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Fantasy Adventuresss of Karma (WORLD BEYOND THE WORLD) Part 2*

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Lo g bhai yaha bhi aa gaya tamraj kilvichh...... Sala ye kahan kahan pahunch jata hai.... Aisi koun si jagah hoga jaha sab chiz kali ho sakti hai.... Jwalamukhi me kya..... Or mujhe to lagta hai dusra book ka hissa uss aadmi ke paas hai... Jab karma shadow bna tha to koi ek book leke gayab hua tha n kisi planet par.... Wahi hoga.... Rakshak yaa phir tamraj kilvich..... Or kya btaya hai ye to pata n chali rupwati ka rajjj... Sala mantree to marega aaj.... Waiting for the next part
thank you so much tiwari baba bhai.aise hi sath bane rahana aur support karte rahana bhai.next update thodi der me.bhai jaldi hi aap q ka answer mere kuchh update me pata chal jaye ga.ha lekin vo aadmi nahi hai jo book le k gayab ho gya tha.
 
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thank you so much jmz bhai.aise hi sath bane rahana aur support karte rahana bhai.next update thodi der me.keep supporting bro.
 

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UPDATE-35

Recap-

Pichhale update me dosto aap logo ne padha hoga kaise seona se karma ko uske dusare bhag k bare me thodi bahot jaankari milti aur sathi hi usko rupvati k black hunter k bare me bhi pata chalta.aur sathi hi usko husna aur black shadow se rupvati ki jankari milti aur mahamantree k bare me aisa kuchh pata chlata hi jisase karma ka khoon khul jata hai.

Ab aage…

Main-jaise hi apne kamre se gayab huva sidhe main jungle me pahoch gaya.jungle me pahuchte hi maine apne ass pass dekh to vaha par kafi matra me jameen par khoon sukha pada huva tha jisko dekh k lag raha tha jaise bahot se logo ko ek sath aur bahot hi buri tarh se mara gaya hoga.q ki pura jameen hi sukhe khoon se laal huva pada tha lekin ek ajeeb baat thi kisi ka sarir nahi dikh raha tha na hi kisi janvaar ka mrt (dead) shareer aur na hi kisi insaan ka ye sab kuchh dekh k abhi main soch hi raha tha tabhi mere maan me ek aavaaj aati hai vahi jaani pahachaanee aavaaj.

Aavaaj-kya soch raha hai bhai.yahi na maine tujhe is jungle me q liya aur ye itna sara khoon kiska hai yahi na.

Main-ha bilkul sach.

Aavaaj-kya bhai itni jaldi bhool gaya is jagah ko.kal raat ko hi yaha aaye the shikaar karne 5-7 sainiko ka sikaar isi jungle me kiya tha .ab to yaad aa gaya hoga sab kuchh na ya detail me ek baar sab kuchh dikhau.

Main-nahi uski koee jarurat nahi hai bhai sab kuchh bahot hi achchhe se yaad aa gaya.(dosto aap sab ko bhi ab yaad aa gaya ho ga jab karma pahali baar shadow bana tha to isi jungle me sainiko ka shikaar kiya tha).lekin hum is jungle me phir se q aa ye hai. hum to mahaamantree ko katma karne ja rahe the na.aur ek baat vo sari sainiko ka mrt sarir kaha gaya .

Aavaaj-bhai mahaamantree to aaj marne hi vala hai main to tumhe isliye yaha laya hu taki usko kitni darnak maut dena hai us bare me thoda charcha karle isliye maine tumhe yaha is jungle me le aaya hu.aur rahi baat sainiko k mrt sarir ka mujhe nhi pata aur kahi bhi gaya ho apne ko kya lena dena hai bhai.tumne kuchh socha hai mahaamantree ko kaise tadpa k marna hai .

Main-abhi to nahi socha hai lekin usko main aisa maut dunga ki pura teharma rajya yaad rakhega.chalo sabse pahle us jagah ko bhi dekh lete hai jiske bare me black shadow aur husna ne bataya tha.hame bhi to pata chale sach me itna pahochi huvi hai rupvati ki nahi.main ek baar phir se gayab ho gaya aur sidha pahoch gaya ek kabristaan me.

Aavaaj-kabristaan me kiska sikaar karne aaye hai bhai.jaldi bata abhi tak mujhe kuchh khane ko bhi nahi mila hai.agar maine tujko bola nahi hota to ab tak ye pura kabristaan lahaaso (dead body) se bara hota.itna bol kar vo mere maan me hasne lagta hai.

Main-haa has le bhai has le vaise bhi aaj tera aakhri din hai .kal se tu hamesa hamesa k liye shant hi ho jaye ga.vaise bhi main tera jaisa nahi hu sabko marte phiru.aur main yaha kuchh pata lagane aaya hu.ab tum shant raho mujhe mera kaam karne do.

Aavaaj-kar le bhai apni aakhri ischchha puri phir pata nahi vo sakta hai tu hi kal raat se hamesa k liye shant ho jaye.itna bolte hi vo shant ho jata hai.

Main-mere maan ki aavaaj shant hote hi main kabristaan k bicho bich ek kabar k pass ja k khada ho jaya.apne ass pass dekhne laga asmaan me chand ki rosin bahot hi kaam thi aisa lag raha tha jaise aaj hi amavas ho.pure vatavaran me ek ghanghor shantata chhaya tha.main bohot hi anand maisus kar raha tha aur thodi baichaini bhi maisus kar raha tha.ye sab kuchh mere sath aisa q ho raha tha mujhe kuchh pata nahi chal raha tha.tabhi phir se

Aavaaj-bahot hi sukun mil raha hai na bhai.lagta hai hum to swarg me aa gaye hai na.

Main-ye kaisi baat kar raha hum kabristaan me hai na ki kisi swarg me.

Aavaaj-jo bhi ho .mujhe pata hai aisa q lag raha hai.hum jaiso k liye aisi hi jagah kisi se swarg se kaam thodi hi nahi hai.tumko bhi kuchh din me aadat ho jaye ga.

Main-aisa kuchh bhi nahi hone vala hai.mana ki main badal gaya lekin iska matlab ye nahi ki meri harkte aur main bhi haivano ki tarah ho jahaunga.main kabhi bhi aisa nahi hone dunga.main bol to raha tha lekin kahi na kahi mujhe ye sab kuchh achchha lag raha tha.apne soch se bahar aate huve jaldi se mujhe apna kaam pura kar k yaha se nikalna padega pata nahi mujhe kya hote ja raha hai.

Aavaaj-haa haa haa haste huve shant ho jata hai.

Main-ha to black shadow aur husna ne kya bata ya tha haa yaad aaya.

(FLASH BACK- dosto aap sab ko yaad hi hoga maine husna aur black shadow ko rupvati ko k bare me aur usne kaha se ye itni khatarnak saktiya praapt kiya uske bare me pata lagane ko bheja tha.jab vo vapas aaye to dono me mujhe bataya rupvati aksar jungle k bagal vale kabristaan me aati hai.kabristaan k bicho bich ek kabar hai jiske bagal me ek jahrela kala gulaab k phool ka ped hai.usko agar galti se kisi sadharan inssan ne chu li to turant mar jaye ga.us kale gulaab k phool ko tood kar us kabar pe rakhna hai.usk baad hame pata nahi chala kya hai lekin vaha bahot hi adhik matra me kali sakti hai.black shadow maine undar jane ki kosis kiya lein kuchh to hai jisne undar nahi jane diya .ulta kabristaan se bahar hi phek diya. Mujhko.Flash back end )

Jaise hi mujhe yaad aaya maine us kabristaan k pass us kale gulaab k phool ko dhundne laga turant mujhe mill gaya.maine us phool ko tod kar us kabar par rakh diya .vo kabar dhire dhire paura kala ho gaya.jaise hi vo puri tarah kala huva usne me ek kali khapdi nikal k bahar agai.jisko agar kisi insaan ne dekh liya to dekte hi mar jata itna bhayanak aur bada dikh raha tha.

Kali khapdi-kaha jana hai tumko.

Main-mujhe andar jana hai.

Kali khopdi-thik hai jaao.aur apna bada se munh khool deta hai.

Main-apne maan me lagta hai is k munh me se jana hai.aur main us k munh me chala jata hu aur dekte hi dekte main ek gate ka pass pahoch jata hu.jaha do shadow mere jaise hi dikh rahe the vo dono us gate k pass kahade the.jaise hi main gate pass paucha dono ne mujhe rok diya.

Dono shadow-kaun ho tum yaha aaye kaise aur kaha ja rahe ho tum jaldi bato nahi to yaha hi tumko kaid kardenge.

Main-bhiyo itna gussa q ho rahe ho mujhe to mahaarani rupvati ne hi yaha ki jankari lene k liye bheja hai.main bhi tumhari tarah unka neya sevak hu.unhi k kahne par main yahi ki jankari lene chala aaya aur ye dekhne ki tum dono sahi se paharedari kar rahe ho ki nahi .hato mere raste se mere pass tumhare in bato ka samay nahi hai.vapas bhi mujhe jaldi jana hai .itna bol kar main us gate k andar jane lagta hu.

Dono shadow-meri baat sun kar dono mujhe andar jane ka rasta de dete hai.

Main-jaise hi gate ka andar ka nazara dekta hu to mere aankhe chuk jati hai.chukti bhi q nahi.andar bahot hi vishal gupha tha aur vo puri ki puri jagah kankalo se bhari padi thi.dekh k aisa hi lag raha tha jaise us rupvati ne bahot salo se aur bahot se logi ki bali chadaee hai.un kankalo ki itna jada sankhaya hai ki ginana lagbhag namumkin sa lag raha tha.main apne maan me kitni badi haivaan hai.sirf naam ki rupvati hai.isase thoda savdhan rahna pade ga mujhe.

Aavaaj –bhai kya nazara hai.ye to mujhse bhi 100 kadam aage hai.jaldi hi yaha se nikalna cha hiye.mujhe kuchh thik nahi laga raha hai.


Main-tu dar mat mai hu na .itna bol kar mai ghupha me thoda aage bhadne laga q ki mujhe jaanana tha akhir yaha par hai kya aur rupvati yaha karne aati kya hai.jarur mujhe kuchh yaha se pata chale ga aakhir ek baat to mujhe pata chal gaya ki uske ye sari saktiya saitano k raajao ko masum logo k bili se hi prapt kiya hai.ab mujhe sirph ye pata karna hai kya vo sirf ek hi haivaan ko bali chadati hai ya aur bhi hai.iska uttar bhi mujhe jaldi mil gaya.ab mere samne teen haivaan ki murti thi aur uske piche teen gate bhi the.1st gate k aage ek boy (bachche) ki murti thi .2nd gate k pass ek infinity ki murti thi.3rd gate k aage ek nakab poss ki murti thi. In murtiyo ko dekh k yehi lag raha tha.ki mere shak bilkul sahi nikla vo rupvati ne kaee haivaano se bahot badi takate hasil kiya hai.main socho chalo dekhu to sahi in gate k parr kya hai jaise hi maine pahle boy ki murti ka pass gaya ki mere pure jisms me aag lag gaya.dhire dhire us ki tapmaan itni badhne lagi ki main kya karu kuchh samaj me nahi aa raha tha aur mujhe us aag se bahot takleef honi lagai.main turant vaha se gayab ho kar sidha vahi jungle me pahoch gaya jaha main kuchh der pahale tha.jaise hi main us jungle me pahoch kuchh hi der me mere shareer ki aag aur dard dono hi gayab ho gaya.tabhi


Aavaaj-tujko marne ka bhot sauk hai kya ek din aur ruk ja bus .mujhe itna jaldi nahi marna hai jab maine bolo kuchh to gadbad hai. phir bhi nahi suna ab dekh liya na kya halat hogai hamari.pata nahi kuchh der aur rahta to pata nahi kya ho jata .

Main-shant ho ja yr .ab to sab thik hai na bhai sahi bol raha hai kuchh der aur rahte to…chhod bhai chal apne shikaar pe chate hai.us rupvati ko to main ab apne tarike se samabhalunga aur uski sari jaan kari main khud hi pata lagaunga.vo sab kuchh kud hi bataye gi dekh lena.itna bol kar main mahaamantri k mahal me uppar pahoch gaya. Jaha boath hi kadak suraksha tha bahot se ghoor savar teharma k chaakar bhi lagate huve nazar aa rahe the.tabhi ek hawa se bhi teej bahot raphtaar se ghoda vaha se gujraa.uski raftaar bahot jada thi.na chahte huve bhi meri nazar us par chali gai.jaise hi mere nazar us ghor savaar pe gai.to mujhe usko dekh kar seona k dusre bhaag ko pane k raaz bhi pata chal gaya.
to be continued….
 

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Sala itna khatarnak 0ata nhi kya hoyega apne karma babu ka... Marega yaa bachega.... Sala hell fire hi lag gai body me... Otna kharanak hai wo rupvati... Chudail hogi sali... Dekhte hai koun saa raaz hai kali duniya ka... Waiting bha. .... Mast update
 
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Dear Sir,
Lajavb update hai, agar ho sake, aur time thoda nikal ke bade update de sake to reader jyada maja le sakenge.
fir se thank you for your awesome wrighting
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Kya jabardast update hai bhai maza he as gaya
Wakai but accha update hai
Rupvati bahar se our name se he rupvati hai
Ander se puri chandal nikli ye to abe mahamaantri be kuch shitano me jaisa he niklega mujhe to yahi lag rha hai mi ye bhut he kamina hai
 
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Sala itna khatarnak 0ata nhi kya hoyega apne karma babu ka... Marega yaa bachega.... Sala hell fire hi lag gai body me... Otna kharanak hai wo rupvati... Chudail hogi sali... Dekhte hai koun saa raaz hai kali duniya ka... Waiting bha. .... Mast update
thank you so much bhai.keep supporting....next update thodi der me.sare razz khule ga bhai.bus sath bane rahana .
 
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Dear Sir,
Lajavb update hai, agar ho sake, aur time thoda nikal ke bade update de sake to reader jyada maja le sakenge.
fir se thank you for your awesome wrighting
JMZ
thank you so much bhai.keep supporting.next update thodi der me.jaldi hi bade update dene ki kosis karunga bhai.aur koee sujhav ho to bhai jarur batana.
 

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Kya jabardast update hai bhai maza he as gaya
Wakai but accha update hai
Rupvati bahar se our name se he rupvati hai
Ander se puri chandal nikli ye to abe mahamaantri be kuch shitano me jaisa he niklega mujhe to yahi lag rha hai mi ye bhut he kamina hai
thank you so much bhai.keep supporting.aise hi sath bane rahana aur support karte rahana bhai.next update thodi der me.
 
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