Fantasy AJNABEE 2-THE RISING(Completed)
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Guys maine aapke Saare reviews ka answer de diya tha
To fir se nahi de paunga, pichla update halka sa tadka maarke de raha hoon Taaki jisne padha hai use bhi maza aaye padhkar
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Monica ne yug ka haath pakda aur use apne kamre ki aur le gayi
"bhai lagta hai kaafi achi dosti hai us ladke ke Saath aapke beti ki" yoshodo ne muskurate hue apne glass ki whiskey par ek sip maara
Mr Oberoi kuch nahi bole bas serious hokar dekhne lage yug aur monica ko
Aaj hi ye ladka is ghar me aaya hai aur aaj hi use monica apne bedroom me liye ja rahi hai???
Udhar monica seedha yug ko lekar apne kamre me aayi
"kaisa hai??" monica ne poocha
"ye to kaafi bada hai, hamare ghar ke poore drawing room jaisa" yug haste hue bola
"he he, very funny. Lekin pata hai yug tumhare ghar ka jo mahaul hai na. Wo Ekdum alag hai. Sab kitne khush hai Yaar wahan??" monica bolo
Yug chup raha. Wo bas yoshodo ke baare me soch hi raha tha ki tabhi monica ne awaz di
"yug?? Tumhara kya plan hai school ke baad??? Matlab ye hamara last year hai fir college. To kuch socha hai tumne??"
Yug ne dekha monica jhuk kar kuch drawer se nikal rahi hai
Jhukne ki wajah se uske pehne hue dress halki si Chad gayi aur uski black colour ki panty dikhne lagi
Yug statue ho gaya. Kambakht nazar hi nahi hat rahi wahan se
" uff kuch poocha tumse aur tum...." monica jaise hi Palatkar khadi ho gayi usne yug ko pakad liya use taakte hue
Ladko ke man me kya chal raha hota hai use ache se pata hai
"c chalo bohut hua. Hame chalna chahiye" bol monica ne dekha yug abhi bhi uske pairon ko taak raha tha
"YUG" Monice ka para chadne laga
Is ladke me tharak kab se chadne lagi
Yug hadbadakar uth gaya aur monica usko lekar wapas party me a gayi
Neeche Mr Oberoi aur yoshodo ke Saath ek shaks khada tha
Yug ka hum umra
"arey beta, isse milo. Tyson hai ye mr Herbert ka beta. Hamara business partner hai. Bataya to tha na" Mr Oberoi bole aur Tyson ne muskurate hue apna haath de diya.
Sakuchate hue monica ne apna haath diya to usne. Monica ke haath ko kiss kiya
Monica ne chaunkar apna haath wapas kheench liya
Yug ye sab dekh raha tha
Pehle yoshodo ab ye naya ladka???
Chakkar kya hai
"can I have pleasure to dance with you???" Tyson ne poocha
Monica na karne hi wali thi ki tyson ne zabardasti haath pakad kar dance floor me le gaya dance karne ke liye
"ye kya badtameezi hai??" monica gusse se boli
"relax kijiye madam.bas dance ko enjoy kijiye" Tyson bola
Monica kuch boli nahi lekin party me scene nahi create karna chahti thi
"mere khayal se tumhe in chote logo ke muh nahi lagna chahiye" Tyson yug ki aur dekhkar bola
"aur mere khayal se hame dance karna band karna chahiye" bol monica yug ki aur chali gayi
Yug muskurate hue monica ko kuch bolne hi wala tha ki uska phone bajne laga
"bolo" yug ne expect nahi kiya tha diana phone karegi
"master ne mission diya hai yug" diana boli
"batao fir" yug bola
"are you dumb?? Abhi ke abhi seedha waha se niklo" diana boli aur phone rakh diya
"kya hua?? Kiska phone tha??" monica ne poocha
"arey wo kuch kaam hai Yaar.nikalna padega mujhe. Chalta hoon" bol yug bina kuch sune Bhaag gaya
Monica ko bura to laga lekin raat bhi kaafi ho gayi thi aur yug to Jaana to tha hi
"take care yug, gn" bol apne papa ki aur gayi monica
"papa thak gayi hoon. Sone ja rahi hoon. Gnite" bol chali gayi apne kamre ki aur monica wahi Tyson gusse se yug ko jaate hue dekh raha tha
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Yug jaise hi bungalow ke bahar nikal gaya
Use wahan ek bike mili jo khadi thi
"red??" bike wale ne poocha
Yug ne Haan me sar hilaya aur baith gaya bike ke peeche
Bike speed ke Saath kai raaste se hote hue ja rahi thi tabhi police je jeep se vote hue aage nikal gai
Prakash tha jeep me. Aur yug ke kad kaathi ko ache se jaanta tha
"us bike ka peecha karo" prakash ne order diya aur jeep chal padi bike ke peeche
"arey?? Koi peecha kar raha hai" bike wale ne kaha
To yug ne dekha ki sach hai
"tension mat lo" bol bike aage badha diya usne aur us bike se teen Chaar bike nikal kar idhar udhar daudne lage
Yug hairan tha
"he he clone skill hai meri khasiyat" bol bike wala aage badh gaya
"s s sir itne Saare ek jaise bike wale??" driver bola to prakash serious ho gaya
Yug shayad tha, ya nahi
Lekin jo bhi tha, pakad nahi paya prakash
Aur man masos kar reh gaya
Udhar yug ko wo bike wala seedha ek jagah par le aaya
Jahan diana wait kar rahi thi
" welcome leader, inse to tum mil hi cuke ho. Asla Naam hai iska" diana ne introduce karwaya
"ab batao mission ke baare me" introduction me zyada interest nahi tha yug ko
"master ne kaha hai ki yoshodo ka dark clan poore shahar me drugs ke supply ko control karna chahta hai. Isliye usne Mr Oberoi se partnership kar liya business ke liye, Taaki black money aur black kaam par kisi ko shaque na ho" diana boli
"Hume kya karna hai" yug bola
"Hume iski jad tak jaakar ise khatam karna hai. Client ka yahi demand hai" diana boli
"client??" yug ne poocha
"Haan bhai cleint hame kaam. Deta hai aur use poora karne ke baad hi paisa aata hai ha. E jo har ninja aur hamare clan me distribute hota hai. Samjhe" diana ne samjhaya
"is mission ke leader aap ho"asla bola is baar
Yug kuch soch raha tha
" kya hua?? "Diana ne poocha
" filhal hame chalna chahiye, next meeting doosri jagah hogi"yug bola aur nikal gaya
"kar payega?? Chen nahi hai is baar" Asla bola
"dekhte hai" diana muskurate hue boli
Door ye sab dekh ek shaks ne phone nikal kar kuch kaha aur nikal gaya wahan se
"bhai lagta hai kaafi achi dosti hai us ladke ke Saath aapke beti ki" yoshodo ne muskurate hue apne glass ki whiskey par ek sip maara
Mr Oberoi kuch nahi bole bas serious hokar dekhne lage yug aur monica ko
Aaj hi ye ladka is ghar me aaya hai aur aaj hi use monica apne bedroom me liye ja rahi hai???
Udhar monica seedha yug ko lekar apne kamre me aayi
"kaisa hai??" monica ne poocha
"ye to kaafi bada hai, hamare ghar ke poore drawing room jaisa" yug haste hue bola
"he he, very funny. Lekin pata hai yug tumhare ghar ka jo mahaul hai na. Wo Ekdum alag hai. Sab kitne khush hai Yaar wahan??" monica bolo
Yug chup raha. Wo bas yoshodo ke baare me soch hi raha tha ki tabhi monica ne awaz di
"yug?? Tumhara kya plan hai school ke baad??? Matlab ye hamara last year hai fir college. To kuch socha hai tumne??"
Yug ne dekha monica jhuk kar kuch drawer se nikal rahi hai
Jhukne ki wajah se uske pehne hue dress halki si Chad gayi aur uski black colour ki panty dikhne lagi
Yug statue ho gaya. Kambakht nazar hi nahi hat rahi wahan se
" uff kuch poocha tumse aur tum...." monica jaise hi Palatkar khadi ho gayi usne yug ko pakad liya use taakte hue
Ladko ke man me kya chal raha hota hai use ache se pata hai
"c chalo bohut hua. Hame chalna chahiye" bol monica ne dekha yug abhi bhi uske pairon ko taak raha tha
"YUG" Monice ka para chadne laga
Is ladke me tharak kab se chadne lagi
Yug hadbadakar uth gaya aur monica usko lekar wapas party me a gayi
Neeche Mr Oberoi aur yoshodo ke Saath ek shaks khada tha
Yug ka hum umra
"arey beta, isse milo. Tyson hai ye mr Herbert ka beta. Hamara business partner hai. Bataya to tha na" Mr Oberoi bole aur Tyson ne muskurate hue apna haath de diya.
Sakuchate hue monica ne apna haath diya to usne. Monica ke haath ko kiss kiya
Monica ne chaunkar apna haath wapas kheench liya
Yug ye sab dekh raha tha
Pehle yoshodo ab ye naya ladka???
Chakkar kya hai
"can I have pleasure to dance with you???" Tyson ne poocha
Monica na karne hi wali thi ki tyson ne zabardasti haath pakad kar dance floor me le gaya dance karne ke liye
"ye kya badtameezi hai??" monica gusse se boli
"relax kijiye madam.bas dance ko enjoy kijiye" Tyson bola
Monica kuch boli nahi lekin party me scene nahi create karna chahti thi
"mere khayal se tumhe in chote logo ke muh nahi lagna chahiye" Tyson yug ki aur dekhkar bola
"aur mere khayal se hame dance karna band karna chahiye" bol monica yug ki aur chali gayi
Yug muskurate hue monica ko kuch bolne hi wala tha ki uska phone bajne laga
"bolo" yug ne expect nahi kiya tha diana phone karegi
"master ne mission diya hai yug" diana boli
"batao fir" yug bola
"are you dumb?? Abhi ke abhi seedha waha se niklo" diana boli aur phone rakh diya
"kya hua?? Kiska phone tha??" monica ne poocha
"arey wo kuch kaam hai Yaar.nikalna padega mujhe. Chalta hoon" bol yug bina kuch sune Bhaag gaya
Monica ko bura to laga lekin raat bhi kaafi ho gayi thi aur yug to Jaana to tha hi
"take care yug, gn" bol apne papa ki aur gayi monica
"papa thak gayi hoon. Sone ja rahi hoon. Gnite" bol chali gayi apne kamre ki aur monica wahi Tyson gusse se yug ko jaate hue dekh raha tha
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Yug jaise hi bungalow ke bahar nikal gaya
Use wahan ek bike mili jo khadi thi
"red??" bike wale ne poocha
Yug ne Haan me sar hilaya aur baith gaya bike ke peeche
Bike speed ke Saath kai raaste se hote hue ja rahi thi tabhi police je jeep se vote hue aage nikal gai
Prakash tha jeep me. Aur yug ke kad kaathi ko ache se jaanta tha
"us bike ka peecha karo" prakash ne order diya aur jeep chal padi bike ke peeche
"arey?? Koi peecha kar raha hai" bike wale ne kaha
To yug ne dekha ki sach hai
"tension mat lo" bol bike aage badha diya usne aur us bike se teen Chaar bike nikal kar idhar udhar daudne lage
Yug hairan tha
"he he clone skill hai meri khasiyat" bol bike wala aage badh gaya
"s s sir itne Saare ek jaise bike wale??" driver bola to prakash serious ho gaya
Yug shayad tha, ya nahi
Lekin jo bhi tha, pakad nahi paya prakash
Aur man masos kar reh gaya
Udhar yug ko wo bike wala seedha ek jagah par le aaya
Jahan diana wait kar rahi thi
" welcome leader, inse to tum mil hi cuke ho. Asla Naam hai iska" diana ne introduce karwaya
"ab batao mission ke baare me" introduction me zyada interest nahi tha yug ko
"master ne kaha hai ki yoshodo ka dark clan poore shahar me drugs ke supply ko control karna chahta hai. Isliye usne Mr Oberoi se partnership kar liya business ke liye, Taaki black money aur black kaam par kisi ko shaque na ho" diana boli
"Hume kya karna hai" yug bola
"Hume iski jad tak jaakar ise khatam karna hai. Client ka yahi demand hai" diana boli
"client??" yug ne poocha
"Haan bhai cleint hame kaam. Deta hai aur use poora karne ke baad hi paisa aata hai ha. E jo har ninja aur hamare clan me distribute hota hai. Samjhe" diana ne samjhaya
"is mission ke leader aap ho"asla bola is baar
Yug kuch soch raha tha
" kya hua?? "Diana ne poocha
" filhal hame chalna chahiye, next meeting doosri jagah hogi"yug bola aur nikal gaya
"kar payega?? Chen nahi hai is baar" Asla bola
"dekhte hai" diana muskurate hue boli
Door ye sab dekh ek shaks ne phone nikal kar kuch kaha aur nikal gaya wahan se
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Awesome fantastic Mind-blowing update Bhai..
Ye update bilkul badla hua hai...
Aapne yoshoda ka partner bna Diya mr.Oberai.ko..kahi aisa na ho yug ke hato Mr.Oberai Mara Jaye or Monica yug se nafrta Bhai aisa bilkul my krna ..
Ye update bilkul badla hua hai...
Aapne yoshoda ka partner bna Diya mr.Oberai.ko..kahi aisa na ho yug ke hato Mr.Oberai Mara Jaye or Monica yug se nafrta Bhai aisa bilkul my krna ..
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Zabardast sawraj bhai to thoda naughty bhi kia is baar aapne accha Hai for a change. Aur yah naya character Tyson i think iski bhi kisi clan ke sath koi na koi link hoga to yashodo aur Oberoi mill kar drugs dealing kar rahay hai yani ab yug vs Oberoi ho sakti hain dekhna. Hoga aur yug ki qabiliyat pe shaq nahi karna chahiye kyunki shayad woh kaam na kar paye magar mask usse sab kuch kara sakta hai.