Kalyansurya
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Dekhte hai bhai kaise update dete ho
Sorry too se but aapki story kaffi slow chal rhe hai
Fantasy Adventuresss of Karma (WORLD BEYOND THE WORLD) Part 2*
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Sorry too se but aapki story kaffi slow chal rhe hai
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Chlo Jaha itne din waha ek din aur bt Bhai if u stop it again then I will leave your story
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ha bhai..i know isliye aaj se daily update dene ki kosis karunga bhai.keep supporting aur aise hi sath dete rahana
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UPDATE-19
Recap-
Pichhale update me dosto ab tak aap logo ne padha hoga kise karma ne apne parivar aur dosto ko vapas pane k liye apna sab kuchh kurbaan kar deta hai.aur Ab vo baan gaya hai ek shadow.
Ab aage…
Main-black shadow se… ab to main bhi tumhari tarah hi shadow baan gaya hu.sirf shadow hi nahi balki is maya bi jungle ka raja bhi hu.ab aur kuchh bhi karna baki hai ya sab kuchh ho gaya ye sab kuchh main thode gusse me bol raha tha.aur bolta bhi q nahi akhir jo kuchh bhi huva mersa sath vo sab kuchh black shadow ne chhal se jo kiya tha.Itna bol k main thodi der k liye shant ho jata hu.aur apne maan me sochta hu chalo jo ho gya so ho gaya ab honi ko kaun taal sakta hai .aur to aur ab gussa karne ka bhi kya fayda jo hona tha ho chuka hai.aur kahi na kahi mere shadow bane me sirf balck shadow ka hi hath nahi hai isme utna hi meri galti bhi hai aur ho sakta hai shayaad hai meri mangil ho meri zindagi ka.itna sochne kbaad main ek gahari saas le k sab kuch bhavish pe chhod deta hu.
Aur ek baar phir se black shadow se----bolna shuru kar deta hu…mere pass jada samay nahi hai.mujhe tehram bhi jana hai.samaj gaye na.
Black shadow-malik bus ek akhri kaam aur karna hai aap ko apni shaktiyo ko jaana hai aur kuchh jaruri bate aur rahi baat tehram jane ki to vaha to main aap ko ya phir aap khud hi palak jhapkte hi pahoch sakte hai.
Main-thik hai thik hai..batao mujhe apni sari shaktiyo ko jaane k liye kya karna pade ga.aur kaun si baate mujhe jaana jaruri hai.
Black shadow-apni shaktiyo jaane k liye aap ko sabse pahle dhayan me baithna hoga aur apni sari ki sari saktiyo ko ek jagah kendrit karna ho ga.jaise hi aap ki sari shaktiya ek jagah kendrit ho jayengi vo sab k sab aap k dil ki jagah le lenegi.ye kahu ki aap ki sari saktiya aap ka dil ban jayengi.jaise hi ye hoga aap ko har kisi ki shaktiya aap ko mil gaye ga hamesa hamesa k liya.aur sath hi meri sari shaktiya bhi aap ko mil jaye ga aur unsabhi ki saktiya bhi jin ki shaktiya sand watch me thi aur kuchh to hamesa hamesa k liya aap me kaid ho jaengee jo sand watch me kaid the. Aur un sabhi ki shaktiyo ka istamal kise karna hai ye bhi aap ko pata chal jaye ga.mere malik.
Main-black shadow ki baat sun kar thoda sa chauk jata hu.q ki mere teen (3) powers bhi hamesa hamesa k liya kaid ho jaengee mujh me.monark ,simba aur crimson.
Main-black shadow se …kya main inko kabhi apne andar se nahi nikal paunga bahar .kya ye sab k sab hamesa mujhe hi kaid rahenge.
Black shadow-malik abhi to main kuchh nahi kah sakta hu.ye to aap pe hai agar aap 2 aur shadow ke malik ban gaye to sayd se aap inko apne kaid se aazaad kar paye…lekin.
Main-lekin kya?
Black shadow-malik agar aap bina 3 shadow k malik banane se pahale teeno ko aazaad kiya ya karne ki kosis bhi ki to aap phir kabhi insani roop nahi le paenge.main kya bolna chahata hu aap samajh gaye honge.
Main-aisa q ?(apne maan me yr ye to shock pe shock dete ja raha hai )
Black shadow-q ki malik aap k pass koi bhi dil nahi hai abhi tak.ye teeno aur aap ki aur meri sari saktiya aap k dil ki jagah le hai.taki aap ko kam se kam 20hrs (20 jante tak) tak daily insani roop me rah sake.aur 4hrs aap ko shadow ban k rahna pade ga.jab tak aap ko blood red heart nahi mil jata hai.tab tak aur aap apna 4jante (4hrs) ka shadow roop pure din me kabhi bhi istamaal kar sakte hai.
Main-ye to bahot badi samasya hai.agar galti se bhi kisi ne mera shadow roop dekh liya to pata nahi kya hoga (ye sab kuchh mai apne maan me soch raha tha).mujhe jaldi hi blood red heart pana ho ga.
Maine-black shadow se kaha kaise mujhe blood red heart mile ga aur kaha mile ga.
Black shadow –malik us k bare me to aap ko knowledge book se hi pata chala ga aap ko.aur vo book kha hai uska pata to aap ko hi lagana pade ga.
Main-thik hai black shadow se. is k bare me ab hum baad me baat karenge sab se pahle main apni takat jo jaan le ta hu.uske baad kya karna hai.kuchh der baad baat kare ge.jab tak main dhyaan me baitha rahunga koee bhi rukavat nahi aana cha hiye .thik hai na..
Black shadow-malik main samajh gaya.ab aap nischint ho jaye.
Main -achchii baat hai.aur usi k sath main dhyaan me baith gaya aur apni sari ki sari saktiyo ko ek jagah kendrit karne laga.jaise jaise main apni shaktiyo ko ek jagah pe kendrit karne laga vaise vaise mujhe anpe andar bahot hi asim shaktiya maisus hone laga.mujhe aisa lagne laga jaise mere ander samundar ka toofaan uthal puthal macha raha ho.abhi ye sab kuchh ho hi raha tha.tabhi mujhe ek aavaaj suni di.putra putra…g ha dosto aap logo ko pata chal hi gaya ho ga ye aavaaj kiski hai.
Bhagavaan-putra jo tum jindagi chune ja rahe ho us jindigi me bohot kathanaee hai.aur jo bi karna bahot soch samaj karna putra .tumhara har kadam tuhare aur tuhare pariwar aur tuhare dosto ka bhi bhavishya tai kare ga.mera asirvaad hamesa tuhare sath hai.isi k sath aavaaj band ho gaya.
Maine-jaise hi ye sab kuchh suna main uljhan me pad gaya ab mujhe kya karna cha hiye.abhi main soch hi raha tha ki pata nahi kaha se ek bijli mere upar girne vali thi.Mujhe mere taraf kuchh aane ka andesa ho to gaya tha lekin maine aapni aankhe nahi kholi q ki abhi bi mai dhayan me baith tha. agar main dhayan se ek baar uth gaya to meri aab tak ki mehnat pani me mil jaye gi.yahi soch k main utha nahi aur mujhe pata tha black shadow to hai hi vo sab kuchh sambhal lenga.
Black shadow-ne jaise hi dekha mere taraf ek bijli aa rahi hi to vo bahot teji si . turant bina samay gavae mere ass pass unsne apni infinit spell ka kavach bana diya.lekin ye kya ye iski gati to laga tar badhte ja rahi hai.black shadow maan me bolta hai mujhe malik ko is bare me batana hi hoga nahi to kahi bahot der na ho jaye.
Black shadow –mujse malik aap ko jaldi hi apni saktiyo ko jagrit karna ho ga aap aap k pass samay both kam rah gaya hai.ek bijli aap k kareeb pauchna chata hai use dekh k to yehi lag raha hai jaise koee aap ko rokna chata hai.main use jada der tak nahi rok sakta hu.itna bol kar vo sant ho gaya.
Maine-jaise hi ye sab suna .maine bhi apne maan me faisa le liya ab chahe jo bhi ho jaye mujhe apni sari saktiyo ko ek jagah kandrit karna hi hai vo bhi bahot jaldi.mere sath chahe jo ho uski mujhe koee parvah nahi hai lekin kam se kam mera parivar aur mere dost to surkchhit rahenge.aur usi k sath main ek baar phir se apne dhyaan ko apni sari shaktiyo ki taraf kandarit karne laga.kuchh hi minto k prayas k baad mujhe safalta mil hi gai aur meri sari saktiya mera dil ka roop le chuki thi .jaise ye huya mujhe apni har ek sakti ko kaise istamal karna hai uski jankari bhi mil gai.aur turant mere dil me se bhi ek black bijli kisi se takra gai.jaisi hi ye hua turant meri aankhe khul gai aur main apne shadow k roop me aa gaya aur mere hath me ek black shadow sword aa gaya.
Dosto ab dekhte hai abhi kya huva kuchh der pahale aap sab ko pata ho ga .jab main dhayan me baith tha tabhi pata nahi kaha se ek bijli mere taraf badhne laga tha lekin usko black shadow ne apni infinit maya jaal me kuchh samay k liye uljha diya tha phir bhi vo mere taraf badhte ja raha tha.lekin jab tak vo mujh tak pahochta main aapni sari saktiyo ko ek jagah kendrit kar diya tha aur un sabhi ne mere dil ki jadah leli thi.usi samay vo bijli mujhe takrane vala hi tha tabhi mere dil me se ek black bijli nikal k us se takra jati aur usko nast kar deti hai.aur nast karne k baad vaha se kahi gayab ho jati hai.nast hote samay bahot joor ka dhamaka hota hai.jisse meri aankhe khul jati hai aur main ek baar phir se apne shadow k roop me aa jata hu ye dekhne k liye ye kaisa dhamaka tha.
Maine-jaise hi asmaan me dekha to mujhe pata chal gaya abhi kya hua ho ga.lekin mere maan me ek saval aane laga akhir kaun hai jisne mujh par hamla kiya hoga .kaun mujhe rokna chata hai.tabhi mere maan me bhagvaan ki kahi hi baat yaad aa jati hai…kahi bhagvaan to nahi.main nahi aisa nahi ho sakta hai.chalo chodo jisne bi ye kaam kiya hai iska to main pata laga hi lunga.main ek baar phir se apni insane roop me aa gaya ab mujhe meri sari sakti ki aur unka kase istamal karna hai sab kuchh pata chal gaya tha.lekin ek baat aschary mujhe laga ab black shadow smile q kar raha hai.mujhe laga sayad mai puri tarah safal ho gaya hu isli liye khus ho ga.
Ab dekhte hai black shadow k chere par smile q tha.black shadow-akhir kaar mere malik ki bavishvani satya ho hi gai.ye soch k uske chere pe smile aa jati hai.ye sab kuchh kya hai kaisa bhavisvani ye to aage story me hi pata chale ga.
Chalo dosto thoda brambhand ghum lete hai.yaha se 100 thousand crore prakash varsh door kahi grahar pe bahot khusiya banane ka jasan ki tayari chal rahi thi.us jagah ko dekh to aisa lag raha hai jaise koi swarg ki jagah ho.itna khoobsura hai vo jagah ki sayad hi kisi ne kalpana kiya ho ga.jo bi dekh le uska maan kabhi bhi vaha se aane ka na kare .lekin kya karu aage to likhna pade ga.vo log bi inssan hi lag rahe the .tabhi vaha par ek kali bjili vaha se gujarti hai jisi dekh k sab apas me baat karne lagte hai.unlogo k bato se aisa lag raha tha jaise bahot badi gadbad ho gaya ho.abhi sab apas me baat kar rahe the .tabhi vaha ek sadhu aata hai maharaj samay aa gaya hai aab kisi bi samay maharani ko baccha ho sakta hai.
Maharaj-g guru dev chalye.jaise hi vo jate hai unke kano me kisi bache ki rone ki aavaaj suni deti hai.
Tabhi ek dasi maharaj maharani ko putri huvi hai.batai hai.
Maharaj-uski baat sun kar turant maharani k pass chale jate hai guru dev k sath jaise hi vo us bachi ko dekte hai usme h khoo jate hai.maharani k bulana par apne hosh me aate hai aur turant hi apni beti ho aapne sine se laga lete hai.aur us bachi k chere pe smile aa jati hai.jaise hi vo bachi smile karte hai pura mahal rosin se bhar jata hai…ye sab kuchh kya hua aur q hua in sabko filal yahi rahne dete hai.
Vahi duri tarf vahi kali rosin ek kale garah me ja k samaj jati hai us garah ko dekh to aisa lagta hai jaise yaha koi suraj hi nahi hai na ki koi jeevan hai.jaise hi kali bijli us garah me samata hai kuchh samay k liye vaha roni ho jati hai aur phir se andhera ho jata hai tabhi vaha se ek aavaaj ya kahe ki logo ki baate.g ha dosto us garah me bi log rahte hai.vo log kaun hai vo baad me dekhte hai filal unki bate hi sun lete hai.lagta hai maharaj jaldi aane vale hai…….
Jaise hi ye kali bijli gujri ek bahot hi vishal kai vakti (person) lekin ye kya uski teen(three 3 ) parchhaee hai .ye dekh k bahot ajeeb laga ek vakti k 3 parchaee vo bhi 3alag rag k.dekhte hai vo kha jaraha hai.vo bahot teje se kahi jaraha tha tabhi achanak ek gate uske samne aa jata hai.aur vo usme chala jata hai.kuchh der andar jane k baad vo ek kamre me chala jata hai jaha kali kitab rakhi hui thi jaise hi vo us kitab k pass jata hai vo kitab khud hi apne panne palatne lagti hai aur ek jagah ruk jati hai. Aur jaise hi vo us panne ko dekte hai uske chere ka rang hi badal jata hai.aur vo vaha se gayab ho jata hai.aur vo kitab bi gayab ho jati hai.usme kya likha tha aur vo kaun tha ye sab kuchh aage ki story me pata chale ga.
Ab chalte hai ek baar phir se apne hero karma k pass.
Main-apne shadow k roop ko vapas insini roop me badal leta hu aur black shadow meri parchaee ban jata hai.ab mujhe pata chal gaya hai sabko kaise thik karna hai.sabse pahle maine sabhi ki yade is maya bi jungle ki mita di.aab jo kuchh bhi unko yaad aae ga vo sirf ek sapne k roop me hai hoga.q ki main nahi chahata hu ki koee bhi abhi mere bare me na jane ki main bi ek shadow ban gaya hu.maine jaise hi ek chutki bajaya dono dragon mere gate davara vapas chale gaye.maine husna meri dono jaan aur gudiya hum sab sidha apni ship me pahoch gaya .maine teeno ko unke kamre me apni magic se sula diya aur husna ko apne kande pe sula diya.aur sabhi shai saniko k dimak se jungle me rukne vali baat nikal diya .aur uski k sath maya bi jungle bi mujhme sama gaya aur vaha ab ek sadharan jungle aa gaya.
Itna sab khuch karne k baad maine …apni ship ki gati bi badha diya tehram k taraf…….
to be continued….
Recap-
Pichhale update me dosto ab tak aap logo ne padha hoga kise karma ne apne parivar aur dosto ko vapas pane k liye apna sab kuchh kurbaan kar deta hai.aur Ab vo baan gaya hai ek shadow.
Ab aage…
Main-black shadow se… ab to main bhi tumhari tarah hi shadow baan gaya hu.sirf shadow hi nahi balki is maya bi jungle ka raja bhi hu.ab aur kuchh bhi karna baki hai ya sab kuchh ho gaya ye sab kuchh main thode gusse me bol raha tha.aur bolta bhi q nahi akhir jo kuchh bhi huva mersa sath vo sab kuchh black shadow ne chhal se jo kiya tha.Itna bol k main thodi der k liye shant ho jata hu.aur apne maan me sochta hu chalo jo ho gya so ho gaya ab honi ko kaun taal sakta hai .aur to aur ab gussa karne ka bhi kya fayda jo hona tha ho chuka hai.aur kahi na kahi mere shadow bane me sirf balck shadow ka hi hath nahi hai isme utna hi meri galti bhi hai aur ho sakta hai shayaad hai meri mangil ho meri zindagi ka.itna sochne kbaad main ek gahari saas le k sab kuch bhavish pe chhod deta hu.
Aur ek baar phir se black shadow se----bolna shuru kar deta hu…mere pass jada samay nahi hai.mujhe tehram bhi jana hai.samaj gaye na.
Black shadow-malik bus ek akhri kaam aur karna hai aap ko apni shaktiyo ko jaana hai aur kuchh jaruri bate aur rahi baat tehram jane ki to vaha to main aap ko ya phir aap khud hi palak jhapkte hi pahoch sakte hai.
Main-thik hai thik hai..batao mujhe apni sari shaktiyo ko jaane k liye kya karna pade ga.aur kaun si baate mujhe jaana jaruri hai.
Black shadow-apni shaktiyo jaane k liye aap ko sabse pahle dhayan me baithna hoga aur apni sari ki sari saktiyo ko ek jagah kendrit karna ho ga.jaise hi aap ki sari shaktiya ek jagah kendrit ho jayengi vo sab k sab aap k dil ki jagah le lenegi.ye kahu ki aap ki sari saktiya aap ka dil ban jayengi.jaise hi ye hoga aap ko har kisi ki shaktiya aap ko mil gaye ga hamesa hamesa k liya.aur sath hi meri sari shaktiya bhi aap ko mil jaye ga aur unsabhi ki saktiya bhi jin ki shaktiya sand watch me thi aur kuchh to hamesa hamesa k liya aap me kaid ho jaengee jo sand watch me kaid the. Aur un sabhi ki shaktiyo ka istamal kise karna hai ye bhi aap ko pata chal jaye ga.mere malik.
Main-black shadow ki baat sun kar thoda sa chauk jata hu.q ki mere teen (3) powers bhi hamesa hamesa k liya kaid ho jaengee mujh me.monark ,simba aur crimson.
Main-black shadow se …kya main inko kabhi apne andar se nahi nikal paunga bahar .kya ye sab k sab hamesa mujhe hi kaid rahenge.
Black shadow-malik abhi to main kuchh nahi kah sakta hu.ye to aap pe hai agar aap 2 aur shadow ke malik ban gaye to sayd se aap inko apne kaid se aazaad kar paye…lekin.
Main-lekin kya?
Black shadow-malik agar aap bina 3 shadow k malik banane se pahale teeno ko aazaad kiya ya karne ki kosis bhi ki to aap phir kabhi insani roop nahi le paenge.main kya bolna chahata hu aap samajh gaye honge.
Main-aisa q ?(apne maan me yr ye to shock pe shock dete ja raha hai )
Black shadow-q ki malik aap k pass koi bhi dil nahi hai abhi tak.ye teeno aur aap ki aur meri sari saktiya aap k dil ki jagah le hai.taki aap ko kam se kam 20hrs (20 jante tak) tak daily insani roop me rah sake.aur 4hrs aap ko shadow ban k rahna pade ga.jab tak aap ko blood red heart nahi mil jata hai.tab tak aur aap apna 4jante (4hrs) ka shadow roop pure din me kabhi bhi istamaal kar sakte hai.
Main-ye to bahot badi samasya hai.agar galti se bhi kisi ne mera shadow roop dekh liya to pata nahi kya hoga (ye sab kuchh mai apne maan me soch raha tha).mujhe jaldi hi blood red heart pana ho ga.
Maine-black shadow se kaha kaise mujhe blood red heart mile ga aur kaha mile ga.
Black shadow –malik us k bare me to aap ko knowledge book se hi pata chala ga aap ko.aur vo book kha hai uska pata to aap ko hi lagana pade ga.
Main-thik hai black shadow se. is k bare me ab hum baad me baat karenge sab se pahle main apni takat jo jaan le ta hu.uske baad kya karna hai.kuchh der baad baat kare ge.jab tak main dhyaan me baitha rahunga koee bhi rukavat nahi aana cha hiye .thik hai na..
Black shadow-malik main samajh gaya.ab aap nischint ho jaye.
Main -achchii baat hai.aur usi k sath main dhyaan me baith gaya aur apni sari ki sari saktiyo ko ek jagah kendrit karne laga.jaise jaise main apni shaktiyo ko ek jagah pe kendrit karne laga vaise vaise mujhe anpe andar bahot hi asim shaktiya maisus hone laga.mujhe aisa lagne laga jaise mere ander samundar ka toofaan uthal puthal macha raha ho.abhi ye sab kuchh ho hi raha tha.tabhi mujhe ek aavaaj suni di.putra putra…g ha dosto aap logo ko pata chal hi gaya ho ga ye aavaaj kiski hai.
Bhagavaan-putra jo tum jindagi chune ja rahe ho us jindigi me bohot kathanaee hai.aur jo bi karna bahot soch samaj karna putra .tumhara har kadam tuhare aur tuhare pariwar aur tuhare dosto ka bhi bhavishya tai kare ga.mera asirvaad hamesa tuhare sath hai.isi k sath aavaaj band ho gaya.
Maine-jaise hi ye sab kuchh suna main uljhan me pad gaya ab mujhe kya karna cha hiye.abhi main soch hi raha tha ki pata nahi kaha se ek bijli mere upar girne vali thi.Mujhe mere taraf kuchh aane ka andesa ho to gaya tha lekin maine aapni aankhe nahi kholi q ki abhi bi mai dhayan me baith tha. agar main dhayan se ek baar uth gaya to meri aab tak ki mehnat pani me mil jaye gi.yahi soch k main utha nahi aur mujhe pata tha black shadow to hai hi vo sab kuchh sambhal lenga.
Black shadow-ne jaise hi dekha mere taraf ek bijli aa rahi hi to vo bahot teji si . turant bina samay gavae mere ass pass unsne apni infinit spell ka kavach bana diya.lekin ye kya ye iski gati to laga tar badhte ja rahi hai.black shadow maan me bolta hai mujhe malik ko is bare me batana hi hoga nahi to kahi bahot der na ho jaye.
Black shadow –mujse malik aap ko jaldi hi apni saktiyo ko jagrit karna ho ga aap aap k pass samay both kam rah gaya hai.ek bijli aap k kareeb pauchna chata hai use dekh k to yehi lag raha hai jaise koee aap ko rokna chata hai.main use jada der tak nahi rok sakta hu.itna bol kar vo sant ho gaya.
Maine-jaise hi ye sab suna .maine bhi apne maan me faisa le liya ab chahe jo bhi ho jaye mujhe apni sari saktiyo ko ek jagah kandrit karna hi hai vo bhi bahot jaldi.mere sath chahe jo ho uski mujhe koee parvah nahi hai lekin kam se kam mera parivar aur mere dost to surkchhit rahenge.aur usi k sath main ek baar phir se apne dhyaan ko apni sari shaktiyo ki taraf kandarit karne laga.kuchh hi minto k prayas k baad mujhe safalta mil hi gai aur meri sari saktiya mera dil ka roop le chuki thi .jaise ye huya mujhe apni har ek sakti ko kaise istamal karna hai uski jankari bhi mil gai.aur turant mere dil me se bhi ek black bijli kisi se takra gai.jaisi hi ye hua turant meri aankhe khul gai aur main apne shadow k roop me aa gaya aur mere hath me ek black shadow sword aa gaya.
Dosto ab dekhte hai abhi kya huva kuchh der pahale aap sab ko pata ho ga .jab main dhayan me baith tha tabhi pata nahi kaha se ek bijli mere taraf badhne laga tha lekin usko black shadow ne apni infinit maya jaal me kuchh samay k liye uljha diya tha phir bhi vo mere taraf badhte ja raha tha.lekin jab tak vo mujh tak pahochta main aapni sari saktiyo ko ek jagah kendrit kar diya tha aur un sabhi ne mere dil ki jadah leli thi.usi samay vo bijli mujhe takrane vala hi tha tabhi mere dil me se ek black bijli nikal k us se takra jati aur usko nast kar deti hai.aur nast karne k baad vaha se kahi gayab ho jati hai.nast hote samay bahot joor ka dhamaka hota hai.jisse meri aankhe khul jati hai aur main ek baar phir se apne shadow k roop me aa jata hu ye dekhne k liye ye kaisa dhamaka tha.
Maine-jaise hi asmaan me dekha to mujhe pata chal gaya abhi kya hua ho ga.lekin mere maan me ek saval aane laga akhir kaun hai jisne mujh par hamla kiya hoga .kaun mujhe rokna chata hai.tabhi mere maan me bhagvaan ki kahi hi baat yaad aa jati hai…kahi bhagvaan to nahi.main nahi aisa nahi ho sakta hai.chalo chodo jisne bi ye kaam kiya hai iska to main pata laga hi lunga.main ek baar phir se apni insane roop me aa gaya ab mujhe meri sari sakti ki aur unka kase istamal karna hai sab kuchh pata chal gaya tha.lekin ek baat aschary mujhe laga ab black shadow smile q kar raha hai.mujhe laga sayad mai puri tarah safal ho gaya hu isli liye khus ho ga.
Ab dekhte hai black shadow k chere par smile q tha.black shadow-akhir kaar mere malik ki bavishvani satya ho hi gai.ye soch k uske chere pe smile aa jati hai.ye sab kuchh kya hai kaisa bhavisvani ye to aage story me hi pata chale ga.
Chalo dosto thoda brambhand ghum lete hai.yaha se 100 thousand crore prakash varsh door kahi grahar pe bahot khusiya banane ka jasan ki tayari chal rahi thi.us jagah ko dekh to aisa lag raha hai jaise koi swarg ki jagah ho.itna khoobsura hai vo jagah ki sayad hi kisi ne kalpana kiya ho ga.jo bi dekh le uska maan kabhi bhi vaha se aane ka na kare .lekin kya karu aage to likhna pade ga.vo log bi inssan hi lag rahe the .tabhi vaha par ek kali bjili vaha se gujarti hai jisi dekh k sab apas me baat karne lagte hai.unlogo k bato se aisa lag raha tha jaise bahot badi gadbad ho gaya ho.abhi sab apas me baat kar rahe the .tabhi vaha ek sadhu aata hai maharaj samay aa gaya hai aab kisi bi samay maharani ko baccha ho sakta hai.
Maharaj-g guru dev chalye.jaise hi vo jate hai unke kano me kisi bache ki rone ki aavaaj suni deti hai.
Tabhi ek dasi maharaj maharani ko putri huvi hai.batai hai.
Maharaj-uski baat sun kar turant maharani k pass chale jate hai guru dev k sath jaise hi vo us bachi ko dekte hai usme h khoo jate hai.maharani k bulana par apne hosh me aate hai aur turant hi apni beti ho aapne sine se laga lete hai.aur us bachi k chere pe smile aa jati hai.jaise hi vo bachi smile karte hai pura mahal rosin se bhar jata hai…ye sab kuchh kya hua aur q hua in sabko filal yahi rahne dete hai.
Vahi duri tarf vahi kali rosin ek kale garah me ja k samaj jati hai us garah ko dekh to aisa lagta hai jaise yaha koi suraj hi nahi hai na ki koi jeevan hai.jaise hi kali bijli us garah me samata hai kuchh samay k liye vaha roni ho jati hai aur phir se andhera ho jata hai tabhi vaha se ek aavaaj ya kahe ki logo ki baate.g ha dosto us garah me bi log rahte hai.vo log kaun hai vo baad me dekhte hai filal unki bate hi sun lete hai.lagta hai maharaj jaldi aane vale hai…….
Jaise hi ye kali bijli gujri ek bahot hi vishal kai vakti (person) lekin ye kya uski teen(three 3 ) parchhaee hai .ye dekh k bahot ajeeb laga ek vakti k 3 parchaee vo bhi 3alag rag k.dekhte hai vo kha jaraha hai.vo bahot teje se kahi jaraha tha tabhi achanak ek gate uske samne aa jata hai.aur vo usme chala jata hai.kuchh der andar jane k baad vo ek kamre me chala jata hai jaha kali kitab rakhi hui thi jaise hi vo us kitab k pass jata hai vo kitab khud hi apne panne palatne lagti hai aur ek jagah ruk jati hai. Aur jaise hi vo us panne ko dekte hai uske chere ka rang hi badal jata hai.aur vo vaha se gayab ho jata hai.aur vo kitab bi gayab ho jati hai.usme kya likha tha aur vo kaun tha ye sab kuchh aage ki story me pata chale ga.
Ab chalte hai ek baar phir se apne hero karma k pass.
Main-apne shadow k roop ko vapas insini roop me badal leta hu aur black shadow meri parchaee ban jata hai.ab mujhe pata chal gaya hai sabko kaise thik karna hai.sabse pahle maine sabhi ki yade is maya bi jungle ki mita di.aab jo kuchh bhi unko yaad aae ga vo sirf ek sapne k roop me hai hoga.q ki main nahi chahata hu ki koee bhi abhi mere bare me na jane ki main bi ek shadow ban gaya hu.maine jaise hi ek chutki bajaya dono dragon mere gate davara vapas chale gaye.maine husna meri dono jaan aur gudiya hum sab sidha apni ship me pahoch gaya .maine teeno ko unke kamre me apni magic se sula diya aur husna ko apne kande pe sula diya.aur sabhi shai saniko k dimak se jungle me rukne vali baat nikal diya .aur uski k sath maya bi jungle bi mujhme sama gaya aur vaha ab ek sadharan jungle aa gaya.
Itna sab khuch karne k baad maine …apni ship ki gati bi badha diya tehram k taraf…….
to be continued….
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