Romance AGENT-02 THE KERALA TRAILS (Completed)

[Siraj Patel]

Hello, Ladies & Gentleman,
We are so glad to Introduce Ultimate Story Contest of this year.

Jaise ki aap sabhi Jante Hain is baar Hum USC contest chala rahe hain aur Kuch Din pahle hi Humne Rules & Queries Thread ka announce kar diya tha aur ab Ultimate Story Contest ka Entry Thread air kar diya hai jo 17th, Nov 2019, 11:59 PM ko close hoga.

Khair ab main point Par Aate Hain Jaisa ki entry thread aired ho chuka hai isliye aap Sabhi readers aur writers se Meri personally request hai ki is contest mein aap Jarur participate kare aur Apni kalpnao ko shabdon ka rasta dikha ke yaha pesh kare ho sakta hai log use pasand kare.
Aur Jo readers nahi likhna chahte wo bakiyo ki story padhke review de sakte hai mujhe bahut Khushi Hogi agar aap is contest mein participate lekar apni story likhenge to.

Ye aap Sabhi Ke liye ek bahut hi sunhara avsar hai isliye Aage Bade aur apni Kalpanao ko shabdon Mein likhkar Duniya Ko dikha De.

Ye ek short story contest hai jisme Minimum 800 words se maximum 6000 words tak allowed hai itne hi words mein apni story complete Karni Hogi, Aur ek hi post mein complete karna hai aur Entry Thread mein post karna hai.
I hope aap mujhe niraash nahi Karenge aur is contest Mein Jarur participate Lenge.



On Behalf of Admin Team
Regards :- Siraj Patel

 

[BhattiDon]

Bhai agent 3 kab start kar rahe ho

 

[Vikram singh rana]

Hello bro.....
So I'm here for reviews....

First of all....thanks to gave us a very beautiful and thrilling story to read....

And congratulation for completing this beautiful thread...

Iss story me 2 hero the....
first...sooraj
Secondly- mr anirban aka ani

Sooraj ka presence of mind bilkul pahle ki tarah dikhaya hai...ya ye kahna behtar hoga ki pahle se jyada achche tarike se....
Wo pahle se thoda jyada khatarnaak ho gaya hai....because of myra....but that's a part of secret agents life....

Anirban....sooraj's cousin and a traini also....
Lekin iska role utna achcha nahi tha jitna ki ho sakta tha.....
I mean iska friend khud ak terrorist tha....I mean khud ak secret service trainni hone ka baad bhi ise kuch knowledge nahi thi....
OR agar ise chhod bhi de to....
Baaki ki story me bhi iska role kuch aisa hee tha...kaise ki ye ak machine hai...probably ise koi operat kar raha ho...OR ye bas instructions follow kar raha ho....

Ashima- her role was brilliant....I mean she's awesome at her presence.....
I like her personally....
And her death.....that was an extremely emotional moment....very well described...

Shreya....a villain turned heroine....iska role bhi thoda azib tha....wese to hamesha ye antihero hee thi....
Lekin jab ani ne iski maang bhari....OR bas....
She's just completely changed....her act like a typical gharelu wife....mujhe samajh nahi aaya....

Villain...OR we can say....villain for this part....sullaiman....
What I say....I like your villain very much....more then ani and sooraj....
Use jis tarah se har jagah exploit kiya gaya...DABAYA gaya....
And force kiya gaya to become a terrorist....
That all scenes was awesome....
Brilliant....

And last ....
Anushka.....leading heroine.....uska role bhi kaafi achchi tarah se dikhaya gaya tha....OR wo character mujhe kaafi pasand bhi aaya tha....

But her death....mujhe wo thoda unrelated see lagi....
Jaise ki uske pass grenade kaise aaya....jabki use is se just pahle waale scene mai....sagaai ke kapdo mai dikhaya gaya hai....OR saath hee....usne bulletproof jacket bhi apne sipaahiyo ke kahne par hee padna tha tab....

Ab normal police waale grenade to use karte nahi hai...OR maan lo karte bhi hai to bhi jo shaks....jacket bhi kisi or ke kahne par pahne wo pahle hee grenade apne haath me kyo lega....

Story ke baaki ke characters achche the....

Ho sakta hai aapko review thoda negative lage...but jo chij maine observe ki wo bata di....
Very good story....
And storyline....
Keep writing....
Entertain us...
Thanks....

 

[Fighter]

Super & Very Nice story bro


1st part ki tarh y b kamaal ki story h

 

[Swaraj]

Super & Very Nice story bro


1st part ki tarh y b kamaal ki story h

Thanks a lot bro

 

[Beast]

Really a great story

 

[Swaraj]

Really a great story

Thanks a lot bro
Agent part 1 nahi padha to padh lijiye

 

[Beast]

Bhai app ki koi story nhi jisa mana na parha ho

 

[Sandesh bhoravkar]

3rd part kab chalu hoga

 

[Anky@123]

Swaraj bhai sabke jesa mera bhi same Question hai agent 3 ko lekar ki wo kab tak aayega bus aap thoda bata de .aap ki story ke liye sabhi readers bekrar rehte h , I know aap abhi ajnabi 2 me busy hai fir bhi keval man ki tassali ke liye bata de agent 3 ke bare me