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Hello, Ladies 
& Gentleman, 
We are so glad to Introduce Ultimate Story Contest of this year.
Jaise ki aap sabhi Jante Hain is baar Hum USC contest chala rahe hain aur Kuch Din pahle hi Humne Rules & Queries Thread ka announce kar diya tha aur ab Ultimate Story Contest ka Entry Thread air kar diya hai jo 17th, Nov 2019, 11:59 PM ko close hoga.
Khair ab main point Par Aate Hain Jaisa ki entry thread aired ho chuka hai isliye aap Sabhi readers aur writers se Meri personally request hai ki is contest mein aap Jarur participate kare aur Apni kalpnao ko shabdon ka rasta dikha ke yaha pesh kare ho sakta hai log use pasand kare.
Aur Jo readers nahi likhna chahte wo bakiyo ki story padhke review de sakte hai mujhe bahut Khushi Hogi agar aap is contest mein participate lekar apni story likhenge to.
Ye aap Sabhi Ke liye ek bahut hi sunhara avsar hai isliye Aage Bade aur apni Kalpanao ko shabdon Mein likhkar Duniya Ko dikha De.
Ye ek short story contest hai jisme Minimum 800 words se maximum 6000 words tak allowed hai itne hi words mein apni story complete Karni Hogi, Aur ek hi post mein complete karna hai aur Entry Thread mein post karna hai.
I hope aap mujhe niraash nahi Karenge aur is contest Mein Jarur participate Lenge.
On Behalf of Admin Team
Regards :- Siraj Patel
& Gentleman, We are so glad to Introduce Ultimate Story Contest of this year.
Jaise ki aap sabhi Jante Hain is baar Hum USC contest chala rahe hain aur Kuch Din pahle hi Humne Rules & Queries Thread ka announce kar diya tha aur ab Ultimate Story Contest ka Entry Thread air kar diya hai jo 17th, Nov 2019, 11:59 PM ko close hoga.
Khair ab main point Par Aate Hain Jaisa ki entry thread aired ho chuka hai isliye aap Sabhi readers aur writers se Meri personally request hai ki is contest mein aap Jarur participate kare aur Apni kalpnao ko shabdon ka rasta dikha ke yaha pesh kare ho sakta hai log use pasand kare.
Aur Jo readers nahi likhna chahte wo bakiyo ki story padhke review de sakte hai mujhe bahut Khushi Hogi agar aap is contest mein participate lekar apni story likhenge to.
Ye aap Sabhi Ke liye ek bahut hi sunhara avsar hai isliye Aage Bade aur apni Kalpanao ko shabdon Mein likhkar Duniya Ko dikha De.
Ye ek short story contest hai jisme Minimum 800 words se maximum 6000 words tak allowed hai itne hi words mein apni story complete Karni Hogi, Aur ek hi post mein complete karna hai aur Entry Thread mein post karna hai.
I hope aap mujhe niraash nahi Karenge aur is contest Mein Jarur participate Lenge.
On Behalf of Admin Team
Regards :- Siraj Patel
Vikram singh rana
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Sure bro aur meri ongoing story AJNABEE 2 and beauty and the beast bhi padh kar review dijiye
Vikram singh rana
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Hello bro....
So I'm here for the reviews....
First of all....
Thank you to gave us a very beautiful and thrilling story to read.....
And congratulation for completing this thread.....
Now for the story.....
Very well written....and very beautifully described....
Mostly.....Saraj's presence of mind.....
Just awesome.....
At starting he is just a normal school going boy....curious to know about his father....then he became a RAW trainni.....his comic timing.....action everything is perfect.....
Myra....a college going girl with her own difficulties....
She is perfect for sooraj....and the way you described here love about sooraj....brilliant....
And all other characters was very good.....
A very good mixture of romance....suspence...action and thrilling story....
And of course a very good storyline...
And at last....
I think something is missing.....aamm like....anvesha.....and information about sooraj's father.....
And it seems like these all things...ammmm like very small part of a big plan....
Ho sakta hai inka next part me kuch ho....
OR ha kuch logo ka kahna tha ki unhe story ka end pasand nahi aaya....but mere hisaab se....iss story ka end is se better nahi ho sakta tha....
And i like it very much....
Anyways...
Very good story.....
Keep writing....
Entertain us....
Thanks...
So I'm here for the reviews....
First of all....
Thank you to gave us a very beautiful and thrilling story to read.....
And congratulation for completing this thread.....
Now for the story.....
Very well written....and very beautifully described....
Mostly.....Saraj's presence of mind.....
Just awesome.....
At starting he is just a normal school going boy....curious to know about his father....then he became a RAW trainni.....his comic timing.....action everything is perfect.....
Myra....a college going girl with her own difficulties....
She is perfect for sooraj....and the way you described here love about sooraj....brilliant....
And all other characters was very good.....
A very good mixture of romance....suspence...action and thrilling story....
And of course a very good storyline...
And at last....
I think something is missing.....aamm like....anvesha.....and information about sooraj's father.....
And it seems like these all things...ammmm like very small part of a big plan....
Ho sakta hai inka next part me kuch ho....
OR ha kuch logo ka kahna tha ki unhe story ka end pasand nahi aaya....but mere hisaab se....iss story ka end is se better nahi ho sakta tha....
And i like it very much....
Anyways...
Very good story.....
Keep writing....
Entertain us....
Thanks...
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Hello, Ladies  & Gentleman, 
We are so glad to Introduce Ultimate Story Contest of this year.
Jaise ki aap sabhi Jante Hain is baar Hum USC contest chala rahe hain aur Kuch Din pahle hi Humne Rules & Queries Thread ka announce kar diya tha aur ab Ultimate Story Contest ka Entry Thread air kar diya hai jo 10th, June 2020, 11:59 PM ko close hoga.
Khair ab main point Par Aate Hain Jaisa ki entry thread aired ho chuka hai isliye aap Sabhi readers aur writers se Meri personally request hai ki is contest mein aap Jarur participate kare aur Apni kalpnao ko shabdon ka rasta dikha ke yaha pesh kare ho sakta hai log use pasand kare.
Aur Jo readers nahi likhna chahte wo bakiyo ki story padhke review de sakte hai mujhe bahut Khushi Hogi agar aap is contest mein participate lekar apni story likhenge to.
Ye aap Sabhi Ke liye ek bahut hi sunhara avsar hai isliye Aage Bade aur apni Kalpanao ko shabdon Mein likhkar Duniya Ko dikha De.
Ye ek short story contest hai jisme Minimum 800 words se maximum 6000 words tak allowed hai itne hi words mein apni story complete Karni Hogi, Aur ek hi post mein complete karna hai aur Entry Thread mein post karna hai.
I hope aap mujhe niraash nahi Karenge aur is contest Mein Jarur participate Lenge.
Rules Check Karne k Liye Ye Thread Use karein :- Rules And Queries Thread
Entry Post Karne k Liye Ye thread Use Karein :- Entry Thread
Reviews Post Karne K liye Ye thread Use karein :- Reviews Thread
On Behalf of Admin Team
Regards :- Xforum Staff..
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Ye baat dil pe lag gayi, kadva lakin sach bhi hain ki ending hamesha achhi ho ye zaroori nahi hain.
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Thanks bro,
Ending hamesha achi ho ye zaroori nahi hai, bas story dil par hit karni chahiye