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bhai ye to aap ko next update me pata hi chal jaye ga jo aaj raat 12pm ko main dene vala hu.and thanx bro keep supporting
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aisa kuch nahi bhi vo kya hai na brother yaha par is story ko jada support nahi mil raha hai na .is liye maine ne gap de diya .aaj raat 12pm new update dene vala hu.keep supporting
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bhai aaj raat 12 pm new update aaye ga aur main ab kosis karunga daily 1-2 update du .keep supporting bro
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dosto aaj raat 12 baje new update post karunga.agar aap log aise hi support karenge to main daily 1-2 update dunga apni is story par .depend aap sabhi k response pe kare ga.and thank you everyone once again mujh ko support karne k liye and new update main raat me post kar dunga tab tak mere sare update ka revision karlo dost.aur koee sugession ho jarur share karna frends
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UPDATE -5
Adventure of Karma (World beyond the world) part 2 me ek bar aap sabhi ka phir se swagat hai.
Recap-
Update no.4 me dosto aap logo ne padha ki kaise Karma ka ship Maya bi pedo (Tree) ne rok Diya tha aur Jungle ki RUH ne apne jungle ko bachane k liye karma se madat mang rahi thi.Jungle ki RUH ki baat sun kar karma ko uske dard ka pata chalta hai ki vo sach me kitna jada dard me hai isiliye karma uski madat k liye tayar ho jata hai.aur nikal jata hai ek naye safar par.
Ab aage
Mere- is naye (new) safar (journey) me mujhko Rasta Bate hai jungle k Maya bi ped (tree).is Jungle k adventure me aage badne se pahle Main aap sabhi logo ko apni powers k bare me bata deta hu.
Is Samay (Time) mere pass divya Talvaar hai ya hum usko dragon sword bhi kah sakte hai jisme White Spirit King Simba rahta hai.Crimson power of white Light aur Black Spirit King Monark(Black Snake) aur Husna Jin k bi Powers is samay mere pass hai. Ek tarah se kaha Jaye to main is samay ass pass k sabhi desho k mage (magicians) me sabse jada powerful hu.Is samay mere pass itna Power hai k kuch hi pal me main kisi bi desh khatama akele hi kar sakta hu.ye to baat meri ho gai dosto ek baar phir se chale apne jumgle adventure par.
Main-dosto aap sabhi pata hi hai ki is jungle adventure me akela hi safar kar raha hu aur mujhe rasta batane k liye maya bi ped hai.main maya bi pedo k bataye huve raste pe dhire dhire aage badhne laga kuchh der to sab kuch thik tha lekin main jaise jaise jungle k aur andar jane laga mere maan asant hone laga mujhe aisa lagne laga ki jaise koee mujhpar nazar rakhe huve hai.
Maine – ruk kar ass pass dekh lekin mujhe kuch bi nahi dekha isliye maine apne maan ka brahm samjh kar ek baar phir se maya bi pedo k bataye huve raste par chale laga.lekin phir se mujhe vahi aisas huva koee to hai jo lagtaar mujpe nazar rakhe huve hai.isliye maine husna aur monark ko jungle me ass pass dekhne k liye bhej diya.maine un dono ko bola chaye vo jo koee bi ho jo mujh par chip kar nazar rakh raha hai usko mere samne lana vo bi zinda.mere itna bolte hi dono vaha se chale gaye.ab sirf main akela rah gaya.
Main-jaise hi aage badne vala tha tabhi Husna aur monark dono mere samne aa jate.dono ko dekhte hi mujhe pata chal jata hai unko kuch nahi pata chala hai.phir bi maine dono se puchhana thik samja.bato dum dono ko kuch pata chala kaun mujh par nazar rakh raha tha.
Husna-malik maine aur monark ne kafi dur tak jungle k andar khojne ki kosis kiya lelin hame koee bi nahi mila aur to aur maine apni magic se bhi khojne ki kosis kiya phir bi kisi ka kuch bi nahi pata chala.
Monark-ha malik mujhe to kisi buri sakti ka abhas tak nahi huva malik.aur to aur mujhe har jagah sirf ped hi ped dikh rahe the kisi bi janvar ka pata hi nahi chala.
Main-ha lagta hai tum dono thik kah rahe ho.mujhe lagta hai ki sayad ye maya bi ped hi mujh dekh rahe hai is liye mujhe lag raha hai jaise koee nazar rakh raha hai.lagta hai kuch jada hi soch raha hu.achcha tum dono ek kaam karo un maya bi jeevo ka pata lagao is samy vo is jungle me kaha hai.mere kahte hai dono phir se chale jate hai.tabhi
Crimson-mere maan me malik.mujhe kisi anjane kahatre ka aisaas ho raha is liye main aap ko satark kar raha hu.
Main-kaise khatra crimson.kya tum pata laga sakte ho.
Crimson-malik main pata nahi laga pa raha hu .pata nahi aaj kya ho gaya meri saktiyo ko main us anjaan kahtre tak pahoch nahi pa raha hu.
Main-koee baat nahi .itna bol kar main khud hi kisi soch me gum ho gaya. To be continued
Adventure of Karma (World beyond the world) part 2 me ek bar aap sabhi ka phir se swagat hai.
Recap-
Update no.4 me dosto aap logo ne padha ki kaise Karma ka ship Maya bi pedo (Tree) ne rok Diya tha aur Jungle ki RUH ne apne jungle ko bachane k liye karma se madat mang rahi thi.Jungle ki RUH ki baat sun kar karma ko uske dard ka pata chalta hai ki vo sach me kitna jada dard me hai isiliye karma uski madat k liye tayar ho jata hai.aur nikal jata hai ek naye safar par.
Ab aage
Mere- is naye (new) safar (journey) me mujhko Rasta Bate hai jungle k Maya bi ped (tree).is Jungle k adventure me aage badne se pahle Main aap sabhi logo ko apni powers k bare me bata deta hu.
Is Samay (Time) mere pass divya Talvaar hai ya hum usko dragon sword bhi kah sakte hai jisme White Spirit King Simba rahta hai.Crimson power of white Light aur Black Spirit King Monark(Black Snake) aur Husna Jin k bi Powers is samay mere pass hai. Ek tarah se kaha Jaye to main is samay ass pass k sabhi desho k mage (magicians) me sabse jada powerful hu.Is samay mere pass itna Power hai k kuch hi pal me main kisi bi desh khatama akele hi kar sakta hu.ye to baat meri ho gai dosto ek baar phir se chale apne jumgle adventure par.
Main-dosto aap sabhi pata hi hai ki is jungle adventure me akela hi safar kar raha hu aur mujhe rasta batane k liye maya bi ped hai.main maya bi pedo k bataye huve raste pe dhire dhire aage badhne laga kuchh der to sab kuch thik tha lekin main jaise jaise jungle k aur andar jane laga mere maan asant hone laga mujhe aisa lagne laga ki jaise koee mujhpar nazar rakhe huve hai.
Maine – ruk kar ass pass dekh lekin mujhe kuch bi nahi dekha isliye maine apne maan ka brahm samjh kar ek baar phir se maya bi pedo k bataye huve raste par chale laga.lekin phir se mujhe vahi aisas huva koee to hai jo lagtaar mujpe nazar rakhe huve hai.isliye maine husna aur monark ko jungle me ass pass dekhne k liye bhej diya.maine un dono ko bola chaye vo jo koee bi ho jo mujh par chip kar nazar rakh raha hai usko mere samne lana vo bi zinda.mere itna bolte hi dono vaha se chale gaye.ab sirf main akela rah gaya.
Main-jaise hi aage badne vala tha tabhi Husna aur monark dono mere samne aa jate.dono ko dekhte hi mujhe pata chal jata hai unko kuch nahi pata chala hai.phir bi maine dono se puchhana thik samja.bato dum dono ko kuch pata chala kaun mujh par nazar rakh raha tha.
Husna-malik maine aur monark ne kafi dur tak jungle k andar khojne ki kosis kiya lelin hame koee bi nahi mila aur to aur maine apni magic se bhi khojne ki kosis kiya phir bi kisi ka kuch bi nahi pata chala.
Monark-ha malik mujhe to kisi buri sakti ka abhas tak nahi huva malik.aur to aur mujhe har jagah sirf ped hi ped dikh rahe the kisi bi janvar ka pata hi nahi chala.
Main-ha lagta hai tum dono thik kah rahe ho.mujhe lagta hai ki sayad ye maya bi ped hi mujh dekh rahe hai is liye mujhe lag raha hai jaise koee nazar rakh raha hai.lagta hai kuch jada hi soch raha hu.achcha tum dono ek kaam karo un maya bi jeevo ka pata lagao is samy vo is jungle me kaha hai.mere kahte hai dono phir se chale jate hai.tabhi
Crimson-mere maan me malik.mujhe kisi anjane kahatre ka aisaas ho raha is liye main aap ko satark kar raha hu.
Main-kaise khatra crimson.kya tum pata laga sakte ho.
Crimson-malik main pata nahi laga pa raha hu .pata nahi aaj kya ho gaya meri saktiyo ko main us anjaan kahtre tak pahoch nahi pa raha hu.
Main-koee baat nahi .itna bol kar main khud hi kisi soch me gum ho gaya. To be continued