Romance AGENT-02 THE KERALA TRAILS (Completed)

[Genius]

 

[Swaraj]

bhut behtreen kahani aur lajwaab writer,
short stories ke king h bhai aap, ab isse jayada kya likhun.
Quoki bilkul point to point writing aur usmein bhi suspense.

Review ke liye thanks dost
Lekin mai ye shrey aap logo ko doonga,jinhone mere confidence hamesha ooncha rakha aur mujhe hamesha appreciate kiya
Once again thanks a lot aur saath rahiye

 

[janu2016]

bilkul bhai hum to hamesha se he sath hain,
bas agli kadi ki partiksha mein

 

[Genius]

Waiting

 

[Swaraj]

KUMARAKOM
veeresh newspaper padh rahe the hotel room ke lawn me jab suraj aaya tha

"Disturb to nahi kiya sir aapko??"suraj muskurate hue bola

"Arey nahi beta,aur ye sir sir kya laga rakha hai,uncle bula sakte ho mujhe"veeresh haste hue bole

"Waise uncle rajesh to aapko sir bulata hai"suraj ne poochha

"Arey beta wo mera student tha,isliye "veeresh ne kaha

"Waise uncle kaise jaante hai aap rajesh ko aur uske family ko??"suraj ne poochha

"Rajesh ko bachpan se jaanta tha,lekin uske parents se abhi mila"veeresh ne kaha

"Iska matlab pehle kabhi nahi mile the uske parents se??"suraj ne poochha

"Nahi beta,itna close nahi the hum log,abhi to ye ghoomne ka plan tha,to maine rajesh ko bola wo khush hote hue hume invite kiya,aur fir uske. Parents ne anushka ki shaadi ki baat rakhi rajesh ke saath,uske baad to tumhe sab pata hi hai"veeresh bole

"Hmmm"kuch sochte hue suraj uth khada hua

"Chalta hoon uncle raat ko dinner par milte hai"bol chala gaya suraj
Veeresh ko hairan chodkar

Suraj raaste me a hi raha tha ki peecha se anushka ki awaz aayi

"Suraj ??kidhar the yaar wo aanchal kidhar hai??"

Suraj ne jhat se anushka ka haath pakad kar kaha

"Anushka dhyan se suno,aanchal mili hui thi group ke saath"

Anushka kuch bolna chahti thi suraj ne apne haathon se uska muh band kar diya

"Shhhh chup,dhyan se suno rajesh ko phone karke yahan bula lo,aur uske mummy papa ko bhi"suraj bola

"Lekin kyun??matlab...."anushka hakka bakka reh gayi thi.
Uske kuch samajh me nahi a raha tha

"Dekho anushka mai jo bol raha hoon wo karo,aur chalaki se.kisi ko pata nahi chalna chahiye ki hum planning kar rahe hai,ho sake to kuch din mujhse milna bhi chod do"bol suraj tez kadmo ke saath chala gaya aur anushka dekhti rahi suraj ko jaate hue
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LIBYA
"ytm 'iihdar jmye alsujana' huna ya sayidi"ek aadmi bola
(Sab kaidiyon ko yahan laya gaya hai janab)

"shukraan ya sadiqi"suleiman bola
(Dhanyavad dost)

Kareeb 500-700 ke kareeb log the

"You all are united nations representatives for each country"suleiman bola

"Yes"sab ek saath bol pade

"In sabko dhang ke kapde dedo aur nahane ka intezam karo,aaj inke naam ki ek dawat rakho"suleiman ne dilawar se kaha

"Lekin dawat ki kya zaroorat hai ??"dilawar ne poochha

"Hai,abhi filhal ke liye sako nehlao aur saaf suthre kapde pehnao"suleiman bola

Dilawar sar hilakar chala gaya

Suleiman be phone kiya kisi ko
"Plan sahi hai ab tak"

"Sahi waqt par ladki ko udana pada janab,nahi to sab bak deti"naqabposh bola

"Khud ki jaan bhi mushkil se bachi hai tumhari,wo ladka pakad hi leta lagbhag,imran ka shukriya karo jo bach gaye"suleiman bola

"Aisa nahi hai janab"naqabposh bola

"Jo bhi hai mujhe isse lena dena nahi,plan sahi ja raha hai ya nahi"suleiman ne poochha

"Ji sahi ja raha hai"naqabposh bola

"Itna hi sunna tha"bol phone rakh diya Suleiman ne
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KUMARAKOM JUNGLE

"Ab sahi hai tu??"imran dost ki peeth thapthapate hue bola

"Hmmm"anirban apne aansu pochte hue bola

"Chal mai chalta hoon,baad me aata hoon"bol imran uthkar jaane laga

"Imran??"

"Bol ani"

"Thanks yaar,dosti nibhane ke liye,pyaar aur dosti dono ka imtihan tha,pyaar ka to pata nahi,lekin teri dosti ne imtihan paas kar li"anirban bola

Imran chupchap chala gaya
Lekin aaj dil me ek tees si lagi thi uske.apna bolne wala ek bhai hai jo hostel me rakhwakar gayab rehta hai
Sirf anirban se ek saal pehle dosti hui thi

Mast ladka ,dil ka saaf koi khot nahi
Aur aaj usi ka dil toota,khuda ka kaisa insaaf hai ye???

Khair bohut kaam karna hai use.ek baar anirban ki aur dekhkar chala gaya imran

Wahi ashima ko ye sab bohut bura lag raha tha
Pata nahi kyun???upar se kritika par gussa bhi a raha tha.kya nahi kiya kritika ke liye anirban ne,aur aakhir me kritika ne ditch kar hi diya

Agar aaj uski jagah ashima hoti to anirban jaise ladke ko khud propose kar deti

Hain?????

Ye kya ho gaya tha ashima ko??? anirban aur kritika ke baare me sochte hue khud kaise a gayi story me???
Nahi nahi ye sab dimag kharab kar dega, muskurate hue ashima chali gayi apne kamre ki aur

 

[Ashish Jain]

Hnmmm appreciating the story....

 

[Swaraj]

Doston jab maine agent likhna shuru kiya to pata nahi tha itna pyaar milega
Mai koi bada writer nahi hoon.
Bas chota mota likh deta hoon.lekin aaj 1,00,000 views ke baad bohut acha laga
Thanks aur bohut bohut thanks
Aise hi mujhe support kijiye aur apna sugesstion aur views zaroor dete rahiye
Aapka review mere liye bohut important hai
Thanks once again

 

[Swaraj]

Hnmmm appreciating the story....

Thanks a lot bro

 

[Abc123]

KUMARAKOM
veeresh newspaper padh rahe the hotel room ke lawn me jab suraj aaya tha

"Disturb to nahi kiya sir aapko??"suraj muskurate hue bola

"Arey nahi beta,aur ye sir sir kya laga rakha hai,uncle bula sakte ho mujhe"veeresh haste hue bole

"Waise uncle rajesh to aapko sir bulata hai"suraj ne poochha

"Arey beta wo mera student tha,isliye "veeresh ne kaha

"Waise uncle kaise jaante hai aap rajesh ko aur uske family ko??"suraj ne poochha

"Rajesh ko bachpan se jaanta tha,lekin uske parents se abhi mila"veeresh ne kaha

"Iska matlab pehle kabhi nahi mile the uske parents se??"suraj ne poochha

"Nahi beta,itna close nahi the hum log,abhi to ye ghoomne ka plan tha,to maine rajesh ko bola wo khush hote hue hume invite kiya,aur fir uske. Parents ne anushka ki shaadi ki baat rakhi rajesh ke saath,uske baad to tumhe sab pata hi hai"veeresh bole

"Hmmm"kuch sochte hue suraj uth khada hua

"Chalta hoon uncle raat ko dinner par milte hai"bol chala gaya suraj
Veeresh ko hairan chodkar

Suraj raaste me a hi raha tha ki peecha se anushka ki awaz aayi

"Suraj ??kidhar the yaar wo aanchal kidhar hai??"

Suraj ne jhat se anushka ka haath pakad kar kaha

"Anushka dhyan se suno,aanchal mili hui thi group ke saath"

Anushka kuch bolna chahti thi suraj ne apne haathon se uska muh band kar diya

"Shhhh chup,dhyan se suno rajesh ko phone karke yahan bula lo,aur uske mummy papa ko bhi"suraj bola

"Lekin kyun??matlab...."anushka hakka bakka reh gayi thi.
Uske kuch samajh me nahi a raha tha

"Dekho anushka mai jo bol raha hoon wo karo,aur chalaki se.kisi ko pata nahi chalna chahiye ki hum planning kar rahe hai,ho sake to kuch din mujhse milna bhi chod do"bol suraj tez kadmo ke saath chala gaya aur anushka dekhti rahi suraj ko jaate hue
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------
LIBYA
"ytm 'iihdar jmye alsujana' huna ya sayidi"ek aadmi bola
(Sab kaidiyon ko yahan laya gaya hai janab)

"shukraan ya sadiqi"suleiman bola
(Dhanyavad dost)

Kareeb 500-700 ke kareeb log the

"You all are united nations representatives for each country"suleiman bola

"Yes"sab ek saath bol pade

"In sabko dhang ke kapde dedo aur nahane ka intezam karo,aaj inke naam ki ek dawat rakho"suleiman ne dilawar se kaha

"Lekin dawat ki kya zaroorat hai ??"dilawar ne poochha

"Hai,abhi filhal ke liye sako nehlao aur saaf suthre kapde pehnao"suleiman bola

Dilawar sar hilakar chala gaya

Suleiman be phone kiya kisi ko
"Plan sahi hai ab tak"

"Sahi waqt par ladki ko udana pada janab,nahi to sab bak deti"naqabposh bola

"Khud ki jaan bhi mushkil se bachi hai tumhari,wo ladka pakad hi leta lagbhag,imran ka shukriya karo jo bach gaye"suleiman bola

"Aisa nahi hai janab"naqabposh bola

"Jo bhi hai mujhe isse lena dena nahi,plan sahi ja raha hai ya nahi"suleiman ne poochha

"Ji sahi ja raha hai"naqabposh bola

"Itna hi sunna tha"bol phone rakh diya Suleiman ne
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------
KUMARAKOM JUNGLE

"Ab sahi hai tu??"imran dost ki peeth thapthapate hue bola

"Hmmm"anirban apne aansu pochte hue bola

"Chal mai chalta hoon,baad me aata hoon"bol imran uthkar jaane laga

"Imran??"

"Bol ani"

"Thanks yaar,dosti nibhane ke liye,pyaar aur dosti dono ka imtihan tha,pyaar ka to pata nahi,lekin teri dosti ne imtihan paas kar li"anirban bola

Imran chupchap chala gaya
Lekin aaj dil me ek tees si lagi thi uske.apna bolne wala ek bhai hai jo hostel me rakhwakar gayab rehta hai
Sirf anirban se ek saal pehle dosti hui thi

Mast ladka ,dil ka saaf koi khot nahi
Aur aaj usi ka dil toota,khuda ka kaisa insaaf hai ye???

Khair bohut kaam karna hai use.ek baar anirban ki aur dekhkar chala gaya imran

Wahi ashima ko ye sab bohut bura lag raha tha
Pata nahi kyun???upar se kritika par gussa bhi a raha tha.kya nahi kiya kritika ke liye anirban ne,aur aakhir me kritika ne ditch kar hi diya

Agar aaj uski jagah ashima hoti to anirban jaise ladke ko khud propose kar deti

Hain?????

Ye kya ho gaya tha ashima ko??? anirban aur kritika ke baare me sochte hue khud kaise a gayi story me???
Nahi nahi ye sab dimag kharab kar dega, muskurate hue ashima chali gayi apne kamre ki aur

Nice update Bro

 

[Avir]

Mast