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Fantasy Adventure of karma final chapter ( World beyond the world ) mystery of dungeon's .. Part 1

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Update 38
Tabhi husna akar mujhme shama gayi mera pura jisam
roshni ki tarah chamak utha.
Mere jisam ki roshni ko dekh devil ek pal ke liye satark ho
gaya .. Use mere jisam se nikalti roshni se taklif ho rahi
thi .. Maine apni roshni ki talwar utha dobara devil king
pe war kiya is baar jaise hi meri talwar devil sword se
takrayi devil sword crack agaya .. Jise dekh devil king
piche hat gaya .. Aur usne mujhpe dobara energy ball se
hamla suru kar diya lekin isbar uske is war ka Maine bhi
jawab diya apna hath aage kar roshni ke gole bana devil
king pe phekne laga .. Devil king unse bachne ke liye uchal
ne kudne laga mujhe andaza ho gaya tha devil king ko
mere roshni ki taqat se pareshani ho rahi hai lekin phirvi
mere war ka uspe asar nahi ho raha tha ..
Devil king .. Manna padega tum kafi taqatwar ho lekin
agar yehi tumhari taqat ki had hai to tum mujhe kabhi
hara nahi paoge ..
Main.. Jarur batayunga tumhe mere roshni ki taqat se
pareshani ho rahi hai aab samna karo mere roshni ki
talwar ka main bijli ki tezi se aage badha aur war pe war
devil king pe karne laga meri talwar devil king ke jisam se
takra to rahi thi lekin uske jisam pe kharch ke siwa kuch
Nahi kar pa rahi thi ..Maine war rok diya ..
Devil king .. Kiu kya hua thak gaye tumne kya socha bas
apni is Choti si roshni ki taqat se mujhe hara doge ..
Andhera hu main andhera mujhe hatane ke liye choti si
law nahi ek bada roshni ka pahad chahiye ..
Tabhi devil king ne apni ankhe band kar li aur tabhi wo
jagah andhere me dubne laga Charo aur andhera hi
andhera tha.. Mere jisam ki roshni se hum BA's kuch dur
tak hi dekh pa rahe the tabhi us andhere se ek energy ka
ball hamari taraf badhne laga .. Maine apne suraksha
kabach magic ka istemal kiya aur hamare charo taraf
suraksha kabach bana diya .. Wo energy ball akar mere
suraksha kabach se takrayi .. Aur bada bisfot hua .. Sabhi
mere karib agaye kiu ke mere jisam se hi roshni nikal rahi
thi ..
Yumina .. Dady aab kya kare .. Tabhi ek aur energy ball
akar mere suraksha kabach se takraya ..
Devil king .. Hahahaha kabtak apne suraksha kabach ke
piche chupge hahaha main andhere ka rakhwala hu
mujhse tum kabhi nahi jeet sakte ..
Tabhi mere kind me ek awaj gunji ..
Awaj .. Ai insano me insan tumne khud ko sabit kar liya
hai .. Tum me himmat prem daya aur sadgun hai aur wo
har chij hai jo main apne malik me talash kar raha tha ..
Main man me .. Kon ho tum samne aao ..
Awaj .. Malik main aapke pass hi hu khud me talash kijiye
pukariye mujhe apni dil ke gehrai se main aap ka hissa
ban chuka hu .. Tabhi mere talwar ke Handel ke karib ek
nishan ban gaya Suraj ke jaisa .. Tabhi mere man me ek
spell aaya .. Maine dhayan laga apne man me ghum rahe
spell ko padha ...aur jod laga spell ko dohraya ..
Main.. Come forth crimson roshni ke rakhwale mujhe
apni taqat do .. Aur tabhi wo hua jise dekh pana kisi ke
liye sambhab nahi tha ..
Tabhi mera jisam aag ki bhatti ki tarah tapne laga mere
jisam ki roshni badhti chali gayi andhere ko dhakelti hui
aage badhti chali gayi Tabhi mujhe devil king ki tadapti
hui awaj Sunai dene lagi .. Roshni itni badh gayi ke aab
koi ankh bhi nahi khol pa raha tha kuch pal mere karib
aag bhi thanda baraf lage …
Mail bhi halke halke chichne laga ye taqat mere jisam me
apni jagah bana rahi thi .. Tabhi roshni jo faili hui thi wo
gayab hone lagi aur rah gaya main mere jisam se roshni
ke lapte nikal rahi thi .. Lekin ab ye roshni garm nahi
thandi thi .. Mere hath pair sar se lekar pair tak ek roshni
ki lapto ne mujhe ghara hua tha mujhe apne andar taqat
hi taqat mahsoos ho raha tha ..
Sabhi ankhe khol mujhe ascharya se dekh rahe the
andhera chat gaya tha bas aab samne tha devil king aur
hum ..
Devil king .. Ye kya kya kya hai …
Main...tumhare mout ki suruwat ...itna hi bola tha ke
main tezise aage badha aur isbar meri raftar dekhi bhi
nahi ja raho thi .. Maine apni talwar ghuma sidha devil
king ke pass prakat hua mujhe itne karib dekh devil king
ne apna hath dar se aage kar diya jo mere talwar se
takrayi .. Lekin isbar meri talwar devil king ke hath ko
makhan ke tarah kat te huye nikal gayi …
Devil king chikh ke sath piche hat gaya ..
Main khada usko dekh raha tha …
Devil king .. Na mumkin na mumkin tum tum mujhe
nukshan kaise pahucha rahe ho ..
Main.. Aise…maine dobara war kiya isbar dusra hath …
devil king tadapte huye jamin pe ja gira …
Devil king tadapte huye .. Tumhe kya lag raha hai tum
jeet jaoge .. Hahaha aisa kabhi nahi hoga … hahaha …
Tabhi devil king ke jisam se lal roshni ki kirne Charo aur
failne lagi …
Crimson mere mind me ..malik devil king ko Marne ka ek
hi tarika hai uske red Cristal se bana dil uske tukre kar
dijiye …
Main. .. Jarur .. Lekin tabtak tabahi suru ho gayi thi jaha
jaha lal kirne takrayi wo diwar me dhamake hone lage ..
Maine apni talwar ko utha ek jordar chalang lagaya aur
talwar ko sidha devil king ke sine me utar diya .. Devil
king turant hi tukro me bat gaya sabhi cristal jo uske
jisam me lage the waha bikhar gaye aur jo red stone heart
wala tha wo talwar ke war se tut gaya … tabhi mujhe
chikh Sunai di .. Wo jagah dhah raha tha .. Maine piche
mud ke dekha to bade bade chattane mere suraksha
kabach pe gir rahe the wo Queen thi jo dar se chikh uthi
thi .. Main turant bapas aagaya ..
Mohan … bhai nikli yaha se ye jagah tabah ho rahi hai ..
Main.. Sahi kaha .. Maine gate spell ka use kiya aur gate
ke raste bahar nikal aaye gufa ke lekin gufa ke bahar ek
aur musibat hamara intezar kar rahi thi wo thi devil
queen …
 

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Update 39
Jaise hi hum gufa ke bahar nikle hamare samne
adventurer city ke sabhi sainko ke sath devil queen sena
nayak aur mantri khada tha …
Mantri… adventurer karma tumne kafi hade par kar li hai
aab apne apko hamare hawale kar do …
Main.. Hade abhi kaha abhi baki hai .. Sena nayak aap
galat jagah khade hai aap ki Queen wo nahi hai ye hai jo
hamare sath khadi hai ..
Devil queen .. Khamosh tumhe kya lagta hai tum aapne
galat MATLAB me kamyab ho jaoge sena nayak jao aur
insabhi ko bandi bana lo ..
Crimson .. Malik devil Queen ki asliyat samne lane ke liye
aap crimson light ka istemal kare us roshni ko devil queen
jhel nahi payegi aur apne asliroop me ajayegi ..
Maine crimson ki salah ko mana aur apne andar jhaka
mujhe crimson light ki spell dikh gayi . .
Main.. Come forth crimson crimsoni light prakat ho .. Aur
tabhi mere jisam se tezz roshni phut padi jo Charo aur fail
gayi devil queen se takrate hi wo tadap uthi aur unke
jisam se jaise ek parat phighalne lagi aur dekhte hi dekhte
ek hare rang ki lambe kano wali lambe danto wali aurat
me badal gayi …
Roshni hat te hi puri sena ke sath aabhi devil queen ko
dekh dar ke piche hat gayi ..
Main .. Sena nayak mantri ji yehi hai iski sachai ye devil
queen hai …
Devil Queen .. Ha ha main devil queen hu karma tumne
meri barso ki mehnat ko mitti me mila diya aab main
tumhe uski saza dungi apne king ka badla lungi .. Tabhi
devil queen ne apne dono hath faila diye tabhi asman me
kale badal cha gaye aur dekhte hi dekhte devil Queen ke
hath Pankho me badal gaye jisam ek bhayankar jeev jiske
ankhe lal kan lambe aur pairo me taqatwar panje the …
Wo hawa me uth gayi aur kale badalo me udne lagi ..
Tabhi uska rukh meri taraf ho gaya aur usne apna muh
khola tabhi ek bhayankar ckikh .. KW sath soundwave
akar humare aur badhi .. Maime apne speed ka faida utha
sabhi ko lekar waha se hat gaya …
Aur jaha wo sound wave takrayi waha ek bada dhamaka
hua .. Wo jagah tabah ho gayi gehra gadha ban gaya …
Crimson .. Malik jaldi kare devil queen ko Jada mouka na
de nahi to ye city ko bhi tabah kar degi …
Maine crimson ki baat Mani .. Aur ek chalang ke sath ud
gaya hawa me .. Devil queen ke barabar .. Devil Queen ne
dobara mujhpe sound wave se hamla kiya lekin is baar
main hata nahi aur apne talwar se roshni ki energy ball
bana us aur phek diya dono ki takkar se waha ek
bhayankar bisfot hua .. Hum dono amne samne the hawa
me .. Baki baar devil Queen ke ankho se lesser ki kitne
nikal mere taraf badhi jise Maine apni suraksha kabach
se rok diya .. Jab queen ne dekha uska koi war kaam nahi
kar raha tab usne bola …
Devil Queen .. Hahaha tum mere war ko rok sakte ho lekin
is city ko tabah hone se kaise roko ge
Main ne apni raftar se aage badha devil Queen apna muh
kholke city pe soundwave se hamla karne wali thi lekin
meri talwar ghumi aur devil queen ka sar uske jisam se
alag ho gaya … asman ke kale badal chatne lage bapas se
Charo aur roshni failne lagi … devil queen ka jisam hawa
se jameen ki aur girne laga lekin sath sath jisam tukro me
bat gayab hone laga .. Jamin tak kuch bhi pahuch nahi
paya ..
Main niche utar aaya husna aur crimson dono hi mere
jisam se nikal aaye … Main bapas se normal ho gaya ..
Puri ki puri sena queen ke aage jhuk gayi …
Sena nayak .. Hame maaf kare queen hum us shaitani
devil Queen ke chhal ko samajh nahi PAYE …
Queen .. Isme tum logo ko koi kasur nahi hai devil queen
nw JAL hi aisa racha tha.lekin har Kali raat ke bad ek
sunehri shubha bhi aati hai wo agayi aur use lane wale
hai ye karma aur unke sathi hai …
Mantri .. Mujhe maaf kijiye karma Maine bahut si
galatiya ki hai ..
Main.. Koi baat nahi mantri ji aap sabhi apne biswas pe
atal the mujhe isme koi galati nahi dikhi .. Sachai ko
bahar aana hi tha ..
Sena nayak .. My queen aap ka mahal aap ka intezar kar
raha hai ..
Queen .. Karma yumina mohan chalo tum tino ko hum
khas samman ke sath swagat karna chahenge …
Main .. Nahi Queen .. Hame maaf kijiye lekin aab hum
mahal nahi jayenge hamare loutne ka waqt ho chuka hai
.. Lekin bas mujhe ek permission chahiye .. Main aap ke
city ke kuch khas niwashio ko apne sath le Jana chahta
hu apni duniya me …
Queen .. Thik hai karma tumhe izazat hai .. Le jao tumhara
naam hamare adventurer city ke itihas me sunahre
ankhsaro se likha jayega ..
Maine gate spell ka istemal kiya aur gate ke raste pahuch
gaye latika ke ghar … hame dekhte hi Rita mita hamare
pass agayi ..
Latika mohan ke gale lag gayi ..
Main.. Waqt achuka hai chalne ke liye taiyar ho tum sab ..
Garan .. Kaha chalna hai hame ..
Main.. Garan hum apni duniya me lout rahe hai aur tum
sabhi sath chal rahe ho ..
Rita .. Sukriya malik aap lout aaye ..
Main.. Crimson chalo aab hamare duniya me bapas le
chalo ha dragon ko mat bhulna ..
Crimson .. Ji malik … tabhi waha crimson ki tezz roshni
chamki hame hamare Charo aur roshni hi roshni dikh
rahi thi aisa lag raha tha jaise hum hawa me tair rahe hai
aur kisi taraf badh rahe hai .. Tabhi aisa mahsoos hua
jaise hum kisi jagah pe utre hai ..
Roshni chatne lagi aur dekhte hi dekhte roshni gayab ho
gayi crimson bhi gayab ho gaya .. Lekin kahi gaya nahi
mujhme hi tha ..
Humne ankh kholi to Charo aur chamak ti hui chije dikh
rahi thi ye ajeev tha hum sabhi khade ho gaye hum
dungen jagah tha uspe khade the lekin dungeon's gayab
ho chuka tha bas rag gaya tha ek khali jagah jispe
khajana rakha hua tha sone hire jawarat ka khajana..
Hum sabhi ascharya se dekh rahe the hum bapas sindriya
me the … dur dur tak baraf hi baraf … hawa me udta hua
mera black dragon .. Mere kandhe pe baithi husna aur
samne ek bakshe pe baitha tote ke roop me monark ..
Mohan latika ka hath pakde huye .. Garan ascharya se
Charo aur dekhta hua … yumina khushi se jhumti hui …
Main.. Hum lout aaye yumina hum lour aaye ..
Main.. Crimson .. Ye khajana kaisa hai ..
Crimson .. Ye inam hai dungeon ko kabu karne ka sirf
taqat hi nahi doulat bhi chahiye hoti hai jivan me .. Ye
issiliye inam hai ..
Main.. Hmm samajh gaya .. Tum is khajane ke bhi
rakhwala the ..
Crimson .. Ji malik aab ye khajana aap ka hai main is
jimmedari se muqt hua ..
Main.. Abhi is khajane ko gayab kar do jab balu prakat
kardena ..
Crimson .. Ji malik … tabhi khajane gayab ho gaya …
Main.. Sabhi ek dusre ka hath pakad lo hum ja rahe hai
yaha se .. Sabhi ne ek dusre ka hath mazbuti se pakad
kiya aur Maine apne gravity control magic se sabko hawa
me utha liya aur udte huye chal pade sindriya ki aur ..
Hame koi andaza na tha kitna waqt gujar gaya hai is
safar me ..
Hum udte huye sindriya ke mujhya dwar pe agaye tabhi
mahal se king luthar baggi liye pahuch gaye ..
King luthar .. Aap ka swagat hai king karma mujhe
suchna mil gayi thi aap ke loutne ka .. Sukriya aap ne
dungeon pe kabu pa liya ..
Main.. Ji king luthar .. Humne dungeon ko kabu kar liya
hai ..aab aap ko koi pareshani Nahi hogi …
King luthar .. Chaliye aap thak gaye honge aap ke bisram
ke puri bawastha ki ja chuki hai ..
Main.. Waise king luthar mujhe dungen me gaye huye
kitna waqt gujar hai ..
King luthar .. Pure 1 mahine my king .. 1 mahine .. Ye to
kuch Jada hi waqt lag gaya .. Humne Jada se Jada 20 din
gujare the ..
Yumina .. Dady samay ka herpher hoga ..
Main.. Hmm sahi keh rahi ho gudiya .. Hum mahal me
pahuch gaye jaha humara swagat bahut achhe se hua ..
Hame ghar ki yaad to arahi thi mujhe khas kar ke apne
sabhi jaan ki behad yaad arahi thi lekin ek king ki bhi
apni jimmedari hoti hai .. King luthar apna abhar prakat
karna chahte the isliye hum ne wo din aur raat mahal me
hi bitaya sindriya me jashan ka mahol tha …
Mujhe pata nahi kiu lekin apne desh apni ranio ki yaad
kuch Jada hi sata rahi thi .. Mujhe koi andaza nahi tha is
ek mahine me is duniya me itna kuch ho jayega jo mujhe
har badalte pal ke sath pata chala …


End of part 1
 

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Awesome, Mind Blowing Update
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Nice update biradar....
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