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Fantasy Adventuresss of Karma (WORLD BEYOND THE WORLD) Part 2*
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Ab aage……
Main-rakshak ab teri bari hai …..maine jaise hi rakshak ko kaha.tabhi
Rakshak-karma tumne chhal kiya hai.maine to tumne bohot achchha samjhta tha lekin tum bhi sabhi ki tarah nikale.
Main-abhi raksahk ki baat hi sun raha tha tabhi usne achanak se mujh par aag k gole se hamla kar diya.lekin uska aag ka gola mujhse takrate hi gayab ho gaya.ye dekh kar vo aur bhi jada gussa ho gaya.aur bolta hai
Rakshak-ye kaise ho sakta hai.kaun ho tum aur mera vaar khali kaise rah gaya.aur vahee
Main-rakshak ki baat sun kar .rakshak se… main hu tera kaal.aur abhi to tu badi adarshya ki baat kar raha tha lekin jo tune kiya iski saja tujko main jarur dunga.aur tum jaiso k sath aise hi karna cha hiye .aur vaise bhi survaat tum logo ne hi kiya tha 1 (ek) se 2 (do) log lad rahe the.takshak ka kaam tamam kar diya hai maine .ab teri bari hai rakshak.aur vaise to tujhe abhi tak ye bhi pata nahi chala na. tera vaar q kahali chala gaya.aur isi k sath maine bhi uspe bijali se hamla kar diya .aur jaise hi rakshak ko bijali lagi vo sidha aasmaan se jameen pe ja gira.aur
Rakshak-jaise hi jameen pe girta hai turant uth k khadha ho jata hai.aur mujhe dekh k bahot gusse se bolta hai.ab tum mujhe kabhi nahi khoj pao ge.ithna bol kar rakshak gyab ho jata hai.aur vahee
Maine-jaise rakshak ki baat suni vaise hi main rakshak k taraf badhne laga lekin tab tak bahot der ho chuki thi.aur main kuchh kar nahi saka.sivay intazaar k main abhi rakshak k bare me soch hi raha tha ki. ab rakshak ko kaise dhuna jaaye .tabhi mujhe kisi jani pahachani ki aavaaj sunaee deta hai aur maine jaise hi apne pichhe palat k dekhta hu.to aasmaan me ek chamkta huva singahaasan pragat ho gaya hai aur us singhaasan k piche 6 deviya khadi hai.un 6 vo dekh k main samjh gaya jarur in 6 vo ne hi mujhe bula hoga.aur vahee maine bhi apne maan me ye socha ki sab se pahale in 6vo se mil lu phir rakshak k bare se sochunga aur ho sakta hai sayad ye 6 vo deviya hi meri madat kar de aur vaise ye 6 vo deviya kah bhi rahi thi meri madat karne k liye sayad isi k liye vo mujhe bula rahi ho.yehi sab kuchh main soch kar sidha bina samay gavaye un 6 deviyo k pass chala gaya.tabhi
6 devi-mujhe dekh 6 vo ek sath swami aap ne bahot chaturaee se us takshak ka khatma kiya .jise hum sabhi ne apne adhi shakti aap ko dene ka nischay kiya hai aur hame ye bhi pata hai aap k pass bahot si shaktiya hai lekin ye divya saktiya jo aage aane vale samay me aap ki madat kare ga aur ye jab aap ko hamri divya shaktiya prapt ho jayengi tab aap pe jaldi kabhi bhi koee kaalee shakti havi nahi hoga .aur yahi devi maa ki bhi ichchha hai.aur abhi k liye swami hamara sath yahi tak hai jab sahi samay aaye ga to aap ko sab kuchh pata chal jaye ga hum kaha hai.itna bolte hi vo sabhi 6 vo us divya singahaasan me sama gaee.aur vahee
Main-bus khada ho k sirf unki bate sun raha tha.aur jaise hi vo 6 vo us singhaasan me samaee vo singhaasan aur bhi jada chamakne laga jaise .itna jada ki koee sadharan insaan ya jadugar us singhaasan k saamane khada hota to jaura apni aankhe band kar leta .aur ye dekh k main samajh gaya tha ki mujhe kya karna hai.is liye sab se pahale maine apni sabhi kaalee saktiyo ki sena aur apne saktiyo ko apne andar bula liya aur sathi maine takshak ki sari sena ko apne andar sokh liya q ki takshak ko katam karne k baad vo sabhi meri gulam ban gai thi.ab sirf shaitaan nagri k yuddh bhumi pe ichchha nagi k log aur husna rah gaee thi.aur sabhi ki nazare mujh par hi tiki huvi thi.ye janane k liye ki ab aage kya hone vala hai uska intazaar kar rahe hai.
Maine-phir ek baar sab ko dekha aur divya singahaasan k tarf badh gaya.aur jaise jaise main singahaasan k tarf badh raha tha vo mujhe apne tarf aur bhi jada akarshit kar raha tha lekin mera safar jaldi hi katam ho gaya.aur maine jaise hi singahaasan k pass pahocha vaise hi main usme kho gaya.aur main kab uspe apne aap baith gaya mujhe pata hi nahi chala .is baat ka aabhas tab mujhe huva jab mujhe bijali ki jhatke lagne lag ek k baad ek lagataar 6 jhatke har ek bijali k jhatka dusre vale se jada hota .mujhe ye to pata tha ki main mar to nahi sakta hu lekin jhatke itna jada khatarnaak aur takatvar the. ki mujhe aisa maisus ho rahe tha ki pata nahi kab meri aatamaa mera shareer chhod de .aur jab ye jatke band huve to usi k sath mere aankho k saamane khuch tasvere aane lagi jinko dekhne k baad bhi main pahchhan nahi pa raha tha.tabhi
Main-gayab jata hu aur pahoch jata hu ek varani jungle me jaha ek mandir mujhe dikhaee deta hai aur main jab us mandir k karib pahochta hu to mujhe kisi ki rone ki aavaaj sunaee deta hai.ye anubha mere pichhale anubhav se alag tha .is anbhav me mujhe apni shaktiya bhi maisus ho raha tha . aur itna hi nahi mujhe sab kuchh asli lag raha tha abhi tak to. is liye maine is bare me jada kuchh nahi soch aur sab kuchh samay pe chod diya.aur mandir k pass pahoch gaya aur apne aap ko maine gayab kar liya.aur main ne jab mandir k andar dekh to ek 3 (teen) saal ki bachchee bhagvaan k saamane hath jod k khadi thi aur ek hi baat ko baar baar doharaa rahi aur phir uske baad rone lagti thi.
Chalo dosto hum bhi sunte hi vo bachchee kya bol rahi hai.
Bachchee-(bachchee apni lad khadati aur totali aavaaj me bhagvaan se). bhagvaan mujhe ek bahi q nahi de raho ho kitna din se main aap se kah rahi hu na. koee mere sath nahi khelta hai sab ka bhai hai sirf mera hi nahi hai. Jab bhi main maa aur papa se kahti to vo bhi meri baat nahi sunte.itna bol kar vo phir se roni lagti hai.aur vahee
Main-jab vo ro rahi thi pata nahi q mujhe ajeeb sa dard mujhe uska maisus ho raha tha.tabhi vo rote rote ek dum se chup ho jati hai.tabhi
Bachchee-mujhe pata hai aap aise meri baat nahi mano ge .aaj k baad jab tak mujhe mera bhai nahi mil jata main har din isi tarah apna hath aap k isi mandir me apna hath jalate rahungi aur itna hi nahi aaj k baad kuchh bhi. main kaungi bhi nahi .itna bol kar vo apna hath jalte huve diye k upar rakhte deti hai.aur dekhte hi dekte uska hath jalne lagta.aur vahee uske munh se sirf ek sabd nikalta hai bhai aur vo phir usi madir me behos ho jati hai itna bol kar.aur vahee
Maine-jaise hi us masum ki halat dekhi to main rah nahi saka aur mandir me jane laga .tabhi mere saamane ek adrish divaar pragat ho gaya aur us divaar ne mujhe us masum bachchee k pass jane se rok diya .maine bahot kosisi kiya lekin main us adrish divaar ko paar nahi kar saka. isliye maine apne kuchh magic jaise self recovery aur self defence jaldi bhook pyass na lage vali aur kuchh magic us bachhe me transfer kar diya devi maa ka aur bahgvaan ka naam le k.lekin isme main kaam yaab hogaya.ye dekh mujhe bahot khusi huvi.mujhe pata tha ab vo theek ho jaye gi .tabhi
Main-dekhte hi dekhte ek ghupha me pahoch gaya jaha mujhe bahot se shaktiyo ka abhas ho raha tha .aur sath hi mujhe dard taklif ka aisas ho raha tha jaise jaise main ghupha k andar main ja raha tha. Suru me to mujhe koee bhi nahi dikhaee nahi de raha tha .lekin kuchh der tak aur andar jane k baad mujhe kuchh jana pahchana sa chehara dekhaee diya vahi ladki jo apne bachchhe ko le kar kahi gaya ho gaee thi.jiske bachche ko lene khud hedes aaya huva tha .lekin vo le nahi paya tha .vo ladki apne bachche ko apne god le kar rote huve ek bhude rishi ko pukaar rahi thi.
Lekin uske pukarne par bhi vo kuchh javab nahi de raha tha.tabhi
Unknown-mahaarani aap yaha vayarth me hi samay barbaad kar rahi hai .hame raajkumaar ko kisi aur k pass le jana cha hiye .ab to inka shareer kaalaa padne laga hai.agar kuchh samay me humne kuchh nahi kiya to…..tabhi
Mahaarani-sab sun kar bhi kuchh javab nahi deti.aur phir se rishi ko pukarne lagti….hai
Main-ye sab kuchh khade ho kar dekh raha tha aur samajne ki kosis kar raha tha aakhir ho kya raha rahi.aur ye log kar kya rahe hai aur aakhir is bachchhe me aisa kya khas hai .jo har koee isko pana chahata hai.koee marna to koee bachana .aur ye sab kuchh kab main sochte sochte uske itna karib chala gaya ki mujhe pata hi nahi chala .aur to aur mera hath apne aap us bachchhe k sir pe chala gaya .aur eka ek pata nahi q mera aankho se anshu apne aap girne laga .aur jab maine apna anshu poch to main apne aap ko maaya bi jungle me rakshak k saamane paya….
To be continued……
Recap-
Pichhale update mein dosto aap logo ne padha hoga kaise karma ne takshak ka khaatma kiya aur apna kiya huva vaada ichchha nagari k logo se poora kiya
Ab aage……
Main-rakshak ab teri bari hai …..maine jaise hi rakshak ko kaha.tabhi
Rakshak-karma tumne chhal kiya hai.maine to tumne bohot achchha samjhta tha lekin tum bhi sabhi ki tarah nikale.
Main-abhi raksahk ki baat hi sun raha tha tabhi usne achanak se mujh par aag k gole se hamla kar diya.lekin uska aag ka gola mujhse takrate hi gayab ho gaya.ye dekh kar vo aur bhi jada gussa ho gaya.aur bolta hai
Rakshak-ye kaise ho sakta hai.kaun ho tum aur mera vaar khali kaise rah gaya.aur vahee
Main-rakshak ki baat sun kar .rakshak se… main hu tera kaal.aur abhi to tu badi adarshya ki baat kar raha tha lekin jo tune kiya iski saja tujko main jarur dunga.aur tum jaiso k sath aise hi karna cha hiye .aur vaise bhi survaat tum logo ne hi kiya tha 1 (ek) se 2 (do) log lad rahe the.takshak ka kaam tamam kar diya hai maine .ab teri bari hai rakshak.aur vaise to tujhe abhi tak ye bhi pata nahi chala na. tera vaar q kahali chala gaya.aur isi k sath maine bhi uspe bijali se hamla kar diya .aur jaise hi rakshak ko bijali lagi vo sidha aasmaan se jameen pe ja gira.aur
Rakshak-jaise hi jameen pe girta hai turant uth k khadha ho jata hai.aur mujhe dekh k bahot gusse se bolta hai.ab tum mujhe kabhi nahi khoj pao ge.ithna bol kar rakshak gyab ho jata hai.aur vahee
Maine-jaise rakshak ki baat suni vaise hi main rakshak k taraf badhne laga lekin tab tak bahot der ho chuki thi.aur main kuchh kar nahi saka.sivay intazaar k main abhi rakshak k bare me soch hi raha tha ki. ab rakshak ko kaise dhuna jaaye .tabhi mujhe kisi jani pahachani ki aavaaj sunaee deta hai aur maine jaise hi apne pichhe palat k dekhta hu.to aasmaan me ek chamkta huva singahaasan pragat ho gaya hai aur us singhaasan k piche 6 deviya khadi hai.un 6 vo dekh k main samjh gaya jarur in 6 vo ne hi mujhe bula hoga.aur vahee maine bhi apne maan me ye socha ki sab se pahale in 6vo se mil lu phir rakshak k bare se sochunga aur ho sakta hai sayad ye 6 vo deviya hi meri madat kar de aur vaise ye 6 vo deviya kah bhi rahi thi meri madat karne k liye sayad isi k liye vo mujhe bula rahi ho.yehi sab kuchh main soch kar sidha bina samay gavaye un 6 deviyo k pass chala gaya.tabhi
6 devi-mujhe dekh 6 vo ek sath swami aap ne bahot chaturaee se us takshak ka khatma kiya .jise hum sabhi ne apne adhi shakti aap ko dene ka nischay kiya hai aur hame ye bhi pata hai aap k pass bahot si shaktiya hai lekin ye divya saktiya jo aage aane vale samay me aap ki madat kare ga aur ye jab aap ko hamri divya shaktiya prapt ho jayengi tab aap pe jaldi kabhi bhi koee kaalee shakti havi nahi hoga .aur yahi devi maa ki bhi ichchha hai.aur abhi k liye swami hamara sath yahi tak hai jab sahi samay aaye ga to aap ko sab kuchh pata chal jaye ga hum kaha hai.itna bolte hi vo sabhi 6 vo us divya singahaasan me sama gaee.aur vahee
Main-bus khada ho k sirf unki bate sun raha tha.aur jaise hi vo 6 vo us singhaasan me samaee vo singhaasan aur bhi jada chamakne laga jaise .itna jada ki koee sadharan insaan ya jadugar us singhaasan k saamane khada hota to jaura apni aankhe band kar leta .aur ye dekh k main samajh gaya tha ki mujhe kya karna hai.is liye sab se pahale maine apni sabhi kaalee saktiyo ki sena aur apne saktiyo ko apne andar bula liya aur sathi maine takshak ki sari sena ko apne andar sokh liya q ki takshak ko katam karne k baad vo sabhi meri gulam ban gai thi.ab sirf shaitaan nagri k yuddh bhumi pe ichchha nagi k log aur husna rah gaee thi.aur sabhi ki nazare mujh par hi tiki huvi thi.ye janane k liye ki ab aage kya hone vala hai uska intazaar kar rahe hai.
Maine-phir ek baar sab ko dekha aur divya singahaasan k tarf badh gaya.aur jaise jaise main singahaasan k tarf badh raha tha vo mujhe apne tarf aur bhi jada akarshit kar raha tha lekin mera safar jaldi hi katam ho gaya.aur maine jaise hi singahaasan k pass pahocha vaise hi main usme kho gaya.aur main kab uspe apne aap baith gaya mujhe pata hi nahi chala .is baat ka aabhas tab mujhe huva jab mujhe bijali ki jhatke lagne lag ek k baad ek lagataar 6 jhatke har ek bijali k jhatka dusre vale se jada hota .mujhe ye to pata tha ki main mar to nahi sakta hu lekin jhatke itna jada khatarnaak aur takatvar the. ki mujhe aisa maisus ho rahe tha ki pata nahi kab meri aatamaa mera shareer chhod de .aur jab ye jatke band huve to usi k sath mere aankho k saamane khuch tasvere aane lagi jinko dekhne k baad bhi main pahchhan nahi pa raha tha.tabhi
Main-gayab jata hu aur pahoch jata hu ek varani jungle me jaha ek mandir mujhe dikhaee deta hai aur main jab us mandir k karib pahochta hu to mujhe kisi ki rone ki aavaaj sunaee deta hai.ye anubha mere pichhale anubhav se alag tha .is anbhav me mujhe apni shaktiya bhi maisus ho raha tha . aur itna hi nahi mujhe sab kuchh asli lag raha tha abhi tak to. is liye maine is bare me jada kuchh nahi soch aur sab kuchh samay pe chod diya.aur mandir k pass pahoch gaya aur apne aap ko maine gayab kar liya.aur main ne jab mandir k andar dekh to ek 3 (teen) saal ki bachchee bhagvaan k saamane hath jod k khadi thi aur ek hi baat ko baar baar doharaa rahi aur phir uske baad rone lagti thi.
Chalo dosto hum bhi sunte hi vo bachchee kya bol rahi hai.
Bachchee-(bachchee apni lad khadati aur totali aavaaj me bhagvaan se). bhagvaan mujhe ek bahi q nahi de raho ho kitna din se main aap se kah rahi hu na. koee mere sath nahi khelta hai sab ka bhai hai sirf mera hi nahi hai. Jab bhi main maa aur papa se kahti to vo bhi meri baat nahi sunte.itna bol kar vo phir se roni lagti hai.aur vahee
Main-jab vo ro rahi thi pata nahi q mujhe ajeeb sa dard mujhe uska maisus ho raha tha.tabhi vo rote rote ek dum se chup ho jati hai.tabhi
Bachchee-mujhe pata hai aap aise meri baat nahi mano ge .aaj k baad jab tak mujhe mera bhai nahi mil jata main har din isi tarah apna hath aap k isi mandir me apna hath jalate rahungi aur itna hi nahi aaj k baad kuchh bhi. main kaungi bhi nahi .itna bol kar vo apna hath jalte huve diye k upar rakhte deti hai.aur dekhte hi dekte uska hath jalne lagta.aur vahee uske munh se sirf ek sabd nikalta hai bhai aur vo phir usi madir me behos ho jati hai itna bol kar.aur vahee
Maine-jaise hi us masum ki halat dekhi to main rah nahi saka aur mandir me jane laga .tabhi mere saamane ek adrish divaar pragat ho gaya aur us divaar ne mujhe us masum bachchee k pass jane se rok diya .maine bahot kosisi kiya lekin main us adrish divaar ko paar nahi kar saka. isliye maine apne kuchh magic jaise self recovery aur self defence jaldi bhook pyass na lage vali aur kuchh magic us bachhe me transfer kar diya devi maa ka aur bahgvaan ka naam le k.lekin isme main kaam yaab hogaya.ye dekh mujhe bahot khusi huvi.mujhe pata tha ab vo theek ho jaye gi .tabhi
Main-dekhte hi dekhte ek ghupha me pahoch gaya jaha mujhe bahot se shaktiyo ka abhas ho raha tha .aur sath hi mujhe dard taklif ka aisas ho raha tha jaise jaise main ghupha k andar main ja raha tha. Suru me to mujhe koee bhi nahi dikhaee nahi de raha tha .lekin kuchh der tak aur andar jane k baad mujhe kuchh jana pahchana sa chehara dekhaee diya vahi ladki jo apne bachchhe ko le kar kahi gaya ho gaee thi.jiske bachche ko lene khud hedes aaya huva tha .lekin vo le nahi paya tha .vo ladki apne bachche ko apne god le kar rote huve ek bhude rishi ko pukaar rahi thi.
Lekin uske pukarne par bhi vo kuchh javab nahi de raha tha.tabhi
Unknown-mahaarani aap yaha vayarth me hi samay barbaad kar rahi hai .hame raajkumaar ko kisi aur k pass le jana cha hiye .ab to inka shareer kaalaa padne laga hai.agar kuchh samay me humne kuchh nahi kiya to…..tabhi
Mahaarani-sab sun kar bhi kuchh javab nahi deti.aur phir se rishi ko pukarne lagti….hai
Main-ye sab kuchh khade ho kar dekh raha tha aur samajne ki kosis kar raha tha aakhir ho kya raha rahi.aur ye log kar kya rahe hai aur aakhir is bachchhe me aisa kya khas hai .jo har koee isko pana chahata hai.koee marna to koee bachana .aur ye sab kuchh kab main sochte sochte uske itna karib chala gaya ki mujhe pata hi nahi chala .aur to aur mera hath apne aap us bachchhe k sir pe chala gaya .aur eka ek pata nahi q mera aankho se anshu apne aap girne laga .aur jab maine apna anshu poch to main apne aap ko maaya bi jungle me rakshak k saamane paya….
To be continued……
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Recap-
Pichhale update mein dosto aap logo ne padha hoga kaise karma ne 6 sitaaron kee aadhee shakti praapt kee aur jaise hi karma ko sitaaron kee aadhee shakti praapt hota hai vaise hi karma apne aap ko do alag alag jagah pata hai aur karma jab tak un jagahon ke baare mein aur kuchh jaan paata tab tak karma kee aankh khul jati hai aur vah apane aap ko maaya bi jungle mein pata hai.
Ab aage…
Maine- jaise hi apani aankh kho lee to.main apne aap ko jungle k beecho beech pata hoon. aur mere saamane rakshak khada tha.rakshak ko dekhate hi main samajh gaya. main is samay maaya bi jungle main hoon. isliye maine bina samay gavaay rakshak k taraph badhane laga tabhi mere haathon mein 6 panne aa gae yah dekhate hi. main samajh gaya yah 6 panne kis k hain. isliye maine turant seona ko apne maan me yaad kiya.
Seona- turant mere saamane pragat ho gaee. Us k pragat hote hi mere haathon ke 6 panne seona main jaa k sama gae. lekin is beech mera poora dhyaan sirph aur sirph rakshak par tha. rakshak ko dekh kar main mahasoos kar raha tha kee vah apane aap ko kitana asurakshit mahasoos kar raha tha.
Main- ab rakshak k bilkul saamane khada tha lekin rakshak abhi bhi kisi soch mein khoya huva tha. tabhi jungle ki jameen main daraar padane lagata hai aur dekhate hi dekhate daraar aur bada hone lagata hai . yah ghatana rakshak jahaan khada tha usake paas ho raha tha aur tabhi jameen mein se seona ka adhura bhaag baahar aa jata hai.aur jaise hi seona ka dusra adhura bhaag jameen me se bahar aata hai vaise hi jameen ki darare apne aap bhar jati hai jaise hi kuchh huva hi na ho.aur seona aur uska dusra bhaag eka ek chamkne lagte hai jaise dono ek dusre se milne ka hi intazaar kar rahe hai varso se.tabhi
Rakshak-kaalee kitab (seona ka dusra bhag) ko apne hath me le leta hai.aur uske chute hi ek baar phir se kaalee kitab gayab ho jati.aur
Main-bus ye sab khuchh apne aankho se dekhta rah jata hu.aur is baar bhi main kuchh nahi kar pata hu.sirf dekhne k alava.lekin is baar mujhe rakshak pe bahot gussa aata hai aur aata bhi q nahi q ki subhah hone me kuchh hi samay bacha hai.isliye maine rakshak ko gusse me bola rakshak. tu ye mere sath jo luka chhupi ka khel khel raha hai na vo tujhe bahot bhari pade ga.abhi tu mujhe achchhe se janta nahi hai. Main kaun hu.lein ab tune mujhe majbur kar diya hai.is liye main tujhe pahale se hi chetavni de deta hu ab jo tere sath main karunga vo tu kabhi nahi bhool paye ga.
Rakshak-meri baat sun kar hasne lagta hai.aur vahee
Main-uski hasi sun kar .mujhe aur jada gussa aane lagta hai.aur uske isi harkat ne mujhe uski maut ka idea bhi de diya.isliye maine bhi rakshak ka uttar has k diya .rakshak has le vaise bhi ab tere zindagi ka aakhri kuchh pal bacha huva hai.marne se pahale hasna achchha hota hai .q ki main tujhe bahot tadpa tadpa k marne vala hu .itna jada ki ab tak maine kisi ko mara bhi nahi hoga.tabhi
Rakshak-vo to tab na jab tere pass samay hoga .mujhe pata hai suraj k nikalte tere sath kya hone vala hai.tujhe meri chinta karne ki koee jarurat nahi hai. Karma lekin ek baat hai tu bahot bahadur aur dimak daar hai. Aaj tak koee bhi kabhi yaha tak nahi pahoch paya lekin tu yaha tak paoch hai.aur ek baat zindagee me main kabhi dara nahi jitna tune mujhe daraya.lekin ab mujhe kisi baat fikar nahi hai q ki mujhe pata hai ab tu mera kuchh nahi kar sakta hai. Aur main ab tujhe katam kar dunga.itna bol kar vo jor jor se hasne lagta hai.tabhi
Main-apne maan me sala hamari banc***d kahi ka mera samay barbaad kar raha hai.ab mujhe us spell ka istamaal karna hi pade ga .tabhi maine apna sabse khas spell rakshak pe istamaal kar diya .aur mujhe pata tha iska asar jaldi hoga aur huva bhi vahee.tabhi
Rakshak-karma mana pade ga akhir kaar tune mujhe dhun hi liya maine to soch tha ki tu mujhe kabhi khoj hi nahi paye ga .lekin tu to kamal ka nikal jitna socha tha tu to us se badh k nikla.lekin iska ye matlab nahi hai ki tu apna aakhri padav bhi paar kar le ga.q ki jab tak main tujhse prashn nahi puchunga tab tak tu mera kuchh nahi kar paye ga lekin main tera samay jarur barbaad karunga aur tujh pe hamla bhi karunga .bach sakta hai to bach k dikha mujhse…
Main-rakshak lekin kya tujhe lagta hai jo to soch raha hai vahi hoga .mere itna bolte hi…
Rakshak- k munh se apne aap
1.vo kya hai jise banaane mein saalo lag jaate hai lekin tootane mein 1 minat bhee nahin lagata ?tabhi
Rakshak bahot joor se…nahi……… ye kaise tumne kiya ye nahi ho sakta hai.itna bol kar vo mujhe halma kar deta hai.aur bolta hai ki iska saza hai maut.aur rakshak mujpe apne shaktiyo se hamla kar deta hai aur .
Main -kuchh bhi nahi kar pa raha tha pata nahi kaha se uske pass itni jada shakti aa gaee thi .ki main jab tak uske kisi vaar ka uttar deta tab tak vo mujhe kisi aur shakti se hamla kar deta .aur uska har ek hamla pahale se 10 guna jada hota .aur dekhte hi dekhte meri halat had se jada battar ho gaya.aur main kuchh kar bhi nahi paa raha tha .rakshak k lagataar hamle k vaja se main uske prashn ka uttar bhi nahi soch pa raha tha.aur usne mujhe itna jada gayal kar diya tha ki main jameen pe gir gaya tha aur mera koee bhi kavach aur koee bhi shakti rakshak ka mukabla nahi kar pa raha tha.tabhi
Rakshak-dekh liya tune meri shakti ye le mere aakhri hamle se bach k dikha.uske itna bolte hi uske hath me ek chamka huva gola aa gaya.jaise hi rakshak k hath me vo gola aaya usko dekh k rakshak jor jor se hasne lagta hai aur bolta hai ye le dekh le apni maut ka samaan itna bolte vo gola mujhpe hamla kar deta hai.aur
Mujhe-jaise hi rakshak ka gola lagta hai .vo gola mujh me pahale to sama jata hai phir dekhte hi dekhte vo gola mere andar bada bada aur bada hone lagta hai.aur ek jor dar dhamaka ho jata hai aur us dhamake k sath ek cheekh bhi sunaee bhi deta hai.aur vo cheekh kisis aur ki nahi vo thi mere hi thi.aur vahee
Rakshak-jor jor se haste huve bolta hai .aakhir kaar ab mujhe karma se aur is duniya se mukti mil gaee haa haa haa itna bol kar jor jor se hasne lagta hai..tabhi…
Main-haste huve haa haaa…….rakshak mukti to tujhe jarur mile gi .lekin usase pahale apana utaar to sun le marne se pahale….uttar hai prashn ka BHAROSA…..ab to tu yahi soch raha hai na main to mar chukka tha to phir kaise main bach gaya na.to sun ye sab meri hi maya thi .mohini spell ki maaya jis se saamane vala jo chahata hai usko vo hi milta hai.tujhe tabhi samjh jaana cha hiye tha jab tu apne aap mujhe pura ka pura prashn bata diya tha.ab tu bach k dikha rakshak .mera itna bolte hi main rakshak k karib pahoch gaya aur uski hi sakti maine uspe istamaal kar diya.aur maine usne apne absorption spell bhi add kar diya .aur usi k sath rakshak ka shareer sukhne lagta hai jisase uske cheekhe pure jungle me ghoonj ne lagta hai lekin uski madat k liye koee nahi hota hai phir baki kaam to vinashak shakti ne kar diya tha uske shareer k chithade uda k .
Main-chalo iska kaam to ho gaya.
{dosto ap sab k maan me kuchh saval aaya hoga maine kab raksahk k sath ye sab kiya.dosto aap sabhi ko yaad hi hoga jab raksahk ne mujhe gussa dilaya tha tabhi maine mohini spell rakshak pe kiya tha.ye mujhe 6 sitaro ki shaktiyo se mila tha.iski khasiya ye hai ki jis par ye shakti istamaal hoti hai uski sochne aur samjhne ki shakti khatam ho jati hai aur usko bharam hi dikhta hai aur vo usi ko sach maan leta hai.aur ek baar jo is bharam me fas gaya to samjho uska kaam khatam.aur maine bhi rakshak k sath vahi kiya ek bharm paida kar k aur vo usko ko sach maan liya.aur vo mere maaya jaal me fas gaya.aur jaise maine kaha tha rakshak ko maine vaise hi bhayanak mauth diya. }
Main-rakshak k kahatam hote hi ek baar phir se kaalee kitaab pragat ho gaee aur seona me aa k sama gaee.aur phir kya
Seona –dekhte hi dekhte ek khubsurat si ladki me badal gai vo ab kuchh is tarah dikh rahi thi.
Seona –ki ladki bante hi.maalik aap ka bahot bahot sukriya apne ne mujhe pura kiya.aur jaise ki maine aap se kaha tha ye raha vo spell jiski madat se aap apne bure karma ko niskriya kar sakte hai.uske itna bolte hi .
Mujhe-mere maan me ek spell sunaee dene laga.aur jaise hi maine vo spell padhta hu mujhe mere andar badalv maisus hone laga.aur mere shakti mera shareer aur meri signature me bhi badalav aane lagata hai.aur mera locket bhi lal hogaya tha phir jaise me mera badlav pura huva locket bhi normal ho gaya.aur mujhe pata tha ye sab mujhe naee mili huvi divya shakti ka kamala hai.ye sab q huva aur kis liye ye sab mere liye abhi ek prashn hi tha .aur mujhe pata tha jaldi mujhe iska javab mil jaye ga.aur ye badlav main hi maisus kar sakta hu aur baki k logo k liye ye sab samany hi lage ga.
Main-apne maan me chalo ab ye sab to ho gaya.suraj kisi bhi pal nikal sakta hai aur mujhe bhi yaha se nikala cha hiye lekin sab se pahle mujhe husna aur Kristine ko yaha jo kuchh bhi huva hai ye sab kuchh pahale ki tarah sapne me badala hoga yaha ki sari yade.aur mere chutki bajate vo kaam bhi ho gaya.aur main ohh chalo sab kuchh ho gaya .aur main
Seona-chalo vapas mere andar aa jao.vo turnt mere andar samagaee.aur
Main-ne jaise hi maine maan me teharma k bare me socha sidha main apne mahal me apne kamare me pahoch gaya.tabhi mujhe mere aankho k saamane maaya bi jungle k upar bahoth sare logo dikha dene lage aur vo kuchh apass me bate kar rahe the .aur tabhi ek dhamaka hota hai aur usi k saath maaya bi jungle samudra me sama jata hai.ye dekh
Main- samajh gaya ki aisa q huva hoga q ki ab vo maaya bi jungle kisi kaam ka nahi rah gaya.aur jaise hi vo dhamaka huva usi k sath sabhi log jo maaya bi jungle k upar khade the vo sabhi bhi gayab ho gae.vo log kaun the aur kya kar rahe the.is ka uttar to ab seona hi de sakti hai.leikn ye sab main baad me puchunga .yahee soch kar main kuchh der aaram kar leta hu soch kar. main apne bistar par let gaya.
To be continued…..
Recap-
Pichhale update mein dosto aap logo ne padha hoga kaise karma ne 6 sitaaron kee aadhee shakti praapt kee aur jaise hi karma ko sitaaron kee aadhee shakti praapt hota hai vaise hi karma apne aap ko do alag alag jagah pata hai aur karma jab tak un jagahon ke baare mein aur kuchh jaan paata tab tak karma kee aankh khul jati hai aur vah apane aap ko maaya bi jungle mein pata hai.
Ab aage…
Maine- jaise hi apani aankh kho lee to.main apne aap ko jungle k beecho beech pata hoon. aur mere saamane rakshak khada tha.rakshak ko dekhate hi main samajh gaya. main is samay maaya bi jungle main hoon. isliye maine bina samay gavaay rakshak k taraph badhane laga tabhi mere haathon mein 6 panne aa gae yah dekhate hi. main samajh gaya yah 6 panne kis k hain. isliye maine turant seona ko apne maan me yaad kiya.
Seona- turant mere saamane pragat ho gaee. Us k pragat hote hi mere haathon ke 6 panne seona main jaa k sama gae. lekin is beech mera poora dhyaan sirph aur sirph rakshak par tha. rakshak ko dekh kar main mahasoos kar raha tha kee vah apane aap ko kitana asurakshit mahasoos kar raha tha.
Main- ab rakshak k bilkul saamane khada tha lekin rakshak abhi bhi kisi soch mein khoya huva tha. tabhi jungle ki jameen main daraar padane lagata hai aur dekhate hi dekhate daraar aur bada hone lagata hai . yah ghatana rakshak jahaan khada tha usake paas ho raha tha aur tabhi jameen mein se seona ka adhura bhaag baahar aa jata hai.aur jaise hi seona ka dusra adhura bhaag jameen me se bahar aata hai vaise hi jameen ki darare apne aap bhar jati hai jaise hi kuchh huva hi na ho.aur seona aur uska dusra bhaag eka ek chamkne lagte hai jaise dono ek dusre se milne ka hi intazaar kar rahe hai varso se.tabhi
Rakshak-kaalee kitab (seona ka dusra bhag) ko apne hath me le leta hai.aur uske chute hi ek baar phir se kaalee kitab gayab ho jati.aur
Main-bus ye sab khuchh apne aankho se dekhta rah jata hu.aur is baar bhi main kuchh nahi kar pata hu.sirf dekhne k alava.lekin is baar mujhe rakshak pe bahot gussa aata hai aur aata bhi q nahi q ki subhah hone me kuchh hi samay bacha hai.isliye maine rakshak ko gusse me bola rakshak. tu ye mere sath jo luka chhupi ka khel khel raha hai na vo tujhe bahot bhari pade ga.abhi tu mujhe achchhe se janta nahi hai. Main kaun hu.lein ab tune mujhe majbur kar diya hai.is liye main tujhe pahale se hi chetavni de deta hu ab jo tere sath main karunga vo tu kabhi nahi bhool paye ga.
Rakshak-meri baat sun kar hasne lagta hai.aur vahee
Main-uski hasi sun kar .mujhe aur jada gussa aane lagta hai.aur uske isi harkat ne mujhe uski maut ka idea bhi de diya.isliye maine bhi rakshak ka uttar has k diya .rakshak has le vaise bhi ab tere zindagi ka aakhri kuchh pal bacha huva hai.marne se pahale hasna achchha hota hai .q ki main tujhe bahot tadpa tadpa k marne vala hu .itna jada ki ab tak maine kisi ko mara bhi nahi hoga.tabhi
Rakshak-vo to tab na jab tere pass samay hoga .mujhe pata hai suraj k nikalte tere sath kya hone vala hai.tujhe meri chinta karne ki koee jarurat nahi hai. Karma lekin ek baat hai tu bahot bahadur aur dimak daar hai. Aaj tak koee bhi kabhi yaha tak nahi pahoch paya lekin tu yaha tak paoch hai.aur ek baat zindagee me main kabhi dara nahi jitna tune mujhe daraya.lekin ab mujhe kisi baat fikar nahi hai q ki mujhe pata hai ab tu mera kuchh nahi kar sakta hai. Aur main ab tujhe katam kar dunga.itna bol kar vo jor jor se hasne lagta hai.tabhi
Main-apne maan me sala hamari banc***d kahi ka mera samay barbaad kar raha hai.ab mujhe us spell ka istamaal karna hi pade ga .tabhi maine apna sabse khas spell rakshak pe istamaal kar diya .aur mujhe pata tha iska asar jaldi hoga aur huva bhi vahee.tabhi
Rakshak-karma mana pade ga akhir kaar tune mujhe dhun hi liya maine to soch tha ki tu mujhe kabhi khoj hi nahi paye ga .lekin tu to kamal ka nikal jitna socha tha tu to us se badh k nikla.lekin iska ye matlab nahi hai ki tu apna aakhri padav bhi paar kar le ga.q ki jab tak main tujhse prashn nahi puchunga tab tak tu mera kuchh nahi kar paye ga lekin main tera samay jarur barbaad karunga aur tujh pe hamla bhi karunga .bach sakta hai to bach k dikha mujhse…
Main-rakshak lekin kya tujhe lagta hai jo to soch raha hai vahi hoga .mere itna bolte hi…
Rakshak- k munh se apne aap
1.vo kya hai jise banaane mein saalo lag jaate hai lekin tootane mein 1 minat bhee nahin lagata ?tabhi
Rakshak bahot joor se…nahi……… ye kaise tumne kiya ye nahi ho sakta hai.itna bol kar vo mujhe halma kar deta hai.aur bolta hai ki iska saza hai maut.aur rakshak mujpe apne shaktiyo se hamla kar deta hai aur .
Main -kuchh bhi nahi kar pa raha tha pata nahi kaha se uske pass itni jada shakti aa gaee thi .ki main jab tak uske kisi vaar ka uttar deta tab tak vo mujhe kisi aur shakti se hamla kar deta .aur uska har ek hamla pahale se 10 guna jada hota .aur dekhte hi dekhte meri halat had se jada battar ho gaya.aur main kuchh kar bhi nahi paa raha tha .rakshak k lagataar hamle k vaja se main uske prashn ka uttar bhi nahi soch pa raha tha.aur usne mujhe itna jada gayal kar diya tha ki main jameen pe gir gaya tha aur mera koee bhi kavach aur koee bhi shakti rakshak ka mukabla nahi kar pa raha tha.tabhi
Rakshak-dekh liya tune meri shakti ye le mere aakhri hamle se bach k dikha.uske itna bolte hi uske hath me ek chamka huva gola aa gaya.jaise hi rakshak k hath me vo gola aaya usko dekh k rakshak jor jor se hasne lagta hai aur bolta hai ye le dekh le apni maut ka samaan itna bolte vo gola mujhpe hamla kar deta hai.aur
Mujhe-jaise hi rakshak ka gola lagta hai .vo gola mujh me pahale to sama jata hai phir dekhte hi dekhte vo gola mere andar bada bada aur bada hone lagta hai.aur ek jor dar dhamaka ho jata hai aur us dhamake k sath ek cheekh bhi sunaee bhi deta hai.aur vo cheekh kisis aur ki nahi vo thi mere hi thi.aur vahee
Rakshak-jor jor se haste huve bolta hai .aakhir kaar ab mujhe karma se aur is duniya se mukti mil gaee haa haa haa itna bol kar jor jor se hasne lagta hai..tabhi…
Main-haste huve haa haaa…….rakshak mukti to tujhe jarur mile gi .lekin usase pahale apana utaar to sun le marne se pahale….uttar hai prashn ka BHAROSA…..ab to tu yahi soch raha hai na main to mar chukka tha to phir kaise main bach gaya na.to sun ye sab meri hi maya thi .mohini spell ki maaya jis se saamane vala jo chahata hai usko vo hi milta hai.tujhe tabhi samjh jaana cha hiye tha jab tu apne aap mujhe pura ka pura prashn bata diya tha.ab tu bach k dikha rakshak .mera itna bolte hi main rakshak k karib pahoch gaya aur uski hi sakti maine uspe istamaal kar diya.aur maine usne apne absorption spell bhi add kar diya .aur usi k sath rakshak ka shareer sukhne lagta hai jisase uske cheekhe pure jungle me ghoonj ne lagta hai lekin uski madat k liye koee nahi hota hai phir baki kaam to vinashak shakti ne kar diya tha uske shareer k chithade uda k .
Main-chalo iska kaam to ho gaya.
{dosto ap sab k maan me kuchh saval aaya hoga maine kab raksahk k sath ye sab kiya.dosto aap sabhi ko yaad hi hoga jab raksahk ne mujhe gussa dilaya tha tabhi maine mohini spell rakshak pe kiya tha.ye mujhe 6 sitaro ki shaktiyo se mila tha.iski khasiya ye hai ki jis par ye shakti istamaal hoti hai uski sochne aur samjhne ki shakti khatam ho jati hai aur usko bharam hi dikhta hai aur vo usi ko sach maan leta hai.aur ek baar jo is bharam me fas gaya to samjho uska kaam khatam.aur maine bhi rakshak k sath vahi kiya ek bharm paida kar k aur vo usko ko sach maan liya.aur vo mere maaya jaal me fas gaya.aur jaise maine kaha tha rakshak ko maine vaise hi bhayanak mauth diya. }
Main-rakshak k kahatam hote hi ek baar phir se kaalee kitaab pragat ho gaee aur seona me aa k sama gaee.aur phir kya
Seona –dekhte hi dekhte ek khubsurat si ladki me badal gai vo ab kuchh is tarah dikh rahi thi.
Seona –ki ladki bante hi.maalik aap ka bahot bahot sukriya apne ne mujhe pura kiya.aur jaise ki maine aap se kaha tha ye raha vo spell jiski madat se aap apne bure karma ko niskriya kar sakte hai.uske itna bolte hi .
Mujhe-mere maan me ek spell sunaee dene laga.aur jaise hi maine vo spell padhta hu mujhe mere andar badalv maisus hone laga.aur mere shakti mera shareer aur meri signature me bhi badalav aane lagata hai.aur mera locket bhi lal hogaya tha phir jaise me mera badlav pura huva locket bhi normal ho gaya.aur mujhe pata tha ye sab mujhe naee mili huvi divya shakti ka kamala hai.ye sab q huva aur kis liye ye sab mere liye abhi ek prashn hi tha .aur mujhe pata tha jaldi mujhe iska javab mil jaye ga.aur ye badlav main hi maisus kar sakta hu aur baki k logo k liye ye sab samany hi lage ga.
Main-apne maan me chalo ab ye sab to ho gaya.suraj kisi bhi pal nikal sakta hai aur mujhe bhi yaha se nikala cha hiye lekin sab se pahle mujhe husna aur Kristine ko yaha jo kuchh bhi huva hai ye sab kuchh pahale ki tarah sapne me badala hoga yaha ki sari yade.aur mere chutki bajate vo kaam bhi ho gaya.aur main ohh chalo sab kuchh ho gaya .aur main
Seona-chalo vapas mere andar aa jao.vo turnt mere andar samagaee.aur
Main-ne jaise hi maine maan me teharma k bare me socha sidha main apne mahal me apne kamare me pahoch gaya.tabhi mujhe mere aankho k saamane maaya bi jungle k upar bahoth sare logo dikha dene lage aur vo kuchh apass me bate kar rahe the .aur tabhi ek dhamaka hota hai aur usi k saath maaya bi jungle samudra me sama jata hai.ye dekh
Main- samajh gaya ki aisa q huva hoga q ki ab vo maaya bi jungle kisi kaam ka nahi rah gaya.aur jaise hi vo dhamaka huva usi k sath sabhi log jo maaya bi jungle k upar khade the vo sabhi bhi gayab ho gae.vo log kaun the aur kya kar rahe the.is ka uttar to ab seona hi de sakti hai.leikn ye sab main baad me puchunga .yahee soch kar main kuchh der aaram kar leta hu soch kar. main apne bistar par let gaya.
To be continued…..
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Recap-
Pichhale update me dosto aap logo ne padha hoga kaise karma ne seona ka dusra bhaag hasil kiya aur rakshak ka khatma kiya aur ek baar phir se karma teharma pahoch jata hai.
Ab aage----
Main-abhi apne bistar pe aaraam karne k liye leta hi huva tha aur abhi maine apni aankhe band hi kiya tha . ki ek baar phir se mujhe mere kano me bahot se logo k rone ki aur apni madat magne ki aavaaje sunaee dene lagi .lekin kisi ka chehara nahi dekhai nahi de raha tha is baar mujhe.kuchh der k baad ek baar phir se mujhe us bachche ka aur uski maa ka chehra mere aankho k saamane aa gaya . aur jaise hi mere nazar un dono pe gai to main na chahate huve bhi mere aankho se anshu apne aap girne laga pata nahi kya tha un dono me aisa. jaise un dono ka koee rista hai mujhe .un dono ka dard na ki mujhe sirf maisus ho raha tha balki mujhe un dono ka dard ka aisas ho raha tha.aur vo dard dhire dhire itna jada ho gya ki meri aankhe apne aap khul gai.aur jaise hi meri aankhe khuli to mujhe laga koee mere kamare me tha .lekin
Maine-jab apni aankhe charo taraf apne karmre se achchhe se ghuma k dekha to mujhe koee dikhaee nahi diya .tab ja k mujhe yakin huva vo mera sirf ek bharam tha.aur jab maine apna dono hath apne chehare pe lagaya to mujhe apna chehara gila gila sa laga .tab mujhe sab kuchh yaad aa gaya abhi mere sath kuchh der pahale sapne me kya huva tha.lekin ab mere maan me bahot se saval aane laga tha. jaise hi un dono k sath jab ki mere koee rista nahi hai aur main jab ki un dono k bare me kuchh janta nahi hu to mujhe un k sapne q aa raha hai aur un dono ko dard me dekh k mujhe dard q hota hai aur meri aankho se ashu q nikal raha tha.
Kya ye sab matra ek sapna hai ya koee chetavni ya koee bhavishya ki ghatna.tabhi mere deemaag me ek baat aata hai.nahi nahi aisa nahi ho sakta hai main ab kisi se shadi nahi karunga aur nahi apni patniyo dhoka dunga.lekin phir ye sab mere sath ho kya raha hai.jab se mujhe naee shaktiya mili hai tabhi se ye sab chalu hai.ab mujhe iska pata lagana hi pade ga nahi to mera maan bechain hi rahe ga isliye maine seona ko apne maan me yaad kiya. tabhi
Seona-mere aavaaj sunte hi mere saamane aa gai apne insane roop me.aur boltai hai maalik hukum kare main aap ki kya seva karu. Mere maalik….
Main-seona ye dekho bol k .maine bachche aur uski maa ki tasvire seona k dimaag me transfer kar diya.ye dono tasvire kis ki hai aur kaun hai ye dono.mujhe abhi janana hai.kya un dono ka koee astitva hai.jaldi batao mujhe.
Seona-maalik khuchh chhun aap ko pratikchha karna padega.main abhi pata lagati hu un dono k bare.itna bol kar vo apne kaam me lag jati hai.aur
Main-theek hai.bol k uske uttar ka intazaar karne laga.tabhi
Seona-maalik bachche ka to koee astitva nahi hai aur ye jo dusri tasveer hai ladki ki un ka janam to abhi kuchh hi din pahale huva hai.bus itna jankari hai mere pass aur us jagah pe pahochna lagbhag namukin hai.
Maine-jaise hi seona ki baat suni to main samajh gaya q bachche ka koee astitva nahi hai.q ki jab maa ka abhi janam huva hai to bachcha ka kaise janam hoga.aur ab mujhe nahi lagta seona se is se jada kuchh pata chale ga. Aur seona aisa tumne q kaha ki us tak pahochna lagbhag namumkin hai.tabhi
Seona –maalik q ki maine 1000000000000000 galaxy me khoj liya tha .phir bhi mujhe kuchh bhi pata nahi chla.isliye.maalik…
Main-chalo jane do.tumne bahot achchha kaam kiya.ab tum aaraam karo .mere itna bolte hi seona mere andar sama jati hai aur main apne aa shaant maan ko shaant karne k liye dhayaan karne k liye baith jata hu aur apne savalo ko bhavish k liye chhod deta hu .ye soch k ki jo hota hai achchha hi hota hai aur jo hoga achchha hi ho ga.kuchh der dhyaan me baithne k baad main uth jata hu.ab mere maan ekdum shaant ho gaya tha.aur subha bhi ho gaya tha.isliye maine apne maan me fresh hone ko socha .aur main turnt taro taja hogaya.tabhi…
Sainik-mahaaraaj nasta ban k taiyaar ho gaya hai.aap ka hukum ho to lagva do main.
Main-ha! theek hai tum chalo main aata hu.itna bol kar main nasta karne chala jata hu.jaldi se maine apna nasta khatam karta hu.aur ek sainik se sendesh pahucha deta hu king tanishk ko ki main milna chahata hu.tabhi kuchh der baad vo sainik aa jaya hai.
Sainik-mahaaraaj .king tanishk ne aap k liye rath bheja hai.aur vo aap ka intazaar kar rahe hai.
Main-theek hai tum jao.aur vahee maine sab kuchh pahale hi soch liye tha. kaise aur kya un logo ko mahaamantree k bare me batana hai.itna sab kuchh sochne k baad main rath pe baith k king tanishk k mahal me pahoch jata hu.jaha mere intazaar king minata ;king tanishk; aur raajkumari rupvati .kar rahe the.
Tanishk- king karma aap ka ek baar phir se mere mahal me swagat hai.aur bataeeye kaisa raha aap ka kal ka din.aur aap ko hamara rajya kaisa laga.aur aap ko koee pareshani to nahi huva yaha aane me.tabhi
Main-king tanishk king minata aur rajkumari g se aap sabhi ko mere pranaam.king tanishk mujhe yaha aane me koee taklif nahi huva aur teharma raajya jaise maine suna tha .aap ka rajya sach me bahot vishal hai aur log bhi achchhe hai. Aur king minata aur king tanishk main ab agya chahata hu apne raajya k prstaan k liye aur aap logo ko pata hi hoga dusre dugaon me mujhe jaldi jana ho ga nahi to mera hi raajya musibat me aa jaye ga.tabhi
Minata-king karma hum to abhi kuchh din aur chahate the. aap ruke aur hamara raajya dekhe lekin aap jo kah rahe hai vo bhi bahot jaruri hai lekin.
Main-lekin kya .mahaaraaj
Minata-humne abhi tak mahaamantree ko karne vala ka kuchh pata nahi laga paye hai.tabhi
Main-king minata ko bich me rokte huve .haa achchha huva aap ne yaad dila diya.main to bhul hi gaya tha us bare me .ye dekhye kya kuchh huva tha mahaamantree k sath us din .aur usi k sathh maine apne maan ek spell padha vo so sab kuchh dikha diya jo us din shadow ne mahaamantree k sath aur mahaamantree un ladkiyo k sath kar raha tha apni maaya se aur kaise shadow ne mahaamantree ko mara.aur usi k sath sabhi vastvik duniya me aa gaye.
Main-mahaamantree aap ka bahot bura tha aur aise logo k sath aise hi hona cha hiye.mine se sab kuchh gusse me bola.tabhi
Rupvati-chhi itna ganda tha.maine to kabhi sapne me nahi socha tha .kabhi vo aisa nikle ga achchha hi huva vo mar gaya .aur jo bhi vo tha usne achchha hi kiya . mujhe agar pahale uske aise harkato k bare me pata hota ho main kab ka usko khatam kar deti.ye sab vo gusse me bol rahi thi.
Main-haa raajkumari g bure k sath hamesa bura hi hota.q mahaaraaj.
Minta-aur tanishk to kisi aur hi duniya me chale gaye k the. mahaamantree ki itni bure tarah maut dekh k.mere bulane pe king minata ko hosh aaya.aur haa king karma aap kahna sahi hai.mujhe kudh viswaas nahi ho raha hai . hamara mahaamantree aisa hoga aur aisa kuchh kare ga. Ye to maine kabhi sapne me bhi nahi socha tha.tabhi
Tanishk-lekin vo parachhaee jaise kaun tha .jine itna bahuduri ka kaam kiya.uske bare me kuchh pata chala king karma aap ko.
Main-apne maan me ha main hi hu.aur tum log mujh se hi puchh rahe ho. Nahi lekin isne bhi khel pratiyogita me bhag liye tha.aur ho na ho sayad aap ka raajya ka hi ho.bus main aap ki itni hi madat kar sakta hu.raajkumari g kabhi samay mile ga mera raajya aaeeye ga.king tanishk aur king minata aap bhi .ab main chalta hu.itna bol kar main apne sena k pass gate spell se pahoch gaya.aur vahi dusri taraf mere jane k baad…
Tanishk-pita g hume us shadow jaise dikhne vale ko khojna cha hiye .bhavish me hamare bahot kaam aaye ga.tabhi
Rupvati-bhai vo sab aap mujhe chod do.main uska pata laga lungi.itna bol kar rupvati chali jati.aur kuchh der baad tanishk bhi apne kamare me chala jata hai.ab sirf king minta bacha tha.
Minata-jarur ye kisi dusmaan ne kiya hoga.jaldi hi main uska pata laga lunga.itna bol kar vo bhi chala jata hai.tabhi
Unknown shadow-jadli hi mulakaat hoga karma …..itna bol kar vo teharma se gayab ho jata hai.
Main-ek baar phir se apne ship me apne sena k sath baith jata hu aur melbolina k liye maine gate portal open kar diya aur dekhte hi dekhte hamara ship mere mahal k pass pahoch jata hai.aur jaise hi mere ship mahal k pass pahochta hai main apne ship ko jameen pe utarane ka hokum deta hu.aur vahee meri sena
Sena-achanak mahal k pass kisi ship k aane se chaaro tarf se usko gher leti hai .aur jab un log apne rajya ki sena ko dekhte hai aur un k sath kisi aur ko dekhte hai ek dum savdhaan ho jate hai.aur vahee
Main-ye dekh k samjh jata hu.aisa un log q kar rahe hai.aur aisa karna surakhchha k liye lagmi bhi hai.tabhi mera
Mahaamantree-kaun tum mujhe dekh k .aur tumhamare sath hamari sena kya kar rahai hai .aur tumhari inti himaat ki sidha rajya mahal k pass tak aa gaya .itna sab kuchh hone k vaja se .ye baat mahal k andar tak pahoch gaee.koee najaan ship mahal k pass aa gaya hai apne sena ko le kar.ye baat sunte hi yumina.
Yumina-apni talvaar le k mahal se bahar jane lagti hai.tabhi husna raajkumari main bhi aap k sath chalti main bhi dekhu kisme itna himaat aa gaee hai ki yaha taka a gaya.theek hai husna chalo.dono mahal se jaise hi bahar nikalne lagti hai.tabhi
meri sabhi patniya -yumina ko--- beti sambhal k aur apna khayaal rakhna.
Yumina-theek hai maa .mujhe kuchh nahi hoga.darna to usko cha hiye.jo hamare mahal k bahar aa gaya hai.
Sabhi-theek hai beti.
Husna-mahaarani aap nischit rahiya main hu raajkumari k sath.
Main-apne senanayak se kahata hu mahaamantree se baat karne k liye aur samjhane k liye.
Sananayak-mere kahne pe mahaamantree ko samjhane k liye jata hai to vo sabhi usko bandi bana lete hai.ye sab dekh meri sena mujh ko dekhne lagti hai jaise puchh rahi ho .aap sirf hokum kare hum abhi sabko sabak sikha denge.lekin…
Maine-sabko isare se mana kar diya.q ki mujhe pata tha isme unki koee galti nahi hai.tabhi ek baar phir se din se ek dum raat ho gaya aur ek baar phir se vo ajeeb si janvaro ki fauj asmaan me khadi ho gaee.ye dekh main samajh gaya ye kaam kis ka hai.dark stone.tabhi
Dark stone-ha maine hi ye sab kiya hai ab mujhse tumhe pane se koee rok nahi sakta hai.
Main-ha mujhe pata hai aur tum jarur mujhe paa lena lekin mujhe 2 din aur de do bus .uske baad main khud hi aa jaunga.
Dark stone-2 din nahi nahi maine tumhe pahale hi bahot samay de diya hai .1 din bus is k alava ek din bhi nahi. Nahi to tum apna pura raajya kho doge.aur itna bolte hi sab kuchh pahale jaise ho jata ek dum samannya.lekin
Meri-raajya ki sena ab meri ship pe chad gaee thi. mujhe aur mere sath meri sena ko gher liya tha.
Main-samajh gaya ye sab kab kiya hoga jab ek dum andhera ho gaya hoga tha.aur itna hi nahi balki ab to lakho sena aa gaee thi aur mahal ko surakhchit kar diya tha aur aur meri puri ship ko gher liye tha.lekin ye sab kuchh dekh k mujhe bahot khusi ho raha tha.tabhi
Mahaamantree-lagta hai tu apni maut ko dekh k pagal ho gaya hai.isliye has raha hu.
Main-haa achchha laga tum log apne rajya k liye itna vafadaar ho.tabhi kahi se ek bhala mere pass aa k ruk gaya.aur dekhte hi dekhte sabhi logo ne hamala kar diya lekin kisi ka hatiyaar koee kaam nahi kar raha tha .sab mere surakhchha kavch k saamane bekaar the us se takrate hi gir jate the.ye dekh kar
Main-thoda gusse me .kya maine jo tumhe bataya uspe tumhe bharosa nahi hai kya .main hi karma hu.tumhara raaja.tabhi
Mahaamantree-nahi aur kya sabut hai.uske itan bolte hi.
Maine-asmaan me multiple gate portal open kar diya aur dekhte hi dekte 1000 dragon asmaan me manrane lage.ye dekhte hi sabhi ko bharosa hogaya ki mai hi karma hu.aur tab tak husna aur yumina bhi mahal k bahar aa gaee thi.aur mujhe dekhte hi dono mere pass aa gai .husna mere kandhe pe baith gaee aur yumina mere gale lage.ye dekh sabhi logo ko aur jada yakin ho gaya aur mere chutki bajate hi sabhi dragon vapas chale gaye.aur phir suru hogaya phoolo ki barish aur meri jai jai kaar.
Mahaamantree-maharaaj mujhe chhama kar do.mujhe laga koee beharupiya hoga .aur aap badal kaise gaye.tabhi
Main-isme tumhari koee galti nahi .ab chalo mahal .sab bataunga…
Mahaamantree-g mahaaraaja.king karma ki sabhi jai ho.aur
Mere-ship se utarte hi sabhi sena apni mundi neche karte hai aur meri jai jai kar karne lagte hai.aur mujhe dekh k sabhi khus ho jate …..
To be continued……..
Recap-
Pichhale update me dosto aap logo ne padha hoga kaise karma ne seona ka dusra bhaag hasil kiya aur rakshak ka khatma kiya aur ek baar phir se karma teharma pahoch jata hai.
Ab aage----
Main-abhi apne bistar pe aaraam karne k liye leta hi huva tha aur abhi maine apni aankhe band hi kiya tha . ki ek baar phir se mujhe mere kano me bahot se logo k rone ki aur apni madat magne ki aavaaje sunaee dene lagi .lekin kisi ka chehara nahi dekhai nahi de raha tha is baar mujhe.kuchh der k baad ek baar phir se mujhe us bachche ka aur uski maa ka chehra mere aankho k saamane aa gaya . aur jaise hi mere nazar un dono pe gai to main na chahate huve bhi mere aankho se anshu apne aap girne laga pata nahi kya tha un dono me aisa. jaise un dono ka koee rista hai mujhe .un dono ka dard na ki mujhe sirf maisus ho raha tha balki mujhe un dono ka dard ka aisas ho raha tha.aur vo dard dhire dhire itna jada ho gya ki meri aankhe apne aap khul gai.aur jaise hi meri aankhe khuli to mujhe laga koee mere kamare me tha .lekin
Maine-jab apni aankhe charo taraf apne karmre se achchhe se ghuma k dekha to mujhe koee dikhaee nahi diya .tab ja k mujhe yakin huva vo mera sirf ek bharam tha.aur jab maine apna dono hath apne chehare pe lagaya to mujhe apna chehara gila gila sa laga .tab mujhe sab kuchh yaad aa gaya abhi mere sath kuchh der pahale sapne me kya huva tha.lekin ab mere maan me bahot se saval aane laga tha. jaise hi un dono k sath jab ki mere koee rista nahi hai aur main jab ki un dono k bare me kuchh janta nahi hu to mujhe un k sapne q aa raha hai aur un dono ko dard me dekh k mujhe dard q hota hai aur meri aankho se ashu q nikal raha tha.
Kya ye sab matra ek sapna hai ya koee chetavni ya koee bhavishya ki ghatna.tabhi mere deemaag me ek baat aata hai.nahi nahi aisa nahi ho sakta hai main ab kisi se shadi nahi karunga aur nahi apni patniyo dhoka dunga.lekin phir ye sab mere sath ho kya raha hai.jab se mujhe naee shaktiya mili hai tabhi se ye sab chalu hai.ab mujhe iska pata lagana hi pade ga nahi to mera maan bechain hi rahe ga isliye maine seona ko apne maan me yaad kiya. tabhi
Seona-mere aavaaj sunte hi mere saamane aa gai apne insane roop me.aur boltai hai maalik hukum kare main aap ki kya seva karu. Mere maalik….
Main-seona ye dekho bol k .maine bachche aur uski maa ki tasvire seona k dimaag me transfer kar diya.ye dono tasvire kis ki hai aur kaun hai ye dono.mujhe abhi janana hai.kya un dono ka koee astitva hai.jaldi batao mujhe.
Seona-maalik khuchh chhun aap ko pratikchha karna padega.main abhi pata lagati hu un dono k bare.itna bol kar vo apne kaam me lag jati hai.aur
Main-theek hai.bol k uske uttar ka intazaar karne laga.tabhi
Seona-maalik bachche ka to koee astitva nahi hai aur ye jo dusri tasveer hai ladki ki un ka janam to abhi kuchh hi din pahale huva hai.bus itna jankari hai mere pass aur us jagah pe pahochna lagbhag namukin hai.
Maine-jaise hi seona ki baat suni to main samajh gaya q bachche ka koee astitva nahi hai.q ki jab maa ka abhi janam huva hai to bachcha ka kaise janam hoga.aur ab mujhe nahi lagta seona se is se jada kuchh pata chale ga. Aur seona aisa tumne q kaha ki us tak pahochna lagbhag namumkin hai.tabhi
Seona –maalik q ki maine 1000000000000000 galaxy me khoj liya tha .phir bhi mujhe kuchh bhi pata nahi chla.isliye.maalik…
Main-chalo jane do.tumne bahot achchha kaam kiya.ab tum aaraam karo .mere itna bolte hi seona mere andar sama jati hai aur main apne aa shaant maan ko shaant karne k liye dhayaan karne k liye baith jata hu aur apne savalo ko bhavish k liye chhod deta hu .ye soch k ki jo hota hai achchha hi hota hai aur jo hoga achchha hi ho ga.kuchh der dhyaan me baithne k baad main uth jata hu.ab mere maan ekdum shaant ho gaya tha.aur subha bhi ho gaya tha.isliye maine apne maan me fresh hone ko socha .aur main turnt taro taja hogaya.tabhi…
Sainik-mahaaraaj nasta ban k taiyaar ho gaya hai.aap ka hukum ho to lagva do main.
Main-ha! theek hai tum chalo main aata hu.itna bol kar main nasta karne chala jata hu.jaldi se maine apna nasta khatam karta hu.aur ek sainik se sendesh pahucha deta hu king tanishk ko ki main milna chahata hu.tabhi kuchh der baad vo sainik aa jaya hai.
Sainik-mahaaraaj .king tanishk ne aap k liye rath bheja hai.aur vo aap ka intazaar kar rahe hai.
Main-theek hai tum jao.aur vahee maine sab kuchh pahale hi soch liye tha. kaise aur kya un logo ko mahaamantree k bare me batana hai.itna sab kuchh sochne k baad main rath pe baith k king tanishk k mahal me pahoch jata hu.jaha mere intazaar king minata ;king tanishk; aur raajkumari rupvati .kar rahe the.
Tanishk- king karma aap ka ek baar phir se mere mahal me swagat hai.aur bataeeye kaisa raha aap ka kal ka din.aur aap ko hamara rajya kaisa laga.aur aap ko koee pareshani to nahi huva yaha aane me.tabhi
Main-king tanishk king minata aur rajkumari g se aap sabhi ko mere pranaam.king tanishk mujhe yaha aane me koee taklif nahi huva aur teharma raajya jaise maine suna tha .aap ka rajya sach me bahot vishal hai aur log bhi achchhe hai. Aur king minata aur king tanishk main ab agya chahata hu apne raajya k prstaan k liye aur aap logo ko pata hi hoga dusre dugaon me mujhe jaldi jana ho ga nahi to mera hi raajya musibat me aa jaye ga.tabhi
Minata-king karma hum to abhi kuchh din aur chahate the. aap ruke aur hamara raajya dekhe lekin aap jo kah rahe hai vo bhi bahot jaruri hai lekin.
Main-lekin kya .mahaaraaj
Minata-humne abhi tak mahaamantree ko karne vala ka kuchh pata nahi laga paye hai.tabhi
Main-king minata ko bich me rokte huve .haa achchha huva aap ne yaad dila diya.main to bhul hi gaya tha us bare me .ye dekhye kya kuchh huva tha mahaamantree k sath us din .aur usi k sathh maine apne maan ek spell padha vo so sab kuchh dikha diya jo us din shadow ne mahaamantree k sath aur mahaamantree un ladkiyo k sath kar raha tha apni maaya se aur kaise shadow ne mahaamantree ko mara.aur usi k sath sabhi vastvik duniya me aa gaye.
Main-mahaamantree aap ka bahot bura tha aur aise logo k sath aise hi hona cha hiye.mine se sab kuchh gusse me bola.tabhi
Rupvati-chhi itna ganda tha.maine to kabhi sapne me nahi socha tha .kabhi vo aisa nikle ga achchha hi huva vo mar gaya .aur jo bhi vo tha usne achchha hi kiya . mujhe agar pahale uske aise harkato k bare me pata hota ho main kab ka usko khatam kar deti.ye sab vo gusse me bol rahi thi.
Main-haa raajkumari g bure k sath hamesa bura hi hota.q mahaaraaj.
Minta-aur tanishk to kisi aur hi duniya me chale gaye k the. mahaamantree ki itni bure tarah maut dekh k.mere bulane pe king minata ko hosh aaya.aur haa king karma aap kahna sahi hai.mujhe kudh viswaas nahi ho raha hai . hamara mahaamantree aisa hoga aur aisa kuchh kare ga. Ye to maine kabhi sapne me bhi nahi socha tha.tabhi
Tanishk-lekin vo parachhaee jaise kaun tha .jine itna bahuduri ka kaam kiya.uske bare me kuchh pata chala king karma aap ko.
Main-apne maan me ha main hi hu.aur tum log mujh se hi puchh rahe ho. Nahi lekin isne bhi khel pratiyogita me bhag liye tha.aur ho na ho sayad aap ka raajya ka hi ho.bus main aap ki itni hi madat kar sakta hu.raajkumari g kabhi samay mile ga mera raajya aaeeye ga.king tanishk aur king minata aap bhi .ab main chalta hu.itna bol kar main apne sena k pass gate spell se pahoch gaya.aur vahi dusri taraf mere jane k baad…
Tanishk-pita g hume us shadow jaise dikhne vale ko khojna cha hiye .bhavish me hamare bahot kaam aaye ga.tabhi
Rupvati-bhai vo sab aap mujhe chod do.main uska pata laga lungi.itna bol kar rupvati chali jati.aur kuchh der baad tanishk bhi apne kamare me chala jata hai.ab sirf king minta bacha tha.
Minata-jarur ye kisi dusmaan ne kiya hoga.jaldi hi main uska pata laga lunga.itna bol kar vo bhi chala jata hai.tabhi
Unknown shadow-jadli hi mulakaat hoga karma …..itna bol kar vo teharma se gayab ho jata hai.
Main-ek baar phir se apne ship me apne sena k sath baith jata hu aur melbolina k liye maine gate portal open kar diya aur dekhte hi dekhte hamara ship mere mahal k pass pahoch jata hai.aur jaise hi mere ship mahal k pass pahochta hai main apne ship ko jameen pe utarane ka hokum deta hu.aur vahee meri sena
Sena-achanak mahal k pass kisi ship k aane se chaaro tarf se usko gher leti hai .aur jab un log apne rajya ki sena ko dekhte hai aur un k sath kisi aur ko dekhte hai ek dum savdhaan ho jate hai.aur vahee
Main-ye dekh k samjh jata hu.aisa un log q kar rahe hai.aur aisa karna surakhchha k liye lagmi bhi hai.tabhi mera
Mahaamantree-kaun tum mujhe dekh k .aur tumhamare sath hamari sena kya kar rahai hai .aur tumhari inti himaat ki sidha rajya mahal k pass tak aa gaya .itna sab kuchh hone k vaja se .ye baat mahal k andar tak pahoch gaee.koee najaan ship mahal k pass aa gaya hai apne sena ko le kar.ye baat sunte hi yumina.
Yumina-apni talvaar le k mahal se bahar jane lagti hai.tabhi husna raajkumari main bhi aap k sath chalti main bhi dekhu kisme itna himaat aa gaee hai ki yaha taka a gaya.theek hai husna chalo.dono mahal se jaise hi bahar nikalne lagti hai.tabhi
meri sabhi patniya -yumina ko--- beti sambhal k aur apna khayaal rakhna.
Yumina-theek hai maa .mujhe kuchh nahi hoga.darna to usko cha hiye.jo hamare mahal k bahar aa gaya hai.
Sabhi-theek hai beti.
Husna-mahaarani aap nischit rahiya main hu raajkumari k sath.
Main-apne senanayak se kahata hu mahaamantree se baat karne k liye aur samjhane k liye.
Sananayak-mere kahne pe mahaamantree ko samjhane k liye jata hai to vo sabhi usko bandi bana lete hai.ye sab dekh meri sena mujh ko dekhne lagti hai jaise puchh rahi ho .aap sirf hokum kare hum abhi sabko sabak sikha denge.lekin…
Maine-sabko isare se mana kar diya.q ki mujhe pata tha isme unki koee galti nahi hai.tabhi ek baar phir se din se ek dum raat ho gaya aur ek baar phir se vo ajeeb si janvaro ki fauj asmaan me khadi ho gaee.ye dekh main samajh gaya ye kaam kis ka hai.dark stone.tabhi
Dark stone-ha maine hi ye sab kiya hai ab mujhse tumhe pane se koee rok nahi sakta hai.
Main-ha mujhe pata hai aur tum jarur mujhe paa lena lekin mujhe 2 din aur de do bus .uske baad main khud hi aa jaunga.
Dark stone-2 din nahi nahi maine tumhe pahale hi bahot samay de diya hai .1 din bus is k alava ek din bhi nahi. Nahi to tum apna pura raajya kho doge.aur itna bolte hi sab kuchh pahale jaise ho jata ek dum samannya.lekin
Meri-raajya ki sena ab meri ship pe chad gaee thi. mujhe aur mere sath meri sena ko gher liya tha.
Main-samajh gaya ye sab kab kiya hoga jab ek dum andhera ho gaya hoga tha.aur itna hi nahi balki ab to lakho sena aa gaee thi aur mahal ko surakhchit kar diya tha aur aur meri puri ship ko gher liye tha.lekin ye sab kuchh dekh k mujhe bahot khusi ho raha tha.tabhi
Mahaamantree-lagta hai tu apni maut ko dekh k pagal ho gaya hai.isliye has raha hu.
Main-haa achchha laga tum log apne rajya k liye itna vafadaar ho.tabhi kahi se ek bhala mere pass aa k ruk gaya.aur dekhte hi dekhte sabhi logo ne hamala kar diya lekin kisi ka hatiyaar koee kaam nahi kar raha tha .sab mere surakhchha kavch k saamane bekaar the us se takrate hi gir jate the.ye dekh kar
Main-thoda gusse me .kya maine jo tumhe bataya uspe tumhe bharosa nahi hai kya .main hi karma hu.tumhara raaja.tabhi
Mahaamantree-nahi aur kya sabut hai.uske itan bolte hi.
Maine-asmaan me multiple gate portal open kar diya aur dekhte hi dekte 1000 dragon asmaan me manrane lage.ye dekhte hi sabhi ko bharosa hogaya ki mai hi karma hu.aur tab tak husna aur yumina bhi mahal k bahar aa gaee thi.aur mujhe dekhte hi dono mere pass aa gai .husna mere kandhe pe baith gaee aur yumina mere gale lage.ye dekh sabhi logo ko aur jada yakin ho gaya aur mere chutki bajate hi sabhi dragon vapas chale gaye.aur phir suru hogaya phoolo ki barish aur meri jai jai kaar.
Mahaamantree-maharaaj mujhe chhama kar do.mujhe laga koee beharupiya hoga .aur aap badal kaise gaye.tabhi
Main-isme tumhari koee galti nahi .ab chalo mahal .sab bataunga…
Mahaamantree-g mahaaraaja.king karma ki sabhi jai ho.aur
Mere-ship se utarte hi sabhi sena apni mundi neche karte hai aur meri jai jai kar karne lagte hai.aur mujhe dekh k sabhi khus ho jate …..
To be continued……..
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Dosto maine 3 update post kar diya .jaise maine aap logo ko kaha tha.thank you so much dosto aap sabhi logo ka mujhe itna support karne k liye aur itne achchhe achchhe comment karne k liye.keep supporting and read and enjoy the story dosto.good night.
Abbasi
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Very nice update ......
Keep it up bro ........
At last karma ko book ka dosra part mil hi gaya .......
aur un 6 larkion ka raaz bhi jald khol dena .......
Keep it up bro ........
At last karma ko book ka dosra part mil hi gaya .......
aur un 6 larkion ka raaz bhi jald khol dena .......
Abbasi
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Fabulous updates yar ........
abhi 2nd update hi read kr k comment kia aur 3rd update aa gayi ........
ab dungeon main kia ho ga .......... ???
aur us larki aur bachy ka raaz karma pe kb khuly ga ........ ???
Prince aman
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Kahani bahut intersting hoti ja rahi hai ab dekta hai aga kya hota hai
Kalyansurya
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Wah bhai kya jabardast update diya hai aapne maza he aa gaya
Back to back 3 update lazbab bhai
Story bhut accha ja rha hai our ab to karma ko 6 star ke saat seona ki full power be mell gaya hai
Ab jaldi he karma ko 2dongi me se black stone ke safar me kuch new power ke melna be nischit hai
Aaghe dekhna mazedar hoga ki karma me ke es new safar pe kya chunoti our kya power melta hay
Best off luck bhai
Back to back 3 update lazbab bhai
Story bhut accha ja rha hai our ab to karma ko 6 star ke saat seona ki full power be mell gaya hai
Ab jaldi he karma ko 2dongi me se black stone ke safar me kuch new power ke melna be nischit hai
Aaghe dekhna mazedar hoga ki karma me ke es new safar pe kya chunoti our kya power melta hay
Best off luck bhai