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Fantasy Adventuresss of Karma all parts (completed)

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UPDATE-5

Din planing me beet gayi simba ne bataya hame melbolina se
nikal kingdom of alfan se hote huye hame uttari samundari
port pe jana tha ..
( Kingdom of alfan ek anokha kingdom jiski prajati insan aur
dark elf ne milke banayi thi lelina bhi elf thi lekin wo white
elf thi )
Raat ko khane ke baad main room me pahucha to mere piche
Charo meri jaan bhi agayi unke tewar kuch aur hi the jawan
jawan dilnasi hasinaye bala ki khubsurati ke sath ubharti hui
jawani unko madhose rakhti thi na Jane unko kya hua Charo
ne mujhe aise Ghar liya jaise main kahi bhag jayunga...
Main.. Kya baat hai tum sab mujhe ghere kiu khadi ho..
Lili... Had hoti hai aur kitna sabar kare bataiye...
Main.. Are hua kya hai ..
Lelina.. Dady..
Main.. Are kya Hua mujhe kuch samajh nahi araha hai...
Mili.. To sochiye aur tabtak sochiye jabtak aap ko malum na
pad jaye huhhhh.. Charo ne apna chehra jhatak ke chali gayi
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..main dekhta rah gaya ye inko achanak hua kya hai...
Raat ko Kristine ne muh pher kar mujhse narajgi jahir karti
rahi main bechara char char ladkio ke dimag me kya chal
raha hai samajhne me asamarth tha...
Shubha shubha sabhi taiyar ho gaye hamare pass sahi mohar
the jo hamari pehchan ke liye kafi the hame kisi desh me
pehchan ke liye bas us mohar ko hi dikhana tha...
Baggi taiyar thi ladkio ko baggi pe baitha Maine khud ke liye
aaj ghoda liya night Gasper aur prince sintel ke sath ghode ki
sawari karna hi mujhe behtar laga ...ghode ki sawari itni
muskil nahi thi bas kuch minute ke practice se main mahir
ho gaya..
Humne safar ka agaj kiya kingdom of alfan ke liye ... Kehte
hai kingdom of alfan apne elf yodhao ke liye famous hai unki
talwar bazi aur magic bahut achhi hai .. Desh chota hai lekin
phirvi unke taqat ke karan koi desh unpe hamla nahi karta
tha ..... Unke rasme riwaj sab alag the dusre desho se .. Jo 2
unko anokha banate the jo mujhko aage chalkar pata chali
thi..
Hamara ye safar kafi lamba tha isliye humne apne sath
paryapt matra me safar ka saman rakha tha...
Safar me dopahar ke khane ke waqt humne padao dala sath
me laye huye rasan se khana magic se paka khane lage ...
Khate waqt bhi meri charo jaan mujhse ukhdi ukhdi hui thi ..
Main.. Jaan tum sab ko hua kya hai mujhe bataogi bhi..
Lili dusre ladkio se.. Dekha ye bahut slow hai in mamlo me
dil ke naram Hai sabki care karte hai lekin is mamle me slow
Hai...
Kristine.. Isliye ye sab se alag hai kuch nahi kar sakte hai..
Main.. Are tumlog mere bare me kya kya bol rahi ho mujhe
bhi to batao kis baat me main slow hu..
Mili.. Karma ji aap to rahne hi dijiye ..khana khaiye thandi ho
rahi hai..
Main.. Are yaar . .. Maine apne talwar ki aur dekh kar simba
bhai tu hi bata mamla kya hai.. 3
Simba.. Mamla mamla kya hoga ... Isme main apki koi help
nahi kar sakta hu..
Main thandi sanse lekar rah gaya.. Safar jari rahi hum
melbolina se nikal alfan ke pahadi ghatiose hoke gujar ne
lage.. Ye ghatiya chote chote Lal pahadi tilo se bari thi aur
unke bich bhulbhulaiya jaisa rasta tha .. Thodi bhi asabdhani
se koi bhi kho sakta tha usme ...
Hum sambhal ke aage badh rahe the aur hamare khone ka
bhi dar na tha mere search magic se hum asani se bahar
nikalne ka rasta khoj sakte the ...
Hum aage badh rahe the lekin humpe kisi ki tezz najar thi jo
dur se hampe najar jamaye huye the..
Tabhi ek ban tezz pahadi se aane lagi uski hawa ke friction se
mujhe uska pata chal gaya uska nishana prince sintel tha ban
jaise hi sintel tak pahuchi meri talwar usse pehle ban se
takrayi ... Ban tut ke bikhar gayi tabhi shor ke sath hamare
charo aur ghati me chupe log hatho me hathiyar liye humpe 4
war karne badh ne lage ..
Prince sintel... Ye sab kon hai kaha se aaye hai..
Night Gasper .. Lagta hai ye sab dakait Hai ..yaha se gujarne
walo ka saman lut te hai..
Maine hath upar kiya aur light magic ka istemal kiya aur
hamare charo aur ek suraksha ghera bana diya ..
Humpe bano se chattano se hamle hone lage ...
Main.. Simba bahar aao hame inko marna nahi hai dara ke
bhaga do...
Simba roshni ke gole me badal bahar agaya aur ek jor dar
dahad mari ... Wohhaaaaaaaaaaaa... Uski dahad se sabhi ki
halat kharab ho gayi aur wo bhagne lage ...
Maine dhayan diya wohi ke ek tile pe koi kale kapde pehne
khada tha ... Aur hame dekh raha tha .. Jab maine najar
ghuma us aur dekha to wo gayab ho gaya pahadi me...
Night Gasper... Karma ji hame inko pakad ke kingdom ko sop
dena chahiye ...
Main.. Night Gasper iske kiye kingdom ki sena hai hum aaya 5
koi naam kamane nahi aaye hame hamare safar pe focus
karna hoga...

Prince sintel.. Sahi kaha ye sab mamle yaha ke kingdom ka
hai unko hi sambhalne de ..
Hum aage badh gaye lekin mujhe WO kale libas wala
pareshan kar rahi thi mujhe aisa nahi laga jaise wo un
dakaito mese hai ..kuch alag hi mahsoos hua..
Humne apni safar aage badhai raat se pehle hame in pahadio
se bahar nikal Jana tha .. Aur in pahado ke par ek bada hi
sundar gaon tha jise sumoji gaon kehte Hai .. Humne raat ka
padao wohi dalne ka socha...
Thode aur safar ke bad raat suru hote hi hum goan ke sima
pe pahuch gaye Lekin yaha bhi mahol alag hi tha ..
Gaon ko royal army gourd kar rahe the aur wo kisi bhi anjan
ko gaon me prabesh nahi hone de rahe the ...
Hame gaon ke sima me hi ROK liya gaya... Wo dark elf ki sena
thi ..silver kabach me hatho me talwar aur bhale liye pehra
de rahe the ...6
Pahredar... Kon ho tumlog aur kaha se arahe ho..
Main.. Hum melbolina se arahe hai..
Pahredar.. Melbolina wo to kafi dur hai yaha aane ki wajah
kya hai jhuth to nahi bol rahe ...
Main.. Hum jhuth kiu bolenge..
Pehredar.. Tumhare pass pehchan ka kuch hai ..bina
pehchan ke andar nahi ja sakte ...
Main... Ha hai rukiye abhi dikhate hai.. Tabhi ek awaj aayi ...
Unhe andar aane do sainik ...
Humne us aur dekha to dekhte rah gaye sunahre kabach
pehni ek female dark elf khadi thi...
Sainik.. Jao andar ja sakte ho...
Main.. Wo kon hai sainik ..
Sainik.. Wo hamare sena nayak hai...
Main.. Achha thik hai ..hum andar agaye gaon me hame ek
chota sa rahne ka Ghar bhi mil gaya jaha maine sabhi ladkio
ko aram karne ko keh bahar agaya sintel aur Gasper ke sath
...

 

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Raat ka pehla prahar tha gaon me Ab bhi log jage huye the
kuch sainik do do ki jodi me gaon me chakkar laga rahe the
aur gaon ke main raste pe sainik tainat the .. Thoda ajeev tha
ek chote se gaon me itne sainik kya kar rahe the aur itni kadi
suraksha ..

Main.. Night Gasper kya lagta hai yaha kya ho raha hai..gaon
ko sainya beda kiu bana rakha hai...
Gasper.. Karma ji mujhe lagta hai yaha is ilske me kuch to
gadbad hai.
Main.. Hmm ho sakta hai wo dakait bhi yaha se Jada duri pe
nahi hai..
Sintel.. Hmm mujhe lagta ye pura intezam un dakaito ke liye
hi kiya gaya hai .. Sochiye wo ilaka pahado hai na pani na
khana .. Unko khane aur pani ke liye is aur aana hi padega
aur agar unka ye jariya bhi khatam kar diya jaye to ..dakait
bebash ho jayenge ya to atma samarpan karo ya phir ladke
hasil karo .. Aur dono hi mamlo me unko har pakki Hai..
Main.. Hmm ho sakta hai waise bhi wo dakait ki toli ki halat
kuch jada achha nahi tha..

Hum bate karte huye gaon ke bich ek bada ped tha uske
niche akar baith gaye .. Kuch samay hi bita tha ke ek ghod
sawar tezz ghoda doudate huye hamare karib se gujar gaya
ek Ghar ki aur .. Aur ghode se utar sidha Ghar me chala
gaya...kuch der baad bahar nikla to uske sath wohi dark elf
thi .... Wo admi ghode pe sawar ho chala gaya...aur uske sath
hi sabhi sainiko ko ikatha karna suru ho gaya...
Kuchi pal me 40 se 45 sainiko ki ek tukri taiyar thi ..
Dark elf girl.. Alfan ke bahadur dipahio kafi waqt se ye
dakait hamare desh ko ke kayi gaon ko bapario ko nukshan
pahucha rahe hai aab waqt agaya hai unse do do hath karne
ka kamar kash lo dakaito ka panah gah ka pata chal gaya hai
kuch karo aaj unka khatma hum karenge.. Sabhi sainik josh
me agaye...
Dark elf girl ghode pe sawar ho gayi aur uske piche piche
sainik chal pade pahadio ki aur...
Night Gasper.. Karma ji hame inki madat karni chahiye..

Main.. Nahi yahi ruko unko Jane do .. Dekho aab yaha ek bhi
sainik nahi hai pura gaon asurakshit Hai ..mujhe lag raha hai
ye dakaito ki chal hai sainiko ko yaha se hatane ka...
Gasper.. Aisa bhi to ho sakta hai jankari sahi ho..
Main... Ho sakta hai agar jankari sahi hai to wo log dakaito
ko sambhal lenge agar galat hui to ye gaon dakaito ke lite
khula hoga...
Sintel.. To kya irada hai..
Main.. Yahi rukte hai agar humla hua to hum gaon ki
suraksha kar payenge... Waise ek kaam main abhi karke
dekh sakta hu..
Maine ankh band ki aur search magic ka use kiya mere jisam
se ek tarang nikal fail gayi aur kuchi pal me mujhe gaon aur
gaon ke ass pass ki jankari mil gayi...
Main.. Kamar kash lo mera andaza sahi hai karib 20 log
hatho me hathiyar kiye gaon ke uttari pahadi ke piche khade
hai...
Sintel.. Bas 20 log ..

Main.. Ha 20 log .. Baki lagta hai sena ko bewakuf banane ke
liye hi apna ek naqal thikana banaya aur khabri ko dikhaya
hai..sena ko waha kuch nahi Milne wala abtak to wo sabhi
apna thikana badal chuke honge...
Kuchi der me jaise maine kaha tha dakaito ka hamla suru ho
gaya .. Main sintel aur Gasper talwar bazi ka practice samajh
unse ulajh pade talwaro se talwar takrayi rahi aur sakaito ki
halat patli ho gayi humne kisi ko Mara nahi bas unko behosh
karte gaye .. 30 min me wo sabhi behosh ho gaye...
Humne unko usi ped ke liye bandh diya ...
Raat beetne lagi shubha ke karib sena lout ke aayi ...
Hum wohi ped ke niche hi so rahe the...
Dark elf girl... Utho utho .... Main kasmasate huye utha...
Dark elf girl.. Ye sab kya hai ..
Main.. Hmm kya ...
Dark elf girl... Ye sab dakait yaha kaha se aaye aur inko kisne
bandh ke rakha hai..
Main.. Ohhh ye sab .. Ha apke Jane ka hi intezar kar rahe the

aap gaye aur ye aaye lekin bas inko halat nahi thi mukabla
karne layak ...
Dark elf girl.. Kya tumne ..
Main.. Maine nahi main yodha thode hi hu ye hai na ye dono
jo so rahe hai bahadur yodha hai unhone pakda hai...
Maine to sirf inko badhne me madat ki..
Dark elf girl.. Bahut khub bahut khub ..bahadur yodhao aap
ke karan aaj ye gaon Bach gaya...
Main.. Night ji Naha yodhao ji uth jaiye dekhiye swayam
bahadur sena nayak hai aap ko dakuo ko pakadne ke liye
Mubarak baad de rahe hai...
Gasper aur sintel uth gaye aur mera chehra dekhne lage ..
Main.. Bahadur yodhao dekho sena nayak aap ko swayam
sukriya keh rahe hai...
Night Gasper... Iski koi jarurat nahi hai ye to har yodha ka
farz hai...
Dark elf girl.. Mere mahmano apko bahaduri ke inam ke roop
Me aaj ka dawat hamare taraf se...

Sintel mujhe chor najro se dekhne laga jaise puch raha ho
kya jawab du..
Main.. Sukriya sena nayak bahut bahut sukriya hum jarur
hissa lenge lekin hame aage badhna Hai agar dawat abhi ho
to koi muskil nahi ..
Dark elf girl.. Mera naam ruksha Hai..mujhe majur Hai...
Sipahio in dakaito ko le jao aur turant dawat ka intezam
karo..
Hum taiyar hone apne apne kaksh me agaye ..
Mere kaksh me Charo hasinaye Ab bhi soyi padi thi kya gajab
dha rahi thi .. Maine ek ek karke Charo ka sar sehla unko
uthaya..
Main.. Taiyar ho jao dawat hai abhi ...
Lili.. Dawat abhi ..
Main.. Ha aab taiyar ho jao .. Kuch samay me sabhi taiyar ho
gaye.. Aur hum bahar agaye .. Hame hame sainik dawat gah
tak le aaye ..
Ruksha.. Mere Aziz mehman lijiye dawat ka an and uthaiye ..

Main... Sukriya aap ka ..
Ruksha... Mere Aziz mehmano aaj mera yaha akhri din hai
aaj hi main capital city lout rahi hi yaha ka karya bhar aab
naye senanayak ke hawale hai...
Main.. Ohh achha..
Ruksha.. Bahadur yodhao main aap ko hamare salana yodha
pratiyogita ke liye nimantrit karti hu ..
Main.. Sukriya lekin hum kahi ruk nahi sakte ..
Ruksha.. Maine ye baat bahadur yodhao se puchi hai agar ye
bahadur hai to kabhi bahaduri ke pratiyogita ko nahi
thukrayenge...uska ishara sintel aur Gasper ki aur tha uske
najar me wo dono hi yodha the ..
Kristine... Pratiyogita WO bhi bahaduri ka ..matlab do
yodhao me ladai ...
Ruksha.. Ha aur jitnewale ko bahut bada inam bhi milega..
Sintel aur Gasper meri aur dekhne lage...
Main.. Hey bahadur yodhao ye to apke yodha khun ko
lalkarna hua ..aab aap piche nahi hat sakte ..hum chal rahe
hai capital city ...
Ruksha... To tai raha aap mere sath chal rahe hai...
 

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Dawat ko pura kar hum aur hamare sath kuch 10 sainik aur
ruksha chal pade alfan kingdom ki capital city mohaya ke
liye...
Main sintel gasper ruksha aur uski sena ki tukri ke piche chal
rahe the ... Aur hamare piche baggi me mere Charo jaan ..
Sintel.. Karma ji ye kya chakkar hai hame safar pe Jana tha
na samudri kinare ke liye...
Gasper.. Aur ye maha yodha ye sab kya hai..
Main.. Bas hum kafi samay se safar hi to kar rahe hai aur
safar me thoda maza MASTI na ho to safar boring ho jayegi ..
Isko thoda maza MASTI hi samajh lo..
Sintel.. Lekin hame maha yodha kiu bana diya aap humse bhi
kahi bade yodha hai aap ke samne hum tikte hi kaha hai..
Main... Are yaar shubha shubha ye bechari aayi mujhe utha
sawalo ki jhadi laga di to Maine bhi usko thoda chedne ke
liye keh diya Maine to sirf dakuo ko bandha hai .. Bas mujhe
kya pata tha ye aap dono se itni khush ho jayegi ki
pratiyogita ka newta de degi..

Gasper.. Achha fasaya..
Main.. Fasane ka kya hai dekh lo alfan ke yodhao ki taqat bhi
main bhi to dekhu ye kitne bade yodha hai..
Safar jari raha adhe din ke safar ke baad hum alfan ke
capital city mohaya pahuch hi gaye...
Mohaya yaha ki Jada tar abadi dark elf hi hai aur jo kuch fine
chine insan hai na hone ke barabar hi hai aur unmese se
adhik gulam hi hai...
Hum jaise jaise capital city se hote huye aage badh rahe the
hame alfan ki ek dusri tasbir dikhai Dene lagi .. Main na rah
paya aur aage badh ruksha se pucha..
Main.. Ruksha ye log jo fate purane kapdo Me hai gale pe
patte lage hai ye sab insan ...
Ruksha.. Ye sab ye sab hamare gulam hai ..yudh me bandhak
qaidi ..hamara itihas bahut Purana hai hum ek chota desh
hai lekin hame koi hara nahi paya .. Aur yudh me qaidia hum
hamari gulam hai ..inkr bachhe bhi honge .. Mera mood jo
city me aane se pehle khush tha ek jhatke me badal gaya

mujhe aab alfan ki ek bhi khubsurati nahi bha rahi thi...lekin
Maine khud ko calm rakha tha...
Jaise jaise hum aage badh rahe the najare badalte ja rahe the
chote chote bachhe gulamj kar rahe the unko janwaro ki
tarah khicha ja raha unse kaam karaye ja rahe the...mujhe
itna gussa aaya ke ek baar to socha abhi inpe apne dragon
chod du...phir khud ko control kiya .. Main bapas Gasper aur
sintel ke pass agaya unka bhi chehra sakt ho gaya tha..
Gasper.. Aap ye sab dekh rahe hai ye log kya kar rahe hai..
Main.. Ha sab dekh raha hu .. Mere sabd gusse se bhare danto
ko khurachte huye bahar nikal rahe the..
Ruksha hame lakar ek hotel ke samne chod ke chali gayi aur
bata gayi kal shubha pratiyogita ke liye hame lene sainik
bhej degi...
Humne hotel me room liya aur khud ko adjust kar liya
....room me us waqt main aur mere Charo jaan the ...
Main.. Jaan main galat tha main bilkul galat tha sochta tha
kahi na kahi ye duniya alag hogi kuch achha hi hoga yaha

lekin galat tha sab ek hai ek jaise hai ..
Kristine.. Kya matlab ye duniya ..
Main.. Kuch nahi kuch nahi .. Tumlogo ko alfan kaisa laga....
Lelina.. Upar se sundar andar se kala bhadda..
Kristine.. Ha mujhe malum nahi tha alfan me Ab bhi insano
ko gulam bana ke rakha gaya hai..
Mili .. Hame bhi nahi pata tha kahi aisa bhi hota hai...Ab bhi
ye log bimar hai pagal hai ..
Main.. Ha aur mujhe lagta hai wo dakaito ko bhi gulam bana
diya jayega ...
Lelina.... Mujhe to sharm arahi hai ye bhi elf hi hai na mere
jaise phir aise kaise ye sab kar sakte hai.. Elf yodha hote hai
lekin unme besumar pyar aur apnapan hota hai .. Hum aam
insano se kahi Jada jite Hai to humne ye sachai apne anubhab
se prapt ki hai lekin...ye log aise kaise..
Main.. Aab ye sochne ka waqt nahi ye socho kya hum kuch
kar sakte hai... Unko unke galati ka ehsaas dilane ki kosis kar
sakte hai..

Kristine.. Hum taqat ka istemal nahi kar sakte .. Melbolina
aur alfan ke bich bahut achha babsayik aur political rista hai
.. Hamara ek galat kadam do desho ko ek dusre ka dushman
bana dega ..
Main.. Ha main samajh sakta hu hum aise hi kisi desh pe
hamla nahi kar sakte lekin phirvi hum dekh ke bhi unjan
nahi ban sakta ... Tumlog ban sakte ho main nahi ... Kuch to
karunga hi..
Raat ho gayi humne khana khaya , Maine ladkio ko aram
karne ka keh ke sintel aur gasper ke sath town ka chakkar
lagane ka socha thodi bahut yaha ki jankari ikathi karne ki
sochi..
Raat to ho gaya tha lekin Jada tar gulamo ko road ke kinare
hi sulaya jata .... Raat prahari ghumte rahte ..hum bhi
ghumne lage ek gali se dusri gali ..kahi kahi kuch gulam aag
ki alawa jala baithe rahte .. Aisa lag raha tha jaise ye log apni
jindagi se har chuke Hai...
Hum kuch aage badhne to ek gali me do sainik ek gulam ladki

ke sath jabardadti kar raha tha ladki bas Anshu baha rahi thi
ek sabd bhi nahi bol rahi thi ..uski halat dekh mera khun
khol gaya..
Maine hath aage kiya aur unsainko pe apna magic use kar
diya... Paralize ... Dono sainik paralize ho kar wohi gir gaye ...
Ladki khud ko sambhal waha se jane lagi lekin uske gale me
badha Chen usko Jane nahi de raha tha...
Maine turant magic use kiya gate ... Aur phir wind magic use
kar dono sainko ko gate se dusre taraf phek diya... Main ladki
se...
Main.. Daro nahi tumne kuch nahi dekha ...ladki bas anshu
baha rahi thi... Hum waha se aage badh gaye..
Sintel.. Yaha in logo ki halat bahut hi taklif deh hai...
Main.. Ha wo to dikh raha hai lekin iska jad kya hai ..kya jo
king hai usko ajke samay ka andaza nahi...
Sintel.. Yaha koi king nahi hai .. Ek queen hai .. Wo bhi kuch
saal pehle hi bani hai queen ..unke mata pita ke hatya ke
baad ...

Main.. Hatya kisne ki hatya...
Sintel... Hame mahal me jo suchna mili thi usme karan aur
sandigdh ki koi baat nahi thi..
Main.. Hmm mystery ..
Sintel.. Aur uske baad unki ek louti beti jo uswaqt 15 saal ki
thi usko queen bana diya gaya...
Main.. Itni si umar me queen ..
Gasper.. Kuch kuch baat samajh me arahi Hai lagta hai queen
ke pass kuch khas taqat nahi hai ..mantri log hi sab kuch
sambhal rahe hai...
Main.. Phirvi mera ek sawal Hai purane king aur queen ne
kiu gulami band nahi ki..
Sintel.. Is sawal ka jawab mere pass nahi hai..main bhi
pehlibaar alfan aaya hu ..
Main.. Chalo lout te Hai.. Hum hotel lout aaye raat me mujhe
nind nahi aayi main socho me gum tha mujhe kya karna
chahiye inki madat ke liye ..
 

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Puri raat main sochta raha nind aayi hi nahi use mujhe Ab
fark bhi nahi padta tha ... Mera jisam aab aam insano ki hado
ko kab ka par kar chuka tha takat ka samundar tha aur
samundar kabhi sota nahi...Lekin raat jagne ke baad bhi
mujhe mere sawalo ka hal dikhai nahi diya ..shubha bhi main
udas baitha tha sabhi taiyar ho rahe the Charo ladkiya
bathroom istemal kar rahi thi main bistar pe baitha Ab bhi
socho me gum tha.. Meri ye bechaini sabhi ne dekhi thi unko
pata bhi tha lekin JAL kisi ke pass nahi tha...
Jab koi upai nahi mila to main bhi taiyar ho gaya hame Jana
tha pratiyogita dekhne .. Aur sayad hissa bhi lene... Sabhi
taiyar ho gaye aur intezar karne lage kuch der baad do sainik
aaye aur hame sath chalne ko kaha...
Wo hame capital city ke dusre chor me bane ek bade se
stedium me le aaye ...
Ruksha apni kabach aur sord ke sath suraksha ke karya me
lagi thi .. Hamare aate hi wo hamare pass agayi...
Ruksha.. Aap sab agaye achha hua .. Yodhao aap dono mere

sath chaliye aap ko apne naam likhane hai pratiyogita
me...Aur aap sabhi darshak hai to darshak me shamil ho
jaiye...dhayan rahe yaha rani shahiba bhi aane wali hai
mukabla dekhne...
Sintel.. Ruksha ji pehle ye to pata chale ye pratiyogita ho kiu
raha hai aur kya kya mukabla hai...
Ruksha.. Yodhao kya baat hai dar lag raha hai kya ..aap to
bahadur hai 20 dakaito ko dono ne khud se sambhala hai
phir ..
Gasper.. Ruksha ji hum ek safar pe nikle hai agar hame sahi
malumat nahi hogi to hissa Lena bekar hai .. Bina erth ke
ladai karna bekar hai...
Ruksha.. Achha achha batate hai.. Ye pratiyogita khas hai aaj
hamare queen 18 saal ki ho gayi hai .... Unke janm din ke
khushi me ye pratiyogita ayojit ki gayi hai... Iske hamare
desh se aur dusre desho se bhi yodha hissa le rahe hai ..jitne
wale ko muh manga inam diya jayega...
Main.. Muh manga inam diya jayega ...

Ruksha.. Ha muh manga jitne wale ko khud Queen inam
dengi apne hatho se..
Main.. Ohh ye to achha Hai to phir main bhi apni kismat
ajmana chahunga...
Ruksha.. Tum .. Tum pagal ho kya ye pratiyogita yodhao ke
liye Hai apni halat dekho...
Main.. Kiu hissa nahi le sakta kya...
Ruksha.. Hissa to le sakte ho lekin ummid bahut kam hai
pehle hi round me bahar ho jaoge ye bachho ka khel nahi...
Main.. Jo jo bhi ho dekha jayega muh manga inam Hai ek
kosis to banti Hai...
Ruksha.. Karlo apni kosis .. Maine apni Charo jaan ke taraf
dekh muskura diya... Wo samajh gayi aur darshako ke sath
shamil ho gayi ...main sintel aur Gasper ruksha ke sath apne
naam likha taiyar ho gaya pratiyogita ke liye...
Stadium kafi bada tha hajaro ke tadat me darshak the upar
ghere ke diwar pe bane galary me...
Bich me ek bada maidan tha... Jab hum maidan me pahuche

to 100 se bhi Jada pratiyogi the ...sab ke sab madkular furtile
the ... Mere jaisa sayad hi normal insan koi tha..... Kuch waqt
baad ek bujurg sa dikhne wala dark elf khada ho bolna suru
hua...
Dark elf... Bahadur yodhao kamar kash lo aaj ki pratiyogita
khas hai hamare Queen .. Ka aaj 18 wa janm din Hai is khushi
ke mouke pe ye pratiyogita ayojit ki gayi hai... Aab apke
samne arahe hai alfan ki malika queen Aliza ...
Main.. Hmm aliza.. Kamse kam yaha ke naam dharti jaise hi
hai .. Tabhi tame se badan wali katili jisam ke sath chehre pe
nakab lagaye abhi abhi jawan hui malika queen Aliza akar
sahi galary ke singhasan pe baith gayi....
Sabhi ghutno pe jhuk gaye main bhi aab Queen thi izzat to
deni hi thi...
Dark elf.. Aab sabhi khade ho jaiye .. Aab main apko
pratiyogita ke niyam aur bhag batane wala hu...
Sabse pehle ye pratiyogita tin Charo me hogi ..

Pehle charan me aap sabhi tin tin ki tukri me bat jaiye apni
jodi bataiye.... Aur hamare sainik ke hatho me kuch mohre
hai.. Jo do jodi ke ek tarah ke mohre hongi unko apas me
mukabla karna hoga jabtak ek jodi har nahi man leti... Ladai
ke niyam saaf hai har man lo ya phir ladte huye jaan de do..
Maine sintel aur gasper ke sath jodi bana li...
Sabhi ne apne apni team chun li...mujhe lag hi raha tha ye
pratiyogita ek mess hogi...
Humne mohar chune .. Aur wo nila mohar tha...
Waise hi kaiyo ne mohar chune aur unme ek aur nila mohar
liye takatwar elf ki team taiyar thi humse mukabla karne ke
liye...
Sabhi team apne apne oposite team ke samne khade
the...hum bhi .. Maine gasper aur sintel ke kan me kuch
bola...
Hum sabhi signal ka intezar kar rahe the aur tabhi queen ka

ishara pate hi sabhi apne oposite team pe tut pade ...
Elf team bhi hamare aur badhi hamla karne tabhi main sintel
aur Gasper ke piche chup ke apna hath aage kar spell
dohraha... Slip .. Aur iske sath hi tino elf jo doudte huye
arahe the wo fisal kar gir pade.. Hum jaldi se aage badhe aur
unke uthne se pehle hi unke gardan pe apni apni talwar laga
khade ho gaye...
Gasper... Har manlo warna....
Elf .. Ha ha hum har mante hai... Humne unke samne koi
option hi nahi choda... Hum bina kisi mehnat ke pehla round
jeet gaye...
Pehle round ke baad kuch der ka break tha hum galary me
bapas agaye...
 

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Lelina.. Achhi chal thi Dady ....
Mili.. Aur nahi to kya becharo ko mouka tak nahi mila...
Tabhi ruksha agayi...
Ruksha.. Tumhari kismat hai bina mehnat kiye hi jeet gaye...
Ye to un bewakufo ki galati hai doudte huye gir pade mouke
ka achha faida uthaya...lekin har baar aisa nahi hoga...
Main...ha main bahut lucky hu .. Waise bhi ye dono bahadur
yodha hai na... Meri suraksha ke liye...
Ruksha.. Kamjoro ko suraksha ki jarurat hoti hai aur
kamjoro ke liye ye pratiyogita nahi hai...
Sintel.... Ruksha ji aap..main bich me bol pada...
Main.. Aap gussa kiu ho rahi hai meri galati thode hi na thi
wo gir pade..
Ruksha.. Mujhe tumhari nahi inki chinta Hai apke karan ye
bahadur yodha piche na rah jaye...
Main.. Nahi nahi aisa kabhi nahi hoga.....
Ruksha.. Taiyar ho jaiye dusra bhag suru honewala hai ..

Hum bapas maidan me lout aaye...
Dark elf.. Pehle padao ko par karne ke liye aap sabhi ko
badhai ho.. Aab bari Hai dusre padao ki .. Ye padao pehle
padao se bhi kathin Hai...is padao ko par karne ke bas ek hi
tarika Hai apne team ke sath akhir tak khade raho... Akhir ke
jo do team khade honge wohi akhri aur antim mukable me
jayenge...
Maine dekha kuch 15 tram thi Ab bhi .. Matlab koi bhi kabhi
bhi kahi se bhi humpe hamla kar sakta hai..
Maine sintel aur gasper pe kan me kuch kaha.. Dono hi
musurane lage...
Maine sintel aur gasper ko kaha main wind suraksha kabach
banane wala hu lekin kisi ko pata chale bina bas unko ye
karna Hai ke jab bhi koi hamla kare unko aisa dikhana hai ke
unke magic ke karan koi humpe hamla nahi kar pa raha ..
Hum tino ek jagah pith se pith laga khade the Maine hath

piche le ja suraksha kabach prakatam magic kar diya...
Hamare Charo aur suraksha kabach agayi ..
Main.. Bhulna mat jab bhi koi hamla kare hath aage kar dena
aise ke tum jadu kar rahe ho aur ha mera bhi dhayan rakha
mujhe kamjor hone ki acting karni hai..
Gasper .. Chinta mat kijiye hum sambhal lenge...
Phirse queen ke ishara se pratiyogita suru ho gayi ..ek team
dusre tram se bhidne lagi main bas dare huye yodha ki acting
kiye ja raha tha .. Jab bhi koi humpe hamla karne aata gasper
aur sintel hath aage kar dete aisa lagta jaise unko magic se
roka gaya ho phir dono apni talwar gumate aur yodha ki
halat kharab kar dete.. Unse bulwate har mante ho ke nahi...
Sabhi ek ek karke bhag khade hote ...
Akhir me hum aur ek aur tram jiske do yodha ghayal the
khade the...
Humpe to ek scratch bhi nahi aayi..... Baki sab bhag khade
huye..... Hame phirse break mila... Hum galary me lout

aaye...phir wohi hua ruksha agayi ..
Ruksha... Mere bahadur dono yodhao main to aap dono ki
diwani hoti ja rahi hu .. Mujhe to yakin hi nahi ho raha tha
aap dono itne bahadur aur takatwar yodha hai...upar se aap
ko inki bhi suraksha karni pad rahi thi... Agar aap dono na
hote ho na Jane inki kya halat hoti...
Main.. Ruksha ji in dono ke hote huye mujhe kya hoga ..
Dekha inki takat koi hame chu bhi nahi paya...
Ruksha.. Dekh liya Lekin aab jo honewala hai ye dono to
khud ko sambhal lenge lekin aap ko nahi sambhal payenge ...
Main.. Hmm matlab aab team tutne wali hai...
Ruksha .. Ab bhi mouka hai mukabla chod dijiye ye apke
bash ki baat nahi.. Wo dekh rahe hai tino ko wo gusse me hai
jakhmi bhi hai wo koi raham nahi dikhane wale...
Main.. Ohhh lekin ek taraf se dekha jaye to wo jakhmi hai
main nahi mere jitne ka chance bhi hai na...
Ruksha.. Lagta hai apko apni jaan se Jada inam ki fikar hai...
Main.. Sochiye muh manga inam milega agar jeet gaya to ..

Ruksha.. Hahahaha jeet gaya to lekin jeetenge kaise...
Main.. Wo ho jayega jaise abtak jeet ta araha hu...
Ruksha.. Abtak chipte phire ho dekho darshak sab dekh rahe
hai tumhare jeetne ka koi sawal hi nahi hai..
Main.. Kosis to karne dijiye...
Ruksha.. Apki marji mujhe jo kehna tha keh diya.. Wo chali
gayi .. Hum khilkhila ke has pade..
Kristine..aap bade badmash Hai humne apka ye roop kabhi
dekha hi nahi...bechari ko abtak andhere me rakha hai...
Main.. Bas thoda sa hi to mazak kiya hai...
Gasper .. Aab hum kya kare aab to lagta hai humko ek dusre
se ladna hoga ..
Sintel.. Ha aur hum achhe se jante Hai hum aap se nahi lad
payenge...
Main... Bas tum dono baki tino se nipat lo .. Main apni taqat
nahi dikhana chahta ..mujhe Queen se matlab hai..kisi inam
se nahi...
Gasper.. Thik hai hum bas un tino se chutkara pakar

pratiyogita chod denge...
Main.. Hmm thik hai.. Waise bhi wo humpe hamla bhi kare
tab bhi hamare suraksha kabach ko tod nahi sakte...
Hum bapas maidan me lout aaye...
Stadium darshak ke shor se.gunj utha ...
Dark elf hath upar kar.. Pratiyogio tum antim ke do team hi
bachhe ho lekin bijeta koi team nahi bas ek hi ho sakta hai
Ab antim padao hai ye jeet liya to pratiyogita jeet li.. Aab
mukabla ek dusre se Hai jeet ke bich bas panch rukawate
Hai .. Unko parkarne wala hi antim bijeta hoga...
Hum talwar nikal khade ho gaye dusre taraf ke yodhao ke
pass bhala aur kulhadi thi...sayad wo usi hathiyar me mahir
the...
Ek baar phirse Queen ka ishara mila aur iske sath hi main
apni jagah pe khada raha lekin sintel aur Gasper aage badhe
aur jo sabke samne tha usse bhid pade.. Suraksha kabach ke
sath sath dono mahir yodha bhi the unke aage wo sabhi Jada

der thahar nahi paye talwar bazi me Gasper aur sintel ka jod
milna muskil tha...
Jab baki tino har man liye ..unhone hath upar kar diya ye
ishara tha unhone pratiyogita chod di ... Ye baat shock thi
darshak ke sath sath Queen aur khaskar ruksha ke liye.. Use
to kuch samajh hi nahi araha tha...
Maine talwar upar kar diya ..bijeta ki nishani ke tor pe....
 

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Tabhi queen khadi ho gayi aur boli...
Queen... Ye kya mazak hai .. Ye pratiyogita Hai koi mazak
nahi...
Main.. Maharani ji aap kya keh rahe hai kya humne koi rule
toda...
Queen... Nahi Lekin jin yodhao ne suru se lekar Ab tak DAT
ke samna kiya wo aise kaise pratiyogita chod ke chale gaye...
Main... Unki ichha is pratiyogita ka bijeta main hu ..darshak
shor karne lage .. Ye galat hai ..ye galat hai...
Main jod se chikhte huye... To aap logo ko galat aur sahi ko
pehchan Hai... Mujhe nahi lagta ..
Queen.. Yodha tum kya back rahe ho..hamare praja ka
apman kar rahe ho..
Main.. Apman unka kiya jata hai jinke pass man ho gyan ho..
In logo ka kya apman.
Queen.. Yodha tum had se badh rahe ho tumhe iske liye saza
di ja sakti Hai..
Main.. Saza mujhe hahaha mujhe saza kiski himmat hai aage

aao .. Jisko bhi lagta hai Do main bijeta kehlane ke layak nahi
hu...
Queen... Senapati kaal is behude yodha ko hamare praja ka
aur desh ka apman karne ki saza dijiye...
Tabhi Queen ke piche se ek hatta katta yodha golden armar
pehne maidan me dakhil hua...
Kaal... Tumne bahut Badi galati kardi alfan ke zameen pe
khade hokar alfan ke logo ka apman karke aab saza
bhugatne ke liye taiyar ho jao...
Main... Hahaha tum mujhe saza doge tum .. Mujhe saza
denewale ke dil me insaniyat honi chahiye pyar hona chahiye
..kale dil wale mujhe saza nahi de sakte...
Kaal.. Tumhari jaban bahut lambi Hai..
Queen.. Senapati bate kaam isko iske behudgi ki saza do..
Tabhi kaal talwar utha doudte huye mere taraf badha aur
apni talwar puri raftar se ghuma war karne ko hua lekin uski
raftar mere raftar ke samne kuch na thi .. Speed...mera itna
hi kehna tha ke meri raftar itni tezz ho gayi ke wo mujhe

dekh bhi nahi paya ..Maine mere talwar ke back side se kaal
ke ped me de Mara ..wo udta hua dur ja gira aur utha hi
nahi...
Jo darshak abtak kaal kaal kar rahe the wo ab bilkul shan't
ho gaye ..
Ruksha darshako ke bich muh pe hath rakhe khadi thi ..
Waha sintel aur Gasper pahuch gaye...
Ruksha... Ye sab kya hai ...
Sintel.. Wohi hai jo dekh rahe hai maidan me yodhao ke
yodha khade Hai .. Hum unke samne bachhe hai..
Ruksha.. Lekin phir wo abtak..
Gasper.. Abtak jo bhi ho raha tha bas ek mazak tha asliyat
yahi hai...dekho abhi bahut kuch baki hai... Sabhi bapas
maidan ki aur dekhne lage..
Main.. Maharani Aliza apke senapati to gaye bara ke bhaw
me ..
Queen .. Kon ho tum kya ho tum..
Main.. Meri pehchan jaruri nahi hai jo jaruri Hai uspe

dhayan de..
Queen.. Kya MATLAB..
Main.. Aap ke sine me dil Hai ye pathar Hai aap ko logo ki
taklif dard dikhai nahi deti ..kabtak atit me jite rahenge ..
Aab wo jamana khatam ho gaya hai..jab yudh bandio ko
gulam banaya jata tha ..ye yug barabri ka hai ..phir abtak is
desh me gulam kiu hai kiu unko barabar ka huq nahi diya
gaya...
Queen.. Tum hote kon ho hamare desh ki babastha pe sawal
uthane wale ..
Main.. Main ek insan hu jo dusre insan ki taklif nahi dekh
sakta ..
Dark elf.. Bahut ho gaya battamiz sainiko giraftar kar lo isko
...
Main.. Simba tumhare bahar aane ka waqt ho gaya hai...
Simba .. Ji malik.. Tabhi simba dahadte huye talwar se nikla
... Uski dahad sun pura stedium kanp gaya .. Sainik jaha the
wohi ruk gaye...

Main.. Maharani main koi dushman nahi hu bas ek rahi hu jo
apne manjil ki aur ja raha tha lekin jab meri najar is desh ke
un bachho budho aurto pe padi jinko janwar ke tarah khucha
jata kode mare jate aurto se jab marji jisam ki bhukh mitayi
jati tab mera man kiya is desh ko jalakar rakh kar du ..aisa
dekh jo insan ko insan na samjhe jisne janwaro jaisa saluk
kare us desh ka mit Jana hi sahi Hai.... Lekin mujhe ladai se
shakti hi priya hai .. Isliye main ek mouka de raha hu apni
galati ko sudhar le.....
Dark elf .. Hame mouka ya dhamki de rahe ho ..
Main.. Kuch achha karne ko keh raha hu ye mera inam hoga
is pratiyogita ko jitne ka .. Mujhe mera inam de do main
chala jayunga aur agar apni taqat pe itna hi ghamand hai to
main bhi taiyar hu .. Maine hath upar kiya.. Sthanantar... Aur
iske sath hi asman me ek bada sa mirrar gate khul gaya ..aur
mere sochne matra se us gate se ek ke baad ek dragons bahar
nikalne lage sabhi ki halat kharab ho gayi thi ..kuch 4 dragon
the jo akar ground me mere dono taraf utre ...sabki ankhe

fati ki fati rah gayi..
Ruksha.. Kon ho tumlog kya hai ye ...
Gasper... Is duniya ke pehle dragon king aur mahan jadugaro
ke jadugar spirit king ke malik karma ... Jo melbolina ke
bhabi king bhi honwale hai...
Ruksha.. Itne samay se to apsab mujhse khel rahe the ..
Lelina.. Dady kamal ke hai...
Ruksha.. Dady ..
Kristine.. Wo inko Dady kehti hai lekin rista kuch aur hai
hum char unke honewali biwiya hai...
Ruksha... Kya char ..ruksha shoked thi sath sath waha ke
sabhi kisi ko yakin hi nahi ho raha tha ek insan dragons ko
kabu kiye huye hai...
Queen.. Kon ho tum apna parichai do...
Main.. Parichai mera koi parichai nahi main melbolina ka ek
aam basinda hu...
Queen.. Tum aam nahi ye nahi ho sakta jo spirit king ka
malik ho jo dragons ko bash me rakhta ho jo yodhao ka

yodha ho wo aam hohi nahi sakta...
Main.. Meri pehchan yaha jaruri nahi hai jo jaruri hai wo hai
in gulamo ki mulkti aur unko unka haq ...
Dark elf.. Ye asambhab hai koi bhi hame badhya nahi kar
sakta kuch karne ke liye ...
Main.. Main badhya nahi kar raha mujhe mere sawal ka
jawab chahiye take main faisla kar saku aage kya karna hai ..
Ye desh tabhi rahega jabtak yaha har insan ko barabar ka
haq milega warna aise desh ki koi jarurat nahi ...
Queen... Yodha tum jo bhi keh rahe ho in kuch dragons aur
ek Singh ke bharose ek pure desh ko chunowti de rahe ho...
Main.. Achha achha ye kam lag rahe hai kya.. To thik hai
meri puri sena ko hi bulana padega abhi 4 hai phir 10 honge
phir 20 phir 40 phir 100 .. Kya kehte hai .. Apki sena sambhal
legi na .. Jab 100 dragon asman me ghumte huye mahal aur
city pe aag ki lapte barsayenge..
Queen..tum hame dara ke baat manbana chahte ho..
Main.. Dusra koi upai dikh nahi raha...

Queen .. Ek upai hai..main tumhari sabhi baat man lungi
..agar tum meri ek baat man lo...
Main.. Konsi baat ..
Queen .. Tumhe mujhse shadi karni hogi ban jao alfan ka
king aur karlo apne marji ka...
 

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Itni der se jo mera Josh tha wo pal bhar me fur ho gaya ..
Mere muh se awaj nahi nikal rahi thi kya kahu...
Dark elf.. Queen aliza ye aap kya keh rahe hai ..ye hamara
dushman hai hame dhamki de raha hai aap isse kaise shadi
ka prastab de sakti hai...hamare yodha isko jarur saza
denge...
Queen.. Khamosh maha mantri .. Maine bahut sunli aap ki
baat aaj tak sunti arahi hu aur nahi .Maine apko apkr pad se
nilambit karti hu...
Dark elf.. Nadan ladki tumhari itni himmat mere khilaf jao ..
Yehi galati tumhare mata pita ne ki thi uski saza Maine unko
di aab tumhari bari...
Dark elf hatho me ek jahrila khanjar kiya queen ke taraf
badh ne laga lekin jabtak wo queen tak pahuchta mera
talwar uske sine ke par ho gaya..uski wohi death ho gayi ..
Maine hath upar kiya aur phirse sthanantar magic ka istemal
kiya aur dragons ko bapas bhej diya ...simba bhi talwar me
shama gaya...

Queen.. Sukriya aap ka bahadur yodha .. Gulami sahi kaha
gulami hi hamare desh ki sabse Badi galati thi piche kayi salo
se maine bhi ek gulam ki tarah hi jindagi gujari hai..unke
kehne pe uthti inke kehne pe baitbti ..Queen. Hote huye bhi
ek gulam se adhik meri koi aukat nahi thi.. Sukriya aapne
mujhe mukti dilayi..
Main.. Sukriya kehne ki jarurat nahi bas mujhe mere inam
swarup gulamo ki ajadi aur unka haq de dijiye...
Queen.. Nahi iske liye apko meri sart puri karni hogi..
Main.. Ye sambhab nahi mere pehle hi char honewali biwiya
line pe hai...
Tabhi waha sintel gasper ruksha ke sath meri Charo jaan bhi
agayi...
Main.. Ye rahe mere Charo honewali bibiya..
Queen.. Hmm aap insan bahut dilchasp hai ..mujhe manjur
hai panchwi banna...
Main.. Kya.....
Lili.. Ye kya kya kya laga ke rakha hai apne sidhe sidhe Nana

kar dijiye hum kam padte hai kya apke liye...
Lelina... Dady no Dady. ..
Main.. Are Maine kab kaha main khud mana kar raha hu...
Queen Aliza.. To gulamo ki azadi ko bhul jaiye ..agar apni
taqat ka istemal karna hai to kar lijiye .. Ye desh rahe ya na
rahe main apki patni ban ke rahungi .. Mujhe aur mere desh
ko ap jaise kabil king ki jarurat hai..
Kristine.. Queen Aliza ye sambhab nahi ye melbolina ke king
banenge .. Aur ye haq mera hai main inki pehli hu .. Ye
melbolina ke hai...
Queen Aliza.. Ohho to aap melbolina ki princess hai .. Ye to
aur achha ho gaya .. Hamare dono desh kayi sadi se ek dusre
ke padosi rahe hai ..agar karma king ban jayenge to dono
desh Jud jayenge aur ek mahan aur takatwar desh ki rachna
karenge...
Main.. Ruko ruko ye sab kya ho raha hai lado nahi .. Queen
Aliza ye possible nahi hai abhi main shadi nahi kar sakta .. Ye
Charo bhi shadi ka hi intezar kar rahe hai... Main abhi safar

me hu aur safar me main kisi bandhan me nahi bandh sakta
..
Queen Aliza .. Aap safar me hai aur ye Charo bhi intezar me
hai samajh sakti hu to thik hai .. Shadi karne ki jarurat nahi
bas ek bachan chahiye..
Main.. Bachan kaisa bachan..
Queen Aliza.. Jab aap in Charo se shadi kar le to aap mujhse
bhi shadi karenge tabtak main intezar kar lungi ..
Gasper.. Hmm ye deal achhi hai kiu karma ji..
Sintel.. Ha mujhe to ye deal achhi lagi ..karma jo koi problem
nahi hogi kiu karma ji..
Main.. Tum dono bhi na kya thik hai meri char already hai
phir kaise ye faisla main nahi lunga..mere bharose baithi
meri Charo jaan hi ye faisla kare ...lo jaan aab ye faisla tum
Charo pe hai jo bhi jawab tum dena chahti ho de do...
Charo mujhe kuch der dekhti rahi phir apas me na Jane kaise
kaise ishara kiye phir Kristine ne hi jawab diya...
Kristine.. Queen aliza apko jawab dene se pehle hum ye

janna chahte hai ke aap inse shadi kiu karna chahti hai...
Queen Aliza.. Mujhe ye achhe lage ye dikhne me aam insan
hai lekin inke andar atmabiswas ka samundar hai .. Nahi to
pure desh ko konsa akela insan dhamkata hai usi ke capital
me khade hokar...aur sabse achhi baat unka dil jo dusre ke
dukh ko dekh dukhi hota hai .. Maine kayi yodha dekhe hai
jitne taqarwar itna hi unka dil kathor ho jata hai.. Lekin
unka dil kisi bachhe ki tarah narm hai jo dusre ke liye
dhadakta hai...
Kristine.. Bas bas hame jawab mil gaya ..aur hamne faisla
kiya hai ke hum ko apki sart manjur Hai... Sahi waqt pe ye
aap se bhi shadi karenge tabtak apko intezar karna hoga...
Queen Aliza .. Mujhe manjur hai... Main thandi sanse lekar
rah gaya .in ladkio ko bhagwan bhi nahi samajh sakta.....
Queen apne Singhasan ke karib jakar apni praja ko dekh kar
boli...
Queen Aliza... Jaise ke aap sabhi ne suna aur dekha humne
abtak kitni Badi galati ki hai jiski koi maafi nahi hai lekin

aab aur nahi ..gulami jahar se kaam nahi.. Main eilan karti
hu aaj se abhi se sabhi gulam aazad Hai .. Unko alfan ki
nagrikta di jati hai ..wo ab alfan ke nagrik hai jo bhi gulam
rakhe huye hai wo sabhi unko muqt kar de aur agar unko
mulazim chahiye to wo unko tankha pe rakhe na ki gulam
bana ke ...sath sath sabhi gulamo ko hamare raj kosh se 10 10
sone ke sikke diye jate hai take wo apna jivan naye sire se
suru kar sake ...
Aab aap sabhi apne honwale maharaj aur mere honewale
pati ka swagat talio se kare ...
Main queen Aliza abhi se melbolina ke mahan yodha aur
mahan jadugar karma ko apne bhabi pati ke roop me swikar
karti hu...
Main kya karta apne Charo jaan ke sath queen Aliza ke sath
khada ho gaya...pehle bhagwan ne mujhe kuch bhi nahi diya
siwai sisakti jindagi ke phir mujhe mout mili lekin phir
bhagwan ne mujhe nayi duniya me naye Sharir ke sath
prakat kiya phir dost diye pyar diye takat di aur dost diye

aur taqat di ..besumar pyar diya.. Wo kya din the aab kaisa
din hai ...
Kabhi tarasta tha abhi ye sochna padta hai sambhalu
kaise...bhagwan ki Lila bhagwan hi Jane...
Us din pure city me naye kanun ko lagu kar diya gaya sabhi
gulam ko muqt kiya gaya unke rahne khane ka bhi intezam
kiya gaya .. Sabkuch phirse normal hone me waqt to lagana
hi tha lekin itna waqt mere pass nahi tha..Aliza ki jid ke
karan hume unke mahal Jana pada ... Aisa mahal sayad hi
kisi ne dekha ho sundarta ki Murat thi kafi bariki se dhayan
dekar banaya gaya tha melbolina ya phir Brunel jitna bada
mahal to nahi lekin usse kam bhi na tha.. Sundarta me dono
se aage tha...
 

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Din to pratiyogita me hi beet gaya hum mahal pahuche to
mahol hi alag tha hamara swagat behad sslike the sahi
mahman ke tor pe kiya gaya...mujhe thodi ajeev bhi feel ho
raha tha dark elf ki rani mujhe pasand karegi aur mujhe king
banane ki ghoshna bhi karegi kuch Jada hi ajeev tha khair
baat wo nahi yaha ki prajati ek insan ko dark elf prajati ka
king swaikar karegi ya nahi asal baat ye thi ho sakta hai is
mamle ko lekar desh me bidroh ho jaye .. Mujhe Aliza ki
chinta hone lagi ...
Mahal ke baithak me hum sab baithe the tabhi Maine Aliza
ko pucha...
Main.. Queen Aliza apka faisla kya sahi tha main ek insan hu
aap ek dark elf Queen hai apko nahi lagta apka jivan sathi
apke apno mese hona chahiye ..mujhe aap swaikar jar sakti
hai lekin apki praza unka kya wo to apke aur unke khud ke
jaise hi kisi dark elf ko hi king bante huye dekhna chahti
hongi...

Aliza.. Ho sakta hai isme thoda birodh ho thode bahut
charcha ho lekin mera faisla hamari jati ke liye aur mere liye
sahi hai.. Hum jamano se apni prajati ke rud mansikta me
fase hai ye hame kuch bhi naye badlaw aur nayi soch se piche
khich raha hai .. Apke ek insan ke king banne se sabhi ke dilo
me nayi soch aayegi aur apne apne rud mansikta bhare ghero
se bahar nikalne me asani hogi...mere pita ne bhi kuch aise
hi faisle liye the jo hamare dark elf ke rud mansikta wale
logo ko pasand nahi aaye aur unhone mere mata pita ki
hatya kara di .. Sab kuch badal ta hai humko bhi badalna
padega...
Main.. Hmm lekin aab apki jaan ko khatre hai ..wo mantri hi
ek to nahi tha uske sath aur bhi kayi chupe huye apradhi
gandi soch wale honge .. Aur unka nishana aab aap hogi..
Aliza.. Ha ho sakta hai lekin main darne wali nahi hu .. Aap
nishchint rahe ..
Main.. Wo to thik hai lekin hame kal hi nikalna hai hamare
safar me .. Hum pehle hi aaj ka din hawa chuke hai...

Aliza.. Itni jaldi nahi nahi aapne mere sath waqt hi kaha
bitaya hai aap ko Janne ka mouka hi kaha mila...
Kristine.. Ha ye to hai hum apke sath hai lskin Aliza ko to
yahi rukna hoga wo queen hai ..
Main.. Isme kuch kiya nahi ja sakta...
Lelina.. Kiu dady kiu kiya nahi ja sakta ..aap ke liye kuch bhi
asambhab nahi..
Main.. To kya karne ko keh Rahi ho lelina...
Mili.. Kiu aap ka gate magic hai na wo kab kam aayega...
Main.. Ohho to gate ka istemal karna chahti ho..thik Hai ..din
me hum safar pe honge lekin raat raat hum sath me bita
sakte hai...
Aliza... Kya aisa ho sakta hai...
Main.. Ha ho sakta hai .. Aliza ke ankhe chamak uthi... Wo
chamakti hui tame jaisi katil jisam wali hasina jise dekh har
Mard apni jaan luta de wo mere baho me aane ke liye mere hi
ankho ke samne tadap rahi thi...
Main.. Waise night Gasper sintel bhai dekh rahe ho mere

piche to line lag gayi hai aap dono kiu akele pade ho ..
Sintel... Karma ji puchiye maat hamare night Gasper ke piche
bhi ek diwani lattu ho gayi hai...
Main.. Kon kaha hame bataya kiu nahi...
Gasper.. Kya karma bhai kiski baat sun rahe hai..
Sintel.. Achha to batayu shubha se dekh raha hu kaise baar
tumhare piche lattu bani phir rahi hai ...
Main.. Kiski baat kar rahe ho aap dono...
Lili.. Are jaan apko pata nahi chala kalse ek diwani in dono
ko hi to puch rahi hai aap to us bechari ko bewakuf banaye
rakhe the ...
Main.. Kya ruksha ki baat ho rahi hai kya ..
Sintel.. Ji karma ji uski ki baat kar rahe hai .. Diwani ho gayi
hai hamare night ke piche...
Gasper.. Nahi nahi aisi koi baat nahi hai..
Main.. Are to baat kya hai ..
Gasper.. Bhai bechari abhi shoked hai pehle to wo soch rahi
thi hum dono hi maha yodha hai tab tak wo hamare piche

lagi hui thi khas kar mere piche .. Phir jab se usne aap ki
karamat dekhi Hai shoked ho gayi .. Upar se jab aap king
banenge ye suna hai wo apse chuptoi phir rahi hai...
Main.. Are ye bhi koi baat hui chupne ki ek kaam karo main
apne dost ki love story ko aise adhura nahi rahne de sakta
kal use bhi apne sath le chalte hai hamare sath aap ki bhi
love story aage badh jayegi...
Sintel.. Ha ye sahi kaha .. Phir thodi aur khichai MASTI
mazak hua ..mujhe Aliza ki fikar ho rahi thi isliye Maine uspe
apni suraksha kabach magic ka istemal kar diya ...
Raat ko hame shahi kaksh diya gaya lekin mujhe Kristine aur
bakio ne bahar kar diya aur kaha aaj ki raat Aliza ke sath
samay batayu ..
Main bhi kya kar sakta tha hum dono main aur Aliza mahal
ke top ke bade se balcony me agaye asman saaf tha sitate
jagmaga rahe the ..
Halki thandi hawa bhi bah rahi thi aur ek aag ki bhatti mere

sath khadi thi ..main dil ko kitna bhi roku Lekin Aliza ka
tame jaisa rang aur uski abhi abhi jawan hui kamsin jawani
ko dekh main bahak ne laga tha .. Kab Maine aliza ka hath
pakda aur usko apne sine se lagaya pata hi nahi chala .. Ye
sayad mere andar ke hormones ki karamat thi... Aliza ne
mujhe roka nahi aur hum dono ke lab Jud gaye .. Wo waqt
WO mahol har premi ke liye anmol hota hai ..jab uske premi
ya premika ke sath pehla chumban hota hai... Hame pata
nahi chala kabtak hamare hoth ek dusre se Jude rahe waqt
gujar ta gaya chumban gehra se aur gehra hota gaya... Sanse
ukhadne lagi lekin pyar ki jid tudne ka naam nahi le rahi thi
..akhir kar hame hi har manni padi hum alag huye ..Aliza
mere sine se lag chehra chupaye tezz tezz sanse le rahi thi..
Aliza... Mere sajan mere sajan mujhe chhod ke dur mat jaiye
mere sajan...
Main.. Aliza kuch chije hai jo hame karna hi padta hai kuch
kartabya hai jo hame nibhana hi padta hai .. Hum loutenge
hum sath jarur rahenge lekin abhi wo waqt thodi dur Hai

Intezar karo us waqt ka hum ek jarur honge...
Aliza.. Main intezar kar rahi hu mere sajan ...
Raat bhar main Aliza ko baho me bhar khule asman ke bich
baitha raha ...shubha hone se pehle hi main Aliza se bida
lekar apne kaksh me lout aaya ...
 

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Hamara waqt alfan me pura hua hame apne safar ko jari
rakhna tha ...humne Aliza se bida liya aur apne hotel lout
aaye aaj sakad ke raste thode badle huye najar arahe the koi
bhi gulam ke gale me chain bandhi hui na thi ..
Jaise jaise hum aage badh rahe the sabhi gulam jhuk Ke hame
salam kar rahe the ..main samajh sakta tha unko mere bare
me pata chal gaya tha .. Raste ke log hame dekh khusur fusur
kar rahe the ..ye sab natural reaction tha..
Hum hotel lout aaye waha kabach pehne sar jhukaye ruksha
khadi thi ...
Main.. Hello ruksha ji aap kaise hai...
Ruksha.. Mujhe maaf kar dijiye mujhse bahut Badi galati ho
gayi main anjane me na Jane apse kya kya keh gayi ..
Main.. Ohho isliye .. Usme aap ki kya galati thi Maine jo
dikhaya aapne dekha maafi to mujhe mangni chahiye...
Ruksha.. Nahi nahi aap mujhse maafi kiu mangenge aap
hamare honewale king hai..

Main.. Ruksha honewala hu abhi hua nahi hu to hum pehle
jaise ban jaye ... Night Gasper aap ne ruksha se baat ki thi
safar Ke liye...
Sintel.. Baat puchiye maat kya baate hui thi dono me mahal
ke baag me adhi raat tak in dono me jamkar bate hui Hai...
Main.. Ohho to ye baat hai ..
Kristine.. Aur aap ko kaise pata prince sintel..
Sintel.. Wo inke piche gaya tha baag Me fulo ki khushbu
sunghne..
Main.. Hahaha .. Achha achha .. Ruksha ji to kya irada hai kya
tai kiya hai apne...
Ruksha... Ji main puri taiyar ke sath aayi hu safar ke liye...
Main.. Welcome to our group ruksha ji... Safar ki suruwat
kare... Phir humne apne saman liye aur safar ki suruwat kar
di bas abki baar sath me ruksha Jud gayi thi...
Hum city ko cross kar samudri bandar gah ki aur badh chale
.. Hame bandar gah pahuchte pahuchte raat ho gayi raste me

humne ek chota sa lunch break liya phir safar jari rakhi...
Alfan ki uttari bandar gah Brunel ki bndar gah se bhi Badi thi
..sayad Iski ek wajah yaha ke gulam the jinke karan yaha
kam kharche me gulam mil jate the kaam ke liye lekin humse
pehle hi yaha gulamo ki muskti ka sahi sabdesh agaya... Aab
yaha gulam gulam nahi rahe the lekin phirvi unko Kabul
karna aam logo ke liye itna asan nahi tha thoda bahut anban
aur thoda mahol ka bigad na lazmi tha...kharche thode badh
gaye the aab kaam ki kimat gulamo ko mil rahi thi unke
maliko ko kuch nahi usi baat se naraj kuch log gulamo ko
dhamka aur daba rahe the...
Raat ho gayi thi hamne samudri kinare hu apna ek camp
lagaya hame metalica Jane ke liye kisi marchant ship pe
booking karni thi .. Yaha se bas kuchi marchant the jo
matalica tak ka safar karte the aur unko mana pana behad
muskil hota hai .. Aur ek ship kharid Ke bhi hum aage ja

sakte hai lekin uske liye sahi raste ki pehchan bhi honi jaruri
hota hai warna hum kho sakte hai...
Main aur sintel ne pata lagane ki bahut kosis ki agar koi
Metallica ja raha ho to lekin hamari kismat yaha dhoka de
gayi .. Kal hi ek marchant ship yaha se Metallica ke liye nikal
gayi...
Sintel.. Karma ji aab kya kare dusre ship ka intezar lekin
dusra ship kab aayega koi andaza nahi..
Main.. Koi aur upai nahi hai hame ek ship kharidna hoga...
Sintel.. Lekin hame rasta nahi pata ...
Main.. Dekhte Hai yaha koi captain Ho jo Metallica ka rasta
janta ho...
Sintel.. Chaliye dekhte Hai.. Humne kayo se pucha lekin sabhi
na na me hi sar hilaya ..bhatakte huye hum ek baar me
pahuch gaye ..waha ka mahol hi kuch aur tha ..andar jaise
alag hi duniya ho bahar jitni shakti thi andar itna hi shor
saraba nashedio ka adda tha..

Hum bhi ek table dekh ke baith gaye ..
Bar boy aaya .. Ji kahiye kya layu ...
Main.. Suno bhai mujhe kuch jankari chahiye ..Maine uske
apne hatheli pe ek silver coin ghumane laga ladka samajh
gaya...
Ladka.. Kya jankari chahiye..
Main.. Mujhe ye janna Hai yaha koi captain hai kya jise
Metallica tak Jane ka rasta pata ho jo ship chala sake...
Ladka.. Captain hai to sahi Lekin wo jayega ya nahi nahi
pata...
Main... Kon hai kaha hai WO..
Ladka... Wo raha dekhiye ... Ek kone me ek 40 se 45 saal ka
insan purane fate kapde pehne baitha tha koi uske najdik
nahi ja raha tha...
Main.. Kon hai wo ...
Ladka... Wo ek Metallica ka marchant tha aur captain
tha...kayi saal pehle aaya tha apne sath bahut sa Metallica ka

saman laya tha lekin bechara yaha munfa nahi kama paya
aur karz me dub gaya.. Uski ship ko karze ke tor pe zapt kar
li gayi tabhi se bechara yahi majduri karta hai aur raat ko
sarab pita hai... Aur yahi nahi iske sath aaye huye pure ship
ke jitne bhi karmchari the wo sabhi yaha majduri karne pe
badhya ho gaye ..
Main.. Aisa kui kisi dusre ship pe noukri kar ke lout sakte the
na...
Ladka.. Itna sab mujhe nahi pata...
Maine wo sikka ladke ke taraf uchal diya aur chal pada us
captain ke pass... Uske hi table pe baith gaya...
 

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Admi.. Kon ho tum kya kaam hai raat ko main kaam nahi
karta...
Main.. Tum captain ho na Metallica loutna Hai..
Admi.. Metallica hahaha lout to sakta hu lekin loutu kis muh
se...
Main.. Matlab ..
Admi.. Maine apni puri jaidad bech ship kharidi bapas ke liye
achhe saman kharide mujhpe bharosa karne wale sathio ko
jama kiya lekin kya hua ship gayi paise gaye izazat gayi ..
Main.. Inmese kuch chije main louta sakta hu bas hame
Metallica lekar Jana hoga...tumhari ship kab hai..
Admi.. Zapt kar li gayi padi hai bandargah ke uttari chot pe...
Main.. Waise tumhare sathi kiu nahi loute bapas..
Admi.. Bewakufi hai sab ke sab kehte hai mujhe sath lekar
loutenge ...
Main.. Ek deal karte hai ..main tumhara karza utarunga safar

ka kharcha uthayunga .. Tum hame Metallica lekar chaloge
..manjur hai...
Captain.. Kiu mazak karte ho .. Main akela ship ko kaise
chala sakta hu..
Main.. Maine kab kaha tum akele hoge tum aur tumhare
sathi .. Sab honge sab ka kharcha khane pine ka majduri
safar ka sab dunga... Badle me hame metalica le chalo ..waha
pahuch gaye to ship tumhari...
Captain.. Baat se badloge to nahi ..
Main.. Chalo abhi chalte hai tumhara karza utar ship ka
dakhal lete hai .. Hame jald se jald safar ki suruwat karni
hai...
Captain.. Agar aap apna wada pura karne ko taiyar hai to
main bhi wada karta hu parso shubha tak hum safar ki
suruwat kar denge...
Main.. Kal kiu nahi..
Captain.. Ship kayi salo se aise hi padi hai saaf safayi kar
safar ke liye taiyar karne me ek din to lagega hi..

Main.. Waise captain aap ka naam kya hai..
Captain.. Maafi maafi main kitna beadab ho gaya hu .. Mera
naam kriatofar hai ..
Main.. Maafi mangne ki jarurat nahi aab chalte hai mera
naam karma hai ye mere sathi sintel...
Hum waha se nikal gaye aur port ke daftar me ja pahuche ...
Mujhe karib 100 sone ke sikke dene pade ship ko chudane ke
liye ...100 sone ke sikke mere liye bhale hi Jada na ho lekin
unke liye kayi saalo tak ka kharcha tha ...
Main.. To captain aap jaiye apne sathio ko ikatha kijiye ..hum
samudri kinare camp lagaye huye hai shubha milenge...
Captain... Sukriya apka bahut bahut sukriya...
Main.. Aab jaiye... Hum captain se bida lekar apne camp pe
lout aaye...
Lelina... Dady der kar di kaha rah gaye the...
Main.. Kahi nahi jaan aur ye kya tum mujhe dady hi kahogi
kya dusro ki tarah jaan kiu nahi kehti..
Lelina... Dady mujhe Dady kehna achha lagta hai kiu aap ko

pasand nahi hai...
Main.. Pasand ki baat nahi hai jaan log sunte hai to unke man
Me kayi sawal ajate hai.. Kamse kam ek kaam karo jab hum
akele honge ya apne sathio ke sath honge tab mujhe dady
kehna dusro ke samne nahi thik...
Lelina .. Thik hai dady ...
Hum sabhi camp fire ke karib baith gaye unko sab kuch
bataya kya kya hua ...
Kristine... Jaan Aliza ko to bula lijiye..
Ruksha... Kon Aliza...
Mili.. Ruksha ji apko apke queen ka naam nahi pata...
Ruksha.. Kya queen Aliza unko jaise bulayenge wo to mahal
me hongi...
Main... Dariye nahi ..bas shan't rahiye ..raat kafi ho gayi thi
..Maine hath aage kia Aur apna spell dohraya... Sthanantar
..iske sath hi ek gate khul gaya... Kristine aur baki Charo gate
me chali gayi.. Ye gate sidhe Queen ke kaksh me khula
tha...jab wo louti unke sath Queen Aliza bhi sath thi...Aliza

akar mere sine se lag gayi...
Aliza.. Aap ek din ke liye kya gaye jaise jamana beet gaya
ho...ek pal ki bhi duri karne ko doudti hai..
Main.. Are jaan sambhalo khud ko main tumse dur kaha hu
dil se pukarogi to tumhare pass pahuch jayunga.....waha
thodi hasi mazak hone laga khana pina hua main apne 5
hasinao ke sath samundar kinare waqt bitane laga dhire
dhire sabhi ka pyar bund bund kar mujhme samne lagi.. Raat
ke akhri pahar me Maine Aliza ko bapas bhej diya baki
hasinao ko bhi sula diya khud bhi thoda rest karne laga...
Pagli shubha hi captain apne 20 sathio ke sath hamare samne
the ...
Main.. Captain jaiye ship pe jo bhi kaam karna ho kijiye aur
ye kijiye Maine unko kuch silver coins diye khane line ke liye
aur jo kuch saman unko chahiye marammat karne ke liye...
Hame safar ke liye rashan ka intezam karna tha.. Uske liye

part ke market me agaye ...bahut hi sundar market tha aur
kuch sasta bhi tha capital city se ..hona bhi chahiye ..
Humne captain ke kahe anusar list ke hisab se rashan ka
intezam kiya .. Kuch kharidari meri hasinao ne bhi ki kuch
kapde kuch aur saman .. Hum to bas dekhte hi rah gaye...
Din inhi Sab me beet gaya idhar captain ne ship ko pehle
jaise hi bana liya tha safai aur marammat karke ..
Dusre din hum ship pe the aur ship samundar me ..
Main.. Captain hame metalica pahuchne me kitna waqt
lagega...
Captain.. Waise to agar hum aram karte huye sirf din me
selling kare to hame 7 din lagta hai ..lekin agar hum raat ko
bhi selling kare to hum 4 din me pahuch sakte hai..
Main.. Hmm Jada khud pe jod mat lo aram se chalo ..
Captain.. Sukriya aap ka.. Aaj kitne samay baad mujhe
khushi ka ehsaas ho raha hai..
Main.. Achha thik hai .. Safar kafi lamba tha 7 din .. Jitna

Maine socha tha usse kahi Jada samay lagne wala tha...phir
maine sar ko jhatka aur apne jaan ke pass lout aaya ... Jo ship
ke dek pe pura ek picnic camp lagaye huye thi...
 
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