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hariya man mein , [
ssss saala kia karo bhenchod mera loda to beth ney ka naam hee nahi ley raha uffff par jab itna jabardast maal paas hee ho to kaisy ... mera loda chain ki saans lene dega ,]

hariya kay lund mein tezi sey khoon dodh raha tha wo to bss .... saba kay baarey mein soch soch kar ... lund masal raha tha ... uski pant mein bara tambu bana howa tha ... upar sey usney kambal bhi aurha howa tha lekin ... tambu itna bara tha kay kambal par pahad ki tarha shape bana howa tha ,

wahi ab arif . jameel khan ... zareen ...saba gehri nend mein soo rhy thy ... hariya sey bhi ab nahi raha jaa raha tha ... tabhi wo uthney hee wala tha .. bathroom janey kay liye ,

saba apni birth sey utar jaati hay aur wo bahar nikal jaati hay door kholky aur washroom ki taraf chali jaati hay ,
wahi ab hariya ye dhek kar fatafat apni birth sey utar ta hay ... aur tezi sey door kholkay .. washroom ki taraf badh jata hay ,

hariya tezi sey chal raha tha ... uski pant mein bara tambu bana howa tha ... chalny ki waja sey uska lund hil raha tha upar neechy ,

ab aap soch sakty ho kay ... hariya kitna garam hay is time ... uska badey sey lund mein ghooday ki raftar sey khoon dodh raha tha ,

wahi saba washroom mein bethi howi thi ... usey kiya pata kay darwazey kay bahar ab hariya aakar khara ho chuka hay ,

hariya ab saba kay darwaza khoolney ka intezar kar raha tha ... kay jaisy saba darwaza khooley aur wo foran ghus jaye andar ,

hariya sey intezar nahi ho raha tha ... wo to bss ready tha ... tabhi washroom ka gate khoolta hay ... aur ye dhek kar hariya tezi sey gate ko pakarta hay aur jhat sey andar ghus jata hay saba ko dhakka dey kar ... aur darwaza band kardeta hay ,

saba hariya ko dhek kar aik dam heran thi ... aur shock bhi thi kay ye aik dam howa kiya hay ,

ab washroom mein saba aur hariya thy .... saba bilkul murti ki tarha khadi howi thi aur wo shock thi ,

wahi hariya usey ajeeb si nazaro sey dhek raha tha ,
tabhi saba ko gussa aata hay aur wo bolti hay ,

saba , ye kiya badtameezi hay mein shor macha
dungi janey do mujey ,

hariya uski baat sunkar muskra deta hay aur bolta ha ,

hariya , ssss kitni kamal lag rahi hay tu saba ufff
mujey to laga tha kay ab ham nahi mil paye gy kio kay tu chali jayi gi lekin kismat dhek mein bhi tery saath hee tery ghar chal raha ho ,

saba ko ye sunkar gussa aata hay ,
saba , apni auqat mein raho tum samjey warna mein abhi jaa kar arif aur sabko bata do gi ummmhh ...,

saba apni baat bol hee rahi thi tabhi hariya ney jhat sey usey baho mein daboch kay apny kaaley honto ko saba kay gulabi honto par rakh diya tha ,

saba machli ka tarha machal Rahi thi ... aur wo apni puri taqat laga kar apna cherha peechy keench Rahi thi ,
par hariya ney apny aik hath sey uski kamar ko pakra howa tha .. aur dusra hath uskey chehry kay peechy rakha howa tha ... taakey saba apna chehra peechy nahi kar paye ,

saba , mmmmhhh ummmmhhhh mhhmm ,

saba kuch bolna chah rahi thi par bol nahi paa rahi thi kio kay hariya kay kaaley hont uskey gulabi hont sey jhudey howy thy ,

hariya bohot roughly saba kay hont chus raha tha .. aur wo apni zaban nikal kar uskey muh mein daalney ko koshish kar raha tha ,

par saba aisa nahi honay dey rahi thi ... wo abhi bhi tarap rahi thi .. aur peechy hatnay ki koshish kar rahi thi ,

saba ko kuch bhi samaj nahi arha tha .. kio kay ye sab itni jaldi howa .... wahi hariys weshiyo ki tarha uskey hont chus raha tha ,

wahi hariya ka hath saba ki kamar sey sarak kar gand par chala gaya tha ,
gand par hath aatey hee hariya gand ko zor sey daboch leta hay ,

saba , ummmhhhh mmmhhhhh mmhh ,

saba aik dam machal jaati hay hariya ki is harkat sey
aur wo dubara peechy hatney ki koshish karti hay par hariya ki takat aagey wo nakam hojati ha harbaar ki tarha ,

wahi ab saba pay do hamley horhy thy aik taraf uskey hont jo hariya jakdey howy thy aur dusri taraf uski gand jo hariya apny pathar jaisy hath sey masal raha tha ,

hariya ka lund aik dam lohey ki tarha khada howa tha jo pant kay upar sey hee saba ki chut par dastak dey daha tha .... saba bhi ye mahsoos karti hay usey apni raano wali side par moti see cheez mahsoos hoti hay ,

jo uski leggy aur kameez kay upar sey hee chut kay side takra rahi thi ,

yehi ab 5minute sey zaida hogaye thy dono ko kiss karty howy ... saba kai baar koshish karti hay kay uski pakar sey nikal jaye par aisa nahi kar paati ,

ab uska jisam bhi dheela par raha tha ... aur wo wapis sab kuch bhool rahi thi ... kay wo aik parhi likhi ameer ghar ki paak saaf aurat aur bahu hay ,

hariya ki maharat aaj kaam arhi thi ... kio kay hariya janta hay kay aurat ko kaisy garam karna hay ,

saba ki hiljul ab band hogayi thi ... aisa lag raha rha tha wo har maan chuki hay ,

bathroom mein bss halki halki kiss karney ki awaz gunj rahi thi ... lekin bahar sey koi nahi sun sakta tha kio kay train ki chuk chuk ki awaz ... unki kiss karney ki awaz ko daba rahi thi ,

yaha hariya bhi ab jaan chuka tha ... kay saba ab hilna band kar chuki hay .. lekin wo abhi bhi puri tarha se uski kiss ka saath nahi dey rahi thi ,

hariya bohot baar apni zaban uskey muh kay andar dalney ki par saba aisa nahi karney dey rahi thi ,

ab hariya kiss kartey howy hee apny kadam thorey aagey karta hay jis sey saba bhi apny kadam peechy karti hay ... aur aik dam sey darwazey par takra jaati hay ,

kio kay hariya yehi chahta tha ... ab wo aur roughly usey kiss karta hay ,

wahi hariya apny dono hath saba ki baho sey nikaltey howy darwazey par rakha howa tha ... aur uska lund leggy aur kameez kay upar sey hee saba ki raano mein chub raha tha ,

hariya thora shock bhi tha ... abhi thori der phly saba kitney nakhrey kar rahi thi ... aur ab jabkey usney usey apni pakar sey bhi chorh diya tha aur wo darwazey sey takra rahi thi wo chahti to usey dhakka dey kar peechy bhi kar sakti thi ,

lekin saba ney aisa nahi kiya ... wo bss chumban mein khoi howi thi ... hala kay usey pata tha kay hariya usey chorh chuka hay .. lekin phir bhi wo uska saath dey rahi thi ,

yaha ab dono ko kiss kartey howy 10 min hojatey hay aur hariya ab apny hont peechy karleta hay ,

saba hariya kay hont hata tey hee gehri gehri sans lerahi thi aur uski chuchiya upar neechy ho rahi thi
jo hariya barey goor sey dhek raha tha ,

saba kay honto sey lipstick gayab ho chuki thi ...... aur wo herat angez nazro sey hariya ko dhek rahi thi
uskey chehry par gussey kay bhav thy ,
wahi hariya usko hawas bhari nazro sey dhek raha tha .... uskey chehry par kaatil muskan thi ,

saba kay hont thuk sey bharey howy thy .... jisey wo apny bazo sey saaf karleti hay ... wahi ab usey
thori sharam aaney lagti hay ... kio kay ab wo asli dunya mein wapis arhi thi ,

saba ab sharam kay maarey chupchaap khari howi thi .... kio kay yaha train kay wahsroom mein wo
kisi gairmard kay saath akeli khari howi hay ..... aur koi bhi unko dhek sakta hay bahar nikalty howy ,

wahi saba ab yaha sey jaaney ka sochti hay ..... kio kay ab wo hariya sey behas nahi karna
chahti thi .... kio wo janti thi hariya sey behas karny ka koi fayda nahi kio kay
... wo hariya saamney pata nahi kio dheeli parjati hay ,

par hariya to pagal ho raha tha ... uska lund lohey ki rod ki tarha khada howa tha aur pant mein
bara sa tambu bana howa tha .... aur jhatkey maar raha tha ,

saba ab hath utha kay hariya ko dhakka dey kar peechy karti hay .... jis sey hariya peechy ki taraf
hojata hay ... waisy bhi train ka washroom itna bara to hota nahi hay .... isliye wo kuch zyada
peechy nahi ja pata hay ,

wahi saba mur gayi thi aur darwazey ka lock khool hee rahi thi kay ..... hariya ney usey peechy
sey jakar liya tha ,

hariya ka lund seedha saba ki gand ki darar mein dhas raha tha .... saba to jaisy shock hogayi thi
hariya ki is harkat par ..... kio kay saba ko bilkul bhi expect nahi tha kay hariya phir sey
usey pakar ley ga ,

saba uska lund achi tarha sey mahsoos kar paa rahi thi apni gand par .. saba ko aisa
lag raha tha jaisy koi moti si cheez uski gand ki daraar mein zabardasti ghus rahi hay ,

wahi hariya peechy sey apna muh uskey kaan kay paas lejata hay aur bolta hay ,
hariya , abhi kaam pura hee kaha hay bahu rani ,

aur ye kehkay hariya peechy sey uski gand par jhatka maar deta hay ... jis sey uska lund
saba ki naram gand par dhas jata hay ,

hariya ki is harkat par saba ki siskari nikal jaati hay ,
saba , aahhhhhhh...... badtameez insan chorho mujey janey do kameene ,

hariya ab sochta hay kay .... wo kuch zyada hee kar raha hay .... usey zabardasti nahi saba ko
paana hay .... hariya usey seduce karkey paana chahta hay .... hariya samaj jata hay kay
wo jaldbazi mein galti kar raha hay ,

hariya , thik hay bahu rani loo chorh diya ,

hariya ye kehkay usey chorh deta hay ..... wahi saba bina peechy dheky foran sey darwaza kholkar
bhaag jaati hay ,

wahi saba tezi sey chal rahi thi .... uski gand ki daraar par kameez ghusi howi thi .. jaisy kisi ney
koi moti cheez sey kameez andar ki ho .... wahi saba ab apni birth mein agayi thi aur wo apny kaprey
sahi karkey let jati hay ,

uska dimag bss wahi atka howa tha ..... uski saansy pholi howi thi .... wahi hariya abhi tak bathroom
mein khada howa tha ..... ab uska loda bhi beth raha tha ... par jo bhi ho aaj usney paheli baar saba
kay hont chusliye ... aur to aur gand mein lund bhi ghis diya ,

hariya man mein , [ abey hariya saaley kiya kar raha hay .....tujey jaldbazi nahi karni ... acha
howa mein aagey kuch nahi kiya warna mein galti kardeta ,]

ab hariya bhi washroom sey nikal kar .... apny birth ki taraf ajata hay jaisy hee wo doorkholta
hay .... wo dhekta hay kay sab soo rhy hay ... uski nazar saba ki taraf jaati hay ... jo apny apko
pura kambal mein dhaki howi thi ,

hariya ab bina der kiye upar apni birth par charh jata hay .. aur pao lambey karkey let jata hay ,

saba ko bhi door khulney ayi thi aur wo samaj gayi thi kay hariya aa chuka hay ... saba ko bilkul
bhi yakeen nahi tha kay hariya train mein bhi ye sab karey ga .... kahi na kahi saba ko ismein
apni galti lagti hay .... kio kay agar wo hariya kay aagey kamzoor nahi parti to wo aisa
nahi karta ,

wahi ab puri train mein kamooshi chahi howi thi ..... hariya bhi kambal dhak kar aankhey band
kiye neend mein ja raha tha ,

par saba abhi bhi wo sab soch rahi thi .... kio kay aaj paheli baar usey aisy kisi ney kiss ki hay
arif bss 10 second hee kiss karta hay ... wo bhi pyar sey ..... lekin hariya ney bohot roughly
aur der tak kiss ki ..... pata nahi kio saba ko hariya ka andaz andar andar pasand aya ,

saba man mein , [ kiya aisy bhi koi kiss karta hay ... par arif ney to aisa aaj tak nahi kiya
... kio ye hariya har cheez alag karta hay ... par jo bhi ho mujey ajeeb kio mahsoos howa
jab hariya kiss kar raha tha .... ohhhhhh cheeee saba tu phir ganda soch rahi hay
akhir uski auqat kiya hay tery aagey wo buddha admi ganda kaala aur 2 kodi ka hay
tu arif ko dhoka dey rahi hay ,]

saba khud par hee gussa kar rahi thi ...... usey bura lagta hay kay wo arif ko dhoka dey rahi hay
par ... kahi na kahi arif bhi uski zaroorty puri nahi kar raha ... jis karan wo behak rahi hay ,

yaha ab train ki chuk chuk kay alawa kisi tarha ki awaz nahi thi .... kio kay sab khamooshi sey soo
gaye thy ,

hariya bhi ab gehri neend mein chala gaya tha ..... saba bhi sochty sochty kabki soo gayi ,

time beet gaya tha ,
ab subah hogayi thi ... train mein sab soo kay uth rahy thy ... arif jameel khan zareen hariya saba
ye bhi uth gaye thy soo kay ,

bss kuch ghanty rahy gaye thy delhi ko aaney mein ..... yaha sab washroom sey fresh hokar aagaye
thy ...... aur nashty kar rahy thy ,

saba hariya ko ignore kar rahi thi .... kio jo kuch raat ko washroom mein howa usey kaafi sharam
arhi thi hariya sey nazrey milaney mein ,

wahi hariya besharmo ki tarha nashta kar raha tha .... aur arif sey hasi mazak kar raha tha ,

... arif ko kiya pata ... kay raat ko uski hee biwi ko unkay aik wafadar naukar ney washroom mein pakar
kar uskey hont chusey thy ..... wahi saba bhi dhek rahi thi kay hariya kaisy sakoon sey betha howa
uskey shauhar sey mazak kar raha hay .... saba ko gussa bhi arha tha hariya par ,

ab kaafi time nikal jata hay ,
wahi ab saba bhi sab kuch bhool jati hay .... wo bss bahar kay nazarey dhekny mein khoi howi thi ,

nazarey nazarey dhekty dhekty kab delhi ajata hay ...... pata hee nahi chalta .... train ab dheere ho rahi
thi...... delhi ka station aa chuka tha ... hariya bhi bohot josh mein tha apny kadam kaafi saalo
baad sheher mein rakhney kay liye ,

to isee tarha .... train aik break maar kar ruk jaati hay ...... aur ab coolie train par jhapak parey thy
aur arif bhi aik coolie ko pakar leta hay .... aur wo saaman bahar nikalwa leta hay ,

wahi ab sab train sey utar gaye thy ... hariya apni nazrey charo aur karkey station ko dhek raha tha
kio kay 11 saal pahely aur ab kay delhi mein bohot change agya tha ,

yaha ab sab station sey bahar aa chukey thy .... arif aik taxi kara leta hay bari waali .. wahi coolie
usee taxi mein bag saman rak deta hay .. aur arif usey paisy de kar taxi mein beth jata ,

aur wo sab taxi mein beth jatey ....... aur taxi chal deti hay ghar ki taraf ,

yaha hariya kaafi joshila hogia tha ... usey sabar nahi ho raha tha kay ab wo saba kay
ghar mein jaye ga ,



to be continued ,,,
Superb,mind blowing update.... excellent writing
 

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Bahut badhia update hai bhai.
 

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Bohot achi story hai apki,Aise hi roj bade bade mast update diya karo..
 

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arif ,
saba saba uth jao 11 baj gaye hay janey ki
tayyari bhi Karni ha ,

arif saba ko hila kar utha raha tha par saba koi jawab nahi dey rahi thi .... akhir kar arif ki kayi koshish kay baad saba uth jati hay ,
aur wo apni aankhey masalty howy arif sey kehti hay ,
saba , hmm uth gayi na ab ,

arif , thik hay mein neechy ja raha ho aik bara surprise hay tumharey Liye ,

saba arif ki baat sunkar soch mein par jaati hay .. aur wo bolti hay ,
saba , kaisa surprise batao na ,
arif , nahi wo to neechy aakar hee pata chaley ga ,

ye keh kay arif kamrey sey bahar chaley jata hay ... wahi saba bed par bethy howy soch rahi thi kaisa surprise hay akhir ,
kio kay saba ko ajtak arif ney surprise nahi diya tha to saba kay liye bohot heran kun tha kay arif aur surprise ki baat ,

khair saba ab bina time zaya kiye bathroom Chali jaati hay .... kareeb thori der baad woh naha kar bahar ajati hay aur... green color ki kameez aur leggings pehen leti hay ,

kio kay aaj to akhri din tha yaha gao mein ... isliye wo achi tarha tayyar hojati hay .... saba kabhi bhi ziyada makeup nahi karti thi ... wo hameesha sey hee light sa makeup karti ayi hay ,

kio kay saba hay hee itni khobsurat kay wo bina makeup kay bhi pyari lagti hay ... aur light makeup sey uska cherhy par alag hee glow ajata hay ,

upar sey uska figure ... jo uski khobsurti mein char chand laga deta hay ... par kabhi bhi saba ney apni khobsoorti par ghamand nahi kiya ,

khair ab saba tayyar hokar neechy janey kay liye kadam barha leti hay ... aur wo bohot excited thi surprise kay liye ... kio kay aj paheli bar arif ney surprise ka naam liya tha ,

wahi ab saba neechy aagayi thi .... arif aur jameel khan sofay par bethy howy thy ,

saba aatey hee arif sey bolti hay ,
saba , ab batao na kiya surprise hay ,
arif , han han batata ho pahly beth to jao ,

saba uski baat sunkar beth jaati hay ,
arif , papa aur mummy bhi chal rahy hay hamarey
saath delhi ,

saba arif ki baat sunkar kush hojati hay ... aur kehti ha,
saba , sach mein ... jhoot to nahi bol rahy ,
arif , arey nahi mein kio jhoot bolunga papa sey pochlo ,
saba , papa g kiya arif sach keh rhy hay ,

jameel khan , han saba beti ham bhi chal rahy tum dono kay saath ,

saba ko ab yakeen ajata hay .... jameel khan ki baat sunkar aur wo kush hojati hay ... kio kay usey bura laga tha zareen kay liye jab jameel khan ney raat ko mana kardiya tha par achanak raat ko hee jameel khan ney apna decision change karliya tha ,

wahi zareen bhi bohot kush thi wo kamrey mein saman pack kar rahi thi janey kay liye ,

hariya bhi apny ghar par apna saman kaprey bag mein daal raha tha ... usney ticket subah 10 bajey hee book kara liti ... par saba ko abhi tak nahi pata tha kay hariya bhi unkay saath delhi jaa raha hay ,

saba ko to lag raha tha sirf jameel khan aur zareen hee ja rahy hay ,

khair ab saba bhi nashta kar leti hay ... aur arif ney kamrey sey apna sara saman laa kar neechy rak diya tha ,

ghari mein time 12;30 hogaye thy .... tabhi door bell bajti hay ,
jameel khan samaj jata hay kay kon aya hoga ... wo door kholnay kay liye khara hee hota hay kay ... arif us sey phly jaa kar door khol deta hay ,

wahi ab saba dhekti hay arif kay peechy hariya arha tha aur uskey hath mein bara sa bag tha ,

saba bag ko dhek kar soch mein par jaati hay ... aur wo sochti hay ,
saba man mein , [ ye iskay hath mein bag ...kahi ye bhi to hamarey sath nahi ja raha .... nahi nahi saba ye kiya soch rahi hay ,]

par saba ko kiya pata kay uska shak sach mein badal ney wala hay ,
jameel khan hariya ko dhek kar bolta hay ,

jameel khan , ao ao hariya tayyari karli puri ,
hariya , jee bade saab ye rahi tickets ,

hariya apni jeb sey tickets nikal kar jameel khan ko dhikata hay ,
wahi saba dhekti hay kay hariya kay hath mein 3 tickets thi par jameel khan aur zareen ki to 2 tickets honi chaiye phir ye teesra kon hay .

hariya , jaisa apney kaha tha hamey chote saab waley birth mein hee tickets mili hay ,

saba herat mein par jaati hay hariya ki baat sunkar ,
saba man mein , [ hamey ye apny aapko kio jodh raha kahi ye teesri ticket iski to nahi ... oohhh ye kiya .. ye bhi ab mery ghar par aye ga ,]

jameel khan , thik hay par apna sara saman lekar agaye na tum aur ghar par bol diya tha kay mein bhi delhi ja raha ho ,

hariya , jee bade saab mein ney boldiya tha aur saara saman bhi lekar agya mein apna ,

jameel khan , sahi hay waisy train kitney bajey ki hay ,
hariya , 2 bajey station par aye gi aur adhy ghanty mein chal jaye gi ,

wahi ab saba ka saara shak dhur hogiya tha ... par ab wo kar bhi kiya sakti thi ,
saba man mein , [ aisa kio howa acha khasa mein kush thi kay is sey jaan chuht jaye gi .. par ab ye hariya bhi saath arha hay ,]

saba kay shareer mein current dodh jata hay ... ye sochkar kay hariya ab uskey saath kiya harkatey karey ga ... saba janti thi kay hariya ab puri tarha maukay ka fayda uthaey ga ,
saba ko ajeeb si feeling mahsoos hoti hay ... aur uskey gaal sharam sey laal hojaty hay ,

wahi hariya sofay par betha tha .... aur wo man hee man mein kush ho raha tha ,
hariya man mein ,[ sssssss saali bohot akar dhikati thi na ab tujey tery hee ghar mein tery hee bed par ghodi banao ga .... uffff kitna maza aye ga isee kay hee ghar par mein isko dabocho ga .... ssss saali kiya tight kaprey paheny howi hay ufff mera bss chaley isee sofay par iski tangy utha kar chod do ,]

saba apni nazar ghuma kar hariya ko dhekti hay.... jiski nazar uski thighs par thi ... kio kay saba tangy fold karkay bethi howi thi ... saba samaj jati hay hariya kaha dhek raha hay ... aur wo sharma jati hay .. lekin wo apni tangy seedhi karkay beth jati hay ,

ye dhek kar hariya kay chehry par shetani muskarhat ajati hay ,

khair ab zareen bhi tayyar hokar aagyi thi ..... aur usney saara saaman wagera bhi bag mein pack karliya tha
jameel khan ko bhi ab tension ho rahi thi kio kay 1 baj chuka tha aur train bhi 2 bajey station par aani thi ,

jameel khan , agar sabki saari tayyar hochuki hay to ab ham chalty hay station pohonch ney
mein bhi adha ghanta lag jaye ga ,


jameel khan ki baat sunkar sab janey kay liye ready hojaty hay ..... hariya bhi car nikalny kay liye pahly
sey hee bahar chaley jata hay ... wahi ab arif aur saba apny bags utha kar bahar ajaty hay ,

jameel khan bhi apna bag lekar ajata hay ... aur uskey peechy zareen bhi ajati hay ... wahi hariya
bhi apna bag car mein rakh deta hay ... aur ab sab bags utha kar car mein rakta hay ... kuch bags
car ki diggi mein nahi aa patey jaga kam honay ki waja sey isliye wo bag ab jaisy taisy karkay
rakh lete hay ,

wahi sab car mein beth jatey hay .... hariya bhi driving seat par aakar beth jata hay aur car ko
chala deta hay station ki taraf ,

jameel khan , zareen ghar ko sahi say lock kardia tha na ,
zareen , han han aap fikar nahi karey mein ney lock kardia hay aur 10 baar check
bhi kiya hay apko to pata hay meri adat ,
jameel khan , hmm sahi hay ,

kuch der baad wo log station par pohonch jatey hay .. aur hariya car seedha parking ki taraf lejata
hay ... waha aik aadmi khara howa tha .. jo car dhek kar seedha hariya kay paas ajata hay ,

ab sab car sey utar jatey hay .... hariya car chabi us aadmi ko dedeta hay .... darasal wo aadmi
jameel khan kay farmhouse par kaam karta hay .. aur usko driving bhi aati hay ... station par to car
park nahi kar sakty isliye usko car wapis lejaney kay liye hariya ney bulaya tha ,

ab sab apna saman wagera car sey nikaal lete hay .... aur ye gao tha ... to yaha colie to nahi thy
saaman utha ney kay liye... isliye hariya aur wo aadmi sara saaman utha lete hay ... aur kuch bag arif
bhi utha leta hay aur wo log station ki taraf aaney lagty hay ,

saba zareen jameel khan arif aagey aagey chal rahy thy ... aur wo aadmi aur hariya unkey peechy
peechy .... hariya aik bag sar par rakha howa aur 2 bag hath utha kay chal raha tha .. wahi woh
aadmi ka bhi yehi haal tha ,

hariya ki nazar saba ki matakti howi gand par hee tiki howi thi ..... jo usey ukseet kar rahi thi ...
wo aadmi bhi saba ki gand dhek raha tha .... wo to jaisy pagal hogia tha itna shandar shape dhek
kar ..... wo aadmi man hee man mein aahey barh raha tha ,

us aadmi ka lund jhatkey maar raha tha saba ki hilti howi gand dhek kar .... ufffff kiya nazara tha
hariya us aadmi kay liye ..... patli kamar aur uskey neechay badi gand jo shape mein aarhi thi ,

un tight kapro mein saba ka figure aik dam saaf pata chal raha tha ..... jo in dono ki halat kharab
kar raha tha ,

par ab wo log station kay andar agaye thy .... samney bench lagi howi thi .. jisey dhek kar sab waha
chaley jaatey hay ..... hariya aur wo aadmi saman wahi rakh dete hay .. aur ab train kay aaney ka
intezar karty hay ,

train aaney mein bhi ziyada time nahi tha ..... waha bethy bethy time beet jata hay aur train bhi agayi
thi .... phir waha bethy sab log train mein charney lagey hariya aur woh admi bhi saman birth par rakh
rahy thy ,
unka dabba buisness class tha .... aur birth mein door laga howa tha .... waha unkey ilawa koi is
dabbey par nahi charhta ... zyada tar log economy class mein hee charh rahy thy ,

arif saba jameel khan aur zareen bhi apni seat par aakar beth gaye thy waha wo bss 5 hee thy
aik upar wali birth extra bach gayi thi jaha par saman rakh diya tha unlogo ney ,

ab woh aadmi bhi chala gaya tha saman rakhwa kar .... hariya ney usko car ki chabi dedi thi ,

wahi hariya jameel khan arif aik side thy aur unkay saamney saba aur zareen bethi howi thi
saba window side thi aur zareen uskay barabar mein ,

hariya kaafi kush tha sheher jaaney kay liye ... wahi saba thori dhuki thi hariya ki waja sey par usney
thaan liti kay ab wo aisy uskey jaal mein nahi phansey gi ,

par saba ko kiya pata hariya kitna bada khiladi hay .... khair ab train kay chalney ka time hogya tha
train ka horn bajta hay aur dheemi si raftar sey delhi janey kay liye train chal padi thi ,

ab sab log bss window sey bahar dhek rahy thy hariya kay ilawa ..... kio kay uski nazar to saba ki chuchiyo
par thi ... saba bahar dhekny mein itna khoo gayi kay usey pata hee nahi tha uska duppatta sirak kar kandhey
par aya howa tha ,

jis waja sey uski chuchiyo ki daraar ka view hariya ko mil raha tha ....jo woh apny chehry par shetani muskrahat
laakar dhek raha tha ,

yohi ab time beet jata hay .... par abhi bhi gao sey delhi pohonch ney 24 ghanty lagengy ... abhi to bss 3,4
ghanty hee guzrey thy ,

ab sabko bhook bhi lag rahi thi thori ,
jameel khan , ab bhook lag rahi hay aur shaam kay 6 bhi baj rahy hay ,
arif , han mujey bhi bhook lag rahi hay kio saba tumhey nahi lag rahi ,
saba , han lag rahi hay ,
zareen , thik hay phir khaaney ka saman upar birth par rakha howa hay ,

ye kehkar zareen uth jaati hay aur upar birth sey shopar utarney lagti hay par zareen ka hath
nahi ja raha tha aisa nahi tha zareen ka kad chota tha .... shopar bag kay upar rakha howa tha
jis sey wo aur dhoor hogia tha ,

ye dhek kar hariya khada hota hay aur apna aik pair seat par rakh kar upar hojata hay aur shopar ko
utar leta hay .... par jab wo apni aik tang seat par rakta hay to pant keench ney ki waja sey uskey
lund ka ubhar dhik jata hay .... jisey saba ney dhek liya tha ... par wo usey ignore kardeti hay ,

wahi ab zareen shopar mein sey disposible plates nikal leti hay aur nimco wagera kay packets bhi
aur chai ka tharmos bhi nikal leti hay aur disposible cup mein sabko chai dal deti hay ,

ab sab nimco khaa kar chai pee rhy thy ..... khaney khaney mein bhi time beet jata hay aur ab
andher chaa gaya tha .... bahar ab kuch sahi nazar nahi arha tha ,

ab sab baatey karkay hee time nikal rahy thy ..... train bhi alag alag stations par ruk rahi thi kuch
log char rahy to kuch utar rahy thy ,

jameel khan ko bhi ab wahsroom lag gaya tha aur wo uth kar washroom chaley jata hay ... wahi uskey
sath hariya jata hay aur wo dono door khol kay birth sey bahar ajaty hay ,

aur washroom ki taraf chaley jatey hay .... hariya wahi bahar wait kar raha tha .. aur jameel khan washroom
mein halka ho raha tha ,

jameel khan bhi agya tha aur ab hariya chaley gaya tha washroom wahi jameel khan seedha apni birth
mein agaya tha kuch min baad hariya bhi agya tha ,

aisy hee time nikal jata hay aur ab bahar kuch bhi nahi dhik raha tha window sey ..... ab 10 baj gaye thy
aur khaney ka bhi time hogya tha .... business class thi to unko khana railway walo ki taraf sey hee
mila tha ,

ab sabney khana khalia tha .... wahi ab 11 baj gaye thy jagney sey behtar to soojana hee thik tha
hariya sab sey upar wali birth par agaya tha charh kar aur jameel khan aur zareen neechy wali birth par
lait gaye thy aur arif beech wali birth khool leta hay par us sey aik birth nahi khul rahi wo bohot
tight thi ,
arif , arey ye khul hee nahi rahi ,

hariya ye sunkar apni birth sey neechy utar jata hay aur arif ko hata deta hay ..... aur apni takat sey
wo birth kholdeta hay ,
hariya , lagta hay zang lag giya tha ispar jabhi nahi khul rahi thi ye railway waley
dhyan hee nahi dete saaley ,

hariya ye gussey sey bolta hay .... wahi saba heran thi kay arif sey birth nahi khul payi par hariya
ney usey khol diya ,
saba man mein , [ isney to is birth ko aram sey khol diya ... par arif nahi khol paye hala kay arif
to young hay aur hariya kaka to 49 saal kay bhi hokay bhi kitni takat hay ... ooohh par is sey
mujey kiya ,]

saba phir man mein hee apny aap par gussa hojati hay .... kio kay wo phir sey arif aur hariya ka
comparison kar rahi thi ... aur usey gussa arha tha kay wo apny shauhar ko aisy kisi gairmard
sey compare kar rahi hay ,

wahi ab sab lait gaye thy hariya wapis apni upar wali birth par aakar lait gaya tha aur arif uskey neechy
wali birth par aur arif sey neechy jameel khan ,

wahi hariya saba ko aram se dhek sakta tha kio kay wo sabsey upar wali birth par tha uffff usey kiya
kamal ka view mil raha tha ....saba samney ki taraf karwat lekar leti howi thi ..... karwat leny sey uska
curve kamal dhik rha tha ,

hariya ka to lund phan phana raha tha ye dhek kar .....wahi saba arif ko dhek rahi thi jo dusri side karwat
lekar soo giya tha .... wahi saba kay neechy wali birth par zareen leti howi thi aur wo bhi soo gayi thi ,

tabhi saba apni nazrey upar wali birth ki taraf karti hay ..... aur aik dam dang reh jati hay kio kay hariya
ki nazrey usee par thi .... dono ki nazrey apas mein milti hay .... saba sharma kar wapis nazrey neechy
kar leti hay ,

saba samaj gayi thi ...... kay hariya kiya dhek raha hay isliye ab wo kambal apny upar leleti hay jo railway
walo ney hee diya tha .... wahi hariya ko man mein hee gussa ajata hay kio kay kambal ney saba
kay jisam ko dhak liya tha jis sey uska curve choop gaya tha ,

wahi ab kab sab nend kay agoosh mein chaley gaye thy .... par hariya abhi bhi jaag raha tha raat kay
3 baj gaye thy .... par hariya ka khada loda usey soonay hee nahi dey raha tha ,

hariya ka bss nahi chaley kay wo abhi saba wali birth par jaa kar uski tangy utha kar apna lund
andar daal dey ,

lekin wo chaah kar bhi ye nahi kar sakta tha ,




to be continued ,
bohot khubsurat build up diya bhai
 

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hariya man mein , [
ssss saala kia karo bhenchod mera loda to beth ney ka naam hee nahi ley raha uffff par jab itna jabardast maal paas hee ho to kaisy ... mera loda chain ki saans lene dega ,]

hariya kay lund mein tezi sey khoon dodh raha tha wo to bss .... saba kay baarey mein soch soch kar ... lund masal raha tha ... uski pant mein bara tambu bana howa tha ... upar sey usney kambal bhi aurha howa tha lekin ... tambu itna bara tha kay kambal par pahad ki tarha shape bana howa tha ,

wahi ab arif . jameel khan ... zareen ...saba gehri nend mein soo rhy thy ... hariya sey bhi ab nahi raha jaa raha tha ... tabhi wo uthney hee wala tha .. bathroom janey kay liye ,

saba apni birth sey utar jaati hay aur wo bahar nikal jaati hay door kholky aur washroom ki taraf chali jaati hay ,
wahi ab hariya ye dhek kar fatafat apni birth sey utar ta hay ... aur tezi sey door kholkay .. washroom ki taraf badh jata hay ,

hariya tezi sey chal raha tha ... uski pant mein bara tambu bana howa tha ... chalny ki waja sey uska lund hil raha tha upar neechy ,

ab aap soch sakty ho kay ... hariya kitna garam hay is time ... uska badey sey lund mein ghooday ki raftar sey khoon dodh raha tha ,

wahi saba washroom mein bethi howi thi ... usey kiya pata kay darwazey kay bahar ab hariya aakar khara ho chuka hay ,

hariya ab saba kay darwaza khoolney ka intezar kar raha tha ... kay jaisy saba darwaza khooley aur wo foran ghus jaye andar ,

hariya sey intezar nahi ho raha tha ... wo to bss ready tha ... tabhi washroom ka gate khoolta hay ... aur ye dhek kar hariya tezi sey gate ko pakarta hay aur jhat sey andar ghus jata hay saba ko dhakka dey kar ... aur darwaza band kardeta hay ,

saba hariya ko dhek kar aik dam heran thi ... aur shock bhi thi kay ye aik dam howa kiya hay ,

ab washroom mein saba aur hariya thy .... saba bilkul murti ki tarha khadi howi thi aur wo shock thi ,

wahi hariya usey ajeeb si nazaro sey dhek raha tha ,
tabhi saba ko gussa aata hay aur wo bolti hay ,

saba , ye kiya badtameezi hay mein shor macha
dungi janey do mujey ,

hariya uski baat sunkar muskra deta hay aur bolta ha ,

hariya , ssss kitni kamal lag rahi hay tu saba ufff
mujey to laga tha kay ab ham nahi mil paye gy kio kay tu chali jayi gi lekin kismat dhek mein bhi tery saath hee tery ghar chal raha ho ,

saba ko ye sunkar gussa aata hay ,
saba , apni auqat mein raho tum samjey warna mein abhi jaa kar arif aur sabko bata do gi ummmhh ...,

saba apni baat bol hee rahi thi tabhi hariya ney jhat sey usey baho mein daboch kay apny kaaley honto ko saba kay gulabi honto par rakh diya tha ,

saba machli ka tarha machal Rahi thi ... aur wo apni puri taqat laga kar apna cherha peechy keench Rahi thi ,
par hariya ney apny aik hath sey uski kamar ko pakra howa tha .. aur dusra hath uskey chehry kay peechy rakha howa tha ... taakey saba apna chehra peechy nahi kar paye ,

saba , mmmmhhh ummmmhhhh mhhmm ,

saba kuch bolna chah rahi thi par bol nahi paa rahi thi kio kay hariya kay kaaley hont uskey gulabi hont sey jhudey howy thy ,

hariya bohot roughly saba kay hont chus raha tha .. aur wo apni zaban nikal kar uskey muh mein daalney ko koshish kar raha tha ,

par saba aisa nahi honay dey rahi thi ... wo abhi bhi tarap rahi thi .. aur peechy hatnay ki koshish kar rahi thi ,

saba ko kuch bhi samaj nahi arha tha .. kio kay ye sab itni jaldi howa .... wahi hariys weshiyo ki tarha uskey hont chus raha tha ,

wahi hariya ka hath saba ki kamar sey sarak kar gand par chala gaya tha ,
gand par hath aatey hee hariya gand ko zor sey daboch leta hay ,

saba , ummmhhhh mmmhhhhh mmhh ,

saba aik dam machal jaati hay hariya ki is harkat sey
aur wo dubara peechy hatney ki koshish karti hay par hariya ki takat aagey wo nakam hojati ha harbaar ki tarha ,

wahi ab saba pay do hamley horhy thy aik taraf uskey hont jo hariya jakdey howy thy aur dusri taraf uski gand jo hariya apny pathar jaisy hath sey masal raha tha ,

hariya ka lund aik dam lohey ki tarha khada howa tha jo pant kay upar sey hee saba ki chut par dastak dey daha tha .... saba bhi ye mahsoos karti hay usey apni raano wali side par moti see cheez mahsoos hoti hay ,

jo uski leggy aur kameez kay upar sey hee chut kay side takra rahi thi ,

yehi ab 5minute sey zaida hogaye thy dono ko kiss karty howy ... saba kai baar koshish karti hay kay uski pakar sey nikal jaye par aisa nahi kar paati ,

ab uska jisam bhi dheela par raha tha ... aur wo wapis sab kuch bhool rahi thi ... kay wo aik parhi likhi ameer ghar ki paak saaf aurat aur bahu hay ,

hariya ki maharat aaj kaam arhi thi ... kio kay hariya janta hay kay aurat ko kaisy garam karna hay ,

saba ki hiljul ab band hogayi thi ... aisa lag raha rha tha wo har maan chuki hay ,

bathroom mein bss halki halki kiss karney ki awaz gunj rahi thi ... lekin bahar sey koi nahi sun sakta tha kio kay train ki chuk chuk ki awaz ... unki kiss karney ki awaz ko daba rahi thi ,

yaha hariya bhi ab jaan chuka tha ... kay saba ab hilna band kar chuki hay .. lekin wo abhi bhi puri tarha se uski kiss ka saath nahi dey rahi thi ,

hariya bohot baar apni zaban uskey muh kay andar dalney ki par saba aisa nahi karney dey rahi thi ,

ab hariya kiss kartey howy hee apny kadam thorey aagey karta hay jis sey saba bhi apny kadam peechy karti hay ... aur aik dam sey darwazey par takra jaati hay ,

kio kay hariya yehi chahta tha ... ab wo aur roughly usey kiss karta hay ,

wahi hariya apny dono hath saba ki baho sey nikaltey howy darwazey par rakha howa tha ... aur uska lund leggy aur kameez kay upar sey hee saba ki raano mein chub raha tha ,

hariya thora shock bhi tha ... abhi thori der phly saba kitney nakhrey kar rahi thi ... aur ab jabkey usney usey apni pakar sey bhi chorh diya tha aur wo darwazey sey takra rahi thi wo chahti to usey dhakka dey kar peechy bhi kar sakti thi ,

lekin saba ney aisa nahi kiya ... wo bss chumban mein khoi howi thi ... hala kay usey pata tha kay hariya usey chorh chuka hay .. lekin phir bhi wo uska saath dey rahi thi ,

yaha ab dono ko kiss kartey howy 10 min hojatey hay aur hariya ab apny hont peechy karleta hay ,

saba hariya kay hont hata tey hee gehri gehri sans lerahi thi aur uski chuchiya upar neechy ho rahi thi
jo hariya barey goor sey dhek raha tha ,

saba kay honto sey lipstick gayab ho chuki thi ...... aur wo herat angez nazro sey hariya ko dhek rahi thi
uskey chehry par gussey kay bhav thy ,
wahi hariya usko hawas bhari nazro sey dhek raha tha .... uskey chehry par kaatil muskan thi ,

saba kay hont thuk sey bharey howy thy .... jisey wo apny bazo sey saaf karleti hay ... wahi ab usey
thori sharam aaney lagti hay ... kio kay ab wo asli dunya mein wapis arhi thi ,

saba ab sharam kay maarey chupchaap khari howi thi .... kio kay yaha train kay wahsroom mein wo
kisi gairmard kay saath akeli khari howi hay ..... aur koi bhi unko dhek sakta hay bahar nikalty howy ,

wahi saba ab yaha sey jaaney ka sochti hay ..... kio kay ab wo hariya sey behas nahi karna
chahti thi .... kio wo janti thi hariya sey behas karny ka koi fayda nahi kio kay
... wo hariya saamney pata nahi kio dheeli parjati hay ,

par hariya to pagal ho raha tha ... uska lund lohey ki rod ki tarha khada howa tha aur pant mein
bara sa tambu bana howa tha .... aur jhatkey maar raha tha ,

saba ab hath utha kay hariya ko dhakka dey kar peechy karti hay .... jis sey hariya peechy ki taraf
hojata hay ... waisy bhi train ka washroom itna bara to hota nahi hay .... isliye wo kuch zyada
peechy nahi ja pata hay ,

wahi saba mur gayi thi aur darwazey ka lock khool hee rahi thi kay ..... hariya ney usey peechy
sey jakar liya tha ,

hariya ka lund seedha saba ki gand ki darar mein dhas raha tha .... saba to jaisy shock hogayi thi
hariya ki is harkat par ..... kio kay saba ko bilkul bhi expect nahi tha kay hariya phir sey
usey pakar ley ga ,

saba uska lund achi tarha sey mahsoos kar paa rahi thi apni gand par .. saba ko aisa
lag raha tha jaisy koi moti si cheez uski gand ki daraar mein zabardasti ghus rahi hay ,

wahi hariya peechy sey apna muh uskey kaan kay paas lejata hay aur bolta hay ,
hariya , abhi kaam pura hee kaha hay bahu rani ,

aur ye kehkay hariya peechy sey uski gand par jhatka maar deta hay ... jis sey uska lund
saba ki naram gand par dhas jata hay ,

hariya ki is harkat par saba ki siskari nikal jaati hay ,
saba , aahhhhhhh...... badtameez insan chorho mujey janey do kameene ,

hariya ab sochta hay kay .... wo kuch zyada hee kar raha hay .... usey zabardasti nahi saba ko
paana hay .... hariya usey seduce karkey paana chahta hay .... hariya samaj jata hay kay
wo jaldbazi mein galti kar raha hay ,

hariya , thik hay bahu rani loo chorh diya ,

hariya ye kehkay usey chorh deta hay ..... wahi saba bina peechy dheky foran sey darwaza kholkar
bhaag jaati hay ,

wahi saba tezi sey chal rahi thi .... uski gand ki daraar par kameez ghusi howi thi .. jaisy kisi ney
koi moti cheez sey kameez andar ki ho .... wahi saba ab apni birth mein agayi thi aur wo apny kaprey
sahi karkey let jati hay ,

uska dimag bss wahi atka howa tha ..... uski saansy pholi howi thi .... wahi hariya abhi tak bathroom
mein khada howa tha ..... ab uska loda bhi beth raha tha ... par jo bhi ho aaj usney paheli baar saba
kay hont chusliye ... aur to aur gand mein lund bhi ghis diya ,

hariya man mein , [ abey hariya saaley kiya kar raha hay .....tujey jaldbazi nahi karni ... acha
howa mein aagey kuch nahi kiya warna mein galti kardeta ,]

ab hariya bhi washroom sey nikal kar .... apny birth ki taraf ajata hay jaisy hee wo doorkholta
hay .... wo dhekta hay kay sab soo rhy hay ... uski nazar saba ki taraf jaati hay ... jo apny apko
pura kambal mein dhaki howi thi ,

hariya ab bina der kiye upar apni birth par charh jata hay .. aur pao lambey karkey let jata hay ,

saba ko bhi door khulney ayi thi aur wo samaj gayi thi kay hariya aa chuka hay ... saba ko bilkul
bhi yakeen nahi tha kay hariya train mein bhi ye sab karey ga .... kahi na kahi saba ko ismein
apni galti lagti hay .... kio kay agar wo hariya kay aagey kamzoor nahi parti to wo aisa
nahi karta ,

wahi ab puri train mein kamooshi chahi howi thi ..... hariya bhi kambal dhak kar aankhey band
kiye neend mein ja raha tha ,

par saba abhi bhi wo sab soch rahi thi .... kio kay aaj paheli baar usey aisy kisi ney kiss ki hay
arif bss 10 second hee kiss karta hay ... wo bhi pyar sey ..... lekin hariya ney bohot roughly
aur der tak kiss ki ..... pata nahi kio saba ko hariya ka andaz andar andar pasand aya ,

saba man mein , [ kiya aisy bhi koi kiss karta hay ... par arif ney to aisa aaj tak nahi kiya
... kio ye hariya har cheez alag karta hay ... par jo bhi ho mujey ajeeb kio mahsoos howa
jab hariya kiss kar raha tha .... ohhhhhh cheeee saba tu phir ganda soch rahi hay
akhir uski auqat kiya hay tery aagey wo buddha admi ganda kaala aur 2 kodi ka hay
tu arif ko dhoka dey rahi hay ,]

saba khud par hee gussa kar rahi thi ...... usey bura lagta hay kay wo arif ko dhoka dey rahi hay
par ... kahi na kahi arif bhi uski zaroorty puri nahi kar raha ... jis karan wo behak rahi hay ,

yaha ab train ki chuk chuk kay alawa kisi tarha ki awaz nahi thi .... kio kay sab khamooshi sey soo
gaye thy ,

hariya bhi ab gehri neend mein chala gaya tha ..... saba bhi sochty sochty kabki soo gayi ,

time beet gaya tha ,
ab subah hogayi thi ... train mein sab soo kay uth rahy thy ... arif jameel khan zareen hariya saba
ye bhi uth gaye thy soo kay ,

bss kuch ghanty rahy gaye thy delhi ko aaney mein ..... yaha sab washroom sey fresh hokar aagaye
thy ...... aur nashty kar rahy thy ,

saba hariya ko ignore kar rahi thi .... kio jo kuch raat ko washroom mein howa usey kaafi sharam
arhi thi hariya sey nazrey milaney mein ,

wahi hariya besharmo ki tarha nashta kar raha tha .... aur arif sey hasi mazak kar raha tha ,

... arif ko kiya pata ... kay raat ko uski hee biwi ko unkay aik wafadar naukar ney washroom mein pakar
kar uskey hont chusey thy ..... wahi saba bhi dhek rahi thi kay hariya kaisy sakoon sey betha howa
uskey shauhar sey mazak kar raha hay .... saba ko gussa bhi arha tha hariya par ,

ab kaafi time nikal jata hay ,
wahi ab saba bhi sab kuch bhool jati hay .... wo bss bahar kay nazarey dhekny mein khoi howi thi ,

nazarey nazarey dhekty dhekty kab delhi ajata hay ...... pata hee nahi chalta .... train ab dheere ho rahi
thi...... delhi ka station aa chuka tha ... hariya bhi bohot josh mein tha apny kadam kaafi saalo
baad sheher mein rakhney kay liye ,

to isee tarha .... train aik break maar kar ruk jaati hay ...... aur ab coolie train par jhapak parey thy
aur arif bhi aik coolie ko pakar leta hay .... aur wo saaman bahar nikalwa leta hay ,

wahi ab sab train sey utar gaye thy ... hariya apni nazrey charo aur karkey station ko dhek raha tha
kio kay 11 saal pahely aur ab kay delhi mein bohot change agya tha ,

yaha ab sab station sey bahar aa chukey thy .... arif aik taxi kara leta hay bari waali .. wahi coolie
usee taxi mein bag saman rak deta hay .. aur arif usey paisy de kar taxi mein beth jata ,

aur wo sab taxi mein beth jatey ....... aur taxi chal deti hay ghar ki taraf ,

yaha hariya kaafi joshila hogia tha ... usey sabar nahi ho raha tha kay ab wo saba kay
ghar mein jaye ga ,



to be continued ,,,
bohot badiya hariya ne saba ko achche se chakh liya
 

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We are Happy to present to you The annual story contest of XForum


"The Ultimate Story Contest" (USC).


"Chance to win cash prize up to Rs 8000"
Jaisa ki aap sabko maloom hai abhi pichhle hafte hi humne USC ki announcement ki hai or abhi kuch time pehle Rules and Queries thread bhi open kiya hai or Chit Chat thread toh pehle se hi Hindi section mein khula hai.

Well iske baare mein thoda aapko bata dun ye ek short story contest hai jisme aap kisi bhi prefix ki short story post kar sakte ho, jo minimum 700 words and maximum 7000 words ke bich honi chahiye (Story ke words count karne ke liye is tool ka use kare — Characters Tool) . Isliye main aapko invitation deta hun ki aap is contest mein apne khayaalon ko shabdon kaa roop dekar isme apni stories daalein jisko poora XForum dekhega, Ye ek bahot accha kadam hoga aapke or aapki stories ke liye kyunki USC ki stories ko poore XForum ke readers read karte hain.. Aap XForum ke sarvashreshth lekhakon mein se ek hain. aur aapki kahani bhi bahut acchi chal rahi hai. Isliye hum aapse USC ke liye ek chhoti kahani likhne ka anurodh karte hain. hum jaante hain ki aapke paas samay ki kami hai lekin iske bawajood hum ye bhi jaante hain ki aapke liye kuch bhi asambhav nahi hai.

Aur jo readers likhna nahi chahte woh bhi is contest mein participate kar sakte hain "Best Readers Award" ke liye. Aapko bas karna ye hoga ki contest mein posted stories ko read karke unke upar apne views dene honge.

Winning Writer's ko well deserved Cash Awards milenge, uske alawa aapko apna thread apne section mein sticky karne ka mouka bhi milega taaki aapka thread top par rahe uss dauraan. Isliye aapsab ke liye ye ek behtareen mouka hai XForum ke sabhi readers ke upar apni chhaap chhodne ka or apni reach badhaane kaa.. Ye aap sabhi ke liye ek bahut hi sunehra avsar hai apni kalpanao ko shabdon ka raasta dikha ke yahan pesh karne ka. Isliye aage badhe aur apni kalpanao ko shabdon mein likhkar duniya ko dikha de.

Entry thread 15th February ko open ho chuka matlab aap apni story daalna shuru kar sakte hain or woh thread 5th March 2024 tak open rahega is dauraan aap apni story post kar sakte hain. Isliye aap abhi se apni Kahaani likhna shuru kardein toh aapke liye better rahega.

Aur haan! Kahani ko sirf ek hi post mein post kiya jaana chahiye. Kyunki ye ek short story contest hai jiska matlab hai ki hum kewal chhoti kahaniyon ki ummeed kar rahe hain. Isliye apni kahani ko kayi post / bhaagon mein post karne ki anumati nahi hai. Agar koi bhi issue ho toh aap kisi bhi staff member ko Message kar sakte hain.



Story se related koi doubt hai to iske liye is thread ka use kare — Chit Chat Thread

Kisi bhi story par apna review post karne ke liye is thread ka use kare — Review Thread

Rules check karne ke liye is thread ko dekho — Rules & Queries Thread

Apni story post karne ke liye is thread ka use kare — Entry Thread

Prizes
Position Benifits
Winner 4000 Rupees + Award + 5000 Likes + 30 days sticky Thread (Stories)
1st Runner-Up 1500 Rupees + Award + 3500 Likes + 15 day Sticky thread (Stories)
2nd Runner-UP 1000 Rupees + 2000 Likes + 7 Days Sticky Thread (Stories)
3rd Runner-UP 750 Rupees + 1000 Likes
Best Supporting Reader 750 Rupees + Award + 1000 Likes
Members reporting CnP Stories with Valid Proof 200 Likes for each report



Regards :- XForum Staff
 

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