Romance AGENT(completed)

[Siraj Patel]

wow Bahut hi Shandar aur lajawab Brilliant update bhai ekdum jhakaas dhamakedaar mind blowing,
Aapne sari baton ko bade hi behtareen dhang se dikhaya hai.
Ek ek baat Itni detail Mein likhi Gayi Hai Jaise Kahani na hokar sab kuch asliyat mein ghatit ho raha ho,
Aap ki mehnat aur imagination ne is Kahani Mein Char Chand laga diye hai,
Keep going
We will wait for next update

 

[Swaraj]

wow Bahut hi Shandar aur lajawab Brilliant update bhai ekdum jhakaas dhamakedaar mind blowing,
Aapne sari baton ko bade hi behtareen dhang se dikhaya hai.
Ek ek baat Itni detail Mein likhi Gayi Hai Jaise Kahani na hokar sab kuch asliyat mein ghatit ho raha ho,
Aap ki mehnat aur imagination ne is Kahani Mein Char Chand laga diye hai,
Keep going
We will wait for next update

Thanks bro aap logo ke reviews padhkar acha lagta hai aur poori koshish karta hoon ki story ko aur behtar dhang se likh saku
Aap logo se hi inspiration milti hai.
Please aise hi support karte rahiye aur mere doosre stories "badla " aur "pagle sahab ki kabr "padhkar review de

 

[Kratos]

Nice update.. Ek annar(suraj) aur sau beemar(dushman)..mayra ne dil to laga liya suraj se dekhte hai ab nibha payegi celina to sweet poison ka kaam kar rahi hai

 

[Swaraj]

Nice update.. Ek annar(suraj) aur sau beemar(dushman)..mayra ne dil to laga liya suraj se dekhte hai ab nibha payegi celina to sweet poison ka kaam kar rahi hai

Thanks for the wonderful review bro.
Myra ka pyar nischal hai,wo suraj ke dil se pyaar karti hai,rahi baat celina ki.to use aakash ne hi to kaam diya hai.
Aur abhi tak to sab kuch sahi ja raha hai uske hisab se.
Story ke saath bane rahiye aur aise hi encourage kijiye

 

[Mbindas]

Bhai bohot hi standard update diya h. Prof. Anti nuclear programme banana chahte hai jisse nuclear weapons lunch karne ke software hai wo prof. ke banaye gaye programme ke direction par chale jisse dushman ke weapons reserve ki gai jagah me hi fat jaye.

Brilliant thinking hai. Bhai apki kya imagination hai.

Very nice and sci-fi update.

 

[PrinceDevil]

Bhai ye story to Ek Tha Tiger ke kuch parts se match karne lagi hai jaise "Tiger, Manish ban ke Professor ka interveiw lene jata hai" wese hi "Suraj parhai ke bahane jata hai" Lekin bhai plz yaha Myra ko Zoya ki tara mat bana dena......

BTW ... Your writting skill is amaizing ...


Keep Posting....

Our best wishes will be always with you.

 

[Swaraj]

Bhai bohot hi standard update diya h. Prof. Anti nuclear programme banana chahte hai jisse nuclear weapons lunch karne ke software hai wo prof. ke banaye gaye programme ke direction par chale jisse dushman ke weapons reserve ki gai jagah me hi fat jaye.

Brilliant thinking hai. Bhai apki kya imagination hai.

Very nice and sci-fi update.

Thanks bro aap logo ke pyaar se hi story build ho paayi hai.jitna ho sake story ko simple but interesting rakhne ki koshish karta hoon.aise hi reviews dete rahiye aur encourage karte rahiye

 

[Swaraj]

Bhai ye story to Ek Tha Tiger ke kuch parts se match karne lagi hai jaise "Tiger, Manish ban ke Professor ka interveiw lene jata hai" wese hi "Suraj parhai ke bahane jata hai" Lekin bhai plz yaha Myra ko Zoya ki tara mat bana dena......

BTW ... Your writting skill is amaizing ...


Keep Posting....

Our best wishes will be always with you.

Thanks bro lekin ek tha tiger me salman khan bohut shatir khiladi tha.
Lekin yahan suraj thoda kaccha hai,emotional hai aur abhi bhi training period me hi hai.
Uske seniors usko koi bada mission na dekar sirf observation ke liye kaha hai.
Lekin suraj fir bhi kam khatro se ghira nahi hai.
Bade bade chehre benakab honge aur kai plans ka pata chalega.
Story ke saath bane rahiye

 

[W@gle]

Nice update biradar

 

[Monkey D. Dragon]

Awesome one bro
Suraj is getting closer to his mission
Akash is mad at Suraj
Celina is after Suraj
Looks like he will have a hard time in the next
But why didn't Myra asked Celina why the hell she knows all about Suraj??;!!!!
Great going like a thrilling movie
Keep it up
Waiting for next
Don't be late