Vikram singh rana
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Hmmmm"ninja skills..........leo roar"Chen chupchap aakh band kar apne dono haatho ko ek kar khada ho gaya
Uske aas pas ek sher ke roop ke aag ka ek bada sa roop taiyyar ho gaya aur us sher ne ek dhahad maari
Aage ki laptein mia ki aur aane lagi
"Ninja skills...... feminine defence "mia boli aur usne apna fan zameen par gaad diya
Fan ke aas pas ek shield jaisi ban gayi aur us aag ke sher ke muh se nikli hui aag us shield se ruk gayi
Lekin aag itni zyada thi ki..
"Uhh...."Mia sambhal nahi paayi aur ..
"MIA"Chen chillaya aur mia ke paas aaya
"Eh??mai to bas thokar khakar gir gayi thi"mia boli
"Jab mai tumse shaadi karunga tumhe girne nahi dunga"Chen hanskar bola
"Acha??abhi to hum chote hai,lekin bade hokar mujhe bhool gaye to??"mia ne poochha
"Sawaal hi paida nahi hota"Chen bola
Tabhi laal rang kapde aur kaale rang ke kapde pehne ke kuch log a gaye
"Red clan ke logo ke saath itni dosti??"bol do aadmiyon ne mia ko pakad liya
"Chodo mia ko uhhh"Chen ke bolte hi usne dekha use bhi red colour pehne logo ne pakad rakha
Uske saamne rote bilkhate mia ko ghasit kar le gaye aur wo dekhta raha
"MIA"Chen wapas present me a gaya tha.
Mia chitak kar door gayi thi
Chen majboor tha mis ki aur lachari se dekha usne aur apne raaste nikal gaya
Mia ne jaan bujhkar apna vaar halka rakha tha
Damn.....
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Yug ne jab aankhen kholi dun chadh aaya tha
Jhat se uth baitha wo aur usi waqt use chakkar aane laga
Aur wo zameen par baith gaya
Apni nazrein usne aas paas daali to dekha ki wahan par rashmi baithkar soyi hui thi.pehle to yug chaunka Rashmi ko dekhkar fir usne rashmi ka chehra dekha .thakavat saaf dikh rahi thi uske chehre par.
"Uth gaye??"sasuka ki awaz se yug ka dhyan toota
Aur ek prashn ki nazron se usne sasuka ki aur dekha
"Is ladki ki wajah se jaan bachi tumhari,samjhe"sasuka bola
"Mujhe sirf itna yaad hai ek ladai ho rahi thi aur wahi mai...."apna sar pakad kar yug bola
"Wahi is ladki ne tumhari madad ki yug wo ek aurat ne jise hum dhoond rahe the usne tumhare mare hue jism me jaan foonk kar chali gayi"sasuka bola
Yug khamosh raha.sabse kamzor kadi banta ja raha tha wo.
Udhar rashmi bhi uth gayi aur yug jo saamne dekh kuch kaha nahi gaya usse
"Rashmi pata nahi kaise tum mujh tak pahunchi,lekin jo bhi hai uske liye bohut bohut shukriya"yug bola
Rashmi bas muskurai.lekin yug ne man hi man thaan liya tha.ki life me kabhi bhi wo kamzor nahi banega ki koi use bacha le jaaye
Apne pratigya ko yaad kiya usne.aur uthkar khada ho gaya
"Chale sasuka ji??"yug ne bola to sasuka ne rashmi ki aur dekha
"Tum bhi hamare saath ja sakti ho rashmi"sasuka bola
Ye ladki dark clan se hai ye baat yug ko nahi pata,aur batana bhi nahi hai use.baaki agar rashmi hamare saath chalti hai to ho sakta hai dark clan wale hamla karne se pehle kai baar soche
Apne man me bohut saare calculation liye sasuka badh raha tha yug aur rashmi ke saath,tabhi
"Mujhe miss to nahi kiya??"Chen ki awaz ne sabko chaunka diya
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"Yani aapne abhi tak decision nahi liya??"rachel boli
"Haan keh sakti ho??"aurat boli
"Hey bhagwan hey bhagwan aage kuan peeche khai
Red aur dark clan ke beech hum pees jayenge madam"rachel darte darte boli
Aurat kuch boli nahi.kya kehti abhi samay bohut kam hai jald se jald ye jagah choddni hogi
Kuch door gaye hi the ki unhe chaar log aate dikhai diye
"Ye to red clan wale hai"aurat dheere se boli
"Ab kya kare??"rachel ne poochha
"Zyada kuch nahi,dekhte hai tamasha"aurat boli
Udhar sasuka aur baaki ko ek aurat aur saath me ek ladki dikhai dete hi sasuka chilla utha
"Wo rahi hamari future master"
Rashmi chaunk padi,wahi aurat jisne us din yug ki jaan bachai thi??
Ye banegi master red clan ka??
Good update....
Actually mujhe lagta hai ki aap kaafi tez bhag rahe ho.....story ko pahle ki jaise detailing ki jarurat hai.....OR thode thahraav ki bhi.....
Koi bhi scene puri tarah described nahi hai.....OR phir kai aise characters hai jo puri tarah se clear nahi hai.....jaise Rachel or wo aurat....
Anyways
Dekhte hai aage kya Hota hai....
Thanks.....
