Garan … Bhai shan't ho jaiyjaiye…
Main.. Yumina kal shubha hum apne akhri padao ke
liye niklenge akhri isliye kiu ke aab sabhi padao par
kar devil queen ka mukabla karke hi loutenge….
Yumina .. Ji dady aapne sahi kaha …
Main.. Latika aab hum is group ki bandhano se ajad
hai .. Tum apne liye naye sathi dhund Lena .. Ab tak jo
sikha hai hamare sath rahte huye aab tum log kabhi
bhukhe Nahi maroge … albida …
Latika .. Nahi nahi karma ye kya keh rahe ho ..
Main.. Sahi keh raha hu latika hamara sath yahi tak
ka tha .. Waise bhi aab aage ka rasta aur kathin hota
jayega jo tumhare liye asan nahi hoga …
Hum bahar Jane lage hi the ke Rita mita agayi ..
Rita .. Malik hamara kya hoga aap ke bina hum kaise
rahenge hum bapas us jindagi me nahi lout sakte …
Main.. Tum dono fikar mat karo .. Tum dono ko kabhi
phirse us jindagi me nahi loutna hoga .. Jab sab nipat
jayega tum dono ko lene main aayunga … tab tak tum
dono yahi raho latika ke sath ..wo itna to kar hi sakti
hai … albida phir milenge .. Main Yumina aur mohan
bahar agaye …
Yumina .. Kaha chalna hai dady …
Main.. Pehle is city ke bahar ..
Maine hath aage kiya aur gate spell ka use kiya …
hamare samne Ek gate khul gaya .. Hum gate ke raste
city ke bahar pahuch gaye ..
Main.. Husna apna kamal dikhao jin ki shakti se ek
yaha aaj raat bitane ke liye ek ghar banao ..
Husna .. Ji malik .. Aur tabhi husna ka jisam roshni me
badal gaya aur us roshni se ek bada roshni ka thukra
nikal zameen pe pada aur dekhte hi dekhte waha ek
chota sa ghar ban gaya
 

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Update 33
Hum andar agaye chota sa ghar lekin shandar ek king
ke rahne layak ..
Waha tin bistar the ek chota sa khidki bhi tha aur ek
desk bhi tha ..
Main.. Aaj yahi aram karte hai shubha hote hi gufa
pahuch jayenge ..ye hamara akhri adventure hoga is
duniya me …
Mohan… bhai latika ko kuch jada hi nahi DAT diya ..
Main.. Sayad waise tumhe uski utni fikar kiu hone lagi
..
Mohan .. Mujhe wo achhi lagne lagi thi ..
Main.. Are to bataya kiu nahi har waqt aise rahta hai
jaise kisi bhi chij me ruchi na ho aab hame kaise pata
chalega in udas ankho me bhi Choti si chamak uthne
lagi hai ..
Mohan .. Bhai mujhe mere Jine ki wajah mil gayi hai
mujhe latika ke sath jina hai .. Ek nahi duniya basana
hai..
Main.. Hmm chalo thik hai .. Lekin abhi kya karoge…
hum to unko chod yaha agaye hai ..
Mohan .. Nahi abhi nahi batayunga ek baar ye jurney
pura ho jaye tab main use apne dil ka hal batayunga ..
Main.. Soch lo aisa bhi ho sakta hai hame samay hi na
mile .. Dil ke mamle me der achhi nahi hoti ..
Yumina .. Ji uncle jaiye aur latika ko bhi lekar aiye
yaha ..
Main.. Bhai aab intezar jiska hai .. Maine hath aage kat
gate magic ka usr kiya .. Gate khul chuka hai ja aur
apne dil ko uske samne khol ke rakh de .. Phir ye
mouka mile na mile ..
Mohan khada hua aur gate ke raste nikal gaya us par

Main aur yumina rah gaye sath me husna aur monark
ghar ke ek kone me baitha …
Husna… Malik jaise ke aap ne socha hai devil Queen se
ladne ka usko harane se sayad hame loutne ka rasta
mil jaye lekin malik phir is duniya ka kya hoga …
Main.. Husna mera yw khayal hai ke devil queen ke
khatme ke sath hi is duniya ke kuch naye pehlu
khulkar samne aayenge .. Tabhi ye Jana ja sakta hai is
duniya ka kya hoga …
Husna … Ji malik ..
Tabhi mohan gate ke raste lout aaya lekin wo akela
Nahi uske sath thi latika … uska chehra sarmaya hua
tha ..
Main.. Kiu majnu ji baat bani ..
Mohan .. Ha bhai latika ne ha keh diya bas aab is safar
ko ant karte hai main apni nayi jindagi latika ke sath
gujarna chahta hu ..
Main … aisa hi hoga .. Latika tum sayad ab bhi mujhe
ek adventurer hi samajh rahi hogi lekin main tumhe
aab mera asal parichai deta hu ..
Mohan .. Bhai apka parichai main deta hu latika ko ..
Latika tumhare samne te jo khade hai ye koi aam
insan nahi hai hum jis duniya se aaye hai ye waha ke
tisre sabse bade desh ke king hai .. Aur duniya ke sabse
taqatwar insan bhi ..
Latika jhuk gayi ..
Latika .. Mujhe maaf kar dijiye aap main apko na Jane
kya kya bol gayi ..
Main.. Latika maafi mujhe tumse mangni chahiye
gusse me Maine tumhe bahut kuch kaha lekin sachai
yehi hai hum yaha ruk nahi laga sakte hum yaha ek
udesya ke sath aaye the aur usko pura karke hi
loutenge .. Koi Queen ya desh ki sena hame ROK nahi
payegi .. Agar tumne apna jivan mohan ke sath bitane
ka faisla kar liya hai to hum loute waqt tumhe aur
Garan ko bhi sath le chalenge …
Latika .. Ji aap jo kahe ..
Mohan .. Latika aab tum lout jao hum apna adventure
jari rakhenge tum insab se aab dur rakho ..
Main.. Ha latika agar sainik ya koi bhi puche to unko
batana hum group chod chuke hai …
Latika .. Main bhi is safar ka hissa ..
Main.. Nahi latika tumhare upar Maine kuch
jimmedariya di hai .. Unko pura karo hamare loutne
tak …
Latika .. Thik hai jo aap kahe .. Main aap sabhi ka
intezar karungi ..
Mohan .. Jarur hum lout ke aayenge .. Latika bapas
chali gayi .. Gate band ho gaya …
Humne raat wohi bate karte huye bita diya aur bhor
Ke sath hi hum waha se chal pade Lekin jab hum gufa
tak pahuche tab tak sainik waha pahuch chuke the ..
Aur unhone hamara rasta rok diya ….
Sena nayak .. Karma tumhe Queen ka adesh hai tum
lout jao aage ke padao me tumlog maji ja sakte ..
Main.. Sena nayak mujhe Queen ka adesh manya nahi
main apne marji ka malik hu .. Raste se hat jao warna

Sena nayak .. Sainko inko giraftar kar lo raj adesh na
manne ke apradh me ..
Karib 20 saink ki ek tukri hamare taraf badhi yumina
ne apne apne hath apni talwar pe sakt kar li …
Main… sena nayak mujhe maaf kihiyega aur koi upai
nahi hai .. Maine apna hath aage kar diya aur spell
dohraya .. Aur earth magic ka use kiya ..tabhi Jameen
se achanak mitti uthkar aabhi saink ke pairo ko pakad
liya
Wo hil bhi nahi pa rahe the …
Hum unko cross kar agle padao ki aur pahuch gaye. ..
Hum 9 we padao ke gate se enter kar gaye …
Andar ka mahol alag tha ye ek bada sa khula maidan
tha jaha dur dur tak sirf andhera hi dikh raha tha
hum us andhere me ghoom rahe the .. Jab dekha kuch
nahi mil raha hai tabhi Maine apne light magic ka
istemal kiya aur upar ki aur ek roshni ka gola phek
diya .. Aur Us roshni me jo najara hamare samne tha
use dekh he hosh hi ud gaye …
Hum jisko khali maidan keh rahe the waha kuch tha
aur wo jo tha hamare har kadam ke sath hame apne
andar samet raha tha wo ek bishal kai sarp tha jiske
kundli me hum fas chuke the …
Roshni ka gola sidha uske muh ke samne gaya jise
dekh ke pata chal raha tha uski najar humpe kab se thi
.. Uski lal ankhe uski lap lapati hui jeev dekh pata chal
raha tha wo hame kachha khane ko taiyar hai …
Main … yumina mohan bachke … Maine itna hi bola
tha ke us sarp ne hame apne kundlini ne jakad liya aur
kasta ja raha tha … mujhe to nahi lekin yumina aur
mohan ko dard ka ehsaas ho raha tha …
Maine kisi tarah hath ko chuda aage kiya aur spell
dohra diya … thandar bolt.. Tabhi asman se bijli giri
aur sidhe Us sarp pe padi uski kundli dhili pad gayi …
Hum kundli se nikal usse dur ho gaye …
Mere thandar bolt se sarp pe jada fark nahi pada …
Main.. Yumina taiyar ho …
Yumina … ji dady ..
Main.. Mohan apne wind magic se us sarp ka dhayan
bhatkao main aur yumina uske dant ukhadte hai …
Mohan hawa me uth gaya aur wind magic ka istemal
kar usne sarp pe ek war kiya jisse sarp ko koi fark to
nahi pada lekin uska thoda dhayan bat gaya..
Main…simba taiyar ho … dikgao apni taqat … main aur
yumina dono taraf se doudte huye khud pade sarp ke
sar ke aur … aur dono ne puri taqat se talwar
ghumaya aur sarp ke gale ko apne talwar se chirte
huye nikal gaye …
Sarp tadap utha Lekin abhi wo Mara nahi tha … aur
usne humpe apna muh khol tezab phekne laga hum
kudte huye unse bachne lage … aur war pe war karne
lage sarp buri tarah thak gaya tha .. Maine mouka
dekh apna hath aage kar magic spell dohraya …
crimson magic light magic .. Aur uske sath hi upar se
roshni ke bane ban akar UA sarp me dhas gaye sarp
tadapte huye gir ke mar gaya … aur turant gayab ho
gaya rah gaya magic stone bade akar ka … jaise hi
main stone ko lene jhuka Tabhi mujhe Us andhere me
dur ek kone me ek saya najar aaya ...
 

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Lajawab update Bhai
 
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